EEeee wrote:

Easy
Fix Break and done
^^

Normal+
00:45:34 (5) - space this with the rest of the combo, it's a bit too far Done
01:18:77 (4) - new combo Done

Hard
00:50:31 (3) - bit too far, space it and tilt the endpoint so that 4 will still be spaced Done
01:12:77 (5) - new combo Done
and wow that's it

proseyu wrote:

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阿澄巫女！>w</

Hard
00:21:85 - Add a note ? >_< soryy ;_;
00:38:31 - ^ soryy ;_;
00:47:57 (3) - 00:47:91 (1) - 00:48:25 (3) - remove these notes, and other notes(00:47:22 (1,2,4,2,4,5))change to jump? >_< soryy ;_;
00:48:42 (4,5) - change to note(red tick), note(white tick), slider(red white)? @_@ soryy ;_;
00:52:37 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - change to jump? It is too Hard when keeping hard. ;_;
00:54:77 - Add a note ? soryy ;_;
01:00:59 - ^ Done :3
01:05:74 - ^ soryy ;_;
01:11:57 - ^ Done :3
01:15:34 - ^ soryy ;_;
01:17:05 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - jump? It is too Hard when keeping hard. ;_;

Normal+
00:53:91 (4) - extend up to 00:54:25? Done
01:00:59 - Add a note ? Done

quintitem wrote:

hi

very good map <3

and I only have a suggestion. 0.0

[Normal+]
00:34:88 (4) - 00:35:74 (1) -
The distance of these 2 objects maybe can move more bigger. XD
(If you think you don't want to fix this,that's OK. ) Done XD


and I don't have any big problem in this map. XD

star <3

really a nice map

whymeman wrote:

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[Easy] (Done)

SPOILER

00:05:97 (B) - Delete and replace break. Done

Notes: This difficulty seems okay so far. Just a small issue with the break.

[Normal+] (Done)

SPOILER

00:00:25 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here is not equal. (look at the small gap between (1) and (2) then look at (2) and the notes down. Done
00:01:79 (6,8) - Touching the bottom of the window... Done
00:54:42 (5) - This looks like I can go down a bit more to line up with (4). Done
00:57:34 (1,2,1) - Slight spacing gap between here. Done
01:00:59 (1,2) - ^ Done

Notes: Just some minor stuff to look at. Nice work though.

[Hard] (Done)

SPOILER

00:07:97 (1,2,3) - The triangle shape looks a bit off. Done
00:31:62 (1,2,3,4) - Make sure to double check the spacing around here. It looks like the sliders are a bit closer than it needs to compared to the other notes... Done
00:52:19 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - It doesn't look evenly lined up. Done
00:55:28 (3) - Looks a bit too close to (2). Done
00:56:48 (5,6) - A bit too close together. Done
01:19:45 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The setup doesn't seem even or lined up that well here. Between (7) and (5) has some extra space while (8) is touching (5). Done
01:24:25 (1,1) - A bit too close together. Done
01:25:45 (4,5,6) - Extra spacing between these notes. Done

Notes: The map seems okay, but the spacing would need to be rechecked.

[taka's Insane] (Done)

SPOILER

00:19:79 (5,6) - These two hitnotes are touching.
00:22:02 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The two triangle shapes here are different. The first one has the notes touching while he second one has the notes spaced out evenly.
00:24:94 (2,4) - Are these two notes supposed to be touching?
00:41:65 (4,6) - ^
01:16:37 (4,5) - ^
01:18:25 (5) - Not lined up with (1).
01:19:97 (1) - ^ I tell taka.

Notes: Just some minor stuff to check into. Make sure to double check the spacing for the rest of the map.

Overall: The map seems really good overall, though there is one thing that really bugs is the file size for the video. It could be a bit smaller since its a short song but other than the minor stuff, its good so far. I'll drop my star in then...sorry...I hope to use a more beautiful video.

v2b wrote:

894ww mayoimaimai

I think you should change artist to Katou Emiri I tried to change it, but it becomes new beatmap in the uploaded shape and isn't done ;_;
offset -15,dont forget to resnap notes and reinsert breaktme Done

hard:
00:22:01 (1,1) - I dont think the 2x sliders fit the song Done
01:13:95 (1,2) - overlapped slider is unrankable Done


star
I hope I have time to map fullver ;_; Please take into my beatmap at that time;_;

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod ^^

Blue = Suggestion

[Easy]
No Problems Found

[Normal+]
No Problems Found

[Hard]
00:00:25 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - Maybe all these could be flipped vertically? Because the beat placement is very similar to [Normal+] I changed it towards Normal+
No Problems Found

[taka's Insane]
No Problems found

A flawless map in every way! I love it! Starred for sure

Alace wrote:

<Easy>
00:00:24 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - delete this XD they didn`t sound so good Done XD

<Hard>
00:23:38 (1) - lol It doesn`t fit XD Done!

pretty good mapset

Armin wrote:

-Easy
00:31:612 1/4 earlier, maybe?　;_;
00:49:612 Finish Done
00:50:983 ^ Done
00:52:355 Finish at the start Done
01:22:183 Finish? Done
01:24:926 Finish at the start Done

-Normal+
00:12:069 Add a clap at the start Done
00:20:983 Finish at the start Done
00:26:469 Finish Done
00:42:926 Finish at the start Done

-Hard
00:02:126 Align whith (5) Done
00:13:955 Finish Done
00:14:469 ^ Done
00:14:983 ^ Done
00:51:326 Respect the spacing (even if it isn't necessary in this case) Done
01:24:926 (1,4,7) Finish Done

-taka's Insane
01:16:526 Align this circle better ( 1 square to the right)

Starred. I like the last difficulty @_@

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Yay, my favorite op from Bakemonogatari

Easy;

SPOILER

Combo mod:
00:18:06 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:34:52 (3) Done
00:23:55 (1) - ^ Done
00:57:84 (1) - I sort of want to remove this new combo because it is inconsistent with your 2 line of lyrics pattern that you used for most of the song, but that will make this combo pretty long. It can go either way. Done?_?
01:24:92 (6) - new combo? Done

Normal:

SPOILER

Normal mod:
Having more than repeats than a single repeat slider in a song is a song that is dominated by single repeat sliders is annoying and hard to see. Especially the ones inbetween combos such as 00:41:72 (2). I would change these if you can. Done?_?

Combo mod:
00:26:46 (1) - remove new combo to get whole line of lyrics in one combo Done
00:47:21 (1) - ^ Done
01:18:75 (1) - ^? Done

Hard:

SPOILER

I think it is a little weird to have a hard worth over 3mil in a 90s song. sorry i don't understand?_?

Normal mod:
00:15:49 (13,14,15) - lower stack leniency to make this look nicer sorry not done+_+

Insane:

SPOILER

Normal mod:
01:04:86 (1) - I am going to warn you that this type of jump is pretty unexpected for players and not very popular

Combo mod:
00:34:35 (5) - new combo Done

Great map. A little bit on the hard side for all maps besides easy, but I think it is fine. Star.