1. Hard (4.78 stars, 204 notes)
2. Normal (3.53 stars, 124 notes)

Shinxyn wrote:

Normal-
00:17:32 (1,2) - nazi- up a tick so it looks nice and even with the last combo's single (1)
00:53:50 (5,6) - nazi- up a tick?

animask wrote:

[Normal]
1: 00:33:58 (3) - Extend to next white tick to the right ( the finish sounds better there too )

[Hard]
2: 00:02:32 (1) - Remove New Combo
3: 00:03:12 (1) - Remove New Combo

Symbolic wrote:

[Normal]
1:00:00:60 (TIMING SECTION) - Use Normal sample sounds, not Soft.

[Hard]
2: 00:04:15 (x) - Add a note here.
3: 00:04:50 (x) - ^
4: 00:10:68 (4) - Put this note at 00:10:79 and respace it.
5: 00:12:46 (TIMING SECTION) - Get rid of this slow-down.

tieff wrote:

Wanna watch anime.

[Normal]
00:04:50 (4) - Add note? [done]
00:06:33 (4) - ^ [done]
00:18:47 (4) - ^ [done]

[Hard]
00:06:79 (8) - New combo? [fixed]
00:42:74 (2) - Whistle. [done]
00:43:43 (1,2,3) - Hitsounds? [added]
00:52:82 (4,5) - Spacing. [fixed]
Star! [Thanks very much XD]

Breeze wrote:

[nomal]
00:29:234 - add a note with clap [Done]
00:31:067 - ^ [Done]
00:48:471 - ^ [Done]
00:48:929 (1) - add clap [I put a whistle here as I made some other changes]
00:49:616 - add a note with clap [Done]
00:50:074 (3) - move to 00:50:303, add clap [left here, added new beat at this time]
00:50:761 (4) - add clap [Done]
00:51:448 - add a note with clap [Done]
01:03:700 - 01:05:761 - seem to be empty, add some notes [Done]

[hard]
00:26:257 (6) - maybe this slider coule use a lower BPM, I mean 1/2 BPM just like you set 00:12:517 (1) [No, it just doesn't feel right]
00:33:586 (6) - ^ [This one is slowed however]

good job, hope it RANK soon XD
star for you

alvisto wrote:

Ok, here is my promised modding, sorry for the lateness. XD

NORMAL
00:03:128 - 00:07:479 : imo, this part's hitsounds sound really weird, coz it doesn't match with the earlier green 1,2,3,4
Hmmm.... after I try modding it for a while, here's my result :
00:04:273 (3) - Remove whatever sound here.
00:04:502 (4) - Remove whatever here, and add whistle
00:04:960 - clap only
00:05:647 - clap only
00:07:250 - add a clap note here.
Try applying these changes and see whether you like it or not.
00:54:425 - I was expecting a clap here, but didn't hear it. XD Change to clap ?
[all fixed]

HARD
Ahh~~~ The opening hitsounds are much better, make more sense than Normal. =P
01:06:334 (1,2,3,4) - Alignment of 3 is not in a straight vertical line with 1 [fixed]

Starred ! But you could have a better quality mp3 ! =P

minyeob wrote:

[Overall]
There are some nazi issues, but the map is pretty good.

[Hard]
This difficulty starts much faster than Normal. Why? Please edit lead in seconds to 1.5 [Done]
00:10:68 (4) - 1/4 beat later? [Actually it sounds much cleaner at 1/6 BSD]

Starred!

CrazyBanana wrote:

[Hard]
00:10:742 - its better when moved to 00:10:685 I had it like this originally, but somebody suggested otherwise <_<
01:02:212 - add a note here ? Done
That's all, also star, cause this map is good

gdeath wrote:

[Normal]
i think clap&finish sound louder.my sugggestion is to decrease volume 10%.
00:07:92 (1) - remve new combo Done

[Hard]
volume 70%.the same as normal
00:12:50 (1) - remve new combo It's mapped to the timing section, so this long slider is special
00:13:41 (1) - ^ These are the otherend of the timing section
00:28:53 (3) - ^ Done
00:32:19 (1) - ^ Changed, along with a few nearby beats
01:08:15 (1) - remove whistle or 01:07:23 (1) - add whistle Removed whistle

nice map.star*

MarioBros777 wrote:

I agree with eee, the fact is the mp3 is really soft than before. The video has improved which is good to see but it distracts me at the start when it constantly changes and flickers while doing so.

The removal of the flash was both good and bad. Good because it serves as a getting rid of a distraction when the video itself is and bad because it has lost the whole emphasis of the final bit of the map. Flash? whatever do you mean?

Now to get into some actual modding.

[General]

The timing seems a bit off. Actually no, it's just the offset.

Try Offset of 824 and see if that sounds any better in timing section. There's no need to resnap it looks like. Done

[Hard]
With so little hitcircles if you get one wrong it seems like you can never get a full HP bar, I suggest putting it down maybe 1 or 2.

[Normal]
00:02:65: Place a hitcircle here. Done
00:11:81 (1,2,3): Place whistle sounds on these sliders (Even though it sounds subtle) Done
00:30:13 (1,2,3,4): I don't know which ones, but some of the claps don't sound right. Hrm... I hear nothing wrong

I'll star it.

JarJarJacob wrote:

Change offset to 584. Hrm... I don't think so... 594 is where it'll go.

Hard:

00:00:82 (2,3,5,8,9) - I suggest using claps or switching to normal sounds. Follow that pattern throughout this section. Done
00:12:50 (1) - Remove new combo, stack on slider. Done
00:55:79 - No real reason for this break and it doesn't fit with the song. You could always remove the repeat from that last slider and add a long half speed one. Removed break and added notes
01:05:40 (1) - Remove new combo. Done
01:08:15 (1) - Remove new combo. Done
01:11:58 (1) - Remove new combo. Done
01:12:04 (9) - New combo. Done
01:14:08 - Add a slider here. Done at 1/2 speed and a silent finish

Ephemeral wrote:

Don't take this personally or anything, but I'm not particularly fond of your minimalist/speed-centric mapping style. I prefer stuff with a little more beef to them and your primary usage of circles and 'twitch' beats to convey changes in the vocal tune just feels outright lazy to me, along with the rather uninspiring sliders you throw in there every now and then. Gee, I love you too

Anyway, onto actual modding:

Do note: I have OCD when it comes to correct sliders. Please don't take it personally.

[Normal]
(Up slider rate to 1. The distance snap on this makes me want to cry. 1.2x would fit this song nicely. Hitsounds are okay.)
Uhm.... Slider rate is 1.4
00:08:15 (4) - Add a middle bezier point and draw it out slightly to make a fuller curve
Kinda done
00:10:67 (3) - Turn into a tilde (~) slider
Kinda done
00:12:50 (2) - Half the bezier peak used to emphasize this curve so it fits in more with the other sliders around it
Done
00:20:51 (3) - Move up so it's on a 280 degree bearing with the earlier note so it's not sitting beside the slider
Done; I think
00:33:57 (3) - This looks stupid. A 2x inherited BPM section will allow you to make even sliders on a normally odd BPM if you're having trouble, but not having a curve like that at least end on at least one of the same axes of its origin when it's circular like that looks really tacky Changed the slider altogether

[Hard]
(I advise you drop the difficulty setting and hp drain by 1-2 each. I suspect your offset may be slightly off due to the nature of the song (it feels like it jumps a few MS back and forth during the song's progression) and that setting a higher difficulty exasperates this fact. Hitsounds are bearable.)

00:08:15 (2) - Straighten the bezier points here and actually curve them properly. Place about three more points along the spine of the slider and that'll give you a proper curve without making the origin look out of place.

00:10:78 (4) - Substitute with 1/2-1 bar tilde (~) slider to compensate for the natural song deviation.
Compensate? what is there to compensate? Slider shape affects nothing to do with timing ;p
00:12:50 (3) - Lift second-last bezier point up slightly to solidify the curve and make it look proper.
Done
00:13:41 (1) - Draw middle point out more slightly to embellish the curve a bit more.

00:22:80 (1), 00:30:13 (1) - This is what I mean by uninspiring sliders. Don't do patterns like this if your timing is going to cut them off before they can be constructed properly. You may be able to fix this by shoving in a 2x inherited section around that slider - but make sure you drag the end bezier point back to the origin to ensure the signet is actually finished.
Uhm, Timing is perfect for it, what the hell are you talking about?
00:26:24 (1) - Turn this into a tilde (~) slider. More personal preference than anything else, but I feel it fits the vocal line slightly better. This slider also pointed out that a tick rate of 1 is probably better than 0.5 if for no other reason than to correct this slider.

00:35:17 (1) - I would think setting this to repeat once would look better, but that's a personal thing.
Done for aesthetic's sake
00:36:77 (4) - I would also think placing an even beat after this would look and play better, again another personal thing.
Done too
00:39:06 (2) - Remove this, repeat the slider before it.
Nuh Uh
00:46:39 (5) - Change to a tilde slider. Straight sliders that aren't repeating amongst all this curves looks very, very odd.
Slightly tilde'd
00:54:63 (8) - Place a beat on next even half stanza for keeping the rhythm continuous aside from the vocals.

00:59:10 (5,1) - Please don't do this. Hiding the start of a combo behind the end of another looks extremely tacky.
Changed already
01:04:71 (9) - Why is there no forerunner beat before this like there is for every other section in the map?
Cause it's mapped to something else? evidently?
01:06:54 (4) - Substitute for 1 beat/half beat slider

01:07:46 (2) - See above

01:08:83 (5) - See above

01:09:75 (1) - Delete, shift new combo forward one notch - this beat is completely out of place even if it not having it there makes the vocals slightly late

01:13:87 (1) - Replace with spinner or change into tilde slider.

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Overall though, a decent map and while not to my tastes, has been meticulously constructed in good standing to the song in question. Star'd.

NoHItter wrote:

Suggestion:

Normal:
00:17:769 - Add a clap at the end of the slider. Done
00:59:219 (2,4,6,8,9) -A clap sounds better than the whistle here. Partially done
01:11:586 - Change this to clap.

Hard:
00:10:784 - Sounds weird here. Move it backwards by 1/8 tick if you want. Done. No more moving of this will be done, since EVERYBODY wants it somewhere else ;p Final position
00:44:792 - Finish? Done

Starred