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nano feat. MY FIRST STORY - SAVIOR OF SONG (TV Size)

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Skystar
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Skystar
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年12月7日 at 20:14:54

Artist: nano feat. MY FIRST STORY
Title: SAVIOR OF SONG (TV Size)
Source: 蒼き鋼のアルペジオ
Tags: Skystar Kodora opening Arpeggio of Blue Steel HakuNoKaemi Aoki Hagane no Arpeggio
BPM: 192
Filesize: 18950kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.62 stars, 82 notes)
  2. Haku's Hard (4.88 stars, 194 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 349 notes)
  4. Kodora's Hard (5 stars, 245 notes)
  5. Normal (4.46 stars, 149 notes)
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#11 ナノ feat. MY FIRST STORY - SAVIOR OF SONG


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Kodora
Kodora
nyan
Sarasa
40 posts
Joined December 2012
Sarasa
香草阿星
Kodora
Kodora
香草阿星

http://puu.sh/4RlxR.osu

done

also changed OD back, it's really not that hard with 7
P A N
2,353 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
hi Amamiya, req from kodora

I should mod the elite mapper map set again 0.0 ok here i go!

[Insane]

your map is always great amamiya D: so most of this is a nazi mod.
00:07:186 (1) - try to move to 204|212 to make this (3,1) looks similar to (1)'s tail and (2) or another word, move for create a pattern here and it still flow as the current one imo.
00:16:093 (1,1) - move both to 234|148 to make both of them stack perfectly with 00:18:125 (1)'s tail.
00:33:282 (1) - move tail 1 grid up for perfect blanket.
00:42:267 - hmm, why won't add a break here. if no i think it have about 5% of player that fail here D: if you want to add break here, add on 00:43:283 for fit the song
00:57:190 (1) - move to 61|184 for perfect stack with the previous (6)'s tail.
00:57:502 (2) - what about this pattern. It's more flow imo, and make this slider connect with 00:58:284 (1) like this.
SPOILER
01:12:660 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - try to make it more symmetry?
SPOILER

[Kodora]

00:42:658 - maybe break is better.
01:00:003 (5) - a bit left for stack perfectly.
01:24:301 (4) - maybe delete note here?
nothing much to say :P

[Normal]

00:43:283 - start break here?
01:09:535 (3) - hmm why soft here, i think auto is already fit.

[Easy]

00:43:283 - ^
01:08:910 (1,2) - unstack here, it can confuse beginner :3 and it just a one stack on this diff so I think its ok to unstack it.

nice map :3 good luck and star! maybe wait for your description post for 7 days and give me kds, i want 2 kds hehe XD
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Skystar
P A N

P A N wrote:

hi Amamiya, req from kodora

I should mod the elite mapper map set again 0.0 ok here i go!

[Insane]

your map is always great amamiya D: so most of this is a nazi mod.
00:07:186 (1) - try to move to 204|212 to make this (3,1) looks similar to (1)'s tail and (2) or another word, move for create a pattern here and it still flow as the current one imo. o
00:16:093 (1,1) - move both to 234|148 to make both of them stack perfectly with 00:18:125 (1)'s tail. oo i didnt even notice that haha
00:33:282 (1) - move tail 1 grid up for perfect blanket. o
00:42:267 - hmm, why won't add a break here. if no i think it have about 5% of player that fail here D: if you want to add break here, add on 00:43:283 for fit the song no, break time is something used for letting player know "oops here's a break time you can rest freely huehue", and here's apparently not suitable to add it.
00:57:190 (1) - move to 61|184 for perfect stack with the previous (6)'s tail. o
00:57:502 (2) - what about this pattern. It's more flow imo, and make this slider connect with 00:58:284 (1) like this. hm no
SPOILER
01:12:660 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - try to make it more symmetry? no
SPOILER

[Normal]

00:43:283 - start break here? as insane
01:09:535 (3) - hmm why soft here, i think auto is already fit. because yuko sucks

[Easy]

00:43:283 - ^
01:08:910 (1,2) - unstack here, it can confuse beginner :3 and it just a one stack on this diff so I think its ok to unstack it. o

nice map :3 good luck and star! maybe wait for your description post for 7 days and give me kds, i want 2 kds hehe XD
HabiHolic
5,408 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
Easy Normal diff unicode check there
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Skystar

HabiHolic wrote:

Easy Normal diff unicode check there
fixed o_o
Natsuki Nanaka
460 posts
Joined August 2011
Natsuki Nanaka
Hi Yuko :3
Req form Kodora : P
very small mod I cant mod it xD

[Easy]
00:51:408 (4) - nc
01:19:848 (2) - remove whistle tail slide
01:21:723 (1) - add whistle tail slide

[Normal]
Looks nice

[Kodorasan]
suggest hitsound mod :3

00:42:003 (3,4) - Ctrl+G
00:55:471 (3) - try to add whistle on head slide
00:56:721 (2) - add whistle here
00:56:877 (3) - remove whistle head slide and add whistle on tail slide
00:59:534 (4,5) - overlap slide
01:05:472 (3) - add whistle head slide
01:21:567 (1,2) - add whistle head slide
01:26:255 (4) - move right 1 grid

[Insane]
Awesome how I can mod it D:

Nice map :3
Star~
Last edited by Natsuki Nanaka , edited 1 time in total.
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
HI~ Amamiya Yuko owo Kodora baka ask me to mod this so here we go

General:
  • Combo colour 1 and 3 are almost the same what about to make the 3 one a little more dark? just to notice them are differents

Insane:
  1. 00:00:780 Maybe you forget to add a whistle here? sound really nice :3
  2. 01:21:254 (1,2) - stack them perfect really nazi but look bad in game
  3. 00:11:562 can you move this two grids to the right so the pattern is more consistent with 00:11:093 (1,2,3) - also if you play it is more natural imo
  4. 00:08:905 (2,3,1) - use the same distance here? I feel kinda awkward when i play this in the current way
  5. 00:29:375 sound better for me If you remove the whistle here it dont sound nice there imo
  6. turn off grid snap and stack this 00:32:032 (1) - with 00:32:970 (3) - perfect x-x
  7. 00:33:282 you forget to add Finish here it empathize with the music really nice
  8. 00:45:939 (2,1) - another nazi stack this perfect
  9. 01:01:096 can you move this a little? is touching the hp bar check it:
    SPOILER
  10. 01:05:472 (2,1) - uh I know is your style but this is almost unreadable in first place first to all what is the tail and waht is the head? also take in consideration the head of the slider is almost hidden by previous 01:05:159 (1) - i will like if you redo this pattern
  11. 01:26:255 add finish here sound really nice to end the song try it

Kodora moe Hard:
  1. the jump from normal to hard in the spread is kinda hard i preffer if you use OD 6 here
  2. 00:00:780 why you dont add a circle here? and start like the other diff for concistency also is where the player expect to start playing
  3. 00:12:812 (2) - add clap in the tail owo
  4. 01:26:255 remove clap and add finish? sound better for me
  5. 00:10:155 (1) - what about to add claps on the reapeats like insane diff have? or atleast add it on the first point so the player can have a good feedback from the hit
  6. 00:17:343 really nazi but what about move this one to x:288 y:108 look better stacked in the slider body
  7. 00:22:969 you maybe forget to add whistle here?
  8. 00:40:783 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - no hitsounds? buu add some claps here to empathize the music sound really nice
  9. 00:42:658 (1) - just for consistency why not remove the spinner and let this part with nothing?
  10. 00:57:659 (6,1) - swap NC for consistency with your stanzas pattern?
  11. 01:01:409 (9,1) - same as above is better readable imo
  12. 01:24:067 (1,2,3,4) - I told you when you ask me for test play im not a fan of this stream is the only you use in all the diff and take players off guard I preffer a repeat slider but both are fine

Normal:
  1. 00:19:843 (5) - move to x:462 y:39 to fix a little the distance
  2. 00:33:282 same as insane
  3. 00:57:346 (3,4) - move both of them to x:390 y:356 im begin to much nazi with the distance maybe?
  4. 01:16:254 (1) - x:218 y:36 same distance problem im really nazi ahahahha owo
  5. 01:26:255 same as insane

Easy:
  1. 00:33:282 same as insane
  2. 01:26:255 same as insane

GL Amamiya Yuko hope this help you and take a star or Kodora will bite me :c
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Sekai
so here's my mod, Kodora asked me to mod it =w=/


Easy:
Since it's a high bpm it'll be nice if you make AR -1 it'll fit this diff better imo~
  1. 00:33:282 (1) - I don't think you need a nc here so it'll be better if you'll remove it
  2. 00:55:471 (3) - move this slider one grid up so it'll make stuck under 00:52:971 (7) -
  3. 00:59:846 (2) - move this up and right one grid with the same reason above

Normal:
  1. 00:15:468 (6,1) - I don't think it'll be nice if you'll make a stuck like this in normal with high bpm song, so i suggest you to remove this stuck~
  2. 00:28:282 (1,2) - switch the nc because the vocal started on the 2 not in the 1
  3. 00:41:720 (2) - this reverse would be better the other way like this
    SPOILER
  4. 00:47:345 (3,4) - same reason as in here 00:15:468 (6,1) -
  5. 00:48:595 (6,1) - ^
  6. 00:48:595 (6,1) - ^
  7. 00:58:596 (6,1) - ^
  8. 01:11:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - randomly added so many notes in this map, i suggest you to remove some and add 1/1 short sliders instead of those notes
  9. 01:21:098 (6,1) - Another stucks....

Kodora's Hard:
HP +1 would do good imo, since you have AR8 and OD7...
  1. 00:03:592 (1) - remove this nc, i don't think it's needed here anyways...so yeah i suggest you to remove it
  2. 00:13:749 (2) - move this few grids up, so it'll stuck under 00:11:874 (6) -
  3. 00:14:999 (2) - I don't suggest you to do this in hard since, it'll make the diff more hard and more harder to read as well, maybe move this note somewhere else
  4. 00:16:249 (2) - move this few grids down and left so it'll stuck under 00:14:218 (3) -
  5. 00:17:343 (1) - wtf why is this like this....move this note above the next slider instead, i think it placed so weird imo
  6. 00:19:843 (5) - move this one grid to the left so it'll make nice blanket with 00:19:375 (4) -
  7. 00:49:221 (1,2) - those two is a bit too hard to read imo, maybe do something else with them? like this
    SPOILER
  8. 00:57:659 (6) - I think you missed a finish on slider's start so, maybe add it?
  9. 00:58:284 (2) - well..you have so many places to put this note why under the slider ;w; just move it like this instead...
    SPOILER
  10. 01:08:128 (2) - baka Kodora ;w;

Insane:
Good diff I found nothing on it o.ob Good job Yuko www


That's all i found here, Good luck with ranking it Kodora and Yuko <3
-Neipezi
2,266 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
hi~ i got a request to kodora :D

[General]
Video seems to be a little startling.(a new encoding.) Download


[Easy]
00:42:658 - ~ 00:45:783 - spinner add?

[Normal]
00:10:155 - circle add?
00:42:658 - ~ 00:45:783 - easy and the same
01:12:660 (5) - NC add?

[Kodora's Hard]
00:10:624 (2) - NC add?
00:23:281 (2) - ^
00:32:657 - clap add (drum sound)
00:32:813 - finish add
00:32:970 - ^
00:57:502 (5,6) - change interval https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1044606
01:02:972 - whistle add
01:05:472 - ^
01:20:004 (4) - NC add?
01:20:395 - circle add?
01:24:301 (4) - circle remove

[Insane]
00:29:532 (1) - remove the red point
00:30:001 - circle add?
00:42:658 - ~ 00:45:783 - easy and the same
very hard.. :o

good lucky xDDD
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,961 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Just checked out the timing for this real quick. I think it's close, but I think just using 1 timing section: BPM: 191.99 Offset: 780 would be closer. It's up to you though if you wanna use it.

:D
Slow-ru
3,275 posts
Joined August 2012
Slow-ru
Everyone has requests from Kodora I - not the exception - you should be grateful to him ;D

Easy:

Ok!

Normal:

00:41:720 (2,1) - maybe "Break" between them?

Kodora's Hard:

Мне кажется, что здесь слишком много оверлапа, как, например, 00:16:875 (4,1) / 00:57:659 (6,1,2), что, вкупе с всего лишь двумя цветами, усложняет задачу. Может, сделаешь его чуть проще?

Insane:

00:42:188 (4,1) - maybe, "break", or spinner?

Nothing to mod here, lol
Good job.
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Skystar

Doomsday wrote:

Just checked out the timing for this real quick. I think it's close, but I think just using 1 timing section: BPM: 191.99 Offset: 780 would be closer. It's up to you though if you wanna use it.

:D
that 2 timing sections are used for changing the downbeat, it would be wrong if i removed them. also nothing will be different even if i remove them. o.o

will reply to mods soon, sorry for being delaying. ;;
Kodora
Kodora
P A N
[Kodora]

00:42:658 - maybe break is better. Nope, i prefer spinner. I don't like "drain sections"
01:00:003 (5) - a bit left for stack perfectly. Fixed these
01:24:301 (4) - maybe delete note here? Nope, sorry
nothing much to say :P

- N a n a k a -
Looks nice

[Kodorasan]
suggest hitsound mod :3

00:42:003 (3,4) - Ctrl+G Done
00:55:471 (3) - try to add whistle on head slide Yes, i forgot, fixed
00:56:721 (2) - add whistle here Fixed
00:56:877 (3) - remove whistle head slide and add whistle on tail slide Agree, done
00:59:534 (4,5) - overlap slide Fixed
01:05:472 (3) - add whistle head slide Done
01:21:567 (1,2) - add whistle head slide orz why they disappear done
01:26:255 (4) - move right 1 grid Done

Natsu
Kodora moe Hard:
  1. the jump from normal to hard in the spread is kinda hard i preffer if you use OD 6 here OD 6 will make huge score gap between Insane & Hard in this case + i really dislike low OD
  2. 00:00:780 why you dont add a circle here? and start like the other diff for concistency also is where the player expect to start playing because i'm following vocals here but not the guitar
  3. 00:12:812 (2) - add clap in the tail owo oops fixed
  4. 01:26:255 remove clap and add finish? sound better for me not fits as for me :V
  5. 00:10:155 (1) - what about to add claps on the reapeats like insane diff have? or atleast add it on the first point so the player can have a good feedback from the hit they are disappear for unknown reason D: fixed
  6. 00:17:343 really nazi but what about move this one to x:288 y:108 look better stacked in the slider body good nazi, fixed
  7. 00:22:969 you maybe forget to add whistle here? sure
  8. 00:40:783 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - no hitsounds? buu add some claps here to empathize the music sound really nice okay
  9. 00:42:658 (1) - just for consistency why not remove the spinner and let this part with nothing? because i don't like any kind of drain sections + this part is really perfectly mapable
  10. 00:57:659 (6,1) - swap NC for consistency with your stanzas pattern? nope, also this done to make next circles more unreadable
  11. 01:01:409 (9,1) - same as above is better readable imo nope, NC follow vocals
  12. 01:24:067 (1,2,3,4) - I told you when you ask me for test play im not a fan of this stream is the only you use in all the diff and take players off guard I preffer a repeat slider but both are fine repeat will looks repetitive + i want to make ending harder than the rest of map + 4 notes are not considered stream - they are easy, really

Sekai-nyan
Kodora's Hard:
HP +1 would do good imo, since you have AR8 and OD7... Keeping 5 because insane have 6
  1. 00:03:592 (1) - remove this nc, i don't think it's needed here anyways...so yeah i suggest you to remove it done
  2. 00:13:749 (2) - move this few grids up, so it'll stuck under 00:11:874 (6) - Done
  3. 00:14:999 (2) - I don't suggest you to do this in hard since, it'll make the diff more hard and more harder to read as well, maybe move this note somewhere else It's clearly readable nomod due to approachcircle being visible
  4. 00:16:249 (2) - move this few grids down and left so it'll stuck under 00:14:218 (3) - not nesessary
  5. 00:17:343 (1) - wtf why is this like this....move this note above the next slider instead, i think it placed so weird imo Check DS, it placed absolutely correctly
  6. 00:19:843 (5) - move this one grid to the left so it'll make nice blanket with 00:19:375 (4) - Fixed
  7. 00:49:221 (1,2) - those two is a bit too hard to read imo, maybe do something else with them? like this That's trick, wanna keep it, sorry.
    SPOILER
  8. 00:57:659 (6) - I think you missed a finish on slider's start so, maybe add it? Nope
  9. 00:58:284 (2) - well..you have so many places to put this note why under the slider ;w; just move it like this instead... Re-arranged to make it easier to read, but in other way
    SPOILER
  10. 01:08:128 (2) - baka Kodora ;w; baka janai

-Kirito
[Kodora's Hard]
00:10:624 (2) - NC add? No
00:23:281 (2) - ^ No
00:32:657 - clap add (drum sound) No, i also don't like drum samples tbh
00:32:813 - finish add No
00:32:970 - ^ No
00:57:502 (5,6) - change interval https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1044606 No
01:02:972 - whistle add Yes
01:05:472 - ^ Yes
01:20:004 (4) - NC add? No
01:20:395 - circle add? No
01:24:301 (4) - circle remove No


Slow-ru
Kodora's Hard:

Мне кажется, что здесь слишком много оверлапа, как, например, 00:16:875 (4,1) / 00:57:659 (6,1,2), что, вкупе с всего лишь двумя цветами, усложняет задачу. Может, сделаешь его чуть проще? Оверлапы читаемы ноумод, этого достаточно. Хм, а вот про цвета я Юко скажу, действительно можно бы разнообразнее.


Thanks for mods everyone!

diff -> http://puu.sh/4Vco2.osu
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Skystar
- N a n a k a -

- N a n a k a - wrote:

Hi Yuko :3
Req form Kodora : P
very small mod I cant mod it xD

[Easy]
00:51:408 (4) - nc
01:19:848 (2) - remove whistle tail slide
01:21:723 (1) - add whistle tail slide above all fixed

[Normal]
Looks nice

[Kodorasan]
suggest hitsound mod :3

00:42:003 (3,4) - Ctrl+G
00:55:471 (3) - try to add whistle on head slide
00:56:721 (2) - add whistle here
00:56:877 (3) - remove whistle head slide and add whistle on tail slide
00:59:534 (4,5) - overlap slide
01:05:472 (3) - add whistle head slide
01:21:567 (1,2) - add whistle head slide
01:26:255 (4) - move right 1 grid

[Insane]
Awesome how I can mod it D:

Nice map :3
Star~
Natsu

Natsu wrote:

HI~ Amamiya Yuko owo Kodora baka ask me to mod this so here we go

General:
  • Combo colour 1 and 3 are almost the same what about to make the 3 one a little more dark? just to notice them are differents

Insane:
  1. 00:00:780 Maybe you forget to add a whistle here? sound really nice :3 nope :3
  2. 01:21:254 (1,2) - stack them perfect really nazi but look bad in game
  3. 00:11:562 can you move this two grids to the right so the pattern is more consistent with 00:11:093 (1,2,3) - also if you play it is more natural imo
  4. 00:08:905 (2,3,1) - use the same distance here? I feel kinda awkward when i play this in the current way yay i guess it's fine to change spacing
  5. 00:29:375 sound better for me If you remove the whistle here it dont sound nice there imo
  6. turn off grid snap and stack this 00:32:032 (1) - with 00:32:970 (3) - perfect x-x
  7. 00:33:282 you forget to add Finish here it empathize with the music really nice
  8. 00:45:939 (2,1) - another nazi stack this perfect
  9. 01:01:096 can you move this a little? is touching the hp bar check it:
    SPOILER
  10. 01:05:472 (2,1) - uh I know is your style but this is almost unreadable in first place first to all what is the tail and waht is the head? also take in consideration the head of the slider is almost hidden by previous 01:05:159 (1) - i will like if you redo this pattern O_o that's not unreadable
  11. 01:26:255 add finish here sound really nice to end the song try it i didnt add finish due to the song ends so fast here, so a finish may be weird

Kodora moe Hard:
  1. the jump from normal to hard in the spread is kinda hard i preffer if you use OD 6 here
  2. 00:00:780 why you dont add a circle here? and start like the other diff for concistency also is where the player expect to start playing
  3. 00:12:812 (2) - add clap in the tail owo
  4. 01:26:255 remove clap and add finish? sound better for me
  5. 00:10:155 (1) - what about to add claps on the reapeats like insane diff have? or atleast add it on the first point so the player can have a good feedback from the hit
  6. 00:17:343 really nazi but what about move this one to x:288 y:108 look better stacked in the slider body
  7. 00:22:969 you maybe forget to add whistle here?
  8. 00:40:783 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - no hitsounds? buu add some claps here to empathize the music sound really nice
  9. 00:42:658 (1) - just for consistency why not remove the spinner and let this part with nothing?
  10. 00:57:659 (6,1) - swap NC for consistency with your stanzas pattern?
  11. 01:01:409 (9,1) - same as above is better readable imo
  12. 01:24:067 (1,2,3,4) - I told you when you ask me for test play im not a fan of this stream is the only you use in all the diff and take players off guard I preffer a repeat slider but both are fine

Normal:
  1. 00:19:843 (5) - move to x:462 y:39 to fix a little the distance
  2. 00:33:282 same as insane
  3. 00:57:346 (3,4) - move both of them to x:390 y:356 im begin to much nazi with the distance maybe?
  4. 01:16:254 (1) - x:218 y:36 same distance problem im really nazi ahahahha owo
  5. 01:26:255 same as insane same

Easy:
  1. 00:33:282 same as insane
  2. 01:26:255 same as insane same

GL Amamiya Yuko hope this help you and take a star or Kodora will bite me :c
Sekai-nyan

Sekai-nyan wrote:

so here's my mod, Kodora asked me to mod it =w=/


Easy:
Since it's a high bpm it'll be nice if you make AR -1 it'll fit this diff better imo~
  1. 00:33:282 (1) - I don't think you need a nc here so it'll be better if you'll remove it ah? NC for a new part in the music o_o
  2. 00:55:471 (3) - move this slider one grid up so it'll make stuck under 00:52:971 (7) -
  3. 00:59:846 (2) - move this up and right one grid with the same reason above

Normal:
  1. 00:15:468 (6,1) - I don't think it'll be nice if you'll make a stuck like this in normal with high bpm song, so i suggest you to remove this stuck~ i think it's fine since it's normal diff not easy (dont slap me >.>
  2. 00:28:282 (1,2) - switch the nc because the vocal started on the 2 not in the 1
  3. 00:41:720 (2) - this reverse would be better the other way like this
    SPOILER
  4. 00:47:345 (3,4) - same reason as in here 00:15:468 (6,1) - same
  5. 00:48:595 (6,1) - ^
  6. 00:48:595 (6,1) - ^
  7. 00:58:596 (6,1) - ^
  8. 01:11:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - randomly added so many notes in this map, i suggest you to remove some and add 1/1 short sliders instead of those notes
  9. 01:21:098 (6,1) - Another stucks....

Kodora's Hard:
HP +1 would do good imo, since you have AR8 and OD7...
  1. 00:03:592 (1) - remove this nc, i don't think it's needed here anyways...so yeah i suggest you to remove it
  2. 00:13:749 (2) - move this few grids up, so it'll stuck under 00:11:874 (6) -
  3. 00:14:999 (2) - I don't suggest you to do this in hard since, it'll make the diff more hard and more harder to read as well, maybe move this note somewhere else
  4. 00:16:249 (2) - move this few grids down and left so it'll stuck under 00:14:218 (3) -
  5. 00:17:343 (1) - wtf why is this like this....move this note above the next slider instead, i think it placed so weird imo
  6. 00:19:843 (5) - move this one grid to the left so it'll make nice blanket with 00:19:375 (4) -
  7. 00:49:221 (1,2) - those two is a bit too hard to read imo, maybe do something else with them? like this
    SPOILER
  8. 00:57:659 (6) - I think you missed a finish on slider's start so, maybe add it?
  9. 00:58:284 (2) - well..you have so many places to put this note why under the slider ;w; just move it like this instead...
    SPOILER
  10. 01:08:128 (2) - baka Kodora ;w;

Insane:
Good diff I found nothing on it o.ob Good job Yuko www


That's all i found here, Good luck with ranking it Kodora and Yuko <3
-Kirito

-Kirito wrote:

hi~ i got a request to kodora :D

[General]
Video seems to be a little startling.(a new encoding.) Download


[Easy]
00:42:658 - ~ 00:45:783 - spinner add? nope

[Normal]
00:10:155 - circle add?
00:42:658 - ~ 00:45:783 - easy and the same
01:12:660 (5) - NC add? pattern changed

[Kodora's Hard]
00:10:624 (2) - NC add?
00:23:281 (2) - ^
00:32:657 - clap add (drum sound)
00:32:813 - finish add
00:32:970 - ^
00:57:502 (5,6) - change interval https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1044606
01:02:972 - whistle add
01:05:472 - ^
01:20:004 (4) - NC add?
01:20:395 - circle add?
01:24:301 (4) - circle remove

[Insane]
00:29:532 (1) - remove the red point
00:30:001 - circle add?
00:42:658 - ~ 00:45:783 - easy and the same sorry no change in this diff
very hard.. :o

good lucky xDDD
Slow-ru

Slow-ru wrote:

Everyone has requests from Kodora I - not the exception - you should be grateful to him ;D

Easy:

Ok!

Normal:

00:41:720 (2,1) - maybe "Break" between them? nope

Kodora's Hard:

Мне кажется, что здесь слишком много оверлапа, как, например, 00:16:875 (4,1) / 00:57:659 (6,1,2), что, вкупе с всего лишь двумя цветами, усложняет задачу. Может, сделаешь его чуть проще?

Insane:

00:42:188 (4,1) - maybe, "break", or spinner? nope

Nothing to mod here, lol
Good job.
everything i didnt reply to = fixed
Amamiya Yuko married to Kodora >///<
kaskaskas
5 posts
Joined March 2012
kaskaskas
good song
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
as your request

[General]
我觉得combo color可以在区别明显点

[Easy]
01:08:910 (1,2) - 要么一条直线要么岔开点，好看点

[Normal]
00:15:624 (1,2,3) - 可以摆直点
00:40:783 (1,2) - 像这种我建议每个换成2个1/2slider，折返太多新人可能难读
00:50:627 - 这个whistle感觉不太合曲

[Kodora's Hard]
HD is too low, +1 at least please
00:06:405 (3) - its shape can be better.. maybe need to replace the nod which is at x:344 y:296
00:52:502 (2,3) - slider first and circle later? rhythm can be better imo
00:57:502 (5,6) - ^

这vocal听着想死
Kodora
Kodora
Thank you wcx, all fixed + changed last stream because i keep missing here with dt lol

SPOILER
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TitleUnicode:SAVIOR OF SONG (TV Size)
Artist:nano feat. MY FIRST STORY
ArtistUnicode:ナノ feat. MY FIRST STORY
Creator:Amamiya Yuko
Version:Kodora's Hard
Source:蒼き鋼のアルペジオ
Tags:Skystar Kodora opening Arpeggio of Blue Steel
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213,181,53283,2,0,B|249:185|301:157|301:157|389:189,1,172,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,271,53752,5,0,0:0:0:0:
357,350,53908,2,0,L|261:318,1,86,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,54221,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,272,54377,2,0,P|104:320|72:376,1,86,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,208,54690,2,0,P|64:160|96:104,1,86,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,198,55002,6,0,P|221:198|293:158,1,107.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,50,55315,1,0,0:0:0:0:
358,87,55471,2,0,L|462:111,1,107.5,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,240,55784,2,0,L|480:288,5,53.75,8|8|8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,304,56252,6,0,L|407:311|359:343|287:335,1,172,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,56721,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,288,56877,2,0,L|112:336,1,86,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
19,278,57190,2,0,L|96:240,1,86,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,190,57502,2,0,P|218:118|178:27,1,172,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,108,57971,5,8,0:0:0:0:
216,126,58127,2,0,P|256:120|320:88,1,86,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,128,58440,2,0,P|405:171|440:216,1,86,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,295,58753,6,0,B|368:336|368:336|312:288|240:320,1,172,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,352,59221,1,8,0:0:0:0:
122,272,59378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,59534,2,0,P|180:117|104:48,1,172,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,120,60003,2,0,L|229:136|309:128|381:144,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
437,194,60471,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,296,60628,2,0,L|415:287|335:295|287:279,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,280,61096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,120,61409,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,120,61721,5,10,0:0:0:0:
272,144,61878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,64,62034,2,0,B|384:112|360:192|360:192|408:232,1,172,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,280,62503,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,344,62659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,272,62815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,344,62972,2,0,L|224:320|160:304,1,86,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,344,63284,2,0,B|224:320|224:320|152:368|80:280,1,172,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,216,63753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,168,63909,6,0,P|152:127|144:72,1,86,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,32,64222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,80,64378,2,0,L|400:64,1,86,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,145,64690,2,0,L|407:159,1,86,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,272,65003,6,0,L|368:296|256:320,1,107.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,360,65316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,304,65472,2,0,L|48:176,1,107.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,120,65784,6,0,P|112:96|120:48,7,53.75,8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,48,66409,6,0,P|206:48|248:40,1,86,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,8,66722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,88,66878,2,0,B|432:152|392:208|392:208|416:272,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,336,67347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,304,67503,2,0,B|256:264|256:264|176:248|128:328,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,355,67972,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,266,68128,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,184,68285,2,0,P|248:176|168:200,1,86,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,112,68597,2,0,P|315:93|231:96,1,86,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,68910,5,4,0:0:0:0:
96,144,69066,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,48,69222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,96,69378,2,0,P|176:192|80:232,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
67,311,69847,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,328,70003,6,0,B|232:296|280:336|280:336|344:320,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,360,70472,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,280,70628,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,240,70785,2,0,L|368:200|384:128,1,86,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,35,71097,2,0,L|473:75|464:120,1,86,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,156,71410,5,12,0:0:0:0:
214,61,71722,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,240,72035,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,208,72347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,240,72660,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,360,72972,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,176,73285,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,40,73597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,216,73910,6,0,P|272:264|224:320,1,86,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,240,74222,2,0,P|155:279|88:308,1,86,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,184,74535,6,0,P|5:141|26:104,1,86,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,159,74848,2,0,P|118:123|154:99,1,86,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,168,75160,6,0,P|240:144|288:128,1,86,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,168,75473,2,0,P|360:194|320:208,1,86,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,288,75785,6,0,L|304:344,5,43,8|8|8|8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,352,76254,6,0,L|224:368|88:336,1,172,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,338,76723,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,256,76879,2,0,L|16:216|40:152,1,86,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,55,77191,2,0,L|143:95|128:136,1,86,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,224,77504,2,0,B|224:272|288:240|288:240|320:280,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,336,77973,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,248,78129,2,0,L|424:200|456:160,1,86,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,42,78442,2,0,L|391:90|368:120,1,86,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,120,78754,1,4,0:0:0:0:
176,112,79067,6,0,L|208:80,2,43,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,120,79379,2,0,B|88:192|152:208|152:208|136:288,1,172,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,336,79848,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,344,80004,2,0,L|248:352|304:320|368:320,1,172,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,288,80473,2,0,P|447:248|443:206,1,86,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,86,80785,2,0,P|355:125|360:168,1,86,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,264,81098,2,0,L|304:288|256:288,1,86,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,81567,6,0,L|96:208,2,43,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,112,81879,2,0,B|280:144|336:96|336:96|376:120,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,208,82348,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,168,82504,2,0,P|488:240|456:344,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,360,82973,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,320,83129,2,0,B|240:304|240:304|208:368|120:360,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,264,83598,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,248,83754,2,0,P|80:200|112:176,1,86,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,88,84067,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,88,84145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,88,84223,1,8,0:0:0:0:
263,150,84380,2,0,P|351:158|407:70,1,172,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,8,84848,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,72,85005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,168,85161,6,0,P|344:216|376:256,1,86,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,368,85473,2,0,P|298:325|275:289,1,86,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,232,85786,5,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,85942,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,224,86098,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,137,86255,1,8,0:0:0:0:
Skystar
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Skystar
wcx

wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request

[General]
我觉得combo color可以在区别明显点 還好啦0.0

[Easy]
01:08:910 (1,2) - 要么一条直线要么岔开点，好看点

[Normal]
00:15:624 (1,2,3) - 可以摆直点
00:40:783 (1,2) - 像这种我建议每个换成2个1/2slider，折返太多新人可能难读
00:50:627 - 这个whistle感觉不太合曲 刪完聽了聽感覺有點怪, 還是保留

[Kodora's Hard]
HD is too low, +1 at least please
00:06:405 (3) - its shape can be better.. maybe need to replace the nod which is at x:344 y:296
00:52:502 (2,3) - slider first and circle later? rhythm can be better imo
00:57:502 (5,6) - ^

这vocal听着想死
wcx19911123
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bubbled
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go go!
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stop stalking me
Nazalion
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go go ...
cant wait this map ranked .
_dog
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_dog
Don't randomly PM expecting me to love your map.
15:02 *Kodora is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/313821 nano feat. MY FIRST STORY - SAVIOR OF SONG (TV Size)]
15:02 Kodora: thanks!
15:03 TheGrimOfCrazy: ?
15:03 Kodora: i spec
15:03 TheGrimOfCrazy: what?
15:03 Kodora: em.. lol
15:03 TheGrimOfCrazy: i'll play it i guess
15:03 Kodora: nice o.o
15:03 TheGrimOfCrazy: i said found one because i was buying a usb hub
15:03 Kodora: i spec
15:04 Kodora: ah lol
15:04 Kodora: i was sure you agree for testplay
15:04 Kodora: ww
15:04 TheGrimOfCrazy: however i hate skystar maps so i'll just be playing your hard
15:04 Kodora: you probably will hate me too since our mapsets are very similiar
15:05 TheGrimOfCrazy: no they aren't
15:05 Kodora: i mean mine & Yuko's
15:07 TheGrimOfCrazy: map could have been good if it weren't for the awkward overlaps fix them and it will be a very fun hard
15:07 TheGrimOfCrazy: circle under sliders aren't acceptable
15:08 TheGrimOfCrazy: especially in a hard where theres not even a space between the note
15:08 Kodora: that's something what not going to be changed because it was mapped with all those overlaps in mind :I
15:08 TheGrimOfCrazy: no it has to be changed
15:08 TheGrimOfCrazy: it's unrankable anyways
15:08 Kodora: it's sightreadable
15:08 TheGrimOfCrazy: no
15:08 Kodora: no it's not
15:08 Kodora: it's not unrankable
15:08 TheGrimOfCrazy: some overlaps are fine
15:08 TheGrimOfCrazy: half of them are horrible
15:08 TheGrimOfCrazy: overlaps are fine if you do them well
15:09 Kodora: link bad ones please?
15:09 TheGrimOfCrazy: most of these were placed badly
15:09 TheGrimOfCrazy: and didnt even fit
15:09 TheGrimOfCrazy: also for a hard it's silly
15:09 TheGrimOfCrazy: 00:02:498 (6,1) - this is silly
15:09 TheGrimOfCrazy: and should be changed
15:10 Kodora: this is clearly readable due to approach circle being visible
15:10 TheGrimOfCrazy: for this 00:07:030 (5,1) -
15:10 Kodora: it's just impossible to miss here
15:10 TheGrimOfCrazy: do this http://grab.by/rI54
15:10 TheGrimOfCrazy: i dont care if it can be played
15:10 TheGrimOfCrazy: it doesnt play well
15:11 Kodora: i hate stacks tbh :< they are ugly
15:11 TheGrimOfCrazy: mappers need to understand that playable and rankable =/= good
15:11 Kodora: i mean manual stacks
15:11 TheGrimOfCrazy: ok then nuke the whole overlap all together
15:12 TheGrimOfCrazy: 00:17:343 (1) - wtf are you thinking
15:12 TheGrimOfCrazy: you do know theres slider types right
15:12 TheGrimOfCrazy: and not everyone uses transparent
15:12 TheGrimOfCrazy: that circle is unrankable
15:13 TheGrimOfCrazy: 00:49:377 (2) - innapropriate for a hard make it visible from the start
15:13 Kodora: that's not unrankable, i just do not want let everyone fc it with hd in one try. it's perfectly visible nomod, so it's fine
15:13 TheGrimOfCrazy: no it isnt
15:13 TheGrimOfCrazy: it isnt visible
15:13 TheGrimOfCrazy: because if you didnt know osu has 3 slider types
15:13 Kodora: you played it and not missed
15:13 Kodora: how?
15:13 TheGrimOfCrazy: transparent solid and semi
15:14 TheGrimOfCrazy: thats because im on transparent
15:14 TheGrimOfCrazy: but you have to keep in mind about solid
15:14 Kodora: i also use solid
15:14 TheGrimOfCrazy: its not readable and i had to be hesitant about it
15:14 TheGrimOfCrazy: no you don't
15:14 TheGrimOfCrazy: take a picture of your skin right now
15:14 Kodora: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078637
15:14 TheGrimOfCrazy: thats transparent
15:15 Kodora: http://puu.sh/57RuJ.jpg that's how it looks for me
15:15 TheGrimOfCrazy: 00:52:033 (1) - angle this to make it visibl
15:15 Kodora: visible by approach circle
15:15 TheGrimOfCrazy: kodora
15:15 TheGrimOfCrazy: thats a transparent slidertype
15:15 TheGrimOfCrazy: that isnt solid
15:15 TheGrimOfCrazy: it doesnt work
15:15 TheGrimOfCrazy: and you should just change it
15:16 TheGrimOfCrazy: 01:00:003 (5) - again
15:16 Kodora: approach circles stay visible anyway whatever sliders i'll use
15:16 TheGrimOfCrazy: 01:03:284 (8) - innapropraite for a hard
15:16 TheGrimOfCrazy: no one reads by approach circles
15:16 Kodora: also last two are perfectly readable
15:16 Kodora: i read by approaches
15:16 TheGrimOfCrazy: alright
15:17 TheGrimOfCrazy: i dont care
15:17 TheGrimOfCrazy: go back to your map
15:17 Kodora: oki :>

This set is complete silliness.
Kodora
Kodora
Sorry, still not going to change anything.

哈哈哈哈
Nymph
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ranked.
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Good!!
Ayu
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> 15:16 Kodora: i read by approaches
> plays it with hidden
Fycho
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spboxer3 wrote:

sp3 is sad /.\
anyway,gratz~
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:cry:

gratz c:
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Gratzz!! Kodora and Skystar!!^^
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Congratz!! ;)
Azmato
Azmato
[Hard]
00:11:093 (3) , 00:18:125 (4) , 00:24:219 (4) , 00:26:719 (3) , 00:27:969 (3) ...are they stack completly?? I played Hard, I think they didn't fit D:...
If it's your style, ignore this.
Kodora
Kodora
Nymph best ninja <3

Azmato wrote:

00:11:093 (3) , 00:18:125 (4) , 00:24:219 (4) , 00:26:719 (3) , 00:27:969 (3) ...are they stack completly?? I played Hard, I think they didn't fit D:...
If it's your style, ignore this.
They stacked perfectly, but they are clearly readable.
Yes, it is part of my style.
Azmato
Azmato

Kodora wrote:

Nymph best ninja <3

Azmato wrote:

00:11:093 (3) , 00:18:125 (4) , 00:24:219 (4) , 00:26:719 (3) , 00:27:969 (3) ...are they stack completly?? I played Hard, I think they didn't fit D:...
If it's your style, ignore this.
They stacked perfectly, but they are clearly readable.
Yes, it is part of my style.

LOL ok it was my illusion. btw, Hard is too hard :o
lkx_Shore
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恭喜
Aqo
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lol ^ how can hard be too hard the whole point of "hard" is to be "hard" :D

grats fast rank Yuko x Kodora moe pair
Konei
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Hard is more of a soft Insane, jumps in KIAI are too overused in my opinion.
Also a lot of those overlaps with circles are badly done, they're bad readable and don't spread well with Normal's experience.
Also Easy SV -> 0,80 Normal SV -> 1,00 Hard SV -> 1,72 LOL.
+ Hard's SV changes to 1,20, this is really too much and not fiting in my opinion.

Gratz anyway~
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Irreversible
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Aqo wrote:

lol ^ how can hard be too hard the whole point of "hard" is to be "hard" :D
That's actually true, but I have to agree with Konei; the spread between normal and hard is rather bad, due to this really big SV jump.

Really enjoyed the insane tho, congratz!
Faust
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Ever the controversy. Grats, was waiting for some Arpeggio to be ranked.
Kodora
Kodora

Irreversible wrote:

That's actually true, but I have to agree with Konei; the spread between normal and hard is rather bad, due to this really big SV jump.
Song requires this SV. I tested it several times with different SV and i must say that slower one is just doesn't fit for me (i even asked several BATs about x1.72 SV usage - it is totally common here).
However, it is really not that fast or hard to call it Insane tho - it was FC'd very fast by average skill players and it is really not a great challenge for any advanced players.

Thanks for opinions.
Konei
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Konei

Kodora wrote:

(...) However, it is really not that fast or hard to call it Insane tho - it was FC'd very fast by average skill players (...)
That doesn't mean anything; even if you could surely say that the players who fc'd it were all average players, it still doesn't have to be for everyone. Maybe those players had a good day today? You never know.

I just stated that I think the gap from Normal to Hard is really high.
Natsu
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Gratz baka kodora and Yuko owo
those
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those
Large post incoming. Should be expected anyway. Unrank to follow.
Broccoly
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Broccoly
aw.. hey guys cheer up ;)
can't be that bad since now mappers will not be left hanging
those
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those
We've received a lot of complaints about this map (mainly Kodora's Hard) and I'm here on behalf of the BAT to temporarily unrank this mapset before a week passes, in which it will be too late to save this mapset.

One of the bigger concerns here is an issue with the spread. With the current Hard diff which is an Insane in disguise by means of difficulty naming, this leaves a rather large gap between the second and third diffs.

Furthermore, TheGrimOfCrazy's mod was not addressed, but rather shoved off, and the ranking BAT perhaps missed this. It is clearly unjustified due to this single line:
15:08 Kodora: that's something what not going to be changed because it was mapped with all those overlaps in mind :I
For future reference, it's important to state why your way is better than any suggestions given (if any).

The last part of this address comes with all significant problems in the map that led to this unrank.

[General]
  1. http://puu.sh/58ZVm.png Colours much too similar.
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:030 (5,1) - First slider body completely overlaps with second.
  2. 00:14:999 (2,3,4) - (2) is completely hidden under slider body, and (2,3,4) presents itself with a strange rhythm. 00:15:624 - needs to be played, and thus you cannot play 00:15:468 (4) - as a slider.
  3. 00:17:343 (1) - Circle completely hidden under slider body in the time span of 1/2.
  4. 00:52:033 (1) -
  5. 00:58:127 (2) -
  6. 01:00:003 (5) - These three are absolutely inappropriate and can be played/read much better in a different position.
  7. 01:02:972 (7,8) - Much of (8) is hidden under (7).
  8. 01:08:128 (2) - Circle completely hidden under slider body.
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:780 (1,2,3,4,1) - Very erratic spacing. Can be much improved to serve as a better intro section.
  2. 00:58:753 (3,4) - It makes zero sense for you not to do like 00:48:752 (1) - .
  3. 01:19:223 (1) - Unnecessary overlapping, counter intuitive. Try 155:100.
  4. 00:14:062 (1,1,1) - New combo spamming is largely unnecessary across the entire map. You don't want or need a new combo just because you're changing slider velocity.
I'm not calling any of these \unreadable\ since you have all sorts of creative excuses to divert from that, but rather, I'm asking you to find better object placement for each of the highlighted sections. Of course, if you need any help, I'm sure many of us are more than willing to help you improve this map.
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