Hey JeZag!
I don't have anything to say for HanzeR's difficulty, it's perfect.
Anyways, your difficulties are really pretty! The pattern and such are, simple but beautiful. I'd like to give a star for this map! Good luck for the ranking process! Ask me if you have questions.
Easy
- 00:41:710 (1,2) - The new combo should be switched to get the consistency.
- 01:30:735 (3) - I think putting the curve to down and blanketing with (2) may result a better flow for (3,4).SPOILER
There's something wrong with my puush, so I can't upload a smaller image. - 01:40:979 - Placing the break here seems to be weird, since I don't see a link with the music. You can just return the break to the object before it.
- 01:51:223 (1) - If you remove the node in the middle, it would improve a tiny bit the flow to (2). It'll also shoot to (2) instead of (3).
Normal
- 00:05:857 (2) - This slider seems to sound pretty weird. You should follow the rhythm like the other sliders like 00:04:393 (1) . Since there's no beat on 00:06:588 -, I don't think an object should be on that beat.
- 00:11:710 (2) - I'd remove the repeat and extend to 00:12:442 and remove the circle on 00:12:808 (3) . I think the circle isn't need. It makes it awkward for me to hear it, and the beats stop on 00:12:442 .
- 00:23:784 (4) - The whistle should be a drum whistle, and the one on tail of 00:23:053 (3) should be removed. It sounds weird.
- 01:32:198 (1,2) - This rhythm sounds really weird to me. It doesn't follow the vocal in my opinion. Try putting the slider first then the circle after 1/2 a beat. It would sound better. This also goes for 01:33:662 (1,2) -, but the rhythm suggested isn't good. Maybe extend the slider so it could be a 3/1 slider?
- 01:49:759 (1,2) - Lower the volume for these notes. The beats in the music aren't loud, and the hitsounds are too loud for it.
Intermediate
- 00:14:637 (1,2) - The beat on 00:14:820 should be clickable with 00:15:369 . I think the correct rhythm would go like this: it hits the guitar notes.
This also goes for 00:20:491 (1,2,3) . - 00:57:259 (2,3,4,5) - To me, it seems too much for this difficulty. You should do should like you did to 01:08:784 .
- 01:32:198 (1) - Curve it to the opposite direction, so the 2nd node can be on x:23 y:153. This will shoot to the next slider, instead so returning to the previous one, so it can make a minor improvement in the cursor's movement.
- 01:40:979 - Same suggestion in the Normal mod, and this goes through the mapset.
- 01:49:759 (1,2) - Add finishes to keep the consistency through the mapset.
Hard
- 00:07:137 (1) - The downbeat should have something to click on, so placing the tail won't be right. I suggest to start the slider on that beat, and a circle on 00:07:137 so it won't be awkward.
- 00:22:503 (2) - The tail is off-field, but I don't see the problem. Else, just in case, rotate the slider to avoid it.
- 00:36:223 (1,2,3,4,5) - It feels that this stream is more in the "Insane-type". What I meant is that the stream seems to be harder than Insane. Maybe remove the circle before the the slider? This also goes to 02:11:345 (1,2,3,4,5) .
- 01:08:052 (3,4) - The distance must be reduced in order to avoid the confusion.
- 01:51:223 (1) - After clicking (6), the process to (1) is uncomfortable due to the distance. I suggest that you add some distance between 01:50:857 (6,1) .
Reunion
- 00:11:345 (5) - The slider seems to be too far from the previous slider, compared to the others like 00:09:332 (4,5) . I suggest you move it to x:232 y:348 to get a better flow and get the blanket with the tail and (4).
- 00:19:943 (5,6) - I would switch the places for these circles for a better movement, but it's the fault of my skills, so you don't have to follow this.
- 01:25:979 (3,1) - Try adding space between them, so it could make a jump? It would emphasize the strong beat. Or, extend it to the blue tick to get that long note that starts from 01:25:979 .
- 01:43:906 - The stream isn't fitting with the music, due to multiple time signature. But, keep it there, and we'll see in the future.
Anyways, your difficulties are really pretty! The pattern and such are, simple but beautiful. I'd like to give a star for this map! Good luck for the ranking process! Ask me if you have questions.