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Silver Forest - Marisa ~ Spark

posted 2009-07-31T16:07:23+00:00

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GabrielRKF

Joined September 2008

GabrielRKF 2009-09-05T14:24:07+00:00

Alice Margatroid wrote:
//Easy//
00:17:14 - No 5 here. Just a 3 that goes with previous 1&2 so no new combo D: Sorry,I typed wrong. It's really a (3) but i think that u should use a New combo here and take off the one at 00:18:928(1). I forgot to say that XD

//Hard//
00:16:60 - I didn't exactly understand why but suppose you was talking of spacing between them. If you was then, fixed. If you wasn't I just didn't understand :B Yeah, it's because of the spacing =]

And one little thing that saw on your Normal:

00:04:643(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the distance snaping here is pretty lower then the one on the rest of the song. So could move the 00:05:000(2)(A perfect five o.O) 4 grids down, and the 00:05:714(4) and 00:06:428(6) 4 grids up?
00:06:964(8) - this slider is making a tiny little jump, why don't you try something like i did on this pic?

OVER! o> (no kudosu this one)

Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-09-08T16:52:46+00:00

Easy: I keep it as it is. This combo looks good to me.

Rox wrote:
00:04:643(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the distance snaping here is pretty lower then the one on the rest of the song. So could move the 00:05:000(2)(A perfect five o.O) 4 grids down, and the 00:05:714(4) and 00:06:428(6) 4 grids up?

I guess so, lol, I need to be more attentive to my spacing T_T fixed

Rox wrote:
00:06:964(8) - this slider is making a tiny little jump, why don't you try something like i did on this pic?

That wasn't a jump
That was something totally unwanted and totally wrong due to my inattention
Fixed

Thanks a looooooooot again <3

Bass

Joined January 2009

Bass 2009-09-08T19:20:39+00:00

Hi ;3
I have suggestion for first spinner in easy, normal:
Start at: 00:02:85 - , and end at: 00:04:28 -
[Easy]

00:16:78 (x) - add a circle?

[Normal]

00:05:71 (4) - new combo?
00:06:78 (4) - down 1 tick

[Hard]
00:06:25 (4) - new combo?
00:11:78 (2) - down 1 tick
00:12:50 (4) - right 1 tick
00:13:21 (6) - new combo?
00:13:39 (7) - up 1 tick
00:17:67 (1) - new combo?
00:20:00 (6) - ^
00:20:71 (8) - ^

[Lunatic]

00:09:28 (8) - new combo?
00:15:00 (6) - ^

/me is counting for kudos

Star~

Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-09-08T19:39:42+00:00

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Diasios

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2009-09-09T17:23:22+00:00

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Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-09-11T20:09:37+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
Easy:

00:05:357 (2) = i don't like this slider, fix it.

It follows the rhythm well and it fits to the difficulty. I suppose it's just a question of taste, and concerning me I like it :O

xxheroxx wrote:
Normal:

00:12:143 (8) = i don't like this slider, fix it.
00:18:393 (3) = i don't like this slider, fix it.

Why nobody like them

but hm supposed you're talking about the shape like other mods who told me they was weird
fixed then, I did cuter shapes luls

Kudos for you~ Thanks A LOT. <3 (and for the star too! 30th priority luls)
Also yea short song ^^; but I liked it so much since I listened this for the first time, I needed to map it huh D: And map short songs has got advantages luls

Blackiris

Joined April 2009

Blackiris 2009-09-11T21:33:05+00:00

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Alice

Joined October 2008

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Alice 2009-09-12T09:01:09+00:00

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GabrielRKF

Joined September 2008

GabrielRKF 2009-09-16T22:12:26+00:00

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Scar

Joined January 2009

Scar 2009-09-18T10:45:05+00:00

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Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-09-18T12:51:43+00:00

Rox: yeah! Thanks.

Scar: merci beaucoup <3

EDIT: yes for 40th priority luls~

Xgor

Elite Mapper

Joined April 2009

Xgor 2009-09-18T18:10:05+00:00

Alice Margatroid wrote:
EDIT: yes for 40th priority luls~

I think my 40 stars on xenon is a bit more impressing because i used less kudosu!

Anyway i was surprised how short it was

Making it the shortest Touhou i ever seen! Even shorter then PAD master!
I can't find any big faults but im not that found of that Normal feels a bit too hard for an Normal!
But the map wasn't that bad so!
*star*

Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-09-18T19:20:23+00:00

I actually thought my normal is too boring lol
Glad someone think it's too hard, in fact..

Also I used kudostar cause I can luls (also cause I'm often too shy to ask people to look at my maps, and, too impatient to wait for them to come. I'm a weird guy. :/) but, thanks for the star.

mikhe

Joined November 2008

mikhe 2009-09-20T13:17:22+00:00

Star :3

Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-09-20T13:50:32+00:00

Thanks. n_n

Mitano

Joined January 2009

Mitano 2009-09-20T18:30:13+00:00

<3

Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-09-20T20:26:20+00:00

<3

Randy96

Joined August 2009

Randy96 2009-09-20T20:48:02+00:00

Couldn't find anything, star!

Gabi

Joined December 2008

Gabi 2009-09-20T20:50:30+00:00

lunatic.... just doesn't make any sense at all <_<

Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-09-20T21:57:56+00:00

Gabi wrote:
lunatic.... just doesn't make any sense at all <_<

Oh? And what do you want me to do? Delete it? Change diff name into "NO-SENSE DIFF"? lol ok choice's up to you
IT makes sense. It maybe no follows lyrics sometimes and all, but, it follows well rhythm and sounds ~~good~~. And I personnally think that without all that weird streams it would be too easy for a that-short song.. Seriously. :/

Randy96: thanks.

Gabi

Joined December 2008

Gabi 2009-09-22T14:14:55+00:00

Alice Margatroid wrote:
Gabi wrote:
lunatic.... just doesn't make any sense at all <_<
Oh? And what do you want me to do? Delete it? Change diff name into "NO-SENSE DIFF"? lol ok choice's up to you
IT makes sense. It maybe no follows lyrics sometimes and all, but, it follows well rhythm and sounds ~~good~~. And I personnally think that without all that weird streams it would be too easy for a that-short song.. Seriously. :/

Randy96: thanks.

wow... ok let me put it down so you understand.

if a song can't be mapped anymore to follow rythm or vocals anymore, You can't continue mapping on it and but random notes cause it will sound like complete utter shit. Usualy im for free beat mapping, but

00:05:35 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wow??? WHAT WAS THE RYTHM HERE?

I personnally think that without all that weird streams it would be too easy for a that-short song.. Seriously. :/

Seriously????!?!?!?! the weird streams sounds like fucking shit and should get removed. Let me just bold this for you, weird streams. you do realise why they are weird? because they do not fit. next time don't map such a short song. im pretty sure the title is wrong aswell.

also why is there a timing section that is not inherited?

your other difficulties has some potential, but your lunatic is bad.

Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-09-22T16:33:45+00:00

Gabi wrote:
if a song can't be mapped anymore to follow rythm or vocals anymore, You can't continue mapping on it and but random notes cause it will sound like complete utter shit. Usualy im for free beat mapping, but

00:05:35 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wow??? WHAT WAS THE RYTHM HERE?

lol
I'll try to change it a bit if you want
But at last some people didn't tell me to change it or somethings. If EVERY mods told me so I would totally understand but it seems to be a question of taste.

Seriously????!?!?!?! the weird streams sounds like fucking shit and should get removed. Let me just bold this for you, weird streams. you do realise why they are weird? because they do not fit. next time don't map such a short song

why?
Please tell me how many people mapped 20-30scds song
Please don't tell me I'm the only one. That would be not true
also as i said it IS a question of taste
Someones told me there wasn't bad at all. But as I said I WILLL change them if you really want to rage only for poor streams.

im pretty sure the title is wrong aswell.

AH really? LOL I ripped this from toho sotenka album. While romanized the title IS Marisa Spark (or marisa~spark.) -__-
C'mon if it isn't already did so learn japanese, go buy this album and romanize the title
do not say anything without knowing please lol

also why is there a timing section that is not inherited?

I don't know : )

your other difficulties has some potential,

Thanks a mil.

but your lunatic is bad.

I appreciate honnest comments so thanks a lot too n_n.

Streams changed.

Larto

Joined June 2008

Larto 2009-09-22T16:47:48+00:00

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Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-09-22T16:56:22+00:00

Fixed all except easy. As said many times I'd like to keep this combo as it is, hope it's ok :/.
Thanks a lot Larto! =)

Larto

Joined June 2008

Larto 2009-09-22T17:15:01+00:00

Okay then, bubbled!~

Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-09-22T17:15:37+00:00

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peppy

Here since the beginning

peppy 2009-09-26T07:24:02+00:00

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Alice

Joined October 2008

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Alice 2009-09-26T07:29:14+00:00

All is fixed
Thanks a lot (:

Last edited by Alice 2009-10-13T18:11:09+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kurai

osu! Alumni

Joined March 2009

Kurai 2009-09-26T13:55:19+00:00

☼Star☼

Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-09-26T13:58:39+00:00

Merci beaucoup!

kino77

Joined March 2009

kino77 2009-09-28T20:07:46+00:00

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Alice

Joined October 2008

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Alice 2009-10-02T20:30:55+00:00

kino77 wrote:
00:16:25(5,1,2,3,1,2,)-Confusing...

Kudo because I didn't noticed this, thanks a lot.

I don't really like other suggests, those spinners are made to let normal and easy be different from hard and lunatic n_n
But, thanks!

anonymous_old

Here since the beginning

anonymous_old 2009-10-03T03:03:45+00:00

Very good.

Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-10-03T07:24:36+00:00

Thank you.

Sushi

osu! Alumni

Joined October 2008

Sushi 2009-10-11T11:46:57+00:00

[Easy]
00:02:58 (1) - Fais commencer ce spinner à 00:02:85 (trait blanc) et finit le à 00:04:821 (trait rouge)

[Normal]
00:02:58 (1) - Faire commencer le spinner sur "Watashi" n'est pas une bonne idée a mon avis. Commence à 00:02:85 (blanc) et finis a 00:04:28 (blanc)
00:05:71 (2,4) - Aligne moi ces 2 notes.

[hard]
00:15:35 (6,7) - C'est bon, mais source de confusion

[Lunatic]
00:02:23 (4,5) - J'aime pas le timing de ces deux notes.

C'est tout ce que j'ai à dire.
Tu as mon étoile~

Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-10-11T13:14:35+00:00

Sushi971 wrote:
[Easy]
00:02:58 (1) - Fais commencer ce spinner à 00:02:85 (trait blanc) et finit le à 00:04:821 (trait rouge)
[Normal]
00:02:58 (1) - Faire commencer le spinner sur "Watashi" n'est pas une bonne idée a mon avis. Commence à 00:02:85 (blanc) et finis a 00:04:28 (blanc)

Il devait commencer sur ore-marisa en fait xD mais en effet ils étaient bizarres.. maintenant j'aime mieux. Merci <3

pour l'alignement: ok!

Hard (6,7) - Je garde.. Désolée.

Insane (4,5) - Je me doutais qu'elles plairaient pas! Elles sont nouvelles, mais j'aimerais bien les garder. Donc on verra par la suite. Si elles gènent trop pour bizarrerie elles jarteront xD.

Merci Sushi ^.^

Kurai

osu! Alumni

Joined March 2009

Kurai 2009-10-11T16:45:25+00:00

Hi~

[Easy]
La map est bien mais fait des slider avec des ondulation plutôt qu'avec des ligne droite, sa fait plus beau et c'est mieux a jouer mais bon après c'est toi qui voit ^_^

[Normal]
00:11:96 (x) - Rajoute une note
00:12:14 (8) - Supprime ce slider pour en faire un qui ce termine a 00:12:500. Tu en recrée un 1/2 plus loin qui ce termine a 00:13:482 puis tu crée 3 notes après.

[Lunatic]
La on peux dire qu tu t'es fait plaisir xD'

C'est du bon boulot ^^
(J'avais deja star la map 8D)

Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-10-11T17:12:28+00:00

Hm.. Easy j'aime bien tel qu'il est.. Normal j'aime pas trop la note même si ça sonne pas faux, et après j'ai pas suivi mais j'ai quand même changé la partie.. Je l'aurais pas changé si t'avais pas proposé quelque chose, et le premier slider que t'as proposé je l'ai quand même fais dans la partie, donc, je juge qu'il y a de quoi te kudoter :3
Merci merci!

JamesLeao

Joined October 2008

JamesLeao 2009-10-16T13:58:43+00:00

Hey , Alice

Easy:
Fine

Normal:
00:21:42 (3) - remove?
00:21:60 (1) - spinner start 00:21:42

Hard:
00:21:42 (1) - be silent ?

Lunatic:
00:02:23 (4) - 00:02:14

some opinions by me

Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-10-16T16:01:34+00:00

hard there's something after so no silent!

Thanks <3 :3 谢谢 lol~ (learning chinese at school :/)

Gens

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Joined August 2008

Gens 2009-10-16T21:46:40+00:00

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WolfCoder

Joined June 2009

WolfCoder 2009-10-17T09:57:55+00:00

The hit objects look all blurry to me and it hurts the eye focus a bit. I really don't know why, try checking the alignment of your custom graphics. And normal is just a little to hard to be normal, you should tone it down a bit.

Other than that, star.

Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-10-17T09:58:13+00:00

Gens : I take the last sentence as a compliment so thanks. :3 And yes, more beatmaps are to come~

About the 1st spinner: I don't think so. Some mod posts says same, some others just told me to change it sometimes. No I think it's all ok, I really want to keep it. :/

Easy hm.. I checked it and I thought "the shape is horribly confusing", that's all. So I just changed the shape.. Splitting could be confusing here, I dunno why but I think it will. ):

Normal I'm redoing it easier. °д°
OK Star rate won't get down so I just changed.. I don't think there's much care about star rating btw. o: I now more feels like a normal. If it feels hardish anyway I guess there's no problem, it stays harder than easy, easier than hard. So what else? ><

Lunatic isn't that overmapped T~T! Mk, maybe it is.
But seriously EVERY known mappers get their map ranked really fast , and lots of them put deathstreams every 2 seconds even if this does not go with the song, so really i don't see my map not get ranked for overmapping -____-;

Wolfcoder there's no problem with my hitcircles here.. I don't get it.. sorry o.o

Thanks to both of you for star!!

Jarby

Joined August 2008

Jarby 2009-10-17T13:21:02+00:00

00:02:85 - Add audio preview.

Normal:

00:05:35 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:05:71 (4) - New combo.
00:08:57 (7) - New combo.
00:13:92 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:14:28 (7) - New combo.
00:16:60 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:96 (7) - New combo.

Hard:

00:23:57 - Remove break and final slider.

Lunatic:

00:23:57 - Remove break and final two circles.

Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-10-17T13:22:06+00:00

Normal: done.. Not all, sorry O: but it's still way better now I think.

I really want to keep Hard & Lunatic's unexpected end.. Sorry ;_;

[DBF]

Joined January 2009

[DBF] 2009-10-17T13:24:41+00:00

Star for you, няшка <3

Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-10-17T13:26:39+00:00

ня~~~ спасибо!! <3

Takuma

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Takuma 2009-10-18T16:09:14+00:00

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Alice

Joined October 2008

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Alice 2009-10-18T16:10:25+00:00

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Larto

Joined June 2008

Larto 2009-10-18T18:10:01+00:00

I'm gonna get killed for this.

Yes_old

Joined May 2009

Yes_old 2009-10-18T22:46:22+00:00

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GabrielRKF

Joined September 2008

GabrielRKF 2009-10-19T15:03:53+00:00

YEY! Finally! \o/

Alice

Joined October 2008

Topic Starter

Alice 2009-10-19T16:41:21+00:00

Thanks both of you. <3

Natteke

Joined August 2009

Natteke 2009-12-09T19:45:04+00:00

Alice Margatroid wrote:
ня~~~ спасибо!! <3

ня

allein

Beatmap Nominator

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allein 2016-09-04T13:58:57+00:00

привет, я из 2016 года :^)

Buster

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Buster 2017-07-26T03:59:05+00:00

good for speedrunning

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