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Tomatsu Haruka & Yahagi Sayuri - Apple Panic! (TV Size)

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Andrea
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Yumiko
I love this map <333 Starred :D
H1ko
Starrrrrrr :)

go Andrea goooooooooo!
fuffolo
Star!
Topic Starter
Andrea
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Mafiamaster
I-didn't-see-anything-wrong~
Topic Starter
Andrea

Mafiamaster wrote:

I-didn't-see-anything-wrong~
Thanks for modding bro :3
Topic Starter
Andrea
Increased volume of the mp3 for a better play.
ShaggoN
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Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks ShaggoN ^_^
Lizbeth
nice map... n_n really fun

only a few suggestions in Normal
01:11:51 - add a note here..
01:12:46 - same
01:27:64 - same


good luck
Star!
Topic Starter
Andrea

Lizbeth wrote:

nice map... n_n really fun

only a few suggestions in Normal
01:11:51 - add a note here..
01:12:46 - same
01:27:64 - same


good luck
Star!
Thanks Liz, but i don't want add more notes, is too much normal xD
Diasios
Overall:

custom colours: black ---> no. I suggest yellow

Normal:

00:40:968 (7) = new combo

Hard:

00:39:450 (3) = new combo
00:40:968 (7) = new combo
01:11:329 (8) = new combo

starred
Topic Starter
Andrea

xxheroxx wrote:

Overall:

custom colours: black ---> no. I suggest yellow

Normal:

00:40:968 (7) = new combo

Hard:

00:39:450 (3) = new combo
00:40:968 (7) = new combo
01:11:329 (8) = new combo

starred
All fixed, thank you ^^
vytalibus
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Lissette
:)
Topic Starter
Andrea

vytalibus wrote:

Sounds a bit late. I got 165 ms as my offset.
Thanks, updated. You can re-check and maybe bubble please? :3

@Lissette: Thanks for starz.
Matma Rex
[Overall]
- hitcircle image needs to be cropped to fit with overlay. Here's fixed version (I also killed some weird jpg artifacts and applied glass effect like in original hitcircle):
- OH MY GOD THAT SPINNER IS SOOOO UGLY. I really, really suggest removing it or at least fixing those ugly edges.
- all sounds are broken, I couldnt run them with anything. Either fix or delete them.

[Normal]
00:29:95 (7) - (suggestion) new combo?
00:31:47 (1) - (suggestion) remove new combo?
00:42:85 (1,2,3,4,5) - (suggestion) I'd remove it and place spinner here instead.
00:44:56 (1) - 1/2 shorter.
00:44:94 (x) - place circle here.
00:59:36 (1) - I dont like slider like this one.
01:11:32 (7) - place a 1/4 slider with one repeat here.
01:11:70 (8) - as above.
01:11:89 (9) - and then remove this note.
01:29:91 (2,3) - 1/2 earlier.
01:31:15 (1) - 1/4 earlier and longer.

[Hard]
Sudden triples are ugly.
00:23:69 (1,2,3) - (suggestion) remove (2).
00:43:23 (3,4,5) - eaither remove (4) or place notes at 00:43:523, 00:43:713 and 00:43:903 to create longer 1/4 stream.
00:47:60 (1,2,3) - (suggestion) remove (2).
00:54:62 (6) - slider here?
00:55:95 (10,1) - WTF spacing. Fix it.
00:58:79 (7,8,9) - (suggestion) remove (8).
00:59:36 (1) - like in Normal - ugly.



Will star what you fix that ugly spinner and the rst of skin issues.
Topic Starter
Andrea

Matma Rex wrote:

[Overall]
- hitcircle image needs to be cropped to fit with overlay. Here's fixed version (I also killed some weird jpg artifacts and applied glass effect like in original hitcircle): [attachment=0:105b1]hitcircle.png[/attachment:105b1]
- OH MY GOD THAT SPINNER IS SOOOO UGLY. I really, really suggest removing it or at least fixing those ugly edges.
- all sounds are broken, I couldnt run them with anything. Either fix or delete them.

[Normal]
00:29:95 (7) - (suggestion) new combo?
00:31:47 (1) - (suggestion) remove new combo?
00:42:85 (1,2,3,4,5) - (suggestion) I'd remove it and place spinner here instead.
00:44:56 (1) - 1/2 shorter.
00:44:94 (x) - place circle here.
00:59:36 (1) - I dont like slider like this one.
01:11:32 (7) - place a 1/4 slider with one repeat here.
01:11:70 (8) - as above.
01:11:89 (9) - and then remove this note.
01:29:91 (2,3) - 1/2 earlier.
01:31:15 (1) - 1/4 earlier and longer.

[Hard]
Sudden triples are ugly.
00:23:69 (1,2,3) - (suggestion) remove (2).
00:43:23 (3,4,5) - eaither remove (4) or place notes at 00:43:523, 00:43:713 and 00:43:903 to create longer 1/4 stream.
00:47:60 (1,2,3) - (suggestion) remove (2).
00:54:62 (6) - slider here?
00:55:95 (10,1) - WTF spacing. Fix it.
00:58:79 (7,8,9) - (suggestion) remove (8).
00:59:36 (1) - like in Normal - ugly.



Will star what you fix that ugly spinner and the rst of skin issues.
Some changes, done, thank you a lot.

Anyway i don't change the skin because i've used all times for to love ru maps.

Star it if you want xD
yaya
good map . really

star
Armin
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Topic Starter
Andrea
Please BATs check this map! I'm sure is perfect.
kino77
Sorry for hte late mod...

[Haruna-Normal]
00:54:43(x)-Add a note here?
01:29:16(x)-^

[Lala-Hard]
Nothing foud~

Star~
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks for modding :3
Topic Starter
Andrea
This is my last To LOVE Ru map. Any BAT can check it now?
DJPop
Please use BG that have both Lala and Haruna =_="

PreviewTime: 62,404
Video offset: 300


Mods below are suggestions, don't hate me ;__;
01:02:404~01:26:502 - Kiai times

~Normal~
01:11:70 (2) - move 1/2 left

~Hard~
00:06:61 (5) - too much above o_o
00:07:85 (2) - delete
00:11:07 (3) - ^
00:16:76 (4) - ^
00:23:78 (2) - ^
00:29:387 - add circle
00:47:69 (2) - delete
01:24:60 (10,1) - NO!!! DX


+Star
Topic Starter
Andrea

DJPop wrote:

Please use BG that have both Lala and Haruna =_="

PreviewTime: 62,404
Video offset: 300


Mods below are suggestions, don't hate me ;__;
01:02:404~01:26:502 - Kiai times

~Normal~
01:11:70 (2) - move 1/2 left

~Hard~
00:06:61 (5) - too much above o_o
00:07:85 (2) - delete
00:11:07 (3) - ^
00:16:76 (4) - ^
00:23:78 (2) - ^
00:29:387 - add circle
00:47:69 (2) - delete
01:24:60 (10,1) - NO!!! DX


+Star
Some suggestions fixed, thanks.
Cyril Scarlet
tomatsu ~~ :D
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks maxwelldemon for revive this map :D
Topic Starter
Andrea
Map is finally ready for BAT :D

Please check this >_<
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Haruna-Easy]

This is a Normal D:

[Rito-Normal]

It's ok

[Lala-Hard]

00:18:019 (9) - New combo
Topic Starter
Andrea

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Haruna-Easy]

This is a Normal D:

[Rito-Normal]

It's ok

[Lala-Hard]

00:18:019 (9) - New combo
Fixed the "New combo", thanks for modding :)
DJPop
Hitsounds are too loud in some parts and the custom claps are too soft.


~Haruna-Easy~
Delete unused timing sections and fix them.
00:16:048 (6) - hitwhistle
01:30:067 (3) - move up a bit

~Rito-Normal~
01:09:080 (3) - move left 2 grids (Lv3)

~Lala-Hard~
00:45:013 (3,4) - confused
01:23:046 (7) - new combo
01:24:060 (10,1) - too far D:
01:32:038 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - move down near the center?


You've already got my star :P
Topic Starter
Andrea

DJPop wrote:

Hitsounds are too loud in some parts and the custom claps are too soft.


~Haruna-Easy~
Delete unused timing sections and fix them.
00:16:048 (6) - hitwhistle
01:30:067 (3) - move up a bit

~Rito-Normal~
01:09:080 (3) - move left 2 grids (Lv3)

~Lala-Hard~
00:45:013 (3,4) - confused
01:23:046 (7) - new combo
01:24:060 (10,1) - too far D:
01:32:038 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - move down near the center?


You've already got my star :P
Thanks for modding, some suggestions fixed.
Kytoxid
[General]

Umm, the no-video version is being weird for me, containing the wrong .osu files and stuff. Try another full upload.

Video itself is poorly sized. :( Might as well use a higher resolution one, if it's available. Also, you should remove the audio track to reduce file size.

Many of the timing sections might be better 1/4 earlier, but I'll leave those up to your discretion, I'll point out the more important ones.

00:13:082 (1) - Hitsounds felt too quiet, anything that wasn't a whistle was hard to hear. (notably, the triplet on Insane a bit later in the section) As a whole, hitsounds could be louder, I suppose.
01:24:098 - Move the timing section 1/4 or 1/2 earlier.

Spinner skin was a bit bright for my eyes, but not too bad.

The lack of spinners on Normal may cause an easily reachable max score.

Anything below this is pretty much a nazi minor cosmetic thing.

[Haruna-Normal]

01:30:067 (3) - Shift this up to align with 2, 4?

[Rito-Hard]

00:23:031 (2) - Shift this a grid right for a better triangle?
00:38:068 (2) - Check your symmetry.
01:20:024 (8) - Slightly not in line with 6, 7. Looks kinda weird.

[Lala-Insane]

Looks good. :)

Star~
Leorda
[Haruna-Normal]
00:02:631 (x) - Place note here
00:39:443 (x) - Place note here with new combo
00:39:633 (1) - No new combo

[Rito-Hard]
00:15:155 (x) - Place note here
00:15:535 (x) - ^
00:47:223 (2) - Hold Shift button, if this object is straight, release it
00:49:690 (5) - Allign with 4
01:28:020 (x) - Place note here
01:28:400 (x) - ^
01:32:385 (1) - No new combo
01:32:764 (1) - ^
01:32:954 (1) - ^
01:33:144 (1) - ^
01:33:713 (1) - ^
01:34:092 (1) - ^

[Lala-Insane]
00:11:739 (6,7) - Allign with 5
00:12:878 (10) - Allign with 9
00:28:438 (5) - It's offscreen, find the place
00:28:817 (6) - ^
00:54:434 (5) - Hold Shift button, if this object is straight, release it
00:54:624 (6) - Allign with 5
01:03:352 (4) - Allign with 3
01:32:764 (1) - No new combo
01:32:954 (1) - ^
01:33:144 (1) - ^
01:33:713 (1) - ^
01:34:092 (1) - ^

Good song! STAR
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks for modding Kytoxid & Leorda ^^
Dusty
00:13:044, all difficulties - It's better to put the new timing section before the actual note if you're doing it for volume or hitsounds, because if people hit the note early, the new sound settings wouldn't have happened yet. Especially if you add a finish onto that note, then it's necessary.

In my opinion, silenced spinners are one of the worst things ever.

[Haruna-Normal]
If you want to remap everything, you can increase distance snap :)

00:13:044 (6) - Add finish
01:32:076 (1) - Add finish on start and end
01:33:071 (2,3) - Add finish

[Rito-Hard]
00:05:009 (1,2,3,4) - Add a hitsound somewhere. It feels empty.
00:13:044 (8) - Add a finish?

[Lala-Insane]
00:13:044 (11) - Add a finish?
anonymous_old
Normal
SPOILER

00:02:063 (x) : Add a beat here.

Very good.

Hard
SPOILER

00:33:018 (2,3,4) : Bad idea for a stack, because the notes aren't in a pattern.
00:53:029 (1,2,3) : Bad idea for a stack, because the notes aren't in a pattern.
01:11:032 (1,2,3) : Bad idea for a stack, because the notes aren't in a pattern.
01:18:091 (5) : Extend by 3 ticks.
01:19:048 (6) : Delete this if you do the above suggestion.
01:30:010 (x) : Add a slider here that lasts for two ticks.
01:30:029 (3) : Delete if you do the above suggestion.
01:30:067 (x) : Add a beat here.
01:31:005 (x) : Add a beat here.

Insane
SPOILER

00:56:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6) : Clap hitsound.

Very Good.

spinnerspin.wav and spinnerbonus.wav are 0KB large, and they are probably corrupted.
kino77
The map was great~
I could only pick up some nazi~

[Hard]
00:49:069 (5) - Move 1 grid up?
01:20:024 (8) - Move 1 grid right?

[Insane]
00:12:087 (10) - Move 1 grid up?

Also I like the diffs' name Easy,Normal,Hard~ ;)

No kudosu for this post~
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks Dusty, LoogieSquared and kino77 for modding! :3
Agnes
Oh dear God, why am I so LATE!? My apologies...

[Haruna-Normal]

No errors.

[Rito-Hard]

No errors.

[Lala-Insane]

00:18:761 (2,3) - Check spacing?
00:49:501 (7,8) - ^
01:16:635 (8,9) - ^


Lovely map. :D Star'd!
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks for modding Agnes, but the spacings are fine >.< I don't want to change it.
Agnes

osuplayer111 wrote:

Thanks for modding Agnes, but the spacings are fine >.< I don't want to change it.
No worries! Forgot to mark them as suggestions. D:
AngelHoney
Hard

01:29:728 (2) - repeat to this slider ?

nice map

star~ :) :)
Topic Starter
Andrea

AngelHoney wrote:

Hard

01:29:728 (2) - repeat to this slider ?

nice map

star~ :) :)
Fixed. And thanks for your star :)
Skyripper
little irc fix

bubbled
Topic Starter
Andrea
Yay thanks!
abalee
fine for ranking.
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