OniJAM wrote:

Mod request from Popner's Modding Team

• General

1. 皮肤元件缺失：spinner-spin.png
2. sliderfollowcircle.png颜色太红 和滑条tick这两个元件最好换掉（换个偏白色或者粉色的sliderfollowcircle然后删掉slidertick元件 还有50与100/300也不搭调（100 300的字我个人也不喜欢 maybe remove?）followpoint.png也可以换成粉色的 待会儿我QQ传给你 恩 30010050这些我都删掉了
   
   Beginner
3. 三围-1 这个难度节奏本身就缓 设置却和Easy一样……（其实我觉得你都可以用CS2了）
4. Others looks fine to me
   现在这是EZ惹
   Normal
5. 00:29:354 (1) - *nazi* blanket，tick拉到408:368 fixed
6. 00:45:165 - missing whistle fixed
7. 01:21:246 (1,3) - 改好看点？ 还不够好看吗;w;
8. 01:49:624 (4) - *nazi* move to 184:140 (blanket) fixed

Nice map, good luck

1. I highly recommend AR8 in this diff, well the song is very soft and beautiful, bpm is low,mostly bpm>150 are AR8, AR9 doesnt fit in the music imo, its like ruining it the softness of the music , well its up to you anyway
2. 00:10:300 (2,3,4,5) - blanket this better,seems a bit off
3. 00:11:516 (7) - NC
4. 00:17:192 (3) - put a note here, i know your following the piano-like sound, but dont forget to put a note on the beat, it makes more sense and good rhythm
5. 00:17:597 (4) - add note here too
6. 00:18:003 (5) - NC
7. 00:21:246 (1,2) - stack this perfectly, i think its a little bit off
8. 00:36:449 (3) - remove this and 00:36:854 (4) - this, then add note here 00:36:651 (4) - better rhythm and it follows the beat too
9. 00:39:894 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - the rhythm here is weird for me, i dont know what rhythm are you following here, try to follow the vocals
10. 00:42:935 (2,3) - ^
11. 00:45:570 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ (i dont know whats the problem with me )
12. 00:50:638 (2,3,4,6) - stack, (6) seems off
13. 01:11:516 (7) - put this note near the center, because the spinner is the blue tick, so player can prepare the spin easily
14. 01:24:489 (5,1) - ^
15. 01:33:408 (5) - NC here, so it can be recognize as a slow slider
16. 01:35:840 (8) - NC
17. 01:36:550 (11) - remove
18. 01:48:408 (5) - put this behind the tail of 01:48:003 (4) - its confusing because its in the blue tick ,player cant recognize it easily because its has the same spacing with 01:47:800 (3,4) -

1. Remove all the whistle hitsound first, some whistle hitsound really didnt fit the rhythm
2. If you follow this ^ then try doing this
   
   Starts in 00:09:895 (1) - and so on...... until the end
   Try to alternate clap and whistle, its makes more sense on the song as you can hear it, yeah, mostly put the whistle on the long white tick, and the whistle fits on the NC too which is really nice to see and to hear
3. 01:27:732 (1) - use the finish custom hitsound here
4. 01:34:219 (1) - ^
5. 01:40:705 (1) - ^
6. 01:43:949 (6) - add finish then ^
7. 01:45:570 (3) - ^
8. 01:47:192 (1) - ^
9. 01:53:678 (1) - ^
   
   Put Claps Here
10. 01:29:151 (7) -
11. 01:29:557 (2) -
12. 01:32:394 (6) -
13. 01:32:800 (2) -
14. 01:35:638 (7) -
15. 01:35:840 (8) - tail
16. 01:38:881 (3) -
17. 01:39:286 (2) -
18. 01:41:922 (5) - tail
19. 01:42:530 (2) -
20. 01:46:786 (4) -
21. 01:48:611 (6) - front
22. 01:49:016 (7) -
23. 01:52:462 (2) -

1. 00:25:503 (4,1) - blanket
2. 00:46:077 (1) - the spinner starts here 00:46:178 (1) -
3. 01:04:624 (4) - ctrl+g
4. 01:11:212 (1) - spinner starts here 01:11:313 (1) -
5. 01:13:746 (1,2,3,4,5) - i dont know if this is too hard for hard, i think you can make it a slider?
6. 01:17:597 (5,6) - ctrl+g , dont make it confusing
7. 01:26:922 (4,1) - the overlap here dont look so good
8. 01:29:354 (1) - remove the other repeat
9. 01:46:786 (2,4) - a little overlap here, separate them a little
10. 01:49:219 (2) - ctrl+g

-Asagi wrote:

[Yuki's Hard]

1. 00:25:503 (4,1) - blanket
2. 00:46:077 (1) - the spinner starts here 00:46:178 (1) - ？
3. 01:04:624 (4) - ctrl+g
4. 01:11:212 (1) - spinner starts here 01:11:313 (1) - ？
5. 01:13:746 (1,2,3,4,5) - i dont know if this is too hard for hard, i think you can make it a slider? nope, i think it's fine
6. 01:17:597 (5,6) - ctrl+g , dont make it confusing
7. 01:26:922 (4,1) - the overlap here dont look so good
8. 01:29:354 (1) - remove the other repeat
9. 01:46:786 (2,4) - a little overlap here, separate them a little
10. 01:49:219 (2) - ctrl+g

yurunneram wrote:

that was horrible no kudos pls

Awaken wrote:

yurunneram wrote:

that was horrible no kudos pls

Sry I gave u before I see this sentences

1. Seems like hit100.png hit100k.png hit300.png hit300k.png hit300g.png are missing o.o
2. You also need a sliderball, since you skinned the followcircle. Sorry I didn't mention that last time.
3. You still need to add a sliderborder color. Open your .osu files and add

   SliderBorder: 255,255,255

   (or whatever color you want) under

   [colours]

1. Did you partially remap this? I can't seem to remember the map being like this before. Tbh, I think I prefer how the old version was more than this. Oh well.
2. 00:10:908 (3,4,5) - Move a bit down-right so it blankets properly ingame (right now it's off due to stacking).
3. 00:18:003 (5,6,7) - Hmm, this doesn't seem to play that well for me. The spacing feels a bit too big imo.
4. 00:58:543 (2,3) - You really shouldn't have a 1/8 jump like this. It's incredibly easy to break your combo here.
5. 01:26:922 (1,2) - Lower the voilume on the sliderends?
6. 01:33:408 (5) - New combo. Also same as above.
7. 01:36:550 (11) - You should delete this note. There's no drum to follow here, and the spacing feels weird.
8. 01:39:894 (1,2) - Same as the others.
9. 01:47:800 (3,4) - These notes feel too close to each other. Also consider having the jump between (3,4) instead of (2,3), since the vocals continue on (4).
10. 01:52:057 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I think a rhythm like this works better: http://puu.sh/5JRB9.jpg . I'm not sure what your notes are following right now.

1. 00:46:077 (1) - Begin at 00:46:178 - to follow the "wo".
2. 01:11:212 (1) - Should start at 01:11:313 - following the "ha".
3. 01:53:678 (7) - Move it a bit to the left so it's centered.

1. 00:45:570 (5,1) - Swap NC.
2. 00:55:300 (5) - Add NC.
3. 01:50:232 (5) - Add NC. (Or at 01:51:246 (6) - )

1. You really should add a silent normal-sliderslide.wav and normal-sliderslide2.wav, so you don't get that sliding sound on every hitsounded tick.
2. 00:58:543 (1) - Whistle?
3. 01:47:192 (1) - This slider is barely inside the playfield. consider moving it up a bit.

1. current offset feels a little bit slow try offset 9883 (-12)

1. i recommend you to increase all of volumes to 10% becuase each current volume set hears kinda low
2. how about adding some extra claps on 01:17:597 (7,8) - this and some similar parts? it would be nice
3. 00:10:300 (2) - how about deleting whistle start unless you add it to all of the similar parts?
4. 00:18:003 (5,6) - this unexpected large spacing can cause confusion to players imo try adding NC 00:18:003 (5) - here or reduce the distance little?
   
   something like this

   
5. 00:48:813 (1) - add whistle for consistence with 00:35:840 (2) - here (but i think finish sound is much better o_o)
6. 00:55:908 (2) - missed clap on end (and 00:57:732 (2) - here too)
7. 00:58:543 (2,3) - i prefer to use 1/4 beat on here because that stream sounds snapped at 1/16 beats not 1/8 beats and i think snap at 1/4 beats will be better than snap at 1/16 beats
8. 01:11:617 (1) - hmm i think reducing this spinner's length by 01:13:138 - here and 01:13:543 - add a note here seems much better for rhythm
   
   try this pattern if you want

   
9. 01:20:840 (1) - actually this part should be snapped at 1/4 beats, you can hear drum sounds on 01:21:043 - here if you hear the song with 25% playback
10. 01:33:393 (5) - add NC for consistence with 01:39:880 (1) - here and i think there needs a NC for noticing about abrupt slow down slider
11. 01:33:799 (6) - consider using ctrl g on here current slider slider feels kinda awkawrd because of velocity and flow
12. 01:36:550 (11) - this note doesn't look like that it's really needed and wierd, how about deleting it?
13. 01:40:705 (1) - i'd rather use SC:1 finish than SC:2 finish hitsound here like 01:27:732 (1) - this
14. 01:53:475 - add a note here plz this space feels really empty for me, maybe this can be fix that issue
    
    and try this pattern as well

    

1. i think 0.5 SV set seems too slow, you'd better to use 0.8 at least imo or if you want to use 0.5 SV set, decrease all of difficulty sets to -1 except CS
2. i have no idea why you added claps on long white tick while other diffs aren't added, adding hitsounsd constantly will be much better

1. 00:20:840 (2,4) - um how about stacking these notes? -nazi
2. 00:32:597 (1) - add clap here
3. 00:43:949 (3) - add whistle on the start instead of the end to have consistence
4. 00:44:759 (4) - clap on start
5. 00:44:759 (4,5) - i recommend to add whistles consistantly with previous whistle patterns
6. 00:47:192 (1,2,3,4) - how about adding whistles on note (1) and (3)? since those have high pitch piano sounds
7. 00:55:300 (5) - NC for consistence
8. 01:00:976 (1) - same clap suggestion with Insane diff
9. 01:27:732 (3) - add NC like 01:01:786 (1) - here and 01:46:786 (6) - here? and use SC:2 claps hears much better
10. only if you add NC like above suggestion 01:39:894 (1) - delete NC and 01:40:705 (2) - add NC here
11. 01:42:327 (1) - delete NC and add NC 01:43:949 (3) - here for consistence with first part on kiai time
12. 01:50:232 (5) - add NC

1. 00:14:151 (4) - consider adding whistle on this slider's start to keep consistence with piano sound (like you added it on 00:13:138 (1,1) - these notes)
2. 00:34:624 (2) - stop the repeat slider here 00:35:030 - sicne the piano sound is not sustained, try add a note and a 1/2 slider instead like following image
   
   for example

   
3. 01:00:165 (1) - same as Insane diff
4. 01:00:976 (3) - missed clap on start
5. 01:11:212 (1) - how about moving this spinner to 01:11:313 - here for following vocal sound?
6. 01:16:584 (1,2) - i don't think this jump is playable enough because you didn't use the jump just like this and it doesn't fit with the music
   
   try this instead

   
7. 01:39:084 (1) - on this part, i think change sequence of slidres and notes like thisseems little bit better and can have consistence with 01:25:300 (2) - here -nazi
   
   if you need code

   389,27,99084,6,0,P|363:58|328:76,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,128,99489,2,0,P|220:146|195:176,1,80
   220,260,99894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   132,248,100097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   212,284,100300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   125,302,100503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   212,312,100705,6,0,P|237:342|273:361,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   360,364,101111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   412,292,101313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   404,204,101516,2,0,P|413:165|405:126,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

8. 01:53:070 (6) - this slider isn't look suitable for Hard diff because of confusion try to add a NC here to fix this issue?

1. 01:01:786 (1) - using SC:2 claps from this part fits nice with the drum sounds (and it would be great if you add some extra claps (for example 01:17:597 (5,6) - here) as well

SPOILER

SPOILER

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Awaken wrote:

All diffs by myself I've almost remapped.

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Hard]
00:09:895 (1) - 00:35:840 (1) - this section can use more whistles to enrich the hitsounding a bit, for example 00:11:111 (5), 00:17:800 (5), 00:19:422 (4), 00:24:084 (4) etc. all have really loud piano sounds but there are no whistles on them. It would be best if you just came up with a whistle pattern and stick to it for this section to maintain consistency. added~
00:34:624 (2) - if you listen carefully here this is actually not in 1/4, but a mix of 1/3 and 1/6; try a 1/3 repeat slider here instead fixed~
01:03:408 (1,2) - its quite easy to misread this as 1/1 spacing here, try reducing the DS to less than 2.0x fixed~
01:19:624 (1,2,3,4) - the rhythm here is quite off; this section is in fact 1/3 snap and would be best if you used something like this:

SPOILER

fixed~
01:26:922 (4) - i would use two repeat sliders here, the second one with one more repeat to cover for 01:27:631; the current one feels a bit weird because you ended it a beat early which leaves an ambiguous rhythm thats hard to follow well, i also feel weird about two repeated sliders...... so no change..... can you give me a example about this?
01:52:665 (4,5) - the flow here feels a bit forced, try ctrl+g on this to get a nice oval flow on the pattern accepted~

jonathanlfj wrote:

here is the m4m :3

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
Did you cut the mp3 yourself? In this case do not add "Short Ver." to song title because we are not supposed to alter song title even if we shorten the length of it; unless there is an official source indicating the presence of Short Ver., you need to remove it.
Open up your Easy and Normal diff's .osu file, and make sure to have a space separating this section:


[Easy]
00:35:840 (1) - might want a finish here
01:00:976 (1) - this is too soon after spinner for an Easy diff, please shorten the spinner to 01:00:165 or delete this slider
01:08:272 (2) - unsnapped slider end
01:17:192 (4) - think you forgot a NC here
01:24:894 (1,1) - similar to 01:00:976 (1)
01:27:732 (1) - add finish
01:40:705 (1) - ^
01:52:057 (3,4,1) - move it slightly right would improve the flow here:

SPOILER

[Normal]
00:14:354 (2) - i would move this to 00:14:151, since you have been mostly following the piano in this section
00:29:354 (1) - a whistle here would sound great
00:32:597 (1) - forgot clap here
00:45:570 (6) - NC should be here instead of 00:47:192 (1)
00:55:300 (5) - missing NC
01:04:219 (2) - forgot clap
01:48:003 (2) - this blanket here can look a lot better

[Insane]
00:48:813 (1) - forgot a finish here?
00:59:354 (3,4) - this still belongs to the 1/4 section in terms of music (e.g. 00:59:962), so its best if you kept them 1/2 sliders
01:15:367 (3) - forgot a clap in the end; also i think the sampleset change should have begun at 01:13:746 instead of 01:15:976
01:19:759 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - tbh this played really confusing, i expected 01:20:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6) to be in 1/4 snap because of the change in spacing, and its even worse when you used the grey combo (which is supposed to be slowdown) to cover 01:19:759 (2,3,4,5,6) that had a bigger spacing. I would recommend you change 01:20:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6) into two repeat sliders:

SPOILER

01:22:057 (3,3) - forgot claps on these
01:40:300 (2,1) - this jump felt a bit extreme here, in all my testplays i've got 100s on 01:40:300 (2) because to catch 01:40:705 (1) on time i had to leave 01:40:300 (2) somewhat early. Would prefer if you can rearrange this pattern to bring the DS below 4.0x

Awaken wrote:

All diffs by myself I've almost remapped.

Seeing that you have remapped your diffs to an extent, I would like to see 2~3 more mods on this before you call me back (focus on fixing hitsounds, this is what seems to be lacking and i did not mention too much about it, or else this post would become a mod wall).

有什么问题pm我, puush server有些问题所以如果看不到图片的话就等一段时间

- Kevin wrote:

A single suggestion for you

NO KUDOSU FOR IT

[Insane]

Add note at 00:17:192 - (clap) and 00:17:597 - (normal) it fit better at my ears both at x:168 y:200 w/e your original mapping is fine for me

Atrue wrote:

Yuki's Hard

[Yuki's Hard]
General
简单一看
我感觉有些地方缺乏连贯性，比如好几个地方的vocal长音反而空了很大而且排列明显断层，我感觉这些是要避免的。
Beats
00:26:719 - 缺note吧。。 nope
01:20:942 - 只是说可以加个note，三连还是有连贯性的 nope
Placement
00:11:719 (2,3) - 提个醒，这种跳我觉得实在是不太适合，有点突然，并且难度是不是大了点？ fixed
00:38:273 (3,1) - 节奏断层没问题，可是这里排列都感觉断了，不连贯，你断的中间这个地方正好是有vocal长音的吧。。长音又不一定一定要滑条
01:09:692 (5,6,1) - 0.14X的stack..我觉得直接叠上会显得美观一点吧。。建议，这里有点挑了 直接叠难看，手动堆叠基本都是这样的
01:34:422 (2,3) - 原谅我真的觉得这样的跳不合曲，但是要改就是大改。。。。。还是斟酌。 fixed

smallboat wrote:

[Yuki's Hard]

00:21:043 (6,1) - 1可以放遠點，因為妳這邊00:22:259 (4)後面的大白線不是也放遠了。nope
00:34:624 (2) - 疊00:33:813 (5) 滑條尾。改了下梗
01:26:922 (4) - 試試NC?nope

smallboat wrote:

還是小check一下好了

[Insane]

01:24:489 (1) - 這個音效說可以是可以，可是又感覺聽的不大自然，看看要不要搬動這音效。 恩 改s:c2了
01:29:962 (4) - 可以疊(2)上。這邊就只有34是相鄰的，感覺這邊應該也可以拉大點間距。 搞这么难不好
01:36:449 (4) - 疊(1)。理由同上。 ^
01:41:313 (2,3,4,1) - 調這樣吧:

SPOILER

算惹 我后面和前面都有类似这种的梗
01:48:813 (1) - 可Blanket. fixed
01:49:219 (2) - 這個尾端靠在(4)上不太自然，把這條滑條尾調到直直向上吧。 恩
01:53:678 (1) - 可以放遠點。 好

試玩的一些心得，(也有可能是我打图太渣。)
00:58:543 (1,2) - 不知為何我按住有時都爆100，按住有點吃力，要不要換成1/4折返? 音乐是1/6._.
01:19:759 (1,1,1,1,1) - 看mod原來這是1/3連打，感覺間太大了，看看之間能不能縮小點間距，有點難讀。 这应该算个梗233

[Normal]

01:32:597 (3) - 這個折返是不是沒加whistle? 前面的折返都有加。
01:45:570 (3) - ^
fixed all
[Easy]

None.

[Other]

加油，祝泡泡。
Good Luck。

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Yuki's Hard]
01:20:840 (4,5) - hmm this plays slightly better if you used the slider first, then the circle at 01:21:246 to start a new combo ok
01:26:922 (4) - dont worry about this anymore, i did some furthur testplays and its fine
01:50:232 (5) - missing a whistle on end? added

jonathanlfj wrote:

rechecking no kd

[Easy]
00:09:895 (1) - add a finish on the start?
01:52:867 (4,1) - move this a bit right, so the flow from 01:51:651 (2,3) feels nicer

[Normal]
00:32:192 (1) - not really a needed NC here

[Insane]
01:19:759 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - lol why the NC spam here? keep 01:19:759 (1,1,1,1,1) one combo and 01:20:435 (1,1) - one combo would be better imo

alright let me know, if you have any questions just pm me

NatsumeRin wrote:

little irc mod, changed:
[Insane]
00:58:543 (1,2) - 1/6 to 1/8
01:26:922 (1,2) - corrected beats.
Also a new combo in Hard.

No kud. Congrats for your first rank.

NatsumeRin wrote:

Congrats for your first rank.

CXu wrote:

ops /late.
Congrats, and sorry I didn't get back here ;w;