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star~~~
一些建议:
我觉得normal还是偏难 似乎还是需要1个easy
.osb没有用，删除。
设置1个PreviewTime。 01:03:559似乎不错?
-Normal-
HP-2
OA-1
00:33:085 (1) - +Finish
00:37:585 (1) - ^
00:56:698 (1,2,3,4) - 我建议缩小这4个的间距._. 作为低难度有些难读
00:59:172 (1,1) - 这2个没对准线
01:15:653这里开始用soft音效不适合 使用noraml音效 音量3.5~4 然后：
01:15:653 (1) - +finish
01:17:153 (1,2,3,4) - 去掉whistle (1)的开头+finish (2)(4)的开头+上clap (3)的开头+whistle
01:18:653 (1) - 换成finish
01:19:028 (2,4) - 换成clap
01:20:153 (1) - 开头+finish
01:21:653 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个和上1段1样
02:17:153 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个也是
-Hard-
01:29:903 (3) - +whistle
01:30:278 (5) - +clap
01:32:903 (3) - +whistle
01:33:278 (5) - +clap
01:35:903 (4) - +whistle
01:36:278 (6) - +clap
01:36:653 (1) - 开头+whistle
01:37:403 (3) - +whistle
01:38:903 (3) - ^
01:39:278 (5) - +clap
01:51:653 (1) - 结束在01:53:153 然后+上finish
02:17:153 ~ 02:28:965 我倾向于这样弄:
02:17:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (1)的开头+finish (2)+clap (4)用normal-hitnormal (5)+clap
02:22:403 (4,6) - +上whistle？
-insane-
02:12:653 (1) - 去掉clap
02:07:028 (3) - 去掉折返的clap+到末尾
02:13:590 (6,7) - 去掉6的clap +到7上
-触卡-
我希望能把note大1号 尽管简单了不少 但仍旧是很难 不过这样会更有趣 也会有更多人可以玩
01:29:153 (1) - +finish?
01:35:153 (1) - +finish?
我觉得normal还是偏难 似乎还是需要1个easy
.osb没有用，删除。
设置1个PreviewTime。 01:03:559似乎不错?
-Normal-
HP-2
OA-1
00:33:085 (1) - +Finish
00:37:585 (1) - ^
00:56:698 (1,2,3,4) - 我建议缩小这4个的间距._. 作为低难度有些难读
00:59:172 (1,1) - 这2个没对准线
01:15:653这里开始用soft音效不适合 使用noraml音效 音量3.5~4 然后：
01:15:653 (1) - +finish
01:17:153 (1,2,3,4) - 去掉whistle (1)的开头+finish (2)(4)的开头+上clap (3)的开头+whistle
01:18:653 (1) - 换成finish
01:19:028 (2,4) - 换成clap
01:20:153 (1) - 开头+finish
01:21:653 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个和上1段1样
02:17:153 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个也是
-Hard-
01:29:903 (3) - +whistle
01:30:278 (5) - +clap
01:32:903 (3) - +whistle
01:33:278 (5) - +clap
01:35:903 (4) - +whistle
01:36:278 (6) - +clap
01:36:653 (1) - 开头+whistle
01:37:403 (3) - +whistle
01:38:903 (3) - ^
01:39:278 (5) - +clap
01:51:653 (1) - 结束在01:53:153 然后+上finish
02:17:153 ~ 02:28:965 我倾向于这样弄:
02:17:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (1)的开头+finish (2)+clap (4)用normal-hitnormal (5)+clap
02:22:403 (4,6) - +上whistle？
-insane-
02:12:653 (1) - 去掉clap
02:07:028 (3) - 去掉折返的clap+到末尾
02:13:590 (6,7) - 去掉6的clap +到7上
-触卡-
我希望能把note大1号 尽管简单了不少 但仍旧是很难 不过这样会更有趣 也会有更多人可以玩
01:29:153 (1) - +finish?
01:35:153 (1) - +finish?
Topic Starter
xierbaliti wrote:
一些建议:
我觉得normal还是偏难 似乎还是需要1个easy
.osb没有用，删除。
设置1个PreviewTime。 01:03:559似乎不错?
-Normal-
HP-2
OA-1
00:33:085 (1) - +Finish
00:37:585 (1) - ^
00:56:698 (1,2,3,4) - 我建议缩小这4个的间距._. 作为低难度有些难读
00:59:172 (1,1) - 这2个没对准线
01:15:653这里开始用soft音效不适合 使用noraml音效 音量3.5~4 然后：
01:15:653 (1) - +finish
01:17:153 (1,2,3,4) - 去掉whistle (1)的开头+finish (2)(4)的开头+上clap (3)的开头+whistle
01:18:653 (1) - 换成finish
01:19:028 (2,4) - 换成clap
01:20:153 (1) - 开头+finish
01:21:653 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个和上1段1样
02:17:153 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个也是
-Hard-
01:29:903 (3) - +whistle
01:30:278 (5) - +clap
01:32:903 (3) - +whistle
01:33:278 (5) - +clap
01:35:903 (4) - +whistle
01:36:278 (6) - +clap
01:36:653 (1) - 开头+whistle
01:37:403 (3) - +whistle
01:38:903 (3) - ^
01:39:278 (5) - +clap
01:51:653 (1) - 结束在01:53:153 然后+上finish
02:17:153 ~ 02:28:965 我倾向于这样弄:
02:17:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (1)的开头+finish (2)+clap (4)用normal-hitnormal (5)+clap
02:22:403 (4,6) - +上whistle？
-insane-
02:12:653 (1) - 去掉clap
02:07:028 (3) - 去掉折返的clap+到末尾
02:13:590 (6,7) - 去掉6的clap +到7上
-触卡-
我希望能把note大1号 尽管简单了不少 但仍旧是很难 不过这样会更有趣 也会有更多人可以玩
01:29:153 (1) - +finish?
01:35:153 (1) - +finish?
done.thanks~
只有红色部分是我觉得你应该改的,其他的都只是建议
[General]
做了修改后再PM我吧,timing好像前面也有专业的人看过了,可以准备给pubble了
[General]
- 所有难度需要设一个合适的preview time,喜儿给你说过你没加么o.o. 找到一个合适的时间点,移到那后选择Timing - Set Current Postion as Preview
- 00:07:210 (2) - 按你加whistle的规律的话,应该这里加个whistle? 然后去掉slider开头的whistle?
- 00:27:085 (T) - 这个timing section最好放前面一点,因为有音量改变,如果玩的时候点早了,音效会是前面timing section的音效
- 00:27:085 (1) - 加finish
- 00:39:085 (T) - 放前面一点,后面一些有音量改变音效改变的都最好放前面一点
- 01:03:653 - 这里开始最大声都行,背景音乐太大声了orz
- 01:51:653 (S) - 和前面的spinner合并成一个spinner比较好,两个连续的spinner对于新手来说比较难
- 01:53:153 (S) - spinner在这结束比较好,然后再加个finish音
- 02:05:153 (1) - spacing稍远,改不改随你
- 02:38:153 (S) - 加finish
- fine
- 为什么让我感到了v2b的感觉 o_O
- 00:42:835 (6) - new combo比较好
- 00:51:085 - 噗,这一串玩的时候都从左上角开始往中间堆了
- fine
做了修改后再PM我吧,timing好像前面也有专业的人看过了,可以准备给pubble了
timing 还是不准 反正不急
Overall :
Set a PreviewTime in all difficulties(Timing--->>Set Current Position as Preview Point)
[Normal]
01:51:653 (1) - make it end on 01:53:153 or make it totally silence(suggestion)
[Hard]
01:51:653 (1) - i'd make it totally silence(suggestion)
[SHD]
fine
[Insane]
01:02:153 (1,2,3,4) - set green line for each note and adjust the volume louder and louder(suggestion)
eg:01:02:153 (1) - volume 35%
01:02:528 (2) - volume 60%
01:02:903 (3) - volume 70%
01:03:278 (4) - volume 80%
------------------------------------------------
01:51:653 (1) - i'd make it totally silence(suggestion)
Extraordinarily done well.
Star!
Set a PreviewTime in all difficulties(Timing--->>Set Current Position as Preview Point)
[Normal]
01:51:653 (1) - make it end on 01:53:153 or make it totally silence(suggestion)
[Hard]
01:51:653 (1) - i'd make it totally silence(suggestion)
[SHD]
fine
[Insane]
01:02:153 (1,2,3,4) - set green line for each note and adjust the volume louder and louder(suggestion)
eg:01:02:153 (1) - volume 35%
01:02:528 (2) - volume 60%
01:02:903 (3) - volume 70%
01:03:278 (4) - volume 80%
------------------------------------------------
01:51:653 (1) - i'd make it totally silence(suggestion)
Extraordinarily done well.
Star!
star~
Topic Starter
Breeze wrote:
只有红色部分是我觉得你应该改的,其他的都只是建议
[General][Easy]
- 所有难度需要设一个合适的preview time,喜儿给你说过你没加么o.o. 找到一个合适的时间点,移到那后选择Timing - Set Current Postion as Preview
[Normal]
- 00:07:210 (2) - 按你加whistle的规律的话,应该这里加个whistle? 然后去掉slider开头的whistle?
- 00:27:085 (T) - 这个timing section最好放前面一点,因为有音量改变,如果玩的时候点早了,音效会是前面timing section的音效
- 00:27:085 (1) - 加finish
- 00:39:085 (T) - 放前面一点,后面一些有音量改变音效改变的都最好放前面一点
- 01:03:653 - 这里开始最大声都行,背景音乐太大声了orz
- 01:51:653 (S) - 和前面的spinner合并成一个spinner比较好,两个连续的spinner对于新手来说比较难
[Hard]
- 01:53:153 (S) - spinner在这结束比较好,然后再加个finish音
- 02:05:153 (1) - spacing稍远,改不改随你
- 02:38:153 (S) - 加finish
[SHD]
- fine
- 为什么让我感到了v2b的感觉 o_O
[Insane]
- 00:42:835 (6) - new combo比较好
- 00:51:085 - 噗,这一串玩的时候都从左上角开始往中间堆了
awesome map
- fine
做了修改后再PM我吧,timing好像前面也有专业的人看过了,可以准备给pubble了
well.done.cool suggestions.
preview time我还真没注意到，实话说，直到现在我才知道有这么个东西……
Topic Starter
gdeath wrote:
Overall :
Set a PreviewTime in all difficulties(Timing--->>Set Current Position as Preview Point)
[Normal]
01:51:653 (1) - make it end on 01:53:153 or make it totally silence(suggestion)
[Hard]
01:51:653 (1) - i'd make it totally silence(suggestion)
[SHD]
fine
[Insane]
01:02:153 (1,2,3,4) - set green line for each note and adjust the volume louder and louder(suggestion)
eg:01:02:153 (1) - volume 35%
01:02:528 (2) - volume 60%
01:02:903 (3) - volume 70%
01:03:278 (4) - volume 80%
------------------------------------------------
01:51:653 (1) - i'd make it totally silence(suggestion)
Extraordinarily done well.
Star!
thanks for you cool suggestions!音量美!
你还是没设preview time,这个是必须设的
找到一个合适的时间点,移到那后选择Timing - Set Current Postion as Preview,所有难度的必须一致
另外所有难度其实不需要audio lead-in,这个改不改随你
no kudosu for this post
加好preview time再PM我
找到一个合适的时间点,移到那后选择Timing - Set Current Postion as Preview,所有难度的必须一致
另外所有难度其实不需要audio lead-in,这个改不改随你
no kudosu for this post
加好preview time再PM我
Topic Starter
好吧我承认我对这个 预览时间 的理解出现问题了……Breeze wrote:
你还是没设preview time,这个是必须设的
找到一个合适的时间点,移到那后选择Timing - Set Current Postion as Preview,所有难度的必须一致
另外所有难度其实不需要audio lead-in,这个改不改随你
no kudosu for this post
加好preview time再PM我
cool beatmapAll right then
Pubbled
Pubbled
Please remove SHK in the tags because it's already the artist.
Ugh. please make the volume of those custom override soft whistles lower. They hurt my ears. D:
How about making the circles a bit larger by 1 notch on [Hard]? Hmm. Just a suggestion.
00:27:085 - The green timing section that shifts the hitsounds from soft to loud hitsounds should be 1/2 or 1/4 tick before the beat itself. This also applies to timing sections that shift the volume lower to higher or the other way around. Correct me please if I'm wrong.
Set your preview point preferably on the song's chorus (But this is really up to you)
Otherwise it's a good map.
EDIT:
[Hard]
-nazi-
00:31:585 (1) - move the slider's end 1 grid to the left
00:31:960 (2) - move one grid down
Ugh. please make the volume of those custom override soft whistles lower. They hurt my ears. D:
How about making the circles a bit larger by 1 notch on [Hard]? Hmm. Just a suggestion.
00:27:085 - The green timing section that shifts the hitsounds from soft to loud hitsounds should be 1/2 or 1/4 tick before the beat itself. This also applies to timing sections that shift the volume lower to higher or the other way around. Correct me please if I'm wrong.
Set your preview point preferably on the song's chorus (But this is really up to you)
Otherwise it's a good map.
EDIT:
[Hard]
-nazi-
00:31:585 (1) - move the slider's end 1 grid to the left
00:31:960 (2) - move one grid down
I need confirmation from mappers.Breeze wrote:
Pubbled
Call me in-game if you decide to fix or you don't want to.
~Easy~
00:06:085 (1) - add hitfinish at first note
00:06:835 (2) - add hitfinish at the end of slider
00:12:835 (2) - ^
00:59:172 (1) - add hitfinish
01:48:653 (1) - ^
~Normal~
00:03:085 (1,3) - remove hitfinish
00:09:085 (1,4) - ^
00:12:835 (3) - remove hitfinish at first note
00:57:422 (4) - remove hitfinish
00:59:172 (1) - add hitfinish at first note, silence the hitsound at the end of slider
01:02:153 (1) - ^
01:46:965 (4) - remove hitfinish
01:48:653 (1) - silence the hitsound
02:03:653 (1) - add hitifinish
~Hard~
00:01:585 (1) - add hitfinish at first note
00:03:460 (2,4) - remove hitfinish
00:04:585 (1) - add hitfinish at first note
00:07:585 (1) - ^
00:09:460 (2,3) - remove hitfinish
00:10:585 (1) - add hitfinish at first note
00:12:835 (3) - remove hitfinish at first note
00:57:422 (4) - remove hitfinish
00:59:153 (1) - silence the hitsound
01:46:965 (4) - remove hitfinish
01:48:653 (1) - silence the hitsound
~SHD~
00:12:085 (1,2,3,4) - silence the hitsound at the end of sliders
00:13:585 (1) - silence the hitsound
00:39:085 (1,2,3,4) - not fit to the song
00:40:585 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:45:085 (1,2,3) - ^
00:46:585 (1,2,3) - ^
02:29:153 (1,2,3) - silence the hitsound at the end of sliders
~Insane~
00:03:085 (1,3) - remove hitfinish
00:04:585 (1) - add hitfinish
00:07:585 (1) - ^
00:09:460 (2,3) - remove hitfinish
00:10:585 (1) - add hitfinish
00:12:835 (3) - remove hitfinish
00:13:585 (1) - add hitfinish
00:59:153 (1) - silence the hitsound
01:48:653 (1) - ^
+Star
Topic Starter
DJPop wrote:
I need confirmation from mappers.Breeze wrote:
Pubbled
Call me in-game if you decide to fix or you don't want to.
~Easy~
00:06:085 (1) - add hitfinish at first note
00:06:835 (2) - add hitfinish at the end of slider
00:12:835 (2) - ^
00:59:172 (1) - add hitfinish
01:48:653 (1) - ^
~Normal~
00:03:085 (1,3) - remove hitfinish
00:09:085 (1,4) - ^
00:12:835 (3) - remove hitfinish at first note
00:57:422 (4) - remove hitfinish
00:59:172 (1) - add hitfinish at first note, silence the hitsound at the end of slider
01:02:153 (1) - ^
01:46:965 (4) - remove hitfinish
01:48:653 (1) - silence the hitsound
02:03:653 (1) - add hitifinish
~Hard~
00:01:585 (1) - add hitfinish at first note
00:03:460 (2,4) - remove hitfinish
00:04:585 (1) - add hitfinish at first note
00:07:585 (1) - ^
00:09:460 (2,3) - remove hitfinish
00:10:585 (1) - add hitfinish at first note
00:12:835 (3) - remove hitfinish at first note
00:57:422 (4) - remove hitfinish
00:59:153 (1) - silence the hitsound
01:46:965 (4) - remove hitfinish
01:48:653 (1) - silence the hitsound
~SHD~
00:12:085 (1,2,3,4) - silence the hitsound at the end of sliders
00:13:585 (1) - silence the hitsound
00:39:085 (1,2,3,4) - not fit to the song
00:40:585 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:45:085 (1,2,3) - ^
00:46:585 (1,2,3) - ^
02:29:153 (1,2,3) - silence the hitsound at the end of sliders
~Insane~
00:03:085 (1,3) - remove hitfinish
00:04:585 (1) - add hitfinish
00:07:585 (1) - ^
00:09:460 (2,3) - remove hitfinish
00:10:585 (1) - add hitfinish
00:12:835 (3) - remove hitfinish
00:13:585 (1) - add hitfinish
00:59:153 (1) - silence the hitsound
01:48:653 (1) - ^
+Star
Done!cool idea!
SHD dif is by tsukamaeta.I will notice he frist.
By the way,I don't found some problems at 00:39:08~00:46:58?OK,I will do it better.
naniyo(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ★(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ★(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ★(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ★(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆
Great map, great song, star~
RE-PUBBLE
I agree with the timing before 59153ms but after it I personally disagreed.
Then this is my timing:
160.000 @ 59183ms.(yes only one.)
any un-inherit timing section after this is totally useless.
Then this is my timing:
160.000 @ 59183ms.(yes only one.)
any un-inherit timing section after this is totally useless.
Topic Starter
abalee wrote:
I agree with the timing before 59153ms but after it I personally disagreed.
Then this is my timing:
160.000 @ 59183ms.(yes only one.)
any un-inherit timing section after this is totally useless.
阿爸我爱你！
+Star~ 
I LOVE DEATH MOON
XD
XD
SHD:
remove the timing point in 63683,75683, they are useless.
inherit the timing section in 89183,93683,95183.... and more.
02:26:933 (3,4,1) - Spacing here doesn't follow before. try to make it the same.
Hard:
00:58:047 (1) - isn't snapped.
normal:
two objects aren't snapped.
easy:
00:58:047 (1) - isn't snapped.
remove the timing point in 63683,75683, they are useless.
inherit the timing section in 89183,93683,95183.... and more.
02:26:933 (3,4,1) - Spacing here doesn't follow before. try to make it the same.
Hard:
00:58:047 (1) - isn't snapped.
normal:
two objects aren't snapped.
easy:
00:58:047 (1) - isn't snapped.
thanks in advanceabalee wrote:
SHD:
remove the timing point in 63683,75683, they are useless. you r right
inherit the timing section in 89183,93683,95183.... and more. ^
02:26:933 (3,4,1) - Spacing here doesn't follow before. try to make it the same. its clear to readable imo ^^
.
i never knew that aba is pretty good at timing haha xD
To hanyuu :
I love u
can i be allowed to make a DIFF??
are you are done with diffs?
Topic Starter
Hanyuu wrote:
:)
can i be allowed to make a DIFF??
are you are done with diffs?
May be all done now? Thanks very much~
Or we can make it twice?
My turn to star.
Dr_dy wrote:
Hanyuu wrote:
:)
can i be allowed to make a DIFF??
are you are done with diffs?
May be all done now? Thanks very much~
Or we can make it twice?
its ok just asking
all done now i think
Remove "SHK" from the tags on all difficulties. It's already in the artist field.
Topic Starter
good suggestionimpossiblexu wrote:
很好的图！
只是：
[Normal]
02:04:433[1,2]这两个Note的间距有点不太合适，重叠在一起会比较好。
Bubbled! ~.~
Just for a short moment. >x<
[SHD]:
02:22:507 (4) - Move 1/4 later. At its current position, it makes no sense whatsoever...It looks like a resnap error.
I feel like there should be something between [Easy] and [Hard]. There's a jump in difficulty. What are your thoughts, good sir?
Kill the .osb and make a Full Submit.
Also, I thought this song was by SHK.o2SE...? Well, I guess SHK is the same thing, especially since it states that in the graphic. Maybe SHK.o2se can be a tag?
(Oh, and if you /do/ change artists, refer to this topic: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443 ... juuuust in case ~)
[SHD]:
02:22:507 (4) - Move 1/4 later. At its current position, it makes no sense whatsoever...It looks like a resnap error.
I feel like there should be something between [Easy] and [Hard]. There's a jump in difficulty. What are your thoughts, good sir?
Kill the .osb and make a Full Submit.
Also, I thought this song was by SHK.o2SE...? Well, I guess SHK is the same thing, especially since it states that in the graphic. Maybe SHK.o2se can be a tag?
(Oh, and if you /do/ change artists, refer to this topic: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443 ... juuuust in case ~)Oh god this map is amazing and fun. STAR!
Hmm...I still see an .osb. ;~; I don't know why...uh, did you make a Full Submission? O.o
Oh, and I noticed this when looking around...It does not look like you are using normal-hitwhistle2.wav as a custom hitsound anywhere. ;s If it is not being used, perhaps you should remove it.
Also, in [SHD] there is one timing section that uses SC:2...?
It's really, really minor stuff...but regardless. @W@
EDIT: Good work.
Oh, and I noticed this when looking around...It does not look like you are using normal-hitwhistle2.wav as a custom hitsound anywhere. ;s If it is not being used, perhaps you should remove it.
Also, in [SHD] there is one timing section that uses SC:2...?
It's really, really minor stuff...but regardless. @W@
EDIT: Good work.
let's rank this
it was still pending almost one year xd
grarts!
finally you have a ranked map :p
grarts!
finally you have a ranked map :p
wow Grats~
O2Jam永存... (其实还有O2Mania)
幻想即兴曲有人做不 Orz
幻想即兴曲有人做不 Orz
This is a pretty awesome song with some fun maps to go with it. Great job!
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ranked
ranked