- Inconsistency in Epilepsy Warning. It's missing in beginner. Also do you really need epilepsy warning here?
- Maybe you could ask Oyatsu to include more "Beatmap by ----" since right now in all the diffs it says Moway, and most of the diffs aren't by you so.
- Consider HP+1 for better spread.
- 00:21:734 - I couldn't help notice that a note felt missing here. It's not a huge deal but maybe you'd like to experiment with a different pattern that would have a 5 note stream.
- 00:29:909 (1) - Instead of this 1/1 slider on the red tick you could experiment with a circle here then 1/2 slider at 00:30:077 which would follow the piano transition in the music perfectly along with 00:30:414 (2,3,4,5).
With a jump and whistle on the head of the 1, I feel you could make a really nice pattern there.
- 00:38:167 (1) - Move it down a grid or so to round of the curve of the stream.
- 00:39:178 (7) - Maybe you'd like a more simple circle flow like this:
- 00:44:234 (1,2) - I thought you could try Ctrl+J. I feel it's more comfortable coming from 00:44:066 (3) imo and a better pattern with 00:43:560 (1,2,3). Maybe you could adjust spacings a bit to make it better.
- 00:46:088 (1,2) - Maybe move these down a few grids for a better pattern with 00:45:414 (2,3).
- 01:01:762 (1) - The jump feels a bit big, I suggest place it at (156, 184) to continue in the same pattern. You can try the 2 below it blanketing the 1:
- 00:34:796 (3) - I think whistle on head instead of tail is better for vocal.
- 01:11:538 (4) - Add finish is nice for better accent after 1-3.
- 01:17:100 (1) - Whistle on head? Feels empty here.
- 00:05:133 (2) - Missed whistle on head?
- 00:15:246 (1) - You can even out the right portion of the curve a little to blanket 00:16:594 (3). I just moved the anchor to (304,304).
- 00:32:774 (2) - Too many whistle in this part, I think remove whistle from end of 2 is best.
- 01:00:414 (4) - How about a NC here? It's pretty epic imo.
- 01:03:616 (2,3) - Minor spacing error.
- 01:17:268 (2) - Missed a hitsound on the head I believe.
- 01:27:549 (2) - Missed clap on repeat?
- 00:01:763 (2,3,4) - It's not good in an Easy to use a complicated rhythm like this first and then a simple rhythm like 00:04:459 (1,2) right after it when the music is the same. I suggest that you use the 00:04:459 (1,2) rhythm at both spots. So add a repeat to 00:01:763 (2) and go from there.
- 00:23:336 - I suggest larger volume here. 40% is too soft, you should try 60%. Also a crescendo through 00:20:639 (1,2,3) is nice.
- 01:00:414 - Some volume is better here imo. The sudden 60% increase is a bit much. Compare it to the Beginner diff and see if you agree.
- 01:29:740 - I think you should use lower volume here.
- Lots of missed hitsounds. Maybe on purpose?00:50:976 (2) - clap on end
01:03:111 (1) - clap on end
01:09:515 (3) - clap on head instead of tail maybe
01:10:189 (4) - clap
01:10:527 (1) - finish or clap on head
01:18:279 (4) - clap
01:19:291 (3) - clap on end
01:20:302 (5) - missing claps
Hitsounding seems incomplete here. Please look over your diff to make sure you've hitsounded as inteneded.
- 00:35:470 (2,3) - Don't break flow and make the beginner turn around it will confuse them. Simple is best for this diff.
- 01:29:403 - I think you want reduce volume for the spinner from here.
Let me know when you're done checking these and we can try to get Taiko icon.