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I-didn't-see-anything-wrong~
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Thanks for modding bro :3Mafiamaster wrote:
I-didn't-see-anything-wrong~
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Increased volume of the mp3 for a better play.
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Thanks ShaggoN ^_^
nice map... n_n really fun
only a few suggestions in Normal
01:11:51 - add a note here..
01:12:46 - same
01:27:64 - same
good luck
Star!
only a few suggestions in Normal
01:11:51 - add a note here..
01:12:46 - same
01:27:64 - same
good luck
Star!
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Thanks Liz, but i don't want add more notes, is too much normal xDLizbeth wrote:
nice map... n_n really fun
only a few suggestions in Normal
01:11:51 - add a note here..
01:12:46 - same
01:27:64 - same
good luck
Star!
Overall:
custom colours: black ---> no. I suggest yellow
Normal:
00:40:968 (7) = new combo
Hard:
00:39:450 (3) = new combo
00:40:968 (7) = new combo
01:11:329 (8) = new combo
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custom colours: black ---> no. I suggest yellow
Normal:
00:40:968 (7) = new combo
Hard:
00:39:450 (3) = new combo
00:40:968 (7) = new combo
01:11:329 (8) = new combo
starred
Topic Starter
All fixed, thank you ^^xxheroxx wrote:
Overall:
custom colours: black ---> no. I suggest yellow
Normal:
00:40:968 (7) = new combo
Hard:
00:39:450 (3) = new combo
00:40:968 (7) = new combo
01:11:329 (8) = new combo
starred
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Thanks, updated. You can re-check and maybe bubble please? :3vytalibus wrote:
Sounds a bit late. I got 165 ms as my offset.
@Lissette: Thanks for starz.
[Overall]
- hitcircle image needs to be cropped to fit with overlay. Here's fixed version (I also killed some weird jpg artifacts and applied glass effect like in original hitcircle):
- OH MY GOD THAT SPINNER IS SOOOO UGLY. I really, really suggest removing it or at least fixing those ugly edges.
- all sounds are broken, I couldnt run them with anything. Either fix or delete them.
[Normal]
00:29:95 (7) - (suggestion) new combo?
00:31:47 (1) - (suggestion) remove new combo?
00:42:85 (1,2,3,4,5) - (suggestion) I'd remove it and place spinner here instead.
00:44:56 (1) - 1/2 shorter.
00:44:94 (x) - place circle here.
00:59:36 (1) - I dont like slider like this one.
01:11:32 (7) - place a 1/4 slider with one repeat here.
01:11:70 (8) - as above.
01:11:89 (9) - and then remove this note.
01:29:91 (2,3) - 1/2 earlier.
01:31:15 (1) - 1/4 earlier and longer.
[Hard]
Sudden triples are ugly.
00:23:69 (1,2,3) - (suggestion) remove (2).
00:43:23 (3,4,5) - eaither remove (4) or place notes at 00:43:523, 00:43:713 and 00:43:903 to create longer 1/4 stream.
00:47:60 (1,2,3) - (suggestion) remove (2).
00:54:62 (6) - slider here?
00:55:95 (10,1) - WTF spacing. Fix it.
00:58:79 (7,8,9) - (suggestion) remove (8).
00:59:36 (1) - like in Normal - ugly.
Will star what you fix that ugly spinner and the rst of skin issues.
- hitcircle image needs to be cropped to fit with overlay. Here's fixed version (I also killed some weird jpg artifacts and applied glass effect like in original hitcircle):
- OH MY GOD THAT SPINNER IS SOOOO UGLY. I really, really suggest removing it or at least fixing those ugly edges.
- all sounds are broken, I couldnt run them with anything. Either fix or delete them.
[Normal]
00:29:95 (7) - (suggestion) new combo?
00:31:47 (1) - (suggestion) remove new combo?
00:42:85 (1,2,3,4,5) - (suggestion) I'd remove it and place spinner here instead.
00:44:56 (1) - 1/2 shorter.
00:44:94 (x) - place circle here.
00:59:36 (1) - I dont like slider like this one.
01:11:32 (7) - place a 1/4 slider with one repeat here.
01:11:70 (8) - as above.
01:11:89 (9) - and then remove this note.
01:29:91 (2,3) - 1/2 earlier.
01:31:15 (1) - 1/4 earlier and longer.
[Hard]
Sudden triples are ugly.
00:23:69 (1,2,3) - (suggestion) remove (2).
00:43:23 (3,4,5) - eaither remove (4) or place notes at 00:43:523, 00:43:713 and 00:43:903 to create longer 1/4 stream.
00:47:60 (1,2,3) - (suggestion) remove (2).
00:54:62 (6) - slider here?
00:55:95 (10,1) - WTF spacing. Fix it.
00:58:79 (7,8,9) - (suggestion) remove (8).
00:59:36 (1) - like in Normal - ugly.
Will star what you fix that ugly spinner and the rst of skin issues.
Topic Starter
Some changes, done, thank you a lot.Matma Rex wrote:
[Overall]
- hitcircle image needs to be cropped to fit with overlay. Here's fixed version (I also killed some weird jpg artifacts and applied glass effect like in original hitcircle): [attachment=0:105b1]hitcircle.png[/attachment:105b1]
- OH MY GOD THAT SPINNER IS SOOOO UGLY. I really, really suggest removing it or at least fixing those ugly edges.
- all sounds are broken, I couldnt run them with anything. Either fix or delete them.
[Normal]
00:29:95 (7) - (suggestion) new combo?
00:31:47 (1) - (suggestion) remove new combo?
00:42:85 (1,2,3,4,5) - (suggestion) I'd remove it and place spinner here instead.
00:44:56 (1) - 1/2 shorter.
00:44:94 (x) - place circle here.
00:59:36 (1) - I dont like slider like this one.
01:11:32 (7) - place a 1/4 slider with one repeat here.
01:11:70 (8) - as above.
01:11:89 (9) - and then remove this note.
01:29:91 (2,3) - 1/2 earlier.
01:31:15 (1) - 1/4 earlier and longer.
[Hard]
Sudden triples are ugly.
00:23:69 (1,2,3) - (suggestion) remove (2).
00:43:23 (3,4,5) - eaither remove (4) or place notes at 00:43:523, 00:43:713 and 00:43:903 to create longer 1/4 stream.
00:47:60 (1,2,3) - (suggestion) remove (2).
00:54:62 (6) - slider here?
00:55:95 (10,1) - WTF spacing. Fix it.
00:58:79 (7,8,9) - (suggestion) remove (8).
00:59:36 (1) - like in Normal - ugly.
Will star what you fix that ugly spinner and the rst of skin issues.
Anyway i don't change the skin because i've used all times for to love ru maps.
Star it if you want xD
good map . really
star
star
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Topic Starter
Please BATs check this map! I'm sure is perfect.
Sorry for hte late mod...
[Haruna-Normal]
00:54:43(x)-Add a note here?
01:29:16(x)-^
[Lala-Hard]
Nothing foud~
Star~
[Haruna-Normal]
00:54:43(x)-Add a note here?
01:29:16(x)-^
[Lala-Hard]
Nothing foud~
Star~
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding :3
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This is my last To LOVE Ru map. Any BAT can check it now?
Please use BG that have both Lala and Haruna =_="
PreviewTime: 62,404
Video offset: 300
Mods below are suggestions, don't hate me ;__;
01:02:404~01:26:502 - Kiai times
~Normal~
01:11:70 (2) - move 1/2 left
~Hard~
00:06:61 (5) - too much above o_o
00:07:85 (2) - delete
00:11:07 (3) - ^
00:16:76 (4) - ^
00:23:78 (2) - ^
00:29:387 - add circle
00:47:69 (2) - delete
01:24:60 (10,1) - NO!!! DX
+Star
PreviewTime: 62,404
Video offset: 300
Mods below are suggestions, don't hate me ;__;
01:02:404~01:26:502 - Kiai times
~Normal~
01:11:70 (2) - move 1/2 left
~Hard~
00:06:61 (5) - too much above o_o
00:07:85 (2) - delete
00:11:07 (3) - ^
00:16:76 (4) - ^
00:23:78 (2) - ^
00:29:387 - add circle
00:47:69 (2) - delete
01:24:60 (10,1) - NO!!! DX
+Star
Topic Starter
Some suggestions fixed, thanks.DJPop wrote:
Please use BG that have both Lala and Haruna =_="
PreviewTime: 62,404
Video offset: 300
Mods below are suggestions, don't hate me ;__;
01:02:404~01:26:502 - Kiai times
~Normal~
01:11:70 (2) - move 1/2 left
~Hard~
00:06:61 (5) - too much above o_o
00:07:85 (2) - delete
00:11:07 (3) - ^
00:16:76 (4) - ^
00:23:78 (2) - ^
00:29:387 - add circle
00:47:69 (2) - delete
01:24:60 (10,1) - NO!!! DX
+Star
tomatsu ~~ 
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Thanks maxwelldemon for revive this map
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Map is finally ready for BAT
Please check this >_<
Please check this >_<
Mod Infos:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Haruna-Easy]
This is a Normal D:
[Rito-Normal]
It's ok
[Lala-Hard]
00:18:019 (9) - New combo
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Haruna-Easy]
This is a Normal D:
[Rito-Normal]
It's ok
[Lala-Hard]
00:18:019 (9) - New combo
Topic Starter
Fixed the "New combo", thanks for moddingxxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Haruna-Easy]
This is a Normal D:
[Rito-Normal]
It's ok
[Lala-Hard]
00:18:019 (9) - New combo
Hitsounds are too loud in some parts and the custom claps are too soft.
~Haruna-Easy~
Delete unused timing sections and fix them.
00:16:048 (6) - hitwhistle
01:30:067 (3) - move up a bit
~Rito-Normal~
01:09:080 (3) - move left 2 grids (Lv3)
~Lala-Hard~
00:45:013 (3,4) - confused
01:23:046 (7) - new combo
01:24:060 (10,1) - too far D:
01:32:038 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - move down near the center?
You've already got my star
~Haruna-Easy~
Delete unused timing sections and fix them.
00:16:048 (6) - hitwhistle
01:30:067 (3) - move up a bit
~Rito-Normal~
01:09:080 (3) - move left 2 grids (Lv3)
~Lala-Hard~
00:45:013 (3,4) - confused
01:23:046 (7) - new combo
01:24:060 (10,1) - too far D:
01:32:038 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - move down near the center?
You've already got my star
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding, some suggestions fixed.DJPop wrote:
Hitsounds are too loud in some parts and the custom claps are too soft.
~Haruna-Easy~
Delete unused timing sections and fix them.
00:16:048 (6) - hitwhistle
01:30:067 (3) - move up a bit
~Rito-Normal~
01:09:080 (3) - move left 2 grids (Lv3)
~Lala-Hard~
00:45:013 (3,4) - confused
01:23:046 (7) - new combo
01:24:060 (10,1) - too far D:
01:32:038 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - move down near the center?
You've already got my star
[General]
Umm, the no-video version is being weird for me, containing the wrong .osu files and stuff. Try another full upload.
Video itself is poorly sized.
Might as well use a higher resolution one, if it's available. Also, you should remove the audio track to reduce file size.
Many of the timing sections might be better 1/4 earlier, but I'll leave those up to your discretion, I'll point out the more important ones.
00:13:082 (1) - Hitsounds felt too quiet, anything that wasn't a whistle was hard to hear. (notably, the triplet on Insane a bit later in the section) As a whole, hitsounds could be louder, I suppose.
01:24:098 - Move the timing section 1/4 or 1/2 earlier.
Spinner skin was a bit bright for my eyes, but not too bad.
The lack of spinners on Normal may cause an easily reachable max score.
Anything below this is pretty much anazi minor cosmetic thing.
[Haruna-Normal]
01:30:067 (3) - Shift this up to align with 2, 4?
[Rito-Hard]
00:23:031 (2) - Shift this a grid right for a better triangle?
00:38:068 (2) - Check your symmetry.
01:20:024 (8) - Slightly not in line with 6, 7. Looks kinda weird.
[Lala-Insane]
Looks good.
Star~
Umm, the no-video version is being weird for me, containing the wrong .osu files and stuff. Try another full upload.
Video itself is poorly sized.
Might as well use a higher resolution one, if it's available. Also, you should remove the audio track to reduce file size.Many of the timing sections might be better 1/4 earlier, but I'll leave those up to your discretion, I'll point out the more important ones.
00:13:082 (1) - Hitsounds felt too quiet, anything that wasn't a whistle was hard to hear. (notably, the triplet on Insane a bit later in the section) As a whole, hitsounds could be louder, I suppose.
01:24:098 - Move the timing section 1/4 or 1/2 earlier.
Spinner skin was a bit bright for my eyes, but not too bad.
The lack of spinners on Normal may cause an easily reachable max score.
Anything below this is pretty much a
[Haruna-Normal]
01:30:067 (3) - Shift this up to align with 2, 4?
[Rito-Hard]
00:23:031 (2) - Shift this a grid right for a better triangle?
00:38:068 (2) - Check your symmetry.
01:20:024 (8) - Slightly not in line with 6, 7. Looks kinda weird.
[Lala-Insane]
Looks good.
Star~
[Haruna-Normal]
00:02:631 (x) - Place note here
00:39:443 (x) - Place note here with new combo
00:39:633 (1) - No new combo
[Rito-Hard]
00:15:155 (x) - Place note here
00:15:535 (x) - ^
00:47:223 (2) - Hold Shift button, if this object is straight, release it
00:49:690 (5) - Allign with 4
01:28:020 (x) - Place note here
01:28:400 (x) - ^
01:32:385 (1) - No new combo
01:32:764 (1) - ^
01:32:954 (1) - ^
01:33:144 (1) - ^
01:33:713 (1) - ^
01:34:092 (1) - ^
[Lala-Insane]
00:11:739 (6,7) - Allign with 5
00:12:878 (10) - Allign with 9
00:28:438 (5) - It's offscreen, find the place
00:28:817 (6) - ^
00:54:434 (5) - Hold Shift button, if this object is straight, release it
00:54:624 (6) - Allign with 5
01:03:352 (4) - Allign with 3
01:32:764 (1) - No new combo
01:32:954 (1) - ^
01:33:144 (1) - ^
01:33:713 (1) - ^
01:34:092 (1) - ^
Good song! STAR
00:02:631 (x) - Place note here
00:39:443 (x) - Place note here with new combo
00:39:633 (1) - No new combo
[Rito-Hard]
00:15:155 (x) - Place note here
00:15:535 (x) - ^
00:47:223 (2) - Hold Shift button, if this object is straight, release it
00:49:690 (5) - Allign with 4
01:28:020 (x) - Place note here
01:28:400 (x) - ^
01:32:385 (1) - No new combo
01:32:764 (1) - ^
01:32:954 (1) - ^
01:33:144 (1) - ^
01:33:713 (1) - ^
01:34:092 (1) - ^
[Lala-Insane]
00:11:739 (6,7) - Allign with 5
00:12:878 (10) - Allign with 9
00:28:438 (5) - It's offscreen, find the place
00:28:817 (6) - ^
00:54:434 (5) - Hold Shift button, if this object is straight, release it
00:54:624 (6) - Allign with 5
01:03:352 (4) - Allign with 3
01:32:764 (1) - No new combo
01:32:954 (1) - ^
01:33:144 (1) - ^
01:33:713 (1) - ^
01:34:092 (1) - ^
Good song! STAR
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding Kytoxid & Leorda ^^
00:13:044, all difficulties - It's better to put the new timing section before the actual note if you're doing it for volume or hitsounds, because if people hit the note early, the new sound settings wouldn't have happened yet. Especially if you add a finish onto that note, then it's necessary.
In my opinion, silenced spinners are one of the worst things ever.
[Haruna-Normal]
If you want to remap everything, you can increase distance snap
00:13:044 (6) - Add finish
01:32:076 (1) - Add finish on start and end
01:33:071 (2,3) - Add finish
[Rito-Hard]
00:05:009 (1,2,3,4) - Add a hitsound somewhere. It feels empty.
00:13:044 (8) - Add a finish?
[Lala-Insane]
00:13:044 (11) - Add a finish?
In my opinion, silenced spinners are one of the worst things ever.
[Haruna-Normal]
If you want to remap everything, you can increase distance snap
00:13:044 (6) - Add finish
01:32:076 (1) - Add finish on start and end
01:33:071 (2,3) - Add finish
[Rito-Hard]
00:05:009 (1,2,3,4) - Add a hitsound somewhere. It feels empty.
00:13:044 (8) - Add a finish?
[Lala-Insane]
00:13:044 (11) - Add a finish?
Normal
Hard
Insane
spinnerspin.wav and spinnerbonus.wav are 0KB large, and they are probably corrupted.
SPOILER
00:02:063 (x) : Add a beat here.
Very good.
00:02:063 (x) : Add a beat here.
Very good.
Hard
SPOILER
00:33:018 (2,3,4) : Bad idea for a stack, because the notes aren't in a pattern.
00:53:029 (1,2,3) : Bad idea for a stack, because the notes aren't in a pattern.
01:11:032 (1,2,3) : Bad idea for a stack, because the notes aren't in a pattern.
01:18:091 (5) : Extend by 3 ticks.
01:19:048 (6) : Delete this if you do the above suggestion.
01:30:010 (x) : Add a slider here that lasts for two ticks.
01:30:029 (3) : Delete if you do the above suggestion.
01:30:067 (x) : Add a beat here.
01:31:005 (x) : Add a beat here.
00:33:018 (2,3,4) : Bad idea for a stack, because the notes aren't in a pattern.
00:53:029 (1,2,3) : Bad idea for a stack, because the notes aren't in a pattern.
01:11:032 (1,2,3) : Bad idea for a stack, because the notes aren't in a pattern.
01:18:091 (5) : Extend by 3 ticks.
01:19:048 (6) : Delete this if you do the above suggestion.
01:30:010 (x) : Add a slider here that lasts for two ticks.
01:30:029 (3) : Delete if you do the above suggestion.
01:30:067 (x) : Add a beat here.
01:31:005 (x) : Add a beat here.
Insane
SPOILER
00:56:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6) : Clap hitsound.
Very Good.
00:56:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6) : Clap hitsound.
Very Good.
spinnerspin.wav and spinnerbonus.wav are 0KB large, and they are probably corrupted.
The map was great~
I could only pick up some nazi~
[Hard]
00:49:069 (5) - Move 1 grid up?
01:20:024 (8) - Move 1 grid right?
[Insane]
00:12:087 (10) - Move 1 grid up?
Also I like the diffs' name Easy,Normal,Hard~
No kudosu for this post~
I could only pick up some nazi~
[Hard]
00:49:069 (5) - Move 1 grid up?
01:20:024 (8) - Move 1 grid right?
[Insane]
00:12:087 (10) - Move 1 grid up?
Also I like the diffs' name Easy,Normal,Hard~
No kudosu for this post~
Topic Starter
Thanks Dusty, LoogieSquared and kino77 for modding! :3
Oh dear God, why am I so LATE!? My apologies...
[Haruna-Normal]
No errors.
[Rito-Hard]
No errors.
[Lala-Insane]
00:18:761 (2,3) - Check spacing?
00:49:501 (7,8) - ^
01:16:635 (8,9) - ^
Lovely map. Star'd!
[Haruna-Normal]
No errors.
[Rito-Hard]
No errors.
[Lala-Insane]
00:18:761 (2,3) - Check spacing?
00:49:501 (7,8) - ^
01:16:635 (8,9) - ^
Lovely map.
Star'd!
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding Agnes, but the spacings are fine >.< I don't want to change it.
No worries! Forgot to mark them as suggestions. D:osuplayer111 wrote:
Thanks for modding Agnes, but the spacings are fine >.< I don't want to change it.
Hard
01:29:728 (2) - repeat to this slider ?
nice map
star~
01:29:728 (2) - repeat to this slider ?
nice map
star~
Topic Starter
Fixed. And thanks for your starAngelHoney wrote:
Hard
01:29:728 (2) - repeat to this slider ?
nice map
star~
little irc fix
bubbled
bubbled
Topic Starter
Yay thanks!
fine for ranking.