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illuminist
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 14 สิงหาคม 2552 at 0:44:51

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: My Time
Tags: vocaloid hatsume miku my time pv watashi no tokikan
BPM: 145
Filesize: 12026kb
Play Time: 01:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.73 stars, 204 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 257 notes)
  3. Normal (4.3 stars, 160 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - My Time
Download: Hatsune Miku - My Time (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hatsune Miku's PV song.

The japanese name is Watashi no Jikan.

I hope you will like it. ^^


Lastest Update 14/8/2009
pete2528
ตามมาโหลด เดียวมาคอมเม็นนะ

ฮ่ะๆ สนุกดีครับ กลับมาให้ดาว
James2250
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Topic Starter
illuminist

James2250 wrote:

dont have notes before the offset so move offset back to 6777 or earlier.. don't forget to resnap after

normal:
00:37:19 (4) - decrease by 1 repeat?
01:17:95 (16) - slightly long combo :/
01:24:57 (1) - delete and move spinner forward?

hard:
01:21:46 (1) - unrankable spinner (auto needs to get 2000 on it)
01:24:77 (2) - delete and move spinner forward?

insane:
00:32:43 (3,4,5,6) - bad spacing
01:23:22 (2) - move up by 1 level 3 grid
01:24:77 (2) - delete and move spinner forward?

have a star :)
All fixed.

Thank you for modding and a star ;)
Estelle18
มาให้ ดาว ด้วยความรัก Miku >W<~

พยายามเข้านะ คิวคุง งิ :)
orioncomet
ก็ไม่รู้ว่าจะmod ได้ดีแค่ไหนนะคิวคุง :oops:

[Normal]
01:19:708(spinner) เอามาไว้ที่ 01:19:812 แล้วก็ให้จบที่ 01:20:846
01:39:674(spinner) ต้องใส่เสียงจบด้วยมั้ยอ่ะคิวคุง?

[Hard]
00:33:674(7) ขยับลงนิดนึง
00:37:191(5) ^
01:39:777(spinner) ต้องใส่เสียงจบด้วยมั้ยอ่ะคิวคุง?

[insane]
- XD ชอบอันนี้ที่ซู๊ดดดดดด
( อันนี้มีเสียงจบ -.- )




+star~ >w<)~
tarbukii
mod ครั้งแรกเหมือนกันครับ :)

ตรง normal Sound ปรับเสียงให้เบานิดนึงหน่อยครับ (ดังจนเกือบจับจังหวะไม่ทัน)

ตรงระดับ Insane ช่วงท้ายเพลงนี่ ว่างไว้หรือเปล่าครับ (เหลือหลายวิ กว่าจะจบ) - -*

อย่างไงก็ ให้ดาวอ่าครับ ^^

ชอบเพลงน่ารักดี (มิคุก็น่ารัก) เหอะๆ ;)
orioncomet
> tarbukii
มาตอบคำถามแทนคนทำเพลงละกัน -.-
เรื่องระดับเสียงพลอยเฉยๆนะ nocomment ละกัน ^^'
ส่วนเรื่องการที่มันเหลือหลายวินาทีกว่าจะจบนั้น
ถ้าตัวสุดท้ายของแมพระดับนั้นๆจบที่ไหน เพลงในแมพนั้นๆก็จะจบลงที่นั่นด้วย
ไม่จำเป็นว่าโน๊ตตัวสุดท้ายอยู่ที่ไหน เพลงจะต้องสิ้นสุดที่นั่น
และส่วนมากจะนิยมใส่เสียงFinish(หรือไม่ใส่ก็ได้) เพื่อให้คนmodรู้ว่า "มันจบแล้วนะ"

- การmod คือ การให้คำแนะนำเพิ่มเติมหรือข้อเสนอแนะเพิ่มเติมเกี่ยวกับแมพนั้นๆ
เช่น ใส่ตรงนี้ เพิ่มตรงนี้ ลดตรงนี้ ย้ายตรงนี้ จังหวะนี้ไม่ตรง ปรับoffset ปรับBMP บลาๆๆ ฯลฯ
เผื่อว่าคนทำแมพอาจจะตาลายจนผิดพลาดในบางที่

ปล. ไม่เหมือนนะ พลอยไม่ไ่ด้modครั้งนี้ครั้งแรกงิ ;)
Iluhiwizel
little mod :)

ความคิดเห็นส่วนตัวอ่าครับ (แล้วแต่จะโปรดมิโปรด :P )

:ALL:
kiai ผมว่าเปลี่ยนไปไว้ ตรง 01:11:328 น่าจะok (ผมรู้ว่าที่ใช้มันท่อนฮุกพอดี แต่ดูเหมือนมันยาวไป-0- )

:Normal:
00:11:535 (1) เอา new combo ออก แล้วมาวางซ้อน (2) น่าจะดูดีกว่า
00:11:742 (2) new combo ตรงนี้แทน งิ พอดูแล้วมันจะดูเหมือนโน้ตมันไม่ซ่อน
00:57:880 (1) เอาลงมาให้เสมอกับ (2) น่าจะดีกว่านะครับ
01:02:845 (7,8,9) น่าจะจัดให้มันดูสวยกว่านี้นะ (อันนี้ก้อสวยอยู่แล้ว ผมสำหรับผมมันดูแปลก - -")

:Hard:
มองๆ ดู ok ครับ (เพราะอามก็คิดคล้ายๆ พลอยอะ)

:Insane:
00:56:432 (6,7) ผมว่าเสียง Finish มันไม่ค่อยเหมาะนะใช้เสียง whistle แทน แล้วเสียง Finishไปไส่ที่ 00:57:052 จะดีกว่า
00:56:742 (x) ไส่โน้ต งิ

เพิ่งmodนะครับ (แต่อาจจะไม่ใช่ครั้งแรก-.-) ก็ถ้าคัดค้านตรงไหน (หรือทุกๆส่วน ก็บอกกันได้ครับ)

ชอบเพลง Miku ทุกเพลงเลย>//<~ +Star ครับ ^^

ปล. พยายามจะใช้ eng แต่ใช้ไม่ได้ซักที (เพราะไม่เก่ง) ขออภัยด้วยงิ T^T
Topic Starter
illuminist

Xen wrote:

little mod :)

ความคิดเห็นส่วนตัวอ่าครับ (แล้วแต่จะโปรดมิโปรด :P )

:ALL:
kiai ผมว่าเปลี่ยนไปไว้ ตรง 01:11:328 น่าจะok (ผมรู้ว่าที่ใช้มันท่อนฮุกพอดี แต่ดูเหมือนมันยาวไป-0- ) ซอยkiai timeเพิ่มเป็นหลายส่วนละครับ

:Normal:
00:11:535 (1) เอา new combo ออก แล้วมาวางซ้อน (2) น่าจะดูดีกว่า เอาnew comboออกอย่างเดียวครับ
00:11:742 (2) new combo ตรงนี้แทน งิ พอดูแล้วมันจะดูเหมือนโน้ตมันไม่ซ่อน ใส่เรียบร้อย
00:57:880 (1) เอาลงมาให้เสมอกับ (2) น่าจะดีกว่านะครับ จัดไป
01:02:845 (7,8,9) น่าจะจัดให้มันดูสวยกว่านี้นะ (อันนี้ก้อสวยอยู่แล้ว ผมสำหรับผมมันดูแปลก - -") จัดใหม่หมดละ

:Hard:
มองๆ ดู ok ครับ (เพราะอามก็คิดคล้ายๆ พลอยอะ)

:Insane:
00:56:432 (6,7) ผมว่าเสียง Finish มันไม่ค่อยเหมาะนะใช้เสียง whistle แทน แล้วเสียง Finishไปไส่ที่ 00:57:052 จะดีกว่า ผมคิดว่าโอเคแล้ว
00:56:742 (x) ไส่โน้ต งิ ใส่แล้วจังหวะแปลกๆ = =

เพิ่งmodนะครับ (แต่อาจจะไม่ใช่ครั้งแรก-.-) ก็ถ้าคัดค้านตรงไหน (หรือทุกๆส่วน ก็บอกกันได้ครับ)

ชอบเพลง Miku ทุกเพลงเลย>//<~ +Star ครับ ^^

ปล. พยายามจะใช้ eng แต่ใช้ไม่ได้ซักที (เพราะไม่เก่ง) ขออภัยด้วยงิ T^T
แล้วก็ปรับลดเสียง Sample Sound ให้เบาลงนิดนึง เพราะคิดในใจไว้ตั้งแต่แรกแล้วว่าเสียงมันดังกลบดนตรีหมดเลย

และเรื่อง Insaneที่ไว้ไว้ยาวๆตอนท้าย คือตั้งใจว่าจะให้เพลงจบพร้อมกับ mv ครับ แล้วก็ Insane จะเป็นระดับที่โน้ทหมดก่อนระดับอื่น เพื่อความสวยงามจึงได้เลื่อนระยะออกไปนิดนึงครับ ผู้เล่นถ้าไม่อยากรอก็กด Skip ข้ามได้เลยเพราะไม่มีโน้ทต่อแล้ว
blissfulyoshi
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Lissette
Nice map :)

Suggestion

Hard
00:38:22 (1) - end spinner at 00:39:05

Star!
Lizbeth
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tieff
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Topic Starter
illuminist
blissfulyoshi >>
I have fixed all of them and decrease overall sample sound level a little.


Lissette >>
That is a good point. But it will go quiet harder.


Lizbeth >>
I can't find any section for break time. But song itself is short so that break time might be unnecessary.
After I changed end of slide, the sound is so cool! Thank you.


tieff >>
I think a finish sound is too alone around those beats.
Thank you for a KD star :)


Thank you to everyone for modding and stars ;)
zerosmart
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eee
eeemod GO!!!

[Normal]
nothing wrong with the map
00:35:32 (video event) - that's not very nice, is it

[Hard]

again, nothing wrong, just that problem with the video

[Insane]
00:11:74 (5) - this slider was hidden to me. I played this one first and was unaware that the slider would reverse.
that is all

I have a feeling you have a ranked map on your hands,
check in with a couple of BATs, they can both, mod and rank your map
Topic Starter
illuminist

eee wrote:

eeemod GO!!!

[Normal]
nothing wrong with the map
00:35:32 (video event) - that's not very nice, is it
Well, think it positive. Only who had seen this will know what it is. :P

[Hard]

again, nothing wrong, just that problem with the video

[Insane]
00:11:74 (5) - this slider was hidden to me. I played this one first and was unaware that the slider would reverse.
that is all
I have re-aligned for you.

I have a feeling you have a ranked map on your hands,
check in with a couple of BATs, they can both, mod and rank your map
Thank you for modding and a star. ;)
alvisto
Hi ! Fulfilling your request in #mod. Your map doesn't need any more small details mod, as the timing, beats, and spacing are all good I think. So, below are jsut my suggestions though :

General
The combo colours are too similar, meaning I can't differentiate dark green and jade green clearly, especially in INSANE, where the you really needs colour to differetiate those combo sets well.

NORMAL
01:34:294 (3) - This note here is weird. If you wanna keep the combo, I suggest you move to the previous white tick, so that it match previous combo sets. Or, if you wanna keep the current beats timing placing, at least let it have a new combo, and then cancel the new combo of the next neat. =P
Other than that, it's fine. I wanna play it already~~~ :3

HARD
01:23:742 (1) - Do you wanna align it properly with the previous 2 & 3 ? Ignore this. =P

INSANE
General feeling : When I test play, the sliders seems like move too slow compared to me hitting the beats, but I don't know about this one, maybe it's fine to others.
00:56:432 - You wanna fix this slider's shape ?
I notice this in INSANE. During test play, when the beats end, the songs doesn't end, instead there's a Skip button there, and players are forced to follow the dragged song. Remove "black" in SB solves. What does your Black SB doing there ? Are you purposely putting it there so that your song ends later ?

Good choice of song and a fun looking map. Can't wait this get ranked ! Star !
Topic Starter
illuminist

alvisto wrote:

Hi ! Fulfilling your request in #mod. Your map doesn't need any more small details mod, as the timing, beats, and spacing are all good I think. So, below are jsut my suggestions though :

General
The combo colours are too similar, meaning I can't differentiate dark green and jade green clearly, especially in INSANE, where the you really needs colour to differetiate those combo sets well. Color has been change ;)

NORMAL
01:34:294 (3) - This note here is weird. If you wanna keep the combo, I suggest you move to the previous white tick, so that it match previous combo sets. Or, if you wanna keep the current beats timing placing, at least let it have a new combo, and then cancel the new combo of the next neat. =P
Other than that, it's fine. I wanna play it already~~~ :3
After I removed it, it's sound better and don't have a combo issue. So it disappears now. :D

HARD
01:23:742 (1) - Do you wanna align it properly with the previous 2 & 3 ? Ignore this. =P

INSANE
General feeling : When I test play, the sliders seems like move too slow compared to me hitting the beats, but I don't know about this one, maybe it's fine to others. I have adjusted the slider speed equal to distance of note in same beat. So the slider may look slow for some people.
00:56:432 - You wanna fix this slider's shape ? Fixed it
I notice this in INSANE. During test play, when the beats end, the songs doesn't end, instead there's a Skip button there, and players are forced to follow the dragged song. Remove "black" in SB solves. What does your Black SB doing there ? Are you purposely putting it there so that your song ends later ?
My idea is to end the song and video together. Insane end the song earlier than other to relax the player with a cute Miku in the end ;) (if the video is turned on) So since it is unnecessary, I would remove it later

Good choice of song and a fun looking map. Can't wait this get ranked ! Star !
Thank you for modding and a star :)
Sleep Powder
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Topic Starter
illuminist
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alvisto

illuminist wrote:

My idea is to end the song and video together. Insane end the song earlier than other to relax the player with a cute Miku in the end ;) (if the video is turned on) So since it is unnecessary, I would remove it later
I see, coz I downloaded the no-video version, so I can't appreciate the ending thingy. If that's the case, keep it, I alwasy like the idea of letting player to see remaining video. If they don't have time, they could just skip it though. =P

Aww~~ this map and the song is really good :3 I can't wait to play it already :3 :3 :3
vincerio
miku >w<~~~~~~~~~~~~
love miku~
:oops: + star~
Metroid
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alvisto
Ok, more mod in conjunction with helping mtmcl clearing his queue. I will do a mod that is as detailed that as I can do to my ability. XD

General suggestion :
1. You wanna try lower the whistle sound ? I tried it already, and it sounds nicer. I will attach the file here. Just copy it to the song folder, and use custom override 1 in all normal timing section.
2. You already changed the colour ? I hardly notice anything, lol

Since I play this map a lot, I will suggest things that I think that may make your map better. Just suggestions though. =D
INSANE
I am a very weak player, that's why I found that the opening is very hard to play. Is it just me or is it really hard to play ? =P Ignore this comment, lol
00:07:39 (5) - add a finish here
00:08:22 (5) - ^
00:09:05 (5) - ^
00:09:88 (5) - ^
00:10:70 (5) - ^
00:10:91 (1) - end of slider, add a finish
00:11:53 (4) - finish
00:11:742 - My suggestion : add a timing section here, lower the volume by 3 ticks, so that the whistle sounds better and doesn't hurt the ears. See suggestion 1.
00:15:363 - Starting from here, the hitsound are nice, but whistle is a bit too loud.
00:15:363 - add a clap here, I think it sound better with the baackground music
01:10:70 (12) - finish
My suggestion:
01:17:95 (2,3,4) - Add 3 new timing sections at 2,3,4. Adjust the volume so that it gradually become louder and louder. I tried it, it sounds better with the music.
01:19:60 (2,3,4) - ^
00:33:05 (7) - This slider is ugly
Suggestion :
01:22:08 (1) - Let this beat have lower hitsounds ( by 2 ticks ), also, remove the finish
01:22:39 (2) - Higher than ^ (by 1 tick), remove finish too.
01:22:70 (3) - Higher than ^, then stay constant after that. I think Kiai starts here better
01:22:91 (1,1) - Remove finish ?

Ok, I will stop here, since I succesfully ask a BAT to look at your map. Good luck in getting the BAT star !

P.S. : I really like this map. :3

Modded by :


Download: normal-hitwhistle.rar
Topic Starter
illuminist

Metroid wrote:

Normal
01:22:08 (1,1,1,1) - Make this 1 combo. Fixed

Hard
Fine to me

Insane
Fine to me

starred'

alvisto wrote:

Ok, more mod in conjunction with helping mtmcl clearing his queue. I will do a mod that is as detailed that as I can do to my ability. XD

General suggestion :
1. You wanna try lower the whistle sound ? I tried it already, and it sounds nicer. I will attach the file here. Just copy it to the song folder, and use custom override 1 in all normal timing section.
2. You already changed the colour ? I hardly notice anything, lol

Since I play this map a lot, I will suggest things that I think that may make your map better. Just suggestions though. =D
INSANE
I am a very weak player, that's why I found that the opening is very hard to play. Is it just me or is it really hard to play ? =P Ignore this comment, lol This happen to me too, since I become a beatmapper long time ago :3
00:07:39 (5) - add a finish here Added but not all. I also added on 1s too
00:08:22 (5) - ^ ^
00:09:05 (5) - ^ ^
00:09:88 (5) - ^ ^
00:10:70 (5) - ^ ^
00:10:91 (1) - end of slider, add a finish I added at start of silder because I added finish at 1s and this make better sound.
00:11:53 (4) - finish
00:11:742 - My suggestion : add a timing section here, lower the volume by 3 ticks, so that the whistle sounds better and doesn't hurt the ears. See suggestion 1. That is a good a idea, I've done it.
00:15:363 - Starting from here, the hitsound are nice, but whistle is a bit too loud. New whistle from you are doing a good work now.
00:15:363 - add a clap here, I think it sound better with the baackground music I don't think so.
01:10:70 (12) - finish Added
My suggestion:
01:17:95 (2,3,4) - Add 3 new timing sections at 2,3,4. Adjust the volume so that it gradually become louder and louder. I tried it, it sounds better with the music. Done
01:19:60 (2,3,4) - ^ Also done
00:33:05 (7) - This slider is ugly Fixed
Suggestion :
01:22:08 (1) - Let this beat have lower hitsounds ( by 2 ticks ), also, remove the finish
01:22:39 (2) - Higher than ^ (by 1 tick), remove finish too.
01:22:70 (3) - Higher than ^, then stay constant after that. I think Kiai starts here better
01:22:91 (1,1) - Remove finish ?

Ok, I will stop here, since I succesfully ask a BAT to look at your map. Good luck in getting the BAT star !

P.S. : I really like this map. :3

Modded by :
Thank you for modding, supporting and star :)
GbL
It's fine for me~

star.
Breeze
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Alace
<insane>
00:11:74 (5,6,7) - finish attack lol
use finish on whtle tick only plz
\really too much (Hard`s sounds better)

good mapset
Topic Starter
illuminist
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Azure_Kite
Here's a random mod as a wannabe mtmcl'ing :3

Green = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
No Problems Found :)

[Hard]
No Problems Found :)
00:46:08 (4) - Maybe make this symmetrical?

[Insane]
No Problems Found :)
00:14:12 (1) - Replace this with a spinner with points at 00:14:225 and 00:14:328 reversed to 00:15:052?
00:29:01 - Add a Beat Here?
00:31:50 - ^
00:34:81 - ^
00:38:94 - ^
00:42:25 - ^
00:45:15 - ^
00:49:29 - ^
00:50:12 - ^


Overall, your map has no actual problems that I can see, and It's a really great map. Starr'd
Topic Starter
illuminist

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's a random mod as a wannabe mtmcl'ing :3

Green = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
No Problems Found :)

[Hard]
No Problems Found :)
00:46:08 (4) - Maybe make this symmetrical? Fixed

[Insane]
No Problems Found :)
00:14:12 (1) - Replace this with a spinner with points at 00:14:225 and 00:14:328 reversed to 00:15:052? Changed
00:29:01 - Add a Beat Here?
00:31:50 - ^
00:34:81 - ^
00:38:94 - ^
00:42:25 - ^
00:45:15 - ^
00:49:29 - ^
00:50:12 - ^
Good notes suggestion. I have added almost all of them, except in Soft section.


Overall, your map has no actual problems that I can see, and It's a really great map. Starr'd
And I used an AImod to check my map twice, I think there are no spacing problem any more, since it can mod only spacing now.


Thank you for modind and star ;)
Ryuukun
i checked and i couldn't find any problems.

star~

maybe one thing.
How about adding a source?
like nico nico video or vocaloid or whereever you got the song.
Topic Starter
illuminist

Ryuukun wrote:

i checked and i couldn't find any problems.

star~

maybe one thing.
How about adding a source?
like nico nico video or vocaloid or whereever you got the song.
I found this video many place: first at Nicovideo, and then Youtube where I got this video.

In my mind, I should put a source as album's name, but I didn't found the name yet.


Thank you for a star ;)
Takuma
It's all good for me, but I think you should map until 01:42:777 like the others. If you say yes, I won't bubble just yet, so have a star in the meantime.
Topic Starter
illuminist

Takuma wrote:

It's all good for me, but I think you should map until 01:42:777 like the others. If you say yes, I won't bubble just yet, so have a star in the meantime.
Is it suggestion?

If it be, I would say no, because i don't want to make it like the easier one (I got no idea around this too).

Thank you for BAT star ;)
Takuma
Okay, bubbled!
deepsea
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illuminist
Wow~~!!

Thank you very, very much. >w<
Estelle18
rank แล้ว ดีใจ ด้วยนะ คิวคูงงงงง ♥
deepsea
tag:watashi no tokikan → watashi no jikan

thanks proseyu and tana @_@
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illuminist

deepsea wrote:

tag:watashi no tokikan → watashi no jikan

thanks proseyu and tana @_@
Oh... how I do update this ranked map?
alvisto
Congratulations Illuminist !
frost-b-spec

illuminist wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 14 สิงหาคม 2552 at 0:44:51
The japanese name is Watashi no Tokikan.
japanese name is...
× watashi no tokikan
○ watashi no zikan
Topic Starter
illuminist

frost-b-spec wrote:

illuminist wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 14 สิงหาคม 2552 at 0:44:51
The japanese name is Watashi no Tokikan.
japanese name is...
× watashi no tokikan
○ watashi no zikan
Changed to Watashi no Jikan.

Thank you ;)
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