[General]
*Raise OD by 2 ticks and HP drain by 1 tick for balanced settings.
<Prophecy>
<ONE>
<Yoake Umarekuru Shoujo>
<Being>
finally
Star~
/me eats P A N
- You should add all songs titles to tags.
- Remove "Shana" from tags - its already part of your title
- Some titles in your Creator's Words spelled wrong:SPOILERCheck this please:
http://www.kotoko.asia/disco/
http://www.ivesound.jp/music/
Blaze -> BLAZE
Yoake umarekuru shoujo -> Yoake Umarekuru Shoujo
Sociemetry -> Sociometry
Hishoku no sora -> Hishoku no Sora
Light my fire -> Light My Fire - 07:03:049 - set preview point here for more epicness
- Will you add kiai time?
- You must add reversearrow to complete your skin
- particle100.png, particle300.png, particle50.png, snow.png seems codeless, remove them
- Timing feels off. You should catch someone who really good at it.
*Raise OD by 2 ticks and HP drain by 1 tick for balanced settings.
<Prophecy>
- This part sounds better with normal sampleset
- 00:20:419 (6) - NC follow new part of music
- 00:35:041 (1) - Add finish for consistency?
- 00:38:949 (4,5) - This is kinda hard to hit those notes, i suggest you make slider instead or add 2 reverses at 00:38:697 (3) -
- This part sounds better with normal sampleset
- 00:50:928 (1,2,3) - Please keep consistent spacing between those notes
- 00:53:389 (1) - Add whistle follow vocals
- 00:53:858 (2) - ^
- 00:53:858 (2,3) - I wold recomment you change them to slider to follow vocals better
- 00:55:967 (6,7) - Shorter (6) by 1 tick and begin (7) at this point to follow vocals better:
- 00:56:787 (8) - it sounds kinda weird, how about add note at 00:56:670?
- 01:08:741 (12,13) - Please keep consistent spacing here, it very hard to catch (13)
- 01:12:608 (11) - Finish at tail
- 01:48:642 (4,5,6) - I prefer perfect stack instead of manual one, it doesnt looks good here
- 01:54:385 (5,6) - Thats kinda boring. How about change those 2 notes to slider?
- 01:54:736 (7) - That finish is unneeded imo. If you want to have it to emphazire vocals reduse volume at it a bit
- 01:55:674 (3) - ^
- 01:56:611 (5) - And you can add here one to emphazire vocals
<ONE>
- 02:17:753 (4) - NC to make this stack more readable
- 02:22:525 (6) - NC
- 02:35:252 (5) - Please dont use normal-sampleset here, it doesnt fit IMO
<Yoake Umarekuru Shoujo>
- 02:56:914 (2,3) - Dont really like how they flows, mirrored sliders imp doesnt fit. Try something like this instead?
- 03:12:189 (1,2,3) - same as 01:54:385 - that would make your placement more variable here!
- 03:25:709 (1,2,3) - That part is kinda hard to hit: make spacing consistent maybe?
- 03:28:667 (5) - Ctrl+G?
- 03:30:780 (5,6,1) - Pretty much same as above, that's really uncomfortable to play at this part. Keep consistent spacing.
- 03:40:498 (1,2,3) - I dont see any reason to keep single notes here. Dont ignore cool drum rhythm, make stream here instead ;p
- 03:45:991 - 03:47:259 - add spinner here
- 03:50:216 (4,5) - Merge them to one slider to follow vocals better here
- 03:52:751 (1,2) - Remove (2), make (1) one tick longer - for better rhythm
- 04:00:885 - Add note please, there is no reason to random break stream here
- 04:05:744 (2,3) - Revert them to slider
- 04:18:103 (6) - why normal-sampleset here?
<Being>
- 04:28:556 (4,5) - Raise DS to 0.80 for better playability
- 04:29:569 (1,3) - Hitnormals sounds kinda random here... If you're following drums then why you ignored another one? At least reduse volume here please
- 04:31:191 (1) - Remove finish from slider
- 04:35:448 (8) - Missed finish at the beginning/list]
<Sense>- Normal-sampleset works better at this part
- 05:04:232 (6) - Ctrl+G?
- 05:10:303 (5) - NC follow pattern
- 05:11:017 (9,1) - this pattern looks kinda confusing, stack them perfectly please
- 05:21:374 (6) - NC follow pattern
- 05:27:089 (6) - same ^
- 05:31:017 (6) - Remove useless clap
all good but why you spamming with normal-finishes with normal-sampleset while using soft sample in a whole part? change to soft please or use normal-sampleset at this part
<Joint>- 06:20:740 (8) - it plays kinda weird, can you please keep DS consistent? Jump to next note feels more natural
- 06:22:240 (1) - Missed finish at the beginning
- 06:25:407 (2) - ^
<U/n>- Normal sampleset feels better at this part
- 06:42:913 (5,6,1) - Spacing issue. Also i'd suggest you revert (5) and (6) to slider to follow rhythm better
- 06:54:326 (2,3) - Re-arrage them like this?
- Normal sampleset works better at this part
- 07:12:403 (5,6,7) - Keep consistent spacing please
- 07:23:049 (5,6,1) - There are tiny stacking issure
- 07:58:356 (1,2) - try this:
Star~
/me eats P A N