Come[Back]Home wrote:

Normal

00:12:900 (4) Make this slider a bit more curvy, its a repeat slider, so i dont think it will affect the distance snap if you make it a bit more curvy.
00:15:300 (6) Add New Combo Fixed
00:17:700 (8) Make this a bit curvy too, maybe like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1104767 strange
00:28:500 (2) Add whistle? Fixed
00:34:500 (5) New Combo Fixed
00:44:100 (6) ^
01:12:900 (6) ^

Hard

00:06:900 (4) ctrl+c 00:07:500 ctrl+v ctrl+h ctrl+v Move the slider to x:456 y:96 strange
00:45:300 (2) Add Whistle? Fixed
01:21:300 (8) NC Fixed


Very nice Map, and the song is so cute T_T I want to Hug every dango there *_*

Star :3

Natsu wrote:

oh lol you are mapping this <3

aonkub555 wrote:

Hello -Kirito m4m

general

http://puu.sh/5pSy7.jpg

normal

00:22:500 (4) can be symmetry (5) i think it will be look good better http://puu.sh/5pSfy.jpg good fixed

Hard

00:05:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Hmm.... you use distance 1.0x? , this pattern have unequal distance a bit between 00:07:500 (5,6) - 00:07:800 (6,7) - 00:06:900 (4) end slider with 00:08:100 (7) the change is not.

try to move (2) to 277l185 , (3) to 360l206 , (4) to 360l206 , (5)448l52 , (6)384l110 , 436l178 for neat better

that's all , i can't find point of problem more than i can

hope it's useful for you

my map will post in your m4m modding queue~

1. The background has a strange size, it would be nice if you can resize it to a standard resolution.

1. 00:05:700 (6) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
2. 00:17:700 (3,1) - These two objects feels a bit too close each other, it might confuse beginners.
3. 00:24:900 (6) - Same as suggested at 00:05.
4. 00:55:200 (6) - Add a new combo here for the same reason as above, also because it's way too long for a Normal difficulty.

1. Increase HP and OD by 1 tick at least, it's way too low and easy right now for this difficulty.

1. 00:18:900 (6) - Add a whistle here, it feels like you forgot to add it.
2. 00:55:200 (3) - It would be nicer if you could stack this slider perfectly with the previous one.
3. 01:22:500 (1) - Remove this new combo from here.
4. 01:23:700 (2) - Add a new combo here afterwards.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. The background has a strange size, it would be nice if you can resize it to a standard resolution. this is my mistake!1366*768 change

~Normal~

1. 00:05:700 (6) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
2. 00:17:700 (3,1) - These two objects feels a bit too close each other, it might confuse beginners.
3. 00:24:900 (6) - Same as suggested at 00:05.
4. 00:55:200 (6) - Add a new combo here for the same reason as above, also because it's way too long for a Normal difficulty.

~Hard~

1. Increase HP and OD by 1 tick at least, it's way too low and easy right now for this difficulty.

1. 00:18:900 (6) - Add a whistle here, it feels like you forgot to add it.
2. 00:55:200 (3) - It would be nicer if you could stack this slider perfectly with the previous one. i do not know the meaning of it.
3. 01:22:500 (1) - Remove this new combo from here.
4. 01:23:700 (2) - Add a new combo here afterwards.

Cute and relaxing map :3 haha thanks

1. I still have the old background, are you sure that you changed it? Check it carefully.

1. 00:20:100 (1,2) - Spacing is wrong here, make sure to fix it properly.
2. 00:55:200 (6) - You forgot to set a new combo here.

Andrea wrote:

Here's a recheck.

~General~

1. I still have the old background, are you sure that you changed it? Check it carefully. change to a different image.

~Normal~

1. 00:20:100 (1,2) - Spacing is wrong here, make sure to fix it properly.
2. 00:55:200 (6) - You forgot to set a new combo here.

Rest is good now :3

1. The official title is 茶太 – だんご大家族 (TV Animation Ver.), so change "(TV Size)" to "(TV Animation Ver.)"
   Source: http://www.discogs.com/Eufonius-%E8%8C% ... se/1572870

1. 01:08:100 (1) - Add a jump here as you did before: http://puu.sh/5DaZV.jpg
   Also changing the direction of the curve is a nice idea for a better flow.
2. 01:17:700 (1) - Same, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1148816

grumd wrote:

— General

1. The official title is 茶太 – だんご大家族 (TV Animation Ver.), so change "(TV Size)" to "(TV Animation Ver.)"
   Source: http://www.discogs.com/Eufonius-%E8%8C% ... se/1572870

— Hard

1. 01:08:100 (1) - Add a jump here as you did before: http://puu.sh/5DaZV.jpg
   Also changing the direction of the curve is a nice idea for a better flow.
2. 01:17:700 (1) - Same, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1148816

Andrea wrote:

That was fast o.o

Congrats dude (:

grumd wrote:

Such a cute song

Ranked!

ykcarrot wrote:

Danggueno Daikazoku 랭축!

[Kanbe Kotori] wrote:

랭크 ㅊㅊㅊ

LoliFlan wrote:

oh man grats xD

rh73 wrote:

Maybe my opiinion as a new player isn't worth that much, but here:

Beautiful song and great map. But I think because of the slow tempo the "hard" version would be a perfect "normal+" (3 or 3,5 stars?) map with less hp drain. I have very much fun playing the hard version, it has great mapping and tempo, just right for beginners. But because of the high hp drain it is a little frustrating.