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blissfulyoshi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, May 11, 2010 at 5:54:33 PM

Artist: GIRL NEXT DOOR
Title: Be your wings
Source: Tales of Versus
Tags: ToVS Phantasia Destiny Eternia Rebirth Legendia Abyss Tempest Innocence Symphonia Hearts Vesperia ztrot lepidopodus Namco Bandai
BPM: 138
Filesize: 9260kb
Play Time: 01:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.14 stars, 89 notes)
  2. Hard (4.76 stars, 206 notes)
  3. lepidon! - Taiko Muzukashii (4.43 stars, 236 notes)
  4. Normal (4.29 stars, 144 notes)
  5. Vesperia's Pride (4.81 stars, 273 notes)
  6. VS (4.85 stars, 295 notes)
Download: GIRL NEXT DOOR - Be your wings
Download: GIRL NEXT DOOR - Be your wings (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Tales of Versus op.

Enjoy

Warning: I used the the full version of the song to map this, so the the video does not syncronize very well until the lyrics start.

Vesperia's Pride is a guest diff by ztrot.
VS is a collab map between me and ztrot.
Special thanks lepidopodus for making the taiko diffs for this map. All the taiko diffs are available on the 6th page.

Please redownload this map if you dled it before 10/29 becausethe mp3 was changed.

Thx to all who looked at this map.

Edit 8/7: ztrot edits
Edit 8/7 2: Breeze edits
Edit 8/18: VS diff added
Edit 8/19: animask edits
Edit 8/20: Azure_Kyte edits
Edit 8/21: Shinxyn edits
Edit 9/11: bg change
Edit 9/12: EEeee edits
Edit 10/7: small edits
Edit 10/7 2: rust45 edits
Edit 10/13: added hitcircleoverlay and removed the forced skin
Edit 10/20: Mafiamaster edits
Edit 10/20 2: MetalMario201 edits
Edit 10/20 3: whymeman edits
Edit 10/23: Starrodkirby86 edits
Edit 10/23 2: 0_o edits
Edit 10/27: gdeath edits
Edit 10/28: added ztrot's diff
Edit 11/6: JarJarJacob edits
Edit 11/14: Hikato edits
Edit 11/14 2: Kytoxid edits
Edit 12/5: ykcarrot edits
Edit 12/7: MaxwellDemon edits
Edit 12/24: minyeob edits
Edit 12/28: Gens edits
Edit 2/5: Mafiamaster edits 2
Edit 2/19: added 2 of lepidopodus's taiko diffs and changed tags
Edit 2/28: rust45 edits 2
Edit 3/22: Starrodkirby86 edits 2
Edit 4/4: Due to new ranking standards, taiko - oni was removed
Edit 4/25: Remapped one of my sections in VS
Edit 4/25 2: CrimmiSkye edits
Edit 5/1: Sakura301 edits
Edit 5/7: Krisom edits
Edit 5/11: MaxwellDemon edits
Breeze
hi blissfulyoshi

OFFSET:605

[Normal]
01:03:214 (1,2,3) - add whistle
01:04:736 spinner - start at 01:04:953 sounds better
01:29:518 (5,6,7) - spacing...jump on [normal] seem to be a little confused

[Hard]
00:50:279 - add a note
00:50:388 - ^
00:50:714 - ^
these three note added so that match the drumbeat
01:04:736 spinner - start at 01:04:953 sounds better
01:14:083 (1,2,3,4,5) - good patten, but...spacing confusing

great map!
star~
ztrot
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: GIRL NEXT DOOR - Be your wings (blissfulyoshi) [VS].osu
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi

Breeze wrote:

hi blissfulyoshi

OFFSET:605

[Normal]
01:03:214 (1,2,3) - add whistle
01:04:736 spinner - start at 01:04:953 sounds better
01:29:518 (5,6,7) - spacing...jump on [normal] seem to be a little confused

[Hard]
00:50:279 - add a note
00:50:388 - ^
00:50:714 - ^
these three note added so that match the drumbeat
01:04:736 spinner - start at 01:04:953 sounds better
01:14:083 (1,2,3,4,5) - good patten, but...spacing confusing I like the combo, so it is probably going to stay unless too many ppl complain.

great map!
star~
Did all the edits except for the last one on hard. I am surprised I did not map those drums.
Thanks for modding.

Edit: Here is the first part of my side of the collab.

Download: GIRL NEXT DOOR - Be your wings (blissfulyoshi) [VS].osu
ztrot
well I'm guessing your taking it from here

Download: GIRL NEXT DOOR - Be your wings (blissfulyoshi) [VS].osu
ztrot
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi
Now completed placement for my parts. Hitsounds added too.

Download: GIRL NEXT DOOR - Be your wings (blissfulyoshi) [VS].osu
ztrot
be my wings <3
nazi post
00:34:62 (4) - put that on the red tick plz

Download: GIRL NEXT DOOR - Be your wings (blissfulyoshi) [VS].osu
Sleep Powder
[Normal]
00:36:04 (7) - Whistle-slider and finish at the end [ if you do this you might want to extend the sliders a bit...idk ]
00:39:51 (7) - ^
00:42:99 (7) - ^
01:15:60 (7) - Add whistles

[Hard]
00:47:12 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:02:12 (13) - Add a Finish
01:03:86 (6) - ^
01:33:54 (x) - Add a Note here

Offset 611

[VS]
00:29:73 (4) - Add a Clap here
It could be me but...your clap streams sounds a bit weird...
00:40:06 (3,4) - Definitely wrong spacing
Did the spacing just get larger....or is it just me? lol
00:53:43 (4,5) - Finishes
00:56:25 (2,3,4) - ^
00:57:99 (1) - Whistles?
00:58:86 (3) - ^
00:59:73 (5) - ^
01:00:60 (7) - ^
01:01:47 (1) - End with finish
01:33:54 (x) - Add a note here
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi

animask wrote:

[Normal]
00:36:04 (7) - Whistle-slider and finish at the end [ if you do this you might want to extend the sliders a bit...idk ]
00:39:51 (7) - ^
00:42:99 (7) - ^
01:15:60 (7) - Add whistles

all fixed

[Hard]
00:47:12 (1) - Remove New Combo snapped to instruments, so it deserves a new combo
01:02:12 (13) - Add a Finish
01:03:86 (6) - ^
01:33:54 (x) - Add a Note here

rest fixed

Offset 611 fixed

[VS]
00:29:73 (4) - Add a Clap here fixed
It could be me but...your clap streams sounds a bit weird... I guess I need some more opinions on how to change this
00:40:06 (3,4) - Definitely wrong spacing Accelerating stream, if you noticed, the spacing in the 5 beat stream is not constant
Did the spacing just get larger....or is it just me? lol the stream switched the spacing from 1.0 to 1.4 ds
00:53:43 (4,5) - Finishes
00:56:25 (2,3,4) - ^
00:57:99 (1) - Whistles?
00:58:86 (3) - ^
00:59:73 (5) - ^
01:00:60 (7) - ^
01:01:47 (1) - End with finish
01:33:54 (x) - Add a note here
I will let ztrot handle his changes. Thx for modding.
Azure_Kite
[Normal]
00:35:82 (6) - I think this sounds better moved to 00:35:71.
00:39:30 (6) - Like ^, only move it to 00:39:19.
00:42:77 (6) - Like ^, Only move it to 00:42:67.
01:18:86 (1,2,3) - I think this would be cooler with spacing similar to the beats at 01:03:21 (1,2,3)

[Hard]
00:35:82 (6) - I think this sounds better moved to 00:35:71.
00:36:25 (1) - I think it would be cooler if two Hit Circles were placed at 00:36:36 and 00:36:47.
00:37:01 - A Hit Circle wpuld fit well here.
00:39:30 (7) - Move to 00:39:19.
00:40:49 - A beat would sound great placed here.
00:43:97 - ^
00:47:45 - ^

Overall, your map is great :) Starred.
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi

Azure_Kyte wrote:

[Normal]
00:35:82 (6) - I think this sounds better moved to 00:35:71.
00:39:30 (6) - Like ^, only move it to 00:39:19.
00:42:77 (6) - Like ^, Only move it to 00:42:67.
01:18:86 (1,2,3) - I think this would be cooler with spacing similar to the beats at 01:03:21 (1,2,3)

All fixed. I don't know why I was that off on the lyrics.


[Hard]
00:35:82 (6) - I think this sounds better moved to 00:35:71. fixed
00:36:25 (1) - I think it would be cooler if two Hit Circles were placed at 00:36:36 and 00:36:47. No change because I am trying to snap to the more dominant drums.
00:37:01 - A Hit Circle wpuld fit well here. ^
00:39:30 (7) - Move to 00:39:19. fixed
00:40:49 - A beat would sound great placed here. fixed
00:43:97 - ^ This drum is not strong, so no.
00:47:45 - ^ I don't understand what you are trying to snap to here, and I'm only snapping to lyrics in this combo

Overall, your map is great :) Starred.
Thanks for modding.
ztrot
hit sound changes and a few edits

Download: GIRL NEXT DOOR - Be your wings (blissfulyoshi) [VS].osu
Shinxyn
Random Mod~
I ask for a higher quality bg image plz

Normal- Overall diff could be lowered a tick or so...
00:39:52 (7) - why does his end on 1/4? it sounds better on either 1/4 longer or shorter (match the stronger sound by shortening by 1/4 or create an echo by lengthing 1/4?)
Ultra Nazi-

01:10:82 (6) - down a tick to perfectly match distance between 4,5
01:14:52 (3) - left a tick, up a tick?


VS- Overall diff seems to bit too high, your choice..
So... jump crazy... nothing wrong, just... I don't see why this is "easier" than Hard
Nazi-
00:09:08 (1,2) - down a tick to the fading 1 please
00:44:52 (1) - remove whistle here plz


Hard-
for the sake of making this look easier than VS... lower hpdrain and overall diff by 1 tick each? (if you would)
Lotsa Nazi-
00:32:13 (5,6,7) - I found it weird there was no claps here after hearing a clap pace (sure there is no white tick for your beats, so be a bit creative?) (maybe add clap to 6, and 7's start, then finish to 7's end)
00:34:74 (4) - add clap to end?
00:44:95 (3) - right a tick x_x
00:46:04 (6) - clap?
00:49:08 (5,6,7) - clap, finish, finish?
01:06:69 (1) - this clap isn't followed by anything, remove it?
01:11:91 (4,5) - make this stand out more (since it does in the music), maybe add claps, too?
01:27:78 - why not add a note to from a triplet instead?
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi

Shinxyn wrote:

Random Mod~
I ask for a higher quality bg image plz Updated.

Normal- Overall diff could be lowered a tick or so... lowered a tick
00:39:52 (7) - why does his end on 1/4? it sounds better on either 1/4 longer or shorter (match the stronger sound by shortening by 1/4 or create an echo by lengthing 1/4?) I think I was changing something and I forgot to make sure it was the right length. Thanks for catching this. Lengthened 1/4
Ultra Nazi-

01:10:82 (6) - down a tick to perfectly match distance between 4,5
01:14:52 (3) - left a tick, up a tick? Y did I not catch these thing? Both fixed.

VS- Overall diff seems to bit too high, your choice..
So... jump crazy... nothing wrong, just... I don't see why this is "easier" than Hard IDK y it is either
Nazi-
00:09:08 (1,2) - down a tick to the fading 1 please fixed the fading not instead
00:44:52 (1) - remove whistle here plz done


Hard-
for the sake of making this look easier than VS... lower hpdrain and overall diff by 1 tick each? (if you would) done
Lotsa Nazi-
00:32:13 (5,6,7) - I found it weird there was no claps here after hearing a clap pace (sure there is no white tick for your beats, so be a bit creative?) (maybe add clap to 6, and 7's start, then finish to 7's end)
00:34:74 (4) - add clap to end?
00:44:95 (3) - right a tick x_x
00:46:04 (6) - clap?
00:49:08 (5,6,7) - clap, finish, finish?
01:06:69 (1) - this clap isn't followed by anything, remove it?
01:11:91 (4,5) - make this stand out more (since it does in the music), maybe add claps, too?
01:27:78 - why not add a note to from a triplet instead? all done, I really need to learn to apply hitsounds better.
Thanks for the extensive mod.
yeahyeahyeahhh
VS:
00:39:95 (2,3,4,5,6) - Wtf happened here with spacing? :x. Look under spoiler for SS fix, on Grid 2. You can adjust them a bit. but 5,6 should mirror 2,3 with 4 in the middle.


00:43:43 (2,3,4) - Spacing again. No SS this time but it should
00:50:17 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
01:03:00 (3,4,5) - ^
01:13:00 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,) - ^
01:19:19 (1,2) - ^
01:20:17 (2,3,4,5) - ^ (this one is really bad o.o)
01:27:56 (1,2,3) - ^^
01:34:08 (2,3,4,5) - Make these closer if you want to keep it look this way, and swap 3 where 5 in, 4 where 3 is, and 5 where 4 is.

This first stream is perfect and all the others should be similar:
00:26:04 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

Hard:
00:47:13 (1) - Remove new combo
00:51:04 (1) - ^
01:09:30 (1) - ^
01:23:21 (1) - ^
01:27:56 (1,2,3) - Spacing, further apart
01:33:43 (1,2) - ^

MUCH better job in terms of spacing on this diff

Normal:
Fine

Overall, good beatmap, but VS need a lot of work in terms of spacing.

Godspeed.
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

VS:
00:39:95 (2,3,4,5,6) - Wtf happened here with spacing? :x. Look under spoiler for SS fix, on Grid 2. You can adjust them a bit. but 5,6 should mirror 2,3 with 4 in the middle.

SPOILER
[attachment=0:50924]screenshot010.jpg[/attachment:50924]

00:43:43 (2,3,4) - Spacing again. No SS this time but it should
00:50:17 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
01:03:00 (3,4,5) - ^
01:13:00 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,) - ^
01:19:19 (1,2) - ^
01:20:17 (2,3,4,5) - ^ (this one is really bad o.o)
01:27:56 (1,2,3) - ^^
01:34:08 (2,3,4,5) - Make these closer if you want to keep it look this way, and swap 3 where 5 in, 4 where 3 is, and 5 where 4 is.

This first stream is perfect and all the others should be similar:
00:26:04 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

All of those spacing errors you pointed above were on purpose. The first one was an accelerating stream (to help fix this problem I added some more new combos). All the Most of the other ones were either part of the pattern or distance snapped on a level higher than normal. If enough people complain about these streams though, I will change it, so thanks for the input.

Hard:
00:47:13 (1) - Remove new combo snapped to instruments, so no change
00:51:04 (1) - ^ done
01:09:30 (1) - ^ snapped to instruments, so no change
01:23:21 (1) - ^ ^
01:27:56 (1,2,3) - Spacing, further apart Not sure about this one. If I increased the spacing, it might fit the jumps better, but the slider that ended the previous combo is slow so I think using the ds I used for the rest of the song fits. I guess I will wait for further opinions. No change for now.
01:33:43 (1,2) - ^ the whole combo is distance snapped, so I don't see the problem

MUCH better job in terms of spacing on this diff

Normal:
Fine

Overall, good beatmap, but VS need a lot of work in terms of spacing.

Godspeed.
Thanks for modding. Sorry for the switching of the ds from 1.0 to 1.4 in VS threw you off so much.
whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding Go!

Osz. File Check (Done)

SPOILER
Video: Yes
SB (Story Board): No
Custom Skin: No
Background: Yes
[Current] Size: 8.76 MB / 20.00 MB
Source: Yes
Tags: Yes

[Normal] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 138.000 / 611 ms (Sounds good so far.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 2.00
Distance Snap Average: x0.7 + Manual Spacing
[Current] Objects: 144 ( 118 Circles / 24 Sliders / 2 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 178
[Current] Max Score: 685,632
[Current] Star Rating: 4.29
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.6
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.5

00:31:48 (3,4) - Unless this is intentional, these two are not lined up stright.

Notes: Well, only one minor error so far. But it feels a bit questionable having jumps in this difficulty. It might not be that bad, but this is the "easiest" difficulty.

[Hard] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 138.000 / 611 ms (Sounds good so far.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 2.30
Distance Snap Average: x1.3 + Manual Spacing
[Current] Objects: 208 ( 187 Circles / 19 Sliders / 2 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 230
[Current] Max Score: 1,219,630
[Current] Star Rating: 4.82
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.7
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.8

00:39:52 (8,1,2) - The spacing doesn't look even between the notes.
00:47:13 (1) - Feels a bit questionable having this as as single note combo.
01:09:30 (1) - ^
01:23:21 (1) - ^

Notes: Just really one error to look at. The rest of the map seems okay so far.

[VS] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 138.000 / 611 ms (Sounds good so far.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 2.30
Distance Snap Average: x2.0 + Manual Spacing
[Current] Objects: 306 ( 264 Circles / 41 Sliders / 1 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 362
[Current] Max Score: 3,464,330
[Current] Star Rating: 4.85
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.8
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.9

00:39:74 (1) - The single note combo here seems a bit questionable...
00:47:13 (1) - ^
01:01:26 (1) - ^
01:09:30 (1) - ^
01:10:17 (1) - ^
01:11:04 (1) - ^
01:23:21 (1) - ^
01:33:98 (1,2,3,4,5) - .... wtf just happened?

Notes: Not really much here. Just things to double check into but that last part in the end might be a bit too extreme...

Overall: The map seense nice overall, but i'm a bit confused with how the video is functioning (seeing that it starts at 00:07:56). Also, this might not be important as much but I have a feeling someone might complain about how the song abruptly ends as well. But only things to double check into with this map really. I'll drop my star in then.
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Shinde
Hey, what's up.
SPOILER
Background/Thumbnail is ugly. ;_; He scares me. Would you consider changing it?
Also, the song name shows 'Be your wings' atm. Would you capitalize it as 'Be Your Wings'?

Normal
01:14:089 - Roundify combo. Besides that, nothin much.

Hard
Played fine for me. Cept for the last spinner. T_T Would you shorten it by 1/2 or something? The following notes are pretty hard to hit.

VS
Most of this falls under 'I think this map is unreasonably hard, even for an insane' so feel free to ignore any whining.
00:21:915 (6) - Just stack this on 5?
00:26:045 - 5,6 looks wierd, placement
00:26:915 (8) - New combo, remove from following (1) maybe.
00:39:741 - This combo looks wierd, spacing and where the notes fall on. Consider adding notes between (1)/(2), (6)/(7), (7)/(8)
00:56:045 (1,2) - Whattt. These jumps are insane.
01:13:654 (6,7,8,9) - These look positioned oddly, roundify.
01:33:980 - This combo is just one example of how evil this map is. What the hell.

On a sidenote, BPM/Offset was holding around 0ms for the whole song for me so I think it's good, if there was still any debate on it. Song was pretty okay on my ears too. Star.
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi

Shinde wrote:

Hey, what's up.
SPOILER
Background/Thumbnail is ugly. ;_; He scares me. Would you consider changing it? No.
Also, the song name shows 'Be your wings' atm. Would you capitalize it as 'Be Your Wings'? The caps follow what the artist titled the song, so no change.

Normal
01:14:089 - Roundify combo. Besides that, nothin much. Fixed

Hard
Played fine for me. Cept for the last spinner. T_T Would you shorten it by 1/2 or something? The following notes are pretty hard to hit. Since the spinner follow the lyrics, I don't want to change the spinner length. I might get rid of the notes at the end if this becomes too large of a complaint.

VS
Most of this falls under 'I think this map is unreasonably hard, even for an insane' so feel free to ignore any whining.
00:21:915 (6) - Just stack this on 5?
00:26:045 - 5,6 looks wierd, placement Made 5 align with 4, but I don't want to change this much.
00:26:915 (8) - New combo, remove from following (1) maybe. New combos are supposed to separate the lyrics and music in my sections, so no change.
00:39:741 - This combo looks wierd, spacing and where the notes fall on. Consider adding notes between (1)/(2), (6)/(7), (7)/(8) The combo is a accelerating stream between 2-6, and there are no drums to snap to in the places you asked for. As a result, no change.
00:56:045 (1,2) - Whattt. These jumps are insane.
01:13:654 (6,7,8,9) - These look positioned oddly, roundify. Done.
01:33:980 - This combo is just one example of how evil this map is. What the hell. I'll see what ztrot says about his parts.

On a sidenote, BPM/Offset was holding around 0ms for the whole song for me so I think it's good, if there was still any debate on it. Song was pretty okay on my ears too. Star.
Thanks for modding.
ztrot
wip on this diff don't add it if you don't want yo



Download: GIRL NEXT DOOR - Be your wings (blissfulyoshi) [Vesperia's Pride].osu
GbL
[Normal]

Use distance snap in all combos, 0,7x is fine. Normal need be a diff more easy, i think.

01:21:47 (2,3): spacing
01:22:58 (5,6): ^
01:24:30 (2,3,4): ^
01:25:17 (5,6,7): ^

[Hard]

01:33:43 (1,2): leave 1 together with 2

[VS]

Here you can abuse, haha~
Looks fine.

Put storyboard in others diffs.
Star.
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi

GbL wrote:

[Normal]

Use distance snap in all combos, 0,7x is fine. Normal need be a diff more easy, i think.

01:21:47 (2,3): spacing
01:22:58 (5,6): ^
01:24:30 (2,3,4): ^
01:25:17 (5,6,7): ^

At the second repeat of the chorus, I switched to 1.0 distance snap, so the spacing is supposed to be different.


[Hard]

01:33:43 (1,2): leave 1 together with 2 sure

[VS]

Here you can abuse, haha~
Looks fine.

Put storyboard in others diffs. The storyboard is only meant to show who mapped what part in VS, and since I mapped both normal and hard by myself, there is no need for a storyboard in other diffs.
Star.
Thanks for modding.
bmin11
OMG, the BG :o Is this a threat not to turn "no video"?

I see no problems, maybe clap spams on [VS] like 00:36:25 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9), but this is only my taste

Star for a crazy map
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi

bmin11 wrote:

OMG, the BG :o Is this a threat not to turn "no video"? Lol, I personally like the bg, so the bg is not changing.

I see no problems, maybe clap spams on [VS] like 00:36:25 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9), but this is only my taste On one hand there seems to be too many claps here, but on the other hand, I think the claps sound, maybe slightly overwhelming. If someone has an idea that sounds good and reduces the claps, I will implement, but since I can't think of a nice way to lower the amount of claps, I will this under consideration with no change for now. Thanks for your opinion though.

Star for a crazy map
Thanks for modding.
kino77
The BG pic is...o(╯□╰)o

[Easy]
Great~

[Hard]
00:24:74(x)-Add a note here?

[Blissfulyoshi]
Woo~What a gorgeous diff~

star+ku star~
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi

kino77 wrote:

The BG pic is...o(╯□╰)o I might change the bg pic since quite a few people have commented on it.

[Easy]
Great~

[Hard]
00:24:74(x)-Add a note here? I didn't want to map the instruments while the lyrics were going on. I usually only mapped the instruments when a line of lyrics ended, but if enough people ask for this, I will change it. Thanks for your opinion.

[Blissfulyoshi]
Woo~What a gorgeous diff~

star+ku star~ Thank you for the kds star.
Thanks for modding.
EEeee
Normal
meh, it's okay

Hard
01:11:69 (3) - add new combo here, remove from next combo

Metroid wrote:

Also that growing jump is illegal...01:03:67 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
01:14:08 (1,2,3,4,5) - illegal
just kidding to that growing jump, it's allowed and soo cool, I'm just loling on what metroid said on one of my diffs on a map :P

01:19:19 (4) - Nazi, wanna move this down a bit?
01:23:21 (1) - remove new combo

VS
00:21:69 (5) - new combo?
00:21:69 (5) - Fix this, it kinda plays really bad, also looks bad in edit imo
00:45:60 (5) - new combo
00:53:43 (4) - New combo
01:33:97 (1,2,3,4,5) - uh uh, HELL NO, 1/4 stacks in a really hard jump, HELL NO

kk map was okay, just VS had a few more things I don't like cause it's not trying to be insane, but it's really terrible of how hard it is.

anyways, nice map, *starstacks in a really hard jump, HELL NO

kk map was okay, just VS had a few more things I don't like cause it's not trying to be insane, but it's really terrible of how hard it is.

anyways, nice map, *star
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi

EEeee wrote:

Normal
meh, it's okay

Hard
01:11:69 (3) - add new combo here, remove from next combo I disagree with this because the music puts the accent starting where I put the new combo and the spacing/combo changes when that new combo starts.

Metroid wrote:

Also that growing jump is illegal...01:03:67 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
01:14:08 (1,2,3,4,5) - illegal
just kidding to that growing jump, it's allowed and soo cool, I'm just loling on what metroid said on one of my diffs on a map :P
lol, I know ztrot uses this type of jump very often.
01:19:19 (4) - Nazi, wanna move this down a bit? It is supposed to be this way because this lets the 4 will be on the of the 8.
01:23:21 (1) - remove new combo New combo for instrument and consistency.

VS
00:21:69 (5) - new combo? On the fence on this one. No for now, but I might change it sometime.
00:21:69 (5) - Fix this, it kinda plays really bad, also looks bad in edit imo I don't see what is wrong here besides spacing, but it seems pretty intuitive for me. Still, if other people compain, I will change it.
00:45:60 (5) - new combo I don't think this one fits.
00:53:43 (4) - New combo Sure.
01:33:97 (1,2,3,4,5) - uh uh, HELL NO, 1/4 stacks in a really hard jump, HELL NO Probably will change it. Let me think of a pattern for it.

kk map was okay, just VS had a few more things I don't like cause it's not trying to be insane, but it's really terrible of how hard it is.

anyways, nice map, *starstacks in a really hard jump, HELL NO

kk map was okay, just VS had a few more things I don't like cause it's not trying to be insane, but it's really terrible of how hard it is.

anyways, nice map, *star
Thanks for modding.
rust45
[Hard]
Overall diff down by one tick please.
01:14:08 (1,2,3,4,5) - Love hate relationship with this pattern, the gradual spacing increase feels out of place but it's fun to play. Not quite sure what you should do with this.

[VS]
Not sure who's part is harder, but this looks more like a tag map then an Insane with the vast amount of jumps in there.

Epic song, epic series, epic maps. *
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mafiamaster
Normal~
01:03:21 (1,2,3) - Jumps... Please no jumps in the easiest difficulty. If you really want jumps, then make the distance like 01:11:90 (1,2).
01:20:60 (1) - Move Kiai time right on top of the beginning.

VS~

00:39:95 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'm not really too fond of streams that increase in distance.
01:20:16 (2,3,4,5) - Really... Fix your streams, make them closer.
01:33:97 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Hitcircles~
Your hit circle is too big. Resize it so there's no black stuff around the top,left,right,bottom of the circle. Trust me, it doesn't look good with it.
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi

Mafiamaster wrote:

Normal~
01:03:21 (1,2,3) - Jumps... Please no jumps in the easiest difficulty. If you really want jumps, then make the distance like 01:11:90 (1,2). Fixed
01:20:60 (1) - Move Kiai time right on top of the beginning. Fixed

VS~

00:39:95 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'm not really too fond of streams that increase in distance. I wanted to keep this stream the way it is because it is a transition from the a lower spacing to a higher spacing.
01:20:16 (2,3,4,5) - Really... Fix your streams, make them closer. Fixed
01:33:97 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Fixed

Hitcircles~
Your hit circle is too big. Resize it so there's no black stuff around the top,left,right,bottom of the circle. Trust me, it doesn't look good with it. Fixed
Thanks for modding.
Wizard Of Orz
yay tales of vs
Mafiamaster
Alright~
I like everything now, so bubble for you!
mm201
Bubble in Help wtf

-10 to the offset. Tick rate of 2 sounds best.
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi
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whymeman
The map seems good but....

You have some unwanted items in your song folder causing the folder size to be at 18.5 MB: 2 different video files / 2 .mp3 files / 2 .osb files / 1 unused image file

Please check into this.



Edit: Issue addressed and fixed. Bubbled.
Starrodkirby86
*poop*

[Normal]:
01:20:59 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe this does show some sort of epic Kiai difficulty for a Normal (Like a boss part), but the changed spacing tripped me up over it. I was certainly vulnerable. xD I think it must be me half-trying.

[Hard]:
01:22:55 (6,7) - Something's up with the spacing here, I believe.

[VS]:
00:40:05 (3,4,5,6) - Unless this was something about those 'accelerating' spaced deathstreams you're talking about, this might need some cleanup. Regardless of what it is, I didn't like it all (And it just felt...out of place?)

Take these suggestions to whatever you want; refuse or not, your main problem is that you need an easier difficulty. I'd like you to add one! ^^

Should the Source strictly follow the product name rather than any de-abbreviations? If that's the case, then the source should be Tales of VS.

Maybe add Namco Bandai in tags?

Still a nice map, cool collab effort you guys put. ^^ (Wow, old ztrot star)
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

*poop*

[Normal]:
01:20:59 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe this does show some sort of epic Kiai difficulty for a Normal (Like a boss part), but the changed spacing tripped me up over it. I was certainly vulnerable. xD I think it must be me half-trying. I think it is fine for normal diff since I have an easy now.

[Hard]:
01:22:55 (6,7) - Something's up with the spacing here, I believe. Fixed. I am surprised I did not notice it sooner.

[VS]:
00:40:05 (3,4,5,6) - Unless this was something about those 'accelerating' spaced deathstreams you're talking about, this might need some cleanup. Regardless of what it is, I didn't like it all (And it just felt...out of place?) I removed the accelerating deathstream from the location you stated and added one to 00:36:24 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) because it fits the music better, but I am not going to remove it entirely since it transitions from the smaller to the larger spacing.

Take these suggestions to whatever you want; refuse or not, your main problem is that you need an easier difficulty. I'd like you to add one! ^^ Added an easy.

Should the Source strictly follow the product name rather than any de-abbreviations? If that's the case, then the source should be Tales of VS.

Maybe add Namco Bandai in tags? Done

Still a nice map, cool collab effort you guys put. ^^ (Wow, old ztrot star)
0_o
Easy
00:38:85 (2) - I tend to avoid stacked notes on Easies because the hitburst obscures the approach circle, which can be tricky for newer players
00:43:20 (4) - Because the last pattern had this beat 1/2 earlier, this pattern should as well. You may want to use a similar pattern to the last one if you don't want notes that are 1/2 apart.
00:44:50 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern doesn't fit the song very well, consider revising?
01:06:68 (1) - I would avoid having notes directly after spinners like this on Easy, I usually leave them at least another white tick.

Hard
00:47:11 (1) - Remove new combo
01:13:74 (2) - This note isn't really need imo
01:27:65 (2,3) - I think it plays better without these

VS
what

*
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi

0_o wrote:

Easy
00:38:85 (2) - I tend to avoid stacked notes on Easies because the hitburst obscures the approach circle, which can be tricky for newer players I think this is fine.
00:43:20 (4) - Because the last pattern had this beat 1/2 earlier, this pattern should as well. You may want to use a similar pattern to the last one if you don't want notes that are 1/2 apart. Fixed
00:44:50 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern doesn't fit the song very well, consider revising? Done.
01:06:68 (1) - I would avoid having notes directly after spinners like this on Easy, I usually leave them at least another white tick. Removed the spinner.

Hard
00:47:11 (1) - Remove new combo This is snapped to the instruments, so no change here.
01:13:74 (2) - This note isn't really need imo Removed.
01:27:65 (2,3) - I think it plays better without these Removed only 2 since I felt 3 fit.

VS
what

*
Thanks for modding.
gdeath
[Easy]
decrease slider tick.

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
fine

[VS]
00:35:70 (6,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make the same spacing as 00:36:24 (1,2,3) (are you intentional?if so,plz ignore what i said)

nice map.
star*
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
ztrot
Better late than never? I think?
BTW just use the bg posted before

Download: GIRL NEXT DOOR - Be your wings (blissfulyoshi) [Vesperia's Pride].osu
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi
Added diff and a new mp3.
For next modder, please check if the offset is correct.
Hitoshirenu Shourai
Clouds.
LuigiHann
Why isn't the title capitalized? Should be "Be Your Wings" unless you have a good reason why it isn't
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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