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richardfeder

Joined March 2013

richardfeder 2013-12-09T15:02:01+00:00

Rumiaaaa~

00:08:684 (8684|2) - move to (0|1|2|3|4|5|6) 5
00:08:860 (8860|4) - move to 2

00:09:213 (9213|0) - add

00:12:389 (12389|4,12389|6) - what are they lol. just keep following piano? XD

00:14:507 (14507|1) - add

00:21:566 (21566|1) - move to 2

00:21:566 (21566|1) - add
In fact about here I am a little confuse about your sound choice and sometimes cannot immediately tell what are you following. You follow some piano and most drums, and they sometimes get mixed-up. What about emphasis one of them deliberately while cutting another?

00:30:037 (30037|5) - move to 3

00:37:095 (37095|4) - move to 2

00:41:331 (41331|3,41331|5,41331|1) - cut 1 or 2 of them

00:42:742 (42742|3) - move to 2

00:44:154 (44154|6) - delete

00:44:860 (44860|4) - move to 00:45:037 (45037|3) -

00:48:389 (48389|4) - move to 3

00:48:037 (48037|3) - move to 5

00:49:801 (49801|0) - delete

00:50:507 (50507|5) - delete

00:52:625 (52625|1) - use LN?
00:53:684 (53684|1) - ^
00:54:742 (54742|4) - ^

01:01:801 (61801|2) - delete and put a LN from 01:01:625 - to 01:01:978 -

01:03:213 (63213|2) - move to 01:03:389 (63389|6) -

01:04:625 (64625|0) - delete and turn 01:04:448 (64448|3) - into a LN

01:07:448 (67448|4) - same as previous

01:22:007 (82007|4) - delete
01:21:919 (81919|5) - move to 3
01:22:095 (82095|3,82184|2,82272|1) - move to 456

01:24:301 (84301|5,84389|3) - really confusing. Lots of guitar then suddenly drums come out in the middle: maybe keep doing guitar? XD

01:28:978 (88978|1) - move to 6

01:33:566 (93566|0) - add

01:39:213 (99213|2) - move to 5

01:39:389 (99389|3) - move to 4

01:39:566 (99566|4) - 3

01:39:742 (99742|3) - 4

01:43:801 (103801|2) - delete

01:44:331 (104331|3) - add

01:44:860 (104860|4) - move to 1

01:50:507 (110507|4,110507|2) - cut 1 and move another to 3

01:53:331 (113331|2) - move to 3

01:59:684 (119684|1,119684|6) - http://puu.sh/5RPKR.jpg

02:07:978 (127978|4) - add

02:45:213 (165213|4) - delete

02:53:331 (173331|1) - delete

03:01:095 (181095|3,181095|6,181095|0) - cut 1

03:09:566 (189566|1) - move to 3

03:18:037 (198037|4) - move to 6

03:22:272 (202272|6) - delete

Shi-Ra's Adolescence

00:54:037 (54037|1,54389|2) - move one column left

00:54:742 (54742|4) - two column left

01:00:037 (60037|3,60037|5) - give up 1/2 drums here?

01:01:801 (61801|1) - delete

01:03:213 (63213|6,63213|2) - delete one of them

01:03:742 (63742|3,63742|5,63831|4,63831|2,63919|1,63919|3) - this kind of double stair is not so friendly XD... maybe things like this puu.sh/5SwOp.png would be better

01:07:448 (67448|5,67448|1,67448|4) - delete one

01:08:860 (68860|5,68860|3) - delete one of them

01:09:566 (69566|1) - move to 0|1|2|3|4|5|6

01:27:212 (87212|4,87212|1,87213|6) - delete one

01:37:801 - add

01:58:978 (118978|3) - and 01:59:154 (119154|3) - add?

02:01:801 (121801|0) - move to 6 and add at 02:01:713 (121713|0) -

02:02:772 (122772|6) - and 02:02:860 (122860|0) - add

02:09:566 (129566|5,129566|2) - cut one or two

02:10:977 (130977|4) - delete

02:11:948 - miss drum? XD

02:15:213 (135213|1,135213|2,135213|5) - cut one or two

02:16:624 (136624|3) - delete

02:55:978 (175978|3) - add

03:18:742 (198742|4,198743|5) - cut one

03:25:713 (205713|4,205713|2,206242|5,206242|1) - delete and add at 03:25:713 (205713|3) -

Puberty

00:23:684 (23684|1) - move to 0

00:24:037 (24037|0) - move to 1

00:41:331 (41331|5) - delete

00:48:389 (48389|5) - move to 2

01:04:625 (64625|0) - delete

01:05:331 (65331|0) - move to 2?

01:13:669 (73669|3,73801|2) - I think that's three instead of two...

01:16:625 (76625|2) - move to 5 and add at 01:16:537 (76537|2) -

01:19:360 (79360|3) - add

01:33:566 (93566|4) - move to 1

01:42:301 (102301|0) - add

01:46:625 (106625|6) - add

01:55:272 (115272|0) - delete

02:15:566 (135566|4) - move to 2

02:15:919 (135919|1) - to 0

02:16:272 (136272|0) - to 6

02:20:154 (140154|3,140684|3,141213|3) - I think delete them are fine

02:42:742 (162742|0) - puu.sh/5Syep.png

03:01:448 (181448|5,181448|1) - move to 0 and 6

03:09:213 (189213|5,189301|4,189389|3,189478|2,189566|1) - move to 1,2,3,4,3

Adolescence

~~Will finish soon!~~
AND SORRY FOR MY LATENESS TAT

I am a little uncomfortable with the use of LN and excessive notes... Just my opinion

Good luck and have a star!

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2014-01-07T15:58:17+00:00

rumiiii don't move this to grave, baka arwwwwggghhhh @w@

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Rumia- 2014-01-11T00:46:42+00:00

mingmichael wrote:
rumiiii don't move this to grave, baka arwwwwggghhhh @w@
i'll revive this later . waiting ctb diff revived

Last edited by Rumia- 2014-02-17T15:39:29+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

QHideaki13

Global Moderator

455 posts

Joined March 2011

QHideaki13 2014-02-17T12:00:18+00:00

Here you go~
( Q-H & NTR8's Rain )

Timeline

00:01:779 - 00:18:405 (Q-H)

00:18:742 - 00:52:625 (NTR8)

00:52:639 - 01:26:149 (Q-H)

01:26:507 - 02:00:125 (NTR8)

02:00:386 - 02:30:742 (Q-H)

02:31:448 - 03:10:625 (NTR8)

03:10:987 - 03:25:102 (Q-H)

~~Another difficulty coming soon!~~

Last edited by QHideaki13 2014-05-26T12:34:13+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Rumia- 2014-02-17T14:54:19+00:00

QHideaki13 wrote:

Here you go~
( Q-H & NTR8's Rain )

Timeline

00:01:779 - 00:18:405 (Q-H)

00:18:742 - 00:52:625 (NTR8)

00:52:639 - 01:26:149 (Q-H)

01:26:507 - 01:26:507 (NTR8)

02:00:386 - 02:30:742 (Q-H)

02:31:448 - 03:10:625 (NTR8)

03:10:987 - 03:25:102 (Q-H)

ok updated thanks for gd <3

Bruce

1,076 posts

Joined January 2013

Bruce 2014-02-18T11:52:31+00:00

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Rumia- 2014-02-19T14:07:36+00:00

richardfeder wrote:
Rumiaaaa~
AND SORRY FOR MY LATENESS TAT
Chilhood
00:08:684 (8684|2) - move to (0|1|2|3|4|5|6) 5 - re arrange
00:08:860 (8860|4) - move to 2 - re arrange

00:09:213 (9213|0) - add - added

00:12:389 (12389|4,12389|6) - what are they lol. just keep following piano? XD - guitar distorts

00:14:507 (14507|1) - add - added

00:21:566 (21566|1) - move to 2

00:21:566 (21566|1) - add
In fact about here I am a little confuse about your sound choice and sometimes cannot immediately tell what are you following. You follow some piano and most drums, and they sometimes get mixed-up. What about emphasis one of them deliberately while cutting another? - the part dat don't have piano i dont follow piano xD

00:30:037 (30037|5) - move to 3

00:37:095 (37095|4) - move to 2

00:41:331 (41331|3,41331|5,41331|1) - cut 1 or 2 of them

00:42:742 (42742|3) - move to 2

00:44:154 (44154|6) - delete delete ln instead

00:44:860 (44860|4) - move to 00:45:037 (45037|3) - keeping 1/1 measure here

00:48:389 (48389|4) - move to 3 x

00:48:037 (48037|3) - move to 5 x

00:49:801 (49801|0) - delete x

00:50:507 (50507|5) - delete deleted

00:52:625 (52625|1) - use LN? no
00:53:684 (53684|1) - ^ ^
00:54:742 (54742|4) - ^ ^

01:01:801 (61801|2) - delete and put a LN from 01:01:625 - to 01:01:978 - no

01:03:213 (63213|2) - move to 01:03:389 (63389|6) - ok

01:04:625 (64625|0) - delete and turn 01:04:448 (64448|3) - into a LN - no

01:07:448 (67448|4) - same as previous x

01:22:007 (82007|4) - delete deleted

01:21:919 (81919|5) - move to 3 - moved to 4
01:22:095 (82095|3,82184|2,82272|1) - move to 456 x , keep this

01:24:301 (84301|5,84389|3) - really confusing. Lots of guitar then suddenly drums come out in the middle: maybe keep doing guitar? XD its on the new measure xD

01:28:978 (88978|1) - move to 6 ok

01:33:566 (93566|0) - add - ok

01:39:213 (99213|2) - move to 5 no

01:39:389 (99389|3) - move to 4 no

01:39:566 (99566|4) - 3 ^

01:39:742 (99742|3) - 4 ^

01:43:801 (103801|2) - delete ^

01:44:331 (104331|3) - add ok

01:44:860 (104860|4) - move to 1

01:50:507 (110507|4,110507|2) - cut 1 and move another to 3 ok

01:53:331 (113331|2) - move to 3

01:59:684 (119684|1,119684|6) - http://puu.sh/5RPKR.jpg x

02:07:978 (127978|4) - add x

02:45:213 (165213|4) - delete ok

02:53:331 (173331|1) - delete ok

03:01:095 (181095|3,181095|6,181095|0) - cut 1

03:09:566 (189566|1) - move to 3

03:18:037 (198037|4) - move to 6

03:22:272 (202272|6) - delete x
Puberty
00:23:684 (23684|1) - move to 0 - keeping pattern with previous

00:24:037 (24037|0) - move to 1 - the stair 1,3,5 is good enough

00:41:331 (41331|5) - delete - no- strong beat

00:48:389 (48389|5) - move to 2 ok

01:04:625 (64625|0) - delete k

01:05:331 (65331|0) - move to 2? x

01:13:669 (73669|3,73801|2) - I think that's three instead of two... hear slowly , its 2

01:16:625 (76625|2) - move to 5 and add at 01:16:537 (76537|2) - x

01:19:360 (79360|3) - add - added

01:33:566 (93566|4) - move to 1 ok

01:42:301 (102301|0) - add - added

01:46:625 (106625|6) - add

01:55:272 (115272|0) - delete ok

02:15:566 (135566|4) - move to 2 re arrange

02:15:919 (135919|1) - to 0 ^

02:16:272 (136272|0) - to 6 ^

02:20:154 (140154|3,140684|3,141213|3) - I think delete them are fine ok

02:42:742 (162742|0) - puu.sh/5Syep.png x

03:01:448 (181448|5,181448|1) - move to 0 and 6 no xD

03:09:213 (189213|5,189301|4,189389|3,189478|2,189566|1) - move to 1,2,3,4,3 ok

Adolescence
00:49:801 (49801|0) - delete ok

00:53:331 (53331|2) - move to 4 re arrange

00:56:331 (56331|1) - move to 0 ok

00:56:154 (56154|0) - move to 1 re arrange

omg so ET... how could you two make this anime song so difficult like these lol lol xD im poet

01:44:507 (104507|2) - delete x i accent with 3 note

02:05:684 (125684|2) - move to 0

02:13:801 (133801|2) - move to 02:13:978 (133978|1) -

02:32:507 (152507|2,152684|4,152860|2) - ctrl+H ok

02:56:684 (176684|1) - delete

02:57:037 (177037|1) - move to 3 x

I am a little uncomfortable with the use of LN and excessive notes... Just my opinion
Good luck and have a star!

thx richard , 2 months after reply xD

Last edited by Rumia- 2014-02-19T14:08:55+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Rumia- 2014-02-19T14:08:27+00:00

Simple_Star wrote:
Hello,Poet Rumia~ Here is Mod
Normal
HP6 or OD6 - changed hp to 6
00:33:566 (33566|3) - Move to 1 move to 2 xD
01:02:331 (62331|3,62419|4,62507|5) - All Right 1 Column ok
01:13:669 (73669|3) - Move to 01:13:684 - ok
01:54:389 (114389|2) - Move to 5 moved to 2
02:21:742 (141742|3,141919|3) - Move to 6 ok
02:31:448 (151448|5) - Move to 4

Hard
00:40:448 (40448|3) - Move to 1
01:13:669 (73669|3) - Move to 01:13:684 - ok
01:53:331 - ~ 01:53:919 - 1/3. oh idk how it gor wrongly snapped xD
01:53:684 (113684|4,113801|5,113919|6) - Ctrl+J x , keeping the stair
01:54:037 (114037|4) - Move to 4 keep
02:11:507 (131507|3) - Move to 1 ok
03:23:684 (203684|2) - Start at 03:22:978 - no xD

Poet Insane x2 XD

Good Luck

thanks for mod ~ poetstar

Maiz94

1,376 posts

Joined June 2010

Maiz94 2014-02-22T12:45:07+00:00

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

Rumia- 2014-02-23T12:10:59+00:00

ishimaru94 wrote:
[Normal]
00:06:566 (6566|3) - Move to 1 rearranged
00:08:860 (8860|2) - Move to 3 no

00:09:389 (9389|4,9742|1) - Flip vertically both notes. follows pitch
00:10:801 (10801|4) - Move to 2 follows pitch
00:11:154 (11154|1) - Move to 5 follows pitch

00:15:037 (15037|4,15389|1) - Flip vertically both notes rearranged
00:19:095 (19095|2) - Move to 3 ok

00:20:154 (20154|4) - Move to 3 no
00:22:801 (22801|0) - Move to 1moved to 2

00:25:801 (25801|1) - Move to 6 ok
00:33:213 (33213|5) - Move to 3 ok
00:33:213 (33213|6) - Move to 5 no

00:42:213 (42213|4) - Move to 5 reverse pattern of previous
00:42:742 (42742|5) - Move to 4 no , its fine on the 5

00:43:801 (43801|3,43801|1) - Move to the right by 1 column ok
00:57:919 (57919|2) - Move to 1 moved to 3

01:02:331 (62331|2,62419|3,62507|4) - Move these notes to the right by 1 column. ok
01:07:625 (67625|5,67801|3) - Move to the left by 1 column. ok

01:09:037 (69037|5) - Move to 6 ok
01:10:448 (70448|4) - Move to 3 no

01:15:566 (75566|2) - Move to 3 rearranged to 1
01:23:860 (83860|2,84037|2) - Move both notes to 1 ok

01:25:272 (85272|1) - Move to 0 ok
01:25:448 (85448|4) - Move to 6 its fine

01:27:566 (87566|5) - Move to 4 ok
01:33:566 (93566|4) - Move to 5 ok

01:40:978 (100978|4) - Move to 3 its fine
01:42:742 (102742|3,102831|2,102919|1) - Move these notes to the right by 1 column

01:49:095 (109095|5,109095|1) - Move to the left by 1 column ok
02:00:389 (120389|4) - Move to 3 rearranged to 5

02:04:978 (124978|4) - Move to 3 rearranged
02:10:978 (130978|5) - Move to 4 its fine

02:16:448 (136448|4) - Move to 5 ok
02:22:625 (142625|1) - Move to 2 ok

02:30:742 (150742|5,151095|5) - Move both notes to 6 moved the other half to 2

02:32:684 (152684|2) - Move to 1 rearranged

02:35:154 (155154|1,155331|3,155507|1,155684|3) - Move these notes to the left by 1 column its fine
02:40:801 (160801|5,161154|4,161507|3,161860|2,162213|3,162389|5) - Rearrange like this, http://puu.sh/75wFQ.jpg no thanks

02:45:566 (165566|2) - Move to 3 no thanks
02:52:272 (172272|4) - Move to 5 ok

03:04:272 (184272|4,184625|4,184978|4) - Move these notes to 5 no
03:09:213 (189213|5,189301|4,189389|3,189478|2) - Flip horizontally these notes follows the pitch

[Hard]
00:03:037 (3037|3,3213|1) - Move both notes to the left by 1 column. no
00:04:448 (4448|2) - Move to 1 no

00:05:507 (5507|3) - Move to 2 moved to 1
00:09:742 (9742|2) - Move to 1 no

00:11:507 (11507|3) - Move to 4 ok
00:13:272 (13272|2) - Move to 1 rearranged

00:17:948 (17948|2) - Move to 0 rearranged
00:19:978 (19978|1) - Move to 2 ok

00:22:272 (22272|2) - Move to 3 ok
00:29:684 (29684|2) - Move to 0 rearranged

00:30:213 (30213|2) - Move to 1 no
00:32:331 (32331|2) - Move to 1 ok

00:38:154 (38154|4) - Move to 5 rearranged
00:43:625 (43625|4) - Move to 2 no

00:46:051 (46051|2) - Move to 3 no
00:46:139 (46139|5) - Move to 6 no

00:56:507 (56507|4) - Move to 3 no
01:01:801 (61801|2) - Move to 3 no

01:10:448 (70448|4) - Move to 5 ok
01:12:389 (72389|2) - Move to 3 rearranged

01:19:095 (79095|5) - Move to 3 no
01:19:625 (79625|5) - Move to 6 no

01:20:331 (80331|1,80507|2) - Move to the left by 1 column. no
01:38:154 (98154|5) - Move to 6 no

01:46:272 (106272|4) - Move to 3 no
01:58:625 (118625|4) - Move to 6 rearranged
01:58:978 (118978|6) - Move to 5 rearranged

01:59:331 (119331|4,120389|4) - Move both notes to 5 moved 1 to 5
02:01:801 (121801|3) - Move to 4 rearranged

02:04:978 (124978|4) - Move to 3 ok
02:11:860 (131860|2) - Move to 1 no

02:14:154 (134154|5) - Move to 6 ok
02:16:625 (136625|5) - Move to 6 ok
02:16:801 (136801|1) - Move to 0 ok

02:19:095 (139095|4) - Move to 5 no
02:21:742 (141742|1,141919|1) - Move both notes to 0 no

02:32:684 (152684|2,153037|1) - Move both notes to the left by 1 column ok
02:33:566 (153566|4) - Move to 6 no

02:40:801 (160801|3,160801|5,161154|2,161154|4,161507|3,161507|1,161860|2,161860|0,162213|1,162213|3,162389|5,162389|4) - Rearrange like this, http://puu.sh/75yPN.jpg no thanks i like the current pattern
02:43:801 (163801|4) - Move to 5 no

02:45:478 (165478|4,165566|2) - Move both notes to the left by 1 column ok
02:46:978 (166978|2,167331|2,167684|2,168037|2) - Move these notes to 0 rearranged to 1

02:52:272 (172272|4) - Move to 5 ok
03:02:154 (182154|4) - Move to 5 rearranged to 6

03:02:860 (182860|5,183213|5,183566|5,183919|5) - Move these notes to 4 no thanks
03:04:272 (184272|4,184625|4,184978|4,185331|4) - Move these notes to 5 no thanks

03:09:919 (189919|3,190272|3) - Move both notes to 1 no thanks
03:11:331 (191331|5) - Move to 6 no thanks

03:14:154 (194154|2) - Move to 1 no

[Insane]
00:03:037 (3037|1,3389|1) - Move both notes to 0 no
00:04:448 (4448|4,4801|4) - Move both notes to 6 no
00:04:625 (4625|2) - Move to 3 no

00:07:272 (7272|2) - Move to 0 ok
00:12:919 (12919|4,13095|4) - Move both notes to 6 no , pitch

00:15:566 (15566|1) - Move to 0 ok
00:22:272 (22272|1) - Move to 0 no

00:25:095 (25095|2) - Move to 0 no
00:47:507 (47507|4) - Move to 5 ok

00:50:331 (50331|6) - Move to 3 no
01:00:919 (60919|2) - Move to 3 no

01:07:801 (67801|2) - Move to 0 ok
01:25:713 (85713|4) - Move to 3 no

01:36:037 (96037|4,96037|2) - Move both notes to the left by 2 columns no
01:42:037 (102037|2) - Move to 1 no

01:44:154 (104154|2) - Move to 1 no
01:51:566 (111566|2) - Move to 0 no

01:56:507 (116507|4) - Move to 6 no
01:59:419 (119419|4,119595|4) - Move both notes to 3 no
01:59:419 (119419|1,119595|1) - Move both notes to 2 no

02:06:389 (126389|4) - Move to 3 ok
02:17:242 (137242|2) - Move to 3 no

02:23:507 (143507|2) - Move to 3
02:24:742 (144742|4) - Move to 3

02:27:037 (147037|4) - Move to 3 rearranged and both ^
02:31:801 (151801|2) - Move to 1 02:24:742 (144742|4)

02:37:801 (157801|4) - Move to 6 no
02:39:742 (159742|4) - Move to 5 no

02:40:625 (160625|3) - Move to 5 no
02:40:801 (160801|4,160801|6,161154|3,161154|5,161507|2,161507|4,161860|3,161860|1,162213|2,162213|4,162389|3,162389|5) - Rearrange like this, http://puu.sh/75SwT.png ok

02:45:125 (165125|1) - Move to 0 ok
02:48:037 (168037|6) - Move to 5 rearranged

02:58:095 (178095|3,178184|2) - Flip vertically both notes ok
03:00:389 (180389|0) - Move to 1 rearranged

03:05:684 (185684|4,185684|2) - Move both notes to the left by 2 columns. ok
03:07:978 - Add a note at 6 no

03:09:478 (189478|5) - Move to 4 no
03:09:566 (189566|4) - Move to 2 no

03:14:066 (194066|2) - Move to 3 ok

gg essay indeed kkkkkk

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2014-03-10T15:11:07+00:00

If I remember this map was requested me for mod a bit long ago. I modded this offline and a long ago so I'm not sure if this is still up-to-date but I post it anyways. Tell me if its not good and I will do a re-check. Sorry for the delay. q.q

[Rain]

00:10:625 (2) - ctrl+h?
00:18:742 (1,2) - Ctrl+h it please. This way there will be a jump at 00:19:978 (3) which gives a good feeling. And there won't be high difference between the pattern since it start at the middle anyways.
00:22:448 (4) - I would like to jump here since the vocal high pitched.
00:46:625 (9,10) - This backward jump right after an 1/4 stream is hard. Try reducing the distance a bit.
01:12:389 (1) - Try out something interesting here? Moving to one direction is kinda borring.
01:13:625 (2) - This note follows nothing.
01:14:154 - Why empty?
01:14:507 - ^
01:14:860 - ^
01:15:919 (5) - This note also follows nothing altough there is a hard beat at 01:15:742 and 01:16:095. I suggest you to use a slider which covers both.
01:17:154 (3,4) - Same here as before.
01:19:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I know what you were trying to follow but this is horrible. Hard beats at red tick and you mapped the white ones and to make it worst you used clap on them. My ears are hurting so much...
01:23:331 (5) - Long white tick uncovered tho it contains a good part. And this slider is just follows nothing anyways.
01:25:625 (6) - There is a triplet right after this.
01:26:331 - note please
01:34:978 (12) - Etooo~ New combo maybe?
01:35:684 - note?
01:45:389 - Missing a note maybe?
01:59:948 (5) - Are you sure this is not on red tick? Or try to move between the two tick with 1/8, it sounds better.
02:08:860 (1,2) - Repeat slider then a note? It will follow the vocal better.
02:38:331 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - They once said no hard dash after HDash...
02:45:566 (11) - New combo again?
02:54:566 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The random distance changes during an 1/4 stream is extremely hard. I think it can only acceptable at Overdose level. Please try to make the jumps during streams expectable.

Eh, I'm not here to map for you two man. You mapped Rain with your patterns but this is more like a Salad in rhythm. Its okay to map the song this way, but then please use your patterns according to it. So much rhythm ended up uncovered, please try to locate and map them out at least during kiais (except the 3rd one). What I want to say with this you need to follow both vocal and music if you map Rain. It needs more rhythm. o.o

/Please take a look at your new combos too, they are messed up at some places. I suggest you to use new one at every big white tick to avoid stacking, and its easier to keep up that way.

/Hitsounding is also unconsistent. Sometimes it gaves me a chill but almost right after it my ears start to hurt. q.q

In overall I think this diff still need a lot of work. (Well, I think I'm a horrible modder for CtB since I can't recognize how each mapper follows the rhythm.) Anyways, you need to follow the rhythm better I think but this is maybe just style difference, feel free to ignore everything or ask me for help. Its up to you.

[Shi-Ra]

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Joined October 2012

[Shi-Ra] 2014-05-01T05:50:08+00:00

I'm back and now checkin mods~

ishi's mod

[Shi-Ra's Insane]
00:10:801 (10801|6) - Move to 5 Done
00:33:389 (33389|5) - Move to 6 Done

00:50:860 (50860|1) - Move to 0 Done
00:50:860 (50860|4) - Move to 6 Re-arranged some notes before it too

01:06:742 (66742|2) - Move to 0 kk, more comfortable here
01:16:625 (76625|5) - Move to 6 Done

01:16:978 (76978|5) - Move to 0 re-arranged in another way
01:29:859 (89859|1) - Move to 0 Done

02:00:389 (120389|2) - Move to 0 Done
02:18:389 (138389|5,138390|3) - Move both notes to the right by 1 column Done

02:24:389 (144389|5,144742|5) - Move both notes to 6 Done
02:33:213 (153213|2) - Move to 6 Done

02:35:860 (155860|5) - Move to 3 Okay owo done
02:42:213 (162213|0) - Move to 1 Undrstood

02:45:037 (165037|5) - Move to 6 no for the last one xD it fits alternation well here

richard's mod

00:54:037 (54037|1,54389|2) - move one column left Done

00:54:742 (54742|4) - two column left re-modelled in another way

01:00:037 (60037|3,60037|5) - give up 1/2 drums here? Added jacks to fit drums here

01:01:801 (61801|1) - delete nuuu, it fills the pattern connection here ;w;

01:03:213 (63213|6,63213|2) - delete one of them deleted note from 2nd column

01:03:742 (63742|3,63742|5,63831|4,63831|2,63919|1,63919|3) - this kind of double stair is not so friendly XD... maybe things like this puu.sh/5SwOp.png would be better missed puush ;w; but re-arranged now

01:07:448 (67448|5,67448|1,67448|4) - delete one Deleted from 4th column

01:08:860 (68860|5,68860|3) - delete one of them removed from 3rd column

01:09:566 (69566|1) - move to 0|1|2|3|4|5|6 Done, nice

01:27:212 (87212|4,87212|1,87213|6) - delete one no, pattern fill up, I'll broke it ;w;

01:37:801 - add Done

01:58:978 (118978|3) - and 01:59:154 (119154|3) - add? oh...it'll be overmap here, don't want to make it harder

02:01:801 (121801|0) - move to 6 and add at 02:01:713 (121713|0) - Done

02:02:772 (122772|6) - and 02:02:860 (122860|0) - add Done

02:09:566 (129566|5,129566|2) - cut one or two re-modelled

02:10:977 (130977|4) - delete Done

02:11:948 - miss drum? XD added one note

02:15:213 (135213|1,135213|2,135213|5) - cut one or two removed from 1st column

02:16:624 (136624|3) - delete Done

02:55:978 (175978|3) - add Done

03:18:742 (198742|4,198743|5) - cut one Done

03:25:713 (205713|4,205713|2,206242|5,206242|1) - delete and add at 03:25:713 (205713|3) - Done

+ Many self fixes owo Thank you, guys ^w^

> Latest ver. Insane <

PROGUY

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PROGUY 2014-05-04T14:28:08+00:00

Hi Rumia.

Here's my check as requested.

[[Shi-Ra]'s Insane]
01:06:213 (66213|6,66213|5,66213|0,66213|1,66213|3,66389|5,66389|3,66389|0,66389|1,66389|6) These claps are surprisingly loud. Remove clap hitsounds from 2 or 3 normal notes per section/line.
02:01:801 AiMod reports 7 consecutive presses here. Just remove either normal note to solve this.
02:13:978 (133978|1,133978|3,133978|2,133978|5,133978|4,134154|2,134154|1,134154|5,134154|3,134154|4) Loud clap hitsounds again.

[Shi-Ra]

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[Shi-Ra] 2014-05-04T18:05:20+00:00

PROGUY wrote:
[[Shi-Ra]'s Insane]
01:06:213 (66213|6,66213|5,66213|0,66213|1,66213|3,66389|5,66389|3,66389|0,66389|1,66389|6) These claps are surprisingly loud. Remove clap hitsounds from 2 or 3 normal notes per section/line.
02:01:801 AiMod reports 7 consecutive presses here. Just remove either normal note to solve this.
02:13:978 (133978|1,133978|3,133978|2,133978|5,133978|4,134154|2,134154|1,134154|5,134154|3,134154|4) Loud clap hitsounds again.

All fixed, thanks ^w^
+ Self fixes, fully HSed for now \o/

> Latest ver. <

Rumia-

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Rumia- 2014-05-04T18:12:40+00:00

updated!~

PROGUY

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PROGUY 2014-05-05T03:49:58+00:00

Uhh... Now there are two timing points at 02:22:978...

Rumia-

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Rumia- 2014-05-05T05:26:01+00:00

PROGUY wrote:
Uhh... Now there are two timing points at 02:22:978...

fixed

PROGUY

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PROGUY 2014-05-05T06:39:13+00:00

Piano'd.

Edit: lol 777th post

Rumia-

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Rumia- 2014-05-05T07:17:57+00:00

PROGUY wrote:
Piano'd.

thanks!!

CrazyStar

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CrazyStar 2014-06-20T16:20:34+00:00

Really want it to be ranked!

poet

PROGUY

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PROGUY 2015-01-07T12:24:48+00:00

With the removal of the Taiko diffs and some minor changes in the Mania ones, I'll be replacing that piano icon with a bubble.

Good luck.

Lirai

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Lirai 2015-01-07T13:47:07+00:00

Rumia- wrote:
HERE WE GO!!!!!!!
HYPERINO

Rumia-

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Rumia- 2015-01-07T14:05:04+00:00

omg thanks wwwwwwww

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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Spectator 2015-01-07T14:06:55+00:00

Those frogs lol
congratz ww

NewRulerNA

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Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2015-01-07T14:07:36+00:00

HoneyWorks should not be source because it is a production team name.
[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]Only use the Source field if the song comes from or was made famous by a video game, movie, or series. Website names are not an acceptable Artist nor Source.there are japanese sources.
http://honeyworks.jp/profile/
http://dic.nicovideo.jp/a/honeyworks
http://www5.atwiki.jp/hmiku/pages/27164.html

btw soft-hitnormal.wav is a blank hitsound... this is acceptable in mania?
[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable. The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent, but only do it if it makes sense. Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2015-01-07T14:18:26+00:00

rip

Rumia-

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Rumia- 2015-01-07T14:19:21+00:00

have some frogs

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