Uchida Aya - Blueberry Train · forum

Rare

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-01-29T09:47:25+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
[Rare's Hard]
HP and OD are way too low. Consider increasing them by 2 ticks to make the diff a bit more balanced. my hard is difficult a bit. i take counsel to fycho.
00:09:231 (5,1) - how about moving the NC to the previous circle, it'd fit with the vocals better, if I'm not mistaken. no
00:10:626 (1,1) - the slider appears too fast after the spinner. Players won't have enough time to hit the slider, so I'd recommend you to replace the slider with a circle on 00:13:766. no
00:14:464 (5) - sounds like you're not even trying to hitsound it. Place a normal-whistle here and make it louder to match with the music! no
00:27:371 (5,1,2) - these jumps follow nothing in music and I really recommend you to replace them with consistent spacing. They look cute, but they are illogical and confusing, imo. DO not place jumps if they reflect NOTHING in music, please! no it doesn't matter much i think.
00:47:952 (5,6,1) - I'd recommend you to avoid using 1/4 jumps in this diff. It's not the hardest diff and the song is pretty relaxing. Try to make it simple and keep the DS consistent for 1/4 patterns! i want to keep my current pattern.
Note: 01:17:254 (1,2,3) - same. it happens a few more times, you can find such patterns yourself, if you agree with me, I guess. no change.
00:53:359 (3) - previously you didn't use such sliders. Players are already used to the fgact that your sliders have ONLY one repeat and they don't expect this slider to have more repeats. It's confusing, unreadable and strange, imo. Try to use something else here, please! example I hear the opinion of other Modder.
Note: 00:55:888 (2,4) - pretty much the same, second repeats are hardly noticeable and they make players sad. try to avoid them if it's possible i don't think so.
01:50:743 (2) - turn it into an 1/2 slider with a repeat. It will fit much better with the vocals, imo. exmpl no
01:54:493 (2,4) - well, I'e already mentioned what to do with the similar pattern, apply the same here, please! no
02:33:650 (7,8) - first of all, the jump doesn't really fits here. Secondly, you could map the 1/4 beats here to make this part of the diff a bit more interesting. im following the keyboard.

Flower wrote:
[Hard]
Pretty good, but a bit too hard imo. It's close to a light Insane.
00:13:940 (2,3,4,5) - this flows a bit strange. fixed
maybe you can try this one:
SPOILER

thanks for modding guys~

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-01-30T15:04:05+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
happy623 wrote:
Hi there, as requested.

[General]
There're 1ms difference in kiais. Check the AiBat and fix them just to make everything perfect.
Long song without any SB/Video ay be a bit boring. It's okay, but I'd be happy to see a storyboard here. Anyway, it's totally up to you.
Remove Live! from tags, it's already mentioned in the source, so in-game and web search will find it without any problems.
[623's Normal]
00:05:045 (3) - whooooaaaa! such a cute voice, ou should convert this circle into a slider to emphasize that "traaaaain~" in vocals. Such a lovely voice should be emphasized! kk
00:05:045 (3) - again, I'd place a circle here. It'd keep your rhythm consistent and fit with the amazing vocals perfectly. ;w; seems the copied-thing is wrong
Note: 01:14:813 - same added
00:14:464 (2) - consider using normal-hitwhistle here. And make it louder, please! I can't hear ANY hitsounds there because of an extremly loud whistle. changed and increased from 40% to 60%
00:34:696 (1,2,3) - yeah, it fits with vocals, but we can make it fit even better! example followed!
Note: such patterns are common for Normal diff, so it won't be too hard for players. Don't worry
00:45:336 (4) - try to replace it with a repeated 1/2 slider. It will fit with the drums much better and hlelp you to emphasize the beat on 00:45:510. alright
00:52:138 - since the vocals actually change here, I recommend you to use some custom slidertick-sound to emphasize it. Use a whistle-sound or something, it will fit here pretty good, imo.
Note: 01:05:743 - 01:37:836 - same as above, clap sound should be used here, I guess. applied to these threeeee
01:25:278 - this is just way too cruel for the easiest diff of the mapset. How about mapping some vocals there, so players won't be killed by the HP Drain.
Note: 02:40:626 - 02:42:022 - same mapped \o\
01:34:871 (3) - hey, don't ignore the drums! If you don't feel like using 1/2 circles and sliders, at least change the shape of this slider! example twisted
01:43:068 (1,2) - heeey, swap NCs here because the beat actually changes after 01:44:464 - and NC here would help us to read the map better! dooone
02:28:940 (1) - I don't know why I love this slider. It's awesome, DO NOT remove o change it! Im begging you! ♥ lol xD okay B)
02:36:964 (1) - how about making your patterns follow the music a bit closer? It may look a bit strange, but if you try this pattern in action, you will like it! try me! hmm, keep first ;w; I am afraid it will be little bit hard to read for newbies as it is the easiest diff
02:49:696 (2,3) - nazi - please, think about making a blanket-slider here. It will look pretty and players may like it. ♥ sure
02:58:068 - 02:59:464 - don't skip these beats. They should be mapped because they're both vocals and music and without circles here your rhythm feels inconsistent! fixeeed toooo
03:08:185 (1,2) - once again, awesome sliders are awesome. That's why I love this diff so much! :3 ♥

Great job! Just a few more things to improve!
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Good luck!

Thanks Bakari \o\!

飛球久等了;w;

osu file format v12

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Title:Blueberry Train
TitleUnicode:ぶる～べりぃ♥とれいん
Artist:Uchida Aya
ArtistUnicode:内田彩
Creator:Fycho
Version:623's Normal
Source:Love Live! School idol project
Tags:rare happy623 µ's Album Best Live! collection Disc 2 Minami Kotori Koizumi Hanayo Kokuhaku Biyori, desu!
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lovekotori

105 posts

Joined August 2013

lovekotori 2014-05-02T19:34:10+00:00

FFちゃん＞＜
我找到錯誤=w=

<<hard的你按一下= =2個跑位

<<因為我實在找不到問題但是因為無聊結果發現了這個=w=

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-08-18T17:16:03+00:00

欵欵欵

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-08-19T03:38:44+00:00

Diabetes♥Train

diabetes hype yay

Azure

771 posts

Joined November 2010

Azure 2014-08-21T14:53:36+00:00

I 02:01:557 漏了clap
我只是路過

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-08-26T12:58:28+00:00

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane

00:18:999 (1) - ctrl+g is better here imo
00:55:975 (3) - change this to a 1/4 slider
01:16:208 (6) - maybe change this to 1/2 slider+note with composing changing?
01:47:778 (2,3) - better to stack 3 at 2's end, if u do that, larger 01:48:301 (3,1) - 's ds
01:54:057 (4,1) - somehow stack the streams head at that note's better in feeling imo
to me, this map's rhythm style and jumping pattern's much more better than ur other works before, 2 stars for u. idk why u call this aji map, thou i hope u can give more things like this rather than random patterns with regular rhythms...

Rare's Hard

2 unsnapped
00:25:103 (1) - maybe ctrl+g to avoid that gap in reading pattern's confusing
02:08:010 (7,8) - blanket?
02:13:766 (1) - a bit offscreen
02:16:382 (6) - sudden ds changing here maybe a bit hard to noobs? overlap's better here imo... well, nevermind
very well mapped in ds controlling, a star for ur nice set

623's Normal

00:28:068 (4,1) - why not blanket?
02:48:301 (4,1) - ^, and u can still keep those ds (thou i know not blanket here's still ok, this is nazi hhh
03:01:208 (4,1) - this should be blanket imo
03:13:417 (4,1) - ^
fine

~~why i have a diff called "kami's hard" orz~~
于是在我写完mod后我才发现这图是你以前让我看过的，四暗刻。看了我之前的mod，依稀记得那个时候你确实给我看过这么一张图，这图的节奏是你改变自己以往习惯的一次尝试。后来你跟我说，你做这张图是因为听了我部分的节奏意见，却愈发觉得和自己的style不合而被你所抛弃，并逐渐靠向了比较常规的流派。我想说的依旧和以前没有什么大变化，我个人还是喜欢你这张图更多一点。当然了，这也没有什么很明显的分界线啦，如果你能将这种节奏风格逐渐融入你的图中，我觉得我也会渐渐去喜欢你的图的。

pm when u finished checking all ur mods, bats may mod this later (i'm not bat

good luck

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Fycho 2014-09-15T04:57:48+00:00

@-bakari-, flower, I remapped most part of Insane, sorry cant repley your mods.

@Azure, fixed thank you~

Hollow Wings wrote:
from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane
00:18:999 (1) - ctrl+g is better here imo not good for me from my testing
00:55:975 (3) - change this to a 1/4 slider That plays not good imo
01:16:208 (6) - maybe change this to 1/2 slider+note with composing changing? 因为蓝线也有鼓点，所以更多的跟下人声
01:47:778 (2,3) - better to stack 3 at 2's end, if u do that, larger 01:48:301 (3,1) - 's ds 现在这样挺好了
01:54:057 (4,1) - somehow stack the streams head at that note's better in feeling imo没理解什么意思，这里没stack啊
to me, this map's rhythm style and jumping pattern's much more better than ur other works before, 2 stars for u. idk why u call this aji map, thou i hope u can give more things like this rather than random patterns with regular rhythms...hhh

于是在我写完mod后我才发现这图是你以前让我看过的，四暗刻。看了我之前的mod，依稀记得那个时候你确实给我看过这么一张图，这图的节奏是你改变自己以往习惯的一次尝试。后来你跟我说，你做这张图是因为听了我部分的节奏意见，却愈发觉得和自己的style不合而被你所抛弃，并逐渐靠向了比较常规的流派。我想说的依旧和以前没有什么大变化，我个人还是喜欢你这张图更多一点。当然了，这也没有什么很明显的分界线啦，如果你能将这种节奏风格逐渐融入你的图中，我觉得我也会渐渐去喜欢你的图的。

pm when u finished checking all ur mods, bats may mod this later (i'm not bat

good luck

thanks for modding!

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-09-15T07:32:45+00:00

lovekotori wrote:
FFちゃん＞＜
我找到錯誤=w=
<<hard的你按一下= =2個跑位
<<因為我實在找不到問題但是因為無聊結果發現了這個=w=

fixed

Hollow Wings wrote:
Rare's Hard
2 unsnapped fixed
00:25:103 (1) - maybe ctrl+g to avoid that gap in reading pattern's confusing keep my pattern as possible
02:08:010 (7,8) - blanket? ok
02:13:766 (1) - a bit offscreen np its rankable
02:16:382 (6) - sudden ds changing here maybe a bit hard to noobs? overlap's better here imo... well, nevermind fixed
very well mapped in ds controlling, a star for ur nice set

thanks for modding guys!
http://puu.sh/bzLMP.osu

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-09-17T10:24:12+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

623's Normal
00:28:068 (4,1) - why not blanket?
02:48:301 (4,1) - ^, and u can still keep those ds (thou i know not blanket here's still ok, this is nazi hhh
03:01:208 (4,1) - this should be blanket imo
03:13:417 (4,1) - ^
fine

pm when u finished checking all ur mods, bats may mod this later (i'm not bat

good luck

everything is fixed, thank you so much! ;w;

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Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Fycho 2014-09-18T15:37:14+00:00

Updated all diffs, thanks

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2014-09-20T05:07:49+00:00

Hi, fycho o/
Request from HW.

Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue

[623's Normal]

03:23:534 - make the kiai time align the timeline
01:35:743 (4) - feel a little weird about the sound, try to remove the clap? I can't find any enough condition to add
02:47:254 (3) - nazi suggest: make it pretty? it's weird for shape IMO, just move the 2nd point to 160|100 and adjust the slider
02:51:092 (4) - why there distance suddenly become large without prompt? try make the distance equal

maybe you can make slider more beautiful next time (run

[Rare's Hard]

00:41:673 (6) - try to NC, I worry 00:41:847 (7,8) - is harder to read because they are close and stack with 00:40:626 (2,4,6,9) - in the same color
00:48:650 (1) - seems it touches the HP drain, try to move down?
00:53:359 (3) - why there suddenly becomes 4-repeat slider? maybe would make player confused, I hear there is same as 00:51:964 (2,3) - 's part, try to reduce the rotation as 00:51:964 (2) - or make 00:51:964 (2,3) - same as there
01:19:347 (3) - did you miss a finish?
01:26:847 (3,4) - feel a little hard to read the overlap, try to make stack complete or make the direction equal
02:00:336 (7) - the overlap is hard to read because of the combo color, try to NC it?
02:17:952 (1) - i think you can add a whistle (run
02:39:929 (1) - the distance... well, maybe player..., especially the newbie, would hard to read the overlap, how about make sliderhead stack on 02:39:580 (4) - ?
03:17:778 (5) - try to NC to represent there is 1/1 rhythm, and how about add a finish at 03:18:475 (7) - ?

though the rhythm is a little compact for a Hard, anyway, solid diff!

[Insane]

00:03:650 (4,1) - feel there should have a moving which is large and in the southwest when I hear the vocal, try to move 00:03:650 (4) - to 372|56, would more suitable for not only flow but vocal IMO
00:14:464 (1) - nazi suggest: move to 436|252 make it for blanket? seems I have a return of my blanket disease
00:18:999 (1,3) - try to use a 5% volume of green line to make sliderend slient? just feel the sliderend's sound is pointless
00:32:865 (5,6) - nazi suggest: make stack complete (run
00:36:615 (3,4) - how about ctrl+G? i feel would make not only 00:36:615 (3,4) - but 00:36:789 (4,5) - more suitable for the flow or vocal, if you change this, NC 00:37:138 (5) - to avoid the wrong distance
00:47:952 (3,7,8) - I hear there is enough to add clap to follow the drum which is more obvious than 00:47:952 (3,4,5,6) -
00:49:173 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - well, just feel weird when there has no sound to follow the drum, how about 00:49:260 (3,4,6,2) - all add clap to make more interesting?
which is same as this
00:50:656 (6,7,11) - , 00:52:051 (4,5,7) - , 00:53:446 (5,1) - (5) and (1)'s sliderhead
01:10:190 - there miss a note when I hear a drum from the song, try to add and stack on 01:10:278 (4) - 's sliderhead or other way
01:15:946 (5) - how about add a clap on sliderhead? because i hear there rhythm is same as 01:14:464 (5) -
01:35:394 (4) - NC this, because the distance between 01:35:394 (4,5) - is same as 01:35:219 (3,4) - the 1/2 rhythm, maybe it's easier to make player confused
01:44:813 (2) - well, try to move it to 308|88 or other way which is on Northeast, would more fit the flow and make player easier to read 01:44:464 (1,2,3,4) - 's difference
02:17:603 (7,8,9,10,1) - there should have a little distance to make a moving of feeling which the song give, I think it would fit and be fun for playing like the picture
code
```
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180,321,137690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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203,369,137952,5,4,0:0:0:0:
```
03:15:510 (2) - did you miss a clap?

good job!

that's all!
call me back after you check it

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-09-20T06:21:24+00:00

Loneight wrote:
[Rare's Hard]
00:41:673 (6) - try to NC, I worry 00:41:847 (7,8) - is harder to read because they are close and stack with 00:40:626 (2,4,6,9) - in the same color　added
00:48:650 (1) - seems it touches the HP drain, try to move down? no
00:53:359 (3) - why there suddenly becomes 4-repeat slider? maybe would make player confused, I hear there is same as 00:51:964 (2,3) - 's part, try to reduce the rotation as 00:51:964 (2) - or make 00:51:964 (2,3) - same as there fixed by myself
01:19:347 (3) - did you miss a finish? added
01:26:847 (3,4) - feel a little hard to read the overlap, try to make stack complete or make the direction equal fixed unintentional stack
02:00:336 (7) - the overlap is hard to read because of the combo color, try to NC it? no
02:17:952 (1) - i think you can add a whistle (run no
02:39:929 (1) - the distance... well, maybe player..., especially the newbie, would hard to read the overlap, how about make sliderhead stack on 02:39:580 (4) - ? removed
03:17:778 (5) - try to NC to represent there is 1/1 rhythm, and how about add a finish at 03:18:475 (7) - ? fixed by myself
though the rhythm is a little compact for a Hard, anyway, solid diff!

thanks for checking
http://puu.sh/bGgwS.osu

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-09-20T12:23:13+00:00

Loneight wrote:
Hi, fycho o/
Request from HW.

[notice]

Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue
[623's Normal]
03:23:534 - make the kiai time align the timeline ooops fixed
01:35:743 (4) - feel a little weird about the sound, try to remove the clap? I can't find any enough condition to add okay~
02:47:254 (3) - nazi suggest: make it pretty? it's weird for shape IMO, just move the 2nd point to 160|100 and adjust the slider sure
02:51:092 (4) - why there distance suddenly become large without prompt? try make the distance equal aww careless sry fixed
maybe you can make slider more beautiful next time (run ~~old mappu~~

that's all!
call me back after you check it

pr fycho

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 115627
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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TitleUnicode:ぶる～べりぃ♥とれいん
Artist:Uchida Aya
ArtistUnicode:内田彩
Creator:Fycho
Version:623's Normal
Source:Love Live! School idol project
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Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

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Topic Starter

Fycho 2014-09-20T12:40:17+00:00

Loneight wrote:
Hi, fycho o/ hi~L18
Request from HW.

[Insane]
00:03:650 (4,1) - feel there should have a moving which is large and in the southwest when I hear the vocal, try to move 00:03:650 (4) - to 372|56, would more suitable for not only flow but vocal IMO
00:14:464 (1) - nazi suggest: move to 436|252 make it for blanket? seems I have a return of my blanket disease
00:18:999 (1,3) - try to use a 5% volume of green line to make sliderend slient? just feel the sliderend's sound is pointless I usually dont use green line to make sliderend slient, soft hitsound is not noisy for me
00:32:865 (5,6) - nazi suggest: make stack complete (run
00:36:615 (3,4) - how about ctrl+G? i feel would make not only 00:36:615 (3,4) - but 00:36:789 (4,5) - more suitable for the flow or vocal, if you change this, NC 00:37:138 (5) - to avoid the wrong distance fixed but didn't add NC since I usually don't use NC to make random jumps easier to read
00:47:952 (3,7,8) - I hear there is enough to add clap to follow the drum which is more obvious than 00:47:952 (3,4,5,6) -
00:49:173 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - well, just feel weird when there has no sound to follow the drum, how about 00:49:260 (3,4,6,2) - all add clap to make more interesting?
which is same as this
00:50:656 (6,7,11) - , 00:52:051 (4,5,7) - , 00:53:446 (5,1) - (5) and (1)'s sliderhead
01:10:190 - there miss a note when I hear a drum from the song, try to add and stack on 01:10:278 (4) - 's sliderhead or other way
but I also didn't add it at00:59:028 - ,I don't want to make it too hard to play 节奏密度不想弄太大
01:15:946 (5) - how about add a clap on sliderhead? because i hear there rhythm is same as 01:14:464 (5) -
01:35:394 (4) - NC this, because the distance between 01:35:394 (4,5) - is same as 01:35:219 (3,4) - the 1/2 rhythm, maybe it's easier to make player confused
same as above, I dont think this spacing will confuse players as I found some testers at past
01:44:813 (2) - well, try to move it to 308|88 or other way which is on Northeast, would more fit the flow and make player easier to read 01:44:464 (1,2,3,4) - 's difference 308|88 is not a good place imo, it flows not good. and the stack is hard to read but it can make it more challenging and fun, so keep it
02:17:603 (7,8,9,10,1) - there should have a little distance to make a moving of feeling which the song give, I think it would fit and be fun for playing like the picture
code
197,306,137603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,321,137690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,343,137778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,363,137865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
203,369,137952,5,4,0:0:0:0:
I like the feeling of stack, just make it on purpose >.>
03:15:510 (2) - did you miss a clap?
good job!
that's all!
call me back after you check it

no comment = fix
updated all diffs, thanks for modding!

Loneight

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Loneight 2014-09-20T18:14:08+00:00

SPOILER

sorry, my mistake... no KD

[general]

make the kiai time align the timeline and check it carefully
kiai time
[Rare's Hard]
1. 01:17:953 - , 01:55:627 - ,
[Insane]
1. 02:45:860 - ,

edit:
ok! let we go :3
Bubble!

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Fycho

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Topic Starter

Fycho 2014-09-26T09:27:36+00:00

self-popped to fix several issues about spread.

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

KaedekaShizuru 2014-09-26T15:38:21+00:00

from QQ PM
As required，normal only

[Normal]
00:34:522 (5) - 这个circle并不是必要的
00:34:696 (1) - 稍微跟00:33:824 (4) blanket一下吧
00:47:952 (4) - 折返点的clap换成finish 或者whistle？clap太吵了
00:49:696 (3,6) - clap略显吵
00:52:836 (4) - ↑ 且这个slider不太舒服
01:17:254 (3) - ↑clap
02:56:673 (5) - 移到X452 Y40 后面随之调整DS
03:01:557 (4,5,6,1) - 似乎没有摆成了一个正方形？
03:17:254 (2) - 折返点的clap换成finish 或者whistle
03:22:836 (3) - 折返点音效换成whistle

瞎摸而已

Kagamine Rin

27 posts

Joined June 2011

Kagamine Rin 2014-09-26T16:01:54+00:00

香草飞球>.<

[Normal]
00:01:906 (2) - 结尾加whistle，前后两个结尾都有音这个没有感觉听起来有点怪
00:48:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 2,4clap吧，全加clap听起来很吵
01:13:766 (1,2) - 感觉这里改成和后面一致会比较好听一些，时间轴如下

然后这是我改的sample

01:26:847 (4) - 结尾no clap，听起来有些多余了
02:41:499 (3) - 结尾加whistle，好听
03:13:068 (5) - 改成whistle，连续三个clap有点吵

好
小鸟prprprprpr

Akatsuki Nagi

53 posts

Joined July 2014

Akatsuki Nagi 2014-09-26T16:16:38+00:00

希望能有帮助OvO

[Normal]
00:05:743 (5) - whistle建议去掉，这个地方人声渐弱感觉还是不要保持whistle比较好，同时后面的1也会有种突然增强的感觉0.0
00:59:813 (1) - 感觉滑条头可以加个finish？和前面00:57:022 (1) - 的节奏对应一下。
01:36:789 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这里不怎么跟节奏吧，感觉这么改会好一些，比较贴vocal

相似的vocal段做了一次反复lwl
01:50:045 (1,2) - 这里节奏也不太好吧，感觉完全没对上

试试这样？
02:54:929 (2) - 感觉滑条尾不够强调这里的重音，滑条尾部往前挪一格加个单点吧030
03:17:254 (2) - 这里的音加的有点重吧，后面的03:17:778 (3) - 明明应该是突然升起来的音效却完全没用达到应有的效果诶，换个音效or降低一点音量吧

感觉有些地方略有点对不上节奏O.O 总体很赞啦~祝早日rank lwl

Karen

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Joined August 2013

Karen 2014-09-26T16:22:07+00:00

[Normal]
00:25:626 - 这俩重音放俩note？ prpr小鸟
00:36:615 - 中间+个note好一点. prprprpr小鸟
01:48:650 (2) - 跟上面滑条没对齐=。= 。
01:51:269 - 中间+个note呗owo 有个鸟音
02:04:347 (2) - 往下一点跟1，3成直线这样看起来比较舒服
02:16:906 (4) - 这根前面重合的话有点不妥，不如这样

03:20:568 - 加个note啦OvO
03:22:138 (1) - 这个要么用前面滑条包起来要么往左弄成弧形吧=。=

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-09-27T01:29:48+00:00

normal diff mod as requested

[Normal]
00:33:824 (4,5,1) - 弄成这样?

SPOILER

01:42:196 (2) - 缩短到01:42:545 然后01:42:719 (3) - 加个circle吧,有音这里
01:48:650 (2,1) - 平行?现在这样子好像有点丑;w;
02:15:859 (3,4) - 没包好
02:56:673 (5) - 448|44? 貌似这样比较自然如果改调整一下后面的

seems clear

good luck

Fycho

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Fycho 2014-09-27T04:16:40+00:00

静流

KaedekaShizuru wrote:
from QQ PM
As required，normal only

[Normal]
00:34:522 (5) - 这个circle并不是必要的我就是故意加的这节奏，跟鼓避免1/1spam
00:34:696 (1) - 稍微跟00:33:824 (4) blanket一下吧没必要
00:47:952 (4) - 折返点的clap换成finish 或者whistle？clap太吵了背景音有鼓点
00:49:696 (3,6) - clap略显吵这里换音效了
00:52:836 (4) - ↑ 且这个slider不太舒服这没什么说法
01:17:254 (3) - ↑clap我觉得不吵，背景有鼓
02:56:673 (5) - 移到X452 Y40 后面随之调整DS没什么必要
03:01:557 (4,5,6,1) - 似乎没有摆成了一个正方形？k
03:17:254 (2) - 折返点的clap换成finish 或者whistle 这里背景有鼓，和其他地方不一样
03:22:836 (3) - 折返点音效换成whistle^

瞎摸而已

rin

Kagamine Rin wrote:
香草飞球>.<

[Normal]
00:01:906 (2) - 结尾加whistle，前后两个结尾都有音这个没有感觉听起来有点怪 ok
00:48:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 2,4clap吧，全加clap听起来很吵 ok
01:13:766 (1,2) - 感觉这里改成和后面一致会比较好听一些，时间轴如下你书的很对

然后这是我改的sample没按照你的例子改

01:26:847 (4) - 结尾no clap，听起来有些多余了我觉得不是多余
02:41:499 (3) - 结尾加whistle，好听我觉得别扭
03:13:068 (5) - 改成whistle，连续三个clap有点吵整个diff都这样加的，跟背景避免音效无聊不吵

好
小鸟prprprprpr

awa

Nagi awa wrote:
希望能有帮助OvO

[Normal]
00:05:743 (5) - whistle建议去掉，这个地方人声渐弱感觉还是不要保持whistle比较好，同时后面的1也会有种突然增强的感觉0.0 我加whistle就是为了跟人声
00:59:813 (1) - 感觉滑条头可以加个finish？和前面00:57:022 (1) - 的节奏对应一下。这里没cymbal音啊，加了反而吵
01:36:789 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这里不怎么跟节奏吧，感觉这么改会好一些，比较贴vocal相似的vocal段做了一次反复lwl 这里我本来就跟的鼓点啊
01:50:045 (1,2) - 这里节奏也不太好吧，感觉完全没对上试试这样？这里跟鼓
02:54:929 (2) - 感觉滑条尾不够强调这里的重音，滑条尾部往前挪一格加个单点吧030 为了突出红线重音之间这样强调了，故意忽略前面的鼓点的
03:17:254 (2) - 这里的音加的有点重吧，后面的03:17:778 (3) - 明明应该是突然升起来的音效却完全没用达到应有的效果诶，换个音效or降低一点音量吧我觉得还行啊

感觉有些地方略有点对不上节奏O.O 总体很赞啦~祝早日rank lwl

ren

Kagamine Ren wrote:
[Normal]
00:25:626 - 这俩重音放俩note？ prpr小鸟故意不放，不想放，没什么放的理由
00:36:615 - 中间+个note好一点. prprprpr小鸟okay
01:48:650 (2) - 跟上面滑条没对齐=。= 。k，平行了
01:51:269 - 中间+个note呗owo 有个鸟音这里跟鼓点不跟人声鸟音啊
02:04:347 (2) - 往下一点跟1，3成直线这样看起来比较舒服 ok
02:16:906 (4) - 这根前面重合的话有点不妥，不如这样我觉得重合很好啊
03:20:568 - 加个note啦OvO 那样节奏密度太大拉
03:22:138 (1) - 这个要么用前面滑条包起来要么往左弄成弧形吧=。=换排列了

水晶

[_Crystal] wrote:
normal diff mod as requested

[Normal]
00:33:824 (4,5,1) - 弄成这样? 没看出什么区别啊=。=
SPOILER
01:42:196 (2) - 缩短到01:42:545 然后01:42:719 (3) - 加个circle吧,有音这里不想把节奏密度弄太大
01:48:650 (2,1) - 平行?现在这样子好像有点丑;w;k
02:15:859 (3,4) - 没包好 k
02:56:673 (5) - 448|44? 貌似这样比较自然如果改调整一下后面的现在这样挺好

seems clear
good luck

Thanks for modding~

Loneight

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Loneight 2014-09-27T04:54:27+00:00

because of the new Normal, IRC recheck, no KD

irc mod

13:32 Fycho: ~~~
13:32 Fycho: 我已经ready了
13:33 Loneight: 下載中
13:34 Fycho: 我好饿还没吃午饭
13:34 Loneight: irc mod ?
13:35 Fycho: 可以啊
13:35 Loneight: 說起來其他難度應該沒動到吧, 沒動到我基本上就不看了
13:35 Fycho: 只有insane换了一个地方
13:35 Loneight: 嗯?
13:36 Fycho: 00:48:650 - 这为了更好的配合音效换了下梗
13:36 Fycho: 我说insane
13:36 Loneight: 嗯看完了!
13:37 Loneight: 那就開始囉!
13:37 Fycho: okay
13:38 Loneight: 我在想英文還是中文 www
13:38 Loneight: 我想直接中文, 已lazy
13:38 Fycho: 中文吧
13:38 Loneight: 老實說這個...00:05:743 (5) - 我聽起來有點不太習慣, 主要是迴轉的地方, 聽起來都比sliderhead或sliderend還高, 可是卻音效設置缺相反, whistle本身就是高音的音效, 改不改看你, 只是提看看
13:38 Loneight: *可是音效設置卻相反
13:39 Loneight: 糟糕, 我連中文都慘了
13:39 Fycho: 好的
13:39 Fycho: 我把whistle加到折返上去了
13:39 Loneight: 嗯
13:39 Loneight: 頭尾記得刪whistle (逃
13:40 Fycho: 恩恩
13:40 Loneight: 00:36:789 (5) - 把sliderend的clap拿掉? 我覺得更能表現出那個"don"的聲音
13:41 Fycho: 好的
13:41 Fycho: 换成whistle了
13:41 Loneight: 嗯
13:42 Loneight: 01:01:033 (3) - 我擔心newbie看不清這裡, 主要因為是blanket, 外加01:00:510 (2) - 的1/2節奏
13:43 Fycho: 这个没问题的
13:43 Loneight: 好
13:43 Fycho: 因为加了easy 考虑到spread的问题
13:43 Fycho: 而且hard偏难
13:43 Loneight: 嗯
13:44 Loneight: 01:35:394 (4) - 同剛剛那個
13:44 Fycho: 恩
13:44 Fycho: 也换成whistle了
13:47 Loneight: 02:39:530 - ~ 02:45:510 - 考慮用個減速梗? 可以讓有趣度增添一些, 外加區分這裡跟後面的kiai time不同戲分
13:48 Loneight: 不改也可以, 只是建議 (逃
13:48 Fycho: NM就不减速了>.>
13:48 Loneight: 我NM一堆減速糟糕 ... stresssss
13:49 Fycho: 看个人习惯呗
13:49 Fycho: 只是懒的减速了stress
13:49 Loneight: 03:03:301 (2) - 我老毛病又犯了 nazi suggestion, 移到456|76 比較美觀 (逃
13:50 Fycho: 好
13:50 Loneight: 大致上就這些了
13:50 Fycho: 恩好
13:50 Loneight: 上傳完跟我說

rebubble!

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Last edited by Loneight 2014-09-27T04:54:58+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Fycho

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Fycho 2014-09-27T04:54:57+00:00

Thank you~

~~to any bat: please don't qualify this until this bug is fixed: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/245686~~
resolved.

Last edited by Fycho 2014-09-27T10:31:02+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

happy623

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happy623 2014-09-27T05:06:49+00:00

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IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-09-27T07:29:34+00:00

[General]

有空snap一下preview time
有空也加一下audio-leadin 一秒有點太少

[Insane]

00:02:603 - Whistle. 感覺00:10:278 (2)的尾巴也可加whistle 就像00:09:231 (3)突出vocal
00:13:766 - 不知道你想不想用drum的音效 drum-whistle?
00:37:138 (5) - ^
01:23:708 (1) - 我的媽好萌
01:24:929 (1,1,1,1) - 再加finish如何
02:10:801 (1) - Remove whistle? 還是01:12:196 (1)跟03:06:615 (1)加whistle

[Rare]

OD and HP 6 please, as a new normal diff is added.
00:13:592 (1) - It would be much nicer if you can snap it exactly to the 1/6 drums as both are reversed sliders only. Also, try a drum whistle on tail. http://puu.sh/bPzAj/005f77d2b2.jpg
00:14:464 (5) - Normal whistle on slider body.
00:37:138 (1) - Try a drum whistle here.
00:51:092 (7) - CTRL+G may help improve the flow.
01:39:231 (2) - This is way too jumpy regarding to the overall difficulty of this Hard. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2070557
01:42:371 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2070577
01:52:400 (5) - The DS here can increase a bit as it can serve as an indicator of the blue tick initiation.
02:02:254 (4,5) -^ Blanket these with 02:01:906 (3).
02:46:557 (3) - ^ Move rightward to reduce the distance between pre and post objects.
03:19:086 (3,4,5) - Kick slider PLEASE.
03:23:533 (5) - Finish also.
03:32:080 (6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2070596

[Normal]

Delete these green lines: 01:17:254 - 01:26:499 - 01:47:254 - 01:52:836
00:08:185 (2,3) - 疊好
00:37:138 - drum whistle?

[Easy]

00:37:138 - drum whistle?

Fycho

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Fycho 2014-09-27T10:30:27+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
[General]
有空snap一下preview time
有空也加一下audio-leadin 一秒有點太少
[Insane]
00:02:603 - Whistle. 感覺00:10:278 (2)的尾巴也可加whistle 就像00:09:231 (3)突出vocal
00:13:766 - 不知道你想不想用drum的音效 drum-whistle?
00:37:138 (5) - ^
01:23:708 (1) - 我的媽好萌
01:24:929 (1,1,1,1) - 再加finish如何
02:10:801 (1) - Remove whistle? 還是01:12:196 (1)跟03:06:615 (1)加whistle
[Normal]
Delete these green lines: 01:17:254 - 01:26:499 - 01:47:254 - 01:52:836
00:08:185 (2,3) - 疊好
00:37:138 - drum whistle?
[Easy]
00:37:138 - drum whistle?

All fixed on these, waiting for Rare’s reply/.\

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-09-27T11:20:00+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
[Rare]
OD and HP 6 please, as a new normal diff is added. only increased OD
00:13:592 (1) - It would be much nicer if you can snap it exactly to the 1/6 drums as both are reversed sliders only. Also, try a drum whistle on tail. http://puu.sh/bPzAj/005f77d2b2.jpg fixed
00:14:464 (5) - Normal whistle on slider body. no
00:37:138 (1) - Try a drum whistle here. added whistle
00:51:092 (7) - CTRL+G may help improve the flow.fixed by my self
01:39:231 (2) - This is way too jumpy regarding to the overall difficulty of this Hard. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2070557 fixed by my self
01:42:371 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2070577 fixed
01:52:400 (5) - The DS here can increase a bit as it can serve as an indicator of the blue tick initiation. changed pattern
02:02:254 (4,5) -^ Blanket these with 02:01:906 (3). no
02:46:557 (3) - ^ Move rightward to reduce the distance between pre and post objects. no
03:19:086 (3,4,5) - Kick slider PLEASE. fixed
03:23:533 (5) - Finish also. no
03:32:080 (6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2070596 no