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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 13 января 2014 г. at 15:56:22

Artist: PinkiePieSwear
Title: Sunshine and Celery Stalks
Source: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Tags: mlp applejack best pony silverboxer wa_
BPM: 130
Filesize: 23072kb
Play Time: 03:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Celery Stalks (4,82 stars, 570 notes)
  2. Colorful Flowers (4,99 stars, 544 notes)
  3. silverboxer's Hard (4,39 stars, 284 notes)
  4. wa's Normal (2,78 stars, 223 notes)


Download: PinkiePieSwear - Sunshine and Celery Stalks
Download: PinkiePieSwear - Sunshine and Celery Stalks (no video)
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Данунахуй короч
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you should change ar from 9 to 8, that way it'll match the pace of the song, like in the other pinkiepieswear beatmap. also i dont know if its just me, but i think in some parts of the map the timing is a little bit off...other than that it is a good looking map ^.^
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15:45 Papysh: Now i will mod it
15:46 Papysh: 00:07:816 (1) -
15:46 Papysh: use 0,5 spacing here so it can play better
15:48 Papysh: 00:08:508 (4,5,6,7,8) -
15:48 Papysh: http://puu.sh/4n0zr/c631fdb616.jpg
15:48 Papysh: decrease spacing to x1,0
15:48 Papysh: also
15:48 Papysh: try to fit that hole between that notes 00:09:431 (8,1) -
15:49 Papysh: somehow
15:50 Papysh: 00:20:969 (2) - you missed upbeat here
15:50 Papysh: im suggesting you to add custom hitclam to mapset
15:51 Papysh: Do you even read that?
15:51 S0nic whooshx: How do you think if i'll change numbers here http://puu.sh/4n0zr/c631fdb616.jpg to make more difficult jumps would be good?
15:51 S0nic whooshx: Sure
15:51 Papysh: kk
15:51 S0nic whooshx: Like 4-6-5-7
15:51 Papysh: can be
15:51 S0nic whooshx: k
15:51 Papysh: 00:25:123 (3,4,5,6,7) -
15:52 Papysh: http://puu.sh/4n0Gq/b72560eb6b.jpg
15:52 Papysh: just flip them by ctrl + < two times
15:52 Papysh: and use ctrl + g
15:52 Papysh: so it can flow better
15:52 Papysh: 00:26:508 (2,3,4) -
15:52 S0nic whooshx: How to open chat in editor? =D
15:52 Papysh: http://puu.sh/4n0Ie/8794bd49fe.jpg
15:53 Papysh: F8
15:53 Papysh: if you mean that
15:53 Papysh: XD
15:53 S0nic whooshx: Thanks
15:53 Papysh: 00:34:816 (4,5) - between that notes should be 1/4
15:54 Papysh: 00:53:046 (3) -
15:54 Papysh: Ctrl + G here
15:54 Papysh: so it will flow better and make little jumpo
15:54 Papysh: jump*
15:55 Papysh: 00:53:969 (4) - same here
15:55 Papysh: 00:55:585 (6) - if you have to break flow here you can use that pattern
15:55 Papysh: http://puu.sh/4n0Na/8aadaf8724.jpg
15:56 S0nic whooshx: Can i put it higher?
15:56 Papysh: sure
15:56 Papysh: 01:30:893 (6,7) -
15:56 Papysh: this
15:57 S0nic whooshx: Like to 300 40
15:57 Papysh: make (6) look better with (5)
15:57 S0nic whooshx: yes, 7 is corrupted
15:57 Papysh: and then make (7) look like (6) and just use ctrl + g on it
15:57 Papysh: so it can flow and look good
15:58 S0nic whooshx: In all other sliders like that 7 i used 0.75 velocity
15:58 Papysh: something on (6) like this ctrl C, Ctrl V, ctrl H, Ctrl G
15:58 S0nic whooshx: Should i do the same in this case?
15:58 Papysh: i dont know
15:58 Papysh: im not good mapper though
15:59 S0nic whooshx: I'll do something about that so
15:59 Papysh: 02:16:123 (3,4,5,6) -
15:59 Papysh: the (6) must have bigger spaccing
15:59 Papysh: or be at least stacked with 5
16:00 Papysh: 02:17:969 (5) - move it a vit down even if yo uhave to break spacing
16:00 Papysh: Brb i gtg for 15 mins
16:00 S0nic whooshx: k
16:18 S0nic whooshx: About 00:07:816 (1) - do you mean 0,5 of my spacing or just 0,5?
16:21 Papysh: just xo,5
16:22 Papysh: 02:55:585 (6,1) - skipped downbeat
16:23 Papysh: its most of things i noticed
16:23 Papysh: i post
posted
Just a short discussion. Mostly about broken, in my opinion, flow and spacing. Also I feel kinda bad about the diff spread. Also, we've fixed some general things. Nothing really special, so I won't post the log.
posted
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From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.


[General]
Resnap all notes!
combo color not same.
Some combo color are too same.

[Sunshine]
Video,0,"PinkiePieSwear - Sunshine and Celery Stalks.avi"
00:40:594 (4,5,6,1) - Too hard to play, try not use objects start with red line.
01:12:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same.
01:19:363 (1) - Do not hide Object.
01:22:132 (1,2,3) - Too far.
01:23:978 (5) - Try not use 2-return slider (split it).
02:10:825 (2,3,4) - Too hard to read.
02:22:594 (1,2) - Too hard to read.
03:09:209 (1,2,3,4) - Too hard to read.
OD-1

[Celery Stalks]
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
4124,461.538461538462,4,1,0,70,1,0
Resnap all notes.
00:35:739 (8,9) - recalculate all slider length.
skiped.

You can call me recheck later.
Good map, good luck.
posted
Test Play Request from my queue



1pc

the map can be improved if you want

change this plz
posted
From your request ~ OMG MLP !

[Celery Stalks]
00:05:967 (1,2,3,4) - Do a square with (4)
00:07:813 (9) - Symmetry
00:11:505 (1,2) - Move them down
00:46:582 (1) - Move this slider, it's ugly 'cause of the previous circle
01:17:967 (1,2) - Blanket ?

01:18:890 (3) - So symmetry like the (1) (If you fixed)
01:23:505 (1) - Do more rounded (like the previous slider)
02:16:582 (7) - Move that circle
02:22:351 (5) - Move at x:256 y:128
02:53:044 (2) - I don't think this patern is necessary xD
03:18:890 (4,5) - I think it's better to have a reverse slider with the (4)

Good Luck *u*
posted
hello, from my queue.
i feel this music like dj which i don't like.

general:
if you can, mapping 1 or more difficulty yourself.

diff:Celery Stalks
02:31:351 - so long the break here. try to add some note here?
the ending is too long, cut it or map more is better.
the note are ok

good luck.
posted
Hi ~ :3

[Celery Stalks]
  • 00:21:197 (3) - reduce some curve
    00:23:274 (5,7) - i feel a little confuse ;w;
    00:42:890 (1,2) - what do you think about overlapping ?
    00:51:890 (8,2) - overlapping
    01:00:197 (4) - move to (236,272) for symmetry
    01:05:505 (2,3) - exchange the position. i think it will be fun
    01:14:505 (2) - overlapping on 01:13:582 (6) - start
    01:16:582 (3) - reduce some curve
    01:17:967 (6) - NC
    02:12:659 (6,7) - avoid overlapping. many players will click earlier than necessary.
    02:15:428 (2) - opposite slider
    02:56:736 (5,2) - overlapping
posted
From my modding queue!
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/155654

[Sunshine]
00:04:121 - 00:33:659 - Huge gap, the other difficulty has notes in it. Why doesn't this?

00:41:274 (5) - Replace with two normal hitnotes. 00:41:274 and 00:41:736.
00:50:736 (4,5,6) - Make it identical to 00:43:351 (2,3)
01:18:428 (4,1) - Avoid overlap.
01:49:813 (6) - Avoid using a 2x repeated slider. Instead, make it like this.


02:12:659 (3) - ^, it's too hard to read.


03:12:659 (1) - So hard to read ..

If my mod didn't help, don't give kudosu.
I only modded this difficulty, couldn't find anything to mod in the other one. :P
Good luck!~
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hi From Kritio's Modding Queuse (Normal / M4M)
sorry, because time is too late. :o

[General]
Add Video to Normal

[Normal]
01:41:966 (1) - 01:42:197 - move
01:42:659 (2) - 01:42:890 - ^
01:49:351 (1,2) - same as above
02:20:043 (2,4) - circle remove
03:01:351 - Finish add (soft)


[Sunshine]
Please change the name to the difficulty. : Hard
00:33:659 - Finish add
01:58:582 - vol.20 add
02:02:274 (1) - Finish add
02:07:813 (6) - NC add
02:12:659 (3,4) - Too weird flow. image
02:22:813 (2) - 02:22:928 - move
02:30:890 (7) - NC add?
02:31:813 - Finish add
02:54:197 (7) - NC add
02:58:582 (5) - ^
03:01:351 - here circle(Finish) add?
03:16:582 (5) - NC add?

[Celery Stalks]
00:23:967 - Clap add
00:26:736 (4) - ^
00:27:659 - ^
00:28:121 (8,1) - change the new combo.
00:45:659 (5) - NC add?
01:00:428 (5,1) - Clap remove
01:03:197 - Finish add
01:32:736 - here circle(Finish) add?
02:47:044 (2,3) - ctrl + g (vocal norte)
03:01:351 (1) - finish add

GL :D/
posted
I-I'm sorry \(QAQ\) I'm allergic to ponies desu... deny desu gomen
posted
Hey, from my modding queue!

Easy
Care for hitsound?
00:11:966 (5) - Suggest you new combo this note
00:17:043 (1) - Removing new combo?
00:22:582 (4,5) - Why dont delete these two and make a slider a bit like 00:20:736 (3) ?
In general, your combo are way too short. Consider making them a bit longer, from 4-6
01:31:813 (2) - Maybe remove the reverse arrown and copy this: 01:29:043 (1,2)
01:50:043 (2) - Instead of one notes on the red tick, put 2 notes and the next and previous white ticks.
03:15:197 (3) - Stack it with the (4) not with the (2)
You also COMPLETELY forgot about the video only on this difficutly.

Sunshine
Care for hitsound?
May i suggest you put a circle 00:43:121 and 00:44:044 also, 00:44:968
00:49:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In this stream of circles, why don't you put at least like on slider, like?
01:12:197 (1) - Approach it from previous note! :o
01:16:121 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:03:197 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:09:197 (1) - Distance it from the next note; or 03:09:890 (2) - Approach it with the next note :o

Celery Stalk
I can't really see errors, since i'm not VERY experienced. But one thing would be to make your combo a bit larger.

Colorful Flower
Not that experienced, i don't think i can't mod ;_;, maybe again at short combo?

SORRY IF I WAS RUDE, or anything.
If you don't mind i could also do Easy version?
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Winek wrote:

Hey, from my modding queue!

Easy
Care for hitsound? Copied from other diffs
00:11:966 (5) - Suggest you new combo this note +
00:17:043 (1) - Removing new combo? +
00:22:582 (4,5) - Why dont delete these two and make a slider a bit like 00:20:736 (3) ? No dfference
In general, your combo are way too short. Consider making them a bit longer, from 4-6
01:31:813 (2) - Maybe remove the reverse arrown and copy this: 01:29:043 (1,2) I think it would be wrong as it doesn't match with vocal
01:50:043 (2) - Instead of one notes on the red tick, put 2 notes and the next and previous white ticks. Same as previous
03:15:197 (3) - Stack it with the (4) not with the (2) +
You also COMPLETELY forgot about the video only on this difficutly. Fixed(I think xD)

Sunshine
Care for hitsound? +
May i suggest you put a circle 00:43:121 and 00:44:044 also, 00:44:968 +
00:49:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In this stream of circles, why don't you put at least like on slider, like? -
01:12:197 (1) - Approach it from previous note! :o It would break a nice pattern :<
01:16:121 (1) - Remove new combo? +
03:03:197 (1) - Remove new combo? +
03:09:197 (1) - Distance it from the next note; or 03:09:890 (2) - Approach it with the next note :o+

Celery Stalk
I can't really see errors, since i'm not VERY experienced. But one thing would be to make your combo a bit larger.

Colorful Flower
Not that experienced, i don't think i can't mod ;_;, maybe again at short combo?

Thank you for mod =3

SORRY IF I WAS RUDE, or anything.
If you don't mind i could also do Easy version?
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Hello.

  1. Your difficulty names are unrankable. Here is what the ranking criteria say:
    in other words, make sure the average human player can understand what difficulty the map is by reading the difficulty name. without knowing the mapper. without special knowledge of a niche topic.
    More information can be found here.
    So please change them to easy normal hard insane.

Since I have no idea what diffs they are, I'll just mod them in the order I see it.

[wa_'s normal]
  1. 00:17:043 (3) - You've been following the downbeats for NC's before, why stop here? NC this
  2. 00:23:966 (5,1) - Blanket is slightly off. Use the approach circle of 00:23:966 (5) - to fix it
  3. 00:26:966 (2,3) - This goes a bit high up, a different pattern. The way it is setup now is awkward and flows weirdly to the next note. Here is a bad example

    I'm sure you can fix it up to look better
  4. 00:38:274 (2,3) - Would be nicer as a blanket
  5. 00:42:890 (3) - This doesn't really hold the rhythm for me.
  6. 00:58:582 (2,1) - Overlaps are confusing to newer players. Plus this one doesn't look very good :|
  7. 01:15:659 (4,1) - Blanket is slightly off
  8. 01:31:813 (2) - This doesn't quite hold a rhythm either. Try a circle 01:31:813 (2) - here 01:32:274 (3) - here 01:32:736 (4) - and here
  9. 01:36:428 - No point for this green line, please remove

[Sunshine]
  1. 00:36:890 (5) - Not good rhythm, change it to three circles. Each one 1/2 from eachother
  2. 00:53:967 (2,3) - Not a good overlap. Looks like a mistake if anything
  3. 00:59:044 (1) - Rhythm is weird. Also remove NC.
  4. 00:59:736 (9) - If you follow above NC here
  5. 01:05:967 - Need a note here
  6. 01:06:890 - ^ Please have notes on strong beats!
  7. 01:12:890 ^ Map to the beat not the vocals
  8. 01:23:967 (1,3) - Overlap again that looks like mistake
  9. 01:30:890 (6) - Not really liking this slider
  10. 02:57:659 (2,1) - Stack this correctly. 02:58:582 (1) - should be at 395:117
  11. 03:06:890 (4,5) - What is this rhythm? Make them 1/1s.. 3/4 is weird

good luck.

inb4cdfa
posted
Change my diff name to wa's Normal pls (just remove _ from diffname)
btw You don't have to check mods for my diff, just wait until I'll do it and send here corrected diff (pm me if I forget). Sorry for being inactive here :oops:
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wa_ wrote:

Change my diff name to wa's Normal pls (just remove _ from diffname)
btw You don't have to check mods for my diff, just wait until I'll do it and send here corrected diff (pm me if I forget). Sorry for being inactive here :oops:
k, i already made a few changes, you can check them and keep ones which you like


Expecting a huuuuuuuge post about my diffs >_<
posted
[Normal]

00:20:736 (3) - Slider Looks Slightly Weird at the top, Consider Changing
00:59:505 (1) - Half the Slider + 1 repeat Arrow

Good Luck!

Thanks for using the Modding queue!
posted
Get this map ranked :3 Its so awsome !
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