Ranger wrote:

yup o/ o/

[General]

1. 00:11:719 ~ 00:43:444 , 01:17:926 ~ 01:49:651 - no hitsound at drum sound? if you don`t like normal clap sound, try use this
   added whistle+finish to first spinner in Normal, sounds okay, but not in Hard cause it ends on a different beat there~
   abou the others - I prefer to keep them quiet cause that matches the melody best. but if more people point that out, I'll think about what to do!

[Normal]

1. 01:07:926 (3) - how about remove 1 receive? like this
   prefer to keep this, cause it sounds really off to me if this is empty. ;-;
2. 01:13:444 (3) - well..same reason, just add one circle at 01:13:788
   same here! >-<
   I changed up the rhythm slightly, so sliders won't start on the upbeat now!
3. 01:17:926 (1) - add finish instead whistle? i think it much better added, but left whistle too, sounds better to me
4. 01:28:961 (1) - add finish at behind yup, changed!
   applied both changes to Hard as well

[Hard]

1. 01:42:409 (5) - how about make that just one circle?
2. 01:56:087 (6) - spacing error a litte (recommend move to x:404 y:52)
   fixed both!

go to BN :p I'll do that when the set's okay, it's not ready yet ;_;
Good luck for Rank~ Thank you! :3

Sieg wrote:

hellow, sorry for the delay ;_; hi there! >w< no worries, I'm not in a rush. and mods are appreciated anytime ~

[General]

1. You sure you wan to keep 2 backgrounds? Because it's strange to keep one bg for 2 diffs and another for one more even if this is gd.
   yep, I'm pretty sure. I prefer the star themed background, that also matches with the skin. and I won't force someone to change bg just cause I like it better. ofc Zero can change it anytime if he wants to, but I'm fine with having two :3
2. I don't like how you use SliderTrackOverride, what's the point in overriding slider body color?
   No particular reason, really. That's how I imagined the skin when I made it and it looks nice to me. and that also makes the slidertrack more noticeable when the combo's are grey. ;w;
3. Your CC6 and CC7 is way too similar, consider to make CC6 a bit more lighter.
   sure, changed in all diffs!
4. Since you use sliderscorepoint.png I guess you should include complete Slider skin set.
   I can't find sliderscorepoint in any skin set, tho? D: I just made this cause of the slidertrack colour, the default one wasn't really noticeable.. so I thought it was fine to not skin other elements? Ofc I can add the default ones, but I don't see any point in that cause sliderscorepoint doesn't interfere with any other skin elements. (so I'll probably add that in the next few days.)
5. Turn off widescreen support.
   whoops.. turned it off (again orz)

[Normal]

1. 01:19:306 (2) - NC here I wanna keep NCs on downbeats, also followpoint is nice to have in between, makes it easier to get to the next object
2. 01:28:961 (1) - I don't like the shape of this slider, yep it's trying to follow music, but eh.. I like the shape, but made all parts straight, for now ~ :n
3. 01:34:478 (1,3) - make 1 by copy-pasting 3 wanted them to be different, looks more interesting to me
4. 01:40:685 (2) - maybe replace this with some kind of wave slider http://puu.sh/fWhF1/69a9591df7.jpg seems more suitable to vocals only made it less edged for now
5. 02:31:030 (4) - better to curve this one vice versa for better flow okay
6. 03:08:961 (3,5) - make them parallel changed rhythm previously so yah, they're kinda parallel now anyway xD
7. 03:17:237 (2) - move this up a bit why? it flows nicely and doesn't go affscreen either ;w;
8. 03:39:306 (2) - curve this more, preferably like 03:31:030 (3) okay
9. Generally: if you use a lot of one type curve sliders, making them similar by copy-pasting will look more polished.
   I usually do, but in the end I adjust some pixels and suddenly it looks all different.. xD I definitely should pay more attention to that, but meh ~ >-<

[Hard]

1. 00:23:444 (2,3) - this jump is too forced, since you usually use only 1.3x DS changed to standard DS
2. Can't really catch all this 1\6 rhythms, such a pain for me, well, anyway the main issue here is that difficulty gap is too big between Normal-Hard. This is mostly because rhythm density and usage of 1\6. Think about tone down rhythm oh hard or make more complex on normal.
   personally I didn't think the gap's that big. :/ 1/6 notes are too hard for Nomal (imo) so I left them out, but not mapping them in Hard feels just wrong to me. x_x kinda empty. guess I'll have to think of something but I honestly don't know how I can simplify the rhythm without making it play weird. -> I'll fix that once I have an idea about what to do!
3. Also, take a note that rhythms on "long" lyrics parts like 01:02:064 (2,3,4,5) - is even harder than on insane here
   I changed the one you mentioned and will look at the rest in a few days. >-<

osu file format v14

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Artist:Avril Lavigne
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Creator:Squirrel
Version:Zero's Insane
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-Bakari- wrote:

Hello heartache hi! >w<

[General]

1. Is there a reason to keep it in WiP? whoops, must have uploaded it to wip instead D: gonna upload it to pending with update!
2. D-d-did you really make the BG? This is great, like really great. I am in love with it. ♥ Thank you! ;w; makes me happy when people like it!
3. Can we have softer combo colours? The bright ones seem too agressive and might feel uncomfortable for players' eyes. Colours aren't displayed correctly here, so I'll change them when I'm home. but I think I'll just tone down my set of colours, I prefer the blue-yellow contrast 'w'

[Normal]

1. 02:24:823 (2,3) - I can clearly hear that vocals begin on the white tick and fade out on the red one. Why don't we just replace these two circles with a slider? This would follow the song closer.
2. 03:25:513 (2,3) - select them and hit Ctrl+G, it'll swap them on the timeline and make them match better with the vocals. Don't forget to fix their placement afterwards.
   changed both!
   
   I'm in love with the diff. ♥

[Hard]

1. 00:10:685 - can we end the spinner earlier? For a relaxing song, it's quite reasonable to make the after-spinner gap a little longer. sure
2. 00:13:099 (3,4) - 1/3 gap here feels tricky, why don' we replace it with a slider? Just for the beginning of the diff, so players will get the idea of your rhythm. alright, changed
3. 01:24:708 (3) - 01:25:742 (5) - 01:30:225 (4) - I see the reason why you place them, but if we remove them, the beats on following ticks become better-emphasized and the whole rhythm feels more natural. This is just a Hard diff and the song is relaxing, let's keep it simple. okay
   
   I would try to simplify calm parts a little. As the amount of 1/6 makes me a little unsure, but everything else looks great. ♥
   Ye, I've looked at the diff a few times with your and Sieg's comments in mind and I think I get where it gets tricky. I removed some notes and adjusted some rhythms to make these 'calm' parts a little easier, but I didn't change anything in the livelier (colourful/Kiai) parts (yet). I have to look at this a few more times to make sure it's not totally messed up.. >-<

Find me when you're ready.
gotta change some things up first. 'w'