Loneight wrote:

Hi, fycho o/ hi~L18
Request from HW.

[Insane]

1. 00:03:650 (4,1) - feel there should have a moving which is large and in the southwest when I hear the vocal, try to move 00:03:650 (4) - to 372|56, would more suitable for not only flow but vocal IMO
   
2. 00:14:464 (1) - nazi suggest: move to 436|252 make it for blanket? seems I have a return of my blanket disease
3. 00:18:999 (1,3) - try to use a 5% volume of green line to make sliderend slient? just feel the sliderend's sound is pointless I usually dont use green line to make sliderend slient, soft hitsound is not noisy for me
4. 00:32:865 (5,6) - nazi suggest: make stack complete (run
5. 00:36:615 (3,4) - how about ctrl+G? i feel would make not only 00:36:615 (3,4) - but 00:36:789 (4,5) - more suitable for the flow or vocal, if you change this, NC 00:37:138 (5) - to avoid the wrong distance fixed but didn't add NC since I usually don't use NC to make random jumps easier to read
6. 00:47:952 (3,7,8) - I hear there is enough to add clap to follow the drum which is more obvious than 00:47:952 (3,4,5,6) -
7. 00:49:173 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - well, just feel weird when there has no sound to follow the drum, how about 00:49:260 (3,4,6,2) - all add clap to make more interesting?
   which is same as this

   00:50:656 (6,7,11) - , 00:52:051 (4,5,7) - , 00:53:446 (5,1) - (5) and (1)'s sliderhead
8. 01:10:190 - there miss a note when I hear a drum from the song, try to add and stack on 01:10:278 (4) - 's sliderhead or other way
   but I also didn't add it at00:59:028 - ,I don't want to make it too hard to play 节奏密度不想弄太大
9. 01:15:946 (5) - how about add a clap on sliderhead? because i hear there rhythm is same as 01:14:464 (5) -
10. 01:35:394 (4) - NC this, because the distance between 01:35:394 (4,5) - is same as 01:35:219 (3,4) - the 1/2 rhythm, maybe it's easier to make player confused
    same as above, I dont think this spacing will confuse players as I found some testers at past
11. 01:44:813 (2) - well, try to move it to 308|88 or other way which is on Northeast, would more fit the flow and make player easier to read 01:44:464 (1,2,3,4) - 's difference 308|88 is not a good place imo, it flows not good. and the stack is hard to read but it can make it more challenging and fun, so keep it
    
12. 02:17:603 (7,8,9,10,1) - there should have a little distance to make a moving of feeling which the song give, I think it would fit and be fun for playing like the picture
    code

    197,306,137603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    180,321,137690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    175,343,137778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    184,363,137865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    203,369,137952,5,4,0:0:0:0:

    I like the feeling of stack, just make it on purpose >.>
13. 03:15:510 (2) - did you miss a clap?

good job!
that's all!
call me back after you check it

1. 有空snap一下preview time
2. 有空也加一下audio-leadin 一秒有點太少

1. 00:02:603 - Whistle. 感覺00:10:278 (2)的尾巴也可加whistle 就像00:09:231 (3)突出vocal
2. 00:13:766 - 不知道你想不想用drum的音效 drum-whistle?
3. 00:37:138 (5) - ^
4. 01:23:708 (1) - 我的媽 好萌
5. 01:24:929 (1,1,1,1) - 再加finish如何
6. 02:10:801 (1) - Remove whistle? 還是01:12:196 (1)跟03:06:615 (1)加whistle

1. OD and HP 6 please, as a new normal diff is added.
2. 00:13:592 (1) - It would be much nicer if you can snap it exactly to the 1/6 drums as both are reversed sliders only. Also, try a drum whistle on tail. http://puu.sh/bPzAj/005f77d2b2.jpg
3. 00:14:464 (5) - Normal whistle on slider body.
4. 00:37:138 (1) - Try a drum whistle here.
5. 00:51:092 (7) - CTRL+G may help improve the flow.
6. 01:39:231 (2) - This is way too jumpy regarding to the overall difficulty of this Hard. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2070557
7. 01:42:371 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2070577
8. 01:52:400 (5) - The DS here can increase a bit as it can serve as an indicator of the blue tick initiation.
9. 02:02:254 (4,5) -^ Blanket these with 02:01:906 (3).
10. 02:46:557 (3) - ^ Move rightward to reduce the distance between pre and post objects.
11. 03:19:086 (3,4,5) - Kick slider PLEASE.
12. 03:23:533 (5) - Finish also.
13. 03:32:080 (6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2070596

1. Delete these green lines: 01:17:254 - 01:26:499 - 01:47:254 - 01:52:836
2. 00:08:185 (2,3) - 疊好
3. 00:37:138 - drum whistle?

1. 00:37:138 - drum whistle?

IamKwaN wrote:

[General]

1. 有空snap一下preview time
2. 有空也加一下audio-leadin 一秒有點太少

[Insane]

1. 00:02:603 - Whistle. 感覺00:10:278 (2)的尾巴也可加whistle 就像00:09:231 (3)突出vocal
2. 00:13:766 - 不知道你想不想用drum的音效 drum-whistle?
3. 00:37:138 (5) - ^
4. 01:23:708 (1) - 我的媽 好萌
5. 01:24:929 (1,1,1,1) - 再加finish如何
6. 02:10:801 (1) - Remove whistle? 還是01:12:196 (1)跟03:06:615 (1)加whistle

[Normal]

1. Delete these green lines: 01:17:254 - 01:26:499 - 01:47:254 - 01:52:836
2. 00:08:185 (2,3) - 疊好
3. 00:37:138 - drum whistle?

[Easy]

1. 00:37:138 - drum whistle?

IamKwaN wrote:

[Rare]

1. OD and HP 6 please, as a new normal diff is added. only increased OD
2. 00:13:592 (1) - It would be much nicer if you can snap it exactly to the 1/6 drums as both are reversed sliders only. Also, try a drum whistle on tail. http://puu.sh/bPzAj/005f77d2b2.jpg fixed
3. 00:14:464 (5) - Normal whistle on slider body. no
4. 00:37:138 (1) - Try a drum whistle here. added whistle
5. 00:51:092 (7) - CTRL+G may help improve the flow.fixed by my self
6. 01:39:231 (2) - This is way too jumpy regarding to the overall difficulty of this Hard. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2070557 fixed by my self
7. 01:42:371 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2070577 fixed
8. 01:52:400 (5) - The DS here can increase a bit as it can serve as an indicator of the blue tick initiation. changed pattern
9. 02:02:254 (4,5) -^ Blanket these with 02:01:906 (3). no
10. 02:46:557 (3) - ^ Move rightward to reduce the distance between pre and post objects. no
11. 03:19:086 (3,4,5) - Kick slider PLEASE. fixed
12. 03:23:533 (5) - Finish also. no
13. 03:32:080 (6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2070596 no