1. Hard (4,98 stars, 426 notes)
2. Normal (2,75 stars, 208 notes)

Momochikun wrote:

Love Live ~

Gabe wrote:

Andrea, teach me how to map






I am serious

1. Why no Easy or Insane, this could use those diffs?

1. 00:29:165 (3,1) - Keeping these two at the same grid level doesn't fit (atleast I think so) moving 00:29:565 (1) - a bit up would be kinda nice~ If you apply this change, remember to fix the spacing with the next objects!
   
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2. 00:37:565 (3,1) - I don't really moving my cursor down here, something like this would be better? Two examples of how I would do it
   
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3. 00:15:165 (3) - This may look good, but spacing???
4. 00:47:165 (4,5,1) - You could do it like this tbh
   
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5. 00:50:765 (1) - Spacing?
6. 01:05:965 (1) - Moving this note a bit down would fit better?
7. 01:42:765 (1,2) - Blanket?
8. 01:47:965 (4,1) - Same suggestion as 00:37:565
9. 01:57:565 (4,5,1) - Same suggestion as 00:47:165
10. 02:01:165 (1) - Spacing?
11. 02:10:765 (5) - I'm really bad at hitsounds but maybe a finish here? o.o idk rly~
12. 02:48:765 (2) - Like this?:
    
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13. That's about it for this diff~

1. 00:06:765 (1) - How about like this? It would also match with 00:08:165 (4) - ?
   
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2. 00:08:765 (5,6,7) - Like this?
   
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3. 00:12:165 (6) - Moving this a bit up would fit (imo) better?
4. 00:26:965 (3) - CTRL + G?
5. 00:36:965 (5,6,7) - Blanket?
6. 00:36:765 (4,7) - Stack
7. 00:53:965 (6) - CTRL + G?
8. 00:57:965 (3,4) - Stack
9. 01:19:165 (3,4) - I would love to see a blanket out of these, little bit like 00:06:765?
10. 01:25:565 (6) - Move this a bit down?
11. 01:47:365 (5,6,7) - Blanket?
12. 02:08:365 (3,4) - Stack
13. 02:27:365 (6,7,8) - This blanket could use some improvement
14. 02:29:565 (3,4) - You could do this like first suggestion
15. 02:54:565 (9) - Finish on the end?
    
16. Pretty much it~

Rare wrote:

lovelive

1. 00:37:565 (4,1) - Non mi piace molto questo pattern per via di (4) che non è il massimo. Fossi in te cambierei (4) in modo che faccia un blanket con (1), come ho fatto nello screenshot.
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2. 01:47:965 (4,1) - Stessa cosa.
3. 00:43:165 (4) - Questo slider secondo me rovina un po' il flow essendo così lungo, prova a curvarlo di più (magari spostando il repeat verso il basso con CTRL+J).
4. 00:52:365 (3,4) - Secondo me dovresti fare lo stesso che ho detto poco sopra, cioé curvare lo slider un po' di più, per sistemare quel brusco movimento tra la fine del (3) e (4).
5. 01:09:565 (2,3,4) - Due slider uguali così sono bruttini da vedere.
6. 02:19:965 (2,3,4) - Stessa cosa.
7. 01:15:965 (2,3,4) - Secondo me il triangolo formato dal circle e dalle code degli slider può scorrere meglio, ora come ora flowa male, imo.
8. 02:26:365 (2,3,4) - Stessa cosa.
9. 01:33:165 - Che ne dici di far iniziare il break qui? Ci sta benissimo.
10. 02:01:165 (1) - Sinceramente, mi sono confuso pure io con lo spacing, pensavo fosse reversed, o sono io o questo slider causerà molta confusione xD
11. 02:11:565 - Io metterei uno spinner qui, giusto prima del kiai (e poi un solo spinner in una Normal..)

1. 00:39:765 (3) - Sposterei questo slider 1/2 avanti, quel break lungo 1/1 non ci sta bene secondo me. Ovviamente devi piazzare un cerchio in 00:39:765 -.
2. 01:19:165 (2) - Io lo unstackerei, non ha molto senso ora come ora.
3. 02:29:565 (2) - Stessa cosa.
4. 01:29:565 (4,1) - Io cercherei di seguire meglio le vocal senza alterare il ritmo. Prova così:
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5. 02:39:965 (4,1) - Same as above.
6. 01:44:965 (3,4,5,6) - Secondo me un kickslider con due repeat ci sta da dio al posto dello stream.
7. 02:06:365 (7) - 256|8 come coordinate, lol

1. 00:15:165 (3) - io direi di creare un'altra pattern qui perchè lo spacing è molto piu' grande rispetto al tuo solito,e non credo che sei cosi lazy da non rifare una pattern 00:13:565 (2,3,4,1) - quindi migliora lo spacing cosi diventa piu' facile qui, (dato che dovrebe essere la diff piu' facile del mapset)
2. 00:33:965 (3) - usa il tuo coustom finish qui,non lo sta usando perchè sei in C:S2 e dovrebbe essere alla fine dello slider C:S1
3. 00:49:165 (2,1) - sambra cje ti piaccia proprio rovinare il tuo perfetto spacing ;____; non farlo pls
4. 01:44:765 (3) - io non nasconderei questo circle sotto lo slider 01:42:765 (1) - perchè è ancora un po' visibile mentre il circle appare e dato che è la diff piu' facile del mapset cerca di non far confondere i nuovi player
5. 01:59:565 (2,1) - sigh dinuovo :C

1. 00:57:965 (3,4) - li potresti staccare un pochino meglio dato che è copy pasta fallo anche qui 02:08:365 (3,4) -

1. Well, I'd recommend you to put STARTDASH to tags. Just in case if someone needs it. That'd help us to find your map faster.
2. 00:04:965 - You could map this beat to follow music closer or start mapping from 00:06:365 - to follow vocals. either way will make your rhythm a little bit more catchable, try it!

1. 00:05:765 - try to map this beat. C'mon, it feels kinda weird that you ignore it. I love your symmetrical patterns, but it shouldn't hurt your rhythm! C'mon man, make it even better! This what's on my mind
2. 00:15:165 (3) - whoops, feels like a spacing mistake. What iw we'll try to fix it somehow? example
   Note: watch out, you'll have to re-work your spacing here a bit!
3. 00:19:165 (1,2) - yeah, it's important to keep comboing consistent. But how about making it follow music a bit closer? Try to move this NC to 00:19:965 (2) - it'll mphasize changes in music and your pattern a little bit better! See if you like it.
4. 00:36:765 (3,4) - nazi - yeah, I am kinda strict about flow. Tail of (4) is TOO close, players may mistakenly hit it! Be gentle with beginners, remember, this is the easist diff! Try to make it more readable somehow :3
   Note: 00:49:165 (2,1) - 01:59:565 (2,1) - same as above. Spacing mistake here, watch out! / 01:47:165 (3,4) - same as above. Someone is copypasting ;3/
5. 00:47:165 (4,5,1) - nazi - whoops, this blanket looks a little bit strange. I know you and I know that you can make a perfect blanket here. Do it if you want to make your map prettier!
   Note: 01:57:565 (4,5,1) - copypasta, copypasta. A good pattern can be used twice, just try to fix this blanket to make it even better!
6. 01:22:365 (2,4) - nazi - (4) is too close to (2). It's not a big deal, but some players may complain "your triangle is not perfect and blah-blah-blah", also beginners may mistakenly miss (3) because of this. Just try to make a perfect triangle here if it's possible
7. 01:45:865 - this part of the video is amazing. http://puu.sh/4zQbn.jpg <3
8. 02:32:765 (2,3,4) - well, well, well.. Don't be THAT lazy, please ;_; Beginners will be bored of playing the same pattern again. haters will eat you
9. 02:41:565 (2,3,1) - I can't tell for sure if such stacks are playable for the easiest diff. Think about it or ask someone, Beginners would be happy to see something else here. Anyway, it's up to you.
   
   Nice diff!

1. 00:06:365 (4,1) - nazi - c'mon, man, you can make a REALLY, REALLY awesome blanket here. Just take a look at this!
   Note: 00:27:965 (5,6) - 01:19:365 (3) - 02:29:765 (3) - same as above
2. 00:11:165 (3) - HEY!HEY HEY! Maaan, that's a PERFECT place for a jump, try to place a jump here, during a testplay I've got a 100 here because I've expected a jump here. Same happens a few more times. Do the same with such patterns if you agree :3
3. 00:39:765 (3) - maybe it's just me but this pattern flows much better if you use Ctrl+G on it. It fits with clap sounds and vocals more, imo.
   Note: 01:50:165 (3) - uguuuuu, the same! Also, it makes this jump a little bit more playable
4. 00:47:765 (6,1) - swap new combos + new combo on 00:48:765 (2). It will break your pattern a little, but it fits with vocals and music so good, imo. Man, you should try it! See if you like it or not!
5. 00:57:165 (1,2,3) - spectacular. Love this pattern.
6. 01:02:965 (1) - probably it's a bit TOO unexpected for a [Hard] diff. I'd leave some more (1/1) empty space after the spinner!
7. 02:07:565 (1,2,3) - I do like these sliders. I can look at this pattern forever. No jokes, this is simple and amazing!
   
   That's a great diff. A couple of patterns could be done a little better (yeah, fix your blankets :</) but it's still a great diff!

• [Hard]

1. 00:15:165 (6) - I think the flow here is not good. If you place the slider like this it will feel more enjoyable to play since this curve follows up with 00:14:565 (5) and 00:15:565 (7,8,9) placements more flowy than your current way.
   
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2. 00:17:365 (2) - Same with this note, maybe you did it on purpose. If you place this note more to the right it flows better with the two curves:
   
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3. 00:18:565 (6) - Perhaps make this slider curved so it flows better with 00:18:965 (7,8,9,10,11,1)?
   
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4. 00:59:965 (2) - This note is not correctly placed. The spacing is inconsistent here so fix it with ds~
5. 01:00:965 (5) - Hitfinish to emphasize?
6. 01:12:365 (1) - This pattern would flow muuch better if you flip this slider horizontally, like this!~ the curve made with the notes is more flowy like this. :3
   
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7. 01:13:565 (3) - Perhaps add a hitfinish at the end of this slider? sounds good for me, but it's up to you!
8. 02:11:365 (5) - Again another hitfinish to emphasize?
9. 02:22:765 (1) - Same issue again, if you flip horizontally this slider, the pattern would flow much better (like with 01:12:365 (1))
10. 02:23:965 (3) - Again, due to the big white tick, and the melody itself I think a hitfinish at the end of this slider fits with the song.

• [Normal]

1. 00:05:365 (1) - I dont think this note is needed here. It's the easiest difficulty of the set. It's stacked with a slider.. which may result tricky for very beginner players, and it's on a red tick.. well it'ts up to you.
2. 00:32:765 (1,2) - ^ Same about this pattern.. uhmmm I'm not sure.. we can discuss it on irc anyway.
3. 00:58:365 (2,3,4) - ^
4. 01:13:965 (4) - Like I suggested you in the Hard diff you can add a hitifnish here to emphasize this part (and here 02:17:965 (4) etc etc you know xd)
5. 02:10:765 (5) - How about a hitfinish at the end o.o? also with 01:00:365 (5).
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mancuso_JM_ wrote:

Oh.. Wait.. Kei is modding!? wtf!? xDD..
Well, ninja'd 1 more time !!
Best of luck anyway, Andrea! ^_^

Andrea wrote:

Thank you Kei

It's time to Dash!~