1. Easy (2,01 stars, 177 notes)
2. Hard (4,86 stars, 407 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 655 notes)
4. Normal (4,36 stars, 288 notes)

captin1 wrote:

hi

try offset 1636(-23)

what you had before was mostly with the vocals, which isn't the best way to time it, especially in a song like this where the vocals are more relaxed and on the backside. you should time more to the drum track, which I believe this does pretty well

really nice song, <3 40mP

good luck!

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

Just Suggestion on Insane Diff

00:10:402 (5) - Hard to Read and bad flow. try this ok, fixed


00:14:103 (1) - ^same problem fixed here too, here this problem I forgot to change


02:06:213 (10,1) - Jump is too sudden and looking pretty bad I think it's readable, but fixed the position
02:56:960 (2) - NC ok
03:29:298 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use Same DS no, I think is good also as it is


hope it help

Feverie wrote:

Hey!

Do you Mind upload the beatmap again!

At the moment my osu can't read although I have downloaded it like 5 times!

Please look into this

Thanks for using my mod page, post another form on it if you want me to get back to you for the modding but at the moment there is nothing to mod ^_^

Lanturn wrote:

Like Feverie said, I'm having trouble downloading this mapset. I'll be happy to mod it when it get fixed.. Just send me a PM or I'll check this thread tomorrow.

Add "meter" to the tags at least for now.

It also seems this song has some association with this manga | http://myanimelist.net/manga/50331/Kono ... dai_ga_Aru!
Kono Bijutsubu ni wa Mondai ga Aru! | この美術部には問題がある!

This probably could be used as the source since the video is officially linked on its official website: http://maoh.dengeki.com/blog/konobi

Will actually mod this when I'm able to download the song

1. 01:53:843 (1) - i'm not sure is it allow or not, but its a little hard to read for geginner i think.
2. 03:28:129 (1,1) - this i think its not ok if its a easy diff with this nc.

1. 01:32:025 (7) - you forgot to nc here
2. 02:06:311 (1,2) - ah i think its a little ugly because its not same radian
3. 02:18:389 (7) - add finish for the end because music have
4. 02:56:960 (1,1) - i think (1,2) its ok if not nc.

1. 00:06:116 (5) - add clap for the end? im not sure but i heard the tom
2. 03:30:272 (4) - remove clap and i think the clap is the red line but i know you're not use slidertick
3. 03:33:194 (3) - remove clap from the front and add to the end because its rhythm is that

1. 03:29:687 (3) - to 03:29:687 (3) - well i think you're not follow the music so...
   i think its
2. 03:29:687 (3) - clap, 03:31:246 (3) - front clap, 03:31:636 (4) - clap, 03:32:610 (2) - end clap, 03:33:389 (4) - clap, 03:33:584 (1) - end clap, 03:34:168 (2) - end clap, 03:35:142 (1) - end clap (white line clap)
   like this rhythm.

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

sorry for double post but here is my mod from Queue.
-------------------------------------------------
[-General-]
Ok.

[Easy]

1. 01:53:843 (1) - i'm not sure is it allow or not, but its a little hard to read for geginner i think. ok, changed the form a bit
2. 03:28:129 (1,1) - this i think its not ok if its a easy diff with this nc. ok, changed

[Normal]

1. 01:32:025 (7) - you forgot to nc here yes, fixed
2. 02:06:311 (1,2) - ah i think its a little ugly because its not same radian and now it's the same :3
3. 02:18:389 (7) - add finish for the end because music have oh, ok, added also in the insane diff, it was missing
4. 02:56:960 (1,1) - i think (1,2) its ok if not nc. ok

[Hard]

1. 00:06:116 (5) - add clap for the end? im not sure but i heard the tom yes, it's better to add one
2. 03:30:272 (4) - remove clap and i think the clap is the red line but i know you're not use slidertick I can use sliderthick here, so I added in the right place now :3
3. 03:33:194 (3) - remove clap from the front and add to the end because its rhythm is that ok

[Insane]

1. 03:29:687 (3) - to 03:29:687 (3) - well i think you're not follow the music so... ok, fixed these... hope I did well >.<
   i think its
2. 03:29:687 (3) - clap, 03:31:246 (3) - front clap, 03:31:636 (4) - clap, 03:32:610 (2) - end clap, 03:33:389 (4) - clap, 03:33:584 (1) - end clap, 03:34:168 (2) - end clap, 03:35:142 (1) - end clap (white line clap)
   like this rhythm.

End of this mod,
hope it could help you !
Good luck to rank this map !

-RInx- wrote:

HELLO~~
easy
01:19:168 (3) - I move this slider to 01:18:973 and stretch for this maybe you can try it yeah, the rhythm is better but for an easy diff is better avoid this kind of things
02:59:298 (3) - add nc should be good yes

normal
01:32:025 (7) - add nc ok
02:59:298 (4) - add nc ok

hard
03:15:077 (5) - add nc
03:24:817 (1) - remove nc

insane
00:26:571 (1) - remove nc
00:26:960 (2) - add nc
03:14:882 (7) - add nc
03:15:272 (1) - remove nc
03:17:804 (6) - add nc
03:18:194 (1) - remove nc quite all fixed :3

Nice map, I hope my mod can be a little useful for you
Hope Ranked in the future

Winek wrote:

here i mod! i hope i'll be useful this time

Easy
01:28:129 (3) - Remove the clap on the head of this slider for a prettier sound, since it actually doesn't sound well ( Your taste ) yeah, I think is better too :3
03:21:895 (3) - ^ ^
03:09:428 (3) - ^ ^
02:54:428 (2) - This note can confuse. Place it on the next downbeat I know but it make no sense to place it elsewhere because there is no beat other than this
03:10:986 (1) - Remove NC and add it here 03:11:571 (2) here since there is a little pause between them. ok

Normal
Try avoiding overlapping such as 00:51:506 (1,2) I know, but I think in normal diff it can also be ok, it's not so confusing imo
02:54:428 (1) - Same error as easy not an error, no change

Hard
AR should be 7 I prefere AR8 u.u
02:53:064 (1,1,1) - Vary this place. It look same in Easy and Normal no, it's ok as it is

Insane
CS should be 5 no, it's ok also this way
Sorry, i don't see anything wrong in this diff.

General
You're doing it great! or am i just the poor modder?
Anyway, sorry I can't find many errors. But in general all of your map is really good

Thor wrote:

Can not mod this map sorry, your song/file is corrupt

luxoDeh wrote:

Thor wrote:

Can not mod this map sorry, your song/file is corrupt

if you download without video it should be ok...

• Easy :

• Normal :

• Hard :

• Insane :

Zamaro wrote:

From my modding queue! Damn, that's a great map. But something must be wrong with the vid, I can only download and play without it...
No major flaws for all diff... thoses are mainly personal thoughts!

• Easy :

I didn't find anything wrong for this diff :/

• Normal :

General thoughs : It's been a long time since I played on normal diff, but I feel like you could have followed the vocals a bit more, like you did for 02:57:545 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - especially in the first half of the song... For example : 01:07:090 (1,2,3,4,5) - could follow vocals without being too hard for a normal diff.
But If you leave it like that, I don't think it would be a problem... I think for now I'll leave it, I feel like I'm already following the vocals

• Hard :

01:09:038 (6,7,8) - This part does not fell right... Try to follow vocals by shifting them 2 beats to the right (on the red line each time)? But then remove 01:10:207 (1) - no, because in this diff I'm not following the vocals and this will breack the rhithm imo
Replace 02:25:402 (2,3,4) - by 3 quick sliders like in insane difficulty (since this goes well with the song)? You may have to re-do red combo then...
that's a good idea :3

• Insane :

Replace 02:25:597 (4) - by 3 circles? It goes well with the music and insane players can easely handle this. I prefere leave it as it is, eaven if the suggestion was not wrong, but I prefere to not exagerate qwith triplets
02:25:986 (5) - ^
02:26:376 (6) - ^
Maybe delete 02:46:636 (4,5,6) - and replace 02:45:856 (3) - by 2 circles separated by a jump. Last circle having a normal finnish sound with higher volume. This may increase the impact of the break that come after. I like this as it is


I didn't find a lot... I hope I could have helped you a bit more

baraatje123 wrote:

Testplay, but I think I know why it failed, I also had it with one of my own maps. When the file w/o SB and or video is bigger than 10 MB, or when w/ Sb and or Video is bigger than 24 MB, It cuts away some things, to make it fit. It could be something else, because if there is audio in the video, it also doesn't work, I heard

Testplays:

Normal

Hard

Insane

Sure that this is possible o_0, that wait at 2:53:064, I got a 100, and the 2 others were 300, and I failled, I was at full health o_0, Plz, HP to 6/7

Lapis Aoki wrote:

From my queue~ :3 This map is good, so there's not much to mod~
[Easy]
00:14:298 -Make the spinner short till 00:16:148
00:16:343 -Break.
01:32:025 -Make the spinner short till 01:33:681
01:33:876 -Break.
02:03:194 -Make the spinner short till 02:04:947
02:05:142 -Break.
[Normal]
03:25:889 -Make spinner short till 03:27:739
03:28:211 -Random notes.
[Hard]
-More whistle. (Maybe)
[Insane]
-^

1. 01:28:129 (3,2) - especially since this is an easy. I really highly recommend you move the (2) somewhere else. Newer players will really have a tough time trying to hit this note properly | It's almost like this got moved by accident somehow

1. 00:14:298 (1) - How about a clap instead of a finish here? The finish really doesn't fit | Plus it helps players get into the rhythm again.
2. 00:45:661 (1) - Move the red node one tick down for a better blanket.
3. 00:46:830 (2) - ^ if you did this. try moving this slider to look like what I've done. | http://puu.sh/6btem.jpg
4. 01:07:090 (1) - Finish here? you made a finish at 03:00:856 (1) - | You also have a Finish here in the Hard diff.
5. 01:07:090 (1,2) - Better blanket? | 1st node: x344 y264 | 2nd node: x256 y218 | 3rd node: x168 y264 | You'll have to adjust (3) after this. which maybe you can set up some kind of symmetry with the next (1) if you wanted possibly.
6. 01:25:791 (1) - Considering you've been doing finishes on the clap note everywhere in this section but here, why not change this to a finish as well? | You actually do this for your Hard diff.
7. 02:43:713 (1) - How about ending this spinner at 02:46:246 - instead of 02:46:830 - ? | More emphasis on this place instead of where you currently have it. | you somewhat do it on 01:38:259 (1) - although the music is slightly different.
8. 02:53:064 (1,2,3) - Because you have these notes not completely even with each other.. how about having a 0.10 distance spacing between them (what?) | Try this | (1) x256 y276 | (2) x256 y240 | (3) x256 y196 | Notice how there is 0.10 distance spacing between these notes? i'm thinking it might actually help visually when to press these notes for newer players, instead of stacking them. This also keeps your distance spacing of 1.10 for the next object.
9. 03:19:558 (1) - finish? because of 03:07:090 (1) - This keeps consistency.

1. 00:01:636 (1,2) - I'm not too much of a fan how you have these connected together. It feels like it could be improved majorly just by using different shapes other than simple curved sliders.
2. 00:11:376 (1) - How about a little curve in this? | http://puu.sh/6bsWt.jpg | Slightly better flow this way.
3. 00:40:986 (4,1) - Curve for blanket?
4. 01:58:519 (3) - Finish on the end? Just so you have more hitsound effects during this part besides claps.
5. 01:58:519 (3) - Move the middle node to x404 y184 for a clean looking even slider.
6. 02:12:155 (4) - Like the previous, Try adding a finish onto this part for more effect.
7. 02:14:103 (2) - Move the red node up one grid (tiny) for a better blanket.
8. 02:29:493 (2,3) - I'm really not a fan of long straight sliders.. how about a little curve? | http://puu.sh/6btSZ.jpg
9. 02:43:324 (4) - x108 y112 for a true triangle.

1. 00:13:713 (5) - Finish on end. You have one in your Easy.
2. 03:07:869 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1231262 | This might be fine, but it does go outside the boundary area. Maybe see what others say before changing this. Also the blanket on this could use a little touching up anyways as it's far from perfect.

1. 00:26:571 (1,2,3,4) - What first caught my eye though was how the (2) covers over half of the (3) and even a little bit of the end. Why not move the Tail end over a bit, and the earlier (1,2) circles to get something like this? | http://puu.sh/6buG7.jpg | This ruins the flow a little bit for the (4) but it looks a lot more visually appealing when the (2) doesn't cover the end of the (3)
3. 01:07:090 (1) - Finish here like I suggested in Easy because of the finish at 03:00:856 (1) - | Maybe even consider lowering the volume for it or something.. although your whole song is 70% | You have a finish here in the Hard.
4. 01:14:687 - How about adding a circle to catch the heavy vocals? It really feels empty without something here | You could also do something like you did at 01:23:454 (3,4) -
5. 01:25:791 (1) - Like I suggested in Easy. A finish here would follow your patterns more consistently. Tail end of course. You do this in Hard.
6. 02:53:064 (1,1,1) - how about like I suggested in Easy? but maybe this time use 0.20? Unless the extra SV is already enough.

1. 00:46:051 (2,3,4,5) - This (5) really gets close to touching the bottom of the screen. | http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1231202 | how about giving a bit more curve into the (2) to leave some room, even if it's a little?
2. 00:50:726 (4) - This would require a bit of remapping, but I honestly think it would fit the rhythm better Instead of this circle, have a slider start and end 1/2 away from where this circle used to be | http://puu.sh/6bv9i.jpg | I think its that additional clap drum sound I hear.
3. 01:14:882 (4) - I feel like this could start 1/2 earlier to follow the vocals better since
4. 01:31:636 (6) - Maybe change this into a 1/2 slider to it can catch the last vocal? I was too sure since it might be a bit too heavy with 1/2 notes which is why I left it down here for an idea.
5. 02:23:259 (3,4) - Kinda just like in your Easy diff.. Maybe add some curve to these? or even something like 02:29:493 (3,4) - has a cool design to it.
6. 02:44:298 - Add circle for vocals?
7. 02:45:272 (1) - I was gonna suggest the same idea for the slider to end on the red tick at 02:46:246 - but it might end up being too short.
8. 02:59:298 (1) - Any reason why this NC is shorter than the rest of the map? This is the only place where you use a NC after one measure instead of two.
9. 03:04:752 (3,5) - Can these be stacked?
10. 03:06:311 (5,6,1) - how about going Circle Slider Slider instead of Slider Slider Circle. It follows the vocals a little bit better so the sliders start on each word.

1. 00:17:220 (1) - The tail should be a clap instead of a finish when comparing with your Normal.
2. 01:09:428 (7) - Remove this clap, as you don't use it in Easy, Normal, or Insane.
3. 01:19:558 (1) - Finish on tail is missing.
4. 01:41:376 - Drag this break back to the white line.. You have this blue for some reason. If you don't really care, then you should probably reset it by dragging the spinner over top of it and putting it back. (Also note you do the same thing for Easy and Insane, but Normal doesn't have it.. Maybe double check all your breaks while you're at it on all your diffs?)
5. 03:00:856 (1,2) - Here you double finish. (2) Should be a clap from like Normal.
6. 03:13:324 (1) - Finish on tail end instead of clap to follow Normal.
7. 03:24:038 (1) - Remove NC to be consistent with Easy/Normal/First Kiai of Hard

1. 00:12:934 (4) - Soft addition finish on tail end?
2. 00:22:285 - Feels kind of empty without a circle since you've been mapping all of the claps up until this point. I highly suggest adding one.
3. 00:43:519 - Feels kind of empty without a circle to catch the vocals here.
4. 01:19:363 (7) - Hmm, how about removing this circle? It really doesn't add to the song at all besides being just there for more things to hit. I personally think it would play better without it.
5. 02:13:713 (4,5) - how about following the guitar? | Turn (4) into a circle and drag (5) back 1/2.. Add a note to the empty spot at 02:14:493 - afterwards.
6. 02:53:064 (1,1,1) - Like Easy. Try something similar here as well with proper distance snap of 0.10, 20, or 30.
7. 03:35:142 (1) - Because of 03:25:791 (5) - Maybe remove this NC?

1. 00:04:752 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe move the (1) to the middle line with Grid Snap on, and then move the (2) so it gives a little more space between it and (4) |
2. 02:45:272 (1) - Well It's a hard, so maybe you can end the slider like I suggested before at 02:45:272 (1) - if you wanted.
3. 02:59:103 (5) - Maybe skip following the drums here and delete this note? I like the idea of following almost strictly the vocals.

1. 01:19:558 (1,2) - according to your other difficulties. the Finish should be on the (2)

1. 00:28:129 (5,6) - Really long combos compared to the rest of the map. maybe NC on them?
2. 00:40:597 (6,6) - ^
3. 01:07:090 (1) - Finish
4. 01:55:402 (7) - I don' think you need this finish, since you don't use it on any other diff.
5. 01:55:402 (7,7) - NC on each of these? All of your NCs are usually one measure long, while these are two.
6. 01:56:376 (9) - Control+G?
7. 02:46:636 (4,5,6) - If you ended the spinner on ENH earlier like I suggested. You should probably delete these notes for consistency.

1. 00:10:791 (6) - Since your difficulty is full of tail stacking, why not stack this on the end of the next (1) slider coming up? You might have to make some adjustments to the earlier notes, but it will go good with 00:09:233 (5,1) - since it's the same pattern.
2. 02:17:610 (2,3) - Not stacked properly
3. 02:30:077 (2,3) - ^

Lanturn wrote:

Alright.. sorry for the delay

Soooo sorry this is late. I've been way to lazy lately.. like way too lazy.

00:32:317 - *pop*... Sorry.. Now you can't unhear this.. All I know is I can't

[General]

Tags:
Why are there commas in the tags? does it actually do anything? hm... I don't know XD changed it XD
この美術部には問題がある! | Source in japanese oh... ok (anyway I don't like very much that now the source should be in japanese because not everyon can read it and it's hard to understand where the map is from...
40㍍P | Artist name in Japanese ok

Romanised Title: Shouldn't it be Cocoro Palette? | http://puu.sh/69Y5Z.jpg | From the video that's a good point... someone say it's right also in this way... I'll do some reserch

Difficulty Settings:
Easy: Reduce AR by 1 at the very least. AR5 is a bit to fast for newer players ok
Normal: Not as bad, but you can also lower the AR by 1 as well if you did it to Easy. ok
Hard/Insane: Fine

MP3 file: 320 kbs -> 192kbs ok thank you! I refixed also the offest, captin halped me :3

[Easy]
Errors:

1. 01:28:129 (3,2) - especially since this is an easy. I really highly recommend you move the (2) somewhere else. Newer players will really have a tough time trying to hit this note properly | It's almost like this got moved by accident somehow well it is in fact, it was not like this before... I don't know now it got moved D: anyway, fixed :3

Suggestions:

1. 00:14:298 (1) - How about a clap instead of a finish here? The finish really doesn't fit | Plus it helps players get into the rhythm again.
2. 00:45:661 (1) - Move the red node one tick down for a better blanket.
3. 00:46:830 (2) - ^ if you did this. try moving this slider to look like what I've done. | http://puu.sh/6btem.jpg
4. 01:07:090 (1) - Finish here? you made a finish at 03:00:856 (1) - | You also have a Finish here in the Hard diff.
5. 01:07:090 (1,2) - Better blanket? | 1st node: x344 y264 | 2nd node: x256 y218 | 3rd node: x168 y264 | You'll have to adjust (3) after this. which maybe you can set up some kind of symmetry with the next (1) if you wanted possibly.
6. 01:25:791 (1) - Considering you've been doing finishes on the clap note everywhere in this section but here, why not change this to a finish as well? | You actually do this for your Hard diff.
7. 02:43:713 (1) - How about ending this spinner at 02:46:246 - instead of 02:46:830 - ? | More emphasis on this place instead of where you currently have it. | you somewhat do it on 01:38:259 (1) - although the music is slightly different.
8. 02:53:064 (1,2,3) - Because you have these notes not completely even with each other.. how about having a 0.10 distance spacing between them (what?) | Try this | (1) x256 y276 | (2) x256 y240 | (3) x256 y196 | Notice how there is 0.10 distance spacing between these notes? i'm thinking it might actually help visually when to press these notes for newer players, instead of stacking them. This also keeps your distance spacing of 1.10 for the next object.
9. 03:19:558 (1) - finish? because of 03:07:090 (1) - This keeps consistency.

Nazi/Ideas/Ramblings:

1. 00:01:636 (1,2) - I'm not too much of a fan how you have these connected together. It feels like it could be improved majorly just by using different shapes other than simple curved sliders.
2. 00:11:376 (1) - How about a little curve in this? | http://puu.sh/6bsWt.jpg | Slightly better flow this way.
3. 00:40:986 (4,1) - Curve for blanket?
4. 01:58:519 (3) - Finish on the end? Just so you have more hitsound effects during this part besides claps.
5. 01:58:519 (3) - Move the middle node to x404 y184 for a clean looking even slider.
6. 02:12:155 (4) - Like the previous, Try adding a finish onto this part for more effect.
7. 02:14:103 (2) - Move the red node up one grid (tiny) for a better blanket.
8. 02:29:493 (2,3) - I'm really not a fan of long straight sliders.. how about a little curve? | http://puu.sh/6btSZ.jpg
9. 02:43:324 (4) - x108 y112 for a true triangle.

all fixed here
Very nice easy. Already want to toss a

[Normal]
Errors:

1. 00:13:713 (5) - Finish on end. You have one in your Easy. ok
2. 03:07:869 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1231262 | This might be fine, but it does go outside the boundary area. Maybe see what others say before changing this. Also the blanket on this could use a little touching up anyways as it's far from perfect. well it is still inside the screen while playing... if others mention it I'll change

Suggestions:

1. 00:26:571 (1,2,3,4) - What first caught my eye though was how the (2) covers over half of the (3) and even a little bit of the end. Why not move the Tail end over a bit, and the earlier (1,2) circles to get something like this? | http://puu.sh/6buG7.jpg | This ruins the flow a little bit for the (4) but it looks a lot more visually appealing when the (2) doesn't cover the end of the (3) ok, fixed, it's not so bad also for the flow...
3. 01:07:090 (1) - Finish here like I suggested in Easy because of the finish at 03:00:856 (1) - | Maybe even consider lowering the volume for it or something.. although your whole song is 70% | You have a finish here in the Hard. ok
4. 01:14:687 - How about adding a circle to catch the heavy vocals? It really feels empty without something here | You could also do something like you did at 01:23:454 (3,4) - yes, not a bad idea
5. 01:25:791 (1) - Like I suggested in Easy. A finish here would follow your patterns more consistently. Tail end of course. You do this in Hard. ok
6. 02:53:064 (1,1,1) - how about like I suggested in Easy? but maybe this time use 0.20? Unless the extra SV is already enough. ok I tryed but I'm not sure if I did well or not XD

Nazi/Ideas/Ramblings:

1. 00:46:051 (2,3,4,5) - This (5) really gets close to touching the bottom of the screen. | http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1231202 | how about giving a bit more curve into the (2) to leave some room, even if it's a little? ok, moved
2. 00:50:726 (4) - This would require a bit of remapping, but I honestly think it would fit the rhythm better Instead of this circle, have a slider start and end 1/2 away from where this circle used to be | http://puu.sh/6bv9i.jpg | I think its that additional clap drum sound I hear. hm...
3. 01:14:882 (4) - I feel like this could start 1/2 earlier to follow the vocals better since
4. 01:31:636 (6) - Maybe change this into a 1/2 slider to it can catch the last vocal? I was too sure since it might be a bit too heavy with 1/2 notes which is why I left it down here for an idea. not really sure about that, no change
5. 02:23:259 (3,4) - Kinda just like in your Easy diff.. Maybe add some curve to these? or even something like 02:29:493 (3,4) - has a cool design to it. ok, I changed with the same pattern as the other next
6. 02:44:298 - Add circle for vocals? ok
7. 02:45:272 (1) - I was gonna suggest the same idea for the slider to end on the red tick at 02:46:246 - but it might end up being too short. hm, I'll leave it as it is
8. 02:59:298 (1) - Any reason why this NC is shorter than the rest of the map? This is the only place where you use a NC after one measure instead of two. ok, didn't noticed it XD
9. 03:04:752 (3,5) - Can these be stacked? yes, they can XD
10. 03:06:311 (5,6,1) - how about going Circle Slider Slider instead of Slider Slider Circle. It follows the vocals a little bit better so the sliders start on each word. nah, I prefere in my way here

Very nice normal :3

[Hard]
Errors:

1. 00:17:220 (1) - The tail should be a clap instead of a finish when comparing with your Normal. no, normal was wrong, I changed in normal
2. 01:09:428 (7) - Remove this clap, as you don't use it in Easy, Normal, or Insane. ok
3. 01:19:558 (1) - Finish on tail is missing. fixed
4. 01:41:376 - Drag this break back to the white line.. You have this blue for some reason. If you don't really care, then you should probably reset it by dragging the spinner over top of it and putting it back. (Also note you do the same thing for Easy and Insane, but Normal doesn't have it.. Maybe double check all your breaks while you're at it on all your diffs?) strange problem but fixed in all diffs
5. 03:00:856 (1,2) - Here you double finish. (2) Should be a clap from like Normal. ok
6. 03:13:324 (1) - Finish on tail end instead of clap to follow Normal. ok
7. 03:24:038 (1) - Remove NC to be consistent with Easy/Normal/First Kiai of Hard oh I forgot that

Suggestions:

1. 00:12:934 (4) - Soft addition finish on tail end? ok
2. 00:22:285 - Feels kind of empty without a circle since you've been mapping all of the claps up until this point. I highly suggest adding one. ok added
3. 00:43:519 - Feels kind of empty without a circle to catch the vocals here. added here too
4. 01:19:363 (7) - Hmm, how about removing this circle? It really doesn't add to the song at all besides being just there for more things to hit. I personally think it would play better without it. ok eaven if this gave me some problems, but fixed
5. 02:13:713 (4,5) - how about following the guitar? | Turn (4) into a circle and drag (5) back 1/2.. Add a note to the empty spot at 02:14:493 - afterwards. ok, changed a bit here
6. 02:53:064 (1,1,1) - Like Easy. Try something similar here as well with proper distance snap of 0.10, 20, or 30. same as normal
7. 03:35:142 (1) - Because of 03:25:791 (5) - Maybe remove this NC? hm... yes?

Nazi/Ideas/Ramblings:

1. 00:04:752 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe move the (1) to the middle line with Grid Snap on, and then move the (2) so it gives a little more space between it and (4) |
2. 02:45:272 (1) - Well It's a hard, so maybe you can end the slider like I suggested before at 02:45:272 (1) - if you wanted. better as I did... it's too fast...
3. 02:59:103 (5) - Maybe skip following the drums here and delete this note? I like the idea of following almost strictly the vocals. nah

This diff is amazing. I went and test played it and really loved every second of it. <3 :33333333

[Insane]
Well time for my weak point.. Sorry because I know in advance I won't be of much help for this diff.. (Yay for being an Easy player!) same for me, insanes are my weak point >.<

Errors:

1. 01:19:558 (1,2) - according to your other difficulties. the Finish should be on the (2) ok

Suggestions:

1. 00:28:129 (5,6) - Really long combos compared to the rest of the map. maybe NC on them? nope, here probably you didn't noticed, but the combo colors fit the lyrics: red, blue, yellow, green, etc... and in this part the sentence was not finished yet, I couldn't change combo color XD
2. 00:40:597 (6,6) - ^
3. 01:07:090 (1) - Finish ok
4. 01:55:402 (7) - I don' think you need this finish, since you don't use it on any other diff. ok
5. 01:55:402 (7,7) - NC on each of these? All of your NCs are usually one measure long, while these are two. ^
6. 01:56:376 (9) - Control+G? not bad idea
7. 02:46:636 (4,5,6) - If you ended the spinner on ENH earlier like I suggested. You should probably delete these notes for consistency. I like my way

Nazi/Ideas/Ramblings:

1. 00:10:791 (6) - Since your difficulty is full of tail stacking, why not stack this on the end of the next (1) slider coming up? You might have to make some adjustments to the earlier notes, but it will go good with 00:09:233 (5,1) - since it's the same pattern. yeah but... it would be too problematic >.<
2. 02:17:610 (2,3) - Not stacked properly fixed
3. 02:30:077 (2,3) - ^ fixed

Alright.. Getting tired now, so I'm gonna cut it here. Good luck, and take a

Also.. what do you think of my Error/Suggestion/Idea layout? This is my first time using it and I think it helps point out the more serious errors compared to just ideas I have.

nope, here probably you didn't noticed, but the combo colors fit the lyrics: red, blue, yellow, green, etc... and in this part the sentence was not finished yet, I couldn't change combo color XD

• 00:08:311 (2,3) - blanket?
  00:11:428 (1) - opposite slider for better flow
  00:41:038 (4,1) - blanket
  01:58:571 (3,1) - try blanket
  
  [Normal]
  
  • 01:29:350 (2,4) - better blanket
    
    [Hard]
    
    • 00:06:752 (6) - move to (416,244) for better flow
      02:57:597 (2,3) - try blanket
      
      [Insane]
      
      • Good :3
        
        Hope this helps.
        and +1 Star

[ Raphael ] wrote:

Hi~! from my queue!

[Easy]

• 00:08:311 (2,3) - blanket? ok
  00:11:428 (1) - opposite slider for better flow fixed
  00:41:038 (4,1) - blanket hm... I think is ok this way
  01:58:571 (3,1) - try blanket ^
  
  [Normal]
  
  • 01:29:350 (2,4) - better blanket ok
    
    [Hard]
    
    • 00:06:752 (6) - move to (416,244) for better flow fixed
      02:57:597 (2,3) - try blanket also here
      
      [Insane]
      
      • Good :3
        
        Hope this helps.
        and +1 Star