frightened by muya's post.

[general]

1. Gin no Senritsu,Kioku no Mizuoto is the album name right? you shouldn't put it in the source.
2. and tag 銀の旋律、記憶の水音, you lost the 。mark
3. audio lean-in: 1500ms, you can adjust this with notepad (do it with all diffs

[insane nomi]

1. 01:25:610 (7) - till 01:31:317, all sliders cross while lines are not good in my eyes. cuz the drums are mainly i can hear and also this part should probably been mapped as the hardest part with mostly 1/2 rhythm.
2. 00:42:730 ~ 00:47:295 - almost the same, but not so bad
3. 01:32:784 (1,2,3,1) - dodgy timing.

other things seem good

Some changes
http://puu.sh/72N3N/a4e0b9e33e.osu

also, please add "Saten-san" to tags~

Thanks Asphyxia ~ nice modding! then, I'll think about HP Drain Rate :3

http://puu.sh/75Zuh.osu

upload~ thanks alacat and saten!

S o a p wrote:

[Hard]
00:30:665 (5) - separate them
00:54:306 (6) - whistle fixed
01:00:012 (8) - change to a note
01:02:295 - change to slider hand
01:04:088 (4) - whistle
01:09:469 - slider tail

thanks for mod =)

Guy wrote:

[Cilvery's Hard]

1. 00:04:904 (3,4,1) - ここのスペーシング統一したほうが読みやすく、さらに綺麗に見えると思いました。
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:32:621 (4,5) - この辺少し違和感あったのでこんな感じでnoteとスライダーを入れ替えてみてはどうでしょう？ 変更しました！
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:42:730 (2) - 細かいけど1に向かって直線のスライダーにすると見栄え良いと思いました。 少し変更しました
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:51:534 (6,7) - 配置の提案です。noteが左上に寄りすぎて叩きづらいかなと思ったのでこのようにしてみてはどうでしょうか
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:00:012 (8) - リピート部分のnormal-whistleが違和感あるので削除してもいいかも？ 消しましたー

モッドありがとうございました！

NewRulerNA wrote:

as your request
[Hard]

1. 00:04:252 (1,2) - whistleをsoftからnormalに変更? このwhistleが曲の近い音に合わせるために追加されているのは分かりますが、
   00:02:947 (1) - からのwhistleが譜面から生じるヒットサウンドのリズムを形成しつつあり、ここでは曲に合わせるよりも譜面のそちらの音に合わせた方が聞こえが良くなるはずです。 変更しました
2. 00:18:436 - ここに間を開けた理由は？ここにもボーカルも楽器もあり、ここまでを見た際にこの間を開けることが最善ではないように感じました。
   また00:20:067 - からの変化をより際立たせるためにもそこは埋めておくという見方もできます。
3. 00:20:230 (6) - 音としてはこれでもそこそこ良く感じられ気付いてくれない人も多いと思いますが、このあとの2つのサークルが特定の音だけを拾い上げていることを考慮するとこのスライダーの終点が邪魔になります。
   00:20:230 - の音をより強調させるためにもサークルに変えることをお勧めします。
4. 00:23:165 (7,8) - 順番を入れ替え？この流れの最後、下の方からの00:23:817 (1) - への接続が少し強引に感じたという点と、短いスライダーの間で円運動要素を付け足すことでより打ちやすくなるのではないかという点からの提案。
   
   
5. 00:32:947 (5) - サークルとしてこのポイントに音を置くのは曲にフィットしないように感じられました。そこには伸びている音しか存在しておらず、サークルとして一つの音を拾うのには適しません。
   サークルを置くことに対して違和感があるのであって、00:32:784 - で1/2スライダーを置いたりしてそこをスライダーの終点として置く分にはありだと思います。削除にするか、スライダーを置いていくかどうかはそちらにお任せします。
6. 00:43:219 (3,4,5) - この前後の節は全てボーカルに揃えられている中、ここはそれに正確に従ったものとはなっていません。
   
   
   1. 00:43:219 (3) - 1/2
   2. 00:43:545 (4) - ^
   3. 00:43:871 (5) - 1/1
   4. 00:44:360 (6) - circle
   多少の差はあれど大体こういった音取りになるはずです。
7. 00:51:860 (7) - Gayさんと同じような理由です。 ちょっと変更しました
   
   
   00:51:860 (7) - x156 y24
8. 00:58:871 (4,5,6,7,8) - このあたりdrumのヒットサウンドつけていってもいいかもしれない。 私もそう思ったので使わせていただきますｗ
9. 01:02:621 (7) - イェイって音が高く尖った傾向があるのでsoftよりもnormalの方がこれに対してはフィットすると思います。
10. 01:15:175 (5,6) - ここの部分を1/1に纏めることは出来ませんか？最初の方でその傾向が強かったのでスライダーの途中、01:15:338 - の音が少し耳障りだと感じました。
11. 01:21:045 (1) - 完全に曲に対して余分に置かれているサークルです。聞いていても音取りに実際に違和感があり、私はこのサークルの削除を強く推奨します。
12. 01:23:817 (1,2,3,4,5) - ここからメロディーに変化が出るので01:29:686 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - くらいに音を多くさせてリズム的にも難易度的にも今より複雑なものにして良いと思います。
13. 01:28:219 (7) - onbeatに合わせたリズムをこれが壊しています。このスライダーはoffbeatで始まりoffbeatで終わっており、中間である01:28:382 - のonbeatの音を無視しています。
    それ以前を見てみると分かりますが、onbeatで増えた音をより意識したパートとなっているのでそれを無視したリズムはこの付近で浮き、完璧ではない音取りとなる原因になっています。
    
    
    1. 01:28:219 (7) - 1/2 slider
    2. 01:28:545 (8) - circle
    これなら今の音取りに比較的近いままそれを改善させることが出来ます。
14. 01:31:643 - 少し極端に速度が下がりすぎているように感じました。そこまで静かになるわけでもなく、ここまでの大きなギャップは曲合わないように感じられます。0.75じゃダメなんでしょうか。 少し変更しました
15. 01:33:599 (1) - 01:34:252まで延長orサークルに切り替え。音はそこまで伸びているので今の終了地点だと中途半端です。
    しかも今のままだと 01:34:252 がどう考えてもサークル置き忘れてるように…。

モッドありがとうございました！
音取りの事に関しては完全にマッピングスタイルだと思います・・・

Asphyxia wrote:

Marked. Editing this post for the mod ^^

Cilvery's Hard

1. I don't see the point of HP7, it makes the difficulty spread rather bad and Insane already has HP7, HP6 would make the spread way better. changed
2. 00:16:969 (4) - Try ctrl + G, it plays nicely ^^
3. 00:32:947 - There's actually no beat here that's mappable, it sounds a bit bad anyway with that note there. Could you consider removing it?
4. 00:46:480 (5) - If you would move your sliders redpoint a bit more to the middle, it would look more symmetrical, which in this case is better than your current one.
   
   Example

   
5. I guess this diff is almost ready to go, nice job~

thanks for mod!

Konnichiha :3

[General]

it's not full version. right? so how about change title fancy baby doll (Short ver.)?

[Saten's Easy]

only this diff checked widescreen support

1. 00:11:752 (2) - i'm not recommend use short slider in easy diff. so i suggest this slider make to just one note
2. 00:14:360 (3) - ^..and other short slider
3. 00:51:045 (2) - add finish at front. i hear symbol sound at this part
4. 00:53:654 (2) - ^
5. 01:00:338 (1,1) - ^ at reserve

[alacat's Normal]

only this diff have wrong tags

1. 00:42:404 (2,3) - try to make each other stare. now is already fine. but it can be improved.
   
   Box

   

   184,68,42404,2,0,P|228:43|288:49,1,110
   356,184,43219,2,0,P|272:240|160:208,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Cilvery's Hard]

1. 00:00:339 (1) - add finish at front? now a little empty
2. 00:34:252 (1) - add finish at front. i'm hear symbol sound at this part. and i recommend add finish each symbol sounds place. like 00:38:002
3. 00:45:175 - how about add circle here? this part quite grow strained. so i think more a hard way this part
4. 00:51:860 (7,8) - overlap i think. recommend reduce distance a little
5. 01:04:904 - add circle here? it hears good

[Insane]

1. 00:00:991 (3,4,5,6) - just suggest. how about make same angle like prior two sliders
2. 00:38:980 (7) - how about make this just straight line?
3. 00:51:045 (4,5) - now i feel little awkward. consider make slider turn the other way.
   
   Box

   
4. 01:18:110 (4) - divide this and make one note for good measure front(like picture).it' s more match the music i think
   
5. 01:26:099 (10) - change angle like...-10 degree. now seems sticking

Best of luck!

added finish hitsounds here and there

but I kept the sliders, since I see no issues having them


http://puu.sh/guFSs/255b5343fe.osu

Thanks. added some notes for difficulty spread by myself.

http://puu.sh/gxkpr/0dc12ad4bb.zip

thanks for mod and star Ranger
changed almost!

[General]
Saten's Easy has corrupted artist: 逕ｰ譚代ｆ縺九ｊ -> 田村ゆかり
alacat's Normal is missing the "a" in "alacat" for tags

[Saten's Easy]
00:23:491 (2) - adjust this slider a bit so it blankets 00:24:469 (3)
00:26:099 (1) - this is almost offscreen, and partially blocked by the hiterror meter. See if you can raise it a bit
00:29:034 (3) - should have NC here
00:46:643 (4) - another one that could be adjusted a bit upwards
01:23:817 (1) - this section has a lot of slider spam, it would be great if you can swap two of the sliders for a repeat slider + circle to have more variety, for example 01:27:730 (3,4) -
[alanyan's Normal]
this would look less clustered with CS3.5, which will also make the spread better
00:40:936 (4) - clap on end
00:42:893 (3) - this pattern plays a little confusing with this slider, i would delete this and add a note at 00:43:056 instead
01:31:643 (1,2) - the timing of the sliders is a little difficult to catch, i would add one more in here:
[Cilvery's Hard]
00:38:002 (5,6) - small spacing inconsistency
00:49:904 (1) - i think finish should be here instead of 00:50:230 (2)

nicely made diff, though i think for spread considerations you should add some triplets in the diff, for example:
00:44:523 (6,1) - can be redesigned to this: 00:51:860 (7,8) - this can be like this:
01:05:067 (5,6) - same change as 00:44:523 (6,1)
01:15:502 (6,7) - same change as 00:51:860 (7,8)
01:31:480 - a triplet can be added here
Its up to you, but I think this will make the transition from Hard to Insane a lot better.


[Insane]
00:11:752 (4) - add clap
00:26:099 (1) - finish intentional? Should be a clap imo
00:43:545 (6) - clap on end
00:44:360 (8,9,10,1,2,3) - clap on 00:44:360 (8), and this doesn't really flow well, try something like this: 00:45:012 (3) - clap start
00:59:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how bout a pattern that decreases spacing to represent the music better? 01:18:599 (1) - finish on start
01:26:099 (10) - clap on start
01:29:034 (2) - clap on end

Thats about all, let me know afterwards

thank you mod jonathan
fixed my diff and General
waiting guest diffs~

Ranger wrote:

[Cilvery's Hard]

1. 00:00:339 (1) - add finish at front? now a little empty added
2. 00:34:252 (1) - add finish at front. i'm hear symbol sound at this part. and i recommend add finish each symbol sounds place. like 00:38:002 added
3. 00:45:175 - how about add circle here? this part quite grow strained. so i think more a hard way this part added
4. 00:51:860 (7,8) - overlap i think. recommend reduce distance a little changed o:
5. 01:04:904 - add circle here? it hears good um.. nope, sorry

thanks for the mod ^ ^

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Cilvery's Hard]
00:38:002 (5,6) - small spacing inconsistency fixed
00:49:904 (1) - i think finish should be here instead of 00:50:230 (2) o.. ya changed lol

nicely made diff, though i think for spread considerations you should add some triplets in the diff, for example:
00:44:523 (6,1) - can be redesigned to this:

SPOILER

00:51:860 (7,8) - this can be like this:

SPOILER

01:05:067 (5,6) - same change as 00:44:523 (6,1)
01:15:502 (6,7) - same change as 00:51:860 (7,8) uhh.. i don't wanna change these parts : (..
01:31:480 - a triplet can be added here added~

thanks for the mod ^ ^

fixed all points, Thanks jonathan :>

http://puu.sh/gE3fW/18797c955e.zip

boop


only thing I kept was the slider section at the end, keeping it like that is variation if you compare it to the rest of the map, no?

http://puu.sh/gEknp/6c15f7ac4b.zip

all diffs update~

[Insane]
some left over missing claps you should fix:
00:34:904 (3) - end
00:50:230 (2) - start
00:50:556 (3) - end
01:18:599 (1) - end

00:59:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for this i meant a gradually decreasing spacing; for example, 00:59:360 (1,2) - can have a 1.5x spacing, and then 00:59:523 (2,3) - can have 1.4x spacing, and decrease it until it hits 01:00:175 (6,1) - which will have 1.0x spacing.

Thats all the rest looks good

all fixed! thank you mod!

Cool good luck!

You should disable widescreen support in Saten's easy, its inconsistent and you have no SB in this map.

ill correct someone pop
thank you Tari

Cilvery's Hard

1. 01:31:398 (8) - remove this note or make like feels better for me

Insane

1. 00:01:969 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - the distance of 2 and 3 is a bit small, and 00:02:295 (3,4,5,6,1) - in a line make it awkward to play. Make a different pattern on 00:02:295 (3,4,5,6) - will solve the problem.
2. 00:28:708 (5,6,7,8) - here shouldnt be a stream imo, no 1/4 sounds and hears a bit weird for me.
3. 00:41:507 (7) - remove this note?
4. 01:06:860 (4,5) - avoid using 3/4 sliders for safe, also 1/2 works better than 3/4 here.
5. 01:18:518 - add a note, stream here quite fits.

and disable widescreen support in Saten's Easy, then call me back.

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