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G.E.M - My Secret

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al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
al2e10
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年10月25日 at 下午 07:59:06

Artist: G.E.M
Title: My Secret
Tags: 我的秘密
BPM: 104.01
Filesize: 6915kb
Play Time: 04:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alarmable (2.93 stars, 516 notes)
  2. Normal (1.93 stars, 287 notes)
Download: G.E.M - My Secret
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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THE FIRST MAP I NEED IT TO RANK FOR MY BACKING TO OSU!
Last edited by al2e10 , edited 9 times in total.
95648
32 posts
Joined May 2009
95648
好用心既map :)

NORMAL

00:34:561 (1,2) - 你可以 ----> http://holland.pk/1zTa

01:35:420 (1) - 你可以 ----> http://holland.pk/1zU0

ALARMABLE

00:29:946 - 你可以 ----> http://holland.pk/1zTy

00:32:253 (1,2,3) - 你可以---> http://holland.pk/1zTt

00:34:561 (1,2,3,4) - 整個梯形?---> http://holland.pk/1zTz

00:40:330 - 你可以---> http://holland.pk/1zTf

01:09:750 (4) - 可以離(3) 遠少少

01:28:210 (11,1,2,3) - 整個梯形? http://holland.pk/1zTe

01:33:546 (6) - 向右少少

01:36:718 (5) - 推後到 01:36:863

02:23:012 (1) - 可以離(7) 遠少少

03:30:001 - 可以加circle


加油 :)
Boncho
91 posts
Joined October 2011
Boncho
HI!~ from your Queue! :)

[Normal]
00:26:196 (1) - place it on x248 y336 ( because it would be the best if it had the same height as 00:25:619 (3) )
00:27:927 (1) - place it on x328 y184 (same height as 00:27:062 (2) )
00:29:946 (1) - place it on x64 y136
00:40:041 (2) - place it on x368 y88
00:56:193 (1,2) - wouldnt it look better like this?:


01:18:980 - add a circle
03:09:161 (4) - place it on x344 y56
01:24:460 (2,3,4) - why not like this?


01:28:498 (1) - This slider doesnt look like this one 01:26:767 (2) make it like this:


01:29:363 (5) - place it on x328 y144
01:29:652 (6) - place it on x240 y144
01:38:593 (3) - extend this slider till 01:39:459 (maybe?)


[Alarmable]


00:34:561 (1,2,3,4) - Distance snap?
01:01:674 (4,5) - make it more blanket like this :


01:37:007 - add a note (?)
02:19:551 (1) - add clap at the end of the slider
03:35:409 (8) - New Combo

well thats everything I can find, good map! :D

GOOD LUCK! :)
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
al2e10
FIXED SOME OF IT :D
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
dalollypop
omgerd love this song.

sorry i don't know how to mod D:

but if i learn or get stars i come back.
sorryyyyyyy :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
al2e10

dalollypop wrote:

omgerd love this song.

sorry i don't know how to mod D:

but if i learn or get stars i come back.
sorryyyyyyy :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
Nevermind :D
And thanks
IadzXenon
47 posts
Joined September 2013
IadzXenon
Hello M4M from your queue...
[Easy]
- 00:10:909(tail) Remove finnish, too loud since the piano sound is still low...
- 00:29:946(1) Move to x:64 y:152 to keep straight with (3)?
- 00:32:542(2) Abridge slider to 00:32:830 then replace 00:33:119 with note, or reverse it to keep consistency with 00:29:946(1) moreover to follow the vocal...
- 00:33:119 Add finnish is better imo too keep follow intonation of 00:28:504 and 00:30:811...
- 00:35:426(tail) Remove whistle too loud here since the music stop suddenly...
- 00:49:271(3) Remove slider then replace with cicle, because no any vocal or any instrument play at 00:49:848...
- 00:57:059 Add note here to follow piano?
- 01:10:904(3) Better move note to 01:11:480 to keep intonation like you did at 01:06:577(1,2,3) and 01:08:885(1) moreover to fit the music instead. Don't forget to move to x408 y:232...
- 01:18:691(1) Remove reverse please better replace with circle doesn't fit the music...
- 01:35:420(1,2) Try this? Here if you need the code :
304,208,95420,6,0,P|227:249|151:208,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,96286,2,0,P|231:341|348:285,1,270,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
- 01:55:889 Add note here to follow piano?
- 02:23:012 - ^
- 02:23:300 - ^
- 02:19:839(2) Add clap here to follow instrument like you did at 02:20:993 and 02:22:147...
- 02:31:953(2) Remove finnish too cymbal for downbeat here...
- 02:55:317(5) Abridge the slider. Slider must start at 02:55:605 and end at 02:55:894 to follow "le" vocal also more fit the music...
- 02:56:182(6) Add finnish here to keep consistency with 01:42:343...
- 03:02:872(2) Add whistle upbeat here...

[Alarmable]
- 00:25:331(4) The slider must end at 00:25:619 don't skip vocal here. And don't forget to add circle at 00:25:908...
- 00:27:927(1) Remove new combo, new combo should start at (2) to better flow?
- 00:30:523(2) Use distance snap, too far away since also no jumping music here...
- 00:32:830(2) The slider must end at 00:33:119 and add note at 00:33:407 to keep consistency with 00:29:946(1,2,3,4)...
- 00:34:651(1) Invalid spacing, too close...
- 01:06:577(7) The new combo should start here...
- 01:08:019(3) You can add jump since singer up her vocal here. Suggestion move to x:56 y:72...
- 01:13:644(3) Imo I prefer to move this to 01:13:788 (white line)...
- 01:33:401(5) Imo add note here to add stream may better...
- 02:06:571(tail) Remove whistle, too loud...
- 02:16:090(1) Inconsistant spacing, distance snap?
- 03:05:412(6) Slider should end at 03:05:844 and add circle at 03:05:989 it's better to fit the music imo...
- 03:22:429(5) Move to x:240 y:288 to straight with 4?

That's all I found, maybe you'll reject some my mod in Insane. Btw hope it's helpful. Good luck... ;)
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
al2e10

IadzXenon wrote:

Hello M4M from your queue...
[Easy]
- 00:10:909(tail) Remove finnish, too loud since the piano sound is still low...
Fixed
- 00:29:946(1) Move to x:64 y:152 to keep straight with (3)?
Fixed
- 00:32:542(2) Abridge slider to 00:32:830 then replace 00:33:119 with note, or reverse it to keep consistency with 00:29:946(1) moreover to follow the vocal...
According to the piano...
- 00:33:119 Add finnish is better imo too keep follow intonation of 00:28:504 and 00:30:811...
//
- 00:35:426(tail) Remove whistle too loud here since the music stop suddenly...
//
- 00:49:271(3) Remove slider then replace with cicle, because no any vocal or any instrument play at 00:49:848...
//
- 00:57:059 Add note here to follow piano?
//
- 01:10:904(3) Better move note to 01:11:480 to keep intonation like you did at 01:06:577(1,2,3) and 01:08:885(1) moreover to fit the music instead. Don't forget to move to x408 y:232...
- 01:18:691(1) Remove reverse please better replace with circle doesn't fit the music...
- 01:35:420(1,2) Try this? Here if you need the code :
304,208,95420,6,0,P|227:249|151:208,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,96286,2,0,P|231:341|348:285,1,270,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Fixed it for a insteresting way LOL
- 01:55:889 Add note here to follow piano?
- 02:23:012 - ^
- 02:23:300 - ^
If I follow the piano here will make the difficulty higher. So, I decide to make it better easier.
- 02:19:839(2) Add clap here to follow instrument like you did at 02:20:993 and 02:22:147...
Fixed
- 02:31:953(2) Remove finnish too cymbal for downbeat here...
Fixed it to turn it to auto.
- 02:55:317(5) Abridge the slider. Slider must start at 02:55:605 and end at 02:55:894 to follow "le" vocal also more fit the music...
I follow the drum of the music.... So...
- 02:56:182(6) Add finnish here to keep consistency with 01:42:343...
Get it
- 03:02:872(2) Add whistle upbeat here...
Not fit...

[Alarmable]
- 00:25:331(4) The slider must end at 00:25:619 don't skip vocal here. And don't forget to add circle at 00:25:908...
its work to the music, but not about the vocal. My map doesn't need to follow the vocal in this case :D
- 00:27:927(1) Remove new combo, new combo should start at (2) to better flow?
I follow the patten, and it doesn't chagne the distance after I NC it
- 00:30:523(2) Use distance snap, too far away since also no jumping music here...
K, change a little bit
- 00:32:830(2) The slider must end at 00:33:119 and add note at 00:33:407 to keep consistency with 00:29:946(1,2,3,4)...
Not a must. I dont want to follow the vocal, really.
- 00:34:651(1) Invalid spacing, too close...
//
- 01:06:577(7) The new combo should start here...
I change it because of the spacing (jump)
- 01:08:019(3) You can add jump since singer up her vocal here. Suggestion move to x:56 y:72...
//
- 01:13:644(3) Imo I prefer to move this to 01:13:788 (white line)...
I move 4, but not 3
- 01:33:401(5) Imo add note here to add stream may better...
//
- 02:06:571(tail) Remove whistle, too loud...
NICE
- 02:16:090(1) Inconsistant spacing, distance snap?
Fixed
- 03:05:412(6) Slider should end at 03:05:844 and add circle at 03:05:989 it's better to fit the music imo...
//
- 03:22:429(5) Move to x:240 y:288 to straight with 4?
Fixed

That's all I found, maybe you'll reject some my mod in Insane. Btw hope it's helpful. Good luck... ;)
_AI
225 posts
Joined February 2013
_AI
M4M from your queue owo!

[General]
10044 Try this offset, the original offset has fasten a beat
"Alarmable" is not rankable due to the new rules of naming difficulties
no kiai time? owo

[Normal]
00:10:333 (1,2) - Bad flow, suggest http://puu.sh/6RViZ.jpg
00:14:659 (1,2,3) - Blanket (1) and move (3) downward, flow improvement should be apply in future similar pattern http://puu.sh/6RVke.jpg
00:16:966 (1,2) - Curve (1) then CopynPaste it , ^ http://puu.sh/6RVml.jpg
00:24:465 (4) - Add a note
00:38:887 (3) - ^, there's a obvious drum beat
~There's alot of space to improve in this difficulty, Rhythm is good tho. Flows and Hitsound could be improve in various ways, just try your best :))
其实还有很多进步空间，加油 :))

[Hard]
00:12:640 (1) - NC
00:13:794 (1) - Remove NC
00:17:399 - The emptiness here...
00:34:561 (1) - Make a larger spacing with 00:33:696 (3) - as the player will tap it earlier cause of the sudden shorten distance after the jump of 00:32:253 (1,2) -
00:41:195 (1) - Let 00:39:753 (4,5) - Blanket it
00:51:579 (5) - NC
00:52:155 (1) - Remove NC
00:53:886 (6) - The song isn't even in 1/3 omg
00:59:366 (5,1) - Same as the previous jump, make a larger space here
02:40:607 (7,8,9) - Larger spacing, will easily confuse player it as a triple tap
03:31:659 (1) - NC as the slider velocity changes
和normal的评语一样，可是这个的flow 好多了。。。 加油 >.o/

我心里的秘密，是我好像喜欢了你www
[ Raphael ]
[ Raphael ]
Hi~ from your Q!

[General]
  • Try change offset → 10045
    Use Kiai time (maybe it is good for playing :3)

    [Normal]
    • 00:11:775 - add circle
      00:12:352 (4) - a little awkward. remove reverse.
      00:30:811 (2) - set to straight
      00:38:887 - add 2/4 slider
      00:41:195 (4) - remove?
      00:42:637 - add 2/4 slider
      00:47:252 - ^
      00:46:964 (4) - move to (280,144)
      00:49:271 (3) - a little bent
      00:50:136 (1,2) - try overlap
      00:51:867 - add circle
      01:03:116 (2) - move to (64,296)
      01:20:133 (5) - distance
      01:20:710 - add circle
      01:30:806 (5,1) - try blanket
      01:54:746 (2) - move to (136,144)
      02:17:243 - insert break time
      02:31:953 (2) - move to (256,16)
      02:34:549 (1) - move to (104,56)
      02:38:876 (5) - move to (312,224)
      02:53:009 (1,2,3) - i think this pattern is bad, try another pattern
      03:19:834 (3) - same like 03:18:391 (1) -
      03:41:754 (4) - same like 03:43:197 (1) -
      03:45:216 (4) - end on 03:45:793 -

      [Alarmable]
      • 00:20:428 (3) - same like 00:19:562 (1) -
        00:21:293 (5) - remove reverse and add circle on 00:22:447 -
        01:03:669 - insert break time
        01:15:519 (1) - close
        01:27:777 (9) - move to 01:27:633 -
        01:39:026 (8,9) - remove and add circle on 01:39:171 -
        02:07:437 (4) - set to straight
        02:11:475 (1,2) - blanket?
        02:55:028 (3,4) - makes to same shape
        03:19:834 (3,4) - avoid overlap
        03:22:141 (4) - remove that overlap lightly with 03:21:276 (2) -
        03:26:179 (5,6) - blanket better
        03:31:659 (4) - should NC this slider, to show that its different because its slowed
        03:33:101 (2,3) - makes to same shape
        03:38:870 (6,7) - ^
        03:44:495 (4) - move to (352,352)
        03:44:639 (5) - move to (320,360)

        Hope this helps :3
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
al2e10

_AI wrote:

M4M from your queue owo!

[General]
10044 Try this offset, the original offset has fasten a beat
"Alarmable" is not rankable due to the new rules of naming difficulties
no kiai time? owo

THANKS ADDED KIAI AND OFFSET CHANGED

[Normal]
00:10:333 (1,2) - Bad flow, suggest http://puu.sh/6RViZ.jpg
fixed
00:14:659 (1,2,3) - Blanket (1) and move (3) downward, flow improvement should be apply in future similar pattern http://puu.sh/6RVke.jpg
00:16:966 (1,2) - Curve (1) then CopynPaste it , ^ http://puu.sh/6RVml.jpg
00:24:465 (4) - Add a note
00:38:887 (3) - ^, there's a obvious drum beat
~There's alot of space to improve in this difficulty, Rhythm is good tho. Flows and Hitsound could be improve in various ways, just try your best :))
其实还有很多进步空间，加油 :))
Fixed it for all and thanks for modding, coz i dont know how to make normal or easy >3<

[Hard]
00:12:640 (1) - NC
00:13:794 (1) - Remove NC
下一次有人再說, 就改了
00:17:399 - The emptiness here...
Fixed
00:34:561 (1) - Make a larger spacing with 00:33:696 (3) - as the player will tap it earlier cause of the sudden shorten distance after the jump of 00:32:253 (1,2) -
FIXED
00:41:195 (1) - Let 00:39:753 (4,5) - Blanket it
00:51:579 (5) - NC
00:52:155 (1) - Remove NC
Try this if someone tell me again
00:53:886 (6) - The song isn't even in 1/3 omg
Just fit with the music
00:59:366 (5,1) - Same as the previous jump, make a larger space here
FIXED
02:40:607 (7,8,9) - Larger spacing, will easily confuse player it as a triple tap
Try this if someone tell me again
03:31:659 (1) - NC as the slider velocity changes
FIXED
和normal的评语一样，可是这个的flow 好多了。。。 加油 >.o/

我心里的秘密，是我好像喜欢了你www
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
al2e10
Hi~ from your Q!


General

Try change offset → 10045
Use Kiai time (maybe it is good for playing :3)




Normal

00:11:775 - add circle
00:12:352 (4) - a little awkward. remove reverse. (follow the piano
00:30:811 (2) - set to straight
00:38:887 - add 2/4 slider
00:41:195 (4) - remove?
00:42:637 - add 2/4 slider
00:47:252 - ^
00:46:964 (4) - move to (280,144)
00:49:271 (3) - a little bent
00:50:136 (1,2) - try overlap
00:51:867 - add circle
01:03:116 (2) - move to (64,296)
01:20:133 (5) - distance
01:20:710 - add circle
01:30:806 (5,1) - try blanket With other way
01:54:746 (2) - move to (136,144)
02:17:243 - insert break time
02:31:953 (2) - move to (256,16)
02:34:549 (1) - move to (104,56)
02:38:876 (5) - move to (312,224)
02:53:009 (1,2,3) - i think this pattern is bad, try another pattern
03:19:834 (3) - same like 03:18:391 (1) -
03:41:754 (4) - same like 03:43:197 (1) -
03:45:216 (4) - end on 03:45:793 -




Alarmable

00:20:428 (3) - same like 00:19:562 (1) - (Hard for the flow
00:21:293 (5) - remove reverse and add circle on 00:22:447 - (Hard to make it
01:03:669 - insert break time
01:15:519 (1) - close[/color] (Fixed
01:27:777 (9) - move to 01:27:633 -
01:39:026 (8,9) - remove and add circle on 01:39:171 - (Personal beat
02:07:437 (4) - set to straight (Style WWW
02:11:475 (1,2) - blanket?
02:55:028 (3,4) - makes to same shape (It form a traingle
03:19:834 (3,4) - avoid overlap (Not this time
03:22:141 (4) - remove that overlap lightly with 03:21:276 (2) - (Doesn;t happen in game play
03:26:179 (5,6) - blanket better
03:31:659 (4) - should NC this slider, to show that its different because its slowed
03:33:101 (2,3) - makes to same shape
03:38:870 (6,7) - ^
03:44:495 (4) - move to (352,352)
03:44:639 (5) - move to (320,360)
arviejhay
1,413 posts
Joined August 2009
arviejhay
Hi al2e10 m4m
sorry if i'm not a good modder
but i hope this mod helps
Normal
00:17:855 (2) - slider end - Add whistle
00:33:117 (2) - slider end - Add whistle
00:46:969 (4) - Add finish
00:56:214 (1) - Add finish
00:58:481 (1) - Add finish
01:00:801 (3) - Add finish
01:28:480 (1) - slider start - Add finish
02:10:019 (1) - Add finish
02:12:069 - put a circle maybe
02:12:344 - slider start - Add finish
02:14:649 - slider start - Add finish
04:00:803 - Add finish

Alarmable
i think this diff is perfect

You need to enable the epilepsy warning plus i love the song :)
The Alarmable diff is perfect and you got the rhythm in it :)
sorry for a short mod
Good luck mapping :)
-Teina-
529 posts
Joined October 2013
-Teina-
請求M4M的

[General]
一首咁 抒情? 既歌 combo4既顏色好似深左d


加番source 同 tag
中文歌名: 我的秘密

首歌都算幾閃 洗唔洗剔個Display epilepsy warning

你張圖既kiai time 1秒都冇 得0.2秒?

一個有widesrceen support 一個就冇

osu size bg

Alarmable
  1. 01:09:172 (1,2,3,4) - 我就感覺上覺得e度係遞增音 可能每個人感覺唔同 點都好 試聽下.
  2. 01:15:518 (1,2,3) - 我覺得e家冇喇喇加快 唔係咁好節奏應該冇快到 應該改番近d會好d (同e度差唔多節奏 01:23:883 (4,5,6) - )
  3. 01:39:314 (9) - 只有餘音 冇實音 小心overmap
  4. 01:53:303 (4,5) - e度冇喇喇由1.3x DS 變左1.5x DS 但節奏都係冇變過. 如果硬要講的話 01:53:591 (5) - 係重小小 跳都OK
  5. 03:15:506 (3) - 可以試試改左 slider 2/4的 (同e個 03:22:429 (5) - 效果差唔多)
  6. 03:27:332 (6) - blanket左佢
  7. 03:29:640 (1) - ctrl+g 突然反切好奇怪 全段03:27:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,1) - 得果度係反切
  8. 03:36:562 (9) - 再左移一格應該好d

Normal
  1. 00:29:080 - 去到00:43:502 - 感覺好方... 點講呢 全部都90度 橫放直放 感覺唔係咁好
  2. 02:23:588 (1) - 用clap代替whislte
  3. 02:46:663 (2) - 可以取消左個GS去改改佢
  4. 02:54:162 (3) - normal 加速唔知比唔比
  5. 由03:14:641 - 去到03:22:429 - 都係順時針轉 有d悶
  6. 03:46:369 (1) - normal 做jump唔知比唔比

  • sb
    純粹個人feel 唔識sb
    個'的'字小左一半 現在:紅點置底 白點置頂 咁可以的話白點唔好咁白 透明度高番小小 應該會好d 可以得番話 加好小好小既黃色(有d陽光感覺?) p.s但又好似紅點都係置頂 但透明度高d
    1. 151791 <sb係咁copy位置? (02:31:664 - 有個 ' 我想說明 好似行得太快?)
    2. 161153 (02:41:153 - e個 '靠近' 好似有d delay)
    3. 226946 (03:46:946 - e個 閃白面同 係右方好似唔係好夾得到)
PEPOTTI
195 posts
Joined May 2010
PEPOTTI
m4m from #modreqs



[General]
All inherited points (green line) shift -8~9ms
01:51:572 - add note
03:04:258 - ^

[Normal]
00:14:947 (2) - move the end of slider point to x:72 y:120
00:21:869 (2,3) - flow is not good. so,like this?

00:40:906 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I recommend you use more sliders
01:16:960 (1) - should not use over two reverses without short slider
01:29:363 (2,3) - flow is.. like this?

01:56:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - use more sliders?

[Alarmable]
00:11:774 (5) - move to x:56 y:96. maybe more beautiful
00:26:773 (3,5) - remove?
01:14:653 (6) - move the end of slider to 1:15:085, and add circle 1:15:230
01:52:438 (2) - move to x:248 y:40
02:00:081 (5,7) - remove
02:16:089 (1) - too near
Around 03:12:622 - Add break? or, remove all short break times each diff



Maybe you can make more good flow and beautiful arrangement
Good luck~
al2e10
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Fixed some of them
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