M4M
[General]
Set offset to 400, in Fanzhen's hard there is a slider before the offset
[Easy]
Some things in the mod, are about put red nodes on slider tick. You might want to set the rate to 2 to make this easer (don't forget to set it to 1 after you're done)
00:01:900 (1) - Just for the aesthetics, set the slider tick rate to 2, and try to match the red nodes with the slider ticks. this'll give a better feeling when playing it (for example, the beginning
SPOILER420:144
388:168
308:168
276:144
For me (and probably also others) this'll make sliders feel better, and so can newbies "feel" harder rhythm as they move in the beat (too bad there is no beat here orz)
00:01:900 (1,1) - These sliders are slightly overlapping, and the green one also overlaps with the next one. Please do something different with it, unless it's intended. You can also delete it, as the begin is very calm (I honestly don't even understand why this is mapped TBH)
00:22:900 (1,2) - Try to put the red nodes at the sliderticks, it feels better
00:55:900 (2,3,1) - This is a lottle boring, because it's straight horizontal, make the sliders a little curvy so they feel special
01:03:400 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Same here, it feels really bland, and being the good mapper you are, I'm quite sure you can change this properly. Try adding some sliders here
01:36:400 (1,2,3) - And again, same here, it feels boring, and it's a little repetitive. Please do something special wit it, cause it's very boring, sorry
[Irre]
Wait... Are such speed ups/slowdowns allowed in normal? O.o
00:19:900 (1,2) - Improve the blanket, make (1) a little less curvy to make the blanket better
00:25:900 (1,1) - These 2 aren't stacked properly. the first one is at 48:260, the second one at 47:261, try stacking them perfectly.
00:27:400 (1) - It feels better for the flow if you ctrl G this, then you make a circular movement to (2) which can keep that movement up until (3)
00:52:150 (3) - U?gh, kiksliders, please don't use them in normal, as they are rather hard to comprehend, and newbies can't properly see the second reverse Arrow. You're better off making it a 1/2 1 reverse slider and then a circle at the big white tick
00:55:900 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - This part feels rather hard for a normal, mostly because that 1/2 slider in the middle. Make that a circle, and it'll be easier (or redo this part to make it a little simpler
01:13:900 (1,1) - The slider is a little too soon after a spinner. I once read that a slider after a spinner in normal must be 2 beats later
01:24:400 (1) - What the heck? This is a huge kickslider, which makes no sense. Just make it 2 1/2 1-reverses instead of this, as this is really hard to understand by a newbie
01:27:400 (1,2) - Distamce between them is too high, it's not constant. Also, they stack badly
01:44:275 (2) - This slider feels weird, as it starts on a 2nd beat
01:50:462 (1,2,1) - This is too hard for a normal, 1/4, have you gone insane irre?
01:54:400 (1) - The spinner should end 1/4 later, so it ends on a beat, then the next spinner should start 1/4 later, spinnerstarts don't make sound, spinnerends do, so the ends should be snapped to beats, not the starts
[fanzhen]
No kiai?
00:13:150 (3,1) - I'm no fan of this overlap, try making (1,1) the same as 00:01:337 (1,1) - as that'll prevent the overlap
00:16:337 (2) - Having a 1/4 slider feels weird, it feels better if it's a triplet on top of the reverse slider
00:19:337 (2) - ^^
00:25:900 (1,1) - The blanket between these two is pretty bad, the other blankets from that slider seem fine, except this one. (171:36 for the circle seems fine to me)
00:30:775 (2,2) - The overlap here might be confusing, due to the reverse sliders, I recommend you to completely change it, but it can stay though
00:52:525 (3,1) - stack them better? The end of (3) is 261:191, the start of (1) is 260:192
00:52:900 (1,3) - Overlap looks a little bad, try stacking them
01:23:650 (1,1) - Is there a reason both have a NC? I understand the first, but I see no need in having the second one NC'd
01:51:400 (1,2) - Blanket needs some improvement, make the sliders a little wider for this
[Hyper]
00:14:556 (3) - Perhaps move this to 250:253, so it feels more like 1/4. A stack feels weird TBH
00:16:712 (9,1) - 1/4 jump seems a little too high, space them less, because it feels like 1/2 (which is not weird, because this song has some weird timing)
00:17:556 (3) - Move to 489:82 for 1/4 feeling
01:16:056 (3) - 334:144 for better 1/4 feeling
01:39:025 (1) - Why a NC here, it doesn't really fit IMO
Great diff
[LKs]
Rename to LKs's another for proper grammar (LKs is singular, not plural, so it should get an extra s, and yes, this is correct (not many people believe this strangely enough))
No kiai?
00:16:900 (1) - The reverses feel boring, try making it multiple sliders or circles, as this is pretty boring, as you just hold it and do nothing
00:30:775 (2,3,4,5,1) - The (1) feels really weird, as it's 1/2, but has 1/4 distance, which is really confusing, since it's not logic, due to spacing
00:33:775 (5,1) - ^^
00:42:025 (1,2,3,4) - What's the point in these? There is no 1/8 in the music, and it creates useless difficulty, you're better of making it a 1/4 stream or just a slider (not 1/8 ofc)
01:26:650 (1,2) - Feels awkward, everything is high spaced, and then this is just on top of each other, make it jump (Ctrl HJ and move to of the bottom of (1))
01:54:400 (1) - Slider is too "curvy", it looks ugly, make it less height, and make a wiggle at every slidertick at rate 2 (or 4). Hard to explain though
01:55:900 (2) - NC, it feels awkward having a new sound without it having a NC
[Another]
00:25:900 (1) - Like I mentioned in easy, try putting the slidernodes on the sliderticks, as that'll feel more special (especially if you can see the sliderticks due to SR2)
00:30:118 (6,1) - I know this map is sadist as hell, but this... Are you serious? This is just too much... a 4.78 1/4 jump... Please... No...
00:46:618 (10,1) - Try to blanket them, add a grey after the red node to do this
00:49:525 (1,2,3,4) - Why all these 1/8? It's feels heavily overmapped
01:06:306 (8,1) - Space them a little less, the 1/4 is too harsh to do this
01:55:525 (10,11,12) - As it's the end which is a little calm, please make this a little easier, the high spacing feels really weird here
01:56:181 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I don't know what to say here... This stream... To insane... Can't survive this (not that I ca nsurvive this map at all
)
No, just no... Please space them for reason above
Why?
Why is this map so sadist?
HW's diff gets SV of 7.00 with 1/4 jumps
Fanzhen's Extra, Great diff, except 01:39:400 (1) - I believe the paths is not clear enough, which makes it unrankable
Skystar is love, but... 01:16:056 (1,2), 01:19:056 (1,2) - - 1/16, is that even okay?
Insane is a perfect diff, but Insane is a bad name for it, it's better if you call it Impossiblestreamsandmadness (Well, just give it a custom name, it fits best, choose what you'd like
)
Great map
Have 4 stars and go rank this thing
Good luck