Hanyuu wrote:

hello can this mp3 help you?

Chacha17 wrote:

an offset of 1496 works fine for me for the first section, then i decreased other offsets by 100 except the slowing part sections.. i'm not that sure, but better ask a timing expert for this.

mp3 quality is better now. (the mp3 before hurts my ears ;_;)

These are only suggestions, it's up to you if you'll add them or not.

5Key:
00:59:044 (1,1) - these two spinners bother me. how about making the latter a slider?
01:29:068 to 01:40:693 : use soft hitsounds? or if you don't want to make the volume lower.. and uh, replace those claps w/ another hitsound (they sound ugly imo)
02:30:568 (1,2,3,4) - finish hitsounds? why claps

7Key:
01:53:083 - huh? normal hitsounds here?
02:38:458 (1) - remove the clap here?

14Key:
02:38:543 (1) - remove whistle?


Awesome map, and i like the song.

Here's a gray star .

yangzd88 wrote:

很好的一张图啊……

【5key!!】
[00.39.100]-[00.49.225]我觉得每个combo的第一个note用哨子比较好吧……拍掌听的有一点吃力


其他的难度 吾等新手玩的非常吃力……

Dr_dy wrote:

yangzd88 wrote:

很好的一张图啊……

【5key!!】
[00.39.100]-[00.49.225]我觉得每个combo的第一个note用哨子比较好吧……拍掌听的有一点吃力


其他的难度 吾等新手玩的非常吃力……

其他難度是給神玩的……據說我被normal難度秒殺……

多謝乃的建議，一會回家考慮，網吧木有osu……

其實我只會用拍手音效……（誤

Hanyuu wrote:

please use this timing for BPM change!

LKs wrote:

offest和hitsound，周围太吵听不清，不过感觉不错
你需要填写TAGS ， source
删除.osb文件并FULL UPDATE

5Key!因为有的间距设置的很好，所以间距不对就显得比较明显，我指出了一些比较严重的
其实你要是有精力最好全部recheck，好图就要精益求精←于是这点令我郁闷，重做很多次，我尽力吧
normal难度jump其实不太好←确实
[00:17:33] 间距稍微远了点 resnap←done
[00:19:58] ^←done
[00:23:34] ^←done
[00;27:08] ^←done
[00:30:83] ^←done
[00:49:58] ^←done
[00:53:33] 从这里开始是不是要改一下间距？←这个难度的就算了……
[01:26:15] (1,2) 和slider3没对齐←您眼神真好，thanks
[02:29:15] 这个间距不好，do something←done
[02:30:65] (1,2,3,4) 从这里开始来一个渐大的声音←done
[02:39:65] 结束kiai time←done

7Key!!
[01:25:40] 间距不太好←well,but I think nothing
[02:17:90] 和slider1 平行←您眼神真好，thanks
[02:21:65] 向右一格？←done
[02:24:65] (1~6) 圆圈和slider要重合的一丝不差←您眼神真好，thanks
[02:26:90] 嘛，间距问题，其实在这里设置new combo会更好的←done
[02:38:52] no clap only finish←done
[02:39:65] 结束kiai time←done

10Key!!!

[00:53:33] 从这里开始是不是要改一下间距？←done
[01:40:02]& [01:40:77] 向上一格？←done
[02:39:65] 结束kiai time←done

SHD Tsuka
音效稍微多了点，其他good
tag和source里面都有 O2jam
所以删去tags里面的O2jam 留下 Tsuka SHK←so,I may notice Tsuka about it.

只是一些间距让map还有一些问题
star for good map

xierbaliti wrote:

一些建议:
我觉得normal还是偏难 似乎还是需要1个easy
.osb没有用，删除。
设置1个PreviewTime。 01:03:559似乎不错?

-Normal-
HP-2
OA-1
00:33:085 (1) - +Finish
00:37:585 (1) - ^
00:56:698 (1,2,3,4) - 我建议缩小这4个的间距._. 作为低难度有些难读
00:59:172 (1,1) - 这2个没对准线
01:15:653这里开始用soft音效不适合 使用noraml音效 音量3.5~4 然后：
01:15:653 (1) - +finish
01:17:153 (1,2,3,4) - 去掉whistle (1)的开头+finish (2)(4)的开头+上clap (3)的开头+whistle
01:18:653 (1) - 换成finish
01:19:028 (2,4) - 换成clap
01:20:153 (1) - 开头+finish
01:21:653 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个和上1段1样
02:17:153 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个也是

-Hard-
01:29:903 (3) - +whistle
01:30:278 (5) - +clap
01:32:903 (3) - +whistle
01:33:278 (5) - +clap
01:35:903 (4) - +whistle
01:36:278 (6) - +clap
01:36:653 (1) - 开头+whistle
01:37:403 (3) - +whistle
01:38:903 (3) - ^
01:39:278 (5) - +clap
01:51:653 (1) - 结束在01:53:153 然后+上finish
02:17:153 ~ 02:28:965 我倾向于这样弄:
02:17:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (1)的开头+finish (2)+clap (4)用normal-hitnormal (5)+clap
02:22:403 (4,6) - +上whistle？

-insane-
02:12:653 (1) - 去掉clap
02:07:028 (3) - 去掉折返的clap+到末尾
02:13:590 (6,7) - 去掉6的clap +到7上

-触卡-
我希望能把note大1号 尽管简单了不少 但仍旧是很难 不过这样会更有趣 也会有更多人可以玩
01:29:153 (1) - +finish?
01:35:153 (1) - +finish?

1. 所有难度需要设一个合适的preview time,喜儿给你说过你没加么o.o. 找到一个合适的时间点,移到那后选择Timing - Set Current Postion as Preview

1. 00:07:210 (2) - 按你加whistle的规律的话,应该这里加个whistle? 然后去掉slider开头的whistle?
2. 00:27:085 (T) - 这个timing section最好放前面一点,因为有音量改变,如果玩的时候点早了,音效会是前面timing section的音效
3. 00:27:085 (1) - 加finish
4. 00:39:085 (T) - 放前面一点,后面一些有音量改变音效改变的都最好放前面一点
5. 01:03:653 - 这里开始最大声都行,背景音乐太大声了orz
6. 01:51:653 (S) - 和前面的spinner合并成一个spinner比较好,两个连续的spinner对于新手来说比较难

1. 01:53:153 (S) - spinner在这结束比较好,然后再加个finish音
2. 02:05:153 (1) - spacing稍远,改不改随你
3. 02:38:153 (S) - 加finish

1. fine

• 为什么让我感到了v2b的感觉 o_O

1. 00:42:835 (6) - new combo比较好
2. 00:51:085 - 噗,这一串玩的时候都从左上角开始往中间堆了

1. fine

Breeze wrote:

只有红色部分是我觉得你应该改的,其他的都只是建议

[General]

1. 所有难度需要设一个合适的preview time,喜儿给你说过你没加么o.o. 找到一个合适的时间点,移到那后选择Timing - Set Current Postion as Preview

[Easy]

1. 00:07:210 (2) - 按你加whistle的规律的话,应该这里加个whistle? 然后去掉slider开头的whistle?
2. 00:27:085 (T) - 这个timing section最好放前面一点,因为有音量改变,如果玩的时候点早了,音效会是前面timing section的音效
3. 00:27:085 (1) - 加finish
4. 00:39:085 (T) - 放前面一点,后面一些有音量改变音效改变的都最好放前面一点
5. 01:03:653 - 这里开始最大声都行,背景音乐太大声了orz
6. 01:51:653 (S) - 和前面的spinner合并成一个spinner比较好,两个连续的spinner对于新手来说比较难

[Normal]

1. 01:53:153 (S) - spinner在这结束比较好,然后再加个finish音
2. 02:05:153 (1) - spacing稍远,改不改随你
3. 02:38:153 (S) - 加finish

[Hard]

1. fine

[SHD]

• 为什么让我感到了v2b的感觉 o_O

1. 00:42:835 (6) - new combo比较好
2. 00:51:085 - 噗,这一串玩的时候都从左上角开始往中间堆了

[Insane]

1. fine

awesome map
做了修改后再PM我吧,timing好像前面也有专业的人看过了,可以准备给pubble了

gdeath wrote:

Overall :
Set a PreviewTime in all difficulties(Timing--->>Set Current Position as Preview Point)

[Normal]
01:51:653 (1) - make it end on 01:53:153 or make it totally silence(suggestion)

[Hard]
01:51:653 (1) - i'd make it totally silence(suggestion)

[SHD]
fine

[Insane]
01:02:153 (1,2,3,4) - set green line for each note and adjust the volume louder and louder(suggestion)
eg:01:02:153 (1) - volume 35%
01:02:528 (2) - volume 60%
01:02:903 (3) - volume 70%
01:03:278 (4) - volume 80%
------------------------------------------------
01:51:653 (1) - i'd make it totally silence(suggestion)

Extraordinarily done well.
Star!

Breeze wrote:

你还是没设preview time,这个是必须设的
找到一个合适的时间点,移到那后选择Timing - Set Current Postion as Preview,所有难度的必须一致
另外所有难度其实不需要audio lead-in,这个改不改随你
no kudosu for this post
加好preview time再PM我