1. Hard (4.66 stars, 439 notes)
2. Insane (4.94 stars, 544 notes)
3. Normal (3.2 stars, 279 notes)

Kibbleru wrote:

Warning: There WILL be parts where i get too picky but don't hammer me for it >.< this is my first time.
Ok~ im not too good at modding,too~ Thank you for your first time modding on this map >w<~

[General]
Great map! feels very smooth to play and there's a variety of beats and sliders!

Also i think there's a little too much kiai time. i would personally limit kiai time to probably a quarter of the song.

Try to use distance snap a bit more


Thanks><~ this song collect three song's kiai part at last.... Decide canceled one's ;w;
Sometimes dont need to always follow distance in harder difficulty :3



[Normal]

SPOILER

00:15:852 (1) - i think you should make this 2 beats shorter to match the ending with the drumbeat
00:28:115 (1) - same with this one after thinking, changed 1st but not 2nd :3

Warning: The following are super picky lol lol ~ fixed some looks weird(BTW i always uses grid4 )
i'd suggest use grid level 4 for these, if you aren't already using it
00:40:159 (4) - maybe move this up a bit so it forms a straighter line with the circle before and after it. This applies with the following
00:47:823 (1) - same thing applies here example: http://gyazo.com/ab099d60f9aa6a57bbbb9a14fea5011d
00:50:232 (4) - and this
00:54:173 (4) -
01:27:458 (3) -
01:34:465 (3) - only slightly here
02:00:305 (4) -
02:23:516 (3) -
02:28:334 (4) -
02:31:837 (4) -
02:38:407 (3) -
02:51:327 (2) -
03:13:443 (4) -
03:22:202 (2) -
03:33:589 (3) -
03:36:217 (2) -

01:02:275 (2) - adjust this slider a bit so it's angled same as the one before
02:21:108 (3) - same with this one ok:P

01:03:151 (3) - this might look better if it's adjacent to the slider before ie: http://gyazo.com/0baaeaffd91076ae9651c1b55123f8f8 I dont know where you changes... but made a little adjust

01:15:414 (1) - i think you should make a beat blanket here something like this: http://gyazo.com/05202320de753da10ba382a9d222bb2f
01:35:998 (1) - here as well http://gyazo.com/edfafb34212d039f285bd358e7217d73 Fixed both~


from 01:57:896 (2) - to 02:09:721 (1) - there's nothing in the music to match your beats. try moving them around a bit to match the music more Remaped follow the vocal www

02:39:283 (1) - might be better if you made the timeline something like this: http://gyazo.com/dde2fac5d558f23c61dabb916cc2b564

[Hard]

SPOILER

Warning: Picky stuff fixed 1st and 4th~
00:18:261 (2) - adjust this so it forms a straighter line with the beats before and after. all of the following also applies
00:20:889 (4) -
00:23:954 (2) -
02:26:582 (2) -


00:32:932 (2) - might look better if you made it like this: http://gyazo.com/41e192fba9f8a4ecf148286a6ff2eb3d Oh~ fixed~

00:41:910 (7) - move this over a tiny bit so that its at the end of 00:40:378 (4) - ok~ fixed

01:39:721 (4) - i think you can remove this alright

01:58:115 (2) - try making a slight beat blanket with the previous beat. if that was your original intention, make it slightly better using grid level 4
01:59:867 (4) - same with this one
02:01:619 (2) - and this all fixed QwQ

02:01:400 (1) - idk why but this note seems to be in sync better if it's 1 beat behind in the timeline
idk too... but when i started make it have same problem maybe artist's mistake XD...
02:08:626 (2) - makes more sense if the timeline is like this: http://gyazo.com/feb34103e488d03101e2edd3767db368
hmm... no change
02:21:765 (9) - make this line up with the previous 2 beats no i like curve flow ww

02:34:465 (5) - make this line up with the previous slider ^

02:51:765 (1) - make a beat blanket with the next beat ie: http://gyazo.com/bb0ecefc2ec5c896658160cf21c9be63
02:55:268 (1) - same with this changed in other way

03:04:027 (1) - adjust these beat blankets QAQ from these part after didn't do arrangement yet... forgot to move to WIP ;w; sry~
03:04:903 (3) -

01:29:867 (2) - move this up so its starting point is parallel with 01:29:429 (1) - 's starting point fixed~

01:33:370 (1) - positioning looks weird. maybe try to make a line or triangle with the next 2 sliders? its a little jump

03:10:597 (2) - space this out a bit maybe? or put it on top of the previous circle

03:11:911 (3) - make this parallel to the previous slider maybe
03:12:786 (5) - same with this one

03:14:539 (1) - from this point on, there's a lot of straight sliders going at random angles. unless you really want this, in my opinion it just looks messy. also, the beats are heavily focused to the left side of the board. try to space them out a little and maybe add some curves and angles. Also there are a lot of beats that are blocked by the huge sliders and i couldn't tell when to top

if you want to keep it the same, i would still suggest making them parallel to each other and make the single beats more visible

03:37:969 (7) - to 03:38:626 (10) - make this curve better. something like this: http://gyazo.com/ae3f0bea3a64f469cfad3e48692c16f2

04:04:465 (1) - to 04:06:217 (5) - make these curve a bit better too.

[Insane]

SPOILER

00:44:537 (4) - make this a bit more curvy so it kinda does a beatblanket with the end of the previous slider
00:44:976 (5) - make this as curvy as the previous one curvier and copied both

00:48:041 (4) - try using slight curves here
00:48:479 (5) - and here as well changed

00:53:297 (3) - curves might work better here. try this: http://gyazo.com/ce0de869b15c2640b88a4ddb9f293806
00:56:801 (2) - here as well changed in other way but also curved w

01:02:275 (2) - move this up a bit like so: http://gyazo.com/3db30fe944fb123de3c9b33520a472f4 fixed~

01:03:808 (4) - adjust this beatblanket fixed

01:19:356 (1) - to 01:20:232 (5) - try making a star like so: http://gyazo.com/5f989dd3e35a89973bf65d7be27db002
ok changed another kind of star~
01:33:371 (1) - 01:34:247 (5) - shape this out a bit better so that the angles look adjacent fixed~

02:06:217 (3) - move this a bit so it makes a better triangle with equal lengths
02:24:392 (2) - same with this fixed both~

02:23:516 (4) - move this down a bit so it forms a straight line? same applies with the following
03:01:181 (2) - nah i love curve flow owo

02:27:020 (7) - move this down like so: http://gyazo.com/bd684f91e502f3b067f0f9345b299472 ^

02:27:896 (3) - this slider looks a bit weird imo. maybe separate the joints a bit ... ok changed

02:36:874 (6) - make this a beat blanket with the previous beat nah i follow the flow

03:50:232 (3) - curve might be better nah its a pair with (2) XD

03:54:830 (4) - make this curvier cant rly explain with words lol: http://gyazo.com/05677fefee4311c9bf4fc289f0f1d68e
lol good~
-picky-
03:55:706 (1) - make this slightly more curvier like the next one fixed ww

P.S. Gyazo FTW! FTW\:D/~

Also, since this is my first time modding, give me some feedback pls
>w< Thank you very much~~ and you do very well on your first modding better than me

leon1341414 wrote:

I think maybe red line need to be set at 00:14:976 - and 00:15:852 - cus you start here.

SPOILER

這樣可以騙ㄎㄟ低嗎wwww

Kibbleru wrote:

star4uu

gunna make some more suggestions

only give me kudos if you found this useful

thanks for star and Recheck ~~~~

[General]
eheh.... i take back what i said about the kiai time i think its better without that random gap ^-^'
hmmm... thinking a while i take out that little gap~ and... get back the canceled one :3


[Insane]

00:39:721 (7,1) - overlap. you want to avoid unintentional overlaps like this. (at least i think its unintentional) didn't noticed ;w; fixed~
01:11:035 (3,4) - i'm not sure if this one is unintentional but it looks kinda weird :I :OO ok~ i made a curve for 2nd one~

01:20:013 (4,6) - overlap fixed~~



[Hard]

00:27:677 (4,7) - these 2 overlap slightly oh... fixed~

02:06:217 (4) - cant hear anything in the music for this .-. XD a little overmap but fixed

(also optional)
03:16:509 (2) - tbh i think a curve looks better here
03:55:706 (1) - ^ great~ both changed to curve :33~

03:18:478 (1,2,3,4,5) - weird star pattern o-o kinda weird but i like it owo

04:04:246 (4,2) - overlap ;w; fixed~


[Normal]

01:03:151 (3) - a slider with a curve at the end looks good for this o-o maybe its just me wow it surely better http://gyazo.com/dd7b178d1d779454d34ecfa5550b2d5e

01:38:626 (1,2) - these 2 aren't centered xO XD little fault fixed~

02:20:013 (3,4) - nngg the overlap looks kinda bad changed to a straight and curve~



Why isn't this map ranked yet '^'

;^; to rank needs very much mod... and get some rare creatrue called 'BAT' XD

really useful at discovering little mistake owo~ thanks again~~

to everyone out there.
mod this map o-o

Feverie wrote:

[General]

Tick these boxes at the bottom

This will resnap all the notes (they are not snapped atm)
:OO I've change the red lines before and these green lines move forward for 2ms... they're snaped now :3

[Normal]

01:03:151 (3) - Only use 2 grey points for the end of the slider (3 for the whole one)

SPOILER

02:53:516 (1) - move right wards so it ends before the hitcircle of 02:54:392 (2) -
All Fixed~ :3

GL
Thanks for Modding >w<~

smallboat wrote:

Hi,Tsumetaku, In-game mod req.A bit late.

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.未對齊的Kiai time 時間點: 01:11:909 (全難度都是) :O 好跟綠線都修了
2.未對齊的綠線: 01:04:902 (Normal diff)
3.SB的字的顏色不是很明顯，而且又跟歌名重疊，這樣哪看的到? 不如把字放在左邊的黑襪子上不就清楚?
XD 這個本來是要配PV把他延長到底的 片尾有回憶錄的感覺 不過窩是沒開PV作不下去的類型(? 所以就沒注意到;w;~ ww

[Normal] 圈圈縮的好像有點慢，看了很tired，HP AR OD各+1? Normal基本都AR4。 好...AR OD都+1 然後刪了點東西才沒3.25星...

00:29:646 (3) - 或許能跟 00:30:303 (1) 照著弧度放。改了><
00:39:500 (3) - 尾端沒疊好
01:04:683 (5) - 在這邊舒服的段落忽然放個兩個note有點違和，看5要不要刪掉或5刪掉，4改成1/2滑條。這個嘛... 本來想帶出什麼感覺但好像失敗了(? 刪了5
01:39:500 (2) - 或許尾端可加個whistle。好~
02:19:792 (2) - 很奇怪的擺放位置，不好看。Ok :/ 修了一下
02:25:267 (6) - ^
03:38:843 (1,2) - 交換NC? 明明是從大白線唱出來怎麼不是在 (2) NC? :O說的也是

[Hard]

00:17:383 (4) - 怎不跟(2)重疊? 哦哦 好
00:46:945 (2,3,4,1) - 對照 (2,3,4) 的間距是1.3，然後00:47:383 (4,1) 這個是0.7左右，而且跟前面距離差不多，有坑人意味。 =w=沒注意到... 把flow轉了方向變1.3了~
01:07:310 (2,4) - 不對稱嗎? 歪了一邊感覺很不舒服又奇怪。咦這段明明好像用CtrlCV的 fixed
01:10:376 (1,2) - 好像有點大聲蓋到音樂了，降低10%音量? 好
01:20:011 (3) - 怎麼Overlap到了? 這樣聽音樂，間距沒理由要變小呀 看了一下加了點間距~
01:36:434 (1) - 前端沒疊好
02:20:668 (5) - 或許可疊(3)上。好 都疊了
02:35:778 (8) - 這也可以跟前面疊起來
02:48:259 (3) - ^
04:04:245 (4) - 感覺移到(220|176)比較好，太靠近滑條看起來不太好看。 真的有比較好看ww fixed

[Insane]

有些地方沒疊好呢，只列前面幾處..還是這是故意的? 倪提到的重疊沒疊好都改了;w;~ 窩雖然愛疊可是都疊不好 555

00:20:668 (4) - 應該能轉一下尾端來疊00:19:135 (4) . 好~
00:21:325 (2,3,4,5,6) - 感覺這五邊形不太好看 看久了覺得也有點扁扁的 fixed~
00:28:113 (1) - 移到(288|252)不就這段同距了? 也不用跟前面overlap到。Ok改了
00:29:208 (4) - 再跳大一點? (484|332)，好~

SPOILER

00:34:026 (2) - 我會移到(272|312)，這樣也不用靠滑條太近。 哦哦 不錯耶 改了
00:39:719 (7) - 尾端沒疊好
00:40:157 (8) - 也是沒疊好
00:58:551 (4) - 似乎可加whistle在滑條頭上，這邊人聲是唱出來的，應該有很好的效果 www真的 這段都加上了
00:59:646 (1) - 沒疊好
01:00:303 (2) - 同 00:58:551 (4)
01:20:887 (7) - 為何不疊 01:19:792 (3) ? 因為 01:20:449 (6)都疊了。 跟後面一起做了點修正
01:24:829 (5) - 推薦疊 01:23:734 (3) 滑條頭 然後01:25:048 (6) 再移動下面一點。
01:32:493 (8) - 尾端finish? 恩...沒加 好像沒那麼合
01:39:719 (1) - 或許尾端可加個whistle。Ok
01:40:048 (1) - 怎麼轉盤多了個clap聲? Normal diff就沒有，加了這個拍手聲蠻突兀的建議去掉。不小心手殘加上的 已拿掉w
01:57:456 (3) - 感覺這綠線音量有點小，聽不到什麼whistle聲，加個10%? 喔喔好 加到60了
02:30:741 (5) - 疊 02:28:989 (1) 滑條頭? Ok 疊了

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
4.圖做的比肥皂那一張好很多。 ;w; 謝謝~ 有小船大的評語信心倍增阿 是因為拖了3個月才做完嗎(?

Tom Lei 2008 wrote:

Recommended to disable kiai on 03:53:076 and enable it on 03:53:514 to fit the song.

baraatje123 wrote:

Awesome map!
Yeah, 300th post
Here are my Testplays:

Normal

Hard

Insane

[url=http://www.mediafire.com/download/4tjxqms4j8j9lyc/baraatje123_-_DECO27_-_Ai_Kotoba_II_[Insane]_(2014-02-09)_Osu.osr][/url]

Good Lcuk With this map!

MasterKirin wrote:

Mod from my queue

[Normal]
01:43:004 (1,2) Mayble do a slider instead of that circles. I think it fits better with the rhythm
03:02:712 (3) CTRL+SHIFT+R and rotate it by -4

[Hard]
01:01:398 (1) CTRL+SHIFT+R and rotate it by -2

[Insane]
Nothing to say here

Sorry for the poor mod ;_; and good luck

All Fixed
Don't worry~ it's also useful X3~
Thanks for mod ><

Erina wrote:

I really love this song, and the map

I'm pretty new at modding, so feel free to treat everything here as only suggestions.

[Insane]
01:14:537 (7) - Consider changing this slider to look like 01:12:785 (3), except rotated =w= Fixed~

[Hard]
00:26:361 (1,2,3) - I think this spacing is kind of large compared to the spacing on the notes before and after it, consider lowering distance snap here hmm... lower by 0.2x~
01:21:325 (6,7) - Consider increasing spacing here fixed
01:21:982 (7) - Maybe new combo here
If you followed the nc above, remove nc on this note 01:22:420 (1), add nc on this note 01:24:172 (4). ok >< the pattern on 2nd kiai shows this too,little fault
01:57:894 (1,2,3) - This spacing seems inconsistent, consider changing it :O didnt noticed... changed~
02:48:259 (3) - Maybe new combo here fixed~
03:58:989 (8) - Move the note down a bit (2 grid marks or so), I think it looks better that way ok~ fixed the slider too

[Normal]
03:24:172 (1,2) - I would turn it into two normal notes instead of two sliders, like this: http://puu.sh/6U8Dl.jpg
ww nah this slider i follow the drum sounds

I think this map is really good

:D I really love this song DECO is amazing~ and the map
and really thanks for modding and support>w<~ really useful!!

Good luck!