1. Hard (4.95 stars, 204 notes)
2. Normal (4.14 stars, 80 notes)

James2250 wrote:

easy:
00:20:25 (1,1) - might as well align these 2? The first 3 combos are meant to form a constant slope, so no change here.
also seeing as it is 4.1 stars (I have no idea why, its not hard) might as well just rename it normal? Considering it. If enough people want the change, I will change the diff name.

MegaManEXE wrote:

The only thing that really stood out to me was that the hitsounds in the second timing section were pretty loud. Otherwise it played well to me. Lowered the volume slightly

Shinxyn wrote:

Short maps as always~

Easy-

00:29:25 (3,1) - add clap to end and or add clap to (1)? (imo)
00:43:61 (7) - snap the end to a 1/2 beat please, aka- extend or reduce by 1/4 (this sounds awkward on 1/4 beat)
Eh, I guess I can understand the rest of the hitsounds, I really think this map is somewhere between Easy- Normal, you can probably save as seperate files and make its slightly easier/harder for both Easy and Normal

Hard- You really didn't have to double the bpm here >_< it makes the map look scary D: I wanted it to look slightly scary
00:02:03 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try a raising volume effect here, (its too loud as it is)
00:02:78 (1) - and remove this whistle?
00:11:89 (1) - I don't see the point in making such a small jump with a new combo... just get rid of jump (and new combo), or make it a better jump
00:15:53 (2,3,4,5) - ... move this bunch so (3) is on y-axis? (align with 1) (align next combo if you want)
00:30:53 (1,2) - the whistles come in kinda randomly and they're kinda lonely (in the sense of using whistles on vocal)
00:42:53 (1) - do you want to hear the "up a tick" mods..?
00:46:18 (5) - maybe replace clap with finish (seeing the break is after this)
The rest sound fine
Redo Breaks

That was short~ (the song, not the mod x_x)

tieff wrote:

Wow... Wanna see this anime.

[Easy]
I think it's Normal.
00:43:61 (7) - Clap on end of slider.
00:45:53 (2,3) - Spacing?
01:13:39 (1) - End here 01:17:25.

[Hard]
00:36:96 (3) - Remove clap.
00:37:39 (1) - Add clap.
00:37:61 (2) - Whistle.

Star, of course!

gdeath wrote:

all fine
though i mod your map seriously,i can not find any mistakes.just some hitsound should be improved
maybe because of my little experience.however i think your map is perfect!

hard:
00:44:467 (1,3) - clap. i think sound better
00:46:181 (5) volume is somewhat lower.you can make a timing and increase the sound.

normal:
00:53:681 (3) - clap.the end of slider

star~

Breeze wrote:

hi blissfulyoshi

[normal]
I can't find something wrong, great

[hard]
00:23:252 (6) - put it 1/8 tick foward to match music better I really don't want to put things onto eighth notes, since it would throw ppl off, but thanks to this mod, I finally figured out what Ephemeral was saying earlier. I going to wait for second opinions before I change this though.
00:26:681 (6) - ^^
00:28:395 (6) - ^^
00:30:109 (6) - ^^
01:15:752 (7) - ^^

blissfulyoshi wrote:

I really don't want to put things onto eighth notes, since it would throw ppl off, but thanks to this mod, I finally figured out what Ephemeral was saying earlier. I going to wait for second opinions before I change this though.

alvisto wrote:

Hi, blissfulyoshi ! ^o^ Nice song !

My opinion

NORMAL
00:27:539 - Imo, end the slider here sounds better. It matches the background drums too. changed

HARD

blissfulyoshi wrote:

I really don't want to put things onto eighth notes, since it would throw ppl off, but thanks to this mod, I finally figured out what Ephemeral was saying earlier. I going to wait for second opinions before I change this though.

I think 1/4 is quite fine. thx for your opinion

Nothing much else to mod, cause this map is good. Star !

minyeob wrote:

[Overall]
Hmm...... mp3 sound is low. Could you make louder? Done, but lost a slight bit of audio quality.

[Normal]
00:45:32 (1) - New combo? Why? It felt like a slight pause, but you are right. Removed

[Hard]
00:54:00 (3) - Extend 1/2 beat like 00:50:57 (3)? Fixed. Surprised I missed that.

Star!
You have to move this map to pending beatmaps I just wanted a few more opinions before moving it. Moved it now.

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Consider adding all offsets by 20 or so? (Give or take a few ms?) The current offset's a bit early and I seem to get more 300s when playing on the new one. *see below*

[Hard]:
A lot of the rhythm works on 1/2 streams where a 1/4 can work just fine (At areas such as 00:29:89 (5,6) - (6) can work just as a 1/4 as well). I don't think there's any problem with that and I'm sure it's intentional. I just couldn't resist pointing something out. :U Intentional, not changing.
01:15:75 (7) - Move 1/2 forward? (In terms of 280bpm) It felt more natural for the note to be at the start of the syllable, so no change.

Takuma wrote:

I get 2,083 ms for the offset. *see below*

Normal:
00:45:36 (2,3,4) - Move (4) closer to the rest of the combo. Compare with 00:44:51 (1,2,3). Surprised I did not notice this. Fixed.

vytalibus wrote:

Takuma's offset sounds late. Not to mention if you notice by the kiai timing, the flashes tend to be unfitting. I suggest you move it to 7,004 ms. This solves both the earlyness of the notes and the correction for kiai timing. *see below*

[Normal]
01:01:86 (5) - Just a suggestion: extend the slider so that the end point goes to the red tick in front. I tried doing this, but it did not fit very well. Still I am not very satisfied with my current arrangement. No change for now, but I might change it my own way in the near future. Thanks for giving me this suggestion though.

[Hard]
Why is the BPM at 280? The BPM for this difficulty is doubled because of the slider speed velocity. The slider speed velocity is 1.4 at 280 BPM for this diff, which would equal to 2.8 at 140 BPM. Unfortunately, 2.8 is not an obtainable slider velocity at 140 BPM (2.6 is the limit in the editor). Since I wanted this slider velocity to apply to the entire song, it would be sort of pointless to go create a 140 BPM section then add an inherited section right afterward to change it 2x BPM when one timing section could do the same job.

I'm troubled by the fact that you used a non-inherited timing section that uses a BPM twice faster than the original, and so I need an explanation for this.

K2J wrote:

[Normal]
Nice!

[Hard]
01:00:14 (1) - Stood out in my mind as sort of close. I would recommend having the slider before go in a different direction, even just angling the left leg down a few notches. fixed

mrtn wrote:

try offset 2063. fixed

[normal]
no problems

[hard]
divide the bpm by 2. The sliders are too fast imo I like the sense of speed the sliders give, so I don't plan to change it.

starred =)

ztrot wrote:

Timing seems fine and map give me no problems
Bubble~