This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 18 octobre 2009 at 14:04:19

Artist: Nightwish
Title: Moondance
BPM: 110,7
Filesize: 5341kb
Play Time: 03:27
Difficulties Available:

1. Crownless (4,62 stars, 460 notes)
2. FantasMic (4,83 stars, 543 notes)
3. Swanheart (1,44 stars, 90 notes)

Download: Nightwish - Moondance
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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[18 oct 2009] New Hitsound
[11 oct 2009] New Skin
[17 sept 2009] Add Inozuma's Difficulty (FantasMic)
[28 Aug 2009] Add Swanheart Diffculty
[27 Aug 2009] Add Crownless Difficulty



Swanheart=> Easy
Crownless=>Hard
FantasMic (By Inozuma) => Insane


GOOD GAME !

Here is my shot a timing:
BPM: 112 Offset: 484 (I'm not very good at offset though)
BPM: 147.5 Offset: 18883
BPM: 147.5 Offset: 50642 (this section stays almost purely on half notes)
BPM: 147.5 Offset: 110,411

Remember to use sixth notes for all sections except the third.

Yo!

[Crownless]

00:10:24 (2) - Plus loin de la note précédente.
00:14:58 (3) - ^
00:16:41 (5,6,7) - Resnap ces notes en 1/3
00:17:29 (8) - Resnap ce slider sur le tique blanc, et la fin sur le tique blanc.
00:20:12 (3,4) - Plus loin de la note précédente.
00:21:13 (x) - Ajoute une note.
00:21:54 (x) - ^
00:23:47 (x) - ^
00:23:57 (x) - ^
00:23:67 (x) - ^
00:31:10 (x) - ^
00:34:35 (6) - Rapproche le du prochain slider.
00:37:40 (x) - Ajoute une note.
00:37:81 (x) - ^
00:38:72 (1,2) - Resnap sur le tique blanc.
00:42:08 (5) - Nouveau combo.
00:40:65 (x) - Ajoute une note.
00:41:06 (x) - ^
00:43:50 (x) - ^
00:43:91 (x) - ^
00:44:32 (x) - ^
01:43:90 (2) - Remplace ce slider par un break.
01:50:42 (1) - à partir de ce moment et jusque 02:31:09, je te conseille fortement d'ajouter des notes en 1/2 pour remplir tous les vides. Je peux te garantir que ça rend bien mieux

Bref, j'ai pas vérifié Swanheart, je préfère mod celui où tu as le plus travaillé.
Je modderais le spacing et autres issues quand tu auras combler tous ces vides.

Swanlakeheart~
00:25:81 (6) - New combo.
00:27:44 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:29:06 (3) - New combo.
00:44:52 (5) - Place a little bit farther from 4.
01:09:74 (3) - Look at below sentence before doing this slider. Extend this slider to the white tick. Endpoint should be on 01:10:96
01:11:16 (4) - I would place this 1/4 of a beat forward so it's on 01:11:36. Don't forget to shorten to where it was before~
01:20:51 (2,3) - Move these both 1/4 of a beat backwards. So 2 is on 01:20:31.
01:23:56 (4) - New combo.
01:24:38 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:30:89 (1) - Shorten this 1/4 of a beat. So the endpoint ends at 01:32:51
01:34:14 (3) - Shorten to the nearest white tick.
01:35:97 (1,2,3) - Move these 1/4 of a beat backwards.
It could also use some hit sounds as well.

Crownfulless~
00:04:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Something sounds early here?
00:44:52 (13) - From here to half of the song, it's not recommended that notes be silent, especially when it's going for like 30+ seconds.
Some beats just sound off sync close to the ending

So umm yeah ;_;

Thanks a lot ^^

hi hi! XD
Just suggestions and opinions~

Swanheart
00:18:90 (1) - finish
00:44:52 (5) - ^
not much problems here

Crownless
00:04:14 (1,2) - nudge forward (press K)
00:05:23 (3) - ^
00:05:77 (4) - ^
00:06:65 (5) - move 1/8 later
00:06:92 (6) - ^
00:08:07 (9) - finish?
00:26:62 (1) - remove new combo
00:28:45 (4) - clap?
00:44:52 (13) - new combo
01:59:57 (2) - spacing here is inconsistent with the others
02:10:35 (2) - inconsistent spacing
02:23:97 (4,5) - ^
02:37:80 (1) - remove new combo
02:51:63 (2,3) - clap?
02:58:14 (2,3) - ^
03:01:39 (7) - ^
02:31:50 (2,4,6,1,5) - finish? xD
03:02:00 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - nudge FORWARD >.>
03:04:64 (1) - clap
03:02:71 (1) - remove new combo
03:11:15 (1) - this slider needs two claps
03:13:08 (2,3,4,5) - move this 1/4 later
03:07:90 (1) - finish
03:14:61 (1) - ^
03:20:81 (1,2) - ^
There are some parts that are not well spaced D:
demo...
This song is awesome~
starz.. good luck!

Distance Snap is not gonna hurt you. Please, check EVERY not with this one. It's hard to do this? Yeah it is. But it's the only way. For now, only modding the Swabhearth diff.

//Swanhearth//
00:44:523(5) - reeeeeally boring slider. Make a slider here that ends at 00:47:777. Then u make a Break time between the slider and the (1)
00:58:323(2) - There are another wrong spacing but this one can break a few newbies. Change the shape of the slider and distance snap here.
01:14:621(1) - Just like the one up here. Too far from the (4). Distance snap here.
01:37:397(3) - another ultra boring slider. It's way too long. Or use a bis slider (but not so long) or u end the slider at 01:39:838, make a loop and use Break time after.
02:01:810(1) - ending too soon. End at 02:02:217.

The skin is pretty cool and the song too.
U got my star =]
*star*

My unfinished diff T.T
Download: Nightwish - Moondance (Kurai_) [FantasMic].osu

EDIT: IRC Mod as well.

Look at how Inozuma adds hitsounds. Your hitsounds have no rhythm in them.

[Swanheart]
00:28:25 (4) - Move the beat 2 grids down.
00:52:04 (1) - Make it start at 00:51:84 and end at 00:54:68.
00:55:09 (1) - Extend by 1/4 beat.
01:09:74 (3) - ^ (Means same as above)
01:55:30 (2) - ^
01:56:92 (1) - ^
02:04:25 (1) - Use ctrl-C with this and then change (3) and (4) into this slider. For (4), flip horizontally then vertically.
02:07:09 (5) - Change into a spinner that ends on 02:08:31.

[Crownless]
Horrible hitsounds. The 1st parts are overloaded with Finishes and the next few parts have barely any hitsounds.
00:15:66 (4) - Extend by 1/4 beat.
Change the 3 beats after ^ into: 00:16:47 (5) and 00:16:74 (6).
00:25:81 (1) - Use ctrl-C with this and then change (3) into this slider. Flip horizontally then vertically.
00:38:82 (1,2,3,4) - BAD. Move the slider so the ends are further away from the (1) and (3).

[FantasMic]
01:50:41 - The kiai time is too long, dood.
02:00:57 (1,2,3) - Spacing problem, the (2) is nearer to (3) than (1).
02:28:64 (3,4,5) - Alignment problem.
02:36:77 (6,7,8) - Spacing problem.

[Romanticide]
00:06:72 (10) - New Combo.


Sorry, but I can't star this yet.

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Swanheart
offset = 18,882
01:50:410 - inherit this timing section here, then move the off
the following new combos are intended to help spacing
00:44:50 (5) - New combo
01:03:62 (3) - ^
01:04:84 (1) - remove new combo
01:09:72 (6) - new combo
01:56:10 (3) - new combo

Crownless
Fix the break time in this diff
00:00:466 - change offset to 460 then make sure ur notes are all snapped on the timeline
00:18:917 - change offset to 18,882
01:50:395 - inherit this timing section(the one around this 01:50:395) and then make sure the offset to this inherit timing section is 110,395
well that's all i can help u with in this diff, something about the ending seems really bad though

FantasMic - is it suppose to be FantasMix?
do the same timing points like in the others i modded
00:44:503 - delete the timing section at this point
01:50:004 - inherit this timeline

Romanticide
same as other diffs, u know the timing stuff
and make sure u fix breaks after u add the new timing

well that's all I can mod on this map, patterns look good, just timing has me kinda stumped, , , anyways make sure u add the timing stuff i pointed out, they'll help out ^^

Nice map ^^
Have a star~

Thx All :Þ

Maybe my last mod wasn't accurate enough, sorry

(When I say move to the right, I mean on the timeline, don't confuse with grid)

[Swanheart]
00:44:52 (5) - Extend by 1/4
00:55:09 (1) - ^
01:16:24 (3) - Too near to (2)..?
02:01:81 (1) - Extend by 1/4

[Crownless]
Reinsert Break.
01:42:68 (1,1,1) - Hitsounds? They sound plain.
01:50:42 to 02:09:53 - Cut down on the Claps, use them every 2/1.
02:15:63 (1) - Extend by 1/4
02:44:10 (1) - One more repeat.
02:44:61 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Move to the right by 1/4
03:01:90 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:21:47 (1,2,3) - ^
03:25:54 (2) - Change into slider that repeats on 1/4 and ends at 03:25:92
03:26:74 - Add beat.
03:26:86 (4) - Move to the right by 1/4.


Mod may continue.

[Skin]
Pense à recopier le circle overlay et le cursortrail du thème original, avec des skins qui difèrent, ça peut faire des trucs horribles.

[Swanheart]
00:23:37 (2,3) - alignement?
00:43:71 (3,4,5) - Spacing
00:44:52 (5,1) - Jump tres inaproprié
le spacing entre chaque slider change aussi un peu aléatoirement. a corriger.
01:14:62 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing bizzare
02:04:25 (1,3,4) - essiae de les rendre plus parrallèles
02:07:09 (1) - la fin du slider sonne mal. je le ferais finir 1/2 temps plus tard


[Crownless]
PRIMO : FAIS MOI UN RESNAP!!!! certaines notes (de la partie "bien timée") ne sont pas bien snappées! (exemple : 00:40:45 (1,2,3,4,5) )

00:02:65 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Vu comme les notes sont timées, il doit y avoir un probleme. mais ça sonne bien. donc je sais pas.
00:15:66 (4,5,6,7,8) - Le timing étant bizzare, je sais pas si c'est jusdicieux de le mapper comme tel
00:25:81 (2,1) - fais moi un échange de New combo
00:33:94 (5) - new combo
00:34:96 (8) - Clap ici et new combo

toute la partie lente est a resnapper.
00:52:04 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - faudra que tu m'explique sur quoi c'est timé
02:20:51 (3) - la fin devrait etre 1/4 de temps plus tard pour respecter les trucs précédents
02:47:87 (1,2,3,1,2) - mauvais timing
A partir d'ici, revois le timing (probablement a cause du resnap que tu as du faire.
03:20:81 (1,2) - je désaprouve.
03:25:54 (2) - probleme

[fantasmic]
02:12:27 (1) - ici, le timing me semble bizzare
02:16:44 (7) - timing de la fin bizzare
02:36:77 (6,7,8) - spacing pas terrible
02:37:48 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - mauvais timing
02:51:62 (5,6) - lol?
02:53:45 (x) - je dirais qu'il manque une note ici
03:00:36 (1,2,3,4,5) - arf, c'est pas tres beau tout ça
03:14:804 - probleme de timing général ici aussi, conséquence du resnap :<
03:25:380 - idem

[Romanticide]
00:02:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - timing bizzare.
00:35:06 (1) - 1/4 de temps plus tard
00:36:18 (4) - 1 répétition supplémentaire
00:41:57 (6) - 1/4 de temps plus tard
00:42:69 (3) - déja vu? répétition supplémentaire
00:51:69 - je trouve que c'est mal timé a partir de ce point, c'est a dire que le début des notes n'est pas tres dans le rythme, plutot a contre temps. arrange moi ça stp.
01:53:47 (4,5,6,7) - j'aime pas.
01:55:30 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:56:92 (4) - mauvais timing de fin
02:03:43 (1) - 1 répétition supplémentaire
02:20:51 (3) - fais en sorte que ça se termine 1/4 de temps plus tard si tu veux que ça colle avec les précédents.
02:38:41 (1) - 1 répétition, puis probleme de timing général
02:41:66 (8) - +1 répétition
02:44:10 (1) - 1 répétition, puis probleme de timing général
03:01:90 - timing général
03:12:57 (1) - +1 répétition
03:20:81 (1,2) - je désaprouve.
03:26:86 (4) - 1/4 de temps plus tot
03:27:67 (8) - efface cette note

Pour les difficultés Romanticide et crownless, la deniere timing section est mal timée. l'offset devrait etre a 201 476.

Voila, c'est tout. Beaucoup de choses a modifier en raison du changement de timing. Bon courage~

Hi~ ^^

[Swanheart]
Good

[Crownless]
00:34:337 - Add note?
00:34:540 - ^

[FantasMic]
Perfect ^^


Star~

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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

[Swanheart]

00:19:30 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:20:12 (1) - ^
00:20:93 (1) - ^
00:29:06 (1) - This is really confusing, respace please.
00:33:13 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:33:94 (1) - ^
00:39:64 (1) - ^
00:40:45 (1) - ^
00:55:09 (1) - ^
01:11:36 (4) - New combo.
02:06:28 (4) - Clap on startpoint.


[Crownless]

00:17:29 (8) - Extend 1/4.
00:34:94 (4) - Clap on startpoint also.
00:44:52 (1) - Extend 4/4.
01:52:86 (1,2) - Respace these, very confusing.
01:54:48 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:55:09 (5) - ^
01:55:50 (1) - ^
02:26:00 (4) - ^


[FantasMic]

01:29:27 (1,2,3,4) - Look at this spacing and at 01:30:90 (1,2,3) - .. keep spacing consistent.
01:43:91 (1) - Spinner is a bit too long, almost 6 seconds..


Nice map,
Starred *

very nice =D

stared!

<General>
Avoid BPMs like "170.001". Those small decimal figures kind of suggest that the offset placing is crudely-done.

[Swanheart]
You only need one non-inherited timing section, and that's BPM 147.500 at 19,300 ms. Do a resnap, NOT a rescale, as I've adjusted this to go with the correct measure.
01:37:40 (3) - This is a dangerously-long and boring slider. You can cut this up and them place a break afterwards until the next timing section you placed.

Make this difficulty longer. By gods, I hate how you just cut it there.

[Crownless]
BPM: 170.000, Offset 475 ms.
00:04:13 (1,2,3,4) - Move these forward by 1/4. You will also have to adjust the pattern after this one to make up for the timing change.
00:15:65 (4) - Move the end point back by 1/8.
00:16:53 (6) - Move this back by 1/8.
00:44:50 (6, Break) - The long slider and the short break don't constitute for a good pattern.
02:06:69 (4) - Move this further from the previous note.
BPM: 150.000, Offset 153,941 ms.
BPM: 147.520, Offset 155,141 ms.
02:38:90 (2,3) - Move these back by 1/4.
02:41:64 (8) - Sounds incomplete. Repeat it once again.
02:47:74 (2,3,1) - What the heck? Starting from the end point of the first note (and including), they should be moved back by 1/4.
Remove the timing sections on 188,106 ms, 194,816 ms and 201,171 ms, or make them inherit the last BPMs. They're ruining the flow of your notes, and especially the timing.
Starting from 03:08:08 (1), the timing goes haywire from here. See ^, and resnap the notes MANUALLY.

[FantasMic]
Please follow the timing section suggestions from [Crownless] if applicable.
00:43:48 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These jumps are really dangerous, and do not do justice on the pattern. I suggest you reconsider adding these.
02:12:27 (1) - Screw this spinner off.
02:16:44 (7) - Move the end point back by 1/4.
02:37:48 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you followed the timing section suggestions correctly, these should be off the ticks. Readjust accordingly.
03:24:77 (2,3,4,5) - Starting from the end point of the first note (and including), move everything back by 1/4.
03:27:31 (8) - Remove this.

The fact that you have varying non-inherited timing sections for each difficulty hints me about the inconsistencies.

Thx

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

Set preview point.
Resnap all notes in all difficulties.
Volume Down (just a bit)

[Swanheart]

00:58:035 (4) - spacing

[Crownless]

It's ok

[FantasMic]

Use always "distance snap". Spacing is partially wrong.

Starred~

à pars le nazi mod dis sur irc rien de bien choquant :>

Star~

Thx :3

The first part of [FantasMic] could be w/ a few less steps. This part doesn't combine w/ the song. Kinda weird.

The rest of the map, and the other diff. are awesome. Best Nightwish beatmap i've played, good work and a star for u

The source of this song is the album "Oceanborn", so add the word Oceanborn in the Source field at Song Setup (F4). Do this for all difficulties.

xxheroxx wrote:

Set preview point.

He's right; you have no preview point. In case you don't know how to add it: go to a place in the song that you think is representative of the song, select "Timing" from the menu (from where it says File, Edit, View, Options, not where it says Compose, Design...), then select the last thing on the list, "Set Current Position as Preview". Do the same thing for all difficulties, but choose the same place every time. If you want a suggestion on where to put the preview point, you can try either 00:18:689 or 01:17:766, for example, depending if you want a powerful or calm preview.

At most, you need two red timing sections:
475 170.00 (not needed on Swanheart since you start later)
18,893 147.52

...and that's it. For anything else, like doubling or resetting the bpm, you need inherited timing sections only, and their offsets should be on ticks of the timeline made by the red-line timing sections:

Swanheart
18,893 147.52
Inherited at 44,516
Inherited at 110,406

Crownless
475 170.00
18,893 147.52
Inherited at 19,288 (put kiai time here!)
Inherited at 44,516
Inherited at 110,406
Inherited at 132,877
Inherited at 151,078
Inherited at 153,925
Inherited at 155,145
Inherited at 181,989
Inherited at 187,887
Inherited at 188,090
Inherited at 194,597
Inherited at 194,801
Inherited at 200,800
Inherited at 201,105

FantasMic
475 170.00
Inherited at 15,651
Inherited at 17,239
18,893 147.52
Inherited at 44,923
Inherited at 101,440
Inherited at 102,253
Inherited at 103,066
Inherited at 103,880
Inherited at 110,388
Inherited at 128,182

After you fix your timing sections, resnap. My modding from this point assumes you've changed the timing and resnapped, but haven't fixed anything else (although usually it's good to check your map after resnapping and manually moving anything that the automatic resnap moved to the wrong place in the timeline):

Swanheart:
00:41:974 (1) - 1/4 later.
01:37:390 (3) - This slider's end doesn't seem to match anything in the music. Make it 1/2 shorter so it ends at 01:40:644.

Crownless
00:04:180 (1) - 1/4 longer
00:04:710 (2) - 1/4 later
00:05:239 (1) - 1/4 later
00:05:769 (2) - 1/4 later, should be 3/8 long and have three repeats.
00:13:974 (2) - 1/4 later
00:15:651 (1) - 1/4 longer
00:16:269 (2,3,4) - 1/4 later
00:17:327 (5) - Make it start 1/8 sooner (oh god), make it 1/8 longer so it still ends on the white tick.
00:37:195 (1) - That's too close to the previous circle, space them farther.
In the quiet part starting from 00:52:041 (1), I suggest you use soft Whistles instead of Finishes, even if they're not loud.
Add a circle at 01:54:879.
01:57:727 (1) - One more repeat.
02:03:421 (1) - Same as above.
02:10:742 (1) - 1/4 longer
02:15:622 (1) - Same.
02:20:503 (3) - Same.
02:25:994 (4) - Too close to the 3.
02:38:399 (1) - One more repeat.
02:39:314 (2,3) - Both sliders 1/4 later.
02:47:652 (2) - 1/4 shorter, 1/4 later.
02:49:787 (2) - Too close to the 1. Space it farther.
02:50:601 (1) - Similar to above.
...

-- I'm really sorry, but I can't go on right now. It's 3:30 am, and there's just too many things left to list. It's taken me hours to mod this. Thank you, people who gave their star to this map.

On the other hand, you've been waiting for my post for quite some time, so this is in case you thought I'd forgotten about it. In short: start by looking at what I've listed, then listen carefully at the maps. If you hear things in the wrong place, move them to the right place. If you're not sure, slow the song down and listen again. Whenever you move something, don't forget to space it again correctly. You can also try asking more users to mod this map to help you out with details. When you think your map's problems are less than two pages long, call for a BAT again.

Good luck

Thx cossete for your star and thx Sinistro for your perfect mod :3

[FantasMic]
00:30:161 (6,7) - These two objects are placed on the same time value and neither are snapped.

Directly from AIMod (ctrl+shift+a). A very important tool for mappers!

Enjoyed the map. I give it a star, but needs a few fixes before it's rankable.

Thx :3

explication du mod :
entre * * -> je trouve que c'est mieux comme ça, les autres remarques c'est aux cas ou ma proposition ne te plait pas.
pour les slider de avec au moins 1 aller-retour -> je nomme la partie concerné avec un "x/y" où y:"taille du slider" et x:"circle a modifier". (exemple : 2/3 -> milieu d'un slider avec 1 seul aller-retour )


Crownless :

00:00:047 (1,2) - whistle sur 1, rien sur le 2eme ( avec un whistle en plus au début du slider ).
00:01:053 (3,4) - ^^^
00:03:038 (4,5) - *inverse 4 et 5* ,ou rajoute un whistle sur 5.
00:05:032 (1) - whistle aux 2 extrémités.
00:05:085 (2) - whistle à 2/5 ,et whistle sur *soit 4/5* soit 5/5 (ou même sur les 2).
00:06:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - *whistle sur 2, 3 et 6*, pas de whistle sur 1, 4 et 5* ( whistle sur 5 en plus ).
00:09:012(1,2) - sur le même modèle que 00:00:047 (1,2).
00:11:085 (2) - *whistle au début, rien a la fin* ( tu peux aussi laisser comme ça...)
00:13:097 (2) - whistle.
00:14:059 (3) - *whistle à 1/3 et 3/3* ( sinon 2/3 et 3/3 ).
00:23:067 (6,7) - ça m'a choqué à la premiere écoute, mais en jouant ça passe pas trop mal.
tu pourrais essayer de de mettre le clap sur 7 en gardant le finnish.
00:26:021 (2) - clap.
00:27:002 (2) - clap.
00:27:084 (2) - clap au début.
00:29:046 (2,4) - clap sur les 2.
00:30:089 (3) - *clap* .
00:31:029 (6) - enleve le clap au début.
00:33:094 (1,2) - *clap aux extrémités de 2*, ( ou clap à la fin de 1 et au début de 2 ).
00:35:097 (2) - clap.
00:39:002 (2,4) - enlève les clap a la fin.
00:40:065 (2,3) - *rajoute clap sur le 2* ( ou inverse juste le clap entre 2 et 3 ).
00:42:048 (2) - clap.
00:43:019 (6,7) - enleve le clap sur 6 ( tu peux le remplacé aussi par un whistle ).
00:43:049 (1,2,3,4,5) - *clap sur 2 et 4* ( clap sur 5 au lieux de 4 ).
01:16:064 (6,7) - raproche le 7 pour avoir comme entre 2-3 et 4-5. ( vraiment facultatif ).
01:50:040 (1,2) - clap à la fin de 1 et sur 2.
01:51:042 (4) - clap.
01:51:062 (5) - clap à 1/4 et 3/4. enlève ceux à 2/4 et 4/4.
01:52:043 (6) - *finish*.
01:52:084 (1) - clap ( facultatif ).
01:54:006 (3) - clap.
01:58:033 (1,2) - clap au début des 2 slider.
01:59:055 (2,4) - clap.
02:00:077 (1) - enlève le clap.
02:00:098 (2) - clap. au début.
02:01:038 (3) - enlève la clap au début.
02:02:060 (7) - enlève la clap à la fin.
02:03:042 (1) - clap à 1/5 et 5/5.
02:04:064 (1) - clap au début.
02:05:045 (2) - clap su celui ci.( sinon a la fin de ce slider 02:04:064 (1) ).
02:09:092 (1,2) - clap sur les 2 ?
02:11:055 (3) - si tu change ceux au dessus clap aux deux extrémités.
02:16:043 (3) - clap en plus à 2/3 ?
02:19:008 (7,8) - *clap sur le 7 et non le 8* !
02:21:052 (3,4) - *clap su le 3 et non sur le 4* ( tu peux aussi garder en plus le clap sur la 4).
02:21:092 (5,6,7,8) - *clap sur 7 et 8, rien sur 5 et 6*.
02:23:075 (3,4,5) - clap sur les ? ( sinon, echange 4 et 5 ).
02:25:038 (3) - finish au début.
02:25:099 (1) - finish.
02:26:060 (4) - finish au début.
02:35:014 (1) - clap à 5/5.
02:36:016 (4,5) - clap sur 4 pas sur 5.
02:36:097 (1) - clap à la fin.
02:37:038 (2) - finish à la fin.
02:39:000 (2,3) - *met les 2 sliders sur les ticks rouge* ?
02:39:082 (1) - whistle ?
02:40:022 (4) - whistle à la fin.
02:40:063 (5) - whistle.
02:41:065 (8) - whistle à 1/5, 5/5 ( un à 2/5 en plus rend bien aussi).
02:42:026 (1,4) - whistle si tu en mes un sur le 5/5 juste avant.
02:43:048 (6) - whistle à la fin.
02:44:009 (1) - *whistle à 1/5, 2/5 et 5/5*.
02:44:070 (2) - *clap à la fin*.
02:45:051 (5,6) - *clap sur le 6 pas sur le 5*.
02:46:012 (1) - *clap au début, pas à la fin*.
02:46:053 (2,3) - *clap sur le 2 pas sur le 3*.
02:47:034 (1) - *clap à 3/3*.
02:52:002 (1) - *clap à 1/2 et 2/2*.
02:52:063 (2) - *clap*.
02:52:083 (3) - *clap à 3/6 et 5/6*.
02:54:005 (3,4) - *clap sur 3, pas sur 4*.
02:55:048 (1,2) - *clap au début des 2 sliders*.
02:57:010 (1) - *clap à 1/5, 2/5 et 5/5 et pas a 3/5 et 4/5*.
02:58:053 (1) - *clap à 2/3*.
02:59:014 (2) - *clap*.
02:59:034 (3) - *clap à 3/6 et 5/6*.
03:00:056 (3,4) - *clap sur 3, pas sur 4*.
03:01:088 (1,3) - j'aime pas du tout ces 2 sliders.
03:20:080 (1,2) - finish sur les 2 ?
la fin est vraiment bizarre niveau hitsounds... tu peux peut etre essayé de changer celon les modèle que j'ai deja donné.


j'espère que tu comprend pourquoi je ne mod pas les autres diff xD. si après modification, tu trouve tes auters diff mauvaise ( on sait jamais xD ), t'as qu'à utilisé le meme modèle.

je suis étonné de ne pas l'avoir encore starrer.

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Thx :3

Bonne map =D
Star~

General:

~ The BG sizes are too big, please resize to 1024x768 pixels or 800x600.
~ Add a hitcircle overlay.

Swanheart:

~ Remove audio lead in.

Fantasmic:

~ Raise stacking leniency by 2 ticks.

02:22:943 (1) – Extend to 02:23:350 (white tick).

Crownless:

00:18:893 Remove kiai (you don’t have it here in Easy…)
00:57:938 (3) – The return is almost completely hidden, please respace.
01:54:879 (x) – add a note?
01:55:286 (x) - ^
02:38:907 (2,3) – Sounds and plays completely off, put these on white ticks.
02:47:754 (2) – I don’t like this slider XD
03:07:887 (1) – You’ll need a warning or something for this slider because it’s hard to tell it’s a x2 section.
03:07:887 (1,2,3,4,1) – Rethink the spacing in this section, its an anti jump followed by a jump and is pretty irritating imo.
03:14:597 (1) - You may need a warning
03:20:800 (7) - ^ (Imo its pretty easy with practice but you might be asked to put in a warning…)
03:26:901 (5) – Move to 03:27:003 (red tick).
03:27:714 (1) – Delete this note.

The spacing on this difficulty does seem to be a bit random at times, there’s a quite a few anti jumps and such but after playing this for a while I’ve grown accustomed to them and find them pretty easy to hit… so I guess the spacing is fine at least imo (though you should get some more opinions)

~ Star

Star

~ Recheck time

General:

~ Add a hitcircle overlay.
~ Delete .osb and full submit.

Swanheart:

BPM: 147.520 Offset: 110,406 -- Unnecessary timing section, delete. (Or add it to the other difficulties).

FantasMic:

BPM: 110.700 Offset: 475 -- Why is this different to [Crownless], all bpm's and offset should be the same.

02:24:164 (5) - Move left one square.

Crownless:

Why is the first timing section different to FantasMic now?

00:17:372 (5) - Why is this snapped to an 1/8, (it's snapped on the wrong 1/8), timing issue.
00:33:941 (1) - Right one square.
02:39:619 (3) - Distance snap this, it's too close.
03:05:853 (1) - Add an extra return.
03:07:887 (1) - I still think this needs a warning.
03:14:597 (1) - ^
03:20:800 (7) - The inheriting section here takes place mid slider, start it on the white tick.
03:20:800 (7) - End on white tick.

Make sure the timing is consistent, and that's all for now

Since this map was submitted a while ago you can post it here for BAT attention.

+for nice song choice, love folky songs

Thx :3

I'm not the biggest fan of this skin, but i really like the map *o*

Thx :3

Gee, how many times have I looked at this map?

[FantasMic]
02:38:297 (2,3,4) - 1/4 to the right and shorten the slider by 1/4? Sounds like crap in its current position.

That's all I guess.

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You can win me with Marisa~ Star~

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In Swanheart and Crownless, put back the first timing section, as in fantasmic. Why? in the menu screen, it will put a bpm, so the osu! picture will already be in rhythm with it. :3

make kiai the same on all diffs

[Swanheart]
00:42:076 (1,2) - Spacing here.
01:09:530 (x) - raise Hitsounds volume a bit in that part

[FantasMic]
I think the finish hitsound doesn't fit the music.
02:16:436 (7) - end of this slider isn't timed right
02:25:384 (2) - finish 1/4 later
02:37:484 (1) - timing's wrong on this one
02:57:718 (7) - Suggestion : put a note here, and make the start of this slider 1/2 beat later

[Crownless]
00:52:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - all this part is off-beat. it sounds really bad, in such a quiet part.
01:43:898 (x) - suggestion : add a note with finish here
01:54:879 (5,6) - why such a jump here?
01:53:253 (2,3) - maybe align?
02:38:399 (1) - add a repeat
03:05:039 (2) - from here, the clap hitsounds feel random
the x2 on the "Hey!" are a little annoying imo

I didn't point alignments as they were said wanted from the mapper.
03:20:902 (7) - sound ugly. if you really want to follow the "Hey hey!" put it 1/4 beat later.

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After a few Fixes on IRC (files to delete, kiai, etc) and final check, I think this is great.

I can now safely proto bubble this map. Oh gawd, this is my first proto bubble.
You got a pubble, Bro~

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