1. Easy (3.25 stars, 97 notes)
2. Hard (4.93 stars, 174 notes)
3. Normal (4.63 stars, 129 notes)

zerosyn wrote:

照ls的建议改了一下，只剩下个别遮挡，感觉问题不是很严重了。

另外谁知道怎么去掉video模式，我当时拖进去以后发现没必要就按FAQ说的直接把avi删了，结果现在变成带video的map了。。。囧

gdeath wrote:

you should add more hitsounds
[Normal]
00:15:79 (4,5) - clap
00:18:79 (5) - ^
00:18:79 (5,6,7) - ^
00:26:10 (1) - ^
00:27:79 (5,6) - ^
00:28:17 (7) - add clap on start of slider
00:30:79 (5,6) - clap
00:37:73 (2,3) - ^
00:39:23 (2,3) - ^
00:34:17 (7) - ^
00:33:79 (6) - add clap on end of slider
sorry for my lazy.just give a part advice of hitsoud.

anyway,it's a nice map.good luck~
starry*

PS:dont forget giving KDS to kioukiou

Ekaru wrote:

Sweet.

1:01:92 - Add Kiai Time on both difficulties here.

Also, see if you can either cut the mp3 a bit or map the entire thing. If not, that's alright.

I loved it. Just a warning, though:

Hard:

00:37:54 (1,2,3) - This and the part like it afterwards. Someone will probably point it out later, like a BAT or something. I personally think it plays well, so it's up to you whether to change it or not.

Just a small spacing issue, since the notes are all the same time apart yet have different spacing. I <3 it like this, but you know some people... Just a heads-up.

Star!

EDIT: I've been replaying Hard constantly since I modded. Will recommend to others to mod and play. *thumbs up*

EDIT2:

Hard -

00:49:17 (1) - Delete this spinner, it's too short and thus illegal, doesn't do much anyways.

EDIT3: Make an Easy please. Normal is too hard for newbies, sad to say.

Symbolic wrote:

[Easy]

00:21:420 (x) - Add a note here.


[Normal]

01:12:23 (1) - Remove new combo.


[Hard]

Nothing wrong here


Nice map and song,
Starred *

Mafiamaster wrote:

Normal~

1. Timing Section: 29,107ms - Change this inherited timing section to 28,920ms. This is to ensure that players get the desired hit sounds. In this case, if they hit the note late, rarely that note would be a silent note instead of a normal clap note. That would be no good :[
2. Timing Section: 70,920ms - Same idea as above. ^
   Note: Kiai sections are fine on notes. So are inherited timing sections that are on sliders.

Hard~
From the info above, try to get regular inherited timing sections off of the top of single notes.
I mean it's not mandatory that you HAVE to do this. Just a recommendation to get best results during gameplay.
Done. Thanks very much.

Nothing else seems too wrong in my eyes.
Is this related to Hatsune Miku in any way? Lolz? >.>

Lizbeth wrote:

hi nice map n_n is really fun

here r some suggestions..

Hard
00:30:79 (6,7) - remove (7), end (6) at 00:31:17 <<Fixed
00:55:17 (5) - make this slider end at 00:55:52, removing (6) <<Fixed
00:58:17 (5) - replace by a circle <<Fixed

Normal
Perfect.. but i think is lil to hard for a normal version. Maybe lower overall difficulty by a 1 tick <<Fixed

Easy
i think is more playable like this
00:14:85 (2) - sounds better 1/2 beat earlier imo <<Fixed
00:17:85 (2) - same <<Fixed
00:20:85 (2) - same <<Fixed
00:36:23 (2) - 1/2 later <<I think it's better leave it as it is

nice work
have a star

kino77 wrote:

很八错呀~
都没有什么问题,就素hitsound有点单调,试着加入Whistle?

[Easy]
00:41:30(2,3,1,2,3)-Whistle?
00:50:30(2)-^
00:51:05(4)-^
...之后相同的位子~
01:12:23(4,5)-^

[Normal]
00:41:30(3)-Whistle?
00:42:05(4)-^
00:42:42(1)-^
00:42:80(2)-^ 3,4相同~
00:50:30...(2...)-和Easy相同~
01:12:23(4,5,6,7)-^

[Hard]
00:41:30(3)-Whistle?
00:42:05(4)-^
00:42:42(1)-^
00:42:80(2)-^ 3,4相同~
00:50:30...(2...)-和Easy相同~
01:12:23(1,2,3,4)-^

加星咯~

WyndII wrote:

hi hi!!

Easy
Fine

Normal
01:01:17 (4) - new combo plus finish hitsound

Hard
01:01:17 (6) - new combo plus finish hitsound

Nice map!! star~

WyndII wrote:

hi hi!!

Easy
Fine

Normal
01:01:17 (4) - new combo plus finish hitsound

Hard
01:01:17 (6) - new combo plus finish hitsound

Nice map!! star~

1. Fine.

1. Fine.

1. 00:12:40 (1,2) - Spacing.

SteRRuM wrote:

Hi!
[Timing]

SPOILER

BPM: 160,00 (fine)
Offset: 597 sounds better for me. <<I think 597 is crazy, are you serious
Resnap all notes on every difficulty.

[Easy]

1. Fine.

[Normal]

1. Fine.

[Hard]

1. 00:12:40 (1,2) - Spacing.

<<Ok, finally someone else pointed it out too, so I changed it. Thanks.

Bassmaster wrote:

Hi

Place preview point at: 00:37:54 -

[Easy]

Good ;3

[Normal]
Good ;3

[Hard]

GOOD ;3!

Star~

peppy wrote:

Please use this cropped mp3: http://pe.ppy.sh/Greendam.mp3
Offset should be 1900 - change and resnap all difficulties (I tried to keep the same offset with new mp3 but it ended up 6ms too early. people with the old mp3 shouldn't notice this too much, though).

Do a full submit after making these changes.

The map is quite solid, btw.

Dr_dy wrote:

河蟹你全家，很囧很强大，赞一个= =

Hard

00:12:962 (2) - 感觉怪怪的，弹起来很不舒服，建议把间距恢复，或者把前一个slider向右边放一些会好些？

非常棒的图，star~

peppy wrote:

Easy:
Turn stacking up to 6th tick. <<It will cause 01:01:90 (1) moved too much, so I set it to 5th tick.
01:01:90 - make kiai start here - at the moment it starts too early and makes no sense. <<Fixed.

Normal:
Remove the soft sample sections - they are pointless and sound stupid. <<Fixed.
Turn stacking up to 6th tick. <<Fixed.
00:47:46 (4,5) - fix this spacing. <<Fixed.
01:09:40 (4,5) - this overlap is a bit misleading. maybe put the 5 directly above the end of the slider? <<Fixed.

Hard:
Remove the soft sample sections - they are pointless and sound stupid. <<Removed some, set others to normal sample and lower volume.
Turn stacking up to 6th tick. <<Fixed.
00:28:15 (10) - a bit hard to see - i'd move this if i was you. <<Fixed.

awp wrote:

Aesthetics check out, map is solid, timing's good, *cough* your difficulties are not appropriately named, imo. Easy plays like a Normal, Normal plays like a Hard, and Hard plays like an easier Insane. I'm throwing this out there as a suggestion for future reference, but as far as playability is concerned, this can be ranked.

zerosyn wrote:

Also there're a lot of precedents, like http://osu.ppy.sh/b/24441

peppy wrote:

Perfect. Bubbled!

peppy wrote:

Meh, ranked.

awp wrote:

zerosyn wrote:

Also there're a lot of precedents, like http://osu.ppy.sh/b/24441

Those precedents are doing it wrong, too.

I think it's off-putting if someone expects an Easy map to be easy and it isn't. Easy maps are supposed to play like Easy maps, that's why you name them "Easy".

To understand what an Easy map feels like, I'd say either play an iNiS game or youtube some gameplay videos (if you can find Easy mode demonstrations, bleh to them). Of course, this post is a waste of effort because only you and a small handful of people are going to read it so everyone else who makes this sort of mistake will continue to do so.