1. Hard (3.99 stars, 136 notes)
2. Normal (2.17 stars, 82 notes)

Lexi-chan- wrote:

Hey! Saw you in #modreq so I decided to take a look at your mapset.

Normal:
Mapped very well.

Hard:
00:33:900 (6,1,2,3) - Use higher spacing between 6 and 1 because it can confuse newer players. fix~
01:25:200 (4) - Maybe add a finish sound at the end of the slider. sorry

That was it. I like your map. :3

ykcarrot wrote:

당근대가족

El SolarBeam wrote:

for M4$M

[Normal]

00:27:300 Finish here sounds nice Fix
00:43:500 Add whistle ^
01:17:400 ^ ^
00:42:900 I prefer remove whistle here and add whistle at 00:43:500 Fix
00:47:700 Lower the hitsound here
00:55:200 (6) The slider doesn't fit, maybe change to slider+circle or circle only good, fix
01:06:900 (7,8) Lower the hitsound, and make (7)'s hitsound lower than (8)
01:09:000 (2,3) You sure it doesn't feel too crowded?
01:22:500 (6,1) Could make blanket Fix
01:25:200 (2) Somehow the tick on this slider doesn't fit with the song. Change timing or change the slider This slide does not change. However, if there are changes to the content to BAT.


[Hard]

00:02:700 Whistle here for consistency Fix
00:11:100 ^ ^
00:15:900 ^ ^
00:20:100 (1,2) Maybe don't stack these to make a better flow
00:31:200 (4,5) Create a blanket with these Fix
00:20:700 Add whistle, then reduce the hitsound at 00:21:000 because it's disturbing
00:24:000 and 00:24:600 Reduce hitsound
00:37:500 ^
00:40:500 ^
00:57:300 The hitsound can be modified so the (1) sounds lower and until (4) sounds higher (how to say it.. simply put, like a ladder of hitsound) Fix
01:06:900 ^ Here too ^
01:16:500 ^ And here ^
01:18:900 Change to whistle and remove whistle at 01:19:200 Fix
01:20:700 Finish here Fix
01:11:700 (4,5) Can become a blanket too, just move the (3) as well
01:12:900 (1,2) Maybe don't space it too far (but it's not a big deal though)
01:22:500 (1,2) ^
01:25:200 (4) Make this slider to be having 2 tick the same as normal

I'm amazed with the nice timing modification, good luck

1. 00:15:300 (6) - Change NC

1. 00:24:900 (6) - Change NC

1. 00:27:300 (1,2) - Spacing is ×0.5. It is not good...

1. 00:34:500 (5) - Change NC

1. 00:44:100 (6) - Change NC

1. 00:53:700 (5) - Change NC

1. 01:03:300 (5) - Change NC

1. 01:12:900 (6) - Change NC

1. How about in this way?

Rhythm

1. 00:48:900 (1) - Add Finish on the head

1. 00:58:500 (1) - Add Finish on the head

1. 01:08:100 (1) - Add Finish on the head

1. 01:17:700 (1) - Add Finish on the head

1. 00:48:900 (1) - I think that you may separate distance of this note and note before one.
   
   for example

   

1. 00:53:700 (1) - ^

1. 00:58:500 (1) - ^

1. 01:08:100 (1) - ^

1. 01:12:900 (1) - ^

1. 01:17:700 (1) - ^

1. 00:30:300 (3,4) - How about in this way?
   
   Rhythm and Placement

   

1. 00:48:900 (1) - Add Finish on the head

1. 00:58:500 (1) - Add Finish on the head

1. 01:08:100 (1) - Add Finish on the head

1. 01:17:700 (1) - Add Finish on the head

EnixYuki wrote:

Hi M4M~♪
[General]
Change Clannad into CLANNAD in Source. Fixed
Uncheck the check box of 'Letterbox during breaks' ^

[Normal]

general
nothing~

Placement

1. 00:15:300 (6) - Change NC not change

1. 00:24:900 (6) - Change NC ^

1. 00:27:300 (1,2) - Spacing is ×0.5. It is not good... front and back of the interval is too wide.

1. 00:34:500 (5) - Change NC not change

1. 00:44:100 (6) - Change NC ^

1. 00:53:700 (5) - Change NC ^

1. 01:03:300 (5) - Change NC ^

1. 01:12:900 (6) - Change NC ^

Rhythm

1. How about in this way? hmm.. good

Rhythm

Hitsound

1. 00:48:900 (1) - Add Finish on the head Fixed

1. 00:58:500 (1) - Add Finish on the head ^

1. 01:08:100 (1) - Add Finish on the head ^

1. 01:17:700 (1) - Add Finish on the head ^

[Hard]

general
This is the most difficult Dif.But it is too easy.I think that you may make it hard a little more.

Placement

1. 00:48:900 (1) - I think that you may separate distance of this note and note before one. I have made it just as easily.
   
   for example

   

1. 00:53:700 (1) - ^

1. 00:58:500 (1) - ^

1. 01:08:100 (1) - ^

1. 01:12:900 (1) - ^

1. 01:17:700 (1) - ^

Rhythm

1. 00:30:300 (3,4) - How about in this way? so good
   
   Rhythm and Placement

   

Hitsound

1. 00:48:900 (1) - Add Finish on the head Fixed

1. 00:58:500 (1) - Add Finish on the head ^

1. 01:08:100 (1) - Add Finish on the head ^

1. 01:17:700 (1) - Add Finish on the head ^

I love CLANNAD<3
I hope this map is ranked
Good Luck~

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Normal

00:12:900 (4) Make this slider a bit more curvy, its a repeat slider, so i dont think it will affect the distance snap if you make it a bit more curvy.
00:15:300 (6) Add New Combo Fixed
00:17:700 (8) Make this a bit curvy too, maybe like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1104767 strange
00:28:500 (2) Add whistle? Fixed
00:34:500 (5) New Combo Fixed
00:44:100 (6) ^
01:12:900 (6) ^

Hard

00:06:900 (4) ctrl+c 00:07:500 ctrl+v ctrl+h ctrl+v Move the slider to x:456 y:96 strange
00:45:300 (2) Add Whistle? Fixed
01:21:300 (8) NC Fixed


Very nice Map, and the song is so cute T_T I want to Hug every dango there *_*

Star :3

Natsu wrote:

oh lol you are mapping this <3

aonkub555 wrote:

Hello -Kirito m4m

general

http://puu.sh/5pSy7.jpg

normal

00:22:500 (4) can be symmetry (5) i think it will be look good better http://puu.sh/5pSfy.jpg good fixed

Hard

00:05:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Hmm.... you use distance 1.0x? , this pattern have unequal distance a bit between 00:07:500 (5,6) - 00:07:800 (6,7) - 00:06:900 (4) end slider with 00:08:100 (7) the change is not.

try to move (2) to 277l185 , (3) to 360l206 , (4) to 360l206 , (5)448l52 , (6)384l110 , 436l178 for neat better

that's all , i can't find point of problem more than i can

hope it's useful for you

my map will post in your m4m modding queue~

1. The background has a strange size, it would be nice if you can resize it to a standard resolution.

1. 00:05:700 (6) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
2. 00:17:700 (3,1) - These two objects feels a bit too close each other, it might confuse beginners.
3. 00:24:900 (6) - Same as suggested at 00:05.
4. 00:55:200 (6) - Add a new combo here for the same reason as above, also because it's way too long for a Normal difficulty.

1. Increase HP and OD by 1 tick at least, it's way too low and easy right now for this difficulty.

1. 00:18:900 (6) - Add a whistle here, it feels like you forgot to add it.
2. 00:55:200 (3) - It would be nicer if you could stack this slider perfectly with the previous one.
3. 01:22:500 (1) - Remove this new combo from here.
4. 01:23:700 (2) - Add a new combo here afterwards.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. The background has a strange size, it would be nice if you can resize it to a standard resolution. this is my mistake!1366*768 change

~Normal~

1. 00:05:700 (6) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
2. 00:17:700 (3,1) - These two objects feels a bit too close each other, it might confuse beginners.
3. 00:24:900 (6) - Same as suggested at 00:05.
4. 00:55:200 (6) - Add a new combo here for the same reason as above, also because it's way too long for a Normal difficulty.

~Hard~

1. Increase HP and OD by 1 tick at least, it's way too low and easy right now for this difficulty.

1. 00:18:900 (6) - Add a whistle here, it feels like you forgot to add it.
2. 00:55:200 (3) - It would be nicer if you could stack this slider perfectly with the previous one. i do not know the meaning of it.
3. 01:22:500 (1) - Remove this new combo from here.
4. 01:23:700 (2) - Add a new combo here afterwards.

Cute and relaxing map :3 haha thanks

1. I still have the old background, are you sure that you changed it? Check it carefully.

1. 00:20:100 (1,2) - Spacing is wrong here, make sure to fix it properly.
2. 00:55:200 (6) - You forgot to set a new combo here.

Andrea wrote:

Here's a recheck.

~General~

1. I still have the old background, are you sure that you changed it? Check it carefully. change to a different image.

~Normal~

1. 00:20:100 (1,2) - Spacing is wrong here, make sure to fix it properly.
2. 00:55:200 (6) - You forgot to set a new combo here.

Rest is good now :3

1. The official title is 茶太 – だんご大家族 (TV Animation Ver.), so change "(TV Size)" to "(TV Animation Ver.)"
   Source: http://www.discogs.com/Eufonius-%E8%8C% ... se/1572870

1. 01:08:100 (1) - Add a jump here as you did before: http://puu.sh/5DaZV.jpg
   Also changing the direction of the curve is a nice idea for a better flow.
2. 01:17:700 (1) - Same, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1148816

grumd wrote:

— General

1. The official title is 茶太 – だんご大家族 (TV Animation Ver.), so change "(TV Size)" to "(TV Animation Ver.)"
   Source: http://www.discogs.com/Eufonius-%E8%8C% ... se/1572870

— Hard

1. 01:08:100 (1) - Add a jump here as you did before: http://puu.sh/5DaZV.jpg
   Also changing the direction of the curve is a nice idea for a better flow.
2. 01:17:700 (1) - Same, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1148816

Andrea wrote:

That was fast o.o

Congrats dude (:

grumd wrote:

Such a cute song

Ranked!

ykcarrot wrote:

Danggueno Daikazoku 랭축!

[Kanbe Kotori] wrote:

랭크 ㅊㅊㅊ

LoliFlan wrote:

oh man grats xD

rh73 wrote:

Maybe my opiinion as a new player isn't worth that much, but here:

Beautiful song and great map. But I think because of the slow tempo the "hard" version would be a perfect "normal+" (3 or 3,5 stars?) map with less hp drain. I have very much fun playing the hard version, it has great mapping and tempo, just right for beginners. But because of the high hp drain it is a little frustrating.