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Thanks! 
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.
Detailed Modding v.4.5 Go~
Osz. File Check (Done)
[Easy] (Done)
[Normal] (Done)
[Master Spark!~] (Done)
Overall: Well, the map is nice, but also very short so you want to make the most of the song. Make sure to double check into the map to see that the spacing and note timing is properly set. Don't forget to add in the Source and Tags to all difficulties. This is how I normally would mod a map and not trying to bash at it to let you know. I'll drop my star in then...
Detailed Modding v.4.5 Go~
Osz. File Check (Done)
SPOILER
Video: No
SB (Story Board): No
Custom Skin: Yes
Background: Yes
[Current] Size: 1.39 MB / 10.00 MB
Source: No (Please add in the Source to all difficulties.)
Tags: No (Please add in the Tags to all difficulties.)
SB (Story Board): No
Custom Skin: Yes
Background: Yes
[Current] Size: 1.39 MB / 10.00 MB
Source: No (Please add in the Source to all difficulties.)
Tags: No (Please add in the Tags to all difficulties.)
[Easy] (Done)
SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 168.000 / 1,429 ms (Sounds good so far.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 0.5 / 0.70
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 (Solid)
[Current] Objects: 24 ( 15 Circles / 6 Sliders / 3 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 37
[Current] Max Score: 19,846
[Current] Star Rating: 2.62
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.2
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.4
00:01:42 (1,2,3) - Not sure that this is the way to start off on easy. Concider the idea of using 1 repeating slider to replace these three.
00:02:58 (1) - This spinner starts at an odd spot. Did you try starting it at 00:02:14 or 00:02:50?
00:05:17 (1) - It might help to unstack this off the slider so that new players are not tempted to hit the slider note too early.
00:07:85 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Might want to break this stream down a bit or use a slider or two. You want the map to be easy, not feeling like a normal.
00:15:53 (2) - Might want to lower thise slider a bit. If someone was to play hardrock, this would just be kidna close or just about going out of the osu window.
00:18:92 (1,1,1) - I don't think there is an solid reason these should be single note combos. At least make it (1,2,3).
Notes: You want to make this map a bit more "easier", not feeling more like a normal. Try not to worry too much about the score since the song is only about 28 seconds long...
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 0.5 / 0.70
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 (Solid)
[Current] Objects: 24 ( 15 Circles / 6 Sliders / 3 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 37
[Current] Max Score: 19,846
[Current] Star Rating: 2.62
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.2
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.4
00:01:42 (1,2,3) - Not sure that this is the way to start off on easy. Concider the idea of using 1 repeating slider to replace these three.
00:02:58 (1) - This spinner starts at an odd spot. Did you try starting it at 00:02:14 or 00:02:50?
00:05:17 (1) - It might help to unstack this off the slider so that new players are not tempted to hit the slider note too early.
00:07:85 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Might want to break this stream down a bit or use a slider or two. You want the map to be easy, not feeling like a normal.
00:15:53 (2) - Might want to lower thise slider a bit. If someone was to play hardrock, this would just be kidna close or just about going out of the osu window.
00:18:92 (1,1,1) - I don't think there is an solid reason these should be single note combos. At least make it (1,2,3).
Notes: You want to make this map a bit more "easier", not feeling more like a normal. Try not to worry too much about the score since the song is only about 28 seconds long...
[Normal] (Done)
SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 168.000 / 1,429 ms (Sounds good so far.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 0.5 (This could be uped to 1) / 1.00
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manually Snapped
[Current] Objects: 47 ( 32 Circles / 12 Sliders / 3 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 63
[Current] Max Score: 86,912
[Current] Star Rating: 4.58
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.4
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7
00:01:43 (T-Sec) - You don't need that timing point to control the hitnote volume. You can do that right from the offset at this point.
00:02:58 (1) - This spinner starts at an odd spot. Did you try starting it at 00:02:14 or 00:02:50?
00:04:64 (1,2,3,4,1) - The spacing in between here is unstable. Make sure to check into this and if you're setting jumps, make sure its not randomly placed in.
00:14:64 (3,1) - This can screw up someone because the timing of the notes are different in between, but they are closely spaced.
00:16:60 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try to link the ends of the sliders together a bit more even here.
Notes: You might want to check and fix the note spacing a bit because it feels kinda rough. Improperly planned spacing (excluding jumps if reasonable) can mess up the player's pace to keep track of the notes properly.
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 0.5 (This could be uped to 1) / 1.00
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manually Snapped
[Current] Objects: 47 ( 32 Circles / 12 Sliders / 3 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 63
[Current] Max Score: 86,912
[Current] Star Rating: 4.58
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.4
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7
00:01:43 (T-Sec) - You don't need that timing point to control the hitnote volume. You can do that right from the offset at this point.
00:02:58 (1) - This spinner starts at an odd spot. Did you try starting it at 00:02:14 or 00:02:50?
00:04:64 (1,2,3,4,1) - The spacing in between here is unstable. Make sure to check into this and if you're setting jumps, make sure its not randomly placed in.
00:14:64 (3,1) - This can screw up someone because the timing of the notes are different in between, but they are closely spaced.
00:16:60 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try to link the ends of the sliders together a bit more even here.
Notes: You might want to check and fix the note spacing a bit because it feels kinda rough. Improperly planned spacing (excluding jumps if reasonable) can mess up the player's pace to keep track of the notes properly.
[Master Spark!~] (Done)
SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 168.000 / 1,429 ms (Sounds good so far.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2[/color] / 2.10
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manually Snapped
[Current] Objects: 108 ( 98 Circles / 8 Sliders / 2 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 131
[Current] Max Score: 432,910
[Current] Star Rating: 5.00
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.8
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.9
00:05:35 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Two things. First, check the spacing in between the two streams. It looks really culttered up. Second, the hitsounds is not matching well to the song. Try using a pattern of hitsounds that can work with the beat.
00:09:28 (8,9,10,11) - Is the spacing increase here intentional?
00:23:57 (?) - Why is this a break? I thought the spinner normally goes here and I feel that the song is way too short to even think about breaks.
00:26:07 (1) - Could maybe end this with two hitnotes than 1 slider.
Notes: Make sure to double check that the spacing is okay and that the map plays properly.
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2[/color] / 2.10
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manually Snapped
[Current] Objects: 108 ( 98 Circles / 8 Sliders / 2 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 131
[Current] Max Score: 432,910
[Current] Star Rating: 5.00
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.8
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.9
00:05:35 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Two things. First, check the spacing in between the two streams. It looks really culttered up. Second, the hitsounds is not matching well to the song. Try using a pattern of hitsounds that can work with the beat.
00:09:28 (8,9,10,11) - Is the spacing increase here intentional?
00:23:57 (?) - Why is this a break? I thought the spinner normally goes here and I feel that the song is way too short to even think about breaks.
00:26:07 (1) - Could maybe end this with two hitnotes than 1 slider.
Notes: Make sure to double check that the spacing is okay and that the map plays properly.
Overall: Well, the map is nice, but also very short so you want to make the most of the song. Make sure to double check into the map to see that the spacing and note timing is properly set. Don't forget to add in the Source and Tags to all difficulties. This is how I normally would mod a map and not trying to bash at it to let you know. I'll drop my star in then...
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Think you haven't got the last version, no matter what snap divisor I havent got those places. But I choose the places around what you wrote and it fits realllyyyy well. Sounds really good. Thanks a lot.roxkyuubiforever wrote:
//Easy//
00:05:519(2) - the slider sounds weard. Why don't you move it to 00:05:340, make it end at 00:05:697, and make 2 loops? then u make a slider at 00:06:947 that ends at 00:07:483. It's just a idea xD
About normal: sorry but I don't think that ends sounds good. I leave it like this
But again thanks for your advices on easy <3 And yay you already stared this some weeks ago~ lulsThis map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Ow, I forgot to say one thing:
The Hard hitcircle can't be bigger then the Normal hitcircle. I really like the hard hitcircle size so I think that u should make the NORMAL bigger. But u can change the hard size too.
The Hard hitcircle can't be bigger then the Normal hitcircle. I really like the hard hitcircle size so I think that u should make the NORMAL bigger. But u can change the hard size too.
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Yay thanks for modding again & for kudostarring Rox~
00:17:14 - No 5 here. Just a 3 that goes with previous 1&2 so no new combo D:
00:26:07 - I don't want to have same sliders as hard&insane. They will be like hard diffs specialities.
Then you understood I think easy will stay as it is, I like it actually
but if there's a problem that make this diff unrankable then I'll fix, but doubts about that now luls
00:26:07 - Same answer than for easy xD
00:15:53 - I like it as it is. oO
00:16:60 - I didn't exactly understand why but suppose you was talking of spacing between them. If you was then, fixed. If you wasn't I just didn't understand :B
00:18:57 - I want to keep these ones
Thanks a loooooot again ~
00:13:928 - I wont change this part. Feels like a real, great easy difficulty (what I usually call boring, but nevermind >_<) Those 3 sliders will stay as they are.roxkyuubiforever wrote:
//Easy//
00:13:928(1) - the slider sounds weird alone. I think it's better make one hit circle here, another one at 00:14:286, and one slider that starts at 00:14:643. =]
00:17:143(5) - New Combo
00:26:071(x) - just a idea. Make a slider here that end at 00:26:250 (1/2 slider)(no stream).
00:17:14 - No 5 here. Just a 3 that goes with previous 1&2 so no new combo D:
00:26:07 - I don't want to have same sliders as hard&insane. They will be like hard diffs specialities.
Then you understood I think easy will stay as it is, I like it actually
but if there's a problem that make this diff unrankable then I'll fix, but doubts about that now luls00:05:35 - Was sure those sliders wont be great T_T I changed this, sounds well, thanksroxkyuubiforever wrote:
//Normal//
00:05:357(3,4) - they sounds weard together. Idea: take off the 3 and the 4, and make hit circle at: 00:05:357, 00:05:714, 00:06:071, 00:06:428, 00:06:786, then u make a slider that starts at 00:06:964 and that ends at 00:07:857. And finally, use claps on the (1,3,5,7) and a whistle on the (8).
00:26:071(x) - same idea from the Easy.
00:26:07 - Same answer than for easy xD
Was also sure this wont be great :p but I like that sort of breaker, jump or however. But I anyway changed this (not like on the screen but almost)roxkyuubiforever wrote:
//Hard//
Best diff for me, but some parts without distance snap are breaking my combo.
00:09:286(1) - natural gameplay breaker. Please do something like I did on the pic down here, or change the slider position.
00:11:25 - Yeah there's a 4 there, but it doesn't make the player stop and it isn't on the top of a slider. I don't see what you mean at all xD;;roxkyuubiforever wrote:
00:11:250(4) - hard to find and makes the player stop a little bit. It's not really cool. Could you take it off from the top of the slider?
00:15:536(7) - ending at 00:15:803 sounds better, I think.
00:16:607(1) - another natural gameplay breaker. Please, move the (1,2,3) at 00:16:071 6 grids down.
00:15:53 - I like it as it is. oO
00:16:60 - I didn't exactly understand why but suppose you was talking of spacing between them. If you was then, fixed. If you wasn't I just didn't understand :B
//Lunatic//00:13:75 - Thanks
00:13:750(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the clap hit sounds are messing the gameplay. Idea: Take off them all and use it on the:
(3) only on the first hit, (4) only on the first hit, (5) only on the first hit, (6) (WOW! Look at this guy time! 00:15:000! XD) and on the (8).
00:18:571(1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I know that it's because of the background voice but I really think that it makes it sounds a little bit weard.
00:18:57 - I want to keep these ones
Thanks a loooooot again ~
And one little thing that saw on your Normal:Alice Margatroid wrote:
//Easy//
00:17:14 - No 5 here. Just a 3 that goes with previous 1&2 so no new combo D: Sorry,I typed wrong. It's really a (3) but i think that u should use a New combo here and take off the one at 00:18:928(1). I forgot to say that XD
//Hard//
00:16:60 - I didn't exactly understand why but suppose you was talking of spacing between them. If you was then, fixed. If you wasn't I just didn't understand :B Yeah, it's because of the spacing =]
00:04:643(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the distance snaping here is pretty lower then the one on the rest of the song. So could move the 00:05:000(2)(A perfect five o.O) 4 grids down, and the 00:05:714(4) and 00:06:428(6) 4 grids up?
00:06:964(8) - this slider is making a tiny little jump, why don't you try something like i did on this pic?
OVER! o> (no kudosu this one)
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Easy: I keep it as it is. This combo looks good to me.
That was something totally unwanted and totally wrong due to my inattention
Fixed
Thanks a looooooooot again <3
I guess so, lol, I need to be more attentive to my spacing T_T fixedRox wrote:
00:04:643(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the distance snaping here is pretty lower then the one on the rest of the song. So could move the 00:05:000(2)(A perfect five o.O) 4 grids down, and the 00:05:714(4) and 00:06:428(6) 4 grids up?
That wasn't a jumpRox wrote:
00:06:964(8) - this slider is making a tiny little jump, why don't you try something like i did on this pic?
That was something totally unwanted and totally wrong due to my inattention
Fixed
Thanks a looooooooot again <3
Hi ;3
I have suggestion for first spinner in easy, normal:
Start at: 00:02:85 - , and end at: 00:04:28 -
[Easy]
00:16:78 (x) - add a circle?
[Normal]
00:05:71 (4) - new combo?
00:06:78 (4) - down 1 tick
[Hard]
00:06:25 (4) - new combo?
00:11:78 (2) - down 1 tick
00:12:50 (4) - right 1 tick
00:13:21 (6) - new combo?
00:13:39 (7) - up 1 tick
00:17:67 (1) - new combo?
00:20:00 (6) - ^
00:20:71 (8) - ^
[Lunatic]
00:09:28 (8) - new combo?
00:15:00 (6) - ^
/me is counting for kudos
Star~
I have suggestion for first spinner in easy, normal:
Start at: 00:02:85 - , and end at: 00:04:28 -
[Easy]
00:16:78 (x) - add a circle?
[Normal]
00:05:71 (4) - new combo?
00:06:78 (4) - down 1 tick
[Hard]
00:06:25 (4) - new combo?
00:11:78 (2) - down 1 tick
00:12:50 (4) - right 1 tick
00:13:21 (6) - new combo?
00:13:39 (7) - up 1 tick
00:17:67 (1) - new combo?
00:20:00 (6) - ^
00:20:71 (8) - ^
[Lunatic]
00:09:28 (8) - new combo?
00:15:00 (6) - ^
/me is counting for kudos
Star~
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It follows the rhythm well and it fits to the difficulty. I suppose it's just a question of taste, and concerning me I like it :Oxxheroxx wrote:
Easy:
00:05:357 (2) = i don't like this slider, fix it.
Why nobody like themxxheroxx wrote:
Normal:
00:12:143 (8) = i don't like this slider, fix it.
00:18:393 (3) = i don't like this slider, fix it.
but hm supposed you're talking about the shape like other mods who told me they was weirdfixed then, I did cuter shapes luls
Kudos for you~ Thanks A LOT. <3 (and for the star too! 30th priority luls)
Also yea short song ^^; but I liked it so much since I listened this for the first time, I needed to map it huh D: And map short songs has got advantages luls
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Rox: yeah! Thanks.
Scar: merci beaucoup <3
EDIT: yes for 40th priority luls~
Scar: merci beaucoup <3
EDIT: yes for 40th priority luls~
I think my 40 stars on xenon is a bit more impressing because i used less kudosu!Alice Margatroid wrote:
EDIT: yes for 40th priority luls~
Anyway i was surprised how short it was
Making it the shortest Touhou i ever seen! Even shorter then PAD master!I can't find any big faults but im not that found of that Normal feels a bit too hard for an Normal!
But the map wasn't that bad so!
*star*
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I actually thought my normal is too boring lol
Glad someone think it's too hard, in fact..
Also I used kudostar cause I can luls (also cause I'm often too shy to ask people to look at my maps, and, too impatient to wait for them to come. I'm a weird guy. :/) but, thanks for the star.
Glad someone think it's too hard, in fact..
Also I used kudostar cause I can luls (also cause I'm often too shy to ask people to look at my maps, and, too impatient to wait for them to come. I'm a weird guy. :/) but, thanks for the star.
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Thanks. n_n
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<3
Couldn't find anything, star!
lunatic.... just doesn't make any sense at all <_<
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Oh? And what do you want me to do? Delete it? Change diff name into "NO-SENSE DIFF"? lol ok choice's up to youGabi wrote:
lunatic.... just doesn't make any sense at all <_<
IT makes sense. It maybe no follows lyrics sometimes and all, but, it follows well rhythm and sounds
Randy96: thanks.
wow... ok let me put it down so you understand.Alice Margatroid wrote:
Oh? And what do you want me to do? Delete it? Change diff name into "NO-SENSE DIFF"? lol ok choice's up to youGabi wrote:
lunatic.... just doesn't make any sense at all <_<
IT makes sense. It maybe no follows lyrics sometimes and all, but, it follows well rhythm and soundsgood. And I personnally think that without all that weird streams it would be too easy for a that-short song.. Seriously. :/
Randy96: thanks.
if a song can't be mapped anymore to follow rythm or vocals anymore, You can't continue mapping on it and but random notes cause it will sound like complete utter shit. Usualy im for free beat mapping, but
00:05:35 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wow??? WHAT WAS THE RYTHM HERE?
I personnally think that without all that weird streams it would be too easy for a that-short song.. Seriously. :/Seriously????!?!?!?! the weird streams sounds like fucking shit and should get removed. Let me just bold this for you, weird streams. you do realise why they are weird? because they do not fit. next time don't map such a short song. im pretty sure the title is wrong aswell.
also why is there a timing section that is not inherited?
your other difficulties has some potential, but your lunatic is bad.
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I'll try to change it a bit if you want
But at last some people didn't tell me to change it or somethings. If EVERY mods told me so I would totally understand but it seems to be a question of taste.
Please tell me how many people mapped 20-30scds song
Please don't tell me I'm the only one. That would be not true
also as i said it IS a question of taste
Someones told me there wasn't bad at all. But as I said I WILLL change them if you really want to rage only for poor streams.
C'mon if it isn't already did so learn japanese, go buy this album and romanize the title
do not say anything without knowing please lol
lolGabi wrote:
if a song can't be mapped anymore to follow rythm or vocals anymore, You can't continue mapping on it and but random notes cause it will sound like complete utter shit. Usualy im for free beat mapping, but
00:05:35 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wow??? WHAT WAS THE RYTHM HERE?
I'll try to change it a bit if you want
But at last some people didn't tell me to change it or somethings. If EVERY mods told me so I would totally understand but it seems to be a question of taste.
Seriously????!?!?!?! the weird streams sounds like fucking shit and should get removed. Let me just bold this for you, weird streams. you do realise why they are weird? because they do not fit. next time don't map such a short songwhy?
Please tell me how many people mapped 20-30scds song
Please don't tell me I'm the only one. That would be not true
also as i said it IS a question of taste
Someones told me there wasn't bad at all. But as I said I WILLL change them if you really want to rage only for poor streams.
im pretty sure the title is wrong aswell.AH really? LOL I ripped this from toho sotenka album. While romanized the title IS Marisa Spark (or marisa~spark.) -__-
C'mon if it isn't already did so learn japanese, go buy this album and romanize the title
do not say anything without knowing please lol
also why is there a timing section that is not inherited?I don't know : )
your other difficulties has some potential,Thanks a mil.
but your lunatic is bad.I appreciate honnest comments so thanks a lot too n_n.
Streams changed.
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Fixed all except easy. As said many times I'd like to keep this combo as it is, hope it's ok :/.
Thanks a lot Larto! =)
Thanks a lot Larto! =)
Okay then, bubbled!~
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All is fixed
Thanks a lot (:
Thanks a lot (:
☼Star☼
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Merci beaucoup!
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Kudo because I didn't noticed this, thanks a lot.kino77 wrote:
00:16:25(5,1,2,3,1,2,)-Confusing...
I don't really like other suggests, those spinners are made to let normal and easy be different from hard and lunatic n_n
But, thanks!
Very good.
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Thank you.
[Easy]
00:02:58 (1) - Fais commencer ce spinner à 00:02:85 (trait blanc) et finit le à 00:04:821 (trait rouge)
[Normal]
00:02:58 (1) - Faire commencer le spinner sur "Watashi" n'est pas une bonne idée a mon avis. Commence à 00:02:85 (blanc) et finis a 00:04:28 (blanc)
00:05:71 (2,4) - Aligne moi ces 2 notes.
[hard]
00:15:35 (6,7) - C'est bon, mais source de confusion
[Lunatic]
00:02:23 (4,5) - J'aime pas le timing de ces deux notes.
C'est tout ce que j'ai à dire.
Tu as mon étoile~
00:02:58 (1) - Fais commencer ce spinner à 00:02:85 (trait blanc) et finit le à 00:04:821 (trait rouge)
[Normal]
00:02:58 (1) - Faire commencer le spinner sur "Watashi" n'est pas une bonne idée a mon avis. Commence à 00:02:85 (blanc) et finis a 00:04:28 (blanc)
00:05:71 (2,4) - Aligne moi ces 2 notes.
[hard]
00:15:35 (6,7) - C'est bon, mais source de confusion
[Lunatic]
00:02:23 (4,5) - J'aime pas le timing de ces deux notes.
C'est tout ce que j'ai à dire.
Tu as mon étoile~
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Il devait commencer sur ore-marisa en fait xD mais en effet ils étaient bizarres.. maintenant j'aime mieux. Merci <3Sushi971 wrote:
[Easy]
00:02:58 (1) - Fais commencer ce spinner à 00:02:85 (trait blanc) et finit le à 00:04:821 (trait rouge)
[Normal]
00:02:58 (1) - Faire commencer le spinner sur "Watashi" n'est pas une bonne idée a mon avis. Commence à 00:02:85 (blanc) et finis a 00:04:28 (blanc)
pour l'alignement: ok!
Hard (6,7) - Je garde.. Désolée.
Insane (4,5) - Je me doutais qu'elles plairaient pas! Elles sont nouvelles, mais j'aimerais bien les garder. Donc on verra par la suite. Si elles gènent trop pour bizarrerie elles jarteront xD.
Merci Sushi ^.^
Hi~
[Easy]
La map est bien mais fait des slider avec des ondulation plutôt qu'avec des ligne droite, sa fait plus beau et c'est mieux a jouer mais bon après c'est toi qui voit ^_^
[Normal]
00:11:96 (x) - Rajoute une note
00:12:14 (8) - Supprime ce slider pour en faire un qui ce termine a 00:12:500. Tu en recrée un 1/2 plus loin qui ce termine a 00:13:482 puis tu crée 3 notes après.
[Lunatic]
La on peux dire qu tu t'es fait plaisir xD'
C'est du bon boulot ^^
(J'avais deja star la map 8D)
[Easy]
La map est bien mais fait des slider avec des ondulation plutôt qu'avec des ligne droite, sa fait plus beau et c'est mieux a jouer mais bon après c'est toi qui voit ^_^
[Normal]
00:11:96 (x) - Rajoute une note
00:12:14 (8) - Supprime ce slider pour en faire un qui ce termine a 00:12:500. Tu en recrée un 1/2 plus loin qui ce termine a 00:13:482 puis tu crée 3 notes après.
[Lunatic]
La on peux dire qu tu t'es fait plaisir xD'
C'est du bon boulot ^^
(J'avais deja star la map 8D)
Topic Starter
Hm.. Easy j'aime bien tel qu'il est.. Normal j'aime pas trop la note même si ça sonne pas faux, et après j'ai pas suivi mais j'ai quand même changé la partie.. Je l'aurais pas changé si t'avais pas proposé quelque chose, et le premier slider que t'as proposé je l'ai quand même fais dans la partie, donc, je juge qu'il y a de quoi te kudoter :3
Merci merci!
Merci merci!
Hey , Alice 
Easy:
Fine
Normal:
00:21:42 (3) - remove?
00:21:60 (1) - spinner start 00:21:42
Hard:
00:21:42 (1) - be silent ?
Lunatic:
00:02:23 (4) - 00:02:14
some opinions by me
Easy:
Fine
Normal:
00:21:42 (3) - remove?
00:21:60 (1) - spinner start 00:21:42
Hard:
00:21:42 (1) - be silent ?
Lunatic:
00:02:23 (4) - 00:02:14
some opinions by me
Topic Starter
hard there's something after so no silent!
Thanks <3 :3 谢谢 lol~ (learning chinese at school :/)
Thanks <3 :3 谢谢 lol~ (learning chinese at school :/)
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The hit objects look all blurry to me and it hurts the eye focus a bit. I really don't know why, try checking the alignment of your custom graphics. And normal is just a little to hard to be normal, you should tone it down a bit.
Other than that, star.
Other than that, star.
Topic Starter
Gens : I take the last sentence as a compliment so thanks. :3 And yes, more beatmaps are to come~
About the 1st spinner: I don't think so. Some mod posts says same, some others just told me to change it sometimes. No I think it's all ok, I really want to keep it. :/
Easy hm.. I checked it and I thought "the shape is horribly confusing", that's all. So I just changed the shape.. Splitting could be confusing here, I dunno why but I think it will. ):
Normal I'm redoing it easier. °д°
OK Star rate won't get down so I just changed.. I don't think there's much care about star rating btw. o: I now more feels like a normal. If it feels hardish anyway I guess there's no problem, it stays harder than easy, easier than hard. So what else? ><
Lunatic isn't that overmapped T~T! Mk, maybe it is.
But seriously EVERY known mappers get their map ranked really fast , and lots of them put deathstreams every 2 seconds even if this does not go with the song, so really i don't see my map not get ranked for overmapping -____-;
Wolfcoder there's no problem with my hitcircles here.. I don't get it.. sorry o.o
Thanks to both of you for star!!
About the 1st spinner: I don't think so. Some mod posts says same, some others just told me to change it sometimes. No I think it's all ok, I really want to keep it. :/
Easy hm.. I checked it and I thought "the shape is horribly confusing", that's all. So I just changed the shape.. Splitting could be confusing here, I dunno why but I think it will. ):
Normal I'm redoing it easier. °д°
OK Star rate won't get down so I just changed.. I don't think there's much care about star rating btw. o: I now more feels like a normal. If it feels hardish anyway I guess there's no problem, it stays harder than easy, easier than hard. So what else? ><
Lunatic isn't that overmapped T~T! Mk, maybe it is.
But seriously EVERY known mappers get their map ranked really fast , and lots of them put deathstreams every 2 seconds even if this does not go with the song, so really i don't see my map not get ranked for overmapping -____-;
Wolfcoder there's no problem with my hitcircles here.. I don't get it.. sorry o.o
Thanks to both of you for star!!
00:02:85 - Add audio preview.
Normal:
00:05:35 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:05:71 (4) - New combo.
00:08:57 (7) - New combo.
00:13:92 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:14:28 (7) - New combo.
00:16:60 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:96 (7) - New combo.
Hard:
00:23:57 - Remove break and final slider.
Lunatic:
00:23:57 - Remove break and final two circles.
Normal:
00:05:35 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:05:71 (4) - New combo.
00:08:57 (7) - New combo.
00:13:92 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:14:28 (7) - New combo.
00:16:60 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:96 (7) - New combo.
Hard:
00:23:57 - Remove break and final slider.
Lunatic:
00:23:57 - Remove break and final two circles.
Topic Starter
Normal: done.. Not all, sorry O: but it's still way better now I think.
I really want to keep Hard & Lunatic's unexpected end.. Sorry ;_;
I really want to keep Hard & Lunatic's unexpected end.. Sorry ;_;
Star for you, няшка <3
Topic Starter
ня~~~ спасибо!! <3
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Topic Starter
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I'm gonna get killed for this.
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YEY! Finally! \o/
Topic Starter
Thanks both of you. <3
няAlice Margatroid wrote:
ня~~~ спасибо!! <3