04:42:134 (10) - I'd recommend a kat here, as the pitch goes up here, like 04:37:620 (2,3) - . The pitch of the two here are lower but the melody behind stays the same.
04:42:065 (9,10,11,12,13) - The whole pattern would then be dk d d d, the kat in the middle is not really in its place. (if you accept ^)
04:46:579 (16,17,18,19) - Pitch down, if you really wish to keep the k @17, make it kkdd. Else, kddd.
As you have told me in pm, you don't know what to put in 4:54:356 - 5:03:11304:54:356 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - I have listened to the song many times in 50% to give you a pattern that fits best :
http://puu.sh/5X8w2.png. The kats are where the pitch is the highest in the stream, except for 49 which closes it. No big notes in it.
The stream part will then continue as dkdkdkdkdkdk...
04:56:204 (50) - Move that at 04:56:295 - ,
04:56:568 (53) - It's the second note of the high pitched melody.
04:56:750 (55) - This should be at 04:56:795 -
04:58:023 (65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79) - Since the stream continues as dkdkdkdkdkd... make small streams instead so you won't have to worry about it.
04:59:477 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95) - You'd be better following the high-pitch melody here.
05:01:295 (96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110) - Then, small streams.
05:02:568 (110,111,112,113,114,115) - And high pitch.
05:03:295 (115) - Should be located at 05:03:341 - .
05:10:932 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72) - Ouch, that stream is weird.
- 2 is overmapping as it is now.
- Every other note should be moved backwards by 1/12
- 05:10:978 (2,3) - Kats
- 05:11:432 (7) - Don
- 05:11:614 (9) - Kat
- 05:11:887 (12) - ^
- 05:12:887 (23,24) - From this point all kats should be moved to the next note !
- 05:14:068 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - All these notes, for some reason, shouldn't be here. Piano notes are blended together so you can't tell if the pitch changes. Also, it starts to be inaudible.
05:20:591 (70,71,72) - This should be at 05:20:468 (69) - !
05:22:066 (83,84,85,86,87) - ^ @ 05:21:943 (82) -
05:23:541 (97,98,99,100,101) - ^ @05:23:418 (96) -
06:27:031 - 06:27:389 - Why not adding dons ? It is a perfect spot here !
06:32:438 (20) - Should be 1/8 before, and 06:32:678 (21) - about the same (put 1/16 though)
07:09:721 (108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126) - I'm not too sure about how to handle the stream, but I'm sure this stream isn't that sticky to the melody. I hear the pitch constantly going up, though.
07:13:918 (150,151,152) - dkd, instead of kdk as the piano's pitch goes down-up-down-up.
Your part isn't as great as dialga's but since you got some more complicated parts, I will admit you've done your best and that's really good! I'll be waiting for your replies if you have new patterns in mind.
so, why don't you move it to Pending, not still in WIP?
