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Topic Starter
Alice

xxheroxx wrote:

Easy:

00:05:357 (2) = i don't like this slider, fix it.
It follows the rhythm well and it fits to the difficulty. I suppose it's just a question of taste, and concerning me I like it :O


xxheroxx wrote:

Normal:

00:12:143 (8) = i don't like this slider, fix it.
00:18:393 (3) = i don't like this slider, fix it.
Why nobody like them :? but hm supposed you're talking about the shape like other mods who told me they was weird
fixed then, I did cuter shapes luls

Kudos for you~ Thanks A LOT. <3 (and for the star too! 30th priority luls)
Also yea short song ^^; but I liked it so much since I listened this for the first time, I needed to map it huh D: And map short songs has got advantages luls
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Topic Starter
Alice
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GabrielRKF
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Scar
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Topic Starter
Alice
Rox: yeah! Thanks.

Scar: merci beaucoup <3

EDIT: yes for 40th priority luls~
Xgor

Alice Margatroid wrote:

EDIT: yes for 40th priority luls~
I think my 40 stars on xenon is a bit more impressing because i used less kudosu!

Anyway i was surprised how short it was :o Making it the shortest Touhou i ever seen! Even shorter then PAD master!
I can't find any big faults but im not that found of that Normal feels a bit too hard for an Normal!
But the map wasn't that bad so!
*star*
Topic Starter
Alice
I actually thought my normal is too boring lol
Glad someone think it's too hard, in fact..

Also I used kudostar cause I can luls (also cause I'm often too shy to ask people to look at my maps, and, too impatient to wait for them to come. I'm a weird guy. :/) but, thanks for the star. :D
mikhe
Star :3
Topic Starter
Alice
Thanks. n_n
Mitano
<3 :oops:
Topic Starter
Alice
<3
Randy96
Couldn't find anything, star!
Gabi
lunatic.... just doesn't make any sense at all <_<
Topic Starter
Alice

Gabi wrote:

lunatic.... just doesn't make any sense at all <_<
Oh? And what do you want me to do? Delete it? Change diff name into "NO-SENSE DIFF"? lol ok choice's up to you
IT makes sense. It maybe no follows lyrics sometimes and all, but, it follows well rhythm and sounds good. And I personnally think that without all that weird streams it would be too easy for a that-short song.. Seriously. :/

Randy96: thanks.
Gabi

Alice Margatroid wrote:

Gabi wrote:

lunatic.... just doesn't make any sense at all <_<
Oh? And what do you want me to do? Delete it? Change diff name into "NO-SENSE DIFF"? lol ok choice's up to you
IT makes sense. It maybe no follows lyrics sometimes and all, but, it follows well rhythm and sounds good. And I personnally think that without all that weird streams it would be too easy for a that-short song.. Seriously. :/

Randy96: thanks.
wow... ok let me put it down so you understand.

if a song can't be mapped anymore to follow rythm or vocals anymore, You can't continue mapping on it and but random notes cause it will sound like complete utter shit. Usualy im for free beat mapping, but

00:05:35 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wow??? WHAT WAS THE RYTHM HERE?

I personnally think that without all that weird streams it would be too easy for a that-short song.. Seriously. :/
Seriously????!?!?!?! the weird streams sounds like fucking shit and should get removed. Let me just bold this for you, weird streams. you do realise why they are weird? because they do not fit. next time don't map such a short song. im pretty sure the title is wrong aswell.

also why is there a timing section that is not inherited?

your other difficulties has some potential, but your lunatic is bad.
Topic Starter
Alice
SPOILER

Gabi wrote:

if a song can't be mapped anymore to follow rythm or vocals anymore, You can't continue mapping on it and but random notes cause it will sound like complete utter shit. Usualy im for free beat mapping, but

00:05:35 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wow??? WHAT WAS THE RYTHM HERE?
lol
I'll try to change it a bit if you want
But at last some people didn't tell me to change it or somethings. If EVERY mods told me so I would totally understand but it seems to be a question of taste.

Seriously????!?!?!?! the weird streams sounds like fucking shit and should get removed. Let me just bold this for you, weird streams. you do realise why they are weird? because they do not fit. next time don't map such a short song
why?
Please tell me how many people mapped 20-30scds song
Please don't tell me I'm the only one. That would be not true
also as i said it IS a question of taste
Someones told me there wasn't bad at all. But as I said I WILLL change them if you really want to rage only for poor streams.

im pretty sure the title is wrong aswell.
AH really? LOL I ripped this from toho sotenka album. While romanized the title IS Marisa Spark (or marisa~spark.) -__-
C'mon if it isn't already did so learn japanese, go buy this album and romanize the title
do not say anything without knowing please lol

also why is there a timing section that is not inherited?
I don't know : )


your other difficulties has some potential,
Thanks a mil. :D

but your lunatic is bad.
I appreciate honnest comments so thanks a lot too n_n.

Streams changed.
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Topic Starter
Alice
Fixed all except easy. As said many times I'd like to keep this combo as it is, hope it's ok :/.
Thanks a lot Larto! =)
Larto
Okay then, bubbled!~
Topic Starter
Alice
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peppy
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Topic Starter
Alice
All is fixed
Thanks a lot (:
Kurai
☼Star☼
Topic Starter
Alice
Merci beaucoup! :?
kino77
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Topic Starter
Alice

kino77 wrote:

00:16:25(5,1,2,3,1,2,)-Confusing...
Kudo because I didn't noticed this, thanks a lot.

I don't really like other suggests, those spinners are made to let normal and easy be different from hard and lunatic n_n
But, thanks!
anonymous_old
Very good.
Topic Starter
Alice
Thank you.
Sushi
[Easy]
00:02:58 (1) - Fais commencer ce spinner à 00:02:85 (trait blanc) et finit le à 00:04:821 (trait rouge)

[Normal]
00:02:58 (1) - Faire commencer le spinner sur "Watashi" n'est pas une bonne idée a mon avis. Commence à 00:02:85 (blanc) et finis a 00:04:28 (blanc)
00:05:71 (2,4) - Aligne moi ces 2 notes.


[hard]
00:15:35 (6,7) - C'est bon, mais source de confusion

[Lunatic]
00:02:23 (4,5) - J'aime pas le timing de ces deux notes.

C'est tout ce que j'ai à dire.
Tu as mon étoile~
Topic Starter
Alice

Sushi971 wrote:

[Easy]
00:02:58 (1) - Fais commencer ce spinner à 00:02:85 (trait blanc) et finit le à 00:04:821 (trait rouge)
[Normal]
00:02:58 (1) - Faire commencer le spinner sur "Watashi" n'est pas une bonne idée a mon avis. Commence à 00:02:85 (blanc) et finis a 00:04:28 (blanc)
Il devait commencer sur ore-marisa en fait xD mais en effet ils étaient bizarres.. maintenant j'aime mieux. Merci <3

pour l'alignement: ok!

Hard (6,7) - Je garde.. Désolée.

Insane (4,5) - Je me doutais qu'elles plairaient pas! Elles sont nouvelles, mais j'aimerais bien les garder. Donc on verra par la suite. Si elles gènent trop pour bizarrerie elles jarteront xD.

Merci Sushi ^.^
Kurai
Hi~

[Easy]
La map est bien mais fait des slider avec des ondulation plutôt qu'avec des ligne droite, sa fait plus beau et c'est mieux a jouer mais bon après c'est toi qui voit ^_^

[Normal]
00:11:96 (x) - Rajoute une note
00:12:14 (8) - Supprime ce slider pour en faire un qui ce termine a 00:12:500. Tu en recrée un 1/2 plus loin qui ce termine a 00:13:482 puis tu crée 3 notes après.

[Lunatic]
La on peux dire qu tu t'es fait plaisir xD'

C'est du bon boulot ^^
(J'avais deja star la map 8D)
Topic Starter
Alice
Hm.. Easy j'aime bien tel qu'il est.. Normal j'aime pas trop la note même si ça sonne pas faux, et après j'ai pas suivi mais j'ai quand même changé la partie.. Je l'aurais pas changé si t'avais pas proposé quelque chose, et le premier slider que t'as proposé je l'ai quand même fais dans la partie, donc, je juge qu'il y a de quoi te kudoter :3
Merci merci!
JamesLeao
Hey , Alice 8-)
Easy:
Fine

Normal:
00:21:42 (3) - remove?
00:21:60 (1) - spinner start 00:21:42

Hard:
00:21:42 (1) - be silent ?

Lunatic:
00:02:23 (4) - 00:02:14

some opinions by me :D
Topic Starter
Alice
hard there's something after so no silent!

Thanks <3 :3 谢谢 lol~ (learning chinese at school :/)
Gens
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WolfCoder
The hit objects look all blurry to me and it hurts the eye focus a bit. I really don't know why, try checking the alignment of your custom graphics. And normal is just a little to hard to be normal, you should tone it down a bit.

Other than that, star.
Topic Starter
Alice
Gens : I take the last sentence as a compliment so thanks. :3 And yes, more beatmaps are to come~

About the 1st spinner: I don't think so. Some mod posts says same, some others just told me to change it sometimes. No I think it's all ok, I really want to keep it. :/

Easy hm.. I checked it and I thought "the shape is horribly confusing", that's all. So I just changed the shape.. Splitting could be confusing here, I dunno why but I think it will. ):

Normal I'm redoing it easier. °д°
OK Star rate won't get down so I just changed.. I don't think there's much care about star rating btw. o: I now more feels like a normal. If it feels hardish anyway I guess there's no problem, it stays harder than easy, easier than hard. So what else? ><

Lunatic isn't that overmapped T~T! Mk, maybe it is.
But seriously EVERY known mappers get their map ranked really fast , and lots of them put deathstreams every 2 seconds even if this does not go with the song, so really i don't see my map not get ranked for overmapping -____-;


Wolfcoder there's no problem with my hitcircles here.. I don't get it.. sorry o.o


Thanks to both of you for star!!
Jarby
00:02:85 - Add audio preview.

Normal:

00:05:35 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:05:71 (4) - New combo.
00:08:57 (7) - New combo.
00:13:92 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:14:28 (7) - New combo.
00:16:60 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:96 (7) - New combo.

Hard:

00:23:57 - Remove break and final slider.

Lunatic:

00:23:57 - Remove break and final two circles.
Topic Starter
Alice
Normal: done.. Not all, sorry O: but it's still way better now I think.

I really want to keep Hard & Lunatic's unexpected end.. Sorry ;_;
[DBF]
Star for you, няшка <3
Topic Starter
Alice
ня~~~ спасибо!! <3
Takuma
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Alice
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Larto
I'm gonna get killed for this.
Yes_old
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GabrielRKF
YEY! Finally! \o/
Topic Starter
Alice
Thanks both of you. <3
Natteke

Alice Margatroid wrote:

ня~~~ спасибо!! <3
ня
allein
привет, я из 2016 года :^)
Buster
good for speedrunning
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