nano - Born to be (TV Size) · forum

lolia

Joined May 2012

lolia 2014-01-16T09:44:05+00:00

Pandiar wrote:
from my Q XD
sorry to late

[Karia's Insane]
00:06:611 (5) - i think reverse slider not fit.i want to your better flow pattern changed it into note-slider.
SPOILER
00:08:174 (1) - about x444 y200? Sorry.
00:11:611 (5) - same as 00:06:611 (5) Same as above.
00:44:580 (5) - add note about x304 y224? Sorry.

good luck

Thanks for modding~

>w<

osu file format v12

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Title:Born to be (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Born to be (TV Size)
Artist:nano
ArtistUnicode:nano
Creator:AllStar12
Version:Karia's Insane
Source:魔法戦争
Tags:Mahou Sensou Magical Warfare ending Karia
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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-01-16T13:48:02+00:00

Hi AllStar12 ~
As requested by Karia on my Queue

Guide

Bold = Unrankable/must be fixed
Red = consider to fix it
Black = Suggestion
Blue = Advice/Solution

General

Size of BG is unrankable. try looking it 800x600 or 1024x768 or 1366x768

Easy

00:04:424 (1) - have two issues here, first, spin is too fast, really hard to get 300. Second is 00:05:674 - you're skip the important sound (cymbal) here. i suggest to remove the spin and change it like http://puu.sh/6mvxv.jpg
00:08:174 (3) - flow could be better if you doing a natural flow here. try move this circle to 404,236 ?
00:15:674 (4) - nazi, try to move 120,160? flow better and easier to catch by newbie
00:15:830 (1) - i heard a cymbal sound (but not really loud lol) use finish with 55% or 60%?
00:18:799 - i suggest to add note here since you're following drum sound in this diff.
00:19:424 - same as above
00:23:174 (4) - no need finish on head since there is no any cymbal sound
00:25:674 (2) - aa imo this slider too curving and flow isn't well as previous, try this slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254409 instead?
00:28:174 (4) - make it more symmetric? for better visual https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254414
if you need the code
```
472,160,28174,2,0,B|508:216|440:264|484:324,2,160
```
00:38:174 (3) - is the whistle's body sound intentional? it's too noisy for hear and not really fit with the music. i suggest to delete the whistle's body
00:40:049 (1) - remove the whistle to keep consistency with 00:35:674 (4) - ? whistle not really fit to hear imo
00:42:236 (3,1) - the overlap make newbie confuse imo. need to change >_<
00:45:674 (3) - inconsistency 1,07x and 1,06x spacing. fix it with use 1,0x instead
00:48:174 (2) - remove the whistle. reason same as 00:40:049 (1) -
00:52:236 (2) - move to 192,188 for natural flow. easier to follow the flow imo
00:56:299 (2,3) - just minor issue, the (1) and (3) is touched together (overlap) http://puu.sh/6mLYp.jpg. move the 00:56:299 (2,3) - (click all) to 200,228 (if you fixed this, fix the spacing after this pattern)
01:00:049 (2,3) - minor again but flow could be better if you do a natural flow here. example : http://puu.sh/6mM1Y.jpg
01:00:674 (1) - kinda disagree with this spin since you're skip the vocal in 01:01:924 - . try to change the spin become like http://puu.sh/6mM4k.jpg ?
01:27:549 (3) - ctrl+G it for better flow
01:27:549 (3) - how about add finish on tail? a little bit but i hear the cymbal

Normal

00:00:674 (1) - hmm add whistle on tail to follow the guitar? also heard too empty w/o hitsound imo
00:04:267 (3) - add whistle on tail since the sound increasing also the guitar sound is appear
00:05:986 (2) - nazi thing, rotate 15 degree and put at 348,232 to have a similar flow with 00:06:924 (3) - ?
00:13:799 (2,3) - make them symmetrical for better visual
00:15:830 (1) - same as Easy
00:18:799 - and 00:19:424 - both same as Easy too
00:20:049 (2,3) -i guess make them become one slider to emphasize the vocal
00:21:299 (1,2,3) -even 1/2 space, the distance should be consistency with others. change the distance to 1,0x instead
00:25:049 (4) - flow could be better, the previous one seems too forced for play imo >< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254862
00:30:205 (3) - ups, 2 repeats for 1/2 slider is hard to read by newbie/player imo. reduce one repeat here and start the slider to 00:30:361 - for better rhythm
00:30:986 (1,2) - unstack please, newbie is confuse with stack pattern.
00:32:236 (4) - nazi, try more to curve this slider to have similar flow with 00:33:174 (1) - .http://puu.sh/6mMRp.jpg
00:34:424 (3) - inconsistency spacing (0,93x) here. should be 1,0x
00:39:424 (3) - change this become like http://puu.sh/6mMVr.jpg to following vocal properly? easier to follow imo
00:40:049 (4) - same as Easy
00:44:736 (5) - nazi, flow could be better if you do a opposite flow than your flow. i mean just move the tail to 480,24
00:52:080 (1) - nazi too, flow could be better. move the tail to 212,368 instead? nazi but really have a better flow to play
00:56:924 (4) - add finish on head since i hear a cymbal sound here?
00:58:486 (2) - ctrl+G. flow really better >_<
01:01:299 (2) - move to 168,188 for easier to catch :< . tail to 208|120 for keep consistency spacing
01:01:924 (3) - remove the whistle on tail. reason because really not fit with song which have a cymbal sound only
01:16:924 (1,2) - Hard for read imo since head and tail stacked together. try to change another pattern >_<
01:20:830 (4) - hmm highly to remove this since 1/2 circle is hard to catch for high bpm like this song
01:23:174 (3) - should be NC because the kiai time off
01:28:017 - same as Easy (01:27:549 (3) -)

Hard

00:04:814 - 00:04:970 - 00:04:970 - all of them are overmapping. change the slider 00:04:736 (6) - become like http://puu.sh/6mNzo.jpg
00:14:580 (7) - flow could be smoother. try to move the tail to 504,136
00:15:752 (1) - same as Easy (00:15:830 (1) -)
00:20:517 (3) - move the circle to 268,112 for better flow,visual and for play asdf xD
00:22:549 (2,3,4) - change them to be neater pattern than previous. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254918
00:30:674 (6) - NC because SV changed here
00:38:486 (5,6,7,8) - could be for neater pattern and flow here. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254923
00:42:861 (4,5) - change it for better flow? xD http://puu.sh/6mO0H.jpg
00:49:424 (6) - stack on slider's head instead for better flow. if you're agree. 00:49:580 (7) - move to 396,264 for keep consistency spacing
00:52:549 (7,8,1,2,3) - not really nice to see.. hmm just increase the distance each other. should be nice
00:57:861 (8) - i know you're make a jump here but the flow isn't good as well. ctrl+G instead :<
01:01:924 (4) - NC for new pattern and SV change
01:10:517 (6) - just nazi thing, move the tail to 260,212 for better flow ><
01:11:455 (1) - too curving. flow seems broken here. middle point 256,112. tail 216,100
01:12:392 (4) - ctrl+G it for better flow? the previous one not comfortable to play imo
01:17:705 (3) - try to curve the slider to have better flow and shape. http://puu.sh/6mOfB.jpg
01:23:174 (4) - NC for SV change, kiai off too
01:28:017 (6) - same as Normal

Insane

00:04:814 (2,4) - overmapping. remove them
00:15:752 (1) - same as Hard
00:20:205 (9) - nazi, 1 grid down to keep the flow on streams
00:22:549 (7) - flow is opposite than previous ;; , flip it with ctrl+H and put at 260,280
00:30:674 (4) - NC because SV changed D:
00:37:549 (7,8) - flow of jump not really natural. other word is too forced. but i don't have any idea for solution so just saying here. maybe you have an idea for it :p
00:45:674 (5) - because 1/4 jumps and stanza
00:50:674 (5) - same as 00:30:674 (4) -
00:51:845 (9) - overmapped on blue tick imo, just start it in whitetick and end in red tick
00:55:674 (6) - same as 00:30:674 (4) -
00:57:080 (2,4,6,8) - NC all of them because anti jumps pattern here
01:01:924 (6) - same as Hard
01:28:017 (3) - same as Normal

Karia

00:04:814 (3,5) - overmapping. remove them
00:15:752 (1) - same as Hard. but remove the whistle too
00:25:361 (5) - nazi but the impact of flow is high imo. i suggest to flip this slider to have better flow
00:29:892 (3,4,1) - hmm this triplet and anti jump after it is really hard to read and become trap for player. if you want to keep the triplet,give the normal distance between 00:30:049 (1,2) - these circles
00:47:705 (5) - a far jump here. i really suggest to NC this since a kinda hard to read imo ><
00:48:174 (1,2,3) - how about change the pattern, i feel a forced flow in 00:48:174 (1,2) - . http://puu.sh/6mSlv.jpg try this instead?
01:01:924 (1) - extend the slider to 01:02:392 - . the vocal is end at red tick and no any sound for blue tick
01:21:767 (4) - damn too hard lol , maybe ctrl+G it to make easier? i can't catch it really lol
01:28:017 (4) - same as Normal

oh sorry quick mod for Insane since i need go to an event. but flows are really good. love it <3
Good Luck

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-01-16T14:01:25+00:00

I'll update it once I have gone through both pandiar and xinely mod after waking up(still didn't sleep... Orz)

Thanks for the mods xinely and pandiar

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2014-01-16T17:06:23+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Hi AllStar12 ~
As requested by Karia on my Queue

Guide
Bold = Unrankable/must be fixed
Red = consider to fix it
Black = Suggestion
Blue = Advice/Solution

Karia
00:04:814 (3,5) - overmapping. remove them fixed
00:15:752 (1) - same as Hard. but remove the whistle too fixed
00:25:361 (5) - nazi but the impact of flow is high imo. i suggest to flip this slider to have better flow Hmm..KEEP
00:29:892 (3,4,1) - hmm this triplet and anti jump after it is really hard to read and become trap for player. if you want to keep the triplet,give the normal distance between 00:30:049 (1,2) - these circles I really want to keep 0.3 spacing..;w;
00:47:705 (5) - a far jump here. i really suggest to NC this since a kinda hard to read imo >< fixed
00:48:174 (1,2,3) - how about change the pattern, i feel a forced flow in 00:48:174 (1,2) - . http://puu.sh/6mSlv.jpg try this instead? Hmm..then, 00:49:111 (4,5,1) - this flow is not good I think..
01:01:924 (1) - extend the slider to 01:02:392 - . the vocal is end at red tick and no any sound for blue tick fixed
01:21:767 (4) - damn too hard lol , maybe ctrl+G it to make easier? i can't catch it really lol I'll keep this! lol
01:28:017 (4) - same as Normal fixed

oh sorry quick mod for Insane since i need go to an event. but flows are really good. love it <3
Good Luck

Thanks for modding~

:)

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61767
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
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WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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TitleUnicode:Born to be (TV Size)
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Creator:AllStar12
Version:Karia's Insane
Source:魔法戦争
Tags:Mahou Sensou Magical Warfare ending Karia
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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328,88,57861,2,0,P|304:121|290:160,1,81.8999975006104,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,304,58174,6,0,P|379:264|376:224,1,81.8999975006104,4|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,199,58486,1,8,0:1:0:0:
302,259,58643,1,8,0:1:0:0:
376,224,58799,1,8,0:1:0:0:
366,142,58954,1,8,0:1:0:0:
288,128,59111,1,8,0:1:0:0:
246,199,59267,1,8,0:1:0:0:
147,196,59424,5,8,0:1:0:0:
123,98,59580,1,8,0:1:0:0:
206,46,59736,1,8,0:1:0:0:
281,110,59892,1,8,0:1:0:0:
123,98,60049,5,8,0:1:0:0:
281,110,60205,1,8,0:1:0:0:
116,80,60361,1,8,0:1:0:0:
288,128,60517,1,8,0:1:0:0:
288,128,60830,5,2,0:2:0:0:
444,156,60986,5,2,0:2:0:0:
449,140,61142,1,2,0:2:0:0:
471,293,61299,5,2,0:2:0:0:
461,306,61455,1,2,0:2:0:0:
461,306,61924,6,0,P|396:300|388:228,1,136.5
396,227,62549,2,0,L|224:235,1,159.25
168,268,63174,5,4,0:0:0:0:
56,192,63330,2,0,P|48:144|52:88,1,91,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,20,63642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,192,63799,2,0,L|160:184,1,91
312,132,64111,2,0,L|221:138,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,292,64424,6,0,P|352:284|400:260,1,91
404,176,64736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,292,64892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,192,65049,2,0,L|188:96,1,91
316,187,65361,2,0,L|312:277,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,208,65674,5,4,0:0:0:0:
348,160,65830,2,0,L|344:250,1,91,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,336,66143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,208,66299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,368,66455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,128,66611,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,360,66767,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,120,66924,6,0,P|300:120|344:132,1,91
444,220,67236,2,0,L|440:120,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,44,67549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,220,67705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,44,67861,2,0,L|411:134,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,272,68174,6,0,B|228:292|188:240|188:240|128:276,1,182,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,188,68642,2,0,P|272:144|272:96,1,91
89,111,68955,2,0,P|77:155|77:203,1,91,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,286,69267,6,0,B|240:304|292:272|292:272|332:268|368:296,1,182
392,372,69736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,192,69892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,200,70049,2,0,P|176:190|125:164,1,91
236,20,70361,2,0,P|287:29|338:55,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,175,70674,5,0,0:0:0:0:
236,20,70830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,200,70986,2,0,L|232:300,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,240,71299,6,0,L|96:176,1,45.5
99,95,71455,2,0,L|155:63,1,45.5
221,17,71611,2,0,L|281:39,1,45.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,42,71767,6,0,L|394:129,1,91,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,309,72080,2,0,L|443:222,1,91,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,216,72392,2,0,P|260:304|348:340,1,182,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,160,72861,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,172,73017,1,8,0:0:0:0:
150,169,73095,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,165,73174,6,0,L|30:170,1,91,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,303,73486,2,0,L|170:298,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,204,73799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,340,73955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,128,74111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,262,74267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,40,74424,6,0,P|232:36|184:44,1,91
228,172,74736,2,0,P|276:176|324:168,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,132,75049,1,0,0:0:0:0:
391,313,75205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,277,75361,2,0,L|216:165,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,75674,5,4,0:0:0:0:
124,256,75830,2,0,P|76:264|24:252,1,91,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,120,76142,2,0,P|100:112|152:124,1,91
0,184,76455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,136,76611,2,0,L|152:40,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,212,76924,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,80,77080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,232,77236,2,0,L|444:322,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,180,77549,2,0,L|336:90,1,91,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,268,77861,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,80,78017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,268,78174,6,0,P|224:304|136:232,1,182,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,124,78642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,52,78799,2,0,P|296:52|348:72,1,91
232,152,79111,2,0,P|188:152|136:132,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,164,79424,5,0,0:0:0:0:
184,280,79580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,108,79736,2,0,L|128:16,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,176,80049,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,324,80205,2,0,P|68:332|16:324,1,91,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,192,80517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,224,80674,6,0,L|132:328,1,91,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,360,80986,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,200,81142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,56,81299,6,0,L|312:60,1,45.5
304,160,81455,2,0,L|371:125,1,45.5
412,220,81611,2,0,L|453:156,1,45.5
435,78,81767,2,0,L|425:2,1,45.5
456,164,81924,6,0,L|452:316,1,136.5,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,300,82549,1,2,0:2:0:0:
452,300,82705,1,2,0:2:0:0:
452,300,83174,6,0,P|401:342|334:325,1,136.500005207062,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,236,83642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,222,83720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,208,83799,2,0,L|246:136,1,68.250002603531,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,44,84111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,132,84267,6,0,L|412:128,1,136.500005207062
472,60,84736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
499,159,84892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
502,172,84970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
505,185,85049,2,0,L|502:266,1,68.250002603531,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,356,85361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,260,85517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,332,85674,6,0,P|132:324|88:256,1,136.500005207062,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,138,86142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
111,124,86220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,112,86299,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,16,86455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,86611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,32,86767,6,0,B|428:28|428:28|432:79|485:104,1,136.500005207062
510,24,87236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,176,87392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,189,87470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,202,87549,5,8,0:0:0:0:
384,300,87705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,98,87861,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,228,88017,1,12,0:0:0:0:

Last edited by lolia 2014-01-17T01:20:40+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Limit Removal

12 posts

Joined April 2013

Limit Removal 2014-01-16T19:12:23+00:00

Just saying, the mapset's background image is visibly low-res, might want to fix that.

This might make for a good BG.

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-01-17T00:54:25+00:00

Pandiar wrote:
from my Q XD
sorry to late It's okay ^ ^

[General]
uncheck widescreen sup✔
uncheck letterbox✔
change name soft-sliderslide →　normal-sliderslide✔
add normal-sliderslide2(silence sound)✔
add normal-slidertick2(silence sound)✔
[Insane]
remove whistle. alright :/✔
such as hitsound of Karia's Insane is better imo

00:01:767 (5) - how about x144 y132? re-positioned but in a different coordinates around there✔
00:02:705 (7) - stack x144 y132? Used the same coordinates for slider 5's head✔
00:05:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - I think there is too same circle pattern.make more jump? Agree on making different jumps instead of repeating the position over again.fixed✔
00:13:017 (5) - x272 y212? re-positioned where the circle note 1 is instead but also increased slider note 3's x axis.✔
SPOILER
00:30:205 (1,2,3) - how about this pattern? did make a triangle with 2.30x distance snap but re-positioned be different than your. It's shaped around the triplets as the center✔
00:32:236 (1) - bend a little for better flow,like this hmmm sure.fixed✔
SPOILER
00:43:017 (5) - stack beginning of 00:44:111 (1) alright.fixed✔
00:45:517 (4) - i think note is better Again, the low quality mp3 I had made me think there was a beat there. fixed✔
01:06:455 (2,3,4) - make triangle? sure.fixed✔
SPOILER

[Karia's Insane]
00:06:611 (5) - i think reverse slider not fit.i want to your better flow pattern
SPOILER
00:08:174 (1) - about x444 y200?
00:11:611 (5) - same as 00:06:611 (5)
00:44:580 (5) - add note about x304 y224?

[Hard]
00:04:736 (6) - i think this rhythm is correct I'll think about it, reason why is because I believe it would be harder (my perspective) than just having the original. sorry
SPOILER
00:19:736 (1) - how about this? seems short for me but playing it back sounds right.fixed✔
SPOILER
01:20:986 (6,7,8) - too hard part I could see why, removed the slider, extended the repeater by 1/4 more and added a circle note on next slider note. fixed✔

[Normal]
00:09:424 (1,2) - make blanket hmmm alright✔

[Easy]
00:04:424 (1) - remove because it is too hard for beginner hhmm sure it's too short to do the spinner but have to add a note at 00:05:674 after doing so. ✔

good luck

Thanks for modding my beatmap Pandiar!

Xinely wrote:
Hi AllStar12 ~
As requested by Karia on my Queue

Guide
Bold = Unrankable/must be fixed
Red = consider to fix it
Black = Suggestion
Blue = Advice/Solution

General
Size of BG is unrankable. try looking it 800x600 or 1024x768 or 1366x768✔
Easy
00:04:424 (1) - have two issues here, first, spin is too fast, really hard to get 300. Second is 00:05:674 - you're skip the important sound (cymbal) here. i suggest to remove the spin and change it like http://puu.sh/6mvxv.jpg Was mentioned by Pandiar as well, was planning on changing yup.fixed✔
00:08:174 (3) - flow could be better if you doing a natural flow here. try move this circle to 404,236 ? fixed✔
00:15:674 (4) - nazi, try to move 120,160? flow better and easier to catch by newbie Sure, fixed.✔
00:15:830 (1) - i heard a cymbal sound (but not really loud lol) use finish with 55% or 60%? 55% since it's pretty silent for a 60.✔
00:18:799 - i suggest to add note here since you're following drum sound in this diff. ✔
00:19:424 - same as above ✔
00:23:174 (4) - no need finish on head since there is no any cymbal sound ✔
00:25:674 (2) - aa imo this slider too curving and flow isn't well as previous, try this slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254409 instead? Well I deleted the previous slider and just added a note but yes did readjusted the curving.fixed✔
00:28:174 (4) - make it more symmetric? for better visual https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254414 Sorry, going to keep it the same
if you need the code
472,160,28174,2,0,B|508:216|440:264|484:324,2,160
00:38:174 (3) - is the whistle's body sound intentional? it's too noisy for hear and not really fit with the music. i suggest to delete the whistle's body Pandiar mentioned about this so I decided to remove them all and will decide to whether or not place whistles on notes (Most likely not going to add it though..)✔
00:40:049 (1) - remove the whistle to keep consistency with 00:35:674 (4) - ? whistle not really fit to hear imo ✔
00:42:236 (3,1) - the overlap make newbie confuse imo. need to change >_< Did like how it is but alright I'll change it.✔
00:45:674 (3) - inconsistency 1,07x and 1,06x spacing. fix it with use 1,0x insteadWow surprised that the spacing was not consistent here. fixed✔
00:48:174 (2) - remove the whistle. reason same as 00:40:049 (1) - ✔
00:52:236 (2) - move to 192,188 for natural flow. easier to follow the flow imo
00:56:299 (2,3) - just minor issue, the (1) and (3) is touched together (overlap) http://puu.sh/6mLYp.jpg. move the 00:56:299 (2,3) - (click all) to 200,228 (if you fixed this, fix the spacing after this pattern) ✔
01:00:049 (2,3) - minor again but flow could be better if you do a natural flow here. example : http://puu.sh/6mM1Y.jpg ✔
01:00:674 (1) - kinda disagree with this spin since you're skip the vocal in 01:01:924 - . try to change the spin become like http://puu.sh/6mM4k.jpg ? ✔
01:27:549 (3) - ctrl+G it for better flow ✔
01:27:549 (3) - how about add finish on tail? a little bit but i hear the cymbal ✔
Normal
00:00:674 (1) - hmm add whistle on tail to follow the guitar? also heard too empty w/o hitsound imo ✔
00:04:267 (3) - add whistle on tail since the sound increasing also the guitar sound is appear ✔
00:05:986 (2) - nazi thing, rotate 15 degree and put at 348,232 to have a similar flow with 00:06:924 (3) - ?✔
00:13:799 (2,3) - make them symmetrical for better visual I say it's fine :S
00:15:830 (1) - same as Easy ✔
00:18:799 - and 00:19:424 - both same as Easy too ✔
00:20:049 (2,3) -i guess make them become one slider to emphasize the vocal I'll keep it the way it is, reason why is because this part I'm mainly going for the instrumental part, not really emphasizing a whole lot on the vocal. Sorry
00:21:299 (1,2,3) -even 1/2 space, the distance should be consistency with others. change the distance to 1,0x instead ✔
00:25:049 (4) - flow could be better, the previous one seems too forced for play imo >< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254862 Did it in your way but added a note before that. Reason why I added a note is because I'm going for the instrumental parts. ✔
00:30:205 (3) - ups, 2 repeats for 1/2 slider is hard to read by newbie/player imo. reduce one repeat here and start the slider to 00:30:361 - for better rhythm Had to re-position previous note for doing this but alright. ✔
00:30:986 (1,2) - unstack please, newbie is confuse with stack pattern. ✔
00:32:236 (4) - nazi, try more to curve this slider to have similar flow with 00:33:174 (1) - .http://puu.sh/6mMRp.jpg ✔
00:34:424 (3) - inconsistency spacing (0,93x) here. should be 1,0x
00:39:424 (3) - change this become like http://puu.sh/6mMVr.jpg to following vocal properly? easier to follow imo ✔
00:40:049 (4) - same as Easy ✔
00:44:736 (5) - nazi, flow could be better if you do a opposite flow than your flow. i mean just move the tail to 480,24 ✔
00:52:080 (1) - nazi too, flow could be better. move the tail to 212,368 instead? nazi but really have a better flow to play ✔
00:56:924 (4) - add finish on head since i hear a cymbal sound here? Had to also add finish sound on one of the note later on then ✔
00:58:486 (2) - ctrl+G. flow really better >_< ✔
01:01:299 (2) - move to 168,188 for easier to catch :< . tail to 208|120 for keep consistency spacing✔
01:01:924 (3) - remove the whistle on tail. reason because really not fit with song which have a cymbal sound only✔
01:16:924 (1,2) - Hard for read imo since head and tail stacked together. try to change another pattern >_< :CC ✔
01:20:830 (4) - hmm highly to remove this since 1/2 circle is hard to catch for high bpm like this song ✔
01:23:174 (3) - should be NC because the kiai time off ✔
01:28:017 - same as Easy (01:27:549 (3) -) ✔

Hard
00:04:814 - 00:04:970 - 00:04:970 - all of them are overmapping. change the slider 00:04:736 (6) - become like http://puu.sh/6mNzo.jpg Was trying to find a way to change this up since Pandiar also mentioned about this so I'll go with this. ✔
00:14:580 (7) - flow could be smoother. try to move the tail to 504,136✔
00:15:752 (1) - same as Easy (00:15:830 (1) -)✔
00:20:517 (3) - move the circle to 268,112 for better flow,visual and for play asdf xD I fully understand what you mean, was due to distance snap haha ✔
00:22:549 (2,3,4) - change them to be neater pattern than previous. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254918 ✔
00:30:674 (6) - NC because SV changed here ✔
00:38:486 (5,6,7,8) - could be for neater pattern and flow here. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254923 ✔
00:42:861 (4,5) - change it for better flow? xD http://puu.sh/6mO0H.jpg Changed some positioning for the other notes as well. ✔
00:49:424 (6) - stack on slider's head instead for better flow. if you're agree. 00:49:580 (7) - move to 396,264 for keep consistency spacing ✔
00:52:549 (7,8,1,2,3) - not really nice to see.. hmm just increase the distance each other. should be nice hmmm yeah I agree with you here. ✔
00:57:861 (8) - i know you're make a jump here but the flow isn't good as well. ctrl+G instead :< :CC ✔
01:01:924 (4) - NC for new pattern and SV change ✔
01:10:517 (6) - just nazi thing, move the tail to 260,212 for better flow >< ✔
01:11:455 (1) - too curving. flow seems broken here. middle point 256,112. tail 216,100 ✔
01:12:392 (4) - ctrl+G it for better flow? the previous one not comfortable to play imo I need to get more mod that will mention about this, I also believe it would feel bit iffy about doing both my and your suggestion. Will try to find a better way as well.
01:17:705 (3) - try to curve the slider to have better flow and shape. http://puu.sh/6mOfB.jpg ✔
01:23:174 (4) - NC for SV change, kiai off too✔
01:28:017 (6) - same as Normal✔

Insane
00:04:814 (2,4) - overmapping. remove them✔
00:15:752 (1) - same as Hard✔
00:20:205 (9) - nazi, 1 grid down to keep the flow on streams✔
00:22:549 (7) - flow is opposite than previous ;; , flip it with ctrl+H and put at 260,280✔
00:30:674 (4) - NC because SV changed D:✔
00:37:549 (7,8) - flow of jump not really natural. other word is too forced. but i don't have any idea for solution so just saying here. maybe you have an idea for it :p well, I did some changes and I hope this one works out
00:45:674 (5) - because 1/4 jumps and stanza Was mentioned by Pandiar and changed it
00:50:674 (5) - same as 00:30:674 (4) -✔
00:51:845 (9) - overmapped on blue tick imo, just start it in whitetick and end in red tick✔
00:55:674 (6) - same as 00:30:674 (4) -✔
00:57:080 (2,4,6,8) - NC all of them because anti jumps pattern here✔
01:01:924 (6) - same as Hard✔
01:28:017 (3) - same as Normal✔

oh sorry quick mod for Insane since i need go to an event. but flows are really good. love it <3
Good Luck

Thanks for modding and carefully looking through my beatmap Xinely!

Limit Removal wrote:
Just saying, the mapset's background image is visibly low-res, might want to fix that.

This might make for a good BG.

As mentioned by Xinely, chose basically that image and re-sized it down to 1366x768. Thanks for mentioning it!

Updated!

Setsurei

1,149 posts

Joined May 2012

Setsurei 2014-01-19T06:39:27+00:00

nicely done here

[Easy]
00:28:174 (4) - how about blanket? move to x 432 y 141
00:33:174 (1,3) - overlap
00:33:486 (2,3) - flow not nice, how about flipping (3) and re-arrange the objects after too
00:43:174 (4,1) - DS not consistent, move (4) a bit up
01:08:486 (4,1) - ctrl G (4), then move (1) to blanket 01:10:674 (2) -

[Normal]
there are some DS nazi mod too, but I saw the pattern nicely so I ignore and let them be
00:10:361 (1,2) - DS not consistent, move (2) a bit up

[Hard]

mwahahaha /me runs

00:19:736 - there's a beat here.. add hitcircle here? or move 00:19:892 (1) - to that point and add another reverse

[Insane]
00:09:580 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - re-shape this pattern to be more hexagon shape?

SPOILER

00:09:580 (3) - x 64 y 152
00:09:736 (4) - x 64 y 32
00:09:892 (5) - x 167 y 92
00:10:049 (6) - x 29 y 92
00:10:205 (7) - x 133 y 32
00:10:361 (8) - x 133 y 152

00:34:424 (1,5) - (1) stack to (5)

that's all good luck for ranked

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-01-19T07:32:45+00:00

Setsurei wrote:
nicely done here

[Easy]
00:28:174 (4) - how about blanket? move to x 432 y 141 hmmm sure ✔
00:33:174 (1,3) - overlap Believed I fixed it a bit better? ✔
00:33:486 (2,3) - flow not nice, how about flipping (3) and re-arrange the objects after too Was fixed along with the previous note ✔
00:43:174 (4,1) - DS not consistent, move (4) a bit up oh wow these random distance snaps Orz. Fixed ✔
01:08:486 (4,1) - ctrl G (4), then move (1) to blanket 01:10:674 (2) - Sorry but I'll keep this for now. Reason is because It's meant to be reflective and the same as 01:10:674 (2,3) , just in a different path.

[Normal]
there are some DS nazi mod too, but I saw the pattern nicely so I ignore and let them be
00:10:361 (1,2) - DS not consistent, move (2) a bit up Whoops I missed that one, thanks.fixed. ✔

[Hard]
mwahahaha /me runs hahah, nice full combo with HD! ^^. You should try out DT with it as well, friend of mine got a SS for HD+DT If only you could keep that score till it's ranked as well Orz
00:19:736 - there's a beat here.. add hitcircle here? or move 00:19:892 (1) - to that point and add another reverse Strange, I must of did something here during my editing as I was looking over Pandiar and Xinely's mod work. fixed. ✔

[Insane]
00:09:580 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - re-shape this pattern to be more hexagon shape?Yeah this was actually on purpose. Reason why I altered the shape a bit was because the first 3 circle notes have shorter distance snap and the next 3 circle notes (which I didn't change) increases the distance snap. That part I followed the guitar as it makes it's low pitch (the first three circle notes) and then it gets higher (the next 3 circle notes). Hope you know what I mean but I'll take your word into consideration.
SPOILER

00:09:580 (3) - x 64 y 152
00:09:736 (4) - x 64 y 32
00:09:892 (5) - x 167 y 92
00:10:049 (6) - x 29 y 92
00:10:205 (7) - x 133 y 32
00:10:361 (8) - x 133 y 152
00:34:424 (1,5) - (1) stack to (5) The five was intentional since it makes a star pattern there. However, I did change some places such as moving the one instead to the five, circle note 8 bit closer meaning i shortened the distance snap by a bit and placed circle note 2 on slider 7's tail. Thanks for pointing this part out. fixed ✔

that's all good luck for ranked

Thanks for modding my beatmap Setsurei!

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2014-01-23T02:07:33+00:00

from my queue

[General]

according to the ranking criteria, you cannot silence sliderslide and slidertick both at the same time, you need to delete one of them (delete the slidertick recommended
try to add audio lead-in at least 1000ms, too short to ready for play currently

[Easy]

same NC suggestion with Normal
01:18:486 (4) - missed clap on slider start?

[Normal]

you'd beter to place NCs consistently in low diffs, i recommend you to arrange NCs for example adding it on every 2nd long white tick
00:00:674 (1) - inappropriate whistle here, try deleting it unless you changed sampleset to soft
00:00:674 - same suggestion with Insane
00:15:830 (1) - missed finish?
00:19:736 - try adding 1/1 slider with a repeat here, current space seems too empty imo, see what i've done for it
example
00:24:267 (3,5) - missed claps
00:26:299 (2) - it's kinda nazi but, try curving this upward? has better flow imo
00:30:361 (3) - add finish on the slider end for consistency
00:33:174 (1) - add finish on the slider start for consistency as well
00:54:580 (2) - that whistle since i already said why whistle isn't suitable well with this part in Insane, delete it~
01:01:924 (3) - same suggestion with Insane
01:18:174 (4) - add finish on the slider start for the cymbal sound

[Karia's Insane]

아 드디어 한국어를 쓰는구나

00:29:892 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 연타 바로 다음에 안티점프를 두시면 아무래도 좀 헷갈려서 추천드리고 싶진않네요, 차라리 점프를 두시거나 아니면 디스탠스를 좀 늘려주시면 나을꺼같아요
01:00:049 (1,3) - 사실 플레이에는 그렇게 큰 차이가 없는데 그래도 00:59:424 (1) - 이 노트에 스택 시키시는게 좀 더 플레이하긴 나을꺼 같아요 ㅋㅋ
01:01:924 - 인세인에서도 언급했던건데, 여긴 소프트 샘플셋 쓰시는게 훨씬 나은거 같아요
01:11:767 (1) - 여기에 피니시 넣으셨던데 둘다 피니시 사운드를 가지고있어서 01:12:392 (3) - 여기도 넣어주시는게 좋을꺼같아요
01:21:924 (1) - 이부분은 클랩을 넣기엔 적당한 음이 없는거같아요, 다음 노트들처럼 소프트 휘슬이 어떨까요?

정말 잘 만드셨네요 ㅋㅋ

[Hard]

00:00:674 - same suggestion with Insane
00:20:674 (4) - NC for SV and rhythm changing
00:27:549 (2) - i recommend adding clap on the slider start for matching with the drum sound in background
00:31:767 (1) - delete NC and 00:33:174 (8,1) - swap NC for consistency
00:38:486 (5,6,7) - same clap suggestions with Insane
00:48:486 (4,5) - this rhythm... well i think you can improve this rhythm to better way
00:52:861 (1,3) - swap NC for consistency
00:59:424 (8) - forgot to add finish on this slider start?
01:01:924 - like what i suggested in Insane diff, try soft sampleset on this green line
01:11:767 (2,4) - same finish suggestion with Insane lol
01:19:424 (1,2,5) - i don't think whistle is appropriate on kiai sections, there isn't any reasonable sounds in it imo, if you really want to use whsitles, try using it on 00:21:299 (6) - here and other similar parts

[Insane]

you'd better to place NCs more neatly, current one seems little bit inconsistant
00:00:674 - adjust the volume and custom sampleset on red line like the green line on same time
00:00:674 (1) - since the beginning sound isn't that strong, you'd better to use soft sampleset or just decreasing the volume
00:11:767 (1,2) - swap NC for consistency
00:13:642 (8,1) - this rhythm hears kinda off to the music, reversing this rhythm can be a solution imo. Also, i have a pattern suggestion about it (you need to move the next objects as well if you decide to follow this)
exapmle
00:38:486 (2,3,4) - how about adding claps on each of the slider start? it's too empty without those
00:47:549 (4) - i don't think this whistle is really needed even you didn't use it on other parts
00:49:267 (6,7) - another rhythmic issue, try reversing this rhythm and here's an example
example
00:55:674 (1) - why don't you add finish on the slider start? it fits really nice with the music (not only this but also all of similar parts for example like 00:56:924 - here)
00:56:455 (3) - i'd rather using ctrl g on thjs slider, this part doesn't seem that jump pattern is really needed
01:01:924 - using soft sampleset on this green line fits much better with the music
01:11:767 (4,6) - how about adding finishes on both slider start? i can clealy hear cymbal sounds which you added in previous part
01:27:392 (6,1) - swap NC for indicating rhythm change better

sorry if there are some grammatical errors xD, nice map and i like this song lol, good luck for rank!

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-01-23T06:58:01+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
from my queue

[General]
according to the ranking criteria, you cannot silence sliderslide and slidertick both at the same time, you need to delete one of them (delete the slidertick recommended Done ✔
try to add audio lead-in at least 1000ms, too short to ready for play currently Alright ✔
[Easy]
same NC suggestion with Normal ✔
01:18:486 (4) - missed clap on slider start? ✔
[Normal]
you'd beter to place NCs consistently in low diffs, i recommend you to arrange NCs for example adding it on every 2nd long white tick ✔
00:00:674 (1) - inappropriate whistle here, try deleting it unless you changed sampleset to softWas mentioned from Xinely about adding it but I said I would just wipe after adding it so I missed this one. fixed ✔
00:00:674 - same suggestion with Insane ✔
00:15:830 (1) - missed finish? yup, fixed ✔
00:19:736 - try adding 1/1 slider with a repeat here, current space seems too empty imo, see what i've done for it True ✔
example
00:24:267 (3,5) - missed claps fixed ✔
00:26:299 (2) - it's kinda nazi but, try curving this upward? has better flow imo ✔
00:30:361 (3) - add finish on the slider end for consistency ✔
00:33:174 (1) - add finish on the slider start for consistency as well ✔
00:54:580 (2) - that whistle since i already said why whistle isn't suitable well with this part in Insane, delete it~ ✔
01:01:924 (3) - same suggestion with Insane ✔
01:18:174 (4) - add finish on the slider start for the cymbal sound ✔
[Hard]
00:00:674 - same suggestion with Insane ✔
00:20:674 (4) - NC for SV and rhythm changing ✔
00:27:549 (2) - i recommend adding clap on the slider start for matching with the drum sound in backgroundWhoops. That was a mistake to miss that. Fixed ✔
00:31:767 (1) - delete NC and 00:33:174 (8,1) - swap NC for consistency ✔
00:38:486 (5,6,7) - same clap suggestions with Insane ✔
00:48:486 (4,5) - this rhythm... well i think you can improve this rhythm to better way Alright, Hope what I did was better ✔
00:52:861 (1,3) - swap NC for consistency ✔
00:59:424 (8) - forgot to add finish on this slider start? ✔
01:01:924 - like what i suggested in Insane diff, try soft sampleset on this green line ✔
01:11:767 (2,4) - same finish suggestion with Insane lol ✔
01:19:424 (1,2,5) - i don't think whistle is appropriate on kiai sections, there isn't any reasonable sounds in it imo, if you really want to use whsitles, try using it on 00:21:299 (6) - here and other similar partsWiped them

[Insane]
you'd better to place NCs more neatly, current one seems little bit inconsistant Noticed once you said it. Fixed ✔
00:00:674 - adjust the volume and custom sampleset on red line like the green line on same time fixed ✔
00:00:674 (1) - since the beginning sound isn't that strong, you'd better to use soft sampleset or just decreasing the volume ~~Set the volume to 35%, think that's good enough right?~~ I take that back, changed it to Soft hitsound, added whistles in the beginning of the song for each difficulty and set it to 40% volume. ✔
00:11:767 (1,2) - swap NC for consistency For the NC I redid the whole thing and made it consistent as possible every 8. ✔
00:13:642 (8,1) - this rhythm hears kinda off to the music, reversing this rhythm can be a solution imo. Also, i have a pattern suggestion about it (you need to move the next objects as well if you decide to follow this) reversed it and also re-positioned them in different coordinates ✔
exapmle
00:38:486 (2,3,4) - how about adding claps on each of the slider start? it's too empty without those hmm sure
00:47:549 (4) - i don't think this whistle is really needed even you didn't use it on other parts Actually, I wiped out all the whistles from my difficulties because they seem to not fit with the song but probably missed some after going through them such as this. fixed ✔
00:49:267 (6,7) - another rhythmic issue, try reversing this rhythm and here's an example Sure ✔
example
00:55:674 (1) - why don't you add finish on the slider start? it fits really nice with the music (not only this but also all of similar parts for example like 00:56:924 - here) That is true. fixed ✔
00:56:455 (3) - i'd rather using ctrl g on thjs slider, this part doesn't seem that jump pattern is really needed I see what you mean ✔
01:01:924 - using soft sampleset on this green line fits much better with the music Agree ✔
01:11:767 (4,6) - how about adding finishes on both slider start? i can clealy hear cymbal sounds which you added in previous part ahh I understand ✔
01:27:392 (6,1) - swap NC for indicating rhythm change better Sure ✔
sorry if there are some grammatical errors xD, nice map and i like this song lol, good luck for rank!

Thanks for modding and carefully looking through my beatmap and the star HelloSCV!

Last edited by AllStar12 2014-01-23T22:46:01+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2014-01-23T07:43:14+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
from my queue

[General]
according to the ranking criteria, you cannot silence sliderslide and slidertick both at the same time, you need to delete one of them (delete the slidertick recommended present for AllStar12
try to add audio lead-in at least 1000ms, too short to ready for play currently fixed

[Karia's Insane]

아 드디어 한국어를 쓰는구나 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
00:29:892 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 연타 바로 다음에 안티점프를 두시면 아무래도 좀 헷갈려서 추천드리고 싶진않네요, 차라리 점프를 두시거나 아니면 디스탠스를 좀 늘려주시면 나을꺼같아요 으..그냥 두고 싶은데 이 모딩은 계속 올 듯 싶네요 ㅜ fixed
01:00:049 (1,3) - 사실 플레이에는 그렇게 큰 차이가 없는데 그래도 00:59:424 (1) - 이 노트에 스택 시키시는게 좀 더 플레이하긴 나을꺼 같아요 ㅋㅋ fixed
01:01:924 - 인세인에서도 언급했던건데, 여긴 소프트 샘플셋 쓰시는게 훨씬 나은거 같아요 fixed
01:11:767 (1) - 여기에 피니시 넣으셨던데 둘다 피니시 사운드를 가지고있어서 01:12:392 (3) - 여기도 넣어주시는게 좋을꺼같아요 fixed
01:21:924 (1) - 이부분은 클랩을 넣기엔 적당한 음이 없는거같아요, 다음 노트들처럼 소프트 휘슬이 어떨까요? 사실 휘슬만 넣으려니까 좀 힛사가 지루한 감이 있어서 클랩을 넣었었지만..일단은 고쳤습니다 ㅎ fixed

정말 잘 만드셨네요 ㅋㅋ
sorry if there are some grammatical errors xD, nice map and i like this song lol, good luck for rank!

Thanks for modding~

~~http://puu.sh/6uZNh.txt~~

EDIT : http://puu.sh/6uZR4.txt

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-01-23T08:34:17+00:00

Fully Updated with Karia's Insane Difficulty as it's up to date.

Sylphi

osu! Alumni

3,307 posts

Joined February 2012

Sylphi 2014-01-25T06:39:18+00:00

Hi, AllStar12.

[General]
- Artist: ナノ (http://puu.sh/6wtEt.png)
- How about change offset to 680(+6)?

[Easy]
00:58:174 (4) - New combo
00:59:111 (5) - Remove new combo
00:59:111 (1,2,3) - I think this rhythm is better. How about try to this rhythm?
01:20:674 (3) - Add finish

[Normal]
01:20:361 (1) - Add finish on slider's end
01:19:111 (1) - Stack on 01:17:236 (2).

[Hard]
00:19:736 (1,2,3) - It is a little awkward. try using this rhythm.
00:37:861 (1) - Remove new combo (similar to the previous part)
00:38:174 (4) - Same reason as 00:37:861 (1). Add new combo.
01:20:674 (5) - Add finish on slider's start

[Karia's Insane]
00:04:267 (1) - Add whistle on slider's start
00:31:924 (1) - Remove clap on slider's start
00:33:174 (1) - Why is this only whistle? Change to finish XD

[Insane]
01:06:611 (3) - Moving to 344, 32 is better to play.
01:11:611 (4) - Stack on 01:10:986 (2)'s start
01:20:674 (6) - Add finish on slider's start
01:28:017 (3) - How about move to 368, 280?

Sorry for delay and short mod (T^T)

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2014-01-25T07:31:44+00:00

Underflow wrote:
Hi, AllStar12.

[General]
- Artist: ナノ (http://puu.sh/6wtEt.png) present for AllStar12.
- How about change offset to 680(+6)? ~~Waiting for AllStar12's decision.~~ fixed to 685(+11)

[Karia's Insane]
00:04:267 (1) - Add whistle on slider's start fixed
00:31:924 (1) - Remove clap on slider's start 뒤에 같은 음 두부분도 다 클랩을 넣었기도 하고 클랩이 어울리기도 하네요 ㅎ
00:33:174 (1) - Why is this only whistle? Change to finish XD 피니시가 있는 자리가 아니라서 균형상 휘슬을 넣었어요 ㅎ

Sorry for delay and short mod (T^T)

Thanks for modding~

아마..한국분 맞으시죠? ㅜ

~~http://puu.sh/6xi68.txt~~
EDIT : http://puu.sh/6xkgN.txt

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-01-25T09:40:44+00:00

Underflow wrote:
Hi, AllStar12.

[General]
- Artist: ナノ (http://puu.sh/6wtEt.png) We'll see if we get more comments about this. Reason is that beatmap the artist (nano) has been typed in romanised letters lately.
- How about change offset to 680(+6)? Done a recheck on the offset multiple times and I concluded that it's 685 that is the correct number. Thanks for noticing that as I was way off... Orz

[Easy]
00:58:174 (4) - New combo Understandable. fixed ✔
00:59:111 (5) - Remove new combo ✔

00:59:111 (1,2,3) - I think this rhythm is better. How about try to this rhythm? Pretty good. changed ✔
01:20:674 (3) - Add finish ✔

[Normal]
01:20:361 (1) - Add finish on slider's end ✔
01:19:111 (1) - Stack on 01:17:236 (2). Probably shifted due to stack latency. fixed ✔

[Hard]
00:19:736 (1,2,3) - It is a little awkward. try using this rhythm. I believe it's fine, sorry.
00:37:861 (1) - Remove new combo (similar to the previous part) ✔
00:38:174 (4) - Same reason as 00:37:861 (1). Add new combo. ✔
01:20:674 (5) - Add finish on slider's start ✔

[Insane]
01:06:611 (3) - Moving to 344, 32 is better to play. ✔
01:11:611 (4) - Stack on 01:10:986 (2)'s start Understandable since it's hidden behind the slider.fixed ✔
01:20:674 (6) - Add finish on slider's start ✔
01:28:017 (3) - How about move to 368, 280? hmmm sure let's give this a shot. Understand why about positioning there. ✔

Sorry for delay and short mod (T^T) Hahah It's alright ^^

Thanks for modding my beatmap Underflow!

Updated with Karia's difficulty. It's up to date!

ayaka2000

55 posts

Joined June 2013

ayaka2000 2014-01-25T11:15:27+00:00

HI.
Please excuse me if you may not understand or you feel bad with my poor English.

General
Slder → a crowning point and the center of a circle　arrange the shape of.
That's difficult to express with my level of English.I'm sorry if I do not comehus, each slder can more beautifully.

Easy

01:03:185 (2) - No Stack for beginner
01:00:685 (1) - Too short.It's difficult for a rank beginner.

Nomal

00:52:091 (1) - I like a perpendicular line.

Hard

01:14:747 (7) -

01:20:997 (6) -

→　

A(a crowning point) B(End point the center of a circle)

Insane

00:25:685 (5) - stack move X336 Y76

Rey-volution

1,342 posts

Joined June 2011

Rey-volution 2014-01-26T08:49:50+00:00

[Easy & Normal]
PERFECT

[Hard]
00:37:560 (8) - remove whistle
00:53:106 - add notes?
01:15:060 (1) - this overlapping is okay? if not, you can move it

[Insane]
00:48:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think thats a good shape/positioning, I feel that's better like this

SPOILER

01:27:716 (1,2,3) - Personally I don't like the position, you can make it like this. But you can ignore it~

SPOILER

[Karia's Insane]
00:21:310 (4,1) - I think this overlapping is not good. try to move it
00:50:216 (4) - what about 171x316 ? because this is not a slider

Very good map, and I think this is ready for ranked. +1

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2014-01-26T09:05:25+00:00

Rey-volution wrote:
[Karia's Insane]
00:21:310 (4,1) - I think this overlapping is not good. try to move it Sorry. This is just my style.
00:50:216 (4) - what about 171x316 ? because this is not a slider fixed

Very good map, and I think this is ready for ranked. +1

Thanks for modding~

http://puu.sh/6yAdC.txt

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-01-26T10:53:12+00:00

ayaka2000 wrote:
HI.
Please excuse me if you may not understand or you feel bad with my poor English.

General
Slder → a crowning point and the center of a circle　arrange the shape of.
That's difficult to express with my level of English.I'm sorry if I do not comehus, each slder can more beautifully.
Easy

01:03:185 (2) - No Stack for beginner Sorry I believe this is fine because the player is ready at the position for the next slider note when the kiai time starts
01:00:685 (1) - Too short.It's difficult for a rank beginner. I'll consider this but really think it's enough time for the player at this level to handle the spinner, plus they also got enough time to react for the circle note after that.
Nomal

00:52:091 (1) - I like a perpendicular line. Really think this might be a weird flow after finishing the repeated slider and moving on to the next slider so no change
Hard

01:14:747 (7) - oh what the..., I don't remember messing around with that slider... fixed ✔

01:20:997 (6) - No change because after going through mapping and modding for a reasonable amount of time, I found out that having the points re-positioned to where they are meant to be can cause the slider to be formed in a different way than the creator wants it to be so I'll just keep it like that for safe measures.
→　
A(a crowning point) B(End point the center of a circle)
Insane

00:25:685 (5) - stack move X336 Y76 Was intentional to have the distance snap like that so no change here

Thanks for modding my beatmap ayaka2000!

Rey-volution wrote:
[Easy & Normal]
PERFECT

[Hard]
00:37:560 (8) - remove whistle hmmm strange, it doesn't say that it has a whistle there for me and it doesn't sound like there is :S
00:53:106 - add notes? Believe it's unnecessary to do so at this part, even for a hard
01:15:060 (1) - this overlapping is okay? if not, you can move it Yeah I don't know what happened here, the slider wasn't meant be like that to begin with. I don't know how I messed that one up and don't remember moving it... Orz fixed ✔

[Insane]
00:48:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think thats a good shape/positioning, I feel that's better like this Understand what you mean by that so fixed! ✔
SPOILER
01:27:716 (1,2,3) - Personally I don't like the position, you can make it like this. But you can ignore it~ Did it in a different way. ✔
SPOILER

Very good map, and I think this is ready for ranked. +1

Thanks for modding my beatmap and the star Rey-volution!

Updated with Karia's difficulty. It's up to date!

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,607 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-01-28T04:21:56+00:00

Karia's

AllStar's

Impressive maps, you two both have some great potential

take a star, good luck~

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-01-28T04:34:40+00:00

captin1 wrote:
Karia's
AllStar's

Impressive maps, you two both have some great potential

take a star, good luck~

That's amazing! thanks for test playing it and the star captin1!

Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2014-01-31T17:01:51+00:00

General
hitsound is a bit weak
more whistle plz :3
http://puu.sh/6EZLn.wav

Easy
01:03:185 (2,3) - avoid stack in easy,kinda hard to read for newbie
00:20:685 (1) - finish on reverse
00:23:185 (3) - ^
00:25:685 (1) - ^
00:28:185 (3) - ^
00:50:685 (1) - ^
00:25:060 (4) - add finish
00:29:747 (4) - finish on head
00:52:560 (3) - ^
00:53:810 (1) - ^
00:55:060 (3) - ^
01:24:122 (2) - ^
01:25:060 (3) - ^
01:26:310 (1) - ^
01:27:560 (3) - ^
listen to music carefully you will find these finishes,also check other diffs

Normal
00:00:685 (1) - whistle on tail
00:01:778 (3) - ^
00:02:560 (4) - whistle on head
00:03:185 (1) - remove the whistle on tail
seems to be more regular,
00:14:278 add a note here?
01:08:497 (3) - shorten it to 01:08:966 and add a note at 01:09:122 is better
01:27:247 (1) - remove it,and add a note here,than move 01:27:560 (2) - to 01:27:560 and add a reverse,more comfortable for me

Hard
a bit too many triplets for a 192 BPM hard,try to use less
nc is a mess,try what you used in easy and normal,1 nc every 1 or 2 long white tick
00:10:685 00:10:841
00:11:153 00:11:310
00:11:622 00:11:778
it's not good to use a slider to cover different sound of guita(?i'm not sure)
from 00:10:528,currect rhythm imo

SPOILER

ah 00:05:685 same from here
00:14:200 (5) - remove it
00:41:388 (4) - ^
00:47:638 (7) - ^
triplets start at white line is not suggested if you create 1/4 rhythm

Insane
control of spacing is not very good,which makes your map looks a bit mess
00:14:200 (8) - remove it
00:41:388 (4) - ^
00:47:638 (5) - ^
00:06:935 (7) - NC here,not 00:07:247 (1) -
00:19:747 (3) - NC
00:24:747 (8) - NC here not 00:24:903 (1) -
00:26:778 (2) - Nc here not 00:26:622 (1) -
add NC when it is downbeat is better,check other parts
00:56:153 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - if you follow the guitar here you shouldn't use sliders starting at red tick imo
00:55:685 (1) - shorten it to 00:55:841 and move 00:55:997 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - to 00:55:997
01:13:888 (6) - remove it
01:14:513 (2) - ^

Karia's Insane
00:39:903 (4) - this NC is confusing...people will hesitate,if it has a 1/2 empty
00:47:716 (1,2) - this overlap is a bit confusing, ctrl g than ctrl g 2,3 may be easier to read
and a more exticing flow will be made :3
01:00:060 (1,2,3,4) - increase the spacing a bit?
much better than your first rank

good luck owo/

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-01-31T23:14:22+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
General
hitsound is a bit weak
more whistle plz :3 alright
http://puu.sh/6EZLn.wav

Easy
01:03:185 (2,3) - avoid stack in easy,kinda hard to read for newbie Was pointed out by another mod but yeah, if this really is a problem then I'll change the position of it. fixed ✔
00:20:685 (1) - finish on reverse ✔
00:23:185 (3) - ^ ✔
00:25:685 (1) - ^ ✔
00:28:185 (3) - ^ ✔
00:50:685 (1) - ^ ✔
00:25:060 (4) - add finish ✔
00:29:747 (4) - finish on head ✔
00:52:560 (3) - ^ ✔
00:53:810 (1) - ^ ✔
00:55:060 (3) - ^ ✔
01:24:122 (2) - ^ ✔
01:25:060 (3) - ^ ✔
01:26:310 (1) - ^ ✔
01:27:560 (3) - ^ ✔
listen to music carefully you will find these finishes,also check other diffs Alright, understand what you mean by those finishes

Normal
00:00:685 (1) - whistle on tail ✔
00:01:778 (3) - ^ ✔
00:02:560 (4) - whistle on head ✔
00:03:185 (1) - remove the whistle on tail ✔
seems to be more regular,
00:14:278 add a note here? Sorry but it seems a bit awkward to have a note there when that part is all 1/1, regardless of it having a beat there.
01:08:497 (3) - shorten it to 01:08:966 and add a note at 01:09:122 is better ohhh. changed ✔
01:27:247 (1) - remove it,and add a note here,than move 01:27:560 (2) - to 01:27:560 and add a reverse,more comfortable for me hmmm sure. changed ✔

Hard
a bit too many triplets for a 192 BPM hard,try use less I'll tone it down a bit if that's the case✔
nc is a mess,try what you used in easy and normal,1 nc every 1 or 2 long white tick Alright, hopefully I did somewhat better than it was before... Orz✔
00:10:685 00:10:841 Did something happened here?
00:11:153 00:11:310^
00:11:622 00:11:778^
it's not good to use a slider to cover different sound of guita(?i'm not sure) Can't seem to see the image for some reason :/
from 00:10:528,currect rhythm imo
SPOILER
ah 00:05:685 same from here
00:14:200 (5) - remove it ✔
00:41:388 (4) - ^ ✔
00:47:638 (7) - ^ ✔
triplets start at white line is not suggested if you create 1/4 rhythm I see

Insane
control of spacing is not very good,which makes your map looks a bit mess well... If that's the case then I'll look deeper into this.
00:14:200 (8) - remove it ✔
00:41:388 (4) - ^ ✔
00:47:638 (5) - ^ Well I'm going to keep this one there because on the 1/4 I really wanted to capture the vocal part as well there when I played it back on 25%. If this really does become a big issue then I'll consider changing it but for now keep.
00:06:935 (7) - NC here,not 00:07:247 (1) - ✔
00:19:747 (3) - NC ✔
00:24:747 (8) - NC here not 00:24:903 (1) - ✔
00:26:778 (2) - Nc here not 00:26:622 (1) - ✔
add NC when it is downbeat is better,check other parts
00:56:153 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - if you flow the guitar here you shouldn't use sliders starting at red tick imo
00:55:685 (1) - shorten it to 00:55:841 and move 00:55:997 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - to 00:55:997 Did it in a different way
01:13:888 (6) - remove it ✔
01:14:513 (2) - ^ ✔

good luck owo/

Edit: nvm the image finally appears... I'll get back to it soon :/
Thanks for modding my beatmap Tsukuyomi!

787B

769 posts

Joined November 2010

787B 2014-02-01T21:20:25+00:00

Hello.
Mod requested on my modding queue.

General

Looks good.

Easy

00:05:685 (3) - Consider adding a NC, this is where the guitar comes and gives the solo for the song. Also if you consider the pattern 00:04:435 (1,2,3,4) - as a whole, it may be a bit harsh for an Easy. You could've began mapping at 00:00:685 - like the other diffs, but you chose instead a time between the solo and the intro, so it'd make a bit more sense if it starts either right on the solo or on the intro:
Example
00:42:247 (2) - You could move the last node a bit to the right, that way both sliders 00:42:247 (2,1) - won't be touching each other:
Example
00:58:185 (1) - Try to make it more wider, minding the start of 00:56:310 (2) -, this way you can improve the flow and the visuals:
Example
01:02:560 (1) - NC isn't highlighted, just click on the box to highlight it:
Example
01:03:185 (2) - NC because of kiai.
01:13:497 (3) - NC because of new phrase.

Normal

00:08:810 (3) - You should make its shape based on 00:06:935 (3) -, like the suggestion I did on Easy, you could improve the visuals and flow here:
Example
00:11:622 (3) - Kinda nazi, but just move a grid down, that way it'll match up with the ending of 00:10:997 (2) - .
00:26:310 (3) - It flows better if you turn it to the other side (just move the middle node to the left).
00:27:560 (1) - Try moving down a bit since it's kinda off the grid.
01:24:747 (4,1,2) - Add some variations here, the objects makes the cursor go just in one direction. You can place it down the circle, it can also improve the flow:
Example

Hard

00:19:747 (1,2) - This looks a bit unnecessary, based on the pattern. You could have emphasized the vocals a bit more here and also followed the drums, instead of just placing just two sliders. Here:
Example
This looks nice. Good job.

Insane

00:18:810 (2) Just like in Easy, the NC isn't highlighted. Do highlight it.
00:15:372 (7) - You could make the slider go down a bit more to the center, that way the upcoming spinner would be more smoother to play, plus it'd do a fancy overlap with 00:14:747 (3) - :
Example
00:53:810 (6,7) - I don't think this sounds good for the song, just do a simple 1/2 slider, it sounds much better than that:
Example

Harder diffs are solid, you could work a bit more on Easy and Normal by making the sliders with a better shape and working on the combo patterns.
I agree 100% with captin1, you guys have a lot of potential. There's some really awesome ideas for the flow here, just keep this going

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-02-02T04:47:40+00:00

Wolf wrote:
Hello.
Mod requested on my modding queue.

General
Looks good.
Easy
00:05:685 (3) - Consider adding a NC, this is where the guitar comes and gives the solo for the song. Also if you consider the pattern 00:04:435 (1,2,3,4) - as a whole, it may be a bit harsh for an Easy. You could've began mapping at 00:00:685 - like the other diffs, but you chose instead a time between the solo and the intro, so it'd make a bit more sense if it starts either right on the solo or on the intro: Did it in a different way, shorten the slider in the beginning and then added NC on circle note three. ✔
Example

00:42:247 (2) - You could move the last node a bit to the right, that way both sliders 00:42:247 (2,1) - won't be touching each other: Sure. fixed ✔
Example
00:58:185 (1) - Try to make it more wider, minding the start of 00:56:310 (2) -, this way you can improve the flow and the visuals:Did it in a different way but thanks for mentioning about that ✔
Example
01:02:560 (1) - NC isn't highlighted, just click on the box to highlight it: hmm still gave it a new combo due to the spinner but i'll activate it just in case. ✔
Example
01:03:185 (2) - NC because of kiai. ✔
01:13:497 (3) - NC because of new phrase. ✔
Normal
00:08:810 (3) - You should make its shape based on 00:06:935 (3) -, like the suggestion I did on Easy, you could improve the visuals and flow here: Sure, blanketed it ✔
Example
00:11:622 (3) - Kinda nazi, but just move a grid down, that way it'll match up with the ending of 00:10:997 (2) - . Did a few arrangements after blanketing the slider so this was placed in a different way. ✔
00:26:310 (3) - It flows better if you turn it to the other side (just move the middle node to the left). True. fixed ✔
00:27:560 (1) - Try moving down a bit since it's kinda off the grid. Wasn't really off the grid because of the points but since the size is huge I did some arrangement around with the other sliders as well and the slider you mention did hit the hp bar which I didn't like that. fixed ✔
01:24:747 (4,1,2) - Add some variations here, the objects makes the cursor go just in one direction. You can place it down the circle, it can also improve the flow:hmmm sure since it'll bring a bit of uniqueness into it ✔
Example

Hard
00:19:747 (1,2) - This looks a bit unnecessary, based on the pattern. You could have emphasized the vocals a bit more here and also followed the drums, instead of just placing just two sliders. Here: Yeah there's a better way to do that so i just replaced it with 1 circle note and a slider on 1/2s. fixed ✔
Example
This looks nice. Good job.
Insane
00:18:810 (2) Just like in Easy, the NC isn't highlighted. Do highlight it. Still strange how it's already NC because of the spinner though it indicates that is not... ✔
00:15:372 (7) - You could make the slider go down a bit more to the center, that way the upcoming spinner would be more smoother to play, plus it'd do a fancy overlap with 00:14:747 (3) - : hmmm sure ✔
Example
00:53:810 (6,7) - I don't think this sounds good for the song, just do a simple 1/2 slider, it sounds much better than that: Was to emphasize the vocal part of the 1/4 but I sorta agree with you on that. fixed ✔
Example
Harder diffs are solid, you could work a bit more on Easy and Normal by making the sliders with a better shape and working on the combo patterns.
I agree 100% with captin1, you guys have a lot of potential. There's some really awesome ideas for the flow here, just keep this going

Thanks for modding my beatmap and the star Wolf!

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2014-02-02T05:23:55+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
General
hitsound is a bit weak
more whistle plz :3
http://puu.sh/6EZLn.wav

Karia's Insane
00:39:903 (4) - this NC is confusing...people will hesitate,if it has a 1/2 empty fixed
00:47:716 (1,2) - this overlap is a bit confusing, ctrl g than ctrl g 2,3 may be easier to read
and a more exticing flow will be made :3 Sorry, I like current overlap.
01:00:060 (1,2,3,4) - increase the spacing a bit? Hmm..Then, isn't it too sudden? Current DS is better for me. Sorry
much better than your first rank ><

good luck owo/

Thanks for modding!
And some fixed. Sorry for late ;w;

SPOILER

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Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:Born to be (TV Size)
Artist:nano
ArtistUnicode:nano
Creator:AllStar12
Version:Karia's Insane
Source:魔法戦争
Tags:Mahou Sensou Magical Warfare ending Karia
BeatmapID:355136
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AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-02-02T05:35:00+00:00

Karia, you're back!~ \:D/

Alright, fully updated with Karia's difficulty. It's up to date!

RatedNC17

397 posts

Joined May 2010

RatedNC17 2014-02-02T20:08:31+00:00

hello~

[Easy]
00:04:747 (1,2,1,2) - this rhythm is a bit complicated for beginners. how about removing the second note at 00:05:372 and make the slider a bounce slider instead? like this?

SPOILER

00:10:997 (3) - how about take off your slider mid point and make it a tilt slider. works better imo
00:12:247 (1) - ^
pretty solid and nice diff keep it up

[Normal]
00:03:810 (2) - maybe remove the slider middle point and just make a tilt slider?
01:01:935 (3) - NC here
01:00:841 (1,2) - maybe add soft clap hitsounds on these. i don't know it sounds better to me since the claps are the closest thing to the guitars sound
Nice diff

[Hard]
01:00:841 (1,2,3) - maybe add the soft claps here too?
Nothing else

[Insane]
Real great and solid diff and overall great mapset

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-02-02T20:33:30+00:00

RatedNC17 wrote:
hello~

[Easy]
00:04:747 (1,2,1,2) - this rhythm is a bit complicated for beginners. how about removing the second note at 00:05:372 and make the slider a bounce slider instead? like this? Sure, removed the circle note and did a repeated slider from the first slider note. didn't wanted to curve the flow that much so I just rotated -30 for it and placed it where the circle note was that I deleted it. fixed
SPOILER
00:10:997 (3) - how about take off your slider mid point and make it a tilt slider. works better imo Well I was thinking of doing so when I first started mapping this difficulty but I do like to have curve for some bit of uniqueness into it (if that make sense). Sorry but i'll keep
00:12:247 (1) - ^ same for here, but if there are comments about suggesting to make it a straight slider then I'll consider on doing so.
pretty solid and nice diff keep it up

[Normal]
00:03:810 (2) - maybe remove the slider middle point and just make a tilt slider? hmmm I'll take that, sure. changed
01:01:935 (3) - NC here
01:00:841 (1,2) - maybe add soft clap hitsounds on these. i don't know it sounds better to me since the claps are the closest thing to the guitars sound Tested this and the other hitsounds as well and instead of claps, I just added custom whistles there instead. fixed
Nice diff

[Hard]
01:00:841 (1,2,3) - maybe add the soft claps here too? Same as what I did from the Normal difficulty
Nothing else

[Insane]
Real great and solid diff and overall great mapset Thanks ^^

Thanks for modding my beatmap RatedNC17!

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2014-02-03T00:00:34+00:00

I'll get to this soon probably >.>

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-02-03T05:59:05+00:00

Tari wrote:
I'll get to this soon probably >.>

If you do, I'll be happy Tari haha

bigfrog

1,002 posts

Joined October 2011

bigfrog 2014-02-05T13:11:29+00:00

hello,from queue c:

Easy
00:48:185 (2,3) - i think they can be blanket more neat
01:05:685 (1,2) - try this to get better flow?

Normal
00:15:060 (2,3) - maybe try this rhythm? i just think it's fit better :3

Karia's Insane
01:06:935 (1) - it can slide to 01:07:169 since vocal :]
01:11:310 (1,2,3) - the drum hitsound over there can be more loudly (70%?)
01:21:310 (1,2,3,4) - ^ or just ignore these question xD

Hard
01:04:278 (6,1,2) - i really think circle-slider-slider better :<

Insane
so sorry,i can't find any questions. orz

Nano is one of my favorite singer ></
nice song and map!! Good Luck~~

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2014-02-05T13:21:35+00:00

bigfrog wrote:
hello,from queue c:

Karia's Insane
01:06:935 (1) - it can slide to 01:07:169 since vocal :] About this slider's tail, I followed the beat because beat is stronger than vocal. Sorry
01:11:310 (1,2,3) - the drum hitsound over there can be more loudly (70%?) Drum is not loud at here and current volume is better than 70% I think. Sorry
01:21:310 (1,2,3,4) - ^ or just ignore these question xD ^

Nano is one of my favorite singer ></
nice song and map!! Good Luck~~

Thanks for modding~

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-02-05T17:34:38+00:00

Will update once I get back from my class.
Thanks for modding and the star bigfrog ^^

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-02-06T08:11:45+00:00

bigfrog wrote:
hello,from queue c:

Easy
00:48:185 (2,3) - i think they can be blanket more neat probably because of the grid placement after uploading but yeah. Fixed ✔
01:05:685 (1,2) - try this to get better flow?hmm sure but curve the slider downward just a bit.changed ✔

Normal
00:15:060 (2,3) - maybe try this rhythm? i just think it's fit better :3 hmmm not bad. Changed ✔

Hard
01:04:278 (6,1,2) - i really think circle-slider-slider better :< kinda understand what you meant by that so. Changed ✔

Insane
so sorry,i can't find any questions. orz haha it's alright ^^

Nano is one of my favorite singer ></ mine as well
nice song and map!! Good Luck~~

Thanks for modding my beatmap and the star bigfrog!

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2014-02-06T15:39:00+00:00

( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[Easy]
00:00:685 - Notes started on here for other diffs, try to make them same (at least same for Easy and Normal IMO)
00:56:310 (2,3) - This don't look like symmetry tho for constant pattern like 00:53:810 (1,2,3) -
01:02:560 (1) - Remove for easy?
01:05:997 (2) - If possible blanket this with 01:04:747 (3) -
01:10:685 (3) - Make this blanket with 01:09:747 (2) - or may look confusing for the pattern 01:09:747 (2,3,1,2) -
01:27:560 (3) - Ctrl+G for better flow

[Normal]
00:02:560 (4,1) - This pattern may look strange for me
00:18:810 (1,2) - Unstack them
00:20:685 (4) - NC here instead of 00:21:310 (1) -
^ OR 00:25:060 (1) - Remove NC for and NC at 00:26:310 (3) - cuz you're following vocal
Arrange some NCs, they look confusing and different for me

[Hard]
00:06:935 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:38:497 (2,3,4,5,6) - Can try further their distance gradually to follow the music maybe (optional)
00:40:060 (7) - I prefer not blocking the number of 00:40:685 (1) - but spacing it more
00:50:685 (1) - ^
01:20:685 (1) - This looks a bit close to 01:20:372 (4) - , put it further

[Insane]
Looks fine >.o)b

[Karia's Insane]
00:06:778 (6) - Swap timing with 00:06:310 (4) -
^ If you done that do Ctrl+G for 00:06:778 (6) -
00:11:778 (6) - Ctrl+G
00:33:966 - Note here, place at 00:34:278 (1) - or maybe right side of 00:33:810 (3) -
00:45:685 (1) - Stack the tail with 00:45:372 (3) -
00:50:216 (4) - Place at down middle of 00:50:685 (1) - like a blanket, with 1.9x DS

Looks ok for all diffs, good luck

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-02-07T06:36:37+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[Easy]
00:00:685 - Notes started on here for other diffs, try to make them same (at least same for Easy and Normal IMO) alright, i guess i'll add this part in ✔
00:56:310 (2,3) - This don't look like symmetry tho for constant pattern like 00:53:810 (1,2,3) - If you're talking about the position they were in then I fixed it, if you were talking about the way the sliders are then I think they're fine the way they are. ✔
01:02:560 (1) - Remove for easy? hmmmm alright ✔
01:05:997 (2) - If possible blanket this with 01:04:747 (3) - Alright, done that and re-positioned the next slider ✔
01:10:685 (3) - Make this blanket with 01:09:747 (2) - or may look confusing for the pattern 01:09:747 (2,3,1,2) - Did something differently around this part ✔
01:27:560 (3) - Ctrl+G for better flow alright. changed ✔

[Normal]
00:02:560 (4,1) - This pattern may look strange for me Even though it is, I highly doubt this can be that confusing to play so keep
00:18:810 (1,2) - Unstack them No I believe it's fine
00:20:685 (4) - NC here instead of 00:21:310 (1) - Fixed the NCs in this difficulty ✔
^ OR 00:25:060 (1) - Remove NC for and NC at 00:26:310 (3) - cuz you're following vocal
Arrange some NCs, they look confusing and different for me

[Hard]
00:06:935 (2) - Ctrl+G hmmm sure ✔
00:38:497 (2,3,4,5,6) - Can try further their distance gradually to follow the music maybe (optional) Even though that does sound right thing to do for that part of the music, I still want to keep the same flow of distance snap 1.10x
00:40:060 (7) - I prefer not blocking the number of 00:40:685 (1) - but spacing it more Alright, hope 1.10x shouldn't be that much of a problem ✔
00:50:685 (1) - ^same here as well ✔
01:20:685 (1) - This looks a bit close to 01:20:372 (4) - , put it further meant to be like that because of constant distance snap of 1.10x so keep

[Insane]
Looks fine >.o)b yay

Looks ok for all diffs, good luck

Thanks for modding my beatmap Rakuen!

Up to date along with Karia's Difficulty!

Last edited by AllStar12 2014-02-07T09:27:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2014-02-07T08:25:12+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[Karia's Insane]
00:06:778 (6) - Swap timing with 00:06:310 (4) - I prefer current pattern. Sorry
^ If you done that do Ctrl+G for 00:06:778 (6) -
00:11:778 (6) - Ctrl+G Same reason as above.
00:33:966 - Note here, place at 00:34:278 (1) - or maybe right side of 00:33:810 (3) - Huuu...Changed into slider. ;w;
00:45:685 (1) - Stack the tail with 00:45:372 (3) - Sorry. This is just my style.
00:50:216 (4) - Place at down middle of 00:50:685 (1) - like a blanket, with 1.9x DS Hmm..Current jump flow is better I think. Sorry

Looks ok for all diffs, good luck

Thanks for modding~

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 61778
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:Born to be (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Born to be (TV Size)
Artist:nano
ArtistUnicode:nano
Creator:AllStar12
Version:Karia's Insane
Source:魔法戦争
Tags:Mahou Sensou Magical Warfare ending Karia
BeatmapID:355136
BeatmapSetID:141505

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ivan

313 posts

Joined November 2013

ivan 2014-02-08T18:52:42+00:00

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AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-02-08T19:09:00+00:00

ivantaowns wrote:
good map, the rank letters don't change tho if u got an S. I had an A before and an S with higher points but it didn't change, but really good map

hmm that's strange... Don't think it's the map's issue I believe... I'll check up on it but yeah thanks for the compliment and playing it ivantaowns ^^

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2014-02-09T02:02:14+00:00

Hey :3 I finally got time for this map >.>

[Easy]

00:02:560 (3) - Clap sound really stands out here and doesn't merge with with the music, maybe you can remove the clap here? all whistles here is enough because there not that much instrument beats here.
00:05:997 (2,1) - Hmm maybe symmetry is a little off here, but judging by my personal experience of you, I'm not sure if this was intended. Anyways, I highly recommend you make it symmetrical.
00:10:997 (3) - Bad overlap around this time how about you move it to the same spot as 00:13:497 (3) - to fix that here? I think that would work better for this spot hmm and maybe fix the spacing.
00:15:685 (2) - Since your going for a more symmetry design here, I would recommend move the note down to form like this : http://puu.sh/6NOIK.jpg but your choice.
00:28:185 (3) - I highly say add a new combo here, so reappearing notes like 00:29:747 (4) - become a little bit more readable and to prevent some really long combo's (this combo seems short but last a long time in music)
00:52:247 (2,3) - Maybe you want to arrange the notes like this : since you like symmetry so much :> http://puu.sh/6P2LV.jpg well the slider 3 is your choice of design just needs to be symmetrical
00:59:435 (3) - Can you try to move this note, so the end of this slider is at the same start of 00:57:247 (3) - personally the symmetry doesn't look good when you have overlaps :c
01:18:185 (4) - Place at same spot as 01:14:747 (2) - please, and rearrange the other notes.

[Normal]

00:09:435 (4) - I'm sorry but this feels uncomfortable to play, because when you reverse the slider you have to move up again and I was kinda looking for a back-forth movement here, what you should really do is rotate I believe clockwise and aim for this : http://puu.sh/6P39R.jpg that way you have smoother circular movement.
00:39:591 - I am starting to hear a lot of clap beats here perhaps you want to add a note here and a clap? or probably revise the rhythm and put a slider here instead
01:00:841 (1,2) - For this part, the normal hits don't fit well, I suggest you change the sample to soft for these two notes and maybe decrease the volume by 5%
01:20:372 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps you can do a different pattern like change the slider shape rather than copy the same one from 00:40:997 (1,2,3,4,5) - can be little boring sometimes to play.
01:27:560 (5) - Maybe you can make this a separate combo? to add some spice and pizzazz

[Hard]

00:01:153 (2,3,4,5) - What a hard way to start the relaxing part , anyways maybe try something more simple like sliders rather than this? I know your trying to make a pentagon owo
00:08:810 (3) - Maybe you can make it more exciting by Ctrl+G this? (actually I find it easier owo when you Ctrl+G because you have to just hold and move your cursor slightly.
00:57:872 (4) - Same as above, I highly recommend you do the same there here
00:37:560 (2) - I recommend you increase spacing here, feels rather too easy if you put slider's that close (and a slider jump would fit here owo since you do them alot like this : http://puu.sh/6P4fQ.jpg
01:00:841 (1,2,3) - Same as normal, soft sampleset is better for these two notes.
01:17:716 (4) - Slider's like these should have jump's after them in my personal oppinion, that being said can you Ctrl+G this one also?
01:20:372 (4) - Use the next slider to form this slider, basically copy the next slider and flip it by 180 degrees here, that way you get the sense of a little jump here. 01:20:216 (3) - oh and might need to change position of this note too http://puu.sh/6P4DK.jpg

[Insane]

00:09:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really like how all these notes are closely squished together, maybe you can move them all farther so they don't touch but still keep the pattern you are going for?
00:14:122 (7) - I think a better place to stack it would be at the end of 00:13:653 (5) - maybe little better to read that way owo then that back and forth movement maybe try this : http://puu.sh/6P5rq.jpg ?
00:19:747 (1,2,3,4) - Uh, you should remove the two circles at the end and move the slider to the white tick and put triplets somewhere else http://puu.sh/6P5Bm.jpg find it musically off with current
00:54:747 (9,10) - These notes can be placed farther here and then a jump after 10 can be occurred because it's not much clicking and more hold, about this http://puu.sh/6P5Ki.jpg

[Karia's Insane]

00:02:403 - Add note and put it around here : http://puu.sh/6P6bi.jpg to match with 00:00:997 (2,3,4) - so there is back and forth movement in here? and there?
00:12:403 (3) - Maybe a bit too much upward movement, better to place around http://puu.sh/6P6pm.jpg is much better here, and its match spacing of 00:07:403 (3) - and maybe you can move 00:07:403 (3) - to http://puu.sh/6P6n5.jpg would be better.
00:15:685 (5) - Maybe add new combo here?
00:21:622 (5) - Place at here : for better flow and a nice jump to next note : http://puu.sh/6P6vA.jpg
00:26:622 (5) - If you do above, you must place this note like this : http://puu.sh/6P6yq.jpg
00:25:372 (5) - Wouldn't hurt to place them a little farther I guess : http://puu.sh/6P6Es.jpg like that.
00:38:185 (1) - I think finish for these notes would be better.
00:33:185 (1) - Use Finish instead of whistle for the start.
00:47:403 (3,4,1) - The jump to 1 is little major and harsh, how about you use triangular jump pattern here intead like : http://puu.sh/6P6Ro.jpg for less harsh jump?
01:18:028 (6) - Little hard to read maybe, should place them like this : http://puu.sh/6P6ZW.jpg would be better.

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2014-02-09T05:14:52+00:00

Tari wrote:
Hey :3 I finally got time for this map >.>

[Karia's Insane]

00:02:403 - Add note and put it around here : http://puu.sh/6P6bi.jpg to match with 00:00:997 (2,3,4) - so there is back and forth movement in here? and there? But here is not fit with note I think and I want blank here..Sorry
00:12:403 (3) - Maybe a bit too much upward movement, better to place around http://puu.sh/6P6pm.jpg is much better here, and its match spacing of 00:07:403 (3) - and maybe you can move 00:07:403 (3) - to http://puu.sh/6P6n5.jpg would be better. ok, fixed
00:15:685 (5) - Maybe add new combo here? Keep current combo is better I think, Sorry
00:21:622 (5) - Place at here : for better flow and a nice jump to next note : http://puu.sh/6P6vA.jpg fixed
00:26:622 (5) - If you do above, you must place this note like this : http://puu.sh/6P6yq.jpg fixed on myself
00:25:372 (5) - Wouldn't hurt to place them a little farther I guess : http://puu.sh/6P6Es.jpg like that. Keep about this. Sorry
00:38:185 (1) - I think finish for these notes would be better. Clap is better to me. Sorry
00:33:185 (1) - Use Finish instead of whistle for the start. fixed ;w;
00:47:403 (3,4,1) - The jump to 1 is little major and harsh, how about you use triangular jump pattern here intead like : http://puu.sh/6P6Ro.jpg for less harsh jump? fixed on myself
01:18:028 (6) - Little hard to read maybe, should place them like this : http://puu.sh/6P6ZW.jpg would be better. I like current pattern and current flow is better to me. Sorry

Thanks for modding~

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AllStar12

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AllStar12 2014-02-09T10:47:50+00:00

Tari wrote:
Hey :3 I finally got time for this map >.>

[Easy]

00:02:560 (3) - Clap sound really stands out here and doesn't merge with with the music, maybe you can remove the clap here? all whistles here is enough because there not that much instrument beats here. That was not intended, I must of pressed the wrong key for whistle by accident. fixed ✔
00:05:997 (2,1) - Hmm maybe symmetry is a little off here, but judging by my personal experience of you, I'm not sure if this was intended. Anyways, I highly recommend you make it symmetrical. Fixed that part a bit ✔
00:10:997 (3) - Bad overlap around this time how about you move it to the same spot as 00:13:497 (3) - to fix that here? I think that would work better for this spot hmm and maybe fix the spacing. Sure, fixed ✔
00:15:685 (2) - Since your going for a more symmetry design here, I would recommend move the note down to form like this : http://puu.sh/6NOIK.jpg but your choice. hmm I would do it but can't since it'll be 1.06x distance snap, not sure if it's a big deal but not taking that chance in a easy difficulty so I'll just keep it.
00:28:185 (3) - I highly say add a new combo here, so reappearing notes like 00:29:747 (4) - become a little bit more readable and to prevent some really long combo's (this combo seems short but last a long time in music) Alright, fixed ✔
00:52:247 (2,3) - Maybe you want to arrange the notes like this : since you like symmetry so much :> http://puu.sh/6P2LV.jpg well the slider 3 is your choice of design just needs to be symmetrical ohh, I'll give it a try, changed ✔
00:59:435 (3) - Can you try to move this note, so the end of this slider is at the same start of 00:57:247 (3) - personally the symmetry doesn't look good when you have overlaps :c Oh this part, yeah it was like that because it was to make the same curve as the previous slider that is symmetrical but the end didn't look that good so I'll fix it. ✔
01:18:185 (4) - Place at same spot as 01:14:747 (2) - please, and rearrange the other notes. hmmm alright ✔
[Normal]

00:09:435 (4) - I'm sorry but this feels uncomfortable to play, because when you reverse the slider you have to move up again and I was kinda looking for a back-forth movement here, what you should really do is rotate I believe clockwise and aim for this : http://puu.sh/6P39R.jpg that way you have smoother circular movement. Alright, fixed ✔
00:39:591 - I am starting to hear a lot of clap beats here perhaps you want to add a note here and a clap? or probably revise the rhythm and put a slider here instead Hmm alright, since it also sounds a bit iffy for me to have claps like that in normal (would sound better if it was 1/2 sliders on that part) I'll just have the claps like I had from Easy difficulty. changed ✔
01:00:841 (1,2) - For this part, the normal hits don't fit well, I suggest you change the sample to soft for these two notes and maybe decrease the volume by 5%Hmm I really like how it sounds like because the guitar is loud as well here and I personally don't see it fitting with soft, maybe there is a better custom hitsound out there that can mix well with this part but as of now I just have to go with the best one so far imo, however, I did lower it down to 40% ✔
01:20:372 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps you can do a different pattern like change the slider shape rather than copy the same one from 00:40:997 (1,2,3,4,5) - can be little boring sometimes to play. Alright, did it differently here, changed ✔
01:27:560 (5) - Maybe you can make this a separate combo? to add some spice and pizzazz Sure ✔
[Hard]

00:01:153 (2,3,4,5) - What a hard way to start the relaxing part , anyways maybe try something more simple like sliders rather than this? I know your trying to make a pentagon owo See what you mean by there so I'll add one slider replacing 3 and 4. ✔
00:08:810 (3) - Maybe you can make it more exciting by Ctrl+G this? (actually I find it easier owo when you Ctrl+G because you have to just hold and move your cursor slightly. hmmm sure, changed ✔
00:57:872 (4) - Same as above, I highly recommend you do the same there here That's what I liked and had it originally but one of the mod had mentioned this and but still liked the way I had it originally, changed ✔
00:37:560 (2) - I recommend you increase spacing here, feels rather too easy if you put slider's that close (and a slider jump would fit here owo since you do them alot like this : http://puu.sh/6P4fQ.jpg hmmm I'll set the distance to 1.50x then ✔
01:00:841 (1,2,3) - Same as normal, soft sampleset is better for these two notes.Set them as 40% as well ✔
01:17:716 (4) - Slider's like these should have jump's after them in my personal oppinion, that being said can you Ctrl+G this one also? ohh I like that, change ✔
01:20:372 (4) - Use the next slider to form this slider, basically copy the next slider and flip it by 180 degrees here, that way you get the sense of a little jump here. 01:20:216 (3) - oh and might need to change position of this note too http://puu.sh/6P4DK.jpg Alright, made a 1.50x between the sliders ✔
[Insane]

00:09:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really like how all these notes are closely squished together, maybe you can move them all farther so they don't touch but still keep the pattern you are going for? Alright, got comments about this part, reason was it was suppose to go along with the music but either way works fine, and I'll make this neater. fixed ✔
00:14:122 (7) - I think a better place to stack it would be at the end of 00:13:653 (5) - maybe little better to read that way owo then that back and forth movement maybe try this : http://puu.sh/6P5rq.jpg ? Understandable and I like the bit of more jump for it as well, fixed ✔
00:19:747 (1,2,3,4) - Uh, you should remove the two circles at the end and move the slider to the white tick and put triplets somewhere else http://puu.sh/6P5Bm.jpg find it musically off with current Did this differently by swapping places for note 4 and 5 with some rearrangements on that part ✔
00:54:747 (9,10) - These notes can be placed farther here and then a jump after 10 can be occurred because it's not much clicking and more hold, about this http://puu.sh/6P5Ki.jpg same placement but some rearrangements around there as well ✔

Thanks for modding and carefully looking through my beatmap Tari!

Everything should be up to date along with Karia's difficulty!

HelloSCV

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Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2014-02-10T13:57:58+00:00

no kds

[General]

according to the Ranking Criteria, you cannot use slidertick and sliderslide as silence at the same time, you need to delete one of them
add WEST GROUND on tags, who composed this song, found it on Wiki

[Easy]

00:20:060 - consider adding a note here, feels too empty imo
00:28:185 (1) - delete NC for consisetency

[Normal]

00:12:560 (1,2) - swap NC for consistency

[Karia's Insane]

00:44:591 - 여기서 갑자기 공백이 발생하니 좀 어색한것같기도 한데 노트 넣는거 고려해보세요, 하지만 저도 이건좀 애매해서 꼭 안고치셔도 돼요 ㅋㅋ

[Hard]

00:46:544 (4) - well i think you'd better to delete this note since there isn't any reasonable sound for triplet

[Insane]

00:05:060 (6) - how about adding NC here to emphasize this section and rhythm hears bit changed
00:52:716 (1,4) - swap NC for consistency

call me back

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2014-02-10T14:14:11+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
no kds

[Karia's Insane]
00:44:591 - 여기서 갑자기 공백이 발생하니 좀 어색한것같기도 한데 노트 넣는거 고려해보세요, 하지만 저도 이건좀 애매해서 꼭 안고치셔도 돼요 ㅋㅋ 개인적으로 여긴 노트가 별로 어울리진 않는것 같아요. 슬라 두개도 괜찮을것 같은데 전 지금이 더 좋네요..ㅎ
call me back

Thanks for modding~

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-02-10T14:27:23+00:00

Dang.. Won't be able to fix them till I get back at 7 Orz

AllStar12

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Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-02-11T01:10:00+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
no kds

[General]
according to the Ranking Criteria, you cannot use slidertick and sliderslide as silence at the same time, you need to delete one of them Totally forgot about deleting the normal-slidertick. fixed ✔
add WEST GROUND on tags, who composed this song, found it on Wiki Alright, added ✔
[Easy]
00:20:060 - consider adding a note here, feels too empty imo Done ✔
00:28:185 (1) - delete NC for consisetency Sure, fixed ✔
[Normal]
00:12:560 (1,2) - swap NC for consistency Okay, fixed ✔
[Hard]
00:46:544 (4) - well i think you'd better to delete this note since there isn't any reasonable sound for triplet See what you mean by that so I done that and had to move some notes a bit, believe it should be fine as of now. fixed ✔
[Insane]
00:05:060 (6) - how about adding NC here to emphasize this section and rhythm hears bit changed Alright ✔
00:52:716 (1,4) - swap NC for consistency Done ✔
call me back

Thanks for the check up my beatmap again HelloSCV!

Everything should be up to date along with Karia's difficulty!

HelloSCV

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Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2014-02-11T13:03:46+00:00

all of diffs are good now, take this! bubbled

AllStar12

488 posts

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Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-02-11T13:16:10+00:00

\:D/ yay, bubbled! Thanks HelloSCV! ^ ^

captin1

osu! Alumni

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captin1 2014-02-12T03:20:49+00:00

go~ where is the sexy scv drawing

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

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AllStar12 2014-02-12T06:22:10+00:00

captin1 wrote:
go~ where is the sexy scv drawing

Beige

Elite Mapper

2,191 posts

Joined February 2011

Beige 2014-02-12T17:03:49+00:00

Nano >w<!

Go Go~

Catalyster

Catalyster 2014-02-18T09:27:58+00:00

nice maps thanks its mahou sensou ED >///<

AllStar12

488 posts

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AllStar12 2014-02-18T22:36:40+00:00

kazuya-sama wrote:
nice maps thanks its mahou sensou ED >///<

Thanks, I hope you enjoyed the beatmap ^^

Synchrostar

866 posts

Joined July 2010

Synchrostar 2014-02-21T01:03:57+00:00

Insane so much fun to play~
solid piece of work

AllStar12

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AllStar12 2014-02-21T01:50:53+00:00

Synchrostar wrote:
Insane so much fun to play~
solid piece of work

Why thanks Synchrostar, hope you enjoyed playing it very much! ^ ^

alacat

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Joined May 2011

alacat 2014-02-23T14:43:59+00:00

hi AllStar12 and karia ~

[General]

Artist : ナノ
Please look this img :
img
also check Ranked maps
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/95533, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/60732 and https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122327
i thought you forgot to add katakana name :p

[Easy]

01:10:685 (3) - i feel this note is kind of empty. because you added a finish sound at previous part 01:05:685 (1) - and 01:08:185 (4) - . so you should consider adding it here as well.
01:27:560 (3) - i prefer to make a downward slider here. so please try to use ctrl + g command to this slider. it would flow more naturally imo.

[Normal]

00:24:903 (5) - it's better to remove this note for this difficulty. so you should put 1/1 rhythm same as next part 00:27:403 - .
01:10:997 (7) - Flow suggestion: how about moving this note up for the next slider ?

[Karia's Insane]

00:08:185 (1) - missing a finish. Please check your next part 00:13:185 (1) -

That's all for now ~ Insane diffs are so cool *-* <3
Let me know whenever you're ready

AllStar12

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AllStar12 2014-02-23T15:54:26+00:00

alacat wrote:
hi AllStar12 and karia ~

[General]
Artist : ナノ Okay now I understand why Underflow mentioned about this (sorry underflow Orz). fixed! ✔
Please look this img :
img
also check Ranked maps
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/95533, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/60732 and https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122327
i thought you forgot to add katakana name :p
[Easy]
01:10:685 (3) - i feel this note is kind of empty. because you added a finish sound at previous part 01:05:685 (1) - and 01:08:185 (4) - . so you should consider adding it here as well. Alright, fixed! ✔
01:27:560 (3) - i prefer to make a downward slider here. so please try to use ctrl + g command to this slider. it would flow more naturally imo.Alright I see what you mean by there. Changed! ✔
[Normal]
00:24:903 (5) - it's better to remove this note for this difficulty. so you should put 1/1 rhythm same as next part 00:27:403 - . Alright. fixed! ✔
01:10:997 (7) - Flow suggestion: how about moving this note up for the next slider ? ohhh that's actually better yup. fixed! ✔
That's all for now ~ Insane diffs are so cool *-* <3 Thanks
Let me know whenever you're ready

Thanks for modding and carefully looking through my beatmap alacat!

~~Not sure if I should or shouldn't go through Karia's difficulty. I'll just wait till Karia's post I guess and will submit everything together.~~

nvm, Karia just posted in a sec haha.

Everything should be up to date along with Karia's difficulty!

Last edited by AllStar12 2014-02-23T15:59:51+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2014-02-23T15:56:01+00:00

fixed~ Thanks for modding!

SPOILER

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alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2014-02-24T00:09:50+00:00

Ranked!

Congratulations on your 1st ranked

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-02-24T00:14:06+00:00

\:D/ thanks alacat for rank!

Special thanks to Karia for the Insane Difficulty!

Thanks to all the people that supported me to get this beatmap ranked!

Hope to do better in the future!

LQA20Ans

1,344 posts

Joined November 2011

LQA20Ans 2014-02-24T00:37:23+00:00

Congratulation!

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2014-02-24T00:41:27+00:00

I want more more and more nano maps <3

Beige

Elite Mapper

2,191 posts

Joined February 2011

Beige 2014-02-24T00:56:02+00:00

Congratz 1st ranked!!! :3

HabiHolic

5,406 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-02-24T01:03:55+00:00

Gratz!!

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,485 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-02-24T01:03:56+00:00

nice! 魔法戦争<3

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-02-24T01:18:37+00:00

i proud with this map ranked fastly than i expected

gratz, you deserve it

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2014-02-24T01:41:29+00:00

gratz \:D/

Selisi

721 posts

Joined October 2012

Selisi 2014-02-24T02:57:45+00:00

nice map~\:D/

Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2014-02-24T09:41:24+00:00

gratz!❤

Groumiezi

Groumiezi 2014-02-24T12:38:52+00:00

gratz. late orz \:3/

KSHR

osu! Alumni

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-02-24T12:59:32+00:00

SPOILER

全てを奪われる運命なら
何を信じて生きていくんだ
Ask yourself the way
There's nothing to lose or die for!

/me like this the most of Nano's songs~
Congratulation on your 1st ranked, anyway!

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2014-02-24T14:14:04+00:00

sorry :/

you can't use silence both slider ticks and slider slides together

Please remove either one !

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-02-24T14:20:52+00:00

As what alacat has said so I removed the sliderticks from the Normal custom 1 in the folder. Sorry for the inconvenience everyone will be ranked soon ><

This is my fault indeed, was removed multiple times and appears out of nowhere.. Orz

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2014-02-24T14:25:29+00:00

Re~Rank!

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

AllStar12 2014-02-24T14:27:19+00:00

\:D/ again, sorry for the inconvenience! ><