[General]
Saten's Easy has corrupted artist: 逕ー譚代f縺九j -> 田村ゆかり
alacat's Normal is missing the "a" in "alacat" for tags
[Saten's Easy]
00:23:491 (2) - adjust this slider a bit so it blankets 00:24:469 (3)
00:26:099 (1) - this is almost offscreen, and partially blocked by the hiterror meter. See if you can raise it a bit
00:29:034 (3) - should have NC here
00:46:643 (4) - another one that could be adjusted a bit upwards
01:23:817 (1) - this section has a lot of slider spam, it would be great if you can swap two of the sliders for a repeat slider + circle to have more variety, for example 01:27:730 (3,4) -
[alanyan's Normal]
this would look less clustered with CS3.5, which will also make the spread better
00:40:936 (4) - clap on end
00:42:893 (3) - this pattern plays a little confusing with this slider, i would delete this and add a note at 00:43:056 instead
01:31:643 (1,2) - the timing of the sliders is a little difficult to catch, i would add one more in here:
[Cilvery's Hard]
00:38:002 (5,6) - small spacing inconsistency
00:49:904 (1) - i think finish should be here instead of 00:50:230 (2)
nicely made diff, though i think for spread considerations you should add some triplets in the diff, for example:
00:44:523 (6,1) - can be redesigned to this:
00:51:860 (7,8) - this can be like this:
01:05:067 (5,6) - same change as 00:44:523 (6,1)
01:15:502 (6,7) - same change as 00:51:860 (7,8)
01:31:480 - a triplet can be added here
Its up to you, but I think this will make the transition from Hard to Insane a lot better.
[Insane]
00:11:752 (4) - add clap
00:26:099 (1) - finish intentional? Should be a clap imo
00:43:545 (6) - clap on end
00:44:360 (8,9,10,1,2,3) - clap on 00:44:360 (8), and this doesn't really flow well, try something like this:
00:45:012 (3) - clap start
00:59:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how bout a pattern that decreases spacing to represent the music better?
01:18:599 (1) - finish on start
01:26:099 (10) - clap on start
01:29:034 (2) - clap on end
Thats about all, let me know afterwards