10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello ^^ Random mod!

[Easy]
00:21:544 - Add a note here for consistency.
01:08:492 (2) - Try this? /*Both sliders don't have the same time length, so I'll decline this, also using a similar shaped one would ruin the flow there a bit, I like to make smoothie flow on Easy diffs.
Pretty much using 01:07:334 (1) -

[Normal]
00:13:965 (4,2) - Stack? /*I rarely stack non-consecutive notes as I don't like too much how they look.
00:44:597 (1,2) - Add soft finish no their heads? it sounds better imo /*It doesn't have the enough emphasis to add a finish there :p
00:54:702 (1,2) - ^ /*^
01:04:807 (3) - first object appearing in Kai would usually be a NC /*It usually is, but as it's the same phrase for vocals, I think it's ok to leave it as a single combo, tho I'll see what other people say here, so keeping an eye here.
01:16:071 (3,3) - Try to stack 01:16:071 (3) - tail over 01:17:439 (3) - head? /*As I said for the first suggestion, I don't like stack like it too much.

[Hard]
Nice *o*

Hope this helps~! ^^

Thanks for your random mod <:

Hello~
From my modding queue
Here are some suggestions. And here is some issue I think.

That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue. .

azuretwinight wrote:

Hello~
From my modding queue
Here are some suggestions. And here is some issue I think.

General
Good song but little hard for beginners to play. /*The song itself has a quite intense rhythm, so the map should be similar.

Easy
Yes, really tricky and too much red ticks.
A lot of long sliders are not so good to see, make them look better, don't use too much control point on the slider.01:00:386 (2) 01:34:478 (1) 01:37:952 (2,1) /*I think they fit nicely with the vocals/guitar, so I'm keeping them :p
00:51:544 (4) - move to 00:51:439 /*The beat is stronger here and follows better the guitar imo.
00:28:702 (4) - add clap on the turning point of the slider /*That'd break the consistency of my hitsounding, also sounds a bit loud imo.
00:50:807 (3) - add clap on the ending point of the slider /*^
01:39:531 (1) - remove the clap on the end of the slider /*Done
01:47:005 (2) - remove clap on the end of the slider /*Removed from the beginning instead, sounds better.

Normal
Nothing too much to say, but I am hesitating about the mapset is 1/3 or 1/4 will be better. If you use 1/3 some lyric can't fit it well.For example:01:07:860 (4) I think it should be on the blue tick of 1/4. And some lyrics is on 1/3. So I'm not sure. Just a suggestion /*The song is full 1/3 :p
01:13:334 - add a note here. /*It'd be a bit hard in this part as the next slider would be 2/3 beat ahead

Hard
Nice feeling of Hard.Especially hitsounds are good. /*Thanks <:
00:46:702 (4,5) - maybe not 2 note here if you want to stress the word 'fuss' but not the drum.Also here 00:56:807 (4,5) /*Indeed, the last note is there for drums, also allows to read better the next note as it is 1/1 beat ahead and not 4/3 beat, which is quite tricky and maybe frustrating.
01:00:281 - maybe the long slider starts here. /*Following drums there, it's more comfy to play imo.
01:37:847 (1,2,3,4) - what will happen if you add turns on the 4 sliders? I think this part should be more noisy~ /*That's a slight jumpy part, and should be enough to emphasize the guitar there, adding repeats would be overmapping and would kill that part of the song :p

That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue. .

Thanks for the mod <:

hi m4m

[General]

You should resize the BG current was 1228 x 767

Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).

[Hard]
00:41:755 I guest you miss a note here.
00:55:334 add 2/3 slider ( start 00:55:334 end 00:55:544 )
if you can change 00:54:702 (1,3) - to a bit more curve if you add slider above or try somethings that look good.( curve )

01:04:176 (1,2) - use volume 20 , 30 instead of 50 , 60 ( it has no instrument sound there and i think it's not fit for vocal if you use too loud.)
01:19:334 add 1/3 slider
01:47:531 add 1/3 return slider

[Normal]
after test play I think Ar 6 is make alot of easier to play than Ar 5

00:47:123 (1) - this should end at 00:47:755 mistake ?
00:49:965 (2) - add return ?
00:51:439 (4) - increase length to 00:51:755
01:00:386 (3) - I don't even know how to make curve like this.
01:04:176 (1,2) - same as hard
01:19:228 (6) - change to
01:25:005 (1) - end at 01:27:110 is better
01:49:320 (1) - delete and make 1/3 slider at 01:49:215

[Easy]

00:27:228 (2) - add return ?
00:42:702 (1) - delete and make 1/1 slider at 00:42:386
00:49:965 add note
00:51:860 add note
00:56:597 (3) - delete and 00:55:650 (2) - add return
01:47:952 (1,3) - this shape seem plain for music can you change like 01:42:689 (2) - especially 01:49:636 (3) -


sorry about some mod in normal and easy i'm didn't even make a 1/3 at once so I can't determine the difficult compare to 1/2 maps.

This 's best that I can do. I hope some of them was useful.

*** your map are very good I'll give a star without hesitation.

M4M maps

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/66957

Mizuho - Tobira Hiraite, Futari Mirai e -Fantom Euro Mix-

Hi! M4M Req!

[General]

I love Maon Kurosaki! <3
But i dunno remember in what order you have to mention it on a beatmap, if you're sure that's ok.

[Easy]

00:12:913 : Soundly, it's correct, but for an easier rythm, i suggest you to finish on the white tick. (This is valuable on the same type after).
00:23:018 : Enlarge it by a reverse?
00:40:807 : How about copy/paste the previous one and make it symetrical?
01:12:386 : NC?
01:18:597 : Align it correctly? (Meaning that you have to down it a little bit).

Nice diff and following sound, the only thing that could be frustrating is it's an 1/3 map, and newest players are not used of this.

[Normal]

CS + 1?

00:15:860 : The entire slider don't need whistle sound, moreover when it's strange to hear it. Try to put the whistle on the middle and end of the slider.
00:21:439 : Imo i don't like 1 combo / 1 slider, if someone else suggest you to change it, maybe consider this.
00:48:071 : I'm not sure if this slider and the previous one are perfectly parellel dunno check it.
01:04:176 : These sounds are strange, moreover when on the music there's nothing.

This diff is a better on the rythm and more enjoyable to play, else on the kiai that you follow a bit the lyrics. But it's my opinion of course.

[Hard]

00:44:597 : Make a copy/paste of the next slider (or the opposite).
00:46:492 : Try to stack it on the slider n°1 begins?
01:04:176 : Same as normal.
01:20:414 : Put it at 169;319 (x;y)?

This diff is not bad, but i'm disappointed that there's not enough jumps (exept the last part). :<

That's all i can say. Gl hf for rank.

Thanks both for modding, really noticed a few spots I was forgetting :3

"Random Mod"

[Easy]
Definitely a harder easy than usual as you mentioned and 1/3 will throw all the beginners off (obviously not your fault there). An interesting change but would like to see more opinions about it.
00:39:544 (4) - would expect new combo here instead
00:47:123 (1) - sounds strange ending on 1/3, extend to 00:47:755?
01:22:386 (3) - I don't know about this following lyrics when everything around it is following the main beat, I would keep it on white ticks
01:39:531 (1) - feels out of place and isn't really following much

[Normal]
New combos seem to go off following the main music rhythm towards the end , will give some suggestions.
01:16:071 (3,3) - would look nicer if stacked
01:08:492 (5) - clap sounds odd on the end as there isn't a main beat there
01:17:965 (4,5) - ^
01:35:110 (3) - new combo here instead of 01:32:583 (1).
01:36:373 (1) - remove new combo
01:40:162 (2) - new combo here instead of 01:39:531 (1).
01:41:320 (1) - remove new combo
01:42:689 (4,1) - switch combo

[Hard]
Same combo advice as Normal (listen to music carefully when checking and you should see what I mean by them)
00:20:492 (2,3) - jump doesn't really fit (oops last mod says not enough jumps...well I still say it doesn't fit)
00:40:807 (3) - finish is out of place to me
01:01:860 (1,2,1,2) - kind of wished this followed the lyrics more then just repeating sliders
01:17:965 (3,4) - still don't now if claps are a good idea here

A good job overall, I think Hard is my favorite difficulty just because it becomes easier to follow 1/3 the more continuous hitobjects get but that's just how it is, have your star! Good luck on bubble/rank.

James2250 wrote:

"Random Mod"

[Easy]
Definitely a harder easy than usual as you mentioned and 1/3 will throw all the beginners off (obviously not your fault there). An interesting change but would like to see more opinions about it. /*I tried to keep as simple as possible the rhythm without making it dull, I'm quite happy with the result.
00:39:544 (4) - would expect new combo here instead /*Oops
00:47:123 (1) - sounds strange ending on 1/3, extend to 00:47:755? /*Second person that points this, done.
01:22:386 (3) - I don't know about this following lyrics when everything around it is following the main beat, I would keep it on white ticks /*You're right, moved.
01:39:531 (1) - feels out of place and isn't really following much /*It was supposed to follow the guitar, but well, I think putting more objects there would suit better.

[Normal]
New combos seem to go off following the main music rhythm towards the end , will give some suggestions.
01:16:071 (3,3) - would look nicer if stacked /*I don't like too much stacking objects that aren't consecutive >.<
01:08:492 (5) - clap sounds odd on the end as there isn't a main beat there /*Oops.
01:17:965 (4,5) - ^ /*Fixed
01:35:110 (3) - new combo here instead of 01:32:583 (1). /*Done.
01:36:373 (1) - remove new combo /*Done.
01:40:162 (2) - new combo here instead of 01:39:531 (1). /*Done.
01:41:320 (1) - remove new combo /*Done.
01:42:689 (4,1) - switch combo /*Done.

[Hard]
Same combo advice as Normal (listen to music carefully when checking and you should see what I mean by them)
00:20:492 (2,3) - jump doesn't really fit (oops last mod says not enough jumps...well I still say it doesn't fit) /*Reduced the jump a bit, I think it somehow fits, this jump was there since the beginning.
00:40:807 (3) - finish is out of place to me /*Removed.
01:01:860 (1,2,1,2) - kind of wished this followed the lyrics more then just repeating sliders /*Did something interesting here, indeed adds more fun.
01:17:965 (3,4) - still don't now if claps are a good idea here /*Oops, I think that was a mistake of mine, fixed.

A good job overall, I think Hard is my favorite difficulty just because it becomes easier to follow 1/3 the more continuous hitobjects get but that's just how it is, have your star! Good luck on bubble/rank.

Thanks a lot for your mod, I really didn't notice that mess in comboing.

Hi. From my modding queue.

Use the most precise grid for easier moving of objects.

[Easy]
00:16:176 (3,1)
- Move each object so they don't overlap each other.

[Normal]
00:15:228 (2)
- Move this so it covers green (4). a.k.a. move to x:121 y:69

[Hard]
00:50:360 (3)
- Rotate this by 13 degrees clockwise using Selection Centre.


Not much to find.
Or nothing I can find.

Sorry.

Mira-san wrote:

Hi. From my modding queue.

Use the most precise grid for easier moving of objects.

[Easy]
00:16:176 (3,1)
- Move each object so they don't overlap each other. /*The overlap is intentional there for flow/aesthetics purpose.

[Normal]
00:15:228 (2)
- Move this so it covers green (4). a.k.a. move to x:121 y:69 /*I don't like to stack non-consecutive objects too much

[Hard]
00:50:360 (3)
- Rotate this by 13 degrees clockwise using Selection Centre. /*Well, I think I'll apply this as that slider doesn't look too good now for me lol.


Not much to find.
Or nothing I can find.

Sorry. /*Don't worry

Thanks for modding :3

(not m4m and no kd) Just a comment: the kiai part is not good as the previous part. You'd better to re-consider the structure of kiai part, or try to use the same idea of previous part.

If you're talking about Hard diff, I can already see what are you referring to, it shouldn't be a big problem changing it, thanks for the feedback popner

Edit: Done :3

Hi there; let's mod this now~

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General

1. I'm not sure if it's just me, but I think the mp3's quality is... not really good.

>Easy

1. 00:24:386 (2,3) - Uh, don't you think the flow is weird here because the angle of (2)'s curve is clashing with the flow of the movement from the beginning up to this part? Maybe make them look like this?
2. 00:28:071 (3) - I understand what are you trying to follow here, but won't the slider be more readable if you started this slider at 00:27:860 instead, since the vocal is stronger there?
3. 00:42:071 - There isn't any heavy-sounding (?) instrument that is being played here, so I think you should remove the finish and just use Auto for the addition (although the last one is not that necessary).
4. 00:51:544 (4) - Move this to 00:51:439? It's actually easier to read the rhythm here that way.
5. 00:52:807 (1,2) - Since this song is at 190 BPM, I think a stack can be confusing to the new players... Unstack them, I guess?
6. 01:47:952 - Add a whistle here? Sounds nice to follow the instrument that is being played here...
7. 01:49:636 - And add a drum-whistle here, for the same reason as the suggestion above?

>Normal

1. Since a 1/3 Normal, is, IMO, pretty much in a gray zone in terms of difficulty spread, maybe consider playing with the spacing in some places to make them more intuitive? One such spot where the intuitiveness is very bad is 01:45:215 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3).
2. 00:40:386 - Uh, more hitsound suggestion: Add a whistle here to emphasize the vocal?
3. 00:41:334 - ^
4. 00:47:123 (4) - Is this not NC'd by mistake? Because, you know, I'm sure enough it is.
5. 00:56:807 - Remove the whistle here to accentuate the whistle at 00:56:597?

>Hard

1. Same as Normal about playing with the spacing; try to play the diff by yourself. If you can feel that a pattern doesn't play intuitively, tweak it to get a better flow.
2. 00:15:755 (5,6) - Make the spacing between them a bit larger... maybe at ~1.6x? It will make the flow here better. Like, far better.
3. 00:20:492 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:20:807 (3,4,5) - ^ (Also 1.6x; preferably larger, though, since I'm still confused about the right value.)
5. 00:30:702 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ (~1.3x here?)
6. 01:18:597 (6,7) - Split them into two 1/3 sliders instead (which means mapping 01:18:702 too)? It just feels unnatural having 01:18:702 unmapped, somehow.
7. 01:24:702 (5,1) - Just ranting, but due to the difference of the two sliders' speed, even with those ticks on the second slider, the change of the velocity is... unexpected, to say the least. Maybe it's just me; I don't know.
8. 01:49:531 (2) - I'd rather see a(n unstacked) stream of 1/3s instead. It's very hard to read how much repeats are there in the slider itself. It will be confusing, you know...

Well... See you on another map?

Good luck on the way

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there; let's mod this now~

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General

1. I'm not sure if it's just me, but I think the mp3's quality is... not really good. /*I took the mp3 that was for the contest, it doesn't sound bad o3o

>Easy

1. 00:24:386 (2,3) - Uh, don't you think the flow is weird here because the angle of (2)'s curve is clashing with the flow of the movement from the beginning up to this part? Maybe make them look like this? /*Nice, done.
2. 00:28:071 (3) - I understand what are you trying to follow here, but won't the slider be more readable if you started this slider at 00:27:860 instead, since the vocal is stronger there? /*Having a long slider sounds a bit weird, I prefer where it is now.
3. 00:42:071 - There isn't any heavy-sounding (?) instrument that is being played here, so I think you should remove the finish and just use Auto for the addition (although the last one is not that necessary). /*Done.
4. 00:51:544 (4) - Move this to 00:51:439? It's actually easier to read the rhythm here that way. /*I think it's better to keep following the drums there, like in the beginning, players would be used to that.
5. 00:52:807 (1,2) - Since this song is at 190 BPM, I think a stack can be confusing to the new players... Unstack them, I guess? /*Done
6. 01:47:952 - Add a whistle here? Sounds nice to follow the instrument that is being played here... /*Actually it's in the next beat for the other difficulties, but I think having it here doesn't hurt, done
7. 01:49:636 - And add a drum-whistle here, for the same reason as the suggestion above? /*Done

>Normal

1. Since a 1/3 Normal, is, IMO, pretty much in a gray zone in terms of difficulty spread, maybe consider playing with the spacing in some places to make them more intuitive? One such spot where the intuitiveness is very bad is 01:45:215 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3). /*Made something here.
2. 00:40:386 - Uh, more hitsound suggestion: Add a whistle here to emphasize the vocal? /*Done
3. 00:41:334 - ^ /*Done
4. 00:47:123 (4) - Is this not NC'd by mistake? Because, you know, I'm sure enough it is. [/color]
5. 00:56:807 - Remove the whistle here to accentuate the whistle at 00:56:597? /*Done

>Hard

1. Same as Normal about playing with the spacing; try to play the diff by yourself. If you can feel that a pattern doesn't play intuitively, tweak it to get a better flow. /*I actually tested it a lot, there shouldn't be too many weird spots.
2. 00:15:755 (5,6) - Make the spacing between them a bit larger... maybe at ~1.6x? It will make the flow here better. Like, far better. /*Increased only a bit, 1.6 it too far away imo.
3. 00:20:492 (2,3) - ^ /*A large jump isn't too fitting here, increased a bit though.
4. 00:20:807 (3,4,5) - ^ (Also 1.6x; preferably larger, though, since I'm still confused about the right value.) /*^
5. 00:30:702 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ (~1.3x here?) /*^
6. 01:18:597 (6,7) - Split them into two 1/3 sliders instead (which means mapping 01:18:702 too)? It just feels unnatural having 01:18:702 unmapped, somehow. /*But there's nothing interesting to map there.
7. 01:24:702 (5,1) - Just ranting, but due to the difference of the two sliders' speed, even with those ticks on the second slider, the change of the velocity is... unexpected, to say the least. Maybe it's just me; I don't know. /*I'll see what other people says about this one.
8. 01:49:531 (2) - I'd rather see a(n unstacked) stream of 1/3s instead. It's very hard to read how much repeats are there in the slider itself. It will be confusing, you know... /*I'll try with a stacked streams like the ones before in the diff.

Well... See you on another map?

Good luck on the way

Thanks for the mod o/

HI~ DakeDekaane

Natsu wrote:

HI~ DakeDekaane

General:

1. Clean owo

Hard:

1. OD6 plz siento que juega mejor para una hard y acordate que 1/3 es bastante dificil llevar buena acc mas que usaste algunos cuantos streams owo /*Ok, aunque me gusta mas OD7 </3
2. 00:16:807 (1,2) - mm Fijate que esto me molesto un poco cuando lo e staba jugando sinceramente el dos no se mira muy bien conectado con el 1 tambien el 1 se ve demasiado cerca del 00:16:176 (6) - hablando visualmente en el juego me gustaria que movieras el 00:16:807 (1) - a x:243 y:172 y el 00:17:439 (2) - x:65 y:70 te quedaria mas simetrico 00:16:807 (1,2) - y 00:16:176 (6,1) - ya no se verian tan cerca xq por cierta razon q desconozco a lo mejor culpa de gero esto me confundia D: /*LOL pobre Gero que culpa tiene, pero hecho.
3. 00:31:228 (4,5) - a lo mejor queres subir esto un poco la verdad es que 00:29:334 (8,9,1) - lo tocan y pues cuenado lo jugas como q no se siene muy comodo unos dos grid arriba ayuda /*Me parece buena la idea.
4. 00:28:492 - 00:28:807 - 00:29:123 - solamente por curiosidad porque no los mapeaste? o.o tiene un sonido bastante importante ademas sin ellos como que se rompe la consistencia con 00:51:123 (4,5,6) - este ultimo me gusta un poco ma como juega y sigue la musica tratalo en el anterior y mira que tal owo /*La parte que tu mencionas es mas intensa que esta, ya que tiene percusiones y la guitarra, y por esa misma razon los mappe alla y aca no, para marcar una diferencia :p
   00:41:123 se que solo hay vocales aqui pero en mi opinion se siente bastante raro jugar escuchar la vocal fuerte y no tener alguna accion para realizar aqui o.o bueno yo preferiria que lo mapearas con un circle o si vos pensas que no lo mereze a lo mejor trata esto: /*Esto haria un ritmo algo complejo, ademas las percusiones suenan mas agradables aca.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:45:544 (2) - rota esto en -10 y movelo un poco porquye el flow con el slider anterior como que esta algo mal ahorita owo trata de que fluya mejor /*Ok
6. 01:11:439 (7,8) - aqui tambien como que esto no juega bien y el movimiento del 7 al 8 no se da naturalmente se siente un poco forzado /*01:11:123 (6,7,8) estan formando un bonito triangulo :I
7. 01:30:373 se te olvido un whistle en la cola del slider owo si fue a proposito agregalo porque suena muy bien c: /*Pero si ya lo tiene o3o
8. 01:42:689 (2,4) - mmm este blanket si esta realmente mal trata de mover la forma del (4) para que se vea mas sexy owo /*Oops, arreglado
9. 01:46:057 (4) - mmm la forma del slider podria ser bastante mejor imo tambien el flow hacia el 5 no es muy tarual q digamos se siente bastante forzado e igual el flow hacia el (6) no se creo q seria mejor que rehicieras los 3 sliders imo /*Ok
10. 00:58:386 a lo mejor NC el antijump es algo dificil de leer en el primer juego o.o no estoy seguro perocreo q seria mejor e igual el combo no te quedaria corto ya que dejarias consistente con 01:00:386 (1,2,3) - /*Hice algo de magia por aca, no pondre el NC pq es la misma frase en las voces.
11. 01:34:899 partes como esta deberian ser mapeadas en mi opinion sinceramente la guitarra suena bastante sexy /*Siento que esta nota es parte del mismo hit que da en 01:34:794, aparte que hace mas natural el 1/1 gap en 01:34:373 (8,1).
12. 01:38:478 (3,5) - nazi pero se tocan entre ellos mmm desactiva el grid snap y movelo una miseria para que no te pase eso aqui /*y so nazi :Y
13. 01:40:162 a lo mejor intenta darle otra forma a este slider sinceramente la guitarra sigue sonando sexy creo q merece un sexy sllider para seguir mejor la musica /*Para ser honesto aqui ya no tenia ideas, hice algunos nuevos sliders :p

Normal:

1. AR 5 OD 5 se siente bastante desbalanceado trata de usar OD 4 para balancear mas la diff /*Como baje el OD de la hard, ok.
2. 00:11:755 (1,2,3) - trata de mover el 2 para que de mejor flow hacia el 3 actualmente juega algo forzado :l mira ahorita juega algo asi: /*>.>
   
   SPOILER

   
3. pero no seria mejor que jugara asi:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:13:965 (4) - por curiosidad porque no stackeaste eso con 00:15:228 (2) - se veria mejor el mapa mas limpio si lo hicieras creo owo /*No me gusta mucho hacer ese tipo de stacks :p
5. 00:40:807 no deberia haber un NC aqui sinceramente los has estado usando regularmente donde las vocales cambian y tambien seria consistente con tu hard /*Ok, se me paso aca.
6. 00:49:018 (3,4,1,2) - mmm solo es mi opinion pero para una normal hacer dos stack seguidas como que no jugara muy confortable para jugadores principantes owo /*Mi spread es mas un Tricky Easy > Tough Normal > Challenging Hard, asi que pienso que esta algo bien esta parte, para no hacer el gap entre Normal y Hard tan grande.
7. 00:50:807 (3,4) - es minima pero trata de ajustar la distancia aqui /*y so nazi >:v done
8. 01:03:228 (4,1) - el gap no es tan grande para ignorar la distance o.O /*Ajustado un poco >.>
9. 01:04:176 (1,2,3) - estas stack juegan realmente mal para una normal es dificil de leer para jugadores sin mucha experiencia seria mejor q trataras algun otro pattern aqui imo /*Misma explicacion que en 00:49:018 (3,4,1,2)
10. 01:08:492 (5,6) - podrias arreglar un poco el flow aqui juega no muy natural /*Mi blanket :c
11. 01:10:492 (2,3,4,5,1) - esto se mira feo y overlapeado en juego o.o trata de hacerlo un poco mas limpio /*Mientras se juega es casi imperceptible, ya que (4) desaparece justo cuando (1) aparece :p
12. 01:20:913 (3,4) - stackea esto bien /*y u so nazi
13. 01:45:847 (2,3) - el salto es a proposito? porque no juega nada bien en mi opinion :l mejor segui manteniendo la distancia porque si sera bastante sorpresivo para los jugadores dado q es la primera vez q lo usas /*ok o3o
14. 01:46:794 (4,5) - o.o y esto si juega bastante remal espero que no sea a proposito orz /*ok o3o

Easy:

1. a mira por ejemplo ahorita tenes od2 od5 y od 7 de lam easy a la normal se arma un buen gap que queda mal seria mejor tener od2 od4 od6 la spread mejoraria bastante
2. 00:25:544 (3,1) - mmm el gap es pequeño deberias seguir usando la distancia supongo /*Pero si casi no se notaba >.>
3. 00:39:544 (1,2) - se jugaria mejor si los pusieras symetricos en el grid god kill me plz yo hablando de symetria hue /*Pues yo digo que se jugaria igual pq el pattern es simetrico, solo que con el eje algo inclinado.
4. 00:52:176 un slider siguiera mejor la musica q el circulo se siente muyy vacion aqui 00:52:492 /*Tienes razon, se oye mejor con un slider =w=
5. 01:23:755 (4,1) - podrias mejor esta blanket mucho masmira como se ve ahorita: /*Ni idea que paso ahi LOL, era un blanket bonito, arreglado.
   
   SPOILER

   

GL mod in spanish cuz I CAN :3[/strike]

Gracias por el mod Natsu, me ayudo mucho en algunos puntos :p

Hello DakeDekaane | I from my mod queues | Sorry for my slow Mod

[Easy]
Nothing to Do here!

[Normal]
Note 01:17:123 try to snap 01:14:913 (Start)

[Hard]
01:12:913 (2,3 (Start, End)) try to snap note 01:11:439 (7,8 (Start))

So your map is best, But i still do it good for you this is your choice
anyway thx for belive my performent to use my mod queues

The "bad" stacking is unnoticeable while playing, and it'd be the same if it's perfectly stacked, also the one in Hard would ruin my parallel sliders pattern, so I have to decline both suggestions, sorry >.<

[Hard]
00:56:913 (5,1) - This note feels a bit awkward not very noticeable while playing but there's a slight depression on the angle here.
00:59:123 (6,7,8,9) - I like patterns like this one!
01:10:492 (4,5,6,7,8) - The flow at the end here (7,8) looks really awkward compared to the rest of the pattern, dunno how to fix it without messing up the spacing of the map tho, but next time think of a more 5 note pattern than a 4 note pattern with an extra note at the end.
I like what you did with the sliders to express your feelings on the guitar sounds.
I like your hitsounding.

[Normal]
Nothing to really pick at, I liked how the sliderticks lined up with the music for the most part producing sounds that make sense. Also another good job with hitsounds.

[Easy]
Nothing to pick at here either.

[Overall]
Score spread and difficulty spread are pretty good.
Once again, liked the use of hitsounds.

Good luck getting this ranked!

Buenas, sólo quería decirte algo rápido y sencillo.

La Source correcta debería ser 学園黙示録 High School of the Dead
Agrega Gakuen Mokushiroku en los tags.

no kudos.

Sakura wrote:

[Hard]
00:56:913 (5,1) - This note feels a bit awkward not very noticeable while playing but there's a slight depression on the angle here. /*Improved the flow here, also made that purple color a bit more bright, so it outstands better.
00:59:123 (6,7,8,9) - I like patterns like this one! /*I kinda feel bad because I used it a lot here, but it feels nice to play in this song.
01:10:492 (4,5,6,7,8) - The flow at the end here (7,8) looks really awkward compared to the rest of the pattern, dunno how to fix it without messing up the spacing of the map tho, but next time think of a more 5 note pattern than a 4 note pattern with an extra note at the end. /*I can recall some people told me something about here, flow would be better now.
I like what you did with the sliders to express your feelings on the guitar sounds.
I like your hitsounding.

[Normal]
Nothing to really pick at, I liked how the sliderticks lined up with the music for the most part producing sounds that make sense. Also another good job with hitsounds.

[Easy]
Nothing to pick at here either.

[Overall]
Score spread and difficulty spread are pretty good.
Once again, liked the use of hitsounds.

Good luck getting this ranked!

Thank you Sakura, I'm really glad \:D/
Also comments like this encourages me to keep using my hitsounding style (at first time I thought people would complain about many whistles but I see now they're fine).

Source fixed and tags added (and a few more), thanks Cloud :3

[Normal]
00:12:702 (2) - set the sampleset to drum and additions to soft
00:15:228 (2) - ^
00:17:755 (2) - ^
01:49:636 (2) - add clap at the end of the slider

[Hard]
00:11:755 (1) - Remove the whistle on the beginning of the slider
00:12:913 (3) - set the sampleset to Drum and additions to Soft
00:13:544 (5) - set the additions to soft at the end of the slider
00:15:439 (4) - set the sampleset to Drum and additions to Soft
00:17:965 (3) - ^
00:20:807 (3,4) - set the sampleset to drum
00:21:439 (5,6,7,8) - ^
00:21:544 (6) - after you set the sampleset of it to drum, change also the additions to Normal and add clap
00:29:439 (9) - add finish at the beginning of the slider
00:31:544 (6) - add finish
01:49:952 (6) - add clap at the end of the slider

Just changed the streams hitsounding in hard (used the drum sampleset there), I'll keep the normal whistles as I want to make them consistent for all the guitar/vocals layer.
Thanks :3

You're not dying.

I hope this is the last time I have to bump you, don't be depressed with that nuke.
;_;

10/10 spread.

DakeDekaane wrote:

10/10 spread.

lh2map

-runs-

bump

cute~! i like this map

easy:

normal:

hard:

not much to say, i think this map is probably good to go.

mellowminty wrote:

cute~! i like this map

easy:

SPOILER

not much to say here honestly. as you said, it's a bit tricky for an easy difficulty due to the circles not landing on white ticks (offbeat), but otherwise, it's fine

just a couple little tiny things
00:30:386 (1) - i'd honestly move this further away from the previous combo to better give the impression that there's a larger time window between these two combos than there was with the previous combos. /*Yup, moved a bit away.
01:34:478 (3) - ^
01:39:531 (2) - ^

normal:

SPOILER

01:48:373 (2) - i don't like how this plays with this note stacked. it's probably just me but i wouldn't stack this on three just because it's a normal difficulty /*I find the stack fitting with how the percusions are here >.<
01:49:320 (1) - the same thing, but moreso with the first incident /*Unstacked here

hard:

SPOILER

unstack some of the streams maybe? it's a bit boring with them all stacked like that but otherwise, this difficulty is fine. i was worried about the flow due to the map's timing but you handled it rather well /*I like how the stack looks here while playing, and I think unstacking them would rise the diff a bit thus making the gap Normal->Hard bigger.

not much to say, i think this map is probably good to go.

Thanks for the comments, I really appreciate it.

This will be ranked soon™

Fast™

[General]

1. 01:03:544 - Doesn't really matter, but redundant green line.
2. I'm happy.

[Hard]

1. 00:11:755 (1,2,3) - Since it's the first combo of the song, maybe have a sliderend land on the 1/3? http://puu.sh/8gFbB.jpg Just to kinda ease in and make players more comfortable with the rhythm.
2. 00:20:807 (3,4) - Might just be preference, but I find replacing this with a slider feels better.
3. 00:25:965 (8) - Follow the guitar for this? http://puu.sh/8gFyc.jpg
4. 00:36:071 (8) - Same as above^ end the slider at 00:36:281 - and add a note.
5. 00:31:544 (6,7) - Again might just be preference, but replace with a slider? Oh and shouldn't (6) have a soft finish.
6. 01:02:386 - Add a note? I just find following the vocals until 01:02:492 - before switching to the drums while they're so clear is awkward.
7. 01:06:702 (1,2) - and 01:09:544 (1,2) - Swap NC.
8. 01:13:018 (3) - Seems like you're following vocals for this combo and the one before, so shorten to 01:13:228 - and add a note.
9. 01:14:386 - Add a note? Same reason as before.
10. 01:16:807 (1,2) - and 01:19:649 (1,2) - Swap NC.
11. 01:24:597 - Drums start here, so add a note.
12. 01:25:005 (1) - Slowing down all the way down to 0.55x feels a bit jarring. Imo 0.75x is enough really. You could stack the end on the 01:27:110 (1,2,3,4) - stream as well.
13. 01:27:110 (1) - Remove NC?
14. 01:33:110 (3,4,5) - Hmm, I don't really think it's that clear you're switching over to the high-pitched guitar here. Might be better off going with a similar rhythm as before following the drums, and make the switch with 01:34:373 (8) - , since the hitsoundpattern change and it's clearly following that guitar from here.
15. 01:34:373 (8) - Just irks me that this doesn't end at 01:34:903 - :p
16. 01:37:215 (7) - ctrl+g? I guess I just prefer the back-and-forth kind of flow.
17. 01:48:689 (4) - Whiste on head, as there's that same...idkthingthatmakesasoundthatyoufollowwithyourwhistlesearlier.

[Normal]

1. 00:15:228 (2,3) - I guess the gap just kinda bothers me for some reason. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/8gJvi.jpg ?
2. 00:20:597 (1,2,3) - Might want to unstack (2,3) so it's easier to see (1,2) and (2,3) is the same rhythm.
3. 00:25:860 (5) - Whistle on head.
4. 00:35:965 (5) - ^
5. 01:06:702 (1,3) - Swap NC. Same for 01:16:807 (1,3) - . I guess you're doing it for consistency or something, but well, you don't at 01:14:281 (3,1) - , and I really think NC's on the downbeat works better.
6. 01:13:334 - Try adding a note here? For vocals.
7. 01:31:636 (3) - Same as before.
8. 01:27:531 - 01:37:636 - Feels like the notes follow the same rhythm as the beginning, while the whistles are trying to follow the high-pitch guitar. Might want to reduce the amount of whistles a bit.
9. 01:36:373 (3,4) - Also, I'd say 01:37:636 - is a better place to start following the guitar, with those 1/1's. Try reducing (3) to end at 01:36:583 - .

[Easy]

1. 00:15:439 (2) - I don't think it's a good idea to make this end on the white tick, when the previous one ended on 1/3, as it's probably confusing and hard to tell for a beginner the length-difference at a glance. And I don't really see a reason since the song is more or less the same :p. Consider ending this at 00:15:755 - .
2. 00:20:176 - and 00:21:439 - Add a note. The sliders just feel like they stop before the rhythm finishes.
3. 00:42:702 (1) - I'm not quite sure why, but this note feels better at 00:42:386 - for me.
4. 00:57:228 (1,2) - Here too it's kind of hard to tell at first glance these two sliders are timed differently. What about http://puu.sh/8gLG0.jpg?
5. 01:04:176 - 01:04:492 - Just some green lines you can remove.
6. 01:25:005 (1) - End at 01:26:899 - to follow vocal.
7. 01:41:952 (1) - I don't think it's that clear you've switched to that high-pitch guitar here. Consider starting this slider at 01:42:057 -

Poke me when you're done.

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CXu wrote:

Fast™ /*Oh you.

[General]

1. 01:03:544 - Doesn't really matter, but redundant green line. /*I really wonder what that green line was for, anyway, deleted.
2. I'm happy. /*uguu

[Hard]

1. 00:11:755 (1,2,3) - Since it's the first combo of the song, maybe have a sliderend land on the 1/3? http://puu.sh/8gFbB.jpg Just to kinda ease in and make players more comfortable with the rhythm. /*Nah, the beat on (3) is stronger so it feels better being hit
2. 00:20:807 (3,4) - Might just be preference, but I find replacing this with a slider feels better. /*Hitting both beats feels good :<
3. 00:25:965 (8) - Follow the guitar for this? http://puu.sh/8gFyc.jpg /*I'd prefer to keep it a bit simple here, it's a Hard after all, and I don't want to go nuts here.
4. 00:36:071 (8) - Same as above^ end the slider at 00:36:281 - and add a note. /*Ditto
5. 00:31:544 (6,7) - Again might just be preference, but replace with a slider? Oh and shouldn't (6) have a soft finish. /*Kinda the same reason as in the first suggestion
6. 01:02:386 - Add a note? I just find following the vocals until 01:02:492 - before switching to the drums while they're so clear is awkward. /*But there's no beat there :u also the stream is following vocals so it's not that awkward.
7. 01:06:702 (1,2) - and 01:09:544 (1,2) - Swap NC. /*Did something here, in fact, worked a lot on comboing.
8. 01:13:018 (3) - Seems like you're following vocals for this combo and the one before, so shorten to 01:13:228 - and add a note. /*Although it fits I think, I found it a bit uncomfy to play so I kept the slider.
9. 01:14:386 - Add a note? Same reason as before. /*I really don't want to go nuts with a stream there
10. 01:16:807 (1,2) - and 01:19:649 (1,2) - Swap NC. /*Same with the comboing work.
11. 01:24:597 - Drums start here, so add a note. /*Okay
12. 01:25:005 (1) - Slowing down all the way down to 0.55x feels a bit jarring. Imo 0.75x is enough really. You could stack the end on the 01:27:110 (1,2,3,4) - stream as well. /*Okay, done something interesting here.
13. 01:27:110 (1) - Remove NC? /*Done
14. 01:33:110 (3,4,5) - Hmm, I don't really think it's that clear you're switching over to the high-pitched guitar here. Might be better off going with a similar rhythm as before following the drums, and make the switch with 01:34:373 (8) - , since the hitsoundpattern change and it's clearly following that guitar from here. /*I think it's pretty noticeable I'm following the guitar over the drums since the beginning of this part.
15. 01:34:373 (8) - Just irks me that this doesn't end at 01:34:903 - :p /*It's okay as the sound there is more like an extension of the hit in 01:34:794 than a hit itself
16. 01:37:215 (7) - ctrl+g? I guess I just prefer the back-and-forth kind of flow. /*That'd create a big jump I'd want to avoid, due the consistency I use on jumpy and not jumpy patterns.
17. 01:48:689 (4) - Whiste on head, as there's that same...idkthingthatmakesasoundthatyoufollowwithyourwhistlesearlier. /*Done

[Normal]

1. 00:15:228 (2,3) - I guess the gap just kinda bothers me for some reason. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/8gJvi.jpg ? /*I think it's fine as (3) is for that kinda synthesizer sound and it allows a bit of variety.
2. 00:20:597 (1,2,3) - Might want to unstack (2,3) so it's easier to see (1,2) and (2,3) is the same rhythm. /*I feel it plays better being stacked to give a bit of emphasis for the drumroll thingy in the background.
3. 00:25:860 (5) - Whistle on head. /*Changed the rhythm a bit here to follow the stronger beats.
4. 00:35:965 (5) - ^ /*Ditto
5. 01:06:702 (1,3) - Swap NC. Same for 01:16:807 (1,3) - . I guess you're doing it for consistency or something, but well, you don't at 01:14:281 (3,1) - , and I really think NC's on the downbeat works better. /*Worked on comboing here, thanks for pointing it.
6. 01:13:334 - Try adding a note here? For vocals. /*I can recall someone mentioning this and this works nicely for spread, done.
7. 01:31:636 (3) - Same as before. /*Ditto
8. 01:27:531 - 01:37:636 - Feels like the notes follow the same rhythm as the beginning, while the whistles are trying to follow the high-pitch guitar. Might want to reduce the amount of whistles a bit. /*Modified the hitsounding pattern here (also remapped a bit).
9. 01:36:373 (3,4) - Also, I'd say 01:37:636 - is a better place to start following the guitar, with those 1/1's. Try reducing (3) to end at 01:36:583 - . /*I think a long slider here fits better for the guitar here.

[Easy]

1. 00:15:439 (2) - I don't think it's a good idea to make this end on the white tick, when the previous one ended on 1/3, as it's probably confusing and hard to tell for a beginner the length-difference at a glance. And I don't really see a reason since the song is more or less the same :p. Consider ending this at 00:15:755 - . /*As in Normal
2. 00:20:176 - and 00:21:439 - Add a note. The sliders just feel like they stop before the rhythm finishes. /*This could create a quite complex rhythm to play in an Easy (more than it is right now), so I'd like to keep a simple rhythm here.
3. 00:42:702 (1) - I'm not quite sure why, but this note feels better at 00:42:386 - for me. /*Created a rhythm like in 00:52:176 (1,2,3), I think why it feels weird where it is now, so I tried a more familiar rhythm.
4. 00:57:228 (1,2) - Here too it's kind of hard to tell at first glance these two sliders are timed differently. What about http://puu.sh/8gLG0.jpg? /*Agree, done.
5. 01:04:176 - 01:04:492 - Just some green lines you can remove. /*:3[_____]
6. 01:25:005 (1) - End at 01:26:899 - to follow vocal. /*idk why but it feels better ending it along with the bass there.
7. 01:41:952 (1) - I don't think it's that clear you've switched to that high-pitch guitar here. Consider starting this slider at 01:42:057 - /*It should be clear since 01:35:426 (1,2,3).

Poke me when you're done.

Holy shit I've spent a lot of time reworking on Hard, but it's all better now, so it's worth it.

Thanks a lot for the mod, I remapped a few parts in the kiai in Hard and Normal added to your suggestions.

[Hard]
00:31:544 (6) - I still think this should have a soft finish though
01:02:386 - Oh what I swear there was a beat there before. Oh well.
01:25:005 (1) - Thaat's a fairly odd place to end the slider. Sure that inherited line shouldn't be at 0.75?


And yeah probably just different parts we decide to emphasis and pay attention to at the end there. Most were just suggestions anyway. Except that slider that probably should be 0.75, I'm fine with this really.

CXu wrote:

[Hard]
00:31:544 (6) - I still think this should have a soft finish though /*Okay, added.
01:02:386 - Oh what I swear there was a beat there before. Oh well. /*There was nothing there
01:25:005 (1) - Thaat's a fairly odd place to end the slider. Sure that inherited line shouldn't be at 0.75? /*Whoops, fixed.


And yeah probably just different parts we decide to emphasis and pay attention to at the end there. Most were just suggestions anyway. Except that slider that probably should be 0.75, I'm fine with this really.

Thanks again :3

Yoink.

yay, patience is always rewarded wwwww

DakeDekaane wrote:

yay, patience is always rewarded wwwww

Patience is key!

patience xD

General
00:42:492 - unsnapped green line in all diffs, not really a problem though

Hard
00:16:176 (6) - try to replace it with a 1/3 slider starting from 00:16:071 - ? cause that's the point where the guitar actually starts from, stack one more circle is also ok
00:35:439 - maybe add a cirlce here with clap? would form a more coherent rhythm
01:46:057 (4) - add whistle on sliderbody? sounds good to me

Normal
01:08:492 (5) - consider to lengthen it to 01:08:913 - and add a clap at its end? it' would apply much better a rhythm imo
01:18:597 (5) - ^

Easy
01:49:320 (2,3) - this is the only stacked notes in this diff, I think you'd better make them seperate to avoid confusion? couldn't be a bad thing

nothing else, call me back

Zero__wind wrote:

patience xD

General
00:42:492 - unsnapped green line in all diffs, not really a problem though /*Well, it wasn't snapped, but I noticed it was a bit wrong, adjusted.

Hard
00:16:176 (6) - try to replace it with a 1/3 slider starting from 00:16:071 - ? cause that's the point where the guitar actually starts from, stack one more circle is also ok /*Hm, nope, if something a 2/3 slider, but I'd want to keep that part simple
00:35:439 - maybe add a cirlce here with clap? would form a more coherent rhythm /*Added a slider instead
01:46:057 (4) - add whistle on sliderbody? sounds good to me /*Yup, done.

Normal
01:08:492 (5) - consider to lengthen it to 01:08:913 - and add a clap at its end? it' would apply much better a rhythm imo /*Yup, it's better, also added a drum whistle in the beginning of the next slider so it doesn't sound too empty.
01:18:597 (5) - ^ /*^

Easy
01:49:320 (2,3) - this is the only stacked notes in this diff, I think you'd better make them seperate to avoid confusion? couldn't be a bad thing /*I'm a bit afraid of the spacing being a bit confusing if I unstack, as both would look very similar, the stack would be less confusing imo

nothing else, call me back

That's it, thanks for the check Zero

Ranked.

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Thanks again Zero

Enjoy the 1/3 power guys~

Gratz Dakeee :3/

Those 1/3 sliders

Gratz Dake <3

Finally gratz

Gratz Dake o3o

congrats!

congrats dake :3

lol congratz