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SHK - Death Moon

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Deye
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年4月21日 at 16:22:03

Artist: SHK
Title: Death Moon
Source: O2jam
Tags: tsukamaete
BPM: 80
Filesize: 3490kb
Play Time: 02:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.74 stars, 173 notes)
  2. Hard (4.86 stars, 365 notes)
  3. Normal (4.1 stars, 289 notes)
  4. SHD (4.96 stars, 556 notes)
Download: SHK - Death Moon
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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The song from o2jam

Easy done
Hard done
SHD done (by tsukamaete)

Special Thanks(Mod):

tsukamaete("She" is cool boy)
jamesleao
himydanny
awp
Hanyuu
Slanox
LKs
yaya
Breeze
xierbaliti
gdeath
Chacha17
DJPop
abalee

Now pending.

Sorry for my poor English,= =
tsuka
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: SHK - Death Moon (Dr_dy) [SHD Tsuka](1).osu
acethical
[7Key!!]
02:05:068 (1,2,3) - distance
02:05:818 (4,5,6) - distance
这几个间距不同, 很难受
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nice beatmap
kuyepaw
先支持下~再去玩~(溜走
wayNe-l5
新的音质更好的音乐文件已经上传~
不过还是有一定缺陷,期待更好音质的音乐文件~
myhx2004
加油啊 小五 。。。。
JamesLeao
i think use chinese is better :)

kiai time 别一直闪到结束,时间短点

换个高音质的mp3吧,这个很渣啊

14key!!!:
00:02:156 , 00:05:156 , 00:08:156 , 00:11:156 - 4 spinners 结尾用无声如何?
01:29:818 (3) - slider结束于01:30:005?
02:29:068 (1,2,3,4) - slider结束于02:29:255,02:29:630,02:30:005,02:30:380?

Tsuka SHD:
01:29:068-01:31:880 - 我感觉这里是不是newcombo多了点
02:09:568 (1,2) - 分别结束于02:09:943,02:10:693?
02:11:068-02:16:880 - 个人不太喜欢这一段

7Key!!:
Fine

5Key!:
Fine

你的变速timing是用note tool在ojn里面看的么?先不说timing,其他方面都很好,我觉得第一张map这样子的话真是无敌了,不会是马甲吧?

however , awesme map !
Topic Starter
Deye

jamesleao wrote:

i think use chinese is better :)

kiai time 别一直闪到结束,时间短点

换个高音质的mp3吧,这个很渣啊

14key!!!:
00:02:156 , 00:05:156 , 00:08:156 , 00:11:156 - 4 spinners 结尾用无声如何?
01:29:818 (3) - slider结束于01:30:005?
02:29:068 (1,2,3,4) - slider结束于02:29:255,02:29:630,02:30:005,02:30:380?

Tsuka SHD:
01:29:068-01:31:880 - 我感觉这里是不是newcombo多了点
02:09:568 (1,2) - 分别结束于02:09:943,02:10:693?
02:11:068-02:16:880 - 个人不太喜欢这一段

7Key!!:
Fine

5Key!:
Fine

你的变速timing是用note tool在ojn里面看的么?先不说timing,其他方面都很好,我觉得第一张map这样子的话真是无敌了,不会是马甲吧?

however , awesme map !

我只知道那段bpm的速度是匀速下降的,所以就开始蒙着试了。

但不能否认的是,这不是第一张map……有很多感觉不好的没有传……这个算是和触卡一起做的map了,他帮了我很多忙。

mp3的音质问题……我真的是找不到好音质的了= =去分贝找也只找到一个WMA格式的……

kiai确实是有问题,我自己也觉得不舒服。

Tsuka SHD难度我去联系触卡吧,这个是他做的难度。

囧,14key!!!在更改slider velocity时没有仔细调整sliders……我的错……

kiai以及合适的音效已修改,非常感谢你的意见~XD
neobear_old
音质很渣....下次我帮你找找吧....
xierbaliti
好图 !

star
nomadop
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Aenna
star :twisted:
himydanny
做的真的不错,稍加修改完全可以rank

SHD Tsuka:

00:13:125(1): 难以理解,不在调上,是不是offset line用错了?
01:27:943(SP): 把第一个spinner停在这里
01:28:130(SP): 第二个spinner从这里开始转,转到01:28:693(白线
01:29:068(1): 添一个slider从这里到后面的红线(01:29:255
01:38:068(1~5): 缩小间距
01:38:818(1~5): ^
01:54:943(4): 加一个circle
02:00:943(5): ^
02:02:068(7): 长一个格子, 让拐点在蓝线上(02:02:630
02:03:568(8): 添一个slider,从这里到后面的红线
02:08:255(1): slider停在这里
02:09:568(1): 为啥从这往后的slider都停在蓝线上了,完全不在节奏上,是不是改slider速度的时候没有重新计算slider长度?这些都要改了,停在红线或者白线上。
02:28:879(9): 换个位置,害人
02:38:067(SP): 停在这里

14Key!!!

01:12:943(4): 近了,重摆
01:14:443(4): ^
02:06:943(2): ^
02:12:943(2): ^

其他都很不错,希望早日见到这图rank!

kud star来一发!

p.s: 没有建设性的留言不要给kud,小心bat来找碴(我就被找过……TAT
Topic Starter
Deye

himydanny wrote:

做的真的不错,稍加修改完全可以rank

SHD Tsuka:

00:13:125(1): 难以理解,不在调上,是不是offset line用错了?
01:27:943(SP): 把第一个spinner停在这里
01:28:130(SP): 第二个spinner从这里开始转,转到01:28:693(白线
01:29:068(1): 添一个slider从这里到后面的红线(01:29:255
01:38:068(1~5): 缩小间距
01:38:818(1~5): ^
01:54:943(4): 加一个circle
02:00:943(5): ^
02:02:068(7): 长一个格子, 让拐点在蓝线上(02:02:630
02:03:568(8): 添一个slider,从这里到后面的红线
02:08:255(1): slider停在这里
02:09:568(1): 为啥从这往后的slider都停在蓝线上了,完全不在节奏上,是不是改slider速度的时候没有重新计算slider长度?这些都要改了,停在红线或者白线上。
02:28:879(9): 换个位置,害人
02:38:067(SP): 停在这里

14Key!!!

01:12:943(4): 近了,重摆
01:14:443(4): ^
02:06:943(2): ^
02:12:943(2): ^

其他都很不错,希望早日见到这图rank!

kud star来一发!

p.s: 没有建设性的留言不要给kud,小心bat来找碴(我就被找过……TAT



1.14key!!! 已经修改,并且另作改动。那几个位置确实短了一点,改过slider长度之后疏忽了= =OMG下次还是做前就确定slider为好,不然改动起来郁闷啊……

2.SHD Tsuka 就交给触卡去修改好了……

3.抱歉最近沉迷wow中了,很久没有注意,kud延迟了些很不好意思 :D

4.不能随便给?不是吧……我刚刚顺便一溜下来就全给了kud……结果最下面发现你这句话……汗哦,下回注意一下好了……
hi_osu_old
拍手的音效不太适合。
offset不是太准,大概有15ms偏差。
如果前后两个timing setion的BPM一致,请inhert。或者使用BPM adjustment来调整160 和80 BPM,最好不要用红线。

A fine start for a new mapper.
No KDs for this post.Please and Thanks.
Topic Starter
Deye

hi_osu wrote:

拍手的音效不太适合。
offset不是太准,大概有15ms偏差。
如果前后两个timing setion的BPM一致,请inhert。或者使用BPM adjustment来调整160 和80 BPM,最好不要用红线。

A fine start for a new mapper.
No KDs for this post.Please and Thanks.

呃,音效设定是硬伤,设定成这样大概是某只的极限……可否稍微指点一下改动的地方?
offset的话……我用50%去听,似乎没看出什么不妥……不知道是偏早15ms还是偏晚15ms?
至于红线……根本就是不懂E文,完全不会用的缘故……
yaya
首先。我给你找到一个128kbps的mp3.你先把它换了。我都是从国外网站找的。320kbps要付费才能下种子。70块人民币一次。让他去死。然后重新测timing,不要嫌麻烦,嫌麻烦做不出好图来。你这张做的很棒。我会细细的给你说一下。

等你换好了。给我发站内信,我会再来看。

Download: death moon.rar
Topic Starter
Deye

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

首先。我给你找到一个128kbps的mp3.你先把它换了。我都是从国外网站找的。320kbps要付费才能下种子。70块人民币一次。让他去死。然后重新测timing,不要嫌麻烦,嫌麻烦做不出好图来。你这张做的很棒。我会细细的给你说一下。

等你换好了。给我发站内信,我会再来看。
嘛,首先非常感谢新的MP3文件~> <

然后,就像hi_osu说的,Timing确实是快了15ms……已经修改,变速的地方也已经重新测定~

最后……某这边马上熄灯……只能明早才能继续了……
yaya
首先说一下音效

不是你的拍手声不合。是你加的有点不合。拍手音是重音,重音一般都是在白线,所以记得拍手最好加在白线上,而且不要太多,不要两个三个一起使用。他起到的是一个鼓点的作用。哨音同样如此。重新修一下。触卡的难度也是这样,拍手加太多了。
14key的整张图hitsound音量开最大。因为音乐太吵。

触卡难度
02:11:08 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一串改掉不要。我觉得4分拍够用了。不要开8分拍,很难掌握

先说这么多。等全改完了。我再回来看
Topic Starter
Deye

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

首先说一下音效

不是你的拍手声不合。是你加的有点不合。拍手音是重音,重音一般都是在白线,所以记得拍手最好加在白线上,而且不要太多,不要两个三个一起使用。他起到的是一个鼓点的作用。哨音同样如此。重新修一下。触卡的难度也是这样,拍手加太多了。
14key的整张图hitsound音量开最大。因为音乐太吵。

触卡难度
02:11:08 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一串改掉不要。我觉得4分拍够用了。不要开8分拍,很难掌握

先说这么多。等全改完了。我再回来看

应该是已完成……
触卡的那串我改了,不过触卡的音效我没有动,让他自己去改吧……
Ex Boy
@~@ 好多紅線……好強的map……挺一下~~XD
yaya
触卡难度

02:14:08 (1,2) - 这里错了。空了一拍。不和谐。

02:26:08 (1) - 这里错了。两倍bpm。重新设置一下绿线。

14key难度刚开始的两个折返slider。不要设置无声,4-5格声音刚刚好~挺合背景的。

然后是你的BG.重新设置一遍。出错了。现在默认你的背景是黑色的。
Topic Starter
Deye
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yaya
那堆的意思是。你的文件夹里有一张BG你没有用。是不是要删掉那张。

触卡难度没有改。
Topic Starter
Deye
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yaya
触卡难度
00:15:001 (2) - 变速用绿线。改掉红线。
XepherX3
可能添加一些故事板到更加困难

非常好的映射

明星从我给你
Topic Starter
Deye
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awp
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Hanyuu
i love you thank you this great map :D :D
Hanyuu
hello can this mp3 help you?

Download: DEATH MOON.MP3
Topic Starter
Deye

Hanyuu wrote:

hello can this mp3 help you?

Thanks very much for you MP3.
I will change it soon.
DeadRamza
you have my star
:D
Chacha17
an offset of 1496 works fine for me for the first section, then i decreased other offsets by 100 except the slowing part sections.. i'm not that sure, but better ask a timing expert for this.

mp3 quality is better now. :D (the mp3 before hurts my ears ;_;)

These are only suggestions, it's up to you if you'll add them or not. :D

5Key:
00:59:044 (1,1) - these two spinners bother me. how about making the latter a slider?
01:29:068 to 01:40:693 : use soft hitsounds? or if you don't want to make the volume lower.. and uh, replace those claps w/ another hitsound (they sound ugly imo)
02:30:568 (1,2,3,4) - finish hitsounds? why claps

7Key:
01:53:083 - huh? normal hitsounds here?
02:38:458 (1) - remove the clap here?

14Key:
02:38:543 (1) - remove whistle?


Awesome map, and i like the song.

Here's a gray star . ;)
deepsea
o.o
Yuji Tokaji
Hi ;)

General

Set current position

[5Key!]

00:57:434(4) : Unsnapped

[Test14]

01:41:918(1) : Unsnapped
01:42:105(2) : Unsnapped
01:42:293(3) : Unsnapped
01:42:480(4) : Unsnapped
01:42:668(1) : Unsnapped
01:42:855(2) : Unsnapped
01:43:043(3) : Unsnapped
01:43:230(4) : Unsnapped
01:43:418(1) : Unsnapped
01:43:605(2) : Unsnapped
01:43:793(3) : Unsnapped
01:43:980(4) : Unsnapped
01:44:168(1) : Unsnapped
01:44:355(2) : Unsnapped
01:44:543(3) : Unsnapped
01:44:730(4) : Unsnapped
01:44:918(1) : Unsnapped
01:45:105(2) : Unsnapped
01:45:293(3) : Unsnapped
01:45:480(4) : Unsnapped
01:45:668(1) : Unsnapped
01:45:855(2) : Unsnapped
01:46:043(3) : Unsnapped
01:46:230(4) : Unsnapped
01:46:418(1) : Unsnapped
01:46:605(2) : Unsnapped
01:46:793(3) : Unsnapped
01:46:980(4) : Unsnapped
01:47:636(1) : Unsnapped
01:48:668(1) : Unsnapped
01:51:668(1) : Unsnapped


Star~
Topic Starter
Deye

Chacha17 wrote:

an offset of 1496 works fine for me for the first section, then i decreased other offsets by 100 except the slowing part sections.. i'm not that sure, but better ask a timing expert for this.

mp3 quality is better now. :D (the mp3 before hurts my ears ;_;)

These are only suggestions, it's up to you if you'll add them or not. :D

5Key:
00:59:044 (1,1) - these two spinners bother me. how about making the latter a slider?
01:29:068 to 01:40:693 : use soft hitsounds? or if you don't want to make the volume lower.. and uh, replace those claps w/ another hitsound (they sound ugly imo)
02:30:568 (1,2,3,4) - finish hitsounds? why claps

7Key:
01:53:083 - huh? normal hitsounds here?
02:38:458 (1) - remove the clap here?

14Key:
02:38:543 (1) - remove whistle?


Awesome map, and i like the song.

Here's a gray star . ;)

Thank you very much.I will finish the hitsound soon.
Topic Starter
Deye
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Yuji Tokaji
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Curisu
很好的一张图啊……

【5key!!】
[00.39.100]-[00.49.225]我觉得每个combo的第一个note用哨子比较好吧……拍掌听的有一点吃力


其他的难度 吾等新手玩的非常吃力……
Topic Starter
Deye

yangzd88 wrote:

很好的一张图啊……

【5key!!】
[00.39.100]-[00.49.225]我觉得每个combo的第一个note用哨子比较好吧……拍掌听的有一点吃力


其他的难度 吾等新手玩的非常吃力……

其他難度是給神玩的……據說我被normal難度秒殺……

多謝乃的建議,一會回家考慮,網吧木有osu……

其實我只會用拍手音效……(誤
Curisu

Dr_dy wrote:

yangzd88 wrote:

很好的一张图啊……

【5key!!】
[00.39.100]-[00.49.225]我觉得每个combo的第一个note用哨子比较好吧……拍掌听的有一点吃力


其他的难度 吾等新手玩的非常吃力……

其他難度是給神玩的……據說我被normal難度秒殺……

多謝乃的建議,一會回家考慮,網吧木有osu……

其實我只會用拍手音效……(誤
Hanyuu
please use this timing for BPM change!

Download: SHK - Death Moon (Dr_dy) [timing].osu
Topic Starter
Deye

Hanyuu wrote:

please use this timing for BPM change!
Now for Spring Festivals I had offline several days.Sorry for the late reply.

But in edit,50%speed,can see you timing have some deviation at the last several note.

Sorry for my poor English...

Also thank you very much.
LKs
offest和hitsound,周围太吵听不清,不过感觉不错
你需要填写TAGS , source
删除.osb文件并FULL UPDATE

5Key!因为有的间距设置的很好,所以间距不对就显得比较明显,我指出了一些比较严重的
其实你要是有精力最好全部recheck,好图就要精益求精
normal难度jump其实不太好
[00:17:33] 间距稍微远了点 resnap
[00:19:58] ^
[00:23:34] ^
[00;27:08] ^
[00:30:83] ^
[00:49:58] ^
[00:53:33] 从这里开始是不是要改一下间距?
[01:26:15] (1,2) 和slider3没对齐
[02:29:15] 这个间距不好,do something
[02:30:65] (1,2,3,4) 从这里开始来一个渐大的声音
[02:39:65] 结束kiai time

7Key!!
[01:25:40] 间距不太好
[02:17:90] 和slider1 平行
[02:21:65] 向右一格?
[02:24:65] (1~6) 圆圈和slider要重合的一丝不差
[02:26:90] 嘛,间距问题,其实在这里设置new combo会更好的
[02:38:52] no clap only finish
[02:39:65] 结束kiai time

10Key!!!


[00:53:33] 从这里开始是不是要改一下间距?
[01:40:02]& [01:40:77] 向上一格?
[02:39:65] 结束kiai time

SHD Tsuka
音效稍微多了点,其他good
tag和source里面都有 O2jam
所以删去tags里面的O2jam 留下 Tsuka SHK

只是一些间距让map还有一些问题
star for good map :)
Topic Starter
Deye

LKs wrote:

offest和hitsound,周围太吵听不清,不过感觉不错
你需要填写TAGS , source
删除.osb文件并FULL UPDATE

5Key!因为有的间距设置的很好,所以间距不对就显得比较明显,我指出了一些比较严重的
其实你要是有精力最好全部recheck,好图就要精益求精←于是这点令我郁闷,重做很多次,我尽力吧
normal难度jump其实不太好←确实
[00:17:33] 间距稍微远了点 resnap←done
[00:19:58] ^←done
[00:23:34] ^←done
[00;27:08] ^←done
[00:30:83] ^←done
[00:49:58] ^←done
[00:53:33] 从这里开始是不是要改一下间距?←这个难度的就算了……
[01:26:15] (1,2) 和slider3没对齐←您眼神真好,thanks
[02:29:15] 这个间距不好,do something←done
[02:30:65] (1,2,3,4) 从这里开始来一个渐大的声音←done
[02:39:65] 结束kiai time←done

7Key!!
[01:25:40] 间距不太好←well,but I think nothing
[02:17:90] 和slider1 平行←您眼神真好,thanks
[02:21:65] 向右一格?←done
[02:24:65] (1~6) 圆圈和slider要重合的一丝不差←您眼神真好,thanks
[02:26:90] 嘛,间距问题,其实在这里设置new combo会更好的←done
[02:38:52] no clap only finish←done
[02:39:65] 结束kiai time←done

10Key!!!


[00:53:33] 从这里开始是不是要改一下间距?←done
[01:40:02]& [01:40:77] 向上一格?←done
[02:39:65] 结束kiai time←done

SHD Tsuka
音效稍微多了点,其他good
tag和source里面都有 O2jam
所以删去tags里面的O2jam 留下 Tsuka SHK←so,I may notice Tsuka about it.

只是一些间距让map还有一些问题
star for good map :)
O_O-long
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Ana_Coppola
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xierbaliti
一些建议:
我觉得normal还是偏难 似乎还是需要1个easy
.osb没有用,删除。
设置1个PreviewTime。 01:03:559似乎不错?

-Normal-
HP-2
OA-1
00:33:085 (1) - +Finish
00:37:585 (1) - ^
00:56:698 (1,2,3,4) - 我建议缩小这4个的间距._. 作为低难度有些难读
00:59:172 (1,1) - 这2个没对准线
01:15:653这里开始用soft音效不适合 使用noraml音效 音量3.5~4 然后:
01:15:653 (1) - +finish
01:17:153 (1,2,3,4) - 去掉whistle (1)的开头+finish (2)(4)的开头+上clap (3)的开头+whistle
01:18:653 (1) - 换成finish
01:19:028 (2,4) - 换成clap
01:20:153 (1) - 开头+finish
01:21:653 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个和上1段1样
02:17:153 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个也是

-Hard-
01:29:903 (3) - +whistle
01:30:278 (5) - +clap
01:32:903 (3) - +whistle
01:33:278 (5) - +clap
01:35:903 (4) - +whistle
01:36:278 (6) - +clap
01:36:653 (1) - 开头+whistle
01:37:403 (3) - +whistle
01:38:903 (3) - ^
01:39:278 (5) - +clap
01:51:653 (1) - 结束在01:53:153 然后+上finish
02:17:153 ~ 02:28:965 我倾向于这样弄:
02:17:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (1)的开头+finish (2)+clap (4)用normal-hitnormal (5)+clap
02:22:403 (4,6) - +上whistle?

-insane-
02:12:653 (1) - 去掉clap
02:07:028 (3) - 去掉折返的clap+到末尾
02:13:590 (6,7) - 去掉6的clap +到7上

-触卡-
我希望能把note大1号 尽管简单了不少 但仍旧是很难 不过这样会更有趣 也会有更多人可以玩
01:29:153 (1) - +finish?
01:35:153 (1) - +finish?
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xierbaliti wrote:

一些建议:
我觉得normal还是偏难 似乎还是需要1个easy
.osb没有用,删除。
设置1个PreviewTime。 01:03:559似乎不错?

-Normal-
HP-2
OA-1
00:33:085 (1) - +Finish
00:37:585 (1) - ^
00:56:698 (1,2,3,4) - 我建议缩小这4个的间距._. 作为低难度有些难读
00:59:172 (1,1) - 这2个没对准线
01:15:653这里开始用soft音效不适合 使用noraml音效 音量3.5~4 然后:
01:15:653 (1) - +finish
01:17:153 (1,2,3,4) - 去掉whistle (1)的开头+finish (2)(4)的开头+上clap (3)的开头+whistle
01:18:653 (1) - 换成finish
01:19:028 (2,4) - 换成clap
01:20:153 (1) - 开头+finish
01:21:653 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个和上1段1样
02:17:153 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个也是

-Hard-
01:29:903 (3) - +whistle
01:30:278 (5) - +clap
01:32:903 (3) - +whistle
01:33:278 (5) - +clap
01:35:903 (4) - +whistle
01:36:278 (6) - +clap
01:36:653 (1) - 开头+whistle
01:37:403 (3) - +whistle
01:38:903 (3) - ^
01:39:278 (5) - +clap
01:51:653 (1) - 结束在01:53:153 然后+上finish
02:17:153 ~ 02:28:965 我倾向于这样弄:
02:17:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (1)的开头+finish (2)+clap (4)用normal-hitnormal (5)+clap
02:22:403 (4,6) - +上whistle?

-insane-
02:12:653 (1) - 去掉clap
02:07:028 (3) - 去掉折返的clap+到末尾
02:13:590 (6,7) - 去掉6的clap +到7上

-触卡-
我希望能把note大1号 尽管简单了不少 但仍旧是很难 不过这样会更有趣 也会有更多人可以玩
01:29:153 (1) - +finish?
01:35:153 (1) - +finish?

done.thanks~
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