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tieff

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tieff 2009-08-19T22:11:58+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16 сентября 2009 г. at 0:05:18

Artist: Type-Moon
Title: Maiden
Source: Kagetsu Tohya
Tags: Tsukihime
BPM: 100
Filesize: 5164kb
Play Time: 02:02
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4,55 stars, 229 notes)
Normal (4,28 stars, 180 notes)

Download: Type-Moon - Maiden
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Beatmap #17.
Boring map is boring. ;_;

Last edited by tieff 2009-09-15T20:06:00+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Breeze

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Breeze 2009-08-30T14:57:16+00:00

I'm the first yeah~
Let's to see what I could find helpful to moe moe tieff:

[normal]

00:33:433 (3) - a little spacing wrong
01:04:333 (2) - this one spacing wrong is obvious...
01:58:633 (6) - it's not overlapping with the end of (4), looked ugly

[Hard]

lookin good

star!

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2009-08-30T16:12:29+00:00

Add the characters on the bg and skin to the tags?

Normal:

SPOILER

Normal mod:
02:01:31 - move this inherited timing section a quarter note earlier

Combo mod: (I wanted to keep the combos to keep the same pattern throughout the entire song, so I made some suggestions based off what I was in the beginning)
00:36:73 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 (swap new combo)
00:44:53 (5,1) - swap new combo
00:46:93 (5,1) - ^
01:46:93 (3) - new combo

The map was pretty simple with most notes distance snapped, so it does feela little boring like that. Still, this is the easier difficulty, so it is fine.

Hard:

SPOILER

Normal mod:
02:01:31 - move this inherited timing section a quarter note earlier

Combo mod: (same type of combo mod that normal had)
00:36:73 (1,2) - swap new combo
00:39:73 (4,1) - ^
00:42:73 (4,1) - ^
00:45:13 (3,1) - ^
00:49:33 (5) - new combo
00:52:03 (9,1) - swap new combo
01:34:33 (1,2) - ^
01:37:93 (7,1) - ^
01:39:73 (7,1) - ^
01:42:73 (4,1) - ^

Nazi mod:
00:58:63 (7) - align with 5
01:21:43 (4) - mkae the smae distance from 3 that 2 is
01:46:03 (3,4) - align with 1,2 respectively?

Nice map. Star.

Last edited by blissfulyoshi 2009-08-30T16:54:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2009-08-30T16:19:48+00:00

Normal~
I see in Hard that the final spinner has a silent end. But the slider on Normal doesn't. Maybe do that? :3

That's all I've found.
Offset seems a tiny bit early at the start but then gets on track later on. So I guess I wouldn't worry too much about it.

Great job!

Alice

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Alice 2009-08-30T16:45:25+00:00

tieff~ <3
Normal
That's quite nazi, you of course don't need to do all that~
01:04:33 (2) - Maybe too far from (1)? usual spacing of this map is way more close but it's not like if it makes this diff hard lol

Hard
Same as normal actually
00:18:73 (3) - I think it should be a little more up according to the previous notes?

Again an awesome tieff map.

It deserves some love, and a star. <3 ☆

Sleep Powder

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Sleep Powder 2009-08-30T21:40:39+00:00

Offset seems a bit too early...

[Normal]
Not bad~

[Hard]
00:55:33 (3) - Start slider with a whistle instead?

If the song was any longer I would have fell asleep

Shinxyn

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Shinxyn 2009-08-30T21:53:11+00:00

rawr~
why does the mp3 start off so... odd? and the ending has some cut off part...?? what? Fade-In the mp3 plz, and cut off end better?

Normal- I really don't get the finish hitsounds coming and going in most places.... at first I thought you might have enhanced a certain piano note, but the hitsound doesn't follow that, and I tried thinking it as your own beat, but then that comes and goes as well... I don't get the flow of the finish (in the whole) >_< or maybe I'm just tired...
And too much whistles mixed with the piano...?

Hard- Finish hitsounds make more sense here~ still too much whistles though...
Nazi-

SPOILER

00:19:03 (4) - spacing looks odd here, right a tick please~
00:58:63 (7) - left a tick please (align with 5 and look like 1,2,3)
01:27:43 (7) - down a tick to have triangle form better?
Lots of slider parallel things I wanna point out, but that's just how I'd design

Try thinking of whistles on the same level as finish and clap for this song since the song is calm and fairly quiet, imo

Ekaru

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Ekaru 2009-08-30T21:57:34+00:00

Normal:

Fine. A bit boring, but flawless.

Hard:

Fine.

Star.

gdeath

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gdeath 2009-08-31T03:23:38+00:00

Yay!

It's tsukihime beatmap. <3

nice map~ I was fine with all of it.

starry*

PicoLo

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PicoLo 2009-09-01T18:55:21+00:00

~Star.

dkey

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dkey 2009-09-01T19:18:31+00:00

star~

Inozuma

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Inozuma 2009-09-02T20:44:35+00:00

Hi!

Timing sounds a bit early, try 18 145.

For tags and source, shouldn't Shingetsutan Tsukihime be the source and Kagetsu Tohya the tags?

[Normal]

Hum.. majorly suggestions
01:14:23 (4) - Whistle?
01:28:33 (2) - Make it look symmetric with (1)? (It's too close)

[Hard]
Hmmm... fine.

Relaxing map~
Star~

tieff

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tieff 2009-09-02T22:59:54+00:00

It's music from Kagetsu Tohya.

mtmcl

mtmcl 2009-09-04T01:23:33+00:00

Bubbled~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Diasios

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