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Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

ZZHBOY wrote:

[general]
[*]sound of normal whistle may be strange with this song, trying to use other sound could make player feels better. Ok I delete hitsound
[*]offset-5 may make player's hiting more accurate. :?
[*]diff spread is not good, Hard diff is too easy.

[Easy]
00:20:727 (1) - change into 3/2 slider to follow the music
00:42:184 (4,1) - overlap, consider to move away
00:50:727 - next slider starts from here may feels more natual
02:41:985 - ^
02:39:005 (3,1) - overlap is unsightly here
02:46:555 - consider to add a note
03:03:243 (1,2) - try to change in this way
[Normal]
00:21:522 (2,3) - try to change in this way00:30:860 - next slider start from here could follow the vocal
01:11:191 - consider to add a note
01:27:879 (2,3,4) - unconfortable to play,consider to follow the music
01:31:456 (2,3,4) - ^
from 03:03:244, here is the same problem.Do not just set 1/1slider to fill the time axis, follw the rhythm will make the map better
03:33:045 - consider to stop the spinner at here

I changed some 1/1 sliders

[Hard]
00:22:118 (2,2) - overlap here is ugly
00:24:005 (1) - stop at previous blue line an next spinner start at here will follow the strong beat
00:27:879 (3) - start at previous blue line
00:32:449 (3,4) - this stack is bad,and here hasn't follow the rhythm, consider to
00:37:217 (2) - slider of this style are too much, i think it's ugly
00:52:515 (1,2,3,4) - overlap here is not good, i think
02:36:422 (2,1) - overlap here will make 02:37:416 (1) hard to read
02:52:118 (2,4) - haven't stacked well

[Insane]
01:13:575 (7,8,1) - hard to read, consider to decrease ds
01:18:343 (4,5) - ^
01:15:760 (6,7) - this way could be better01:33:939 - consider to add a spinner here
01:43:177 (5) - overmap is strange here


that's all i can mod,finally wish you success :)
Thanks to modding!
DeletedUser_3044645
M4M'ish...??

[Easy]

박자는 다 맞는거 같습니다.

Easy의 묘미인 blanket 이 너무 없네요. 허나, Flow는 아주 좋아요.

00:20:727 (1,2) - 이런거 라든가.. 다 지적하기엔 너무 많아서 직접 보시고 고치실지 안고치실지 정하세요~ 고친다면 아주 귀찮아질듯

02:39:006 (3,1) - 슬라 이렇게 겹쳐놓으면 뱃들이 지적 할거같네요 이지난이도에서는. 최대한 깔끔하게!

[Normal]

00:39:800 (1,2) - 더 이쁘게 다듬어 질수 있을거같네요 00:39:800 (1) 가

00:44:568 (3) - 00:44:369 여기서 시작하게하는게 어울리는거 같네요

01:22:714 (3,1) - 1을 움직이던지 3을 움직이던지 해서 blanket 하는거 추천

01:48:144 (4,1) - blanket

01:51:720 (5) - end point를 좀 위로 올리는게 01:52:913 (1) 랑 잘 어울릴거 같네요

03:01:257 (4) - 딱 꺾은 슬라이더 보다는 blanket 하는게..

[156's Hard]

Why not HP+1, OD+1

00:44:369 (1) - What happened to this slider?

01:33:740 (7) - this is where vocal ends

02:32:449 (4,1) - better blanket

[Insane]

00:23:707 (5) - 전 안어울리는거 같네요. 삭제

00:24:303 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 디스턴스 엉망

00:26:985 (10,1) - 간격 좁히세요 연타처럼

02:37:615 (3,5,8,9) - 보컬에 맞추시고 배치를 다시 하는건 어떨까요

03:14:767 (1,1) - 추천. 슬밋 크리에이터

솔직히 말하자면 히트사운드 볼륨50%에다가 거의 없어서 전 이게 맞는건지 안맞는건지 리듬감이 안잡히네요 플레이하면서..

01:31:456 (2,3,4,5) - 이런거 라던지 소리가 안들리니 도무지 무슨 박자인지 ..

히트사운드 작업 추천
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

No Dap wrote:

M4M'ish...??

[Easy]

박자는 다 맞는거 같습니다.

Easy의 묘미인 blanket 이 너무 없네요. 허나, Flow는 아주 좋아요.

00:20:727 (1,2) - 이런거 라든가.. 다 지적하기엔 너무 많아서 직접 보시고 고치실지 안고치실지 정하세요~ 고친다면 아주 귀찮아질듯

02:39:006 (3,1) - 슬라 이렇게 겹쳐놓으면 뱃들이 지적 할거같네요 이지난이도에서는. 최대한 깔끔하게!

[Normal]

00:39:800 (1,2) - 더 이쁘게 다듬어 질수 있을거같네요 00:39:800 (1) 가

00:44:568 (3) - 00:44:369 여기서 시작하게하는게 어울리는거 같네요

01:22:714 (3,1) - 1을 움직이던지 3을 움직이던지 해서 blanket 하는거 추천

01:48:144 (4,1) - blanket

01:51:720 (5) - end point를 좀 위로 올리는게 01:52:913 (1) 랑 잘 어울릴거 같네요

03:01:257 (4) - 딱 꺾은 슬라이더 보다는 blanket 하는게..

[156's Hard]

Why not HP+1, OD+1

00:44:369 (1) - What happened to this slider?

01:33:740 (7) - this is where vocal ends

02:32:449 (4,1) - better blanket

[Insane]

00:23:707 (5) - 전 안어울리는거 같네요. 삭제

00:24:303 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 디스턴스 엉망

00:26:985 (10,1) - 간격 좁히세요 연타처럼

02:37:615 (3,5,8,9) - 보컬에 맞추시고 배치를 다시 하는건 어떨까요

03:14:767 (1,1) - 추천. 슬밋 크리에이터

솔직히 말하자면 히트사운드 볼륨50%에다가 거의 없어서 전 이게 맞는건지 안맞는건지 리듬감이 안잡히네요 플레이하면서..

01:31:456 (2,3,4,5) - 이런거 라던지 소리가 안들리니 도무지 무슨 박자인지 ..

히트사운드 작업 추천
blanket이라고 나름 바꿔봣는데 잘될지 모르겟네요
인세인 힛사 50 :arrow: 70
감사합니다~ :D
Last Bubble
RatedNC17
Hello~ (M4M)

[Easy]
00:29:469 (4) - move to x:488 y:120 (be symmetrical with (3)
00:31:058 (3) - your slider's end seems strange. like this?
00:35:032 (3) - move your slider start to x:328 y:236
02:03:641 (2) - x:280 y:124 looks better in my opinion

[Normal]
wow really nice diff :D

[156's Hard]
again a really nice diff :)

[Insane]
01:30:860 (1) - remove the NC
02:33:442 (4) - add finish at slider start
02:34:237 (5) - finish
03:21:919 (1) - whistle
03:22:515 (1) - ^
03:23:310 (3) - ^
03:24:502 (6) - remove slider end whistle
03:24:701 (7) - whistle
03:25:098 (1) - whistle at slider start
03:25:694 (1) - ^

wow nice map. gonna favorite this :) Have a star (╯°□°)╯︵
Rakuen
Hi~

M4M from your queue
My map: CLIFF EGDE feat. Nakamura Maiko - Endless Tears

[Easy]
00:14:369 (1) - Try to make this point below the head of 00:15:164 (2) -
00:17:548 (1) - ^
00:27:085 (1) - ^
00:30:263 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too many circles here, I prefer Easy with more sliders
00:33:442 - You should decrease the note density starts here, Easy shouldn't have too many notes
00:34:634 (2,3) - Will make confuse (hard to read)
00:34:634 (2,3) - They are not in either straight line or fold
00:43:376 (2) - Flow broken
00:46:157 - Add Finish here
00:46:952 (2) - Remove Finish
00:48:542 (2) - ^
00:53:310 (2) - Bad flow and lead, the end of (2) is pointing to the reverse arrow of 00:54:899 (1) -
00:56:489 (2) - Ctrl+G (for better flow)
01:02:051 (1) - Blanket this
01:02:846 (2) - This is hidden and bad flow which lead 01:03:641 (3,4) - to another direction
01:07:217 (1,2) - Remove this and make 01:05:230 (1) - extend to 01:07:615 -
01:09:601 (2,3,1) - A bit crowded here
01:12:780 (2) - Put it below tail of 01:11:588 (1) -
01:27:482 (1) - Don't put this behind arrow of 01:25:892 (3) - , players might think the arrow reverses 2 times
01:29:667 (3) - Note is hidden, hard to play on Easy
01:52:912 (1,2) - Make it symmetry on center line
01:57:482 - Add Finish
01:59:270 - ^
02:00:859 (3) - Not good to bounce 2 times in Easy
02:06:422 (1) - Flow broken, make slider point to the right side instead of up
02:28:674 (2) - DS (Use Distance Snap)
02:28:674 (2) - You should use a constant DS (distance snap) and not changing between 0.8x and 0.9x
02:33:442 (5) - Make this shape same with 02:35:826 (2) -
02:42:978 (3) - Try not to let this slider touch 02:40:594 (1) -

[Normal]
00:27:085 (1) - Reverse 2 times is hard to play, try to remove 1 reverse and add circle at 00:29:071 (3) -
00:39:800 (1) - Ctrl+J and rotate 45* anti-clockwise to match flow with 00:40:595 (2) -
00:44:369 (3) - This should be facing up
01:14:767 (1,2,3,4) - Make them symmetry on center line
01:19:535 (3) - Make this same shape with 01:20:330 (4) - and blanket
01:23:906 (1) - Blanket this with 01:22:714 (3) -
01:24:303 (2) - Reduce 1 reverse
01:28:475 (3) - The difficulty raised suddenly cuz of red ticks
01:31:058 (1) - ^
01:57:879 (4,5,6) - Hard patterns
02:02:648 (2) - Don't stick the reverse arrow to 02:03:244 (3) -
03:00:860 (3) - Blanket with 03:01:257 (4) -
03:13:177 (1) - Remove NC (new combo)
03:13:972 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too many circles

[156's Hard]
He changed name from bubble156 to Last Bubble, please make a change in your diff
00:17:548 (1) - Make this blanket with 00:17:350 (3) - (move it to middle sight of circle)
00:17:946 (2,3,4) - Have to arrange this more
00:20:727 (1,2) - Not a good note for me
00:33:442 (1) - There should be some DS (distance snap) here for better flow
00:35:032 (1) - ^
00:36:621 (1) - The flow is misdirected
00:38:210 (1) - DS and remove NC (new combo)
00:47:747 (1) - DS
00:49:336 (1) - ^
00:49:932 (1) - Remove NC
00:50:727 (1) -
00:53:111 (2) - Best not to touch the sliders
00:53:906 (4) - ^
00:54:700 (2) - ^

[Insane]
Approach rate: -1 (Note timing distance is not that close, there's less jumps)
Overall difficulty: -1
01:05:032 (4) - Not readable
01:07:615 (5,6,7,8) - Please make them same distance like 01:07:217 (3,4) -
01:14:568 (1) - This jump is too sudden and too big
01:23:111 (5) - Ctrl+G
01:23:707 (7) - Ctrl+G
01:30:860 (1) - Remove NC
01:41:985 (1,2,3) - The distance is same but 01:41:985 (1,2) - is not same which 01:42:383 (3) - should be placed further
01:43:177 (5) - Not readable
01:45:959 (5,6,7) - Make them close, you didnt have that big jumps before
01:47:747 (5,6) - Flow stopped and 01:47:946 (6) - is hidden
01:48:740 (3) - Not rankable for now
01:52:019 (1) - ^ This too, cuz of sudden slider speed change
01:53:906 (1,2,3,4) - Place these further between each other
01:57:780 (7) - Make this DS same with 01:58:277 (9) -
01:59:270 (1) - Jump too sudden and squeezed with 01:58:873 (3) -
02:17:946 (3) - Flow breaker
02:30:264 (1) - Press Ctrl+H a few times and you'll see the difference, make it balanced
02:40:197 (3,4,5) - Too many notes stacked behind

Hope it helps.
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

Rakuen wrote:

Hi~

M4M from your queue
My map: CLIFF EGDE feat. Nakamura Maiko - Endless Tears

[Easy]
00:14:369 (1) - Try to make this point below the head of 00:15:164 (2) -
00:17:548 (1) - ^
00:27:085 (1) - ^
00:30:263 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too many circles here, I prefer Easy with more sliders
00:33:442 - You should decrease the note density starts here, Easy shouldn't have too many notes
00:34:634 (2,3) - Will make confuse (hard to read)
00:34:634 (2,3) - They are not in either straight line or fold
00:43:376 (2) - Flow broken
00:46:157 - Add Finish here
00:46:952 (2) - Remove Finish
00:48:542 (2) - ^
00:53:310 (2) - Bad flow and lead, the end of (2) is pointing to the reverse arrow of 00:54:899 (1) -
00:56:489 (2) - Ctrl+G (for better flow)
01:02:051 (1) - Blanket this
01:02:846 (2) - This is hidden and bad flow which lead 01:03:641 (3,4) - to another direction
01:07:217 (1,2) - Remove this and make 01:05:230 (1) - extend to 01:07:615 -
01:09:601 (2,3,1) - A bit crowded here
01:12:780 (2) - Put it below tail of 01:11:588 (1) -
01:27:482 (1) - Don't put this behind arrow of 01:25:892 (3) - , players might think the arrow reverses 2 times
01:29:667 (3) - Note is hidden, hard to play on Easy
01:52:912 (1,2) - Make it symmetry on center line
01:57:482 - Add Finish
01:59:270 - ^
02:00:859 (3) - Not good to bounce 2 times in Easy
02:06:422 (1) - Flow broken, make slider point to the right side instead of up
02:28:674 (2) - DS (Use Distance Snap)
02:28:674 (2) - You should use a constant DS (distance snap) and not changing between 0.8x and 0.9x
02:33:442 (5) - Make this shape same with 02:35:826 (2) -
02:42:978 (3) - Try not to let this slider touch 02:40:594 (1) -

[Normal]
00:27:085 (1) - Reverse 2 times is hard to play, try to remove 1 reverse and add circle at 00:29:071 (3) -
00:39:800 (1) - Ctrl+J and rotate 45* anti-clockwise to match flow with 00:40:595 (2) -
00:44:369 (3) - This should be facing up
01:14:767 (1,2,3,4) - Make them symmetry on center line
01:19:535 (3) - Make this same shape with 01:20:330 (4) - and blanket
01:23:906 (1) - Blanket this with 01:22:714 (3) -
01:24:303 (2) - Reduce 1 reverse
01:28:475 (3) - The difficulty raised suddenly cuz of red ticks
01:31:058 (1) - ^
01:57:879 (4,5,6) - Hard patterns
02:02:648 (2) - Don't stick the reverse arrow to 02:03:244 (3) -
03:00:860 (3) - Blanket with 03:01:257 (4) -
03:13:177 (1) - Remove NC (new combo)
03:13:972 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too many circles

[156's Hard]
He changed name from bubble156 to Last Bubble, please make a change in your diff
00:17:548 (1) - Make this blanket with 00:17:350 (3) - (move it to middle sight of circle)
00:17:946 (2,3,4) - Have to arrange this more
00:20:727 (1,2) - Not a good note for me
00:33:442 (1) - There should be some DS (distance snap) here for better flow
00:35:032 (1) - ^
00:36:621 (1) - The flow is misdirected
00:38:210 (1) - DS and remove NC (new combo)
00:47:747 (1) - DS
00:49:336 (1) - ^
00:49:932 (1) - Remove NC
00:50:727 (1) -
00:53:111 (2) - Best not to touch the sliders
00:53:906 (4) - ^
00:54:700 (2) - ^

[Insane]
Approach rate: -1 (Note timing distance is not that close, there's less jumps)
Overall difficulty: -1
01:05:032 (4) - Not readable
01:07:615 (5,6,7,8) - Please make them same distance like 01:07:217 (3,4) -
01:14:568 (1) - This jump is too sudden and too big
01:23:111 (5) - Ctrl+G
01:23:707 (7) - Ctrl+G
01:30:860 (1) - Remove NC
01:41:985 (1,2,3) - The distance is same but 01:41:985 (1,2) - is not same which 01:42:383 (3) - should be placed further
01:43:177 (5) - Not readable
01:45:959 (5,6,7) - Make them close, you didnt have that big jumps before
01:47:747 (5,6) - Flow stopped and 01:47:946 (6) - is hidden
01:48:740 (3) - Not rankable for now
01:52:019 (1) - ^ This too, cuz of sudden slider speed change
01:53:906 (1,2,3,4) - Place these further between each other
01:57:780 (7) - Make this DS same with 01:58:277 (9) -
01:59:270 (1) - Jump too sudden and squeezed with 01:58:873 (3) -
02:17:946 (3) - Flow breaker
02:30:264 (1) - Press Ctrl+H a few times and you'll see the difference, make it balanced
02:40:197 (3,4,5) - Too many notes stacked behind

Hope it helps.

RatedNC17 wrote:

Hello~ (M4M)

[Easy]
00:29:469 (4) - move to x:488 y:120 (be symmetrical with (3)
00:31:058 (3) - your slider's end seems strange. like this?
00:35:032 (3) - move your slider start to x:328 y:236
02:03:641 (2) - x:280 y:124 looks better in my opinion

[Normal]
wow really nice diff :D

[156's Hard]
again a really nice diff :)

[Insane]
01:30:860 (1) - remove the NC
02:33:442 (4) - add finish at slider start
02:34:237 (5) - finish
03:21:919 (1) - whistle
03:22:515 (1) - ^
03:23:310 (3) - ^
03:24:502 (6) - remove slider end whistle
03:24:701 (7) - whistle
03:25:098 (1) - whistle at slider start
03:25:694 (1) - ^

wow nice map. gonna favorite this :) Have a star (╯°□°)╯︵
Thanks!
Last Bubble
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm
Ok.
I will Update Last Order Bubbles Hard!
zorefire
From modding queue
[Easy]
00:30:661 (2) -Would look nice like this.
01:18:740 (2,3) - I dont know about this sounds delayed.
02:42:184 (2) - sounds off.
[Normal]
00:22:515 (3) - looks sloppy.
[Hard]

[Insane]

Good luck ranking. Good map hard to find people.
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

zorefire wrote:

From modding queue
[Easy]
00:30:661 (2) -Would look nice like this. Fixed.
01:18:740 (2,3) - I dont know about this sounds delayed.
02:42:184 (2) - sounds off.
[Normal]
00:22:515 (3) - looks sloppy. Fixed.

[Hard]

[Insane]

Good luck ranking. Good map hard to find people.
Thanks Modding :D
Evil_Twilight
From my Queue

[General]
  1. Check tags on every diffs, make sure they are identical.
  2. You should find another clap sound instead, this clap is unapparent imo.

[Insane]
  • Hmmm...in fact, i can only heard finish and whistle sound in this map.
    Try to use more sound to make the map better.
  1. 00:12:383 (1) - Add a spin and clap start from here to 00:13:972, it's fit the music.
  2. 00:15:164 (5) - Seems like a random sound here. o.o
  3. 00:24:303 (2) - ^
  4. 00:30:860 (5) - ^
  5. 00:38:012 (4,1,2,3,4) - Maka a star here?
  6. 00:48:343 (5) - Maybe a ''2'' will looks better. lol
  7. 00:51:522 (x) - Add a note here, make 00:51:720 (1,2,3) - these have a feel of stopping because the rhythm is changed from 1/2 to 1/1.
  8. 01:02:052 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I prefer to follow the vocal in this part, use 1/2 and 3/4 slider on here.
  9. 01:13:873 (8) - This overlap is not very good, try other pattern?
  10. 01:31:853 (6) - Change it to a note and 1/2 slier to link 01:31:853 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - them together.
  11. 01:48:442 (2) - Move up a bit to make 01:48:144 (1,2,3) - them a triangle.
  12. 02:20:330 (2) - Move left a bit let 02:19:734 (1) - blacket it.
  13. 02:23:012 (x) - Add a note to make triple hit? I heard a sound here.
  14. 02:38:807 (6) - Add NC because you changed slider to note.
  15. 02:55:595 (3) - Change it to 3/4 slider? here is a long sound.
  16. 03:14:767 (1) - One more reverse.
  17. 03:26:290 (2) - Move to x:256 y:288 to make a triangle and make them symmetrical.

[Last Bubble's Hard]
  1. 00:32:449 (3,4) - Move them left a bit, they are too close to 00:33:442 (1) -
  2. 00:33:442 (1) - ^If you change this, consider to make 00:33:442 (1) - it stack on 00:32:250 (2) -
  3. 00:35:032 (1) - ^Let slider's end stack on 00:34:634 (3) -
  4. 00:43:575 (2) - 00:44:370 (1) - Add finish on here?
  5. 01:02:051 (1,2,3,4) - For the regular, make a square like 01:03:641 (1,2,3,4) - ?
  6. 01:16:356 (1,2) - Move down a bit to make 01:16:157 (4,1,2) - them a triangle.
  7. 01:50:329 (2) - Add finish?
  8. 02:02:449 (1,2) - Maybe slider's middle should be normal whistle o.o?
  9. 02:16:754 (x) - I recommend you add a note and stack on 02:16:356 (4) - because here is a downbeat.
  10. 02:32:647 (1) - Try use a 3/2 slider and a note here, follow the vocal here will be more fit imo.
  11. 02:40:693 (1) - End on 02:42:581 because here has a loud clap sound, and add some notes betweem 02:40:693 (1,1) - like 01:07:615 (1,2,3,4) -
  12. 03:12:581 (2) - Too much reverses here, it's easily to break combo.

[Normal]
  • AR+1, AR5 is not fits in this SV.
  1. 00:25:098 (3) - Copy-paste 00:23:906 (1) - ?
  2. 00:26:290 (x) - 00:26:687 (x) - Add two notes on here to link 00:27:085 (1) -
  3. 00:28:277 (2) - Move down a bit let 00:27:085 (1) - blanket it.
  4. 01:05:230 (1) - End on 02:42:581 because here has a loud clap sound.
  5. 01:27:879 (2,3,4) - There are three downbeats on red line, try to change some rhythm?
  6. 02:15:760 (6) - Add a note here.
  7. 03:03:244 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as before, downbeats is changed form white line to red line.

[Easy]
  1. 01:05:230 (1) - End on 01:07:217 because here has a loud clap sound.
  2. 02:13:574 (6) - Move to 02:13:376 (6) - ? There has a downbeat.
  3. 02:15:562 (8) - Remove this, I think here no need to add a note.
  4. 02:42:184 (2) - Same as before, a downbeat on here.

This map's defect only hitsound and some patterns.
As I said, use more sound to make the map better.

Anyway, good luck :P
Last Bubble

Evil_Twilight wrote:

[Last Bubble's Hard]
  1. 00:32:449 (3,4) - Move them left a bit, they are too close to 00:33:442 (1) -
  2. 00:33:442 (1) - ^If you change this, consider to make 00:33:442 (1) - it stack on 00:32:250 (2) -
  3. 00:35:032 (1) - ^Let slider's end stack on 00:34:634 (3) -
  4. 00:43:575 (2) - 00:44:370 (1) - Add finish on here?
  5. 01:02:051 (1,2,3,4) - For the regular, make a square like 01:03:641 (1,2,3,4) - ?
  6. 01:16:356 (1,2) - Move down a bit to make 01:16:157 (4,1,2) - them a triangle.
  7. 01:50:329 (2) - Add finish?
  8. 02:02:449 (1,2) - Maybe slider's middle should be normal whistle o.o?
  9. 02:16:754 (x) - I recommend you add a note and stack on 02:16:356 (4) - because here is a downbeat.
  10. 02:32:647 (1) - Try use a 3/2 slider and a note here, follow the vocal here will be more fit imo.
  11. 02:40:693 (1) - End on 02:42:581 because here has a loud clap sound, and add some notes betweem 02:40:693 (1,1) - like 01:07:615 (1,2,3,4) -
  12. 03:12:581 (2) - Too much reverses here, it's easily to break combo.
Fixed!

http://puu.sh/6ezof.zip
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

Evil_Twilight wrote:

From my Queue

[General]
  1. Check tags on every diffs, make sure they are identical.
  2. You should find another clap sound instead, this clap is unapparent imo. I'll change custom sound

[Insane]
  • Hmmm...in fact, i can only heard finish and whistle sound in this map.
    Try to use more sound to make the map better.
  1. 00:12:383 (1) - Add a spin and clap start from here to 00:13:972, it's fit the music.
  2. 00:15:164 (5) - Seems like a random sound here. o.o Fixed.
  3. 00:24:303 (2) - ^ Fixed.
  4. 00:30:860 (5) - ^ Fixed.
  5. 00:38:012 (4,1,2,3,4) - Maka a star here? I'll change it later
  6. 00:48:343 (5) - Maybe a ''2'' will looks better. lol Fixed.
  7. 00:51:522 (x) - Add a note here, make 00:51:720 (1,2,3) - these have a feel of stopping because the rhythm is changed from 1/2 to 1/1. Fixed.
  8. 01:02:052 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I prefer to follow the vocal in this part, use 1/2 and 3/4 slider on here.
  9. 01:13:873 (8) - This overlap is not very good, try other pattern? Fixed.
  10. 01:31:853 (6) - Change it to a note and 1/2 slier to link 01:31:853 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - them together. Fixed.
  11. 01:48:442 (2) - Move up a bit to make 01:48:144 (1,2,3) - them a triangle. Fixed.
  12. 02:20:330 (2) - Move left a bit let 02:19:734 (1) - blacket it. Fixed.
  13. 02:23:012 (x) - Add a note to make triple hit? I heard a sound here. Fixed.
  14. 02:38:807 (6) - Add NC because you changed slider to note. Fixed.
  15. 02:55:595 (3) - Change it to 3/4 slider? here is a long sound. Fixed.
  16. 03:14:767 (1) - One more reverse. Fixed.
  17. 03:26:290 (2) - Move to x:256 y:288 to make a triangle and make them symmetrical. Fixed.

[Normal]
  • AR+1, AR5 is not fits in this SV. Fixed.
  1. 00:25:098 (3) - Copy-paste 00:23:906 (1) - ? Fixed.
  2. 00:26:290 (x) - 00:26:687 (x) - Add two notes on here to link 00:27:085 (1) - Fixed.
  3. 00:28:277 (2) - Move down a bit let 00:27:085 (1) - blanket it. Fixed.
  4. 01:05:230 (1) - End on 02:42:581 because here has a loud clap sound. Fixed.
  5. 01:27:879 (2,3,4) - There are three downbeats on red line, try to change some rhythm? Fixed.
  6. 02:15:760 (6) - Add a note here. Fixed.
  7. 03:03:244 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as before, downbeats is changed form white line to red line.

[Easy]
  1. 01:05:230 (1) - End on 01:07:217 because here has a loud clap sound. Fixed.
  2. 02:13:574 (6) - Move to 02:13:376 (6) - ? There has a downbeat.
  3. 02:15:562 (8) - Remove this, I think here no need to add a note. Fixed.
  4. 02:42:184 (2) - Same as before, a downbeat on here.

This map's defect only hitsound and some patterns.
As I said, use more sound to make the map better.

Anyway, good luck :P
Thanks :D
yurunneram
Sorry for late mod ((_ _))

EASY

01:24:303 (4) -

01:30:661 (1) -

01:32:051 (2) - Would rather make it end half a beat earlier to follow the music

03:20:329 (2) - Bad idea for triple repeat in ur easiest diff

NORMAL

01:22:714 (3) - Curve a bit more and move (1) cuz the blanket ain't perfect

01:33:442 (6) - Lol what's with all the points? get rid of em

01:48:939 (1) - Blanket the end of (4)

02:40:197 (1) - NC on the next note instead

02:54:502 (3) - Take away one repeat and leave the blank there.

03:01:257 (4) - Blanket properly

03:26:687 (1) - All the other diffs end the spinner earlier than this one. Make it half a beat shorter to standardise

HARD

00:16:952 (2) - change angle so that the end of slider stacks over (4)

00:18:740 (4) - Kinda do the same thing with (3)

00:50:727 (1,2) - I love this

Starring for the hard diff

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
Last Bubble
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

yurunneram wrote:

Sorry for late mod ((_ _))

EASY

01:24:303 (4) -

01:30:661 (1) -

01:32:051 (2) - Would rather make it end half a beat earlier to follow the music

03:20:329 (2) - Bad idea for triple repeat in ur easiest diff

NORMAL

01:22:714 (3) - Curve a bit more and move (1) cuz the blanket ain't perfect

01:33:442 (6) - Lol what's with all the points? get rid of em

01:48:939 (1) - Blanket the end of (4)

02:40:197 (1) - NC on the next note instead

02:54:502 (3) - Take away one repeat and leave the blank there.

03:01:257 (4) - Blanket properly

03:26:687 (1) - All the other diffs end the spinner earlier than this one. Make it half a beat shorter to standardise

Starring for the hard diff

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
All fix Thanks
AruOtta
Hello, M4M from your queue ~

  • Easy

    NC
    00:47:747 (1) - Delete NC
    00:54:899 (3) - I think this one shouldn't be in the second NC
    01:49:336 (1) - ^
    02:05:627 (5) - The NC should start here
    03:14:766 (1) - Delete NC

    Rythm
    03:04:634 (2) - Reverse on a blue beat ?
    02:12:382 (5) - It should stop 1/2 beat later
    02:40:594 (1) - ^
    02:54:104 (2) - It should stop 1/2 beat earlier

    Placements
    00:37:416 (2) - Overlapping with (1) =/
    00:50:926 (2) - Try this :
    00:58:078 (2) - Overlapping with (1)
    01:08:409 (1) - Try to get something like that :
    01:25:495 (2) - Blanket with (1)
    02:11:190 (4) - Overlapping with (2)

  • Normal

    NC
    00:54:899 (1) - Remove this slider from the second combo
    00:58:078 (1) - ^
    01:48:939 (1) - ^
    02:15:164 (1) - Add a combo
    02:43:376 (1) - Remove this slider from the second combo


    Rythm
    00:49:336 - Try this pattern :
    01:17:946 - Try this :
    03:03:244 - Try this pattern :
    03:06:422 - Same pattern
    03:09:601 - ^


    Placements
    01:21:522 (1) - Blanket (2) please =3
    01:28:873 (4) - Overlapping with (3) =/
    02:53:906 (2) - ^

  • Insane

    00:48:343 (5) - Nazi slider
    00:49:833 - Add a circle here ?
    00:56:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Strange pattern
    01:17:846 - Circle here
    01:41:985 (1,2,3) - Distance Snap problem =/

I hope it'll be helful =D
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm
fixed some NC and placements
thanks
Narcissu
your insane diff‘s tags conflict with other diff

hitsound is too large , and your easy & normal diff's volume be different from insane diff , i suggest 50~60 % , only use 70%~80% in kiai

whistle too noisy , maybe you need a custom whistle

01:08:409 - 01:07:813 (6) - SV * 1.1~1.2 , maybe better , because your kiai too easy now , ahh , only insane diff

01:07:813 (6) - 01:07:813 (6) - ^

no kd
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

zengdaen wrote:

your insane diff‘s tags conflict with other diff

hitsound is too large , and your easy & normal diff's volume be different from insane diff , i suggest 50~60 % , only use 70%~80% in kiai

whistle too noisy , maybe you need a custom whistle

01:08:409 - 01:07:813 (6) - SV * 1.1~1.2 , maybe better , because your kiai too easy now , ahh , only insane diff

01:07:813 (6) - 01:07:813 (6) - ^

no kd
i down volume 65% on kiai
thanks
Xantaria
Hey,

Really like the map on Insane as it is except for the Life Drain. It feels a bit too strong.

When you drop down because you miss something you sometimes need more than 200 hits to recover completely ;)

just my 2 cents

Zantaria
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

Zantaria wrote:

Hey,

Really like the map on Insane as it is except for the Life Drain. It feels a bit too strong.

When you drop down because you miss something you sometimes need more than 200 hits to recover completely ;)

just my 2 cents

Zantaria
low drain 2.
now HP Drain is 6 :D
Xantaria
Feels a lot better :)
paradaisu
[Easy]

이지는 모양이 중요합니다!

00:49:336 (1) - 여기 모양 다듬어주세요 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1298892

01:24:303 (1) - 세번째점 x140 y364 마지막점 x60 y328 하시면 동그래집니다 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1298904

01:30:661 (4,5) - 이부분 모양이 영 보기안좋네요 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1298913 이런식으로 깔끔하게 배치하는게 어떨까요?

01:49:733 (4) - NC

02:04:038 (3,4) - 이부분이 살짝 겹치는데 (디스턴스가 안맞음) 4번서클을 살짝위로올리세요

02:31:853 (1) - NC

02:12:383 (1) - NC

03:06:025 (1,2) - 여기 심하게 안맞네요 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1298920 이렇게 바꾸면 완전히 감싸기도 하고 디스턴스도 맞습니다

[Normal]

00:56:091 (1) - NC

01:48:144 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1298932 예쁘게 감싸주세요

02:48:144 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1298935 ^

[Hard]

디스턴스 무조건 맞추시고 맵핑하신거같은데 이럴경우 노트가 겹쳐서 더 지저분해보입니다. 디스턴스 몇곳은 생각해서 푸셔도돼구요

안티점프 왠만하면 뺄수있는부분은 다빼보세요

00:15:164 (3) - 그리드 최소크기로 빨간점 오른쪽으로 한칸이동

00:59:667 (3) - ^

01:00:263 (4) - ^

01:00:462 (1) - ^

02:53:111 (4) - 여기 2번슬라이더 꼬리랑 겹치세요

03:26:091 (3) - NC 제거

03:22:515 (2,1) - 하드니까 디스턴스 무조건 맞출생각 안하셔도돼요 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1298962 이렇게 감싸주세요

[Insane]

01:32:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 앞노트랑 간격 조절

01:42:184 (2,3) - 간격 띄워야 리딩 잘됍니다 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1298974 이렇게 배치하세요

03:25:694 (1) - 그냥 변속 없애시는게 어떤가요

03:31:058 (1) - 이부분 삭제하는게 맵셋에 맞음

01:57:780 (7) - 노트삭제
Last Bubble
http://puu.sh/6IlG9.zip

마음에 안드는 부분은 패턴을 새롭게 바꿨습니다.
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

GUHROOVY wrote:

[Easy]

이지는 모양이 중요합니다!

00:49:336 (1) - 여기 모양 다듬어주세요 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1298892 ok

01:24:303 (1) - 세번째점 x140 y364 마지막점 x60 y328 하시면 동그래집니다 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1298904 ok

01:30:661 (4,5) - 이부분 모양이 영 보기안좋네요 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1298913 이런식으로 깔끔하게 배치하는게 어떨까요? ok

01:49:733 (4) - NC ok

02:04:038 (3,4) - 이부분이 살짝 겹치는데 (디스턴스가 안맞음) 4번서클을 살짝위로올리세요 ok

02:31:853 (1) - NC ok

02:12:383 (1) - NC ok

03:06:025 (1,2) - 여기 심하게 안맞네요 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1298920 이렇게 바꾸면 완전히 감싸기도 하고 디스턴스도 맞습니다 ok

[Normal]

00:56:091 (1) - NC ok

01:48:144 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1298932 예쁘게 감싸주세요 ok

02:48:144 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1298935 ^ ok

[Insane]

01:32:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 앞노트랑 간격 조절 일단은 바꿔봤습니다

01:42:184 (2,3) - 간격 띄워야 리딩 잘됍니다 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1298974 이렇게 배치하세요 ok

03:25:694 (1) - 그냥 변속 없애시는게 어떤가요 no

03:31:058 (1) - 이부분 삭제하는게 맵셋에 맞음 굳이 없앨필요를 못느끼겟네요

01:57:780 (7) - 노트삭제 no
thanks
NavyYa
Random mod ><

[Easy]

00:22:118 (2) - 1번슬라이더랑 비슷하게 만들어보는게 어떨까

00:32:250 (5) - 리버스 만들면 좋을것같은데.. 간격이 너무 커서안되겠다 ㅠ
01:25:892 (3) - 이것도..

00:46:952 (2) - 슬라이더랑 일직선 으로 놓는건어때

01:33:442 (3,4) - 1번2번 따라서 동그랗게

02:12:383 (1,2) - 슬라이더 곡선이 안예쁜데..

02:52:913 - 서클 한개

[Normal]

00:23:906 (1) - 이것도 좀 왼쪽으로 움직이면될듯

아 졸리다 미안해 쿠도스안줘도돼 ㅋㅋㅋ나중에 다시해줄께..
DeletedUser_3044645
냠냠 뀨뀨??
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

[Navy] wrote:

Random mod ><

[Easy]

00:22:118 (2) - 1번슬라이더랑 비슷하게 만들어보는게 어떨까 ok

00:32:250 (5) - 리버스 만들면 좋을것같은데.. 간격이 너무 커서안되겠다 ㅠㄴㄴ
01:25:892 (3) - 이것도.. ok

00:46:952 (2) - 슬라이더랑 일직선 으로 놓는건어때 ㄴㄴ

01:33:442 (3,4) - 1번2번 따라서 동그랗게 ok

02:12:383 (1,2) - 슬라이더 곡선이 안예쁜데.. ok

02:52:913 - 서클 한개 ok

[Normal]

00:23:906 (1) - 이것도 좀 왼쪽으로 움직이면될듯 ?

아 졸리다 미안해 쿠도스안줘도돼 ㅋㅋㅋ나중에 다시해줄께..
Neta
안녕하세요~ 모딩큐에서 온 따끈따끈한 모딩입니다

제 모딩은 전부 Suggestion 입니다


[Easy]
  1. 00:23:509 (3) - 슬라이더 방향으로 노트를 배치해주시는게 좋을듯 하네요 http://puu.sh/74geL.jpg
  2. 00:47:747 (2,3) - 이 부분과 앞부분을 http://puu.sh/74giX.jpg 이런식으로 바꿔보는것도 좋을거 같습니다
  3. 00:50:926 (2) - 이 슬라이더는 00:50:727 에 배치하는게 박자가 맞지 않을까 싶네요 이지라서 저렇게 배치하셧다면 놔두셔도 됩니다
  4. 00:58:078 (4) - 좀더 위쪽으로 올리시는게 깔끔할듯합니다
  5. 01:00:462 (3) - 이런 슬라이더는 보통 앞에 두노트를 선으로 그은다음 그 선에 맞게 슬라이더 중앙을 배치하시는게 좋을듯 해요
  6. 01:33:939 - Inherited point를 01:33:840 로 옮겨주세요
  7. 01:46:555 (1,2) - 둘다 이런식으로 깔끔하게 바꿔주세요 http://puu.sh/74gz1.jpg
  8. 01:57:482 (3) - 모눈종이 한칸 왼쪽으로 움직여서 2번이랑 맞춰주세요
  9. 02:27:879 (1) - http://puu.sh/74gEj.jpg 이렇게 배치하는게 좋아요~
  10. 02:35:826 (2) - 컨트롤+G 하신후에 보라색 2번, 노란색 1번이랑 거리 똑같이 해주세요
  11. 03:32:946 - Inherited point를 03:32:846로 옮겨주세요

[Normal]
  1. 01:33:939 - 초록선!
  2. 01:48:939 (5) - 슬라이더 조금 움직여서 깔끔하게 해주시면 좋겠습니다 예시 : http://puu.sh/74h1k.jpg
  3. 02:08:409 (5) - 52, 108 으로 옮겨보세요
고칠거 별로 없어보이네요~


[Last Bubble's Hard]
  1. 01:27:482 (1) - 디스턴스 스냅 한번 체크해주세요
  2. 01:30:263 (3) - ^
  3. 02:10:396 (1,2,3,4) - 모양을 좀더 맞춰주시면 좋을듯합니다
  4. 02:37:018 (3) - 컨트롤 G

[Insane]
  1. 00:24:303 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 글쎄요.. 디스턴스 같이 하는게 좋지 않을까요
  2. 00:27:085 (1,2) - 모양 보정을 좀 하셔야될꺼같아요
  3. 01:33:939 - 여기도 초록선 고쳐주세요!
  4. 00:43:575 (3) - 컨트롤 G?
  5. 01:07:217 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 이거도 디스턴스 같게 하는게 좋을거 같습니다
  6. 01:15:164 (3,4,5) - 모양보정
  7. 01:41:389 (1,2,3) - 한자리에 배치하는건 별로 좋은생각은 아닌듯합니다
  8. 02:11:389 (2,3) - 같은 콤보에 있는 노트들은 점프 거리 같게하는게 좋을듯하네요
  9. 03:07:813 (1,2) - 제눈이 이상한지는 모르겠지만 두 슬라이더 수평이 아닌듯해요

허졉한 모딩이였습니다

GOOD LUCK~
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

Neta wrote:

안녕하세요~ 모딩큐에서 온 따끈따끈한 모딩입니다

제 모딩은 전부 Suggestion 입니다


[Easy]
  1. 00:23:509 (3) - 슬라이더 방향으로 노트를 배치해주시는게 좋을듯 하네요 http://puu.sh/74geL.jpg ok
  2. 00:47:747 (2,3) - 이 부분과 앞부분을 http://puu.sh/74giX.jpg 이런식으로 바꿔보는것도 좋을거 같습니다 http://puu.sh/74geL.jpg ok
  3. 00:50:926 (2) - 이 슬라이더는 00:50:727 에 배치하는게 박자가 맞지 않을까 싶네요 이지라서 저렇게 배치하셧다면 놔두셔도 됩니다 말 그대로 이지라서.
  4. 00:58:078 (4) - 좀더 위쪽으로 올리시는게 깔끔할듯합니다 http://puu.sh/74geL.jpg ok
  5. 01:00:462 (3) - 이런 슬라이더는 보통 앞에 두노트를 선으로 그은다음 그 선에 맞게 슬라이더 중앙을 배치하시는게 좋을듯 해요 ?
  6. 01:33:939 - Inherited point를 01:33:840 로 옮겨주세요 http://puu.sh/74geL.jpg ok
  7. 01:46:555 (1,2) - 둘다 이런식으로 깔끔하게 바꿔주세요 http://puu.sh/74gz1.jpg http://puu.sh/74geL.jpg ok
  8. 01:57:482 (3) - 모눈종이 한칸 왼쪽으로 움직여서 2번이랑 맞춰주세요 http://puu.sh/74geL.jpg ok
  9. 02:27:879 (1) - http://puu.sh/74gEj.jpg 이렇게 배치하는게 좋아요~ http://puu.sh/74geL.jpg ok
  10. 02:35:826 (2) - 컨트롤+G 하신후에 보라색 2번, 노란색 1번이랑 거리 똑같이 해주세요 http://puu.sh/74geL.jpg ok
  11. 03:32:946 - Inherited point를 03:32:846로 옮겨주세요 http://puu.sh/74geL.jpg ok

[Normal]
  1. 01:33:939 - 초록선! http://puu.sh/74geL.jpg ok
  2. 01:48:939 (5) - 슬라이더 조금 움직여서 깔끔하게 해주시면 좋겠습니다 예시 : http://puu.sh/74h1k.jpg http://puu.sh/74geL.jpg ok
  3. 02:08:409 (5) - 52, 108 으로 옮겨보세요 http://puu.sh/74geL.jpg ok
고칠거 별로 없어보이네요~


[Insane]
  1. 00:24:303 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 글쎄요.. 디스턴스 같이 하는게 좋지 않을까요 no
  2. 00:27:085 (1,2) - 모양 보정을 좀 하셔야될꺼같아요 ok
  3. 01:33:939 - 여기도 초록선 고쳐주세요! ok
  4. 00:43:575 (3) - 컨트롤 G? ok
  5. 01:07:217 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 이거도 디스턴스 같게 하는게 좋을거 같습니다 no
  6. 01:15:164 (3,4,5) - 모양보정 ok
  7. 01:41:389 (1,2,3) - 한자리에 배치하는건 별로 좋은생각은 아닌듯합니다 no
  8. 02:11:389 (2,3) - 같은 콤보에 있는 노트들은 점프 거리 같게하는게 좋을듯하네요 no
  9. 03:07:813 (1,2) - 제눈이 이상한지는 모르겠지만 두 슬라이더 수평이 아닌듯해요 ok

허졉한 모딩이였습니다

GOOD LUCK~
Faan
M4M~

Did you mod [justice] ;w;




Insane:
01:33:840 (9) - suggest slider or spinner due to long vocal hold
03:00:661 (3) - y 156
03:26:687 (1) - spinner ends too loud

Hard:
seems fine to me

Normal:
02:15:164 (1) - suggest long slider due to vocal hold
02:28:277 (2) - move backward 1 beat to red line
CS3--->4

Easy seems fine to me as well QAQ

I think im the only one that cares about that vocal hold QvQ
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm
thanks mod!

03:00:661 (3) - y 156
02:15:164 (1) - suggest long slider due to vocal hold

I fixed them
Xantaria
this is good.
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

Zantaria wrote:

this is good.

thanks :D :D :D
Fuuyu
From Mod Q . . desu~

[General]
OK

[Timing]
OK

Not Much to Mod Anymore XD

Easy
00:29:866 Add a Note
00:34:634 ^
00:36:224 ^
00:47:350 ^
00:48:939 ^
01:20:727 ^

NM OK

HD OK
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

xLoupGarou wrote:

From Mod Q . . desu~

[General]
OK

[Timing]
OK

Not Much to Mod Anymore XD

Easy
00:29:866 Add a Note
00:34:634 ^
00:36:224 ^
00:47:350 ^
00:48:939 ^
01:20:727 ^

NM OK

HD OK
Thanks for Mod, But No fix
Mira-san
Hello. M4M as requested. (Though I only said 'thank you for being the first modder') ;w;

General

I suggest using a lighter combo color scheme since the BG is already dark.

Easy

00:33:045 (6) - Move to x:228 y:8?
00:49:336 (1,2) - Fix the blanket.
01:30:662 (1,2,3,4) - Improve this part.
03:06:025 (1,2) - Fix the blanket.

Normal

00:39:800 (1,2) - Make (1) blanket (2). heheh.
02:04:833 (2,1) - Improve the blanket.

Last Bubble's Hard

00:18:740 (4) - Move this object by y:-1
00:39:800 (1,2,3) - Uneven blanket spacing. Please fix D:
00:54:899 (1,2,1) - Hmm. I suggest spacing them out a little as they look cramped.
01:09:204 - Remove clap.
01:13:575 - Add clap (and probably remove whistle).
01:18:740 (3,4) - Add clap to these 2.
01:19:336 - This one too. Add clap.
01:20:131 - Add clap.
01:20:727 - Add clap.
01:26:687 (3,2) - Stack the end of these two.
01:28:078 - Add clap.
01:28:674 (3) - ^
01:31:058 (2,4) - Add clap here.
01:32:051 (1,3) - Add clap here.

01:52:913 to 02:05:429 - Consider using more hitsounds here.
02:48:144 - Clap here.
03:03:244 - Clap here.
03:06:422 - Clap here.
03:07:217 (3) - Clap here.
03:09:601 - Clap here.
03:10:395 (5) - Clap here.

...and others that I may have missed.

Komari

00:34:038 (3,4) - Fix the blanket here.
01:05:032 (4) - I suggest rotating it by -4 degrees (Selection Centre) and moving it to x:348 y:48
01:22:317 (3,4) - Fix the blanket here lel.
01:28:078 (2,3) - ^

How about making the first break start at 01:35:429?

01:42:184 (2) - I suggest making this parallel to (2), OR move it where the end of (2) is pointing.

That's all from me. Thanks again! :D
Good luck as well.
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

Mira-san wrote:

Hello. M4M as requested. (Though I only said 'thank you for being the first modder') ;w;

General

I suggest using a lighter combo color scheme since the BG is already dark.

Easy

00:33:045 (6) - Move to x:228 y:8?
00:49:336 (1,2) - Fix the blanket.
01:30:662 (1,2,3,4) - Improve this part.
03:06:025 (1,2) - Fix the blanket.

Normal

00:39:800 (1,2) - Make (1) blanket (2). heheh.
02:04:833 (2,1) - Improve the blanket.

Komari

00:34:038 (3,4) - Fix the blanket here.
01:05:032 (4) - I suggest rotating it by -4 degrees (Selection Centre) and moving it to x:348 y:48
01:22:317 (3,4) - Fix the blanket here lel.
01:28:078 (2,3) - ^

How about making the first break start at 01:35:429?

01:42:184 (2) - I suggest making this parallel to (2), OR move it where the end of (2) is pointing.

That's all from me. Thanks again! :D
Good luck as well.
All fix

thanks!
AruOtta
Revive it How-To \:D/
CSLM
hi!
a mod from me lol...

[Easy]

00:20:727 (1) - change the curvature of this slider
00:44:171 (3) - move to: x344 y324
00:49:336 (1) - move red point of this slider to: x300 y240
01:11:588 (1) - change the curvature of this slider
01:22:714 (3) - make this slider rect and move to: x404 y100
01:27:482 (1) - move to: x216 y136
01:29:668 (3) - make this slider rect
02:42:978 (3) - ^ curve
03:10:594 (3) - change the curvature
03:19:534 (1,2) - move to: x408 y336
03:23:508 (2) - ^ x424 y220

[Normal]

00:43:773 (2) - move to: x176 y220
00:53:310 (2) - change the curvature
01:53:707 (2) - move second point to x380 y176
01:58:873 (6) - move to: x372 y248
02:02:250 - try this:
02:04:833 (2) - move to: x236 y356
02:06:422 - try this better:

[Last Bubble's Hard]

00:55:694 (1) - Ctrl - G
03:22:515 (2,1) - make a blanket with these objets... like this:

[Komari]

00:38:211 (1,2,3,4,1) - use this for make a star combo better
01:40:197 (2) - convert this note in slider for continue with the stream, like this:
01:41:588 (1,2,3) - move to 01:42:681
02:24:105 (5) - move to: x120 y312
02:25:893 (4,1,2,3) - for continue with 02:24:701 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - sequence, with this objets make this:
02:30:264 (1) - extend this slider to 02:30:661 - and that note delete it
03:25:694 (1) - make reverse, the x0.50 inhiterited point delete it and take off NC[/quote]
PD: i'm noob modding, so if my mod don't helps you don't jugde me lol....
i LOVE the song, i'm waiting rank :)
HabiHolic
헉. . 이제진짜 뱃불러오셔야 되는거 아닌가여?
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

HabiHolic wrote:

헉. . 이제진짜 뱃불러오셔야 되는거 아닌가여?
저도 할수있었으면 진작에...
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm
well, Revived.
HabiHolic

HabiHolic wrote:

헉. . 이제진짜 뱃불러오셔야 되는거 아닌가여?
왔음 뱃

[General]
The following hitsound is unused:
  1. normal-hitclap2.wav < 이 힛트사운드 파일은 사용되지 않으니 삭제해주세요
  2. 01:07:913 - 프리뷰타임 리스냅해주세요

[Easy]

  1. 전체적으로 힛사 불륨이 너무 크다고 생각해요 50~60정도로 줄여보세요~
  2. 00:15:164 (2) - 휘슬은 너무 불필요해 보이는데.. 그냥 휘슬 빼시는게 어떠신가요
  3. 03:21:918 (1) - 노트 끝 언스냅 체크해주세요
  4. 00:35:032 (2) - 시작부분 피니쉬 삭제
  5. 00:37:416 (2) - 슬라 끄는 휘슬소리가 안어울리네요 전 후 확인하셔서 이런 힛사들은 개선바랍니다.
  6. 00:46:158 (1,2) - 보컬에 맞추실꺼면 빨간틱에 리버스 한번 추가하는거 추천드립니다.
  7. 01:33:839 (4) - 클랩 제거하는게 훨씬 듣기 좋을듯 합니다. 같이 쓰니까 많이 어색하기도 하고
  8. 02:15:562 (4) - 보컬 따라가실 필요가 없는게 음악이 좀 작아지는 부분도 있는게 오히려 저거 있으니까 어색한듯 싶네요 이 노트는 지워주세요
[Normal]

  1. 01:24:303 (2) - 간격 확인해주세요
  2. 01:29:668 (5,6) - 노트 하나도 동일 시키는게 좋을듯요
  3. 02:15:164 (1,2) - 이것보다는 02:15:164 - 여기에 노트를 하나 두시는게 자연스럽다고 생각합니다.
  4. 02:35:628 (1) - 딱히 뉴콤은 필요 없을듯요
[Last Bubble's Hard]

  1. 02:15:363 (2,3,4) - 위와 같은의견
  2. 02:54:700 (1) - 이건 Ctrl+G 하시는게 좋을듯
[Insane]

  1. 01:41:985 (1,2) - 제안
call me back
Akiyama Mizuki
하드 - 인센 갭 좀 많이 넓은데..
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bbj0920 wrote:

하드 - 인센 갭 좀 많이 넓은데..
라이트인세인 작업해보고 있습니다
Last Bubble
http://puu.sh/gCDUJ/6d170579ef.zip

음... 모딩 모두 체크 완료, 힛사랑 일부패턴 수정...
Enon
please rank this map
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm
라이트인세인 힛사찍기 너무귀찮다
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