Shortyblue - Ninety-Nine Times I Love You · forum

al2e10

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al2e10 2009-07-27T05:42:44+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, 17 October, 2009 at 16:25:54

Artist: Shortyblue
Title: Ninety-Nine Times I Love You
Source: Terence Teo
BPM: 128
Filesize: 4206kb
Play Time: 03:30
Difficulties Available:

Love (4.78 stars, 497 notes)
Normal (3.64 stars, 110 notes)

Download: Shortyblue - Ninety-Nine Times I Love You
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd Real Map
PLEASE MOD MY MAP !! OR ENJOY THIS MAP !!
Thank for : Lizbeth, antony11, wmfchris, minyeob, osuplayer111
Thank for (VIP): tieff, Starrodkirby86,kingcobra52, Mark, JarJarJacob

9/17 Fix the problem of JarJarJacob
9/8 Fix the opinion of kingcobra52
8/10 Fix the opinion of minyeob
8/3 Fix the opinion of tieff, Starrodkirby86
8/2 Fix the opinion of osuplayer111
8/1 Fix the opinion of Lizbeth ^^

Last edited by al2e10 2009-10-17T08:26:16+00:00, edited 24 times in total.

ignorethis

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ignorethis 2009-07-27T05:53:24+00:00

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wmfchris

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wmfchris 2009-07-29T12:17:36+00:00

Sound : the clapping sound seems have a offsets to the vocal sound

[special]
(a bit confusing about the circles on blue line... but not a big problem)
[0:21:445] (9,10,11,12) a bit confusing
[0:56:132] (6) 1/4 forward
[1:42:070] (4) better take away since there's only two cymbal sound

[2:35:859] (7) spacing
[2:47:109] (1,2,3,4,5) Why not put a circle 1/4 beat after 1,2,3,4,5 respectively？ Refer to the sound.
[3:14:765] (2) 1/4 beat backward
[normal]
good.

starred.

al2e10

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al2e10 2009-07-31T12:24:44+00:00

Fixed ^^

antony11

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antony11 2009-07-31T12:42:25+00:00

I think the offset is wrong because it sound not good and very high delay while I'm testing.

7690 should be better

Started

Takuma

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Takuma 2009-08-01T02:10:55+00:00

Denied. If you read my thread it clearly states they must be 8 Star Priority or higher.

Lizbeth

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Lizbeth 2009-08-01T04:55:50+00:00

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Andrea

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Andrea 2009-08-01T09:25:32+00:00

[Timing]

I got offset 7.705 Bpm fine

[Normal]

01:26:44 (1) - Finish.
01:57:72 (1,2,3) - Hard to read for a normal.

[Special]

00:26:90 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:97 (1) - Bad placed. Place under 01:10:50 (9)
01:25:03 (2,3,4) - Too close from (1).
03:30:19 (1) - Whistle here, not 03:30:42 (2)

al2e10

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al2e10 2009-08-02T07:43:41+00:00

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blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2009-08-03T02:38:43+00:00

Normal:

SPOILER

normal mod:
00:43:78 (1) - timing section is directly on this note
01:02:53 (6) - nazi post: align with 5
delete all the unused timing sections at the end

combo mod:
00:25:03 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 (swap new combo)
02:06:75 (1) - remove new combo
02:08:15 (1,2) - swap new combo
02:22:69 (1) - remove new combo

Special:

SPOILER

normal mod:
for me, the half speed sliders feel out of place
00:43:08 - since this timing section changes the volume of the hitsounds, you can't put it on top of the note
00:43:78 (1) - timing section directly on this note
00:56:90 - same as 00:43:08
03:11:44 - same as 00:43:08

combo mod:
00:23:15 (5) - new combo to be consistent with the short combos around it
00:34:40 (5) - new combo
00:55:97 (5,1) - swap new combo
01:59:25 (1) - remove new combo

Nice map. Star.

tieff

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tieff 2009-08-05T17:17:50+00:00

Very solid map!

[Normal]
00:26:90 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - See screenshot? (grid snap off)
01:02:53 (6) - Nazi. Left a bit.
01:07:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Fix spacing.

[Special]
01:08:62 (4) - New combo.
01:48:02 (1,2,3,4) - This part... It give me strange feel about timing. Use 25% playback rate on this part and you get it.
02:40:28 (6) - Nazi. Up a bit.

Btw, try offset 15 214.

Star.

Starrodkirby86

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Here since the beginning

Starrodkirby86 2009-08-05T20:41:02+00:00

[Normal]:
01:07:92 (1) - Nazi: Space a little farther away please?
02:04:17 (1) - Suggestion: Finish?
Consider lower HP Drain 1 by one tick?

[Special]:
01:08:62 (4) - I don't mind in-combo jumps like this, but in case if someone is going to complain later...New combo?
01:09:33 (7) - Same as above.
01:27:84 (7) - Can you move this a little farther please?
02:30:19 (1) - Whistle here?

~~I don't want to star yet until it's +8 star priority. I should have really noticed it first. But whatever, I already looked at it. Get one more star please >A<~~

Also set a nicer preview point please, preferably around the chorus.

OK, thank you tieff. ^^ Everything seems almost good now.

Jinxy

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Jinxy 2009-08-06T13:26:44+00:00

Er... "Lovee"?
~~Mum is going to be happy this is mapped.~~

Also, change the offset to 214, so the osu cookie/pin/logo on the menu can bounce in time with the map.

[Normal]
Nothing wrong.

[Special]
Nothing Wrong.

Starred.

Edit:

Starrodkirby86 wrote:
Also set a nicer preview point please, preferably around the chorus.

Pause at the chorus in your map, then go to timing and select "Set Current Position As Preview", incase you didn't know.

Vibty99

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Vibty99 2009-08-09T07:08:36+00:00

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minyeob

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minyeob 2009-08-10T06:29:20+00:00

Hi~

[Normal]
00:57:98 (1) - Spinner nazi. This spinner should be started from 1/4 beat later(Red tick)

[Lovee]
01:10:52 (3) - Inconsistent spacing. Stack with 01:09:58 (2) is much better, I think.
01:10:99 (1) - We stacked (3) already so we have to move this to other place.
Like this

01:48:14 (1,2,3,4) - Timing error wtf make these 1/4 beat faster.
02:37:71 (1) - Extend 1/4 beat if you want
03:06:42 (11) - Make 1/4 beat later & Decrease 1/4 beat if you want
03:15:21 (4) - Aww.. this is ugly

Nice song! Star for you

al2e10

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al2e10 2009-08-11T00:35:03+00:00

minyeob wrote:
Hi~

[Normal]
00:57:98 (1) - Spinner nazi. This spinner should be started from 1/4 beat later(Red tick)

[Lovee]
01:10:52 (3) - Inconsistent spacing. Stack with 01:09:58 (2) is much better, I think.
01:10:99 (1) - We stacked (3) already so we have to move this to other place.
Like this
[attachment=0:dd2a2]screenshot099.jpg[/attachment:dd2a2]

01:48:14 (1,2,3,4) - Timing error wtf make these 1/4 beat faster.
02:37:71 (1) - Extend 1/4 beat if you want
03:06:42 (11) - Make 1/4 beat later & Decrease 1/4 beat if you want
03:15:21 (4) - Aww.. this is ugly

Nice song! Star for you

FIX ed !!

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Yuukari-Banteki 2009-08-11T23:03:27+00:00

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Jinxy

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Jinxy 2009-08-13T09:10:32+00:00

In case you didn't get it the 1st time, the correct spelling is "Love", not "Lovee".

kingcobra52

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kingcobra52 2009-09-07T17:02:26+00:00

Hard

01:09:58 (2) - Snap to 1/4, not 1/3 (use 1/8 divisor since the bpm is halved)

*star*

Fixed, so bubbled.

al2e10

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al2e10 2009-09-09T09:37:33+00:00

fixed ~

mtmcl

mtmcl 2009-09-12T08:44:30+00:00

As I said, fix the name and I will bubble~

EEeee

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EEeee 2009-09-12T23:33:41+00:00

Fix all ur breaks b4 having this rebubbled,
all breaks are off, except the first one in the lovee

Jinxy

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Jinxy 2009-09-19T16:08:12+00:00

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mtmcl

mtmcl 2009-10-14T21:48:11+00:00

I'm willing to repair my bubble on this one. Just some break problems fixed.

Jarby

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Jarby 2009-10-17T04:54:34+00:00

Get a new mp3. 01:00:21 - Set audio preview here. Use kiai on the final chorus only. Move inherited sections back 1/4.

Normal:

This is Hard, not Normal. Make a Normal.
02:36:07 (1) - Remove new combo.

Lovee:

00:56:93 (1) - Why is this half time.
01:21:30 (2) - Annoying spacing.
01:27:87 (7) - Again, why is this half time.
01:39:35 (1) - Annoying spacing.
02:52:71 - Nice blank space you got there.

Download: Shortyblue - Ninety-Nine Times I Love You (al2e10) [Love].osu

Download: Shortyblue - Ninety-Nine Times I Love You (al2e10) [Normal].osu

Jarby

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Jarby 2009-10-17T08:26:58+00:00

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mtmcl

mtmcl 2009-10-17T18:17:37+00:00

Ranked!

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