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Minetto - Twinkle

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gdeath
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gdeath
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年10月17日 at 22:34:02

Artist: Anzu Mitsu
Title: *twinkle*twinkle*
Source: Shukufuku no Kanpanera - Character Song
Tags: Ex Boy
BPM: 138
Filesize: 8265kb
Play Time: 02:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ex Boy's Love (4.9 stars, 452 notes)
  2. Hard (4.61 stars, 315 notes)
  3. Insane (4.98 stars, 444 notes)
  4. Normal (3.86 stars, 244 notes)
Download: Anzu Mitsu - *twinkle*twinkle*
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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4th Beatmap.

Sep 10, 2009 Breeze's skin added
Oct 07, 2009 Ex Boy's diff added

PC Game : Shukufuku no Kanpanera(祝福のカンパネラ) - Character Song
Last edited by Gens , edited 17 times in total.
Mystearica
Mystearica
Cute song =w=

Stacked notes under streams reallllly mess me up :?
gdeath
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gdeath
Mystearica<<---thanks for your star.tears>O<
dkey
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dkey

Mystearica wrote:

Cute song =w=
cute song =w=
HolyBoy
104 posts
Joined July 2009
HolyBoy
Normal

Key Words

(Tick = Line)
... ^ = Repeate


00:06:078 (7) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Shorter
00:06:698 (8) - Make this Slider 2 Ticks Longer
00:10:227 (5) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Longer
00:13:689 (3) - ... ^
00:18:284 (8) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Shorter
00:18:920 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here

00:37:386 (1) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Shorter
00:38:058 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here
00:38:058 (2) - Move this Note 1 Tick Forward, Then Make it 1 Tick Shorter
00:39:552 (3) - Move this Note 1 Tick back
00:40:199 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here
00:45:436 (Red Tick) - ... ^
00:45:644 (2) - Try to change this so it can finish at 00:46:737 (Red Tick)

00:49:334 (Red Tick) -Add Note Here (I think this is ok, but u may think it is ok how it is now and if so, then don't add the note :P)
00:52:180 (5) - Move this Note 1 Tick Back
00:54:795 (4) - ... ^
01:01:722 (7) - Move this Note 4 Ticks Back (should end up on the White Tick)
01:02:394 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here
01:02:614 (White Tick) - Add Slider here, and finish it at 01:02:961 (Blue Tick)
01:03:284 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here
01:06:977 (1) - Shorten this Spinner by 2 Ticks
01:15:879 (7) - Make this Slider 3 Ticks Longer ( Should end up on the Blue Tick )
01:20:868 (3) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Shorte
01:21:528 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here
01:21:730 (4) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Shorter
01:22:400 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here
01:25:867 (Red Tick) - ... ^
01:27:837 (1) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Shorter
01:28:702 (3) - ... ^
01:30:450 (9, 10) - Delete These
01:30:355 (Blue Tick) - After u delete 9 and 10, Start a Slider here and finish it at 01:31:080 (Red Tick)

01:42:827 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here
01:48:684 (1) - Make this Slider 2 Ticks Shorter
01:49:789 (Red Tick) - Add a Note here
01:50:014 (2) - Make this Slider 2 Ticks Longer
01:53:735 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here
01:56:532 (5) - Move this Slider 1 Tick Back, Then Make it 3 Ticks Longer ( Should end up on the Red Tick)
01:59:140 (4) - Delete this Note, Then Move Spinner to this Place

02:00:641 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here (This Is Optional)
02:01:299 (2) - Move 1 Tick back
02:01:732 (3) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Shorter
02:02:384 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here (Optional)
02:03:460 (5) - Move this Slider 1 Tick Back, Then make it 1 Tick Longer
02:04:998 (3) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Longer
02:07:610 (Red Tick) - Add Note here
02:11:707 (7) - Move this Slider 2 Ticks Back
02:12:597 (White Tick) - Add Note here
02:12:825 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here
02:13:468 (9) - Move this Slider 1 Tick Back
02:14:541 (Red Tick) - Add Note
02:16:530 (4) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Shorter
02:20:454 (6) - ... ^

02:25:644 (2) - Move this Slider 1 Tick Back, Then Finish the Slider at 02:26:202 (Blue Tick)
02:26:529 (3) - Move this Slider 1 Tick Back, then make it 1 Tick Longer
02:27:190 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here
02:27:410 (5) - Make it 2 Ticks Shorter
02:27:950 (1) - Move Slider 1 Tick back
02:30:212 (Red Tick) - Add Note
02:30:424 (4) - Delete
02:30:659 (1) - Move 2 Ticks back

02:32:617 (1) - Move 1 Tick Back
02:33:505 (3) - ... ^
02:34:797 (5) - Move 1 Tick back, Then Make the Slider 2 Ticks Longer
02:36:853 (4) - Make this Slider 3 Ticks Shorter (should end up on the Blue Tick)
02:37:387 (1) - Move this Spinner 2 Ticks Back, Then finish the Spinner at 02:39:466 (Blue Tick)

After that (Distance Snap/Grid Snap the Notes so that it looks Good ^_^)


Remember Only Change What u think is usefull for your Map ^_^
Last edited by HolyBoy , edited 1 time in total.
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Add a tag for the bg pls.

Normal:
SPOILER
Move the overall difficulty up a notch or 2 because it looks a little crowded right now
Normal mod:
02:11:29 - you should add kiai timing here
02:29:13 (1) - I am a little worried between the spinner and this note is a little small for newer players

Combo mod:
00:37:39 (1) - remove new combo
00:55:87 (1,2) - since you seem to be putting instruments at the end of combos, remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2
02:11:74 (7) - new combo, or at least somewhere in this area

Hard:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
02:11:30 (4) - add kiai timing here

Combo mod:
02:17:17 (1) - y is there a new combo here?

Timing section mod:
00:15:20 - move the inherited timing section a quarter note back since it is directly on top of a note
00:49:33 - move the inherited timing section a eighth note back since it is directly on top of a note

Insane:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
02:11:30 (4) - add kiai timing here

Combo mod:
02:21:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I would suggest you put new combos for the change in timing intervals since this is very hard to read, or you can just remap this area

Timing section mod:
00:15:20 - move the inherited timing section a quarter note back since it is directly on top of a note
00:35:64 - ^
00:47:16 - ^
00:49:33 - ^
01:42:59, 01:43:03, 01:43:46, 01:43:90, 01:44:33, 01:45:96 - since you can just 1/2 the BPM for this entire area, you don't need these timing sections
01:51:51 - move the inherited timing section a quarter note back since it is directly on top of a note
01:53:68 - ^
02:03:03, 02:03:35 - since you can just 1/2 the BPM for this entire area, you don't need these timing sections

Nice map. Star.
HolyBoy
104 posts
Joined July 2009
HolyBoy
Hard

Key Words

(Tick = Line)
... ^ = Repeate

SPOILER
00:01:769 (7) - Move this Note 1 Tick Back
00:06:090 (7) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Shorter
00:10:017 (4) - make this Slider 2 Ticks Longer
00:13:930 (4) - Either Leave it how it is ( as a Note ) OR Change to a Slider and Finish the Slider at 00:14:122 (Red Tick)
Opional
00:14:115 (5) - Move this Note 1 Tick Forward
00:14:349 (6) - Move this Slider 2 Ticks Forward
00:18:255 (3) - Try to Change This Slider so that it Finishes 1 Tick Earlier ( 00:18:615 (Blue Tick) )

00:35:701 (1) - 00:36:963 (4) -- Make These four Sliders 1 Tick Longer
00:37:423 (1) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Longer OR Remove 00:38:492 (2) and the then make the Slider 2 Ticks Longer
00:38:935 (3) - Make this Slider 3 Ticks Longer
00:41:506 (5) - Try to Change this in a Way so that it can finish at 00:42:168 (White Tick)
00:44:344 (1) - Change this Note to a Slider and Finish the Slider at 00:44:679 (Blue Tick)
00:44:593 (2, 3) - Delete these Notes
00:46:105 (4) - Move this Note 1 Tick back
00:49:323 (1) - Make this Slider 2 Ticks Shorter (Should end up on the White Tick)
00:50:000 (2) - Move this Slider 1 tick back, Then Make the Slider 1 Tick Longer
00:50:854 (4) - ... ^
00:56:961 (4) - ... ^
00:57:830 (6) - move this Note 1 Tick Back
00:58:952 (8) - Try to change it in a way, so that it finishes at 00:59:685 (Blue Tick)
01:00:651 (2) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Longer
01:02:073 (4) - Make this Slider 5 Ticks Shorter ( Should end up at the Blue Tick )
01:02:399 (Red Tick) - Either Add a Note here OR Make a Slider and Finish it at 01:02:522 (Blue Tick)
01:02:599 (White Tick) - Add Slider here and Finish it at 01:02:941 (Blue Tick)
01:03:256 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here
01:08:690 (8) - Try to change this Slider so that it can end at 01:09:893 (Blue Tick)
01:12:812 (9) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Longer
01:14:798 (5) - Change this Note into a Slider and Finish the Slider at 01:15:103 (Blue Tick)
01:14:996 (6, 7) - Delete These Notes as Slider ^ will Take its Place
01:16:287 (11) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Shorter
01:18:910 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here
01:19:012 (Blue Tick) - ... ^
01:20:448 (1) - Change This Slider into a Note
01:20:670 (Red Tick) - Add Note
01:20:868 (White Tick) - Add Slider and Finish Slider at 01:21:201 (Blue Tick)
01:21:283 (2) - Delete This Note
01:25:663 (4) - Move this Note 1 Tick Back
01:27:820 (1) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Shorter
01:28:697 (3) - ... ^
01:30:240 (8) - Change this Note into a Slider, and finish Slider at 01:31:096 (Red Tick)
01:30:430 (9, 10) - Delete these as it will be Replaced by the Slider ^

01:48:693 (1) - Try to Change it in a way, So that it Finishes at 01:49:663 (Blue Tick)
01:49:999 (3) - Try to Change it in a way, So that it Finishes at 01:51:201 (Blue Tick)
01:51:100 (4) - Delete this Note if you do ^
01:53:911 (1) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Shorter
01:54:553 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here (Optional)
01:54:773 (2) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Shorter
01:55:420 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here (Optional)
01:56:302 (Red Tick) - ... ^ (Optional)
01:56:527 (4) - Move it 1 Tick back, then make the Slider 3 Ticks Longer ( Should end up at the Red Tick )
01:59:136 (6) - Delete This Note
01:59:351 (1) - Move this Spinner 2 Ticks Back, then Make it 2 Ticks Longer ( Should end up on the White Tick Again )
02:03:513 (10) - Move This Spinner 1 Tick back, Then make it 1 Tick Longer
02:06:084 (5) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Shorter

02:06:754 (Red Tick) - Add Note here
02:06:972 (White Tick) - ... ^
02:07:177 (Red Tick) - ... ^
02:07:297 (Blue Tick) - ... ^
02:07:607 (Red Tick) - ... ^ (These 5 is Optional)

02:13:050 (8) - Try to Change this in a way, So that the Slider can end at 02:14:240 (Blue Tick)
02:16:094 (7) - Try to Change this in a way, So that the Slider can end at 02:16:847 (Blue Tick)
02:19:998 (4) - Make this Slider 2 Ticks Shorter ( Should end at the Red Tick)
02:20:763 (Blue Tick) - Start a Slider here and Finish the Slider at 02:21:243 (Blue Tick)
02:23:260 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here
02:23:372 (Blue Tick) - ... ^
02:25:642 (2) - Move this Slider 1 Tick back, Then make the Slider 1 Tick Longer
02:26:549 (3) - ... ^
02:27:180 (Red Tick) - Add Note Here
02:27:383 (4) - Make this Slider 2 Ticks Back (Should end up on the Red Tick)
02:27:927 (1) - Move this Slider 1 Tick back, Then Make it 1 Tick Longer (Should end up on the Red Tick Again)
02:29:994 (4) - Move this Note 1 Tick back, Then Make it 1 Tick Longer
02:30:457 (5) - Delete This Note
02:30:654 (1) - Move this Spinner 2 Ticks Back, Then Make it 2 Ticks Longer (Should end up on the White Tick Again)

02:33:268 (4) - Move this Slider 1 Tick Forward, Then Make it 1 Tick Shorter
02:34:334 (7) - Make this Slider 1 Tick Shorter
02:37:175 (6) - Delete This Note
02:37:407 (1) - Move this Spinner 2 Ticks Back, Then FInish the Spinner at 02:39:332 (Red Tick) OR at 02:39:477 (Blue Tick), Which ever you Think Sounds Best ( or Maybe Neither :) )

(Remember Only Change What You Think Is Best For Your BeatMap ^_^)

Sorry, Made a New Post so u get the Email About this. Will Make another Spoilor Box Tommorrow on this Post For Insane
gdeath
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Topic Starter
gdeath
blissfulyoshi <<---all fixed,except the kiai.

HolyBoy<<---fixed some parts.
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
i really like your maps
good job.

my Suggestions.. you decide if you want to follow it n_n

insane
00:46:74 (8) - make this end at 00:47:17, remove (9)
00:52:06 (11) - end at 00:52:61
00:59:02 (11) - ena at 00:59:56
01:09:35 (1) - new combo
01:10:00 - add a note
01:45:98 (7) - end at 01:46:52
01:56:41 (10) - end 1/2 earlier
02:03:37 (9) - end at 02:04:13
02:08:91 (12,13,14) - remove

Hard
00:38:91 (4) - move 1/2 later
00:38:91 - add note
00:42:17 -add note
00:49:35 (1,2) - sounds odd.. how about: 00:49:35 (1) - move half beat later (remove next slider) and add a note.
00:50:22 - add note
00:50:65 - remove note add sider at 00:50:43 - 00:50:87
00:51:09 - half beat slid
00:58:04 (7) - sounds weird.. make it 1/2 length, the repeat
01:21:74 (4) - end at 01:22:17 -
01:22:39 - add note

Normal
00:49:56 (1) - 1/2 length then repeat
01:30:22 (8) - how about put a slider that end at 01:30:87 -
02:29:13 - too close to spinner s end.. make the spinner finish here

star, of course
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh
Insane:
00:10:22 (5,6,7) - Space these downward to the right like 00:08:69 (7,8,9) - (except to the right)
00:11:30 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Fair.. but kind of unexpected.. maybe centering 00:11:09 (2) - in the middle would make the jump more expecting as the player can see the jump spacing from 2 to 1.
00:17:61 (1) - Hmm suggestion, but don't stack this
~nazi~ 00:39:35 (7) - grid 3 one to the right.
~nazi~ 00:58:91 (10) - ^ but up, not to the right.
02:03:37 (9) - Extend to white tick.

02:06:74 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5) - I really like how this part sounds/is mapped :D

Hard:
00:38:91 - Note here?
~nazi~ 01:07:61 (5) - down right one on grid 3
~nazi~ 01:08:69 (8) - to the left one on grid 3

~design suggestion~
01:31:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since it's a hard, I think a jump could be used here. Kind of what you have at 00:42:61 (1,2,3,4) - Here's a kind of idea you can go with, map it how you will.
SPOILER

Overall I think difficulty feels more a bit of a normal, not too much hard. But this is always opinionated, so don't take this to heart.

Normal:
All fine!
gdeath
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Topic Starter
gdeath
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
gdeath
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Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
gdeath

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Insane:
00:10:22 (5,6,7) - Space these downward to the right like 00:08:69 (7,8,9) - (except to the right)
fixed
00:11:30 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Fair.. but kind of unexpected.. maybe centering 00:11:09 (2) - in the middle would make the jump more expecting as the player can see the jump spacing from 2 to 1.
no
00:17:61 (1) - Hmm suggestion, but don't stack this
~nazi~ 00:39:35 (7) - grid 3 one to the right.
fixed
~nazi~ 00:58:91 (10) - ^ but up, not to the right.
fixed
02:03:37 (9) - Extend to white tick.
no

02:06:74 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5) - I really like how this part sounds/is mapped :D
thank you >O<

Hard:
00:38:91 - Note here?
fixed
~nazi~ 01:07:61 (5) - down right one on grid 3
fixed
~nazi~ 01:08:69 (8) - to the left one on grid 3
fixed

~design suggestion~
01:31:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since it's a hard, I think a jump could be used here. Kind of what you have at 00:42:61 (1,2,3,4) - Here's a kind of idea you can go with, map it how you will.
SPOILER
[attachment=0:09f93]screenshot017.jpg
nice idea.done[/attachment:09f93]

Overall I think difficulty feels more a bit of a normal, not too much hard. But this is always opinionated, so don't take this to heart.

Normal:
All fine!
:D
thanks for your modding.nice mod^^
gdeath
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Topic Starter
gdeath
HolyBoy<<---(Hard)some parts fixed.thank you very much^^

satosid<<---thanks for your star lol
mzb_old
1 post
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mzb_old
:P good lucky for you
march9th
7 posts
Joined April 2009
march9th
;)
GJ~
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Normal~
  1. Redo both breaks. They'll shorten quite a bit.
  2. 00:44:35 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the start of this slider. It's to get that longer drawn out sound feeling which sounds pretty nice in this song.
  3. 01:30:00 (7) - Suggestion: Add a clap at the end.
  4. 01:41:74 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the start of this slider.
  5. 01:48:69 (1) - ^
  6. 01:51:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe add some whistles here and there?
  7. 02:11:74 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the start of this slider.
Hard~
  1. 01:07:39 (4) - Add finish.
  2. 01:32:17 (4) - Suggestion: New combo?
  3. 01:41:74 (1) - Add finish at the beginning of slider.
  4. 01:48:69 (1) - ^
  5. 02:11:74 (6) - ^
  6. 02:36:52 (4) - Suggestion: New combo.
Insane~
  1. 00:41:63 (6) - Suggestion: Shorten to the nearest white tick?
  2. 00:44:35 (1) - Finish
  3. 00:52:06 (11) - Suggestion: Shorten to the nearest white tick~
  4. 00:59:02 (11) - ^ ;_; Maybe?
  5. 01:07:39 (5) - Finish!
  6. 01:32:82 (6) - Oo, this note is kind of cut from the bottom. Can you move it up a little bit?
  7. 01:41:74 (1) - Finish.
  8. 01:45:98 (7) - Suggestion: Shorten to the nearest white tick. Suggestionsss.
  9. 01:48:69 (1) - Finish.
  10. 02:03:37 (9) - Suggestion: Maybe lengthen to the nearest white tick?
  11. 02:11:74 (6) - Finish yay!
gdeath
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Topic Starter
gdeath

Mafiamaster wrote:

Normal~
  1. Redo both breaks. They'll shorten quite a bit.
    done
  2. 00:44:35 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the start of this slider. It's to get that longer drawn out sound feeling which sounds pretty nice in this song.
    done
  3. 01:30:00 (7) - Suggestion: Add a clap at the end.
    done
  4. 01:41:74 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the start of this slider.
    done
  5. 01:48:69 (1) - ^
    done
  6. 01:51:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe add some whistles here and there?
    no
  7. 02:11:74 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the start of this slider.
    no

Hard~
  1. 01:07:39 (4) - Add finish.
    done
  2. 01:32:17 (4) - Suggestion: New combo?
    done
  3. 01:41:74 (1) - Add finish at the beginning of slider.
    done
  4. 01:48:69 (1) - ^
    done
  5. 02:11:74 (6) - ^
    done
  6. 02:36:52 (4) - Suggestion: New combo.
done

Insane~
  1. 00:41:63 (6) - Suggestion: Shorten to the nearest white tick?
    done
  2. 00:44:35 (1) - Finish
    no
  3. 00:52:06 (11) - Suggestion: Shorten to the nearest white tick~
    done
  4. 00:59:02 (11) - ^ ;_; Maybe?
    done
  5. 01:07:39 (5) - Finish!
    no
  6. 01:32:82 (6) - Oo, this note is kind of cut from the bottom. Can you move it up a little bit?
    done
  7. 01:41:74 (1) - Finish.
    no
  8. 01:45:98 (7) - Suggestion: Shorten to the nearest white tick. Suggestionsss.
    done
  9. 01:48:69 (1) - Finish.
    no
  10. 02:03:37 (9) - Suggestion: Maybe lengthen to the nearest white tick?
    done
  11. 02:11:74 (6) - Finish yay!
no
thx.nice modding^^
minyeob
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minyeob
[Hard]
01:01:52 (4) - 01:03:48 (1) -> This part feels kind of empty
Add a note on 01:02:93 ( ) and 01:03:26 ( )?

01:56:52 (4) - Personally I don't like this slider:; Compare with (1,2,3)

I'll give a star. Good luck
gdeath
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Topic Starter
gdeath

minyeob wrote:

[Hard]
01:01:52 (4) - 01:03:48 (1) -> This part feels kind of empty
Add a note on 01:02:93 ( ) and 01:03:26 ( )?

01:56:52 (4) - Personally I don't like this slider:; Compare with (1,2,3)

all fixed,nice mod^^
mrtn
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mrtn
[hard]
00:21:09 - reinsert break
01:33:05 - ^

[insane]
00:21:09 - reinsert break
01:31:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this combo is confusing.
01:33:05 - reinsert break
02:35:87 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this combo is confusing.
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