Azure_Kyte wrote:

Heya: looks like I'll be able to mod this sooner than I thought XD

[Vexed's Hard]
01:33:86 (9) - I think it would sound a bit cooler if the hit sounds faded out slowly in this slider, then do the fade in. Done. Seems like it might work out.

Well, all I can say is your map is very polished. Great job, and Definitely starr'd

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Heya: looks like I'll be able to mod this sooner than I thought XD

here's my verdict: (Red = help) (Green = suggestion)

[Easy]
Slider Ticks: Could these be changed to 2 please? - Done
00:17:47 (1,2) - The claps here are a little wierd. could they be changed to whistle instead? - your right, changed, thanks <4

Other then that, easy is fine in my opinion. Great job XD

[Relaxing]
Seems Fine XD

[Vexed's Hard]
01:33:86 (9) - I think it would sound a bit cooler if the hit sounds faded out slowly in this slider, then do the fade in.

Well, all I can say is your map is very polished. Great job, and Definitely starr'd

minyeob wrote:

[Relaxing]
00:20:74 (1) ~ 00:22:15 (5) - Streams on relaxing? - Relaxing is in the middle of normal/hard, so if I take out the mini streams I can just rename to normal lol, and they aint that hard to do

By the way,
I found nothing wrong!
*Starred

m980 wrote:

[Easy]
01:07:15 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing here is pretty inconsistent, and I feel beginners will get confused really easily.
01:21:21 (1) - Maybe lengthen this 1/4?

[Relaxing]
Nothing

[Vexed's Hard]
01:41:66 (2) - Spacing is pretty weird. Different yes, but goes un-noticed. I prefer it that way.

[All of them]
There is a new Kiai rule in place. 1 Kiai toggle on+off for each minute of gameplay, so you can only have 2 kiai toggles in this map. I only have 2 kiai toggles for mine. :p

Also get a timing check, i don't think .01 is very realistic I will check. Self proclaimed Timing guru/Slider Guru.

Edit: Just checked and what i found was .02 (Already set upon opening map). I believe this time to be on the money.

:p

m980 wrote:

[Easy]
01:07:15 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing here is pretty inconsistent, and I feel beginners will get confused really easily. ~ Re-spaced whole map with .6 distance, not harder, and more easy re able.
01:21:21 (1) - Maybe lengthen this 1/4? ~ Done

[Relaxing]
Nothing

[Vexed's Hard]
01:41:66 (2) - Spacing is pretty weird.

[All of them]
There is a new Kiai rule in place. 1 Kiai toggle on+off for each minute of gameplay, so you can only have 2 kiai toggles in this map. ~ Fixed Kiai mode on both.

Also get a timing check, i don't think .01 is very realistic ~ Larto did the timing for us ( though its 128.00 ) easy was still on 128.02, fixed that. ( but for me, both work fine, I get ave 0-4 ms when playing both my diffs )

:p

sesito71 wrote:

:)

[Easy]

01:09:62 (1) - Nazi mod: move 1 grid lvl 3 up (align it with the end of the first slider), then fix 3
00:06:22 (4) - ^
00:19:34 (3) - New combo
00:26:84 (5) - New combo
00:30:59 (5) - ^
00:34:34 (5) - ^
00:36:22 (3) - ^
00:51:21 (3) - ^
01:04:34 (1) - Nazi mod: Move 1 grid lvl 3 left.
01:31:52 (1) - Remove new combo
01:32:46 (2) - New combo
01:36:21 (3) - ^

[Relaxing]

00:00:14 (1) - Make it 1/2 longer
00:02:01 (2) - New combo
00:05:76 (4) - ^
00:09:51 (2) - ^
00:15:14 (9) - ^, also try finish here.
00:26:37 (1) - New combo
00:27:30 (1) - Remove new combo
00:28:01 (1) - New combo
00:30:12 (1) - ^
00:31:52 (6) - Remove new combo
00:31:99 (1) - New combo
00:45:12 (7) - ^
00:46:52 (2) - Remove new combo
00:51:21 (1) - New combo
01:06:21 (4) - ^
01:09:49 (7) - ^
01:10:20 (1) - Remove new combo
01:11:37 (3) - New combo
01:11:84 (1) - Remove new combo
01:13:24 (5) - New combo
01:13:95 (1) - Remove new combo
01:16:99 (6) - New combo
01:17:70 (1) - Remove new combo
01:18:87 (3) - New combo
01:20:74 (4) - ^
01:21:45 (1) - Remove new combo
01:32:46 (5) - New combo
01:33:16 (1) - Remove new combo
01:52:62 (4) - New combo
01:53:32 (1) - Remove new combo

[Vexed's Hard]
00:36:21 (6) - New combo
01:48:87 (1) - Align this with the end of the slider, 3 lvl grid 3 left, and then fix the other notes



Great map

Star*

Teara wrote:

sesito71 wrote:

:)

[Vexed's Hard]
00:36:21 (6) - New combo Nah. The only reason i say no is because i have somewhat stretched the combos throughout this particular map.
01:48:87 (1) - Align this with the end of the slider, 3 lvl grid 3 left, and then fix the other notes Hmm.



Great map

Star*

lesjuh wrote:

Easy:
First of all, resnap all beats!

The use of combo colours seems a little odd to me. Try to use 4 beats in 1 combo. It makes alot more sense. 00:38:09 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Actually exactly what you did here. (and the rest of the map)
00:13:72 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - You can keep these colours because you are stacking two beats here.
00:35:28 (1) - Remove new combo
01:08:09 (3,1,2,3) - These 4 beats are offscreen.
[attachment=1:bc56d]screenshot103.jpg[/attachment:bc56d]

That's about it for easy. You could lengthen the spinner at the ending a bit since it's [Easy].
End it at 02:10:903 * (Should actually be the same as in [Relaxing])

Relaxing:
00:11:39 (1,2,3) - Like I said before in Easy, offscreen.
00:15:14 (9) - New combo like you did here: 00:11:39 (1)
00:18:89 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Could you place these like this? I was about to hit that stream right after that slider
[attachment=0:bc56d]screenshot104.jpg[/attachment:bc56d]
00:20:747 (Timing) You forgot to inherit this timing section.
00:35:27 (1) - Replace this beat with distance snap 1,6x (under the slider recommended :3) and remove the new combo in it.
01:19:57 (1) - Remove this combo (makes a little more sense)
01:22:387 (Break) - Reinsert this break (it will lengthen)
01:42:07 (2) - space further
01:46:99 (1) - Same as above and also check the 3 beats after it.
01:46:99 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Recheck the spacing of all these beats. Try only to use 0,8x.
02:07:62 (1) - Take out the volume of the timing section this spinner is in, and end this spinner on the next white tick on the timeline @ 02:10:903 * (Should actually be the same as in [Easy])

That's all. Great beatmap, I'm sure you'll get it ranked

lesjuh wrote:

Easy:
First of all, resnap all beats!

Vexed's Hard:
00:18:88 (1) - This kick slider should end on this white tick (00:20:747) This was actually correct. Fixed.
00:27:30 (4) - Actually illegal (IMO >_>) You're covering possible reverse arrows like this and the spacing is off like this. Don't do it. Nah. :p
01:46:99 (3) - Be sure the spacing is perfect in these blue tick matters. So yeah respace this slider. This is fine the way it is.

That's all. Great beatmap, I'm sure you'll get it ranked

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

I still don't really see anything wrong ^^; I did pick up a few suggestion this time though.

Easy:
If people are saying the difficulty is too easy something you can make the overall difficulty higher. I find that the default (middle node) for overall diff. The notes are spaced enough so that it's okay.

Relax:
00:27:77 (5) - New combo ~ Nah
00:52:38 - During this break you can see the Ready image in the background, error in the storyboarding? You can see it until 01:06:21 (1) ~ I'll ask x3n to look at it again :c
02:03:16 (1) - Remove combo ~ Done

Gens wrote:

[Timing]

1. Offset sounds more like 130. I'm still not sure though.

BS. If anything 132 but i think it plays best where it is.

[Skin]

1. People really like to steal the Xi-Style hitcircle <.<

Not stealing. It's called using instead of forcing a skin. You are really startin to chap my ass.

[Kiai Time]

1. Nonono, Kiai Time doesn't fits in here. You don't need to add some kiai to every map, don't force yourself in adding it here.

It most certainly does fit, and very well at that. At least in my diff. You seem to spew the same stuff about kiai time everywhere you go.

[Easy]

1. Why is there an Inhereted section at the same time as the main section? That should NOT be allowed in any way! If you want it in half, half the BPM in the MAIN section! Also, why would you want the BPM halved anyway? Slider velocity is 2.60, meaning you can use BPM 128 and slider velocity 1.30.
2. There is no audio sampleset selected right now... That's why the normal-sliderwhistle got mixed with soft.

02:07:63 (1) - Hmm, it might be better to end the final spinner at 02:09:50.

[Relaxing]

1. Here, you only lowered the final spinner's volume, not like in Easy, in Easy you silenced the spinner completely... And they should also finish at the same time.
2. There's an Uninhereted section, and it screws up offset.
3. Also, main offset is different from the other difficulties.

[Vexed's Hard]
I don't like the pulled-out-of-nowhere jumps... IMO they don't fit the music...

~ ~ ~

So... Much... Irregularities...
Call me again so I can remod+star this.

Teara wrote:

Gens wrote:

Hush hush, the stealing stuff I said was just a joke, no need to get angry about something like that <.<;

About the Kiai I will keep my opinion though, I still think it doesn't fits.
Also, no, I report Kiai everytime I notice it in an awkward place. I don't really notice Kiai in most maps, so everytime it stands out for me it's placed in a really weird place.

@Gens, I appreciate your modding, and I'll have a look at it tomorrow, right now I'm so tired that I can barely keep my eyes open, also, if you want to fight, do it in pm, Vexed, this goes to you too, don't fight in my topic please, I only want constructive criticism here.

As a side note, I originally thought vexed made the hitcircles, he didn't claim he made it, just said, here take these and used it, so I naturally thought Vexy made them no questions asked. I learned that Xiaounlimited made the skin and I PM and asked permission if I may use them or not, if he says no, I'll re upload without the hit circles.


Also, about the timing on easy, I was still learning how to use the editor and played around a lot.

I'll fix this tomorrow.

Here have some kudos, and please don't fight in my thread.

-looks at vexed, this goes for you too-

Mogsworth wrote:

Time to finish up my mod post.

Easy:

SPOILER

-00:07:17 (1,2,3) - Replace these Claps with Whistles. This section is too soft to call for Claps.
-00:19:35 (1) - Replace the Clap with a Finish.
-00:27:79 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:31:54 (1) - ^
-00:35:29 (1) - ^
-00:36:23 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:37:17 (4) - Add a Finish.
-00:51:23 (1) - Add a Finish to the last point.
-01:00:140 - Clicked beat with a Whistle goes here.
-01:00:60 (1) - Replace the Whistles with Claps, remove the New Combo mark.
-01:02:01 (2) - New Combo mark and a Whistle go here.
-01:04:35 (1,2) - Replace the Whistles with Claps.
-01:06:23 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:07:64 (2) - ^
-01:15:14 (2) - ^
-01:16:07 (1) - Remove the Clap and New Combo mark, add a Whistle.
-01:17:01 (3) - Add a New Combo mark.
-01:21:23 (1) - Replace the Clap with a Finish.
-01:37:17 (2) - Remove the Whistle, add a Clap and a Finish.
-01:42:79 (3) - Remove the Whistle, add a Clap.
-01:48:42 (3) - ^
-01:52:17 (3) - Add a Clap and a Finish.
-01:53:10 (1,2,3,4) - Reverse this hitsound pattern (Whistle, Clap, Clap, Clap).
-01:56:85 (1,2,3,4) - ^
-02:00:60 (1,2,3,4) - ^
-02:04:35 (1,2) - Whistle, Clap.
-02:07:17 (3) - Add a Clap and a Finish.

Relaxing:

SPOILER

-00:20:74 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Out of place given the difficulty of the rest of the map. Sorry if you like it, but this is for the sake of consistency and for a lack of rage from other players.

deepsea wrote:

Offset in 3 difficulties are inconsist, they are close but they should be same.

Also remove the second section on normal.

Other than that I see nothing wrong, fix, resnap then I will rank this.

Kiyobi wrote:

Why is this beatmap filed under Anime? Last I checked, this song wasn't featured in any anime. o.o

Ephemeral wrote:

Kiyobi wrote:

Why is this beatmap filed under Anime? Last I checked, this song wasn't featured in any anime. o.o

It has a revolting AMV background video which is apparently enough to classify it as such these days

Ephemeral wrote:

It has a revolting AMV background video which is apparently enough to classify it as such these days

Larto wrote:

Ephemeral wrote:

It has a revolting AMV background video which is apparently enough to classify it as such these days

Instead of trying to look like an obnoxious smart ass you could try to help at times for a change. When people see a map that has an anime background AND an anime video they MIGHT not immediately think that Anime is the wrong genre. Thank you very much.

Yes I was the one who put the genre.

Larto wrote:

Yes I was the one who put the genre.

awp wrote:

Technically "anime" shouldn't even be a genre but for some reason we're letting that go.

Larto wrote:

Ephemeral wrote:

It has a revolting AMV background video which is apparently enough to classify it as such these days

Instead of trying to look like an obnoxious smart ass you could try to help at times for a change. When people see a map that has an anime background AND an anime video they MIGHT not immediately think that Anime is the wrong genre. Thank you very much.

Yes I was the one who put the genre.