ZE:A - The Ghost Of Wind · forum

HabiHolic

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2013-08-22T14:07:00+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013년 9월 22일 일요일 at 오전 10:39:43

Artist: ZE:A
Title: The Ghost Of Wind
Tags: 제국의 아이들 Children of Empire 스타제국 Star Empire
BPM: 125
Filesize: 22397kb
Play Time: 03:48
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.33 stars, 153 notes)
Hard (4.8 stars, 424 notes)
Normal (3.36 stars, 225 notes)

Download: ZE:A - The Ghost Of Wind
Download: ZE:A - The Ghost Of Wind (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 3rd Ranked Beatmap
ZE:A's Korean popular Boy group
Their new song
Enjoy Thanks~

moder

[ HalLoWeeN ]
[Kanbe Kotori]
FreeSongs
Pizza Kun
Darky
pife1
sheela901
[ Zzz ]
scanter
lolcubes
-Gamu-
Andrea Bubbled~
LunarSakuya Ranked~

Map Set

Easy - By. HabiHolic (Done)

Normal - By. HabiHolic (Done)

Hard - By. HabiHolic (Done)

Last edited by HabiHolic 2013-10-10T05:05:11+00:00, edited 24 times in total.

Reol

998 posts

Joined September 2012

Reol 2013-08-26T14:11:25+00:00

In game mod req

제 모딩이 아주 저퀄임을 감안해주시고, 영 도움이 안될수도 있습니다.
그러므로 저는 추천형식을 하겠습니다 [?]

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:
[Easy]

괜찮아보입니다.

[Normal]

괜찮아보입니다.

[Hard]

00:37:376 - 노트 추가 하심이 어떨까요? 이렇게

00:59:216 (2,3) - 이런 식으로 완전 겹친것들은 약간 띄워주는 것도 보기 좋을듯합니다. 이런식으로
01:13:616 (2,3) - 이런식으로
01:28:016 (3,4) - 역시 같음
02:06:416 (3,4) - 역시 같음

02:15:896 (5) - 노트 제거 하는게 맞을 것 같네요.

02:21:056 (1) - NC 제거하고 02:21:296 (2) - 여기다가 NC 추가하는건 어떨까요?

02:44:336 (1,2,3) - 디스턴스 약간 늘려도 큰 문제는 없을 것 같아요.

03:01:976 (5) - 여기도 노트 제거하는게 맞을 것 같아요.

03:15:536 (1,2) - 역시 저 위에 말한 것 처럼 완전 겹친건 제거하는게 보기 좋을듯 이렇게

03:23:216 (5,6) - 역시 이렇게

03:25:136 (1,2) - 이렇게

흐미; 맵이 퀄이 좋아서 별로 잡을게 없네요;
역시 굇매퍼.
도움이 됬기를 바랍니다 XD
GL !

HabiHolic

5,410 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2013-08-26T14:19:59+00:00

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:
In game mod req

제 모딩이 아주 저퀄임을 감안해주시고, 영 도움이 안될수도 있습니다.
그러므로 저는 추천형식을 하겠습니다 [?]

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:
[Easy]

괜찮아보입니다.

[Normal]

괜찮아보입니다.

[Hard]

00:37:376 - 노트 추가 하심이 어떨까요? 이렇게

00:59:216 (2,3) - 이런 식으로 완전 겹친것들은 약간 띄워주는 것도 보기 좋을듯합니다. 이런식으로
01:13:616 (2,3) - 이런식으로
01:28:016 (3,4) - 역시 같음
02:06:416 (3,4) - 역시 같음

02:15:896 (5) - 노트 제거 하는게 맞을 것 같네요.

02:21:056 (1) - NC 제거하고 02:21:296 (2) - 여기다가 NC 추가하는건 어떨까요?

02:44:336 (1,2,3) - 디스턴스 약간 늘려도 큰 문제는 없을 것 같아요.

03:01:976 (5) - 여기도 노트 제거하는게 맞을 것 같아요.

03:15:536 (1,2) - 역시 저 위에 말한 것 처럼 완전 겹친건 제거하는게 보기 좋을듯 이렇게

03:23:216 (5,6) - 역시 이렇게

03:25:136 (1,2) - 이렇게
흐미; 맵이 퀄이 좋아서 별로 잡을게 없네요;
역시 굇매퍼.
도움이 됬기를 바랍니다 XD
GL !

우와 도움많이 됐어요~!!

모딩 감사드립니다~

LQA20Ans

1,344 posts

Joined November 2011

LQA20Ans 2013-08-26T14:38:56+00:00

허접 모딩받으시죠

[General]

-슬라이더슬라이드 무음으로 해보시는건 어떠신지...?

[Easy]

-드레인, AR, OD 모두 -1

-00:38:096 (3) - NC

-00:45:776 (5,1) - NC 체인지

-00:49:616 (3) - NC

-01:01:136 (4) - ^

-01:22:256 (3) - 끝에 클랩 제거

-01:27:536 (4) - 커스텀 클랩2로 바꿔주세요.

-01:28:016 (1) - 처음부분에 피니쉬 추가

-01:42:896 - 여기 이선 필요없는것 같은데 지워주세요.

-01:54:896 (4) - NC

-02:02:576 (5) - ^

-02:10:256 (4) - ^

-02:11:696 (5,6) - 슬라로 서클을 감싸는게 더 좋을것 같네요.

-02:28:976 (3) - 커스텀 2 클랩으로 바꿔주세요.

-02:29:456 (4) - NC

-02:31:376 (1) - NC 제거

-02:33:296 (3) - NC 추가

-03:15:056 (3) - 커스텀 클랩 2로 바꿔주세요.

[Normal]

-00:52:496 (1,2,3) - 현악기 사운드 따라서 노트 찍는게 더 좋아보이네요.

-00:52:496 (1,4) - NC 체인지

-00:56:336 (1) - NC 제거

-00:57:296 (3) - NC

-01:42:896 - 여기 타이밍선 지워주세요.

-01:52:976 (4,5,6) - 리듬제안이염

-02:28:496 (1) - NC 제거

-02:29:456 (3) - NC

-03:13:616 (3) - 리듬을 1/2박만큼 당겨주시면 좋을듯.(03:13:376 - 여기서 시작, 슬라길이는 똑같이)

[Hard]

-00:35:936 (5) - 뭔가 동선에 많이 어긋나는 느낌...?

-00:36:656 (6) - 슬라 반복 한번 추가

-00:37:496 (7) - 리듬제안입니다...만 1/6은 에바인듯

-03:11:456 (9) - 03:12:416 (2) 얘랑 같은 위치에 둬도 괜찮을듯하네요.

하드는 딱히 집을게 안보이네요.

좋은 맵이네요.

그리고 자꾸 저보고 굇맵퍼라고 놀리시는데 놀리지 말아주세요 후 ㅠㅠ

FreeSongs

502 posts

Joined November 2012

FreeSongs 2013-08-26T14:50:51+00:00

In-game req

[Hitsound]
00:55:856 - remove whistle
00:57:056 - N:C2 clap
00:57:296 - N:C1 finish instead of clap
01:57:296 - remove whistle
03:48:176 - mute?

[Hard]
00:37:376 - add a circle here
01:06:896 - NC
01:08:096 - remove NC
01:08:816 - NC
01:12:656 - NC
01:13:376 - remove NC
01:14:576 - NC
02:16:976 (8) - start at 02:16:856 - ?

[Normal&Easy]
perfect~

hope this helps

good luck!

Reat

204 posts

Joined May 2011

Reat 2013-08-29T15:15:14+00:00

Do Rank >_<

Pizza Kun

455 posts

Joined March 2011

Pizza Kun 2013-09-02T13:40:59+00:00

[General]

new Combocolours for B&W background:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 105,105,105
Combo2 : 98,149,51
Combo3 : 191,191,234
Combo4 : 182,182,182

[Hard]

00:26:576 (1) - Move to 204||176
00:43:856 (5) - 3/4 slider and add note like this:

To: 00:49:496 (5) - From 00:51:296 (4) - Rithm like this?

01:10:736 (1) - Clap
01:25:856 (1) - Ctrl+G and this shape:

SPOILER

02:27:776 (2) - Ctrl + G

Fix all blanket (not list them all because you can see ^^ )

[Normal]

00:29:456 (3) - Move to 132||196 and fix blanket
00:40:976 (6) - Move to 232||164 i think is better
00:59:216 (5) - Fix all blanket like this:

SPOILER

http://d.pr/i/liBU+/

For a normal is important a good view
01:10:736 (1) - Clap
02:10:256 (1) - ^
02:29:456 (3) - Second anchor point: 268||92
02:56:336 (1) - End in 02:59:696

[Easy]

00:45:776 (5) - Fix all blanket xD

Nothink to mod other this >.< sorry for my short mod but the map is well mapped ^^

Darky

61 posts

Joined November 2010

Darky 2013-09-02T17:17:45+00:00

Hello!

M4M here

unfortunately, I can't to play it because I'm not at home.
I can't test it as a player

[General]

http://puu.sh/4hjoj.png Check it

Not interesting colors imo

Suggest to divide the Kiai time:
01:12:656 - start kiai
01:27:416 - end kiai
01:28:016 - start
01:43:376 - end
02:14:096 - start
02:28:856 - end
02:29:456 - start
02:44:816 - end
03:00:176 - start
03:14:936 - end
03:15:536 - start
03:30:896 - end
[Hard]

00:28:976 (7,8,9) - Need a little more even. It looks ugly imo
00:30:896 (5,6,7) - ^ up to you.
00:37:136 (7,8,9) - ^
00:34:976 (2,3,4) - my suggestions:

SPOILER

00:35:936 (5,6,7) - My suggestions make some like that.

SPOILER

00:47:696 (1,2) - It looks bad D: Try something better
00:50:096 (2,3) - Don't like it, because 00:52:976 (3,4) - similar pattern but..

and

01:01:136 (1,2,3) - What do you think? Try something similar?

SPOILER

01:19:856 (9) - nc
01:20:336 (1) - remove nc. because pattern 01:19:856 (9,1) - with different colours looks ugly imo.
01:20:336 (1) - rounds can be better

01:29:936 (1,2) - ^
01:37:616 (5) - ^
01:52:496 (4,5) - ^ why men? D:
02:11:216 (3,4) - ^
02:40:976 (1,2) - ^
03:45:776 (7) - remove nc O_o

[Normal]

00:40:496 (5,6,7) - just a bit moving :

SPOILER

00:51:296 (3) - Begginer can may become confused here. It a bit sudden
00:52:496 (1,2,3) - Suggest to Avoid these patterns in normal diff
00:54:896 (5,6,7) - ^ up to you
00:57:056 (2) - Already said
00:59:216 (5) - maybe make rounds of 00:58:736 (4) - ?
01:00:656 (6,7,1) - already said
01:19:376 (5) - end of slider with start of vocal D: suggest to make something else
01:38:336 - vocal started here
01:51:776 (2) - Already said
01:52:976 (4,5,6) - ^
01:58:496 (6) - ^
02:03:536 (2,3,4) - ^
02:05:216 (6) - ^
02:20:816 (5) - end of slider with start of vocal D: suggest to make something else (2)
02:39:776 - vocal started here (2)
03:04:736 (2) - Already said
03:22:256 (5,6,7) - ^
03:24:896 (3) - ^
03:32:576 (2) - ^
03:42:176 (3) - ^

[Easy]
00:45:296 (4,5) - my suggestion:

SPOILER

02:11:696 (5,6) - ^
00:57:296 (1,2,3) - bad rounds
02:29:456 (1) - nc
02:31:376 (3) - remove nc
02:33:296 (1) - nc

Good luck! :3

pife1

523 posts

Joined January 2012

pife1 2013-09-02T18:33:31+00:00

Hi from your M4M

In the Easy:
00:55:376 (3) - could be more seem to 00:53:456 (1) , I mean respect to curved
01:29:936 (3) - 01:33:776 (3) these note are fine, although I suggest that cut a bit the sliders and also repeat them like this
Image

In the Normal
all right

In the Hard:
00:27:296 (2,3,4) - these note are far to 00:26:576 (1), I suggest move them( 00:27:296 (2,3,4 ) to X: 160 Y: 328, there they are nearer and keep its difficulty(hard) for 00:28:016 (5) because of jump

01:02:816 (1,2) - In my opinión you should remove them because of these notes surplus

Honestly your map is very well

that's all

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2013-09-02T19:12:48+00:00

M4M.

[Easy]
00:30:416 (1) - I'll try to make it perfect so:

Axis

1st little square: x:260 y:44
2nd: x:333 y:20
3rd: x:412 y:43

01:39:536 - Add a note here? or 01:39:656 (1) - Move it to 01:39:536 ?

[Normal]
01:27:056 (1) - Remove NC and add it to 01:28:016 (3) .
02:28:496 (1) - ^ and add it to 02:29:456 (3) .

[Hard]
01:12:656 (7) - NC? Because the kiai time starts here?

I think everything else is okay.
Good Luck and star!

HabiHolic

5,410 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2013-09-02T23:57:00+00:00

[Kanbe Kotori] wrote:
허접 모딩받으시죠

[General]

-슬라이더슬라이드 무음으로 해보시는건 어떠신지...?

[Easy]

-드레인, AR, OD 모두 -1

-00:38:096 (3) - NC

-00:45:776 (5,1) - NC 체인지

-00:49:616 (3) - NC

-01:01:136 (4) - ^

-01:22:256 (3) - 끝에 클랩 제거

-01:27:536 (4) - 커스텀 클랩2로 바꿔주세요.

-01:28:016 (1) - 처음부분에 피니쉬 추가

-01:42:896 - 여기 이선 필요없는것 같은데 지워주세요.

-01:54:896 (4) - NC

-02:02:576 (5) - ^

-02:10:256 (4) - ^

-02:11:696 (5,6) - 슬라로 서클을 감싸는게 더 좋을것 같네요.

-02:28:976 (3) - 커스텀 2 클랩으로 바꿔주세요.

-02:29:456 (4) - NC

-02:31:376 (1) - NC 제거

-02:33:296 (3) - NC 추가

-03:15:056 (3) - 커스텀 클랩 2로 바꿔주세요.

[Normal]

-00:52:496 (1,2,3) - 현악기 사운드 따라서 노트 찍는게 더 좋아보이네요.

-00:52:496 (1,4) - NC 체인지

-00:56:336 (1) - NC 제거

-00:57:296 (3) - NC

-01:42:896 - 여기 타이밍선 지워주세요.

-01:52:976 (4,5,6) - 리듬제안이염

-02:28:496 (1) - NC 제거

-02:29:456 (3) - NC

-03:13:616 (3) - 리듬을 1/2박만큼 당겨주시면 좋을듯.(03:13:376 - 여기서 시작, 슬라길이는 똑같이)

[Hard]

-00:35:936 (5) - 뭔가 동선에 많이 어긋나는 느낌...?

-00:36:656 (6) - 슬라 반복 한번 추가

-00:37:496 (7) - 리듬제안입니다...만 1/6은 에바인듯

-03:11:456 (9) - 03:12:416 (2) 얘랑 같은 위치에 둬도 괜찮을듯하네요.

하드는 딱히 집을게 안보이네요.

좋은 맵이네요.

그리고 자꾸 저보고 굇맵퍼라고 놀리시는데 놀리지 말아주세요 후 ㅠㅠ

모딩 감사드립니다~!

HabiHolic

5,410 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2013-09-03T00:00:25+00:00

FreeSongs wrote:
In-game req

[Hitsound]
00:55:856 - remove whistle
00:57:056 - N:C2 clap
00:57:296 - N:C1 finish instead of clap
01:57:296 - remove whistle
03:48:176 - mute?

[Hard]
00:37:376 - add a circle here
01:06:896 - NC
01:08:096 - remove NC
01:08:816 - NC
01:12:656 - NC
01:13:376 - remove NC
01:14:576 - NC
02:16:976 (8) - start at 02:16:856 - ?

[Normal&Easy]
perfect~

hope this helps
good luck!

Thanks Mod Update~

HabiHolic

5,410 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2013-09-03T00:15:55+00:00

Pizza Kun wrote:
[General]

new Combocolours for B&W background:
[Colours]
Combo1 : 105,105,105
Combo2 : 98,149,51
Combo3 : 191,191,234
Combo4 : 182,182,182
[Hard]

00:26:576 (1) - Move to 204||176
00:43:856 (5) - 3/4 slider and add note like this:

To: 00:49:496 (5) - From 00:51:296 (4) - Rithm like this?

01:10:736 (1) - Clap
01:25:856 (1) - Ctrl+G and this shape:
SPOILER
02:27:776 (2) - Ctrl + G

Fix all blanket (not list them all because you can see ^^ )

[Normal]

00:29:456 (3) - Move to 132||196 and fix blanket
00:40:976 (6) - Move to 232||164 i think is better
00:59:216 (5) - Fix all blanket like this:
SPOILER
http://d.pr/i/liBU+/
For a normal is important a good view
01:10:736 (1) - Clap
02:10:256 (1) - ^
02:29:456 (3) - Second anchor point: 268||92
02:56:336 (1) - End in 02:59:696

[Easy]

00:45:776 (5) - Fix all blanket xD

Nothink to mod other this >.< sorry for my short mod but the map is well mapped ^^

Thanks Mod~

HabiHolic

5,410 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2013-09-03T00:22:16+00:00

Darky wrote:
Hello!

M4M here

unfortunately, I can't to play it because I'm not at home.
I can't test it as a player

[General]

http://puu.sh/4hjoj.png Check it

Not interesting colors imo

Suggest to divide the Kiai time:
01:12:656 - start kiai
01:27:416 - end kiai
01:28:016 - start
01:43:376 - end
02:14:096 - start
02:28:856 - end
02:29:456 - start
02:44:816 - end
03:00:176 - start
03:14:936 - end
03:15:536 - start
03:30:896 - end
[Hard]

00:28:976 (7,8,9) - Need a little more even. It looks ugly imo
00:30:896 (5,6,7) - ^ up to you.
00:37:136 (7,8,9) - ^
00:34:976 (2,3,4) - my suggestions:
SPOILER
00:35:936 (5,6,7) - My suggestions make some like that.
SPOILER
00:47:696 (1,2) - It looks bad D: Try something better
00:50:096 (2,3) - Don't like it, because 00:52:976 (3,4) - similar pattern but.. and

01:01:136 (1,2,3) - What do you think? Try something similar?
SPOILER
01:19:856 (9) - nc
01:20:336 (1) - remove nc. because pattern 01:19:856 (9,1) - with different colours looks ugly imo.
01:20:336 (1) - rounds can be better
01:29:936 (1,2) - ^
01:37:616 (5) - ^
01:52:496 (4,5) - ^ why men? D:
02:11:216 (3,4) - ^
02:40:976 (1,2) - ^
03:45:776 (7) - remove nc O_o

[Normal]

00:40:496 (5,6,7) - just a bit moving :
SPOILER
00:51:296 (3) - Begginer can may become confused here. It a bit sudden
00:52:496 (1,2,3) - Suggest to Avoid these patterns in normal diff
00:54:896 (5,6,7) - ^ up to you
00:57:056 (2) - Already said
00:59:216 (5) - maybe make rounds of 00:58:736 (4) - ?
01:00:656 (6,7,1) - already said
01:19:376 (5) - end of slider with start of vocal D: suggest to make something else
01:38:336 - vocal started here
01:51:776 (2) - Already said
01:52:976 (4,5,6) - ^
01:58:496 (6) - ^
02:03:536 (2,3,4) - ^
02:05:216 (6) - ^
02:20:816 (5) - end of slider with start of vocal D: suggest to make something else (2)
02:39:776 - vocal started here (2)
03:04:736 (2) - Already said
03:22:256 (5,6,7) - ^
03:24:896 (3) - ^
03:32:576 (2) - ^
03:42:176 (3) - ^

[Easy]
00:45:296 (4,5) - my suggestion:
SPOILER
02:11:696 (5,6) - ^
00:57:296 (1,2,3) - bad rounds
02:29:456 (1) - nc
02:31:376 (3) - remove nc
02:33:296 (1) - nc

Good luck! :3

Thanks~~

HabiHolic

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Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2013-09-03T00:25:10+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
M4M.

[Easy]
00:30:416 (1) - I'll try to make it perfect so:
Axis
1st little square: x:260 y:44
2nd: x:333 y:20
3rd: x:412 y:43
01:39:536 - Add a note here? or 01:39:656 (1) - Move it to 01:39:536 ?

[Normal]
01:27:056 (1) - Remove NC and add it to 01:28:016 (3) .
02:28:496 (1) - ^ and add it to 02:29:456 (3) .

[Hard]
01:12:656 (7) - NC? Because the kiai time starts here?

I think everything else is okay.
Good Luck and star!

Thanks mod and star!

Kirin

267 posts

Joined August 2012

Kirin 2013-09-03T14:12:26+00:00

Hi. MasterKirin from my queue.

Sorry i didn't find something wrong.
The map is ok and same thing as the pattern

I'm very sorry

By the way Good luck for ranking

[ Zzz ]

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Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2013-09-05T03:04:17+00:00

Hi~ HabiHolic

[Easy]

00:31:856 (2) - 제안 - 제거 해주시는건 어떨까요? ( 처음부분과 비슷하게 흐름이 맞다고 느끼는데 'ㅂ' .. ) 제안임..

03:34:256 (4) - 서클 추가 하는게 좋지않을까요?

03:36:176 (2) - 위와 같음...

이지와 노말이 난이도 설정이 같은건 일부러인가요?? 3343으로 되어있는데...

AR OD HP - 1

[Normal]

00:55:136 (3) - 이거 아래쪽으로 가게하는게 흐름에 더 좋을것 같아요..

잡을꺠 없네요.. ㅠㅠ...

[Hard]

OD + 1

00:44:816 (6) - 이걸 가리지말고

SPOILER

이렇게 하면 어떄요??

01:14:096 (6) - 이건

SPOILER

이렇게하면 동선도 좋고 좋을꺼같아요!

01:28:496 (4) - 위와 마찬가지

02:42:656 (4) - 조금 더 펴주시는게 좋을것 같습니다...

03:03:776 (7) - 이것의 앞뒤간격을 일정하게 맟춰주는게 좋다고봅니다...

03:25:616 (2) - 이것도 아래쪽으로 가게 'ㅂ '..

끝끝!!! 굇이네요.. ㅠ)_ㅠ.. 그보다 .. 매우매우..늦은모딩 죄송해요 .. 매핑이랑 모딩 할 기운이 없어서 .. 요즘...

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2013-09-05T10:04:02+00:00

[ Zzz ] wrote:
Hi~ HabiHolic

[Easy]

00:31:856 (2) - 제안 - 제거 해주시는건 어떨까요? ( 처음부분과 비슷하게 흐름이 맞다고 느끼는데 'ㅂ' .. ) 제안임.. / 제거하면 좀 어색한듯

03:34:256 (4) - 서클 추가 하는게 좋지않을까요? / 고쳤어요~

03:36:176 (2) - 위와 같음... / 수정~

이지와 노말이 난이도 설정이 같은건 일부러인가요?? 3343으로 되어있는데... / 그럴리가.. 는 진짜 그랬네요 ㅋㅋㅋ 수정

AR OD HP - 1

[Normal]

00:55:136 (3) - 이거 아래쪽으로 가게하는게 흐름에 더 좋을것 같아요.. / 수정~

잡을꺠 없네요.. ㅠㅠ...

[Hard]

OD + 1

00:44:816 (6) - 이걸 가리지말고
SPOILER
이렇게 하면 어떄요?? 스페이싱 유지하면서수정~

01:14:096 (6) - 이건
SPOILER
이렇게하면 동선도 좋고 좋을꺼같아요! 수정~

01:28:496 (4) - 위와 마찬가지 / 전께 맘에들었음 ㅋㅋ

02:42:656 (4) - 조금 더 펴주시는게 좋을것 같습니다... / pass~

03:03:776 (7) - 이것의 앞뒤간격을 일정하게 맟춰주는게 좋다고봅니다... / 수정~

03:25:616 (2) - 이것도 아래쪽으로 가게 'ㅂ '.. / 수정~

끝끝!!! 굇이네요.. ㅠ)_ㅠ.. 그보다 .. 매우매우..늦은모딩 죄송해요 .. 매핑이랑 모딩 할 기운이 없어서 .. 요즘...

모딩 감사여 헤헤...ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

[ Yuki ]_old

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[ Yuki ]_old 2013-09-08T13:57:17+00:00

옹 잘만드셨네여!!
and노래도 좋고+_+

이런건 별~

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2013-09-09T02:56:45+00:00

user-RiSa wrote:
옹 잘만드셨네여!!
and노래도 좋고+_+

이런건 별~

감사 ㅋㅋㅋ

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2013-09-10T05:47:35+00:00

MasterKirin wrote:
Hi. MasterKirin from my queue.

Sorry i didn't find something wrong.
The map is ok and same thing as the pattern

I'm very sorry

By the way Good luck for ranking

Oh Notting Haha...

But.... Thanks~!!

scanter

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Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-09-15T02:42:52+00:00

짚을게 거의 없네요;;

General

태그에 제국의 아이들, Children of Empire, 스타제국, Star Empire 추가하시길. 뒤에 두개는 소속사 이름이고 앞에 두개는 뭐.

Easy

딱히 지적할건 없네요.

Normal

01:05:936 (2) - 좀 더 1번이랑 완벽하게 감싸는게 좋을꺼같아요
01:10:736 (1) - 스피너 뒤에있는 슬라이더 치기 힘들듯함. 그냥 박자를 짜맞추는게 더 플레이하기 편할듯. 3,4,5번 참조
SPOILER
01:17:456 (2) - 보컬땜에 1/2 반복 슬라이더로 바꾸는게 더 치는 맛이 있을듯 2번 보셈
SPOILER
02:23:696 (4,5,6) - 혹시 보컬따라가길 원한다면 한번 보시길
SPOILER

Hard

00:31:256 (6) - 간격이 좀 이상하네요 x:52, y:224
03:04:496 (2,3) - Bad flow. Ctrl + G
03:04:976 (4) - ^
03:35:576 (6) - 00:31:256 (6) 이거랑 같은이유. x:464, y:156
03:35:696 (7) - x:480, y:140

Good luck :>

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2013-09-15T09:03:21+00:00

scanter wrote:
짚을게 거의 없네요;;

General
태그에 제국의 아이들, Children of Empire, 스타제국, Star Empire 추가하시길. 뒤에 두개는 소속사 이름이고 앞에 두개는 뭐. / 올 태그에 뭘적어야 고민도 했었는데! 수정했서여
Easy
딱히 지적할건 없네요.
Normal
01:05:936 (2) - 좀 더 1번이랑 완벽하게 감싸는게 좋을꺼같아요 / 수정~
01:10:736 (1) - 스피너 뒤에있는 슬라이더 치기 힘들듯함. 그냥 박자를 짜맞추는게 더 플레이하기 편할듯. 3,4,5번 참조 / 수정이여~
SPOILER
01:17:456 (2) - 보컬땜에 1/2 반복 슬라이더로 바꾸는게 더 치는 맛이 있을듯 2번 보셈 / 흠... 원래께 더 좋은데..
SPOILER
02:23:696 (4,5,6) - 혹시 보컬따라가길 원한다면 한번 보시길 / 박자에는 이상 없으니 패스~
SPOILER
Hard
00:31:256 (6) - 간격이 좀 이상하네요 x:52, y:224 / 수정~
03:04:496 (2,3) - Bad flow. Ctrl + G / 수정~
03:04:976 (4) - ^
03:35:576 (6) - 00:31:256 (6) 이거랑 같은이유. x:464, y:156 / 수정
03:35:696 (7) - x:480, y:140/수정
Good luck :>

모딩감사합니다

도움마니댔서여 저녁먹은 후에 님맵 모딩하러갈게여

lolcubes

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lolcubes 2013-09-16T07:16:24+00:00

Hi.

[General]
Timing: Offset 18890(-6).
Hitsounding: A lack of (soft) whistle. I believe you can make the rhythms sound much better if you took the soft whistle and put it into your folder as normal whistle, and occasionally add it on the maps.

[Hard]

00:26:576 (1) - I find this very uninteresting way to start the highest diff. I would suggest you map the 1/6 beats before and then just place a circle.
->
The melody doesn't really hold so it doesn't matter if you have the slider over the first two notes or not. Just a suggestion, otherwise it's ok.
00:29:936 (1,2) - Try swapping the new combo on that 2, fits the music better.
00:42:896 (3,4) - For consistency reasons, you might want to re-arrange this pattern so the spacing between 3 and 4 is much bigger (because of 00:41:936 (1,2))
00:49:616 (1,2) - This doesn't fit that well. Suggestion:
->
Fits the vocals perfectly and makes the rhythm more interesting.
00:55:376 (3) - Doesn't fit that well, try this:
->
00:56:576 (5,6,7) - If you applied the above suggestion, try making bigger spacing between 5-6-7 and put a new combo on that 5. This would bring more dynamics and emphasize the vocals better, and it would be more fun to play too.
01:04:976 (1,2) - There is something you can do to make this better:
->
Follows the really powerful vocals much better.
01:06:896 (1,2) - ^ same suggestion.
01:12:176 (3,4,5,6) - These are actually 1/6 in the music. Since the stream as a whole doesn't really increase the difficulty that much, I would suggest to place a 1/6 repeating slider instead.
01:19:856 (9,1) - Increase spacing? The pitch of the music is rising, so it would be appropriate to have bigger spacing.
01:35:696 (1,2) - Something like this fits better:
->
01:41:216 (4) - new combo.
01:51:056 (1,2) - Same suggestion like 01:35:696 in this mod.
01:52:976 (5,6) - ^
02:04:496 (6,7,1) - The new combo should go on 6. Remove it from 1. After this, add a new combo to 02:06:416 (3), it fits the music much better.
02:12:296 (1) - I didn't like this spinner, there are a lot of interesting rhythms in the background. Just listen to the beats.
02:39:056 (5) - Too easy for Hard, and doesn't fit that well. Try this:
->
Just make sure if you apply this to have really big spacing from 02:39:776 (7) - to 02:40:256 (8).
02:56:336 (1) - End at 02:59:216? So you can map a 1/6 repeater on 02:59:696.

Didn't say anything about the final chorus because the suggestions up here could apply there as well, just so I don't post too much.

I have to go to work and when I am back I will mod the rest.

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Gamu 2013-09-17T13:43:45+00:00

Hi~
M4M request from in-game

Red: Unrankable / You should fix absolutely.
Orange: Strong Suggestion / I think you should fix it.
Black: Suggestion
Blue: message

[General]

●About offset: lolcubes said offset 18890. But, I seem to be no problem without having to change. After I've played, error-11.88ms ~+11.04ms. Was very balanced lol Well, is up to you.

●"Widescreen support" is different. There will be a need to unify.
Easy: On
Normal: On
Hard: Off

[Easy]

●00:38:096 (3) - Add new combo. keep the flow of new combo.
●00:45:776 (1) - make blanket with 00:45:296 (4). Appearance will be very beautiful. Like this: http://puu.sh/4txGV.jpg Middle point x:184 y:224 and end point x:224 y:296. will be better in this.
●00:57:296 (1,3) - Not perfect blanket with 00:58:736 (2). recommended that you fix. I will give the code to you. Please use~

Of course, spacing is adjusted.

184,52,57296,6,0,P|152:128|192:204,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,124,58736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,196,59216,2,0,P|344:120|304:44,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,180,61136,6,0,L|468:316,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

●01:35:696 (1) - make blanket with 01:35:216 (4). Appearance will be very beautiful. Like this: http://puu.sh/4tyf9.jpg End point x:472 y:268. will be better in this.
●02:02:576 (1) - make blanket with 02:01:616 (4). Appearance will be very beautiful. Like this: http://puu.sh/4tysB.jpg Middle point x:412 y:252 and end point x:472 y:256. maybe.
●02:12:176 (3) - In the same way as above
●02:25:616 ~ 02:39:056 - why is spacing 1.10x? You were using the spacing 1.20x. Please fix to 1.20x

There is an object that spacing is spreading a little. for example: 1.28x, 1.14x...etc
I don't really like to this...orz I'd suggest a fix of this. please check~

[Normal]

●HP+1, AR+1 and OD+1. The difference between the Hard is too large. It may be necessary to balance the mapset
●00:59:216 (3) - make blanket with 00:58:736. middle point x:112 y:176 and end point x:124 y:120. http://puu.sh/4tyVF.jpg
●01:12:656 (1) - In the same way as above
●01:42:896 (T) - Unnecessary timing. remove.
●03:30:416 (T) - ^
●03:38:576 (6) - Add new combo. keep the flow of new combo.
●03:40:496 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
●03:42:416 (4) - Add new combo. ^
●03:44:336 (1) - Remove new combo. ^

There are a lot of spacing errors in Normal diff.. Just like the Easy, it is recommended that you fix.

[Hard]

●00:50:576 (3) - don't stack. i prefer this. In this case will have no problem. > 00:52:976 (3,4). Well, move to x:240 y:216.
●01:12:176 (3,4,5,6) - I agree with lolcubes. Rhythm of 1/6 is used.
●01:42:896 (7) - Add new combo?

good

good luck~

HabiHolic

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Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2013-09-18T05:35:24+00:00

-Gamu- wrote:
Hi~

[Hard]

●00:50:576 (3) - don't stack. i prefer this. In this case will have no problem. > 00:52:976 (3,4). Well, move to x:240 y:216.
●01:12:176 (3,4,5,6) - I agree with lolcubes. Rhythm of 1/6 is used. < why?? This is not Unrankble... http://osu.ppy.sh/s/63233 <Example Map Hard diff But No Fix
●01:42:896 (7) - Add new combo?

good
good luck~

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2013-09-18T05:37:48+00:00

Ok~ All Thanks Mod~

Update

Gamu

Elite Mapper

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Gamu 2013-09-18T08:12:31+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
-Gamu- wrote:
Hi~
●01:12:176 (3,4,5,6) - I agree with lolcubes. Rhythm of 1/6 is used.
]

sorry. I mistake the color

It is a strong suggestion. I'd suggest 1/6~ That's it

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-09-20T19:28:02+00:00

~Easy~

A lot of unsnapped notes, make sure to resnap all of them properly.

03:46:256 (1) - Change the last green line to soft, while is it normal I can still hear some sound, and I'm sure you don't want this.

~Normal~

00:57:290 (1,2,3) - Wrong spacing here, make sure to fix it properly with distance snap enabled.
01:51:050 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
03:46:250 (1) - Same suggestion as Easy difficulty.

~Hard~

AR feels too high imo, I'd reduce it by 1 tick at least.

00:29:930 (10) - Add a clap on this circle, it feels like you're missing it.
01:24:170 (5,6,7) - Make the spacing consistent here, looks kind of weird right now.
02:25:610 (6) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
03:46:250 (1) - Once again, same as Easy.

Well done, call me back.

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2013-09-21T02:51:31+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~Easy~
A lot of unsnapped notes, make sure to resnap all of them properly.
03:46:256 (1) - Change the last green line to soft, while is it normal I can still hear some sound, and I'm sure you don't want this.
~Normal~
00:57:290 (1,2,3) - Wrong spacing here, make sure to fix it properly with distance snap enabled.
01:51:050 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
03:46:250 (1) - Same suggestion as Easy difficulty.
~Hard~
AR feels too high imo, I'd reduce it by 1 tick at least.
00:29:930 (10) - Add a clap on this circle, it feels like you're missing it.
01:24:170 (5,6,7) - Make the spacing consistent here, looks kind of weird right now.
02:25:610 (6) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
03:46:250 (1) - Once again, same as Easy.
Well done, call me back.

Fixed~ Thanks Andrea~

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-09-21T13:03:34+00:00

Recheck time.

~Normal~

01:51:050 (1,2,3) - Spacing is still wrong here, check it carefully.

Just that small thing and this is ready to go!

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2013-09-21T13:05:04+00:00

Andrea wrote:
Recheck time.

~Normal~
01:51:050 (1,2,3) - Spacing is still wrong here, check it carefully.
Just that small thing and this is ready to go!

Update~

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Andrea 2013-09-21T13:26:00+00:00

Okay, time to go.

Bubbled~

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2013-09-21T13:34:30+00:00

Andrea wrote:
Okay, time to go.

Bubbled~

Thanks~!!! Andrea!!!

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2013-09-22T01:34:29+00:00

hi

Easy
01:22:250 (3) - Delete clap on tail, little hitsound inconsistency
03:45:770 (4) - not a big deal but you can move this down so (3) blankets it better

Normal
01:53:210 (5) - Delete note. I think it'd sound more fitting with the hold in the vocals in this quieter section

Hard
02:12:290 (1) - consider moving the spinner end back to the white tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/996567 Sounded more natural when "starting" with the chorus

very nice <3
feel free to call back when ur ready

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2013-09-22T01:40:52+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
hi

Easy
01:22:250 (3) - Delete clap on tail, little hitsound inconsistency
03:45:770 (4) - not a big deal but you can move this down so (3) blankets it better

Normal
01:53:210 (5) - Delete note. I think it'd sound more fitting with the hold in the vocals in this quieter section

Hard
02:12:290 (1) - consider moving the spinner end back to the white tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/996567 Sounded more natural when "starting" with the chorus

very nice <3
feel free to call back when ur ready

Fixed~