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Nakamura Meiko - Dispel

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[ Scarlet Red ]
379 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
[ Scarlet Red ]
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, July 31, 2014 at 7:51:58 PM

Artist: Nakamura Meiko
Title: Dispel
Tags: Levitation pkmnyab
BPM: 200
Filesize: 5451kb
Play Time: 03:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.36 stars, 119 notes)
  2. Hard (3.21 stars, 331 notes)
  3. Insane (4.89 stars, 582 notes)
  4. pkmnyab's Normal (2.33 stars, 285 notes)
Download: Nakamura Meiko - Dispel
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hello everybody!!!! This is my official second map I have created. I feel it's very nice and it's extremely jumpy with minor streams and a few spinners. Overall if you like fast songs/maps, this is one for you!
Changelog:
- Added background image
- Edited the Triplets and single note area on Insane
- Fixed some note sound volume levels and hitsounds being out of place
- Fixed minor changes around the map, and moved certain notes that needed to be to continue the flow of the map.
- Continued to update the map a bit more, some changes such as distances being off, and even indicators to otherwise difficult to read sections, even the weird overlapping sliders were fixed!
- Changed background up, thanks to Myke B for helping me find one suitable for this map, thanks man!
- More minor changes to simple notes, some patterns may feel different than previous versions.
- Completed the "Easy" difficulty, mods would be appreciated! :D
- Thanks to pkmnyab for mapping "Normal" which I have now uploaded, as always, mods will be appreciated
- Just changed the Romanized Artist and the normal Artist to their respective names! I also worked a bit on easy spacing, although it's not perfect but I did what I could, thanks, and hope you enjoy the map.
- 3/17/2014 - Just finished working on mods for Easy, and Insane, normal was modded by it's creator, pkmnyab! Thanks for all the mods guys, keep em coming!!!
- 4/16/14 - Fixed flow and changed up a stream towards the end, need more mods xD
- 7/4/2014 - APOLOGISE FOR NOT BEING ABLE TO UPDATE THIS MAP, I now have re-mapped hard up, fixing up the problems previously, it's now ready to be modded again xD (easy was not fixed in this patch)
- 7/4/14 - Just decided to fix a lot of challenging parts for "Hard" players. I think these changes should help them get through the song without too much trouble!
PLEASE MOD!!!
- 7/31/14 - Big update here, Did changes to Easy, pkmnyab fixed his Normal (a while ago but I just pushed it out), I also did some minor changes to insane on my own (to correct flow a bit), please enjoy these updates!
Another Quick Notice: I haven't been able to update this map due to IRL problems, but if you wouldn't mind as to mod, that would be great, I can do mods pretty quickly but the whole other difficulty was hard to do with my irl problems, but thanks anyway!
Thanks to modders/testers:
- pkmnyab
- Mimzy (Ya did good enough, man!)
- Akali
- Kiyura
- Kibbleru
- Alternative
- acid993
- Mrrandom2 [Testing hard and to see how a lowbie fairs on it]
- Special thanks to Azer0108 for being completely useless (we love you! <3)
NOTICE: Re-Download if you downloaded before 2/30
Last edited by [ Scarlet Red ] , edited 23 times in total.
pkk
1,821 posts
Joined November 2013
pkk
[Timing]
I suggest adding kiai time and ending it at the following times:
01:00:503 - 01:21:953
02:04:103 - 02:25:703
02:56:903 - 03:08:903

You have timing points where you make the volume of your hitsounds 44%, 46% and 45%. This isn't really important, but you should make them all one number, ideally 45% or 50% so it becomes consistent.

[Other stuff]
Hitsounds are a bit loud, I suggest reducing the volume at all points from 100% to around 80%-90%.

00:37:703 (7) - move this slider to the right a bit so that it (4)(5)(6) lead into it, like a curve.

00:40:103 (1) - 00:49:553 - you should use distance snap for this area

00:44:903 (4,5,6) - beat spacing is important in songs. Since (4,5,6) are the same distance apart on the timeline (the time between each notes is the same) then they should be the same distance physically apart. Instead of placing (5) closer to the end of (4), you should place it in the middle between (4) and (6) like this:
SPOILER
Using distance snap will make sure your beat spacing is correct.
Of course, you can have jumps in your map, but at least for the slow parts like 00:40:103- 00:49:553 and 02:35:303 - 02:43:403 you should stick to distance snap.

00:52:403 (4,5) - space these sliders further apart since it's too easy if you put them close together. Even on distance snap multiplier set at 1x the sliders will be placed further apart. Same with 01:00:503 (1,2) and other parts in the song

00:58:103 (5) - maybe place this between (3) and (4) instead of having it at the end of (4) since it makes more sense due to beat spacing

01:22:103 (2) - make this a new combo since the guitar part starts here

01:23:753 (1) - I think you should delete this one so it follows the previous patterns, and space out the remaining two circles for proper beat spacing, maybe something like this:
SPOILER

02:02:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - place these closer together since they are way too far from each other. Alternatively, you could change the pattern and just make it all one stream.

02:13:103 (1) - Make the (9) a new combo and change the last note in the triplet into a slider. This will sound a lot better. You can change where you place the notes on the screen, but on the timeline this is how they should be placed:
SPOILER

02:25:703 - you can add a note here to cut off this section better and start the break after this since you already have the (1) on the vocal. Also move the (1) further away from the end of the stream.

02:41:603 (1,2,3) - place these further away from (5)

02:56:303 - Maybe you can have a slider here and then a stream as a lead-in. This is what it looks like on the timeline:


I find having it this way sounds better and is more fun.

03:11:303 - I suggest ending the song here with one hit circle. This makes a very strong cut-off and creates a strong ending. You'll find that this also sounds very nice.

---

Overall really good map! It was very fun to play, and fixing the distance snap in a couple of places will make the map much better than it already is! If you have any questions about anything (for example, if you don't understand what some things I said mean in my mod), then don't hesitate to ask. Have fun mapping! :)
[ Scarlet Red ]
379 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
[ Scarlet Red ]

pkmnyab wrote:

[Timing]
I suggest adding kiai time and ending it at the following times:
01:00:503 - 01:21:953
02:04:103 - 02:25:703
02:56:903 - 03:08:903

You have timing points where you make the volume of your hitsounds 44%, 46% and 45%. This isn't really important, but you should make them all one number, ideally 45% or 50% so it becomes consistent.

[Other stuff]
Hitsounds are a bit loud, I suggest reducing the volume at all points from 100% to around 80%-90%.

00:37:703 (7) - move this slider to the right a bit so that it (4)(5)(6) lead into it, like a curve.

00:40:103 (1) - 00:49:553 - you should use distance snap for this area

00:44:903 (4,5,6) - beat spacing is important in songs. Since (4,5,6) are the same distance apart on the timeline (the time between each notes is the same) then they should be the same distance physically apart. Instead of placing (5) closer to the end of (4), you should place it in the middle between (4) and (6) like this:
SPOILER
Using distance snap will make sure your beat spacing is correct.
Of course, you can have jumps in your map, but at least for the slow parts like 00:40:103- 00:49:553 and 02:35:303 - 02:43:403 you should stick to distance snap.

00:52:403 (4,5) - space these sliders further apart since it's too easy if you put them close together. Even on distance snap multiplier set at 1x the sliders will be placed further apart. Same with 01:00:503 (1,2) and other parts in the song

00:58:103 (5) - maybe place this between (3) and (4) instead of having it at the end of (4) since it makes more sense due to beat spacing

01:22:103 (2) - make this a new combo since the guitar part starts here

01:23:753 (1) - I think you should delete this one so it follows the previous patterns, and space out the remaining two circles for proper beat spacing, maybe something like this:
SPOILER

02:02:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - place these closer together since they are way too far from each other. Alternatively, you could change the pattern and just make it all one stream.

02:13:103 (1) - Make the (9) a new combo and change the last note in the triplet into a slider. This will sound a lot better. You can change where you place the notes on the screen, but on the timeline this is how they should be placed:
SPOILER

02:25:703 - you can add a note here to cut off this section better and start the break after this since you already have the (1) on the vocal. Also move the (1) further away from the end of the stream.

02:41:603 (1,2,3) - place these further away from (5)

02:56:303 - Maybe you can have a slider here and then a stream as a lead-in. This is what it looks like on the timeline:


I find having it this way sounds better and is more fun.

03:11:303 - I suggest ending the song here with one hit circle. This makes a very strong cut-off and creates a strong ending. You'll find that this also sounds very nice.

---

Overall really good map! It was very fun to play, and fixing the distance snap in a couple of places will make the map much better than it already is! If you have any questions about anything (for example, if you don't understand what some things I said mean in my mod), then don't hesitate to ask. Have fun mapping! :)
Haha! Thank you, this review will make my map even better than normal :)!!!! Thanks so much!
Mimzy
9 posts
Joined April 2013
Mimzy
01:06:953 (7) -
01:53:753 (3) -
Both of those reverse sliders feel really weird when playing.
Other than that I found no problems except for my lack of skill. Good map ;p
[ Scarlet Red ]
379 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
[ Scarlet Red ]
Thanks guys!
Akali
639 posts
Joined November 2012
Akali
Not full chat mod with some general ideas :3

SPOILER
14:58 Akali: do you use gridsnap?
14:58 reyder: Yes
14:58 Akali: dont'
14:58 reyder: Why not?
14:58 Akali: it creates inconsistent spacing
14:59 reyder: Hmmm?
14:59 reyder: But then everything will feel off to me
14:59 reyder: I tried it once and couldn't do it
14:59 Akali: use distance spacing
14:59 Akali: ...
14:59 Akali: sigh
14:59 reyder: I did for parts that needed it
14:59 Akali: time snap
15:00 Akali: imma do irc mod with examples
15:00 reyder: I think the other slow part I need to fix with distance spacing
15:00 Akali: it will be fastest I guess
15:00 reyder: kk
15:01 Akali: I will explain what I mean
15:01 Akali: on the best example
15:01 Akali: then I will just point these places out
15:02 reyder: k
15:02 Akali: 00:21:803 (4) -
15:02 Akali: if you click 4
15:02 Akali: if shows you in top right
15:02 Akali: previous - 0,82
15:02 Akali: next - 089
15:02 Akali: it doesn't look like it matters
15:03 Akali: but it makes patterns look meh, and in some cases play bad even
15:03 Akali: 00:21:953 (1,2,3,4) -
15:03 Akali: all this pattern again, inconsisten spacing, it doesn't feel right for this type of pattern
15:03 Akali: don't use gridsnap, set idk, 0,8 or 0,9 time snap
15:04 Akali: and place circles on more hm circular patterns
15:04 Akali: I will make a screenshot
15:04 reyder: Distance Snap" you mean?
15:04 reyder: Why don't you set a forum post, wouldn't that be easier? xD
15:05 Akali: I will do save log
15:05 Akali: and post that
15:05 Akali: I would have to alt tab all the time
15:05 Akali: since I don't have second screen
15:05 Akali: and have to run osu! full window
15:05 Akali: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1334538
15:05 Akali: you see what I mean
15:06 reyder: kk
15:06 Akali: I will post and you can read through it later if you want
15:06 Akali: 00:22:553 (4,5) -
15:06 reyder: Up to you tbh
15:06 Akali: don't like these sliders being crooked, but it's whatever
15:09 Akali: 00:23:153 (1,2,3,4) -
15:09 Akali: inconsistent slightly, use 1x or 1,1
15:09 Akali: 00:24:803 (3) -
15:09 Akali: again ugly crooked
15:10 Akali: 00:25:703 (1) -
15:10 Akali: spacing
15:11 Akali: 00:26:753 (1) - copy previous slider and flip it horizontally and ctrl+G it pattern will look better
15:11 Akali: 00:27:053 (2,3,4) - spacing
15:12 reyder: On 00:23:553 (4,5) Should I make those circular?
15:12 reyder: Wow
15:12 reyder: Okay
15:12 Akali: 00:27:953 (6,7,8) - overmapped, no justification for triple
15:12 reyder: Whatever, but should I?
15:13 reyder: But, the voice kinda justifies it! D
15:13 Akali: eh, I would
15:13 reyder: D:*
15:13 Akali: hm if you thinks so
15:14 Akali: 00:28:253 (1) - spacing, flow is derpy
15:15 Akali: hm idk, if you don't have this overmapped triple you can do a triangle
15:16 Akali: that will fit with 00:28:703 (3,4,5) -
15:16 Akali: and when we are at 00:28:703 (3,4,5) -
15:16 Akali: triangle like that should have equal sides imo
15:17 Akali: 00:29:753 (3) -
15:17 Akali: if you place 3 in the very center I would make copy of (2)
15:17 Akali: and flip it
15:18 Akali: 00:30:203 (5) - put someplace else or make a stream
15:18 reyder: For 00:26:753 (1) - What do you mean by previous slider
15:18 reyder: Like take the previous slider and get rid of (1)?
15:19 Akali: 00:25:853 (2) -
15:19 Akali: this one
15:19 Akali: if you copy it, flip horizontally
15:19 reyder: Oh okay
15:19 Akali: and do ctrl+g on it
15:19 reyder: I know what ctrl+G does xD
15:20 reyder: Anyway
15:20 Akali: I dunno how to call it
15:20 reyder: I'm fixing it as we speek
15:20 reyder: Speak*
15:20 reyder: It's reversing the selection
15:20 Akali: 00:32:753 (3,4,5,6) -
15:20 Akali: ugh
15:20 Akali: neither a square
15:20 Akali: nor a rhombus
15:20 Akali: ugly
15:21 reyder: Haha
15:21 Akali: = use time snap
15:21 Akali: or create polygons
15:21 Akali: and then rotate
15:22 reyder: What do you mean
15:22 reyder: By triangle
15:22 reyder: Where would I put it?
15:23 Akali: idk
15:23 Akali: :D like you would have to rearange stuff
15:24 reyder: I'm confused even as to what to do LOL
15:24 reyder: Like
15:24 reyder: You want me to create a triangle
15:24 reyder: Exactly at what time?
15:24 reyder: Cuz there already is one imo
15:24 Akali: you have a triple that is overmapped
15:24 Akali: so you have to remove it
15:24 Akali: if you do that you have 3 notes and you have to do something with them
15:24 Akali: unless you want a stack of 2 notes
15:25 Akali: 00:35:003 (5,6,7,1) -
15:25 Akali: grid snap strikes again
15:25 Akali: spacing, hugging right side for too long...
15:26 Akali: 00:38:003 (1,2,3) - again overmapped triple
15:27 Akali: 00:41:903 (4,5) -
15:27 Akali: undermapped? if you map vocals
15:27 Akali: there are more syllables
15:28 Akali: 00:42:053 (4) -
15:28 Akali: vocal starts there
15:28 Akali: this time
15:28 Akali: 00:42:803 (6,7,1) -
15:28 Akali: spacing
15:29 Akali: it would look better if circles + slider beginning made equal sided triangle
15:30 reyder: 00:35:003 (5,6,7,1) - I wanted that to be like that
15:30 reyder: Btw
15:30 reyder: xD
15:31 Akali: but i don't like it
15:31 Akali: you can do w/e you want
15:31 reyder: Cuz if I put it more to the left it will interfere and look disguisting in my opinion
15:31 Akali: this inconsistent spasing is everywhere ;w;
15:31 reyder: Spacing*
15:31 reyder: At least I can spell propery
15:32 reyder: That's why you make a forum post
15:32 reyder: It's hard for me to look at this
15:32 reyder: And you continue messaging as I'm doing it lolz
15:32 Akali: so wait
15:32 Akali: and I will post...
15:32 Akali: but I don't thing I will do whole thing
15:32 Akali: maybe to like half
15:33 reyder: That's fine
15:33 Akali: or from now on I will just - find what's overmapped
15:33 reyder: At least I'm getting somewhere
15:33 Akali: and try to explain you better what I mean
15:33 reyder: 00:41:903 (4,5) - I wasn't mapping vocals, I was mapping beat
15:33 Akali: ok
15:33 Akali: but vocals stand out
15:33 reyder: It beat terms it's fine I think
15:34 Akali: well ye it's on white ticks so it will always fit
15:34 Akali: 00:48:503 (4) - there is a drum roll
15:34 Akali: you can make stream
15:35 Akali: you know what
15:35 Akali: imma savelog for now
15:35 Akali: and show you ampz map
15:35 Akali: cause he does it very well
15:36 *Akali is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/224235 Hanatan - Kimi no Kiseki [Insane]]
15:37 Akali: ooooh perfect pattern
15:37 Akali: got the map?
15:37 reyder: I have his "This Will Be The Day" one and getting it now
15:37 *reyder is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/294992 Hanatan - Kimi no Kiseki]
15:37 reyder: Have it
15:37 Akali: 00:30:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
15:37 Akali: ok maybe time snaps aren't perfect either but
15:38 Akali: look how slider number six
15:38 Akali: goes into the center of the pattern
15:38 Akali: and it creates nice flow
15:38 Akali: 00:31:720 (1,2,3,4) -
15:38 Akali: here
15:39 reyder: Mhm
15:39 Akali: every object is 1,2 away from each other
15:39 Akali: 00:35:351 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
15:39 Akali: stream
15:39 reyder: Yeah I have to go through my map and fix distance and time snapping
15:39 Akali: wraps around circle 2
15:40 Akali: like 2 was a center of a bigger circle
15:40 reyder: I see that
15:40 Akali: so basically
15:40 Akali: if you are withing the same pattern
15:40 Akali: try to use same distance
15:41 Akali: look at a pattern as a whole
15:41 Akali: not only 1 object + previous + next
15:41 reyder: I understand
15:41 reyder: Thanks
15:41 Akali: use gridsnap only if you want something in the very centre
15:42 Akali: or on axis
15:42 reyder: okay
15:42 Akali: k will try to find overmaps now
15:43 Akali: 01:06:953 (7) -
15:43 Akali: ugh
15:43 Akali: it's readable to an extent but I don't see any reason in overlapping like that
15:44 reyder: Hmmm
15:44 Akali: 01:11:303 (3) -
15:44 Akali: slider + circle, not return slider
15:44 reyder: ?
15:44 Akali: new phrase in vocals starts
15:45 Akali: then a new theme starts you usually don't want to start it with end of a return slider, I mean you can and everyone sometimes do
15:45 Akali: but here it stands out
15:45 reyder: Ah
15:45 Akali: 01:14:453 (7,8,9,10,11,12) -
15:45 Akali: not this type of song/map
15:45 reyder: So just leave it as one slider
15:45 reyder: And a space between the two
15:46 Akali: out of the flow triples
15:46 Akali: hm
15:46 Akali: you can leave space, or start it with a circle
15:46 reyder: So, what should I do with those triples?
15:46 Akali: make them just stacks
15:46 reyder: Oh okay
15:46 Akali: or make straight flow
15:47 Akali: not that one is from top to bottom
15:47 Akali: and other from other side
15:47 Akali: 01:19:703 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
15:48 Akali: overmapped triplees
15:48 Akali: 01:24:503 (1) -
15:48 Akali: spinner out of ass O:
15:48 Akali: there is no long background sound to justify it
15:49 reyder: That's just wrong
15:49 Akali: 01:53:753 (3) -
15:49 Akali: again
15:49 Akali: kinda silly
15:50 Akali: 02:00:503 (1) -
15:50 Akali: no spinner, just map this part
15:50 Akali: and start stream at 2:01:703
15:50 Akali: 02:09:653 (4) -
15:51 Akali: eeh it kinda fits the music
15:51 Akali: but again, stacking sliders like that isn't really necessary
15:51 Akali: at very best you just make someone play the map again if he/she misreads it
15:51 Akali: 02:11:603 (2,3,4,5,6) -
15:51 Akali: same with this
15:52 Akali: 02:13:253 (2,3,4) -
15:52 Akali: overmapped 1/4s
15:52 Akali: 02:24:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
15:52 Akali: Anno Domini 2009 stream
15:53 Akali: make it curvy, sinusoidal or something
15:53 Akali: 2:55:703 - map that
15:53 Akali: or actually...
15:53 Akali: up to you
Kiyura_old
115 posts
Joined November 2012
Kiyura_old
m4m from my queue

I am a noob modder, please don't apply if you dislike my mod
sorry bad english :(
Tips : Play your map, if ANYTHING you play is strange, change it. play the map in player's perspective, not the mapper's perspective

Red is highly recommended (maybe unrankable)
[General]
Artist : 仲村 芽衣子
Romanised Artist : Meiko Nakamura
Tags : Levitation

[Insane]
view> grid level>4
there are random jumps that doesn't fit the music
i don't really recommend the empty instrumental part in the opening, but it's just my opinion, no need to change it.
00:23:603 (4,5,6) - i don't hear anything that fits for a jump here
00:26:153 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:28:403 (2,3,4,5) - 2 to 3's spacing need to be equal to 3 to 4 and 4 to 5 at least.
00:29:153 (1,2) - spacing too far
00:35:753 (2,3,4,5) - make the spacing like 00:37:103 (3,4,5) - (no need to be exact, you know my point)
00:48:503 (4) - shorten by 1 reverse and add clap at tail. this is to warn the SV change
00:50:303 (4,5) - spacing
01:06:503 (5,6,7) - 7's reverse is not visible
01:24:503 (1) - change to hitcircle
01:17:903 (4,5,6,7) - why don't you make these a little farther? 4,5 X:152 Y:88; 6,7 X:240 Y:152
01:19:703 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is the placee where jumps are needed.... http://puu.sh/6WIeC.jpg
01:53:303 (1,2,3) - 3's reverse is not visible
02:04:103 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+g
02:05:153 (5,6) - if you do ^ then move to x:40 y:168
02:08:153 (10,1,2,3,4,5,1) - really hard to play/read
02:22:103 (9,1,2,3) - spacing... or just give a hint for the spacing drop by turning 02:21:803 (7,8) - into a slider
02:25:703 - 02:35:303 OR 02:45:203 - 02:55:703 - can you map one of this part? i think the part can be a good part to map
03:05:303 (1,1,1,1) - is this NC (new combo) spam necessary?
03:06:953 (1) - ctrl+j

and... done :) please mod http://osu.ppy.sh/s/128411 if my mod is useful.

good luck ;)
[ Scarlet Red ]
379 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
[ Scarlet Red ]

Kiyura wrote:

m4m from my queue

I am a noob modder, please don't apply if you dislike my mod
sorry bad english :(
Tips : Play your map, if ANYTHING you play is strange, change it. play the map in player's perspective, not the mapper's perspective

Red is highly recommended (maybe unrankable)
[General]
Artist : 仲村 芽衣子 Fixed
Romanised Artist : Meiko Nakamura Fixed
Tags : Levitation Fixed

[Insane]
view> grid level>4
there are random jumps that doesn't fit the music
i don't really recommend the empty instrumental part in the opening, but it's just my opinion, no need to change it.
00:23:603 (4,5,6) - i don't hear anything that fits for a jump here Fixed
00:26:153 (3,4,5,6) - ^ Fixed
00:28:403 (2,3,4,5) - 2 to 3's spacing need to be equal to 3 to 4 and 4 to 5 at least.Fixed
00:29:153 (1,2) - spacing too far Fixed
00:35:753 (2,3,4,5) - make the spacing like 00:37:103 (3,4,5) - (no need to be exact, you know my point) Fixed
00:48:503 (4) - shorten by 1 reverse and add clap at tail. this is to warn the SV change Fixed that and added a little stream for funsies haha
00:50:303 (4,5) - spacing Fixed
01:06:503 (5,6,7) - 7's reverse is not visible Fixed that!
01:24:503 (1) - change to hitcircle Not entirely sure what you mean by this?
01:17:903 (4,5,6,7) - why don't you make these a little farther? 4,5 X:152 Y:88; 6,7 X:240 Y:152 Fixed
01:19:703 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is the placee where jumps are needed.... http://puu.sh/6WIeC.jpg Changed that up, apologies for not being a great mapper haha
01:53:303 (1,2,3) - 3's reverse is not visible Taken care of
02:04:103 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+g Done
02:05:153 (5,6) - if you do ^ then move to x:40 y:168 Completed
02:08:153 (10,1,2,3,4,5,1) - really hard to play/read I'm sorry but I don't really want to change that, it feels like it belongs there
02:22:103 (9,1,2,3) - spacing... or just give a hint for the spacing drop by turning 02:21:803 (7,8) - into a slider Done
02:25:703 - 02:35:303 OR 02:45:203 - 02:55:703 - can you map one of this part? i think the part can be a good part to map Thought I already did this?
03:05:303 (1,1,1,1) - is this NC (new combo) spam necessary? Fixed, I had no idea that happened haha, and I played it a lot
03:06:953 (1) - ctrl+j Done

and... done :) please mod http://osu.ppy.sh/s/128411 if my mod is useful.

good luck ;)
Thank you so much, it's re-uploaded if you would like to play it again and make anymore changes. I will mod your map as soon as I have time, I am pretty busy at it is but I'm free this whole week so I'll make time, I'm not very good at modding either so don't mind me :). Thanks and have a good day :D
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,846 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
oh i might not find a lot;

first of all, i noticed that you have grid view on 3, i'd highly recommend 4

00:21:953 (1,2,3) - make this kinda like curved? maybe? the turn is too sharp imo;
SPOILER

00:40:103 (1,2,3) - space these more evenly

00:42:203 (5,6) - this blanket can use some adjusting

00:45:803 (6) - copy 00:44:903 (4) and ctrl + hj

00:49:103 (1,2,3,4,5) - improve this curve

00:50:303 (4,5) - make this more like 00:51:203 (8,9)

00:57:503 (3,4,5) - this could be blanketed better

01:22:103 (1,2,3) - spacing here is different from 01:23:003 (5,6,7) why?

01:46:403 (7,8) - stack the ends

02:15:053 (7) - this one is slightly higher than the rest

02:18:653 (1,2) - put them on the same y level as 02:18:353 (5,6,7)

03:05:903 (2,1) - doesnt flow well move (1) somewhere else

03:11:453 - spinner here?


sry we didnt specify on the queue, but next time, mod my map if you want a mod from me and mod pkmnyab's map if you want a mod from him xD
[ Scarlet Red ]
379 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
[ Scarlet Red ]

Kibbleru wrote:

oh i might not find a lot;

first of all, i noticed that you have grid view on 3, i'd highly recommend 4

00:21:953 (1,2,3) - make this kinda like curved? maybe? the turn is too sharp imo; Done (I think)
SPOILER

00:40:103 (1,2,3) - space these more evenly Done

00:42:203 (5,6) - this blanket can use some adjusting Confused as to what needs fixing on this one

00:45:803 (6) - copy 00:44:903 (4) and ctrl + hj Done, and changed some more notes around

00:49:103 (1,2,3,4,5) - improve this curve Completed

00:50:303 (4,5) - make this more like 00:51:203 (8,9) Done

00:57:503 (3,4,5) - this could be blanketed better Done

01:22:103 (1,2,3) - spacing here is different from 01:23:003 (5,6,7) why? Fixed, and it's kinda hard to tell I thought it was right and nobody saw it was off but you, thanks

01:46:403 (7,8) - stack the ends Done

02:15:053 (7) - this one is slightly higher than the rest Done

02:18:653 (1,2) - put them on the same y level as 02:18:353 (5,6,7) Done!

03:05:903 (2,1) - doesnt flow well move (1) somewhere else

03:11:453 - spinner here? Don't see why I should put a spinner there?


sry we didnt specify on the queue, but next time, mod my map if you want a mod from me and mod pkmnyab's map if you want a mod from him xD
Oh sorry! Haha, my bad, but thanks anyhow, bro! I fixed majority of them, uploading now, really appreciate the help
Alternative
348 posts
Joined June 2010
Alternative
Hello~ from #modreqs

[General]
  1. You should resize the BG as 1366x768
  2. You should uncheck Wide Screen Support and Letterbox
  3. You must add pkmnyab in tags
  4. You must change the Artist as 仲村芽衣子
  5. Also you must change the Romanized Artist as Nakamura Meiko
  6. You should make Hard diff
[Easy]
  1. 00:23:303 (4) - You should not use 2times or more slider reverse at Easy
  2. You should check all spacing. Some of these aren't same distance
  3. 02:43:403 (2,3) - You shouldn't use stack like this
[Normal]
  1. Unicode artist is conflict with other diffs.
  2. Timing point is conflict with other diffs. I think yours is OK
  3. You should check all spacing. Some of these aren't same distance
  4. 00:21:503 (1) - same as Easy
  5. 02:39:803 (4,5,1) - I don't recommend like this rhythm It's hard for beginner
  6. 02:40:703 (2,3,4) - ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:38:003 (1,2,3) - overmapped issue
  2. 01:20:978 (7) - delete note
  3. 01:20:978 (7) - add note
  4. 02:02:078 (2,4) - Delete notes
  5. 02:24:578 (2) - delete
  6. 03:06:803 - add note
  7. 03:07:553 - ^
GL
pkk
1,821 posts
Joined November 2013
pkk
Since your easy difficulty is now complete, I will mod it~ In general I don't think you should have SV changes in easy difficulty, not sure though. Also try to keep the spacing consistent, for example always 1.0x distance spacing throughout the song.

00:26:303 (2) - looks better if you angle it a different way

00:38:903 (2) - It's better to keep the start of notes on a white tick on easy difficulties. I suggest moving this forward to the next white tick and maybe even making it a repeat slider so it ends on the start of the vocal. Alternatively, you can replace 00:37:703 (1,2) - with a spinner, which would better match the vocal at the point.

00:50:903 (2,2) - make sure you stack the heads properly

00:59:903 (1) - might flow better if you flip this vertically (ctrl + h)

01:41:303 (1) - you can end this at 01:43:703 - , it sounds better this way imo

01:58:103 (1,2) - make sure these are the same shape since the vocal is similar in these two parts

02:03:503 (1) - flows better to angle it like this:

02:44:903 - or 02:47:303 - , make the break start at one of these locations by dragging it so it makes a blue bar.

02:55:703 (1) - might be too many repeats for an easy difficulty, also not a lot of time to react to (2)

03:05:303 (1) - should properly space this

Edit:

Alternative wrote:

Hello~ from #modreqs

[Normal]
  1. Unicode artist is conflict with other diffs. fixed
  2. Timing point is conflict with other diffs. I think yours is OK
  3. You should check all spacing. Some of these aren't same distance fixed
  4. 00:21:503 (1) - same as Easy fixed, removed second hit circle
  5. 02:39:803 (4,5,1) - I don't recommend like this rhythm It's hard for beginner fixed
  6. 02:40:703 (2,3,4) - ^
[ Scarlet Red ]
379 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
[ Scarlet Red ]
Sorry, guys, for not updating the map at all! I've been really busy and had tough irl conflicts for the time being, I will try to update it as much as I can when I can, and since this is the case, would any of you guys like to map Hard for me? It'd take a lot of stress off for me, just link in this thread a map that you created! Thanks!!!
Muv Acid
43 posts
Joined July 2013
Muv Acid
~Feedback
Hey bud. i tryed your map. its looking good, tho im not an insane player so cant really give a honest opinion.
tho the normal one on HD DT is pretty good.
keep it up.
wherez dat #hard at? :C
Last edited by Muv Acid , edited 1 time in total.
[ Scarlet Red ]
379 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
[ Scarlet Red ]

Alternative wrote:

Hello~ from #modreqs

[General]
  1. You should resize the BG as 1366x768 Fixed
  2. You should uncheck Wide Screen Support and Letterbox Fixed
  3. You must add pkmnyab in tags Fixed
  4. You must change the Artist as 仲村芽衣子 Fixed
  5. Also you must change the Romanized Artist as Nakamura Meiko Fixed
  6. You should make Hard diff Coming at a later date!!!
[Easy]
  1. 00:23:303 (4) - You should not use 2times or more slider reverse at Easy Fixed for those that needed it
  2. You should check all spacing. Some of these aren't same distance Did it to the best of my ability, some are off but it's very difficult for me to put them on time
  3. 02:43:403 (2,3) - You shouldn't use stack like this
Fixed

[Normal]
  1. Unicode artist is conflict with other diffs.
  2. Timing point is conflict with other diffs. I think yours is OK
  3. You should check all spacing. Some of these aren't same distance
  4. 00:21:503 (1) - same as Easy
  5. 02:39:803 (4,5,1) - I don't recommend like this rhythm It's hard for beginner
  6. 02:40:703 (2,3,4) - ^ Completed by PKMNYAB
[Insane]
  1. 00:38:003 (1,2,3) - overmapped issue Was hard to fix this since I liked the triplet beat, but I did it xD
  2. 01:20:978 (7) - delete note Fixed
  3. 01:20:978 (7) - add note Fixed?
  4. 02:02:078 (2,4) - Delete notes Completed
  5. 02:24:578 (2) - delete Fixed
  6. 03:06:803 - add note Fixed in a pretty weird way, will change if anybody says, or you see for yourself
  7. 03:07:553 - ^ Fixed
GL
[ Scarlet Red ]
379 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
[ Scarlet Red ]

pkmnyab wrote:

Since your easy difficulty is now complete, I will mod it~ In general I don't think you should have SV changes in easy difficulty, not sure though. Also try to keep the spacing consistent, for example always 1.0x distance spacing throughout the song.

00:26:303 (2) - looks better if you angle it a different way Fixed :D

00:38:903 (2) - It's better to keep the start of notes on a white tick on easy difficulties. I suggest moving this forward to the next white tick and maybe even making it a repeat slider so it ends on the start of the vocal. Alternatively, you can replace 00:37:703 (1,2) - with a spinner, which would better match the vocal at the point. Did the alternate way, those notes were bothering me anyway haha

00:50:903 (2,2) - make sure you stack the heads properlyFixed

00:59:903 (1) - might flow better if you flip this vertically (ctrl + h) Completed

01:41:303 (1) - you can end this at 01:43:703 - , it sounds better this way imo Haha you are so right!

01:58:103 (1,2) - make sure these are the same shape since the vocal is similar in these two parts Fixed

02:03:503 (1) - flows better to angle it like this: Completed

02:44:903 - or 02:47:303 - , make the break start at one of these locations by dragging it so it makes a blue bar. Done

02:55:703 (1) - might be too many repeats for an easy difficulty, also not a lot of time to react to (2) Fixed

03:05:303 (1) - should properly space this
Fixed

Edit:

Alternative wrote:

Hello~ from #modreqs

[Normal]
  1. Unicode artist is conflict with other diffs. fixed
  2. Timing point is conflict with other diffs. I think yours is OK
  3. You should check all spacing. Some of these aren't same distance fixed
  4. 00:21:503 (1) - same as Easy fixed, removed second hit circle
  5. 02:39:803 (4,5,1) - I don't recommend like this rhythm It's hard for beginner fixed
  6. 02:40:703 (2,3,4) - ^
[ Scarlet Red ]
379 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
[ Scarlet Red ]

acid993 wrote:

~Feedback
Hey bud. i tryed your map. its looking good, tho im not an insane player so cant really give a honest opinion.
tho the normal one on HD DT is pretty good.
keep it up.
wherez dat #hard at? :C
IT'S COMING GAWD, yeah don't worry, it'll be on it's way, if nobody is willing to guest map it I will do it myself
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,846 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
looking at your insane atm, just going to point out a few recurring issues i noticed
Only give me kudos for this post if you've decided to improve your map using the things I've pointed out in this post

  1. Imo, too many linear sliders and stuff i mean like these
    SPOILER
    linear sliders are good however, don't use them too much. just imo, a curvier map feels alot better playing than a rigid looking map.
    The map right now just looks too rigid.
  2. There are overlaps like these 01:09:203 (2,5) - that you want to avoid. in fact, don't have anything touch or overlap unless intentional
  3. There are places where you can stack up the hitobjects to make your map look neater
    e.g 01:06:503 (5,5) - stack like this V
    SPOILER
  4. Your insane difficulty is only hard because of the slider velocity you have. to make it more fun to play, i might consider lowering the SV a bit and throw in a couple of jumps and i mean like 2.0 distance snap jumps. (the bigger ones)
  5. Some places have bad flow like here for instance.
    SPOILER
    here is a useful guide that will hopefully give you a better understanding of flow. Also note that its not absolutely necessary to follow flow. It's okay to break it sometimes for certain patterns, but the general rule is you should try to follow it
Also, the best way to improve your mapping skills, in my honest opinion, is through modding other people's maps. As you get to look at and analyze what make other maps good, you become familiar with patterns, and rhythms. Not to mention you also get kudos and help the mapping community. Although your first mod may be really bad, and the mapper won't take any suggestions, keep trying. Eventually, you'll get better!

-Good luck! ;)
[ Scarlet Red ]
379 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
[ Scarlet Red ]

Kibbleru wrote:

looking at your insane atm, just going to point out a few recurring issues i noticed
Only give me kudos for this post if you've decided to improve your map using the things I've pointed out in this post

  1. Imo, too many linear sliders and stuff i mean like these
    SPOILER
    linear sliders are good however, don't use them too much. just imo, a curvier map feels alot better playing than a rigid looking map.
    The map right now just looks too rigid. I understand and I am only changing the ones that feel like they don't belong.
  2. There are overlaps like these 01:09:203 (2,5) - that you want to avoid. in fact, don't have anything touch or overlap unless intentional I think I fixed this while fixing up the linear sliders, can you check and make sure I did it right? xD
  3. There are places where you can stack up the hitobjects to make your map look neater
    e.g 01:06:503 (5,5) - stack like this V I Personally thinks this looks fine imo
    SPOILER
  4. Your insane difficulty is only hard because of the slider velocity you have. to make it more fun to play, i might consider lowering the SV a bit and throw in a couple of jumps and i mean like 2.0 distance snap jumps. (the bigger ones) I enjoy the fast SV because it provides a fast paced map, that's just my mapping style xD
  5. Some places have bad flow like here for instance.
    SPOILER
    here is a useful guide that will hopefully give you a better understanding of flow. Also note that its not absolutely necessary to follow flow. It's okay to break it sometimes for certain patterns, but the general rule is you should try to follow it
I understand what flow is xD

Also, the best way to improve your mapping skills, in my honest opinion, is through modding other people's maps. As you get to look at and analyze what make other maps good, you become familiar with patterns, and rhythms. Not to mention you also get kudos and help the mapping community. Although your first mod may be really bad, and the mapper won't take any suggestions, keep trying. Eventually, you'll get better Thanks!!!

-Good luck! ;)
NOTICE: I apologize completely, I haven't been able to map much due to irl problems, but I finally finished hard up, and your mod, thanks!
Setsurei
1,149 posts
Joined May 2012
Setsurei
[General]
why red as combo colors? the BG theme is blue, green, gray, how about change the combo color to light blue + gray semi-blue?
example

[Easy]
DS inconsistency:
00:27:203 (1) -
01:03:803 (4,1) -
01:59:303 (2) -
02:03:503 (1,2) -
02:12:503 (5,6,1) -
02:43:403 (2,3) -
02:55:703 (1,2) -
03:05:303 (1) -

Flow & Beat:
00:50:903 (2) - prefer curve the other side
SPOILER
01:02:903 (3,4) - not a good overlap, move (4) head to a visible place
02:16:103 (3,4) - overlaps, curve the (3) opposite (faced down --> up)
02:40:103 (7) - prefer curve
02:55:703 (1) - reduce a reverse, ends 02:56:003 -
02:56:303 - add reverse slider that ends 02:56:603 -
03:02:903 (3,5) - overlap, don't make the (3)'s body covers the (5)'s head
03:08:903 (1) - add a repeat until 03:10:703 -

[pkmnyab's Normal]
there are some DS inconsistency, I won't mention here you need to fix them yourself. I only focus on the flow and beat
00:26:303 (2,4) - a bit overlap
00:28:853 - add hitcircle here, 00:29:003 - delete this
00:29:303 (3,4,5) - delete and 00:29:153 - 00:30:203 - make a long slider here
00:33:503 (2,3) - weird flow, make (2) diagonal, and change the (3) curve (face down --> up)
00:36:353 (3) - better slider that ends 00:36:653 -
00:54:503 (1) - slider ends 00:54:803 -
00:55:703 (1) - ends 00:56:003 -
00:56:903 (1) - ends 00:57:353 - (prefer curve, rather than straight slider)
01:05:303 (1) - ends 01:05:603 -
01:05:753 - add slider until 01:06:053 -
01:11:003 (3) - ctrl G this slider
01:14:603 (6) - delete
01:14:753 - add hitcircle here
01:14:903 - change to half slider?
01:25:553 (2) - change curve direction (up --> down)
01:34:103 - add beat here, seems empty (hitcircle or 1/1 slider)
02:14:603 (3) - same case as 01:11:003 (3) -
02:40:703 (2) - move to 02:40:853 -
03:01:703 (1) - longer 03:02:603 - (delete the hitcircle ofc)

[Hard]
what a tiredsome Hard diff lol, mind reducing some objects in between,
00:49:703 - starting this part has no pauses, I could say too many overmapped areas, example:
00:50:303 (3) - can be extended to 00:50:603 -
00:50:903 (5) - changed to slider that ends 00:51:503 -
00:51:653 - slider ends 00:51:803 -
00:52:253 - delete
00:52:553 - ^
00:53:753 - ^
00:53:903 (5) - move to 00:53:753 - and extend to 00:54:203 -
00:54:203 (6) - delete

I won't mention any further because there are lots of that kind. I did skim a bit on Insane diff, it has the same problem as Hard diff.
Insane is insane but make sure that you didn't map them "overly" because this is 200 BPM. I think that's all, good luck
pkk
1,821 posts
Joined November 2013
pkk

Setsurei wrote:

[centre][url=http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3011402]

[pkmnyab's Normal]
there are some DS inconsistency, I won't mention here you need to fix them yourself. I only focus on the flow and beat
00:26:303 (2,4) - a bit overlap fixed
00:28:853 - add hitcircle here, 00:29:003 - delete this fixed
00:29:303 (3,4,5) - delete and 00:29:153 - 00:30:203 - make a long slider here made spinner instead since slider was too long
00:33:503 (2,3) - weird flow, make (2) diagonal, and change the (3) curve (face down --> up) fixed
00:36:353 (3) - better slider that ends 00:36:653 - fixed
00:54:503 (1) - slider ends 00:54:803 - fixed
00:55:703 (1) - ends 00:56:003 - fixed
00:56:903 (1) - ends 00:57:353 - (prefer curve, rather than straight slider) fixed
01:05:303 (1) - ends 01:05:603 - fixed
01:05:753 - add slider until 01:06:053 -
01:11:003 (3) - ctrl G this slider fixed
01:14:603 (6) - delete I keep this here to keep up with the beat
01:14:753 - add hitcircle here the way it is is fine, I like to keep it simple for this part
01:14:903 - change to half slider?
01:25:553 (2) - change curve direction (up --> down) fixed
01:34:103 - add beat here, seems empty (hitcircle or 1/1 slider) added slider
02:14:603 (3) - same case as 01:11:003 (3) - fixed
02:40:703 (2) - move to 02:40:853 - added hitcircle between slider and hit circle instead to match the vocal
03:01:703 (1) - longer 03:02:603 - (delete the hitcircle ofc) increased length to 03:02:303 - instead
[/color]
Thanks for modding!

updated GD
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 124103
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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Source:
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