1. Easy (0.88 stars, 117 notes)
2. Relaxing (3.88 stars, 212 notes)
3. Vexed's Hard (4.88 stars, 222 notes)

Takuma wrote:

Modding/tips in IRC. :3

Lybydose wrote:

I didn't look at the actual map, but I noticed one important thing: Your comboburst is not transparent. It's going to look really strange during actual play.

I made a better one in about 2 minutes. The edges aren't that great, but I doubt many people will notice while playing the map. Use it if you want.

fartownik wrote:

[Easy]
00:07:164 - Restack on (1)(00:05:289)'s place. - Done
00:05:289 - Delete new combo. - Done
00:10:913 - Can you make it straight? -lol Done
00:45:595 (5) - New combo. - Done

[Normal]
Fine.

[Vexed' Hard]
It looks fine too...

I already gave you a star

tieff wrote:

Nice map!
Decrease sample volume? - Done

[Easy]
00:05:28 (1) - Remove new combo. - Done
00:45:59 (5) - New combo. - Done
01:05:28 (1) - Remove new combo. - Done
01:06:21 (1) - ^ - Done
02:07:61 (1) - Finish doesn't fit. - Removed spinner o.O cant think of anything to do here, will make it to hard.

[Relaxing]
I don't like finish spam. -~ Fixed, up, went a little overboard D:
00:00:13 (1) - Whistle on end? -~ Done
00:03:41 (5,6) - Whistles. -~ Done
00:05:28 (2) - Whistle. -~ Done
00:07:16 (6,7) - Whistles. -~ Done
00:07:63 (1) - Whistle on end. -~ Done
00:10:91 (4,5) - Whistles. -~ Done
00:12:78 (1) - Whistle. -~ Done
00:14:66 (5,6) - Whistles. -~ Done
00:42:78 (3,1) - Spacing? -~ Done

[Vexed' Hard]
All good.

Sorry, but it still need work. But it's good map.
Star.

gq320 wrote:

I think that this map is good, and the Teara's maps are better than hard.
Anyway, some very little fixes can make this beatmap set better. =)

gq320

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Some of your new combos seem completely random.
Easy:
Some of your new combos seem completely random.
Here is a the way I would fix the beginning combos, but it is your choice.
00:06:22 (3,1) - swap new combo - Done
00:10:91 (1,1) - remove both new combos - Done
00:15:60 (3) - add new combo - Done
Also,the beginning of the map feels like playing a metronome, virtually everything is snapped to a half note.
00:14:66 (2,3) - spacing (spacing has to be consistent in a combo, so if you don't want to change the spacing, you can add new combos) - Done
00:18:41 (2,3) - spacing - Done
00:25:91 (3,4,1,2) - spacing - Done
01:07:15 (1) - plays like a metronome in this section starting here - It's a easy map, cant be helped :c
01:41:83 (2,3) - spacing - Done

Relaxing:
same combo problem as easy
00:00:13 (1) - a little ugly and difficult to read - Done
y does this diff have different timing sections than other difficulties - Fixed
00:22:63 (1) - this set of notes that all have half note timing difference also play like a metronome, pls remap. - Remapped
00:33:87 (1,1,1,1) - this spacing jump is a little random - ^
00:37:15 (4,5) - plays like a metronome in this section starting here - Remapped
01:31:29 (1,2) - spacing - Done

I thought the first 2 diffs were not very interesting. I would like to see a lot of changes.
Star, but I do hope you fix what I wanted.

Teara wrote:

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Some of your new combos seem completely random.
Easy:
Some of your new combos seem completely random.
Here is a the way I would fix the beginning combos, but it is your choice.
00:06:22 (3,1) - swap new combo
00:10:91 (1,1) - remove both new combos
00:15:60 (3) - add new combo
Also,the beginning of the map feels like playing a metronome, virtually everything is snapped to a half note.
00:14:66 (2,3) - spacing (spacing has to be consistent in a combo, so if you don't want to change the spacing, you can add new combos)
00:18:41 (2,3) - spacing
00:25:91 (3,4,1,2) - spacing
01:07:15 (1) - plays like a metronome in this section starting here
01:41:83 (2,3) - spacing

Relaxing:
same combo problem as easy
00:00:13 (1) - a little ugly and difficult to read
y does this diff have different timing sections than other difficulties
00:22:63 (1) - this set of notes that all have half note timing difference also play like a metronome, pls remap.
00:33:87 (1,1,1,1) - this spacing jump is a little random
00:37:15 (4,5) - plays like a metronome in this section starting here
01:31:29 (1,2) - spacing

Hard:
some of the jumps in this map make it borderline insane Nah :p. Aww common.
00:22:39 (4) - new combo Done
00:26:61 (1,1) - remove both of these new combos to be consistent with the red combo or add some combos to the red combo Done and then some.
00:32:23 (1,1) - " "Hmm. Done i guess.
00:37:15 (3) - spacing (you should have consistent spacing within a combo, so add a new combo if you don't want to change the spacing) Easy Jump. I don't think it needs a new combo. If brought up again, i will change.
00:56:14 (7) - spacing Done.
00:58:48 (2) - spacing Jump. I have no trouble foreseeing this when playing.
01:03:17 (5,6) - spacing ^
01:05:74 (9) - spacing Made new combo for jump.
01:31:99 (5) - spacing Spacing here sticks with the previous 4 notes.
02:01:98 (6) - new combo? Sure, why not.

I thought the first 2 diffs were not very interesting. I would like to see a lot of changes.
Star, but I do hope you fix what I wanted.

Wow, that's a lot of changes to make. :d I'll play around with it tomorrow and see what I can do, thanks.

Right now, I should be in bed.

tieff wrote:

Sorry, but I agree with blissfulyoshi... But I can help you with this a bit boring pattern.


See screenshot? Try place note in timeline like this and add claps:
00:23:09 (2)
00:24:03 (5)
00:24:97 (2)
00:25:67 (4,5)

Try to mix, nor only map vocal/music/rhytm.

01:31:29 (1,2) - You really need to fix it.

supergarlic wrote:

chrnooooooo crusadeeeeee <3

favorite anime

maybe ill mod sometimes

tieff wrote:

Sorry, but I agree with blissfulyoshi... But I can help you with this a bit boring pattern.


See screenshot? Try place note in timeline like this and add claps:
00:23:09 (2)
00:24:03 (5)
00:24:97 (2)
00:25:67 (4,5)

Try to mix, nor only map vocal/music/rhytm.

01:31:29 (1,2) - You really need to fix it.

animask wrote:

Hmm another song called "Ready Steady Go"
Oh and Lunatic is usually reserved for Tohou related stuff isn't it?
Maybe its just my imagination.

[Easy]
00:05:28 (1,1) - Remove New Combos
Try to make combos at least 4
00:45:59 (1) - Whistle the beginning? -Done-
01:07:15 (1,2,3) - I like a clap,whistle,clap pattern for this...but idk if you think its good -Done with a little clap clap whistle or whistle whistle, clap and a clap whistle clap-
02:07:61 (1) - Finish here sounds too loud...silence the end of the slider maybe? -Done-

[Relaxing]
Try to make combos at least 4
You might not have to change the repeating sliders...
00:18:88 (1) - SUPER spam xD Extend the slider by 1 tick and take out half of the repeats or so -Done, and tried something else, making it a little bit harder, but just a little
00:21:81 (1) - Remove New Combo -Done-
00:34:34 (1) - ^ -Done-
00:35:28 (1) - ^ -Done-
01:04:10 (1) - ^ -Done-
01:04:34 (1) - ^ -Done-
01:18:87 (3) - Clap? -Done-
01:20:74 (4) - ^ -Done-
01:22:15 (3) - ^ -Done-
01:44:18 (2) - Extend slider by 1 tick and remove repeats? -Done removed 1-2 repeats-
01:59:17 (2) - ^ -^-
02:07:61 (1) - Maybe start the pattern where the notes get softer here? -Done-

[Vexed]
Whats Vexed doing here? o.O
srsly...
00:27:08 (4,5) - Claps?
00:45:59 (6) - Clap beginning of slider?
00:46:29 (1) - Clap the end of the slider?
00:48:40 (6) - Clap only the end of the slider?
00:56:14 (7) - Remove Clap
00:56:37 (1) - Add Clap
00:59:65 (7) - ^
01:31:99 (5) - New Combo?
02:06:20 (5) - ^
The claps seem to dissapear...add some more maybe?

EDIT: I could make the "Lunatic" difficulty if you suddenly don't feel like it
I need to map more anyways~

Takuma wrote:

General:
Big improvement from what I saw before. Good job.

Vexed's Hard:
02:07:61 (1) - Maybe just add another timing section and make it silent and soft sample set?

Relaxing:
00:22:161 - Add a note here for the Go! part?
01:31:99 (1) - Iffy about this jump. In general I don't think jumps for easier difficulty is good so yeah.

Easy:
00:04:35 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.
00:09:97 (1,1) - ^
00:23:09 (4) - New combo.
00:24:03 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:07:61 (1) - I think you should remove the finish on the end of the slider. You can do this by clicking twice on the end, unless you knew this already. >W>

Good job!

animask wrote:

[Easy]
00:15:60 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:09:02 (1,2,3) - Use the Clap whistle pattern for this...
01:10:90 (1,2,3) - ^
01:12:77 (1,2,3) - ^
01:18:40 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe this one too
01:21:21 (1) - I don't really like the whistle...maybe a finish?
01:38:08 (1) - Clap beginning and end of slider
Maybe add a clap whistle pattern here too?
01:40:89 (1,2,3) - Whistle Clap Whistle?
01:46:52 (1,2,3) - ^
02:07:61 (1) - Completely silence this

[Relaxing]
00:20:75 (1,2,3,4,5) - Place 5 notes starting from the white tick to the next white tick on 1/4 beat divisor
00:18:93 (1) - End this on the red tick before this ^
02:07:61 (1) - Same thing I said for Vexed's beatmap before...start the pattern where the notes go softer here

[Vexed]
The hitsounds don't flow to the music too well...

Vexed wrote:

Teara wrote:

animask wrote:

Hmm another song called "Ready Steady Go"
Oh and Lunatic is usually reserved for Tohou related stuff isn't it?
Maybe its just my imagination.


[Vexed]
Whats Vexed doing here? o.O
srsly...
00:27:08 (4,5) - Claps? Sounds good.
00:45:59 (6) - Clap beginning of slider? Done, and a few more.
00:46:29 (1) - Clap the end of the slider? Done. N1.
00:48:40 (6) - Clap only the end of the slider? Nah.
00:56:14 (7) - Remove Clap Nah.
00:56:37 (1) - Add Clap Bleh.
00:59:65 (7) - ^ Done.
01:31:99 (5) - New Combo? Done.
02:06:20 (5) - ^ Yep.
The claps seem to dissapear...add some more maybe? Done plus a new timing section for audio change.


[Vexed]
The hitsounds don't flow to the music too well... Have made corrections for this above.

Takuma wrote:

General:
Big improvement from what I saw before. Good job.

Vexed's Hard:
02:07:61 (1) - Maybe just add another timing section and make it silent and soft sample set? Done.


Good job!

ddrmaniac wrote:

nvm mind the map

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Vexed' Hard]

Lower hitsound volume... please. Mmm.

02:07:61 (1) - Silence this spinner. Better ;D. I lowered this, but i guess i'll silence it .

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Easy]

Much simple, but good. -> Thanks

[Relaxing]

00:02:71 (3,4,5,6,1) - Confusing spacing. -> Tried to fix that
00:33:87 (1,2,1,2) - This is hard, not relaxing. O_O -> aww that was a fun part, but maybe a little hard. remapped.
02:09:02 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Remove whistles. - Done

[Vexed' Hard]

Lower hitsound volume... please.

02:07:61 (1) - Silence this spinner. Better ;D

Mafiamaster wrote:

Easy~

1. Redo first break. It'll shorten quite a bit. ~ Done

Relaxing~

1. 01:44:23 (2) - Suggestion: Move backwards on the white tick. Then have 1 more reverse arrow/path added. ~ Done
2. 01:59:23 (2) - Same suggestion ^ ~ Done
3. Suggestion: Maybe even have volume changes going from low to high or high to low during these sliders like what Vexed has going on in his first slider. ~ Done

Hexed's Hard~

1. Redo both breaks. They'll lengthen a bit. ~ Done

James2250 wrote:

easy:
00:53:56 - redo break (again) its way too far forward and starts on a note :/ - Done..
01:09:96 (3) - align with 3 from above? - Done, did some other changes too.

normal:
00:03:64 (6,1) - slightly too far left for my liking - Redid placements again
00:24:50 (3) - up 1 level 3 grid? - Done
00:37:15 (3) - move 1 level 3 grid left? (to go between 1 and 2) Done
00:44:65 (6) - I don't personally like this under slider Redid placements again

hard:
01:22:15 (3) - add finish?
01:31:52 (4) - down 1 level 3 grid (aligning with 3)

nice map pretty much everything I said is just a suggestion
*stars*