1. Easy (2.67 stars, 98 notes)
2. Hard (4.97 stars, 303 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 362 notes)
4. Karia's Insane (4.9 stars, 362 notes)
5. Normal (4.46 stars, 163 notes)

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Winek wrote:

Hello! From mod queue!
Btw your map is almost perfect.

[Easy]
You should really avoid skipping Downbeats. Orelse, just change the offset Hmm I'll consider that
00:42:666 (1,2,3) - I don't think that whistle fits well here. Fixed✔
01:23:174 (1) - Use DS, or it can be confusing. hmmm I'll consider this later in the future. Reason is that I believe that the player(who is probably a beginner) has enough time to react for that part and not be confused
Really well-made.

[Normal]
00:24:892 (4) - Slider shoud start at 00:25:049. The end is correct. Fixed✔
00:27:549 (1) - Remove NC Don't quite understand the removal here since I'm trying to keep it a 3~5 (mostly every 4) for combos
Pretty good

[Hard]
I don't see anything wrong, but avoid 00:47:549 (6,7,8) - these for Hard.Pretty sure I know what you mean by that but I believe it should be fine as it is since when it's play it on a 25% playback rate, it creates that vocal part for it to have it like that

[Insane]
00:03:174 (1,2,3) - I think that's overmapping. I see what you mean, before I had a different mp3 quality that made it sound like it needed a triplet, fixed✔
See nothing else, sorry

Hopes i helped you

Dariano wrote:

Almost perfect Indeed.

[General]

Karia's Insane doesn't have letterbox in breaks on. Song setup > Design > Letterbox during breaks. Noticed this before this mod so sorry Karia if I went through the song setup, said it on AIMod for me and wanted to fix it for you =3=

[Easy]

00:04:424 (1) - Probably not rankeable, there is not enough time between spinner and the next note. I recommend this http://puu.sh/6kyQw.jpg
starting spinner in 00:03:174 (1) - . True was just waiting for someone to point this out soon but still I should of changed even though I knew it would be weird to have it like this. fixed! ✔
00:14:737 (3) - This is not well done, it makes the next circle look farther, grab this slider 00:13:486 (2) - and press CTRL + J and then CTRL + G to fix it. Hmmm weird I was for sure I done that well with the slider but the distance snap, I didn't realize. fixed!✔
01:00:361 (3) - I think this would look better if it were at X:312 Y:136 Yes. Was trying to form that triangle so that it would be equal distance snap for that part but it seem quite weird to have it overlap as well. fixed!✔

[Normal]

00:47:236 (5) - This is maybe too high and interferes with the hp bar. Indeed it hit my hp bar as well. fixed!✔

[Hard]

01:00:830 (1) - NC. Fixed✔
01:13:877 (4) - This feels overmapped (at least for me) hmmm I can see what you mean. Before making this difficulty I had a low quality mp3 that made me thought it needed that note. fixed! ✔

[Insane]

00:15:752 (1) - I think it should start in the red tick, 1/4 distance for a spinner is harsh. hmm I'll consider it. Reason is because since it's a insane difficulty and it after finishing a slider there really isn't any trouble to get ready for the player to spin.
01:01:924 (1) - Remove NC and add it here 01:03:174 (1) - I think it would look better. Hmm sure.fixed!✔

Karia's Insane looks good!

It looks like you just uploaded something right now, but hopelly some of these will help.

Hope it gets ranked soon~

1. uncheck widescreen sup
2. uncheck letterbox
3. change name soft-sliderslide →　normal-sliderslide
4. add normal-sliderslide2(silence sound)
5. add normal-slidertick2(silence sound)

SPOILER

00:30:205 (1,2,3) - how about this pattern?

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Pandiar wrote:

from my Q XD
sorry to late

[Karia's Insane]
00:06:611 (5) - i think reverse slider not fit.i want to your better flow pattern changed it into note-slider.

SPOILER

00:08:174 (1) - about x444 y200? Sorry.
00:11:611 (5) - same as 00:06:611 (5) Same as above.
00:44:580 (5) - add note about x304 y224? Sorry.


good luck

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Born to Be.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61767
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Born to be (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Born to be (TV Size)
Artist:nano
ArtistUnicode:nano
Creator:AllStar12
Version:Karia's Insane
Source:魔法戦争
Tags:Mahou Sensou Magical Warfare ending Karia
BeatmapID:355136
BeatmapSetID:141505

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.82
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Xinely wrote:

Hi AllStar12 ~
As requested by Karia on my Queue

Guide

Bold = Unrankable/must be fixed
Red = consider to fix it
Black = Suggestion
Blue = Advice/Solution

• 
  Karia

1. 00:04:814 (3,5) - overmapping. remove them fixed
2. 00:15:752 (1) - same as Hard. but remove the whistle too fixed
3. 00:25:361 (5) - nazi but the impact of flow is high imo. i suggest to flip this slider to have better flow Hmm..KEEP
4. 00:29:892 (3,4,1) - hmm this triplet and anti jump after it is really hard to read and become trap for player. if you want to keep the triplet,give the normal distance between 00:30:049 (1,2) - these circles I really want to keep 0.3 spacing..;w;
5. 00:47:705 (5) - a far jump here. i really suggest to NC this since a kinda hard to read imo >< fixed
6. 00:48:174 (1,2,3) - how about change the pattern, i feel a forced flow in 00:48:174 (1,2) - . http://puu.sh/6mSlv.jpg try this instead? Hmm..then, 00:49:111 (4,5,1) - this flow is not good I think..
7. 01:01:924 (1) - extend the slider to 01:02:392 - . the vocal is end at red tick and no any sound for blue tick fixed
8. 01:21:767 (4) - damn too hard lol , maybe ctrl+G it to make easier? i can't catch it really lol I'll keep this! lol
9. 01:28:017 (4) - same as Normal fixed

oh sorry quick mod for Insane since i need go to an event. but flows are really good. love it <3
Good Luck

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132,165,73174,6,0,L|30:170,1,91,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,303,73486,2,0,L|170:298,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,204,73799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,340,73955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,128,74111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,262,74267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,40,74424,6,0,P|232:36|184:44,1,91
228,172,74736,2,0,P|276:176|324:168,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,132,75049,1,0,0:0:0:0:
391,313,75205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,277,75361,2,0,L|216:165,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,75674,5,4,0:0:0:0:
124,256,75830,2,0,P|76:264|24:252,1,91,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,120,76142,2,0,P|100:112|152:124,1,91
0,184,76455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,136,76611,2,0,L|152:40,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,212,76924,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,80,77080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,232,77236,2,0,L|444:322,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,180,77549,2,0,L|336:90,1,91,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,268,77861,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,80,78017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,268,78174,6,0,P|224:304|136:232,1,182,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,124,78642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,52,78799,2,0,P|296:52|348:72,1,91
232,152,79111,2,0,P|188:152|136:132,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,164,79424,5,0,0:0:0:0:
184,280,79580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,108,79736,2,0,L|128:16,1,91,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,176,80049,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,324,80205,2,0,P|68:332|16:324,1,91,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,192,80517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,224,80674,6,0,L|132:328,1,91,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,360,80986,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,200,81142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,56,81299,6,0,L|312:60,1,45.5
304,160,81455,2,0,L|371:125,1,45.5
412,220,81611,2,0,L|453:156,1,45.5
435,78,81767,2,0,L|425:2,1,45.5
456,164,81924,6,0,L|452:316,1,136.5,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,300,82549,1,2,0:2:0:0:
452,300,82705,1,2,0:2:0:0:
452,300,83174,6,0,P|401:342|334:325,1,136.500005207062,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,236,83642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,222,83720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,208,83799,2,0,L|246:136,1,68.250002603531,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,44,84111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,132,84267,6,0,L|412:128,1,136.500005207062
472,60,84736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
499,159,84892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
502,172,84970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
505,185,85049,2,0,L|502:266,1,68.250002603531,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,356,85361,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,260,85517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,332,85674,6,0,P|132:324|88:256,1,136.500005207062,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,138,86142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
111,124,86220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,112,86299,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,16,86455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,86611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,32,86767,6,0,B|428:28|428:28|432:79|485:104,1,136.500005207062
510,24,87236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,176,87392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,189,87470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,202,87549,5,8,0:0:0:0:
384,300,87705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,98,87861,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,228,88017,1,12,0:0:0:0:

Pandiar wrote:

from my Q XD
sorry to late It's okay ^ ^

[General]

1. uncheck widescreen sup✔
2. uncheck letterbox✔
3. change name soft-sliderslide →　normal-sliderslide✔
4. add normal-sliderslide2(silence sound)✔
5. add normal-slidertick2(silence sound)✔

[Insane]
remove whistle. alright :/✔
such as hitsound of Karia's Insane is better imo

00:01:767 (5) - how about x144 y132? re-positioned but in a different coordinates around there✔
00:02:705 (7) - stack x144 y132? Used the same coordinates for slider 5's head✔
00:05:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - I think there is too same circle pattern.make more jump? Agree on making different jumps instead of repeating the position over again.fixed✔
00:13:017 (5) - x272 y212? re-positioned where the circle note 1 is instead but also increased slider note 3's x axis.✔

SPOILER

00:30:205 (1,2,3) - how about this pattern? did make a triangle with 2.30x distance snap but re-positioned be different than your. It's shaped around the triplets as the center✔

00:32:236 (1) - bend a little for better flow,like this hmmm sure.fixed✔

SPOILER

00:43:017 (5) - stack beginning of 00:44:111 (1) alright.fixed✔
00:45:517 (4) - i think note is better Again, the low quality mp3 I had made me think there was a beat there. fixed✔
01:06:455 (2,3,4) - make triangle? sure.fixed✔

SPOILER

[Karia's Insane]
00:06:611 (5) - i think reverse slider not fit.i want to your better flow pattern

SPOILER

00:08:174 (1) - about x444 y200?
00:11:611 (5) - same as 00:06:611 (5)
00:44:580 (5) - add note about x304 y224?


[Hard]
00:04:736 (6) - i think this rhythm is correct I'll think about it, reason why is because I believe it would be harder (my perspective) than just having the original. sorry

SPOILER

00:19:736 (1) - how about this? seems short for me but playing it back sounds right.fixed✔

SPOILER

01:20:986 (6,7,8) - too hard part I could see why, removed the slider, extended the repeater by 1/4 more and added a circle note on next slider note. fixed✔


[Normal]
00:09:424 (1,2) - make blanket hmmm alright✔


[Easy]
00:04:424 (1) - remove because it is too hard for beginner hhmm sure it's too short to do the spinner but have to add a note at 00:05:674 after doing so. ✔


good luck

Xinely wrote:

Hi AllStar12 ~
As requested by Karia on my Queue

Guide

Bold = Unrankable/must be fixed
Red = consider to fix it
Black = Suggestion
Blue = Advice/Solution

• 
  General

1. Size of BG is unrankable. try looking it 800x600 or 1024x768 or 1366x768✔

• 
  Easy

1. 00:04:424 (1) - have two issues here, first, spin is too fast, really hard to get 300. Second is 00:05:674 - you're skip the important sound (cymbal) here. i suggest to remove the spin and change it like http://puu.sh/6mvxv.jpg Was mentioned by Pandiar as well, was planning on changing yup.fixed✔
2. 00:08:174 (3) - flow could be better if you doing a natural flow here. try move this circle to 404,236 ? fixed✔
3. 00:15:674 (4) - nazi, try to move 120,160? flow better and easier to catch by newbie Sure, fixed.✔
4. 00:15:830 (1) - i heard a cymbal sound (but not really loud lol) use finish with 55% or 60%? 55% since it's pretty silent for a 60.✔
5. 00:18:799 - i suggest to add note here since you're following drum sound in this diff. ✔
6. 00:19:424 - same as above ✔
7. 00:23:174 (4) - no need finish on head since there is no any cymbal sound ✔
8. 00:25:674 (2) - aa imo this slider too curving and flow isn't well as previous, try this slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254409 instead? Well I deleted the previous slider and just added a note but yes did readjusted the curving.fixed✔
9. 00:28:174 (4) - make it more symmetric? for better visual https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254414 Sorry, going to keep it the same
   
   if you need the code

   472,160,28174,2,0,B|508:216|440:264|484:324,2,160

10. 00:38:174 (3) - is the whistle's body sound intentional? it's too noisy for hear and not really fit with the music. i suggest to delete the whistle's body Pandiar mentioned about this so I decided to remove them all and will decide to whether or not place whistles on notes (Most likely not going to add it though..)✔
11. 00:40:049 (1) - remove the whistle to keep consistency with 00:35:674 (4) - ? whistle not really fit to hear imo ✔
12. 00:42:236 (3,1) - the overlap make newbie confuse imo. need to change >_< Did like how it is but alright I'll change it.✔
13. 00:45:674 (3) - inconsistency 1,07x and 1,06x spacing. fix it with use 1,0x insteadWow surprised that the spacing was not consistent here. fixed✔
14. 00:48:174 (2) - remove the whistle. reason same as 00:40:049 (1) - ✔
15. 00:52:236 (2) - move to 192,188 for natural flow. easier to follow the flow imo
16. 00:56:299 (2,3) - just minor issue, the (1) and (3) is touched together (overlap) http://puu.sh/6mLYp.jpg. move the 00:56:299 (2,3) - (click all) to 200,228 (if you fixed this, fix the spacing after this pattern) ✔
17. 01:00:049 (2,3) - minor again but flow could be better if you do a natural flow here. example : http://puu.sh/6mM1Y.jpg ✔
18. 01:00:674 (1) - kinda disagree with this spin since you're skip the vocal in 01:01:924 - . try to change the spin become like http://puu.sh/6mM4k.jpg ? ✔
19. 01:27:549 (3) - ctrl+G it for better flow ✔
20. 01:27:549 (3) - how about add finish on tail? a little bit but i hear the cymbal ✔

• 
  Normal

1. 00:00:674 (1) - hmm add whistle on tail to follow the guitar? also heard too empty w/o hitsound imo ✔
2. 00:04:267 (3) - add whistle on tail since the sound increasing also the guitar sound is appear ✔
3. 00:05:986 (2) - nazi thing, rotate 15 degree and put at 348,232 to have a similar flow with 00:06:924 (3) - ?✔
4. 00:13:799 (2,3) - make them symmetrical for better visual I say it's fine :S
5. 00:15:830 (1) - same as Easy ✔
6. 00:18:799 - and 00:19:424 - both same as Easy too ✔
7. 00:20:049 (2,3) -i guess make them become one slider to emphasize the vocal I'll keep it the way it is, reason why is because this part I'm mainly going for the instrumental part, not really emphasizing a whole lot on the vocal. Sorry
8. 00:21:299 (1,2,3) -even 1/2 space, the distance should be consistency with others. change the distance to 1,0x instead ✔
9. 00:25:049 (4) - flow could be better, the previous one seems too forced for play imo >< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254862 Did it in your way but added a note before that. Reason why I added a note is because I'm going for the instrumental parts. ✔
10. 00:30:205 (3) - ups, 2 repeats for 1/2 slider is hard to read by newbie/player imo. reduce one repeat here and start the slider to 00:30:361 - for better rhythm Had to re-position previous note for doing this but alright. ✔
11. 00:30:986 (1,2) - unstack please, newbie is confuse with stack pattern. ✔
12. 00:32:236 (4) - nazi, try more to curve this slider to have similar flow with 00:33:174 (1) - .http://puu.sh/6mMRp.jpg ✔
13. 00:34:424 (3) - inconsistency spacing (0,93x) here. should be 1,0x
14. 00:39:424 (3) - change this become like http://puu.sh/6mMVr.jpg to following vocal properly? easier to follow imo ✔
15. 00:40:049 (4) - same as Easy ✔
16. 00:44:736 (5) - nazi, flow could be better if you do a opposite flow than your flow. i mean just move the tail to 480,24 ✔
17. 00:52:080 (1) - nazi too, flow could be better. move the tail to 212,368 instead? nazi but really have a better flow to play ✔
18. 00:56:924 (4) - add finish on head since i hear a cymbal sound here? Had to also add finish sound on one of the note later on then ✔
19. 00:58:486 (2) - ctrl+G. flow really better >_< ✔
20. 01:01:299 (2) - move to 168,188 for easier to catch :< . tail to 208|120 for keep consistency spacing✔
21. 01:01:924 (3) - remove the whistle on tail. reason because really not fit with song which have a cymbal sound only✔
22. 01:16:924 (1,2) - Hard for read imo since head and tail stacked together. try to change another pattern >_< :CC ✔
23. 01:20:830 (4) - hmm highly to remove this since 1/2 circle is hard to catch for high bpm like this song ✔
24. 01:23:174 (3) - should be NC because the kiai time off ✔
25. 01:28:017 - same as Easy (01:27:549 (3) -) ✔

• 
  Hard

1. 00:04:814 - 00:04:970 - 00:04:970 - all of them are overmapping. change the slider 00:04:736 (6) - become like http://puu.sh/6mNzo.jpg Was trying to find a way to change this up since Pandiar also mentioned about this so I'll go with this. ✔
2. 00:14:580 (7) - flow could be smoother. try to move the tail to 504,136✔
3. 00:15:752 (1) - same as Easy (00:15:830 (1) -)✔
4. 00:20:517 (3) - move the circle to 268,112 for better flow,visual and for play asdf xD I fully understand what you mean, was due to distance snap haha ✔
5. 00:22:549 (2,3,4) - change them to be neater pattern than previous. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254918 ✔
6. 00:30:674 (6) - NC because SV changed here ✔
7. 00:38:486 (5,6,7,8) - could be for neater pattern and flow here. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1254923 ✔
8. 00:42:861 (4,5) - change it for better flow? xD http://puu.sh/6mO0H.jpg Changed some positioning for the other notes as well. ✔
9. 00:49:424 (6) - stack on slider's head instead for better flow. if you're agree. 00:49:580 (7) - move to 396,264 for keep consistency spacing ✔
10. 00:52:549 (7,8,1,2,3) - not really nice to see.. hmm just increase the distance each other. should be nice hmmm yeah I agree with you here. ✔
11. 00:57:861 (8) - i know you're make a jump here but the flow isn't good as well. ctrl+G instead :< :CC ✔
12. 01:01:924 (4) - NC for new pattern and SV change ✔
13. 01:10:517 (6) - just nazi thing, move the tail to 260,212 for better flow >< ✔
14. 01:11:455 (1) - too curving. flow seems broken here. middle point 256,112. tail 216,100 ✔
15. 01:12:392 (4) - ctrl+G it for better flow? the previous one not comfortable to play imo I need to get more mod that will mention about this, I also believe it would feel bit iffy about doing both my and your suggestion. Will try to find a better way as well.
16. 01:17:705 (3) - try to curve the slider to have better flow and shape. http://puu.sh/6mOfB.jpg ✔
17. 01:23:174 (4) - NC for SV change, kiai off too✔
18. 01:28:017 (6) - same as Normal✔

• 
  Insane

1. 00:04:814 (2,4) - overmapping. remove them✔
2. 00:15:752 (1) - same as Hard✔
3. 00:20:205 (9) - nazi, 1 grid down to keep the flow on streams✔
4. 00:22:549 (7) - flow is opposite than previous ;; , flip it with ctrl+H and put at 260,280✔
5. 00:30:674 (4) - NC because SV changed D:✔
6. 00:37:549 (7,8) - flow of jump not really natural. other word is too forced. but i don't have any idea for solution so just saying here. maybe you have an idea for it :p well, I did some changes and I hope this one works out
7. 00:45:674 (5) - because 1/4 jumps and stanza Was mentioned by Pandiar and changed it
8. 00:50:674 (5) - same as 00:30:674 (4) -✔
9. 00:51:845 (9) - overmapped on blue tick imo, just start it in whitetick and end in red tick✔
10. 00:55:674 (6) - same as 00:30:674 (4) -✔
11. 00:57:080 (2,4,6,8) - NC all of them because anti jumps pattern here✔
12. 01:01:924 (6) - same as Hard✔
13. 01:28:017 (3) - same as Normal✔

oh sorry quick mod for Insane since i need go to an event. but flows are really good. love it <3
Good Luck

Limit Removal wrote:

Just saying, the mapset's background image is visibly low-res, might want to fix that.

This might make for a good BG.

Setsurei wrote:

nicely done here

[Easy]
00:28:174 (4) - how about blanket? move to x 432 y 141 hmmm sure ✔
00:33:174 (1,3) - overlap Believed I fixed it a bit better? ✔
00:33:486 (2,3) - flow not nice, how about flipping (3) and re-arrange the objects after too Was fixed along with the previous note ✔
00:43:174 (4,1) - DS not consistent, move (4) a bit up oh wow these random distance snaps Orz. Fixed ✔
01:08:486 (4,1) - ctrl G (4), then move (1) to blanket 01:10:674 (2) - Sorry but I'll keep this for now. Reason is because It's meant to be reflective and the same as 01:10:674 (2,3) , just in a different path.

[Normal]
there are some DS nazi mod too, but I saw the pattern nicely so I ignore and let them be
00:10:361 (1,2) - DS not consistent, move (2) a bit up Whoops I missed that one, thanks.fixed. ✔

[Hard]

mwahahaha /me runs hahah, nice full combo with HD! ^^. You should try out DT with it as well, friend of mine got a SS for HD+DT If only you could keep that score till it's ranked as well Orz

00:19:736 - there's a beat here.. add hitcircle here? or move 00:19:892 (1) - to that point and add another reverse Strange, I must of did something here during my editing as I was looking over Pandiar and Xinely's mod work. fixed. ✔

[Insane]
00:09:580 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - re-shape this pattern to be more hexagon shape?Yeah this was actually on purpose. Reason why I altered the shape a bit was because the first 3 circle notes have shorter distance snap and the next 3 circle notes (which I didn't change) increases the distance snap. That part I followed the guitar as it makes it's low pitch (the first three circle notes) and then it gets higher (the next 3 circle notes). Hope you know what I mean but I'll take your word into consideration.

SPOILER

00:09:580 (3) - x 64 y 152
00:09:736 (4) - x 64 y 32
00:09:892 (5) - x 167 y 92
00:10:049 (6) - x 29 y 92
00:10:205 (7) - x 133 y 32
00:10:361 (8) - x 133 y 152

00:34:424 (1,5) - (1) stack to (5) The five was intentional since it makes a star pattern there. However, I did change some places such as moving the one instead to the five, circle note 8 bit closer meaning i shortened the distance snap by a bit and placed circle note 2 on slider 7's tail. Thanks for pointing this part out. fixed ✔

that's all good luck for ranked

1. according to the ranking criteria, you cannot silence sliderslide and slidertick both at the same time, you need to delete one of them (delete the slidertick recommended
2. try to add audio lead-in at least 1000ms, too short to ready for play currently

1. same NC suggestion with Normal
2. 01:18:486 (4) - missed clap on slider start?
   

1. you'd beter to place NCs consistently in low diffs, i recommend you to arrange NCs for example adding it on every 2nd long white tick
2. 00:00:674 (1) - inappropriate whistle here, try deleting it unless you changed sampleset to soft
3. 00:00:674 - same suggestion with Insane
4. 00:15:830 (1) - missed finish?
5. 00:19:736 - try adding 1/1 slider with a repeat here, current space seems too empty imo, see what i've done for it
   
   example

   
6. 00:24:267 (3,5) - missed claps
7. 00:26:299 (2) - it's kinda nazi but, try curving this upward? has better flow imo
8. 00:30:361 (3) - add finish on the slider end for consistency
9. 00:33:174 (1) - add finish on the slider start for consistency as well
10. 00:54:580 (2) - that whistle since i already said why whistle isn't suitable well with this part in Insane, delete it~
11. 01:01:924 (3) - same suggestion with Insane
12. 01:18:174 (4) - add finish on the slider start for the cymbal sound

• 
  아 드디어 한국어를 쓰는구나

1. 00:29:892 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 연타 바로 다음에 안티점프를 두시면 아무래도 좀 헷갈려서 추천드리고 싶진않네요, 차라리 점프를 두시거나 아니면 디스탠스를 좀 늘려주시면 나을꺼같아요
2. 01:00:049 (1,3) - 사실 플레이에는 그렇게 큰 차이가 없는데 그래도 00:59:424 (1) - 이 노트에 스택 시키시는게 좀 더 플레이하긴 나을꺼 같아요 ㅋㅋ
3. 01:01:924 - 인세인에서도 언급했던건데, 여긴 소프트 샘플셋 쓰시는게 훨씬 나은거 같아요
4. 01:11:767 (1) - 여기에 피니시 넣으셨던데 둘다 피니시 사운드를 가지고있어서 01:12:392 (3) - 여기도 넣어주시는게 좋을꺼같아요
5. 01:21:924 (1) - 이부분은 클랩을 넣기엔 적당한 음이 없는거같아요, 다음 노트들처럼 소프트 휘슬이 어떨까요?
   
   정말 잘 만드셨네요 ㅋㅋ

1. 00:00:674 - same suggestion with Insane
2. 00:20:674 (4) - NC for SV and rhythm changing
3. 00:27:549 (2) - i recommend adding clap on the slider start for matching with the drum sound in background
4. 00:31:767 (1) - delete NC and 00:33:174 (8,1) - swap NC for consistency
5. 00:38:486 (5,6,7) - same clap suggestions with Insane
6. 00:48:486 (4,5) - this rhythm... well i think you can improve this rhythm to better way
7. 00:52:861 (1,3) - swap NC for consistency
8. 00:59:424 (8) - forgot to add finish on this slider start?
9. 01:01:924 - like what i suggested in Insane diff, try soft sampleset on this green line
10. 01:11:767 (2,4) - same finish suggestion with Insane lol
11. 01:19:424 (1,2,5) - i don't think whistle is appropriate on kiai sections, there isn't any reasonable sounds in it imo, if you really want to use whsitles, try using it on 00:21:299 (6) - here and other similar parts

1. you'd better to place NCs more neatly, current one seems little bit inconsistant
2. 00:00:674 - adjust the volume and custom sampleset on red line like the green line on same time
3. 00:00:674 (1) - since the beginning sound isn't that strong, you'd better to use soft sampleset or just decreasing the volume
4. 00:11:767 (1,2) - swap NC for consistency
5. 00:13:642 (8,1) - this rhythm hears kinda off to the music, reversing this rhythm can be a solution imo. Also, i have a pattern suggestion about it (you need to move the next objects as well if you decide to follow this)
   
   exapmle

   
6. 00:38:486 (2,3,4) - how about adding claps on each of the slider start? it's too empty without those
7. 00:47:549 (4) - i don't think this whistle is really needed even you didn't use it on other parts
8. 00:49:267 (6,7) - another rhythmic issue, try reversing this rhythm and here's an example
   
   example

   
9. 00:55:674 (1) - why don't you add finish on the slider start? it fits really nice with the music (not only this but also all of similar parts for example like 00:56:924 - here)
10. 00:56:455 (3) - i'd rather using ctrl g on thjs slider, this part doesn't seem that jump pattern is really needed
11. 01:01:924 - using soft sampleset on this green line fits much better with the music
12. 01:11:767 (4,6) - how about adding finishes on both slider start? i can clealy hear cymbal sounds which you added in previous part
13. 01:27:392 (6,1) - swap NC for indicating rhythm change better

HelloSCV wrote:

from my queue

[General]

1. according to the ranking criteria, you cannot silence sliderslide and slidertick both at the same time, you need to delete one of them (delete the slidertick recommended Done ✔
2. try to add audio lead-in at least 1000ms, too short to ready for play currently Alright ✔

[Easy]

1. same NC suggestion with Normal ✔
2. 01:18:486 (4) - missed clap on slider start? ✔

[Normal]

1. you'd beter to place NCs consistently in low diffs, i recommend you to arrange NCs for example adding it on every 2nd long white tick ✔
2. 00:00:674 (1) - inappropriate whistle here, try deleting it unless you changed sampleset to softWas mentioned from Xinely about adding it but I said I would just wipe after adding it so I missed this one. fixed ✔
3. 00:00:674 - same suggestion with Insane ✔
4. 00:15:830 (1) - missed finish? yup, fixed ✔
5. 00:19:736 - try adding 1/1 slider with a repeat here, current space seems too empty imo, see what i've done for it True ✔
   
   example

   
6. 00:24:267 (3,5) - missed claps fixed ✔
7. 00:26:299 (2) - it's kinda nazi but, try curving this upward? has better flow imo ✔
8. 00:30:361 (3) - add finish on the slider end for consistency ✔
9. 00:33:174 (1) - add finish on the slider start for consistency as well ✔
10. 00:54:580 (2) - that whistle since i already said why whistle isn't suitable well with this part in Insane, delete it~ ✔
11. 01:01:924 (3) - same suggestion with Insane ✔
12. 01:18:174 (4) - add finish on the slider start for the cymbal sound ✔

[Hard]

1. 00:00:674 - same suggestion with Insane ✔
2. 00:20:674 (4) - NC for SV and rhythm changing ✔
3. 00:27:549 (2) - i recommend adding clap on the slider start for matching with the drum sound in backgroundWhoops. That was a mistake to miss that. Fixed ✔
4. 00:31:767 (1) - delete NC and 00:33:174 (8,1) - swap NC for consistency ✔
5. 00:38:486 (5,6,7) - same clap suggestions with Insane ✔
6. 00:48:486 (4,5) - this rhythm... well i think you can improve this rhythm to better way Alright, Hope what I did was better ✔
7. 00:52:861 (1,3) - swap NC for consistency ✔
8. 00:59:424 (8) - forgot to add finish on this slider start? ✔
9. 01:01:924 - like what i suggested in Insane diff, try soft sampleset on this green line ✔
10. 01:11:767 (2,4) - same finish suggestion with Insane lol ✔
11. 01:19:424 (1,2,5) - i don't think whistle is appropriate on kiai sections, there isn't any reasonable sounds in it imo, if you really want to use whsitles, try using it on 00:21:299 (6) - here and other similar partsWiped them

[Insane]

1. you'd better to place NCs more neatly, current one seems little bit inconsistant Noticed once you said it. Fixed ✔
2. 00:00:674 - adjust the volume and custom sampleset on red line like the green line on same time fixed ✔
3. 00:00:674 (1) - since the beginning sound isn't that strong, you'd better to use soft sampleset or just decreasing the volume Set the volume to 35%, think that's good enough right? I take that back, changed it to Soft hitsound, added whistles in the beginning of the song for each difficulty and set it to 40% volume. ✔
4. 00:11:767 (1,2) - swap NC for consistency For the NC I redid the whole thing and made it consistent as possible every 8. ✔
5. 00:13:642 (8,1) - this rhythm hears kinda off to the music, reversing this rhythm can be a solution imo. Also, i have a pattern suggestion about it (you need to move the next objects as well if you decide to follow this) reversed it and also re-positioned them in different coordinates ✔
   
   exapmle

   
6. 00:38:486 (2,3,4) - how about adding claps on each of the slider start? it's too empty without those hmm sure
7. 00:47:549 (4) - i don't think this whistle is really needed even you didn't use it on other parts Actually, I wiped out all the whistles from my difficulties because they seem to not fit with the song but probably missed some after going through them such as this. fixed ✔
8. 00:49:267 (6,7) - another rhythmic issue, try reversing this rhythm and here's an example Sure ✔
   
   example

   
9. 00:55:674 (1) - why don't you add finish on the slider start? it fits really nice with the music (not only this but also all of similar parts for example like 00:56:924 - here) That is true. fixed ✔
10. 00:56:455 (3) - i'd rather using ctrl g on thjs slider, this part doesn't seem that jump pattern is really needed I see what you mean ✔
11. 01:01:924 - using soft sampleset on this green line fits much better with the music Agree ✔
12. 01:11:767 (4,6) - how about adding finishes on both slider start? i can clealy hear cymbal sounds which you added in previous part ahh I understand ✔
13. 01:27:392 (6,1) - swap NC for indicating rhythm change better Sure ✔

sorry if there are some grammatical errors xD, nice map and i like this song lol, good luck for rank!

HelloSCV wrote:

from my queue

[General]

1. according to the ranking criteria, you cannot silence sliderslide and slidertick both at the same time, you need to delete one of them (delete the slidertick recommended present for AllStar12
2. try to add audio lead-in at least 1000ms, too short to ready for play currently fixed

[Karia's Insane]

• 
  아 드디어 한국어를 쓰는구나 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

1. 00:29:892 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 연타 바로 다음에 안티점프를 두시면 아무래도 좀 헷갈려서 추천드리고 싶진않네요, 차라리 점프를 두시거나 아니면 디스탠스를 좀 늘려주시면 나을꺼같아요 으..그냥 두고 싶은데 이 모딩은 계속 올 듯 싶네요 ㅜ fixed
2. 01:00:049 (1,3) - 사실 플레이에는 그렇게 큰 차이가 없는데 그래도 00:59:424 (1) - 이 노트에 스택 시키시는게 좀 더 플레이하긴 나을꺼 같아요 ㅋㅋ fixed
3. 01:01:924 - 인세인에서도 언급했던건데, 여긴 소프트 샘플셋 쓰시는게 훨씬 나은거 같아요 fixed
4. 01:11:767 (1) - 여기에 피니시 넣으셨던데 둘다 피니시 사운드를 가지고있어서 01:12:392 (3) - 여기도 넣어주시는게 좋을꺼같아요 fixed
5. 01:21:924 (1) - 이부분은 클랩을 넣기엔 적당한 음이 없는거같아요, 다음 노트들처럼 소프트 휘슬이 어떨까요? 사실 휘슬만 넣으려니까 좀 힛사가 지루한 감이 있어서 클랩을 넣었었지만..일단은 고쳤습니다 ㅎ fixed
   
   정말 잘 만드셨네요 ㅋㅋ

sorry if there are some grammatical errors xD, nice map and i like this song lol, good luck for rank!

Underflow wrote:

Hi, AllStar12.

[General]
- Artist: ナノ (http://puu.sh/6wtEt.png) present for AllStar12.
- How about change offset to 680(+6)? Waiting for AllStar12's decision. fixed to 685(+11)

[Karia's Insane]
00:04:267 (1) - Add whistle on slider's start fixed
00:31:924 (1) - Remove clap on slider's start 뒤에 같은 음 두부분도 다 클랩을 넣었기도 하고 클랩이 어울리기도 하네요 ㅎ
00:33:174 (1) - Why is this only whistle? Change to finish XD 피니시가 있는 자리가 아니라서 균형상 휘슬을 넣었어요 ㅎ

Sorry for delay and short mod (T^T)

Underflow wrote:

Hi, AllStar12.

[General]
- Artist: ナノ (http://puu.sh/6wtEt.png) We'll see if we get more comments about this. Reason is that beatmap the artist (nano) has been typed in romanised letters lately.
- How about change offset to 680(+6)? Done a recheck on the offset multiple times and I concluded that it's 685 that is the correct number. Thanks for noticing that as I was way off... Orz

[Easy]
00:58:174 (4) - New combo Understandable. fixed ✔
00:59:111 (5) - Remove new combo ✔

00:59:111 (1,2,3) - I think this rhythm is better. How about try to this rhythm? Pretty good. changed ✔
01:20:674 (3) - Add finish ✔

[Normal]
01:20:361 (1) - Add finish on slider's end ✔
01:19:111 (1) - Stack on 01:17:236 (2). Probably shifted due to stack latency. fixed ✔

[Hard]
00:19:736 (1,2,3) - It is a little awkward. try using this rhythm. I believe it's fine, sorry.
00:37:861 (1) - Remove new combo (similar to the previous part) ✔
00:38:174 (4) - Same reason as 00:37:861 (1). Add new combo. ✔
01:20:674 (5) - Add finish on slider's start ✔

[Insane]
01:06:611 (3) - Moving to 344, 32 is better to play. ✔
01:11:611 (4) - Stack on 01:10:986 (2)'s start Understandable since it's hidden behind the slider.fixed ✔
01:20:674 (6) - Add finish on slider's start ✔
01:28:017 (3) - How about move to 368, 280? hmmm sure let's give this a shot. Understand why about positioning there. ✔

Sorry for delay and short mod (T^T) Hahah It's alright ^^

Rey-volution wrote:

[Karia's Insane]
00:21:310 (4,1) - I think this overlapping is not good. try to move it Sorry. This is just my style.
00:50:216 (4) - what about 171x316 ? because this is not a slider fixed

Very good map, and I think this is ready for ranked. +1

ayaka2000 wrote:

HI.
Please excuse me if you may not understand or you feel bad with my poor English.

General
Slder → a crowning point and the center of a circle　arrange the shape of.
That's difficult to express with my level of English.I'm sorry if I do not comehus, each slder can more beautifully.

Easy

01:03:185 (2) - No Stack for beginner Sorry I believe this is fine because the player is ready at the position for the next slider note when the kiai time starts
01:00:685 (1) - Too short.It's difficult for a rank beginner. I'll consider this but really think it's enough time for the player at this level to handle the spinner, plus they also got enough time to react for the circle note after that.

Nomal

00:52:091 (1) - I like a perpendicular line. Really think this might be a weird flow after finishing the repeated slider and moving on to the next slider so no change

Hard

01:14:747 (7) - oh what the..., I don't remember messing around with that slider... fixed ✔

01:20:997 (6) - No change because after going through mapping and modding for a reasonable amount of time, I found out that having the points re-positioned to where they are meant to be can cause the slider to be formed in a different way than the creator wants it to be so I'll just keep it like that for safe measures.
→　
A(a crowning point) B(End point the center of a circle)

Insane

00:25:685 (5) - stack move X336 Y76 Was intentional to have the distance snap like that so no change here

Rey-volution wrote:

[Easy & Normal]
PERFECT

[Hard]
00:37:560 (8) - remove whistle hmmm strange, it doesn't say that it has a whistle there for me and it doesn't sound like there is :S
00:53:106 - add notes? Believe it's unnecessary to do so at this part, even for a hard
01:15:060 (1) - this overlapping is okay? if not, you can move it Yeah I don't know what happened here, the slider wasn't meant be like that to begin with. I don't know how I messed that one up and don't remember moving it... Orz fixed ✔

[Insane]
00:48:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think thats a good shape/positioning, I feel that's better like this Understand what you mean by that so fixed! ✔

SPOILER

01:27:716 (1,2,3) - Personally I don't like the position, you can make it like this. But you can ignore it~ Did it in a different way. ✔

SPOILER

Very good map, and I think this is ready for ranked. +1

captin1 wrote:

Karia's

AllStar's

Impressive maps, you two both have some great potential

take a star, good luck~

Tsukuyomi wrote:

General
hitsound is a bit weak
more whistle plz :3 alright
http://puu.sh/6EZLn.wav

Easy
01:03:185 (2,3) - avoid stack in easy,kinda hard to read for newbie Was pointed out by another mod but yeah, if this really is a problem then I'll change the position of it. fixed ✔
00:20:685 (1) - finish on reverse ✔
00:23:185 (3) - ^ ✔
00:25:685 (1) - ^ ✔
00:28:185 (3) - ^ ✔
00:50:685 (1) - ^ ✔
00:25:060 (4) - add finish ✔
00:29:747 (4) - finish on head ✔
00:52:560 (3) - ^ ✔
00:53:810 (1) - ^ ✔
00:55:060 (3) - ^ ✔
01:24:122 (2) - ^ ✔
01:25:060 (3) - ^ ✔
01:26:310 (1) - ^ ✔
01:27:560 (3) - ^ ✔
listen to music carefully you will find these finishes,also check other diffs Alright, understand what you mean by those finishes

Normal
00:00:685 (1) - whistle on tail ✔
00:01:778 (3) - ^ ✔
00:02:560 (4) - whistle on head ✔
00:03:185 (1) - remove the whistle on tail ✔
seems to be more regular,
00:14:278 add a note here? Sorry but it seems a bit awkward to have a note there when that part is all 1/1, regardless of it having a beat there.
01:08:497 (3) - shorten it to 01:08:966 and add a note at 01:09:122 is better ohhh. changed ✔
01:27:247 (1) - remove it,and add a note here,than move 01:27:560 (2) - to 01:27:560 and add a reverse,more comfortable for me hmmm sure. changed ✔

Hard
a bit too many triplets for a 192 BPM hard,try use less I'll tone it down a bit if that's the case✔
nc is a mess,try what you used in easy and normal,1 nc every 1 or 2 long white tick Alright, hopefully I did somewhat better than it was before... Orz✔
00:10:685 00:10:841 Did something happened here?
00:11:153 00:11:310^
00:11:622 00:11:778^
it's not good to use a slider to cover different sound of guita(?i'm not sure) Can't seem to see the image for some reason :/
from 00:10:528,currect rhythm imo

SPOILER

ah 00:05:685 same from here
00:14:200 (5) - remove it ✔
00:41:388 (4) - ^ ✔
00:47:638 (7) - ^ ✔
triplets start at white line is not suggested if you create 1/4 rhythm I see

Insane
control of spacing is not very good,which makes your map looks a bit mess well... If that's the case then I'll look deeper into this.
00:14:200 (8) - remove it ✔
00:41:388 (4) - ^ ✔
00:47:638 (5) - ^ Well I'm going to keep this one there because on the 1/4 I really wanted to capture the vocal part as well there when I played it back on 25%. If this really does become a big issue then I'll consider changing it but for now keep.
00:06:935 (7) - NC here,not 00:07:247 (1) - ✔
00:19:747 (3) - NC ✔
00:24:747 (8) - NC here not 00:24:903 (1) - ✔
00:26:778 (2) - Nc here not 00:26:622 (1) - ✔
add NC when it is downbeat is better,check other parts
00:56:153 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - if you flow the guitar here you shouldn't use sliders starting at red tick imo
00:55:685 (1) - shorten it to 00:55:841 and move 00:55:997 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - to 00:55:997 Did it in a different way
01:13:888 (6) - remove it ✔
01:14:513 (2) - ^ ✔

good luck owo/