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star+1

star=.=/

star star you himydanny!

i LOVE it

nice map

himy <3

~Star.

[Rhapsody]
00:54:46 (7) - I don't really like this, but then again, that's me xD
02:02:59 (10) - Is this supposed to have different spacing from 02:02:16 (8,9)?
Fly away~~
03:14:15 (1,2) - Why change the distance?

Pretty much that. Nothing else I noticed playing through the map and watching auto.
Star~~

thanks CXu! i have fixed them with your suggestions

but i like those places which variational spacing r used XDD

himy <

v2b wrote:

:x

懒得你- -...一个字都不写..

Butterfly

00:59:82 (1) - I'd be easier to read if this one wasn't a new combo, and if 01:00:46 (4) was a new combo.

Is 02:00:02 (3)'s slider meant to be that way? I had problems with that one, maybe if the (how is it called? meh...) red suqare in the slider was at the middle and not near the end...

Rhapsody

00:48:89 (1) is a little too far from 00:48:03 (7)'s slider end. I personally had trouble reading that, it does not look bad (it may just be me), I'm just pointing that out...
01:02:60 (1) is like the one above, but that one was easier for me to read, no idea why...
01:37:31 (4) Could not understand that one...

Sorry, I'm kinda new to modding, but I'm trying to do my best :3, hope I did not do any stupid suggestions :3

I'm loving this song, btw. So, Star

it seems u r not kinda new for modding! those suggestions helped me a lot, thanks!

kud for u!

seems BPM @ 140.00 is enough. resnap all notes and reinsert breaktime if you take my timing.
also set the preview timie @ 01:12:35 using "timing-> set current position as preview".
add tag "konan-yoshi999" coz he is the collab mapper for your map

some jumps in Rhapsody are little confused, but fine, i think i should not point them out.

stard for good jobs

abalee wrote:

seems BPM @ 140.00 is enough. resnap all notes and reinsert breaktime if you take my timing.
also set the preview timie @ 01:12:35 using "timing-> set current position as preview".
add tag "konan-yoshi999" coz he is the collab mapper for your map(*)

some jumps in Rhapsody are little confused, but fine, i think i should not point them out.

stard for good jobs

*the diff "butterfly" is made by myself. i can't really accept konan-yoshi999's style, i just used the name "butterfly" and mapped it myself. i have to say sorry to konan-yoshi999 here , thanks for your support anyway, wish we can have a coopration next time!

fixed timing and preview position, thanks aba

❤

As u wish❤

顶~

Star...

Dandelion:
02:09:45 (6) - finish sound?
Butterfly:
01:36:45 (1) - end here 01:40:314 ?
Rhapsody:
03:03:01 (1,2,3) - 间距有点乱，感觉会很容易让别人以为是三个连拍
其他都很好，貌似中间有些一闪而过的KIAI多了一些（个人意见）
Awesome map , star

[Dandelion]
00:44:07 - 这么低的HP DRAIN还要什么break？好吧。去不去掉你看着办。反正都无所谓。
00:57:24 (6) - 那个打结部分不太好看，重新弄好看点？(suggestion)
01:07:64 - 我不明白你在break这里连设四条绿线有什么用？
02:17:91 - spinner中的两条绿线不知你用意何在？
02:22:52 - 你弄了两个break了。去掉一个。话说你是怎么加两个break上去的。我还不会呢。囧
02:47:16 吧spinner后的几个绿线给删了。没用。

[Butterfly]
00:42:89 (3) 和 00:42:03 (1) 保持平衡
02:22:30 和上面的一样。break重复问题。
还有这难度也和上面的一样。绿线问题。之后一个难度这两个问题我就不提了。

[Rhapsody]
00:03:89 (4) - new combo(为了和00:07:32 (1) 保持平衡
00:54:46 (7) - 这种slider的摆放已过时了，不美观，外加confusing for player when they are playing.建议换种slider摆放方式
01:04:31 (6) - slider的尾和头保持统一纵轴线，否则和后面7的spacing也会有少许的误差
01:38:81 (8) - new combo
01:12:46 ---->>01:40:10 where is hitsound? :< lazy himy
02:14:59 (8) - new combo?
02:38:80 (6) - new combo
02:42:23 (8) - ^
02:43:30 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 第一次玩的时候，完全被这里耍了。有些难解读。不过既然是insane，留着也没问题哦xD
03:03:87 (1) - remove new combo
03:04:30 (3) - new combo
03:12:44 (7) - ^
03:14:58 (1) - remove new combo

好图。之前射过了。这次射不出了xD
想了想，射颗粉星给你<3

[Dandelion]
Current rankings standards are: X minutes in diff = X amount of allowed kiai sections. You have a bunch of fountains at the beginning which are unrankable. =(
00:43:94 - Shouldn't be a break (delete and reinsert breaks in all diffs and you'll see why)
01:36:45 (1) - Extend to the next white tick so that it doesn't end awkwardly
01:54:88 (3,5) - Probably unrankable since it can be hard to see which is the slider and which is the circle (especially with snaking sliders turned off)
02:16:73 (1) - Either shorten to two white ticks before or delete the slider afterwards or raise the overall difficulty or a combination thereof. The slider pops up 2/3 of the way through the slider and is really ugly :/
Please delete unused inherited sections in the map (like the kiai times after this diff ends for example)
02:47:16 (1) - I would this section and move the spinner to the same place it's in on [Butterfly].

[Butterfly]
Same comments about kiai sections and unused sections.
I recommend using a smaller grid for this diff. Some notes overlap because of the grid+distance spacing combination and it's kinda ugly :X
00:42:89 (3) - Move the last anchor on this up a grid so that it's parallel with the other sliders
01:36:45 (1) - Extend to the next white tick like in the first diff.
02:50:59 (1) - End two white ticks earlier when Miku's voice fades out.
Turn overall diff up a notch or two

[Rhapsody]
Same comments about removing unused sections, excessive kiai sections, reinserting breaks, using a smaller grid, etc
00:16:32 (1) - End a white tick earlier
00:54:46 (7) - Usually burai sliders are unrankable, but since the follow circle is big enough and everything, it MIGHT be okay...
Turn up hitsounds please, they're so quiet ._.
01:40:31 (1) - End a white tick earlier
02:48:55 (1) - Move forward to the blue or red tick (and then shorten by a 1/4th or 1/2) so that it doesn't appear on the slider before
Again, please use a smaller grid. I see that you're trying to make some really nice patterns, but the grid size is hindering that ._.;

This map is pretty nice and just needs a little more work. Nice job~

( sorry for fixed it so late since i was busy those days

Many thanks for your attentive and constructive modding Derekku! There are many important mapping rules which i was first time heard about! Your modding suggestions really helped me a lot

Nearly all of your modding suggestions i have accepted except some length of the spinners, i think mine is okey .

also thanks gdeath and JL, i have fiexd some of your suggestions

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黑米……

=w=

let me see……

Dandelion was really well laid out, unlike some supposedly two-star ones I've seen lately. X___x It was pretty easy to read and keep up with, which is good. It also made a good (if a bit predictable) Taiko round, which I personally enjoyed. So props for that.

Butterfly was okay at first and then something just ended up being off or hard to read for me, I think a bit after the first break. I'm not the best at the EBA stuff but five seconds of consistently being confused where I was supposed to be resulted in a somewhat cheap fail, in my book. I've seen a lot of suggestions on how to fix this one up already, which makes me feel a bit better about my own competence and probably gives you better feedback than I can at this point offer. Hitting it up in Taiko resulted in a couple weird beats that seemed a bit out of place, but otherwise everything seems fine on that end, so there's a very strong chance I just lack the skills to take on the real map.

That all said, I think Rhapshody would be way out of my league. I'll leave that judgement to the pros.

In any case, a 2-star that's not hiding any particularly nasty tricks is something I've had a hard time coming by since starting up about a week ago, so from my stand-point that alone nets you a star. Keep up the good work!

err.. thanks for trying

Overall
BG美观度满分！！（要是想要一张一个BG的话，我这里还有好多miku的美图~）note颜色协调度满分！！音效也很切！！歌曲本身选的也很舒服 ，嗯嗯，好歌！> <
美中不足：你能把slider再拉的好看点么？- - 感觉有点粗糙

Dandelion
01:36:458 (1) - 嗯……感觉怪怪的，把声音消掉或者换成slider和circle会不会好一点？

Butterfly
overall或HP稍微调Eazy点，整体难度系数上四星半了哦，Normal的话，
难度系数稍微得再低一点点……

Rhapsody
整体难度以你来说不算高嘛。
感觉好几个jump放的很奇怪……虽然距离不是很痛……
00:48:893 （1）- 这个有点违和……太突然了……
01:02:605 （1）- ……↑
01:05:819 （1）& 01:06:033 （1）- 嗯，我不是很清楚new combo的使用规则，不过老师以前教过我短距离连跳最好用同一种颜色会比较好……
01:23:602 （4）- 要不要考虑把前一个slider拉过来？这个感觉有点多余（好吧我承认是我不擅长按这种排列……）
01:37:315 （4）- 同↑
01:54:027 （1）- \o/这个好赞！
02:01:954 （4，5，6）- 变距jump…… - =
02:12:881 （1）- 又一个~~
02:14:381 （7）- 反正前面都跳了，这个干脆也跳吧，统一一点
02:14:595 （8）- 后面连着变距跳，这里new combo好了
02:38:806 （6）- new combo？maybe……
02:42:234 （8）- 同↑
02:43:305 （1，2，3）- 顺着放吧？
02:44:162 （1，2，3）- 这一段闪光已经很耀眼了，这里的note又比较密集，很容易误判的

额……估计多半都是废话吧……无视也没关系……抱歉，没能提些更成熟的意见……（蹲墙角

Taking another look at this~

[General]
*I see an SB for this, but fly.png is missing from the folder. =/
Offset: 900 because otherwise, the measure starts on the wrong beat.
Tags: "miku" isn't needed since it's already in the artist field. A tag like "Vocaloid" would be better, though.
Source: Seems to be " ~xi-on~" from what I can scrape up on google/youtube orz
*Kiai spots are different on all diffs, which I find odd unless the diffs were by guest mappers.

[Dandelion]
00:25:011 (2) - Too close to previous
00:33:046 (1) - Move down and over so that it's aligned symmetrically please.
00:34:032 (2,3,4) - Sporadic placement is kinda ugly imo.
00:40:032 (1,2,1,2) - Anchor points could be moved (use grid snap) so that this looks better. The "X" isn't shaped very nice atm.
00:55:032 (6) - Move up a grid to make the 1-6 pattern look nicer.
01:12:046 (1) - Kiai would look better starting on the repeat of this instead of randomly before the notes.
01:36:045 (1) - Kiai would look better ending on the end of this instead of randomly in the middle of it. (If you don't want kiai on the spinner, then end it before it)
01:36:045 (1) - Feels awkward at where it currently starts. Maybe move it back to the red tick and extend 1/2?
02:16:073 (1) - Doesn't fit that well here.
02:21:045 (2) - Too close to previous.
02:50:059 (1) - End kiai at the end of this?

[Butterfly]
01:15:003 (6) - Moving a grid to the right would look better xp
01:32:060 (10) - ^
01:36:045 (1) - Ends awkwardly. Extend a white tick perhaps?
02:05:081 (9) - Too close to previous
02:20:038 (2,6) - Move these down a grid
02:50:059 (1) - End a white tick earlier and perhaps end kiai here too?

[Rhapsody]
00:16:032 (1) - End a white tick earlier so it doesn't sound so awkward?
00:48:089 (1) - Wasn't expecting this mini-jump
00:49:010 (1) - Or this one... Maybe move the yellow one down so that neither are so jumpy?
01:23:017 (3) - Wow this is a really awkward spot to start kiai on orz
01:40:031 (1) - End a white tick earlier
02:48:055 (1) - Don't end kiai in the MIDDLE of a spinner xp
03:07:008 (1) - Move back to the blue tick and extend 1/4
03:10:073 (1) - Start kiai on (3) instead
03:18:022 (1) - Move back to the blue tick and extend 1/4

Kinda messy and awkward in spots, but it's not too bad.

Why there's no "konan-yoshi999" name in the tag?

o_O

VanMoNky wrote:

Why there's no "konan-yoshi999" name in the tag?

because the diff"butterfly" is made by myself, i didn't accept yoshi's version.

Rhapsody missed. please check it and full uploaded it again.

Butterfly:
00:36:899 (1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5) - clap-->finish to follow the music.

Same suggestions at Dandelion

awesome <33333

reuploaded and fixed. thanks leeba

从坟墓中回归 lol

To next modder: konan-yoshi999's difficulty haven't been added, don't be confused by the Tag things

Why is the source different in Rhapsody than in the other 2 difficulties?

source不一样啊。。><

Just a tag thing, I think I could re-bubbled ._.

well done i like the BG, plz rank this map >.<

There should be more Miku song in rank!

the map needs bats

da na na na na na na na batman

黑米 GJ!

yes gratz

I can't find this song on youtube =(
Someone knows where can I find this song?