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Capsule - Sugarless GiRL

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Topic Starter
Kerensa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 29 November 2009 at 3:10:25 AM

Artist: capsule
Title: Sugarless GiRL
BPM: 129.5
Filesize: 3570kb
Play Time: 01:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.41 stars, 112 notes)
  2. Hard (4.91 stars, 256 notes)
  3. Normal (4.18 stars, 143 notes)
Download: capsule - Sugarless GiRL
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Who ever downloaded this map before the 28.11.09 please re-download it again >_<

yeahyeahyeahhh ---> for support
DoubleDangou & FuukoLover ---> new images and new mp3
eee & Hikato ---> for reminding me that i spelt the title wrong.
naruti ---> err forgot reason but it was a big help >_<
and many more >_<

THANKYOU =3

haisha_ =3
hbra000
it's awesome good :)
mao130
nice work
Sifu_TigerClaw
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
tasli
good one : >
SteRRuM
Hi!
  1. Delete "=3" from title lol,
  2. Delete "esnips.com" from source
  3. Make Full Submit.
Snap everything to Grid Snap and then PM me.
Topic Starter
Kerensa

SteRRuM wrote:

Hi!
  1. Delete "=3" from title lol,
  2. Delete "esnips.com" from source
  3. Make Full Submit.
Snap everything to Grid Snap and then PM me.

whats full submit? =3
yeahyeahyeahhh
Star for this good map :)
Yes_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Kerensa

Yes wrote:

Nice map and the song is very catchy. STAR for you n_n.


Some things that stood out to me..

-Normal-ish-
00:20:66 (2) - Allign with slider
00:55:86 (1,1,1,1,1) - inconsistent with rest of spacing in song


-Hard-ish-
00:21:12 (1) - Not alligned with 2 and 3
00:22:27 (4,5) - allign with slider
00:58:40 (2) - too far
01:08:85 (2) - new combo?

wowieeeeee! you noticed the really tiny details!! >< thats sooo cooooooool!
yep, i fixed up everything now :P

thankyou!
naruti
hi hi nice map
but some small stuf XD

normal-ish change to easy-ish
Mod later

Hard-ish:
first off all
hard-ish change it to normal-ish and change the overal dif etc.

offset 14.657
add a new timing section @ with offset 46.170
and i do not agree with the big break in the start but maby that wil come later :)

01:03:25 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes
01:00:25 (2) - ^
01:01:86 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:06:94 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:07:00 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^ the spacing confusing me
01:08:85 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
01:12:14 (1) - slider starts @ 01:12:48
add a note @01:13:64 -
instead of a break a spinne here 01:27:15 ends 01:28:53
01:35:28 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 1 tick forward 1/6 notes
01:38:96 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -split in 2 combo's combo 1 01:38:96 (1) - combo 2 01:40:11 (1)
01:54:04 (2) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes and put a reverse in it and dont forget the distance between 01:54:50 (3) -
01:54:04 (2,3,4) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes


*feeds Haisha_ a star*

edit: youre tag..
Tags: yeahyeahyeahhh REALY RANDOM 0_o
Topic Starter
Kerensa

naruti wrote:

hi hi nice map
but some small stuf XD

normal-ish change to easy-ish
Mod later

Hard-ish:
first off all
hard-ish change it to normal-ish and change the overal dif etc.

offset 14.657
add a new timing section @ with offset 46.170
and i do not agree with the big break in the start but maby that wil come later :)

01:03:25 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes
01:00:25 (2) - ^
01:01:86 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:06:94 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:07:00 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^ the spacing confusing me
01:08:85 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
01:12:14 (1) - slider starts @ 01:12:48
add a note @01:13:64 -
instead of a break a spinne here 01:27:15 ends 01:28:53
01:35:28 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 1 tick forward 1/6 notes
01:38:96 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -split in 2 combo's combo 1 01:38:96 (1) - combo 2 01:40:11 (1)
01:54:04 (2) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes and put a reverse in it and dont forget the distance between 01:54:50 (3) -
01:54:04 (2,3,4) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes


*feeds Haisha_ a star*

edit: youre tag..
Tags: yeahyeahyeahhh REALY RANDOM 0_o

AHHH!!!! naruti your so mean!!! i brain can't take all that in!!! ><

i curse you == but thankyou anyways :D your so kind ^^ *PFFT NOT!* JUST JOKING! i curse you == lol
naruti

haisha_ wrote:

naruti wrote:

hi hi nice map
but some small stuf XD

normal-ish change to easy-ish
Mod later

Hard-ish:
first off all
hard-ish change it to normal-ish and change the overal dif etc.

offset 14.657
add a new timing section @ with offset 46.170
and i do not agree with the big break in the start but maby that wil come later :)

01:03:25 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes
01:00:25 (2) - ^
01:01:86 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:06:94 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:07:00 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^ the spacing confusing me
01:08:85 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
01:12:14 (1) - slider starts @ 01:12:48
add a note @01:13:64 -
instead of a break a spinne here 01:27:15 ends 01:28:53
01:35:28 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 1 tick forward 1/6 notes
01:38:96 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -split in 2 combo's combo 1 01:38:96 (1) - combo 2 01:40:11 (1)
01:54:04 (2) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes and put a reverse in it and dont forget the distance between 01:54:50 (3) -
01:54:04 (2,3,4) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes


*feeds Haisha_ a star*

edit: youre tag..
Tags: yeahyeahyeahhh REALY RANDOM 0_o

AHHH!!!! naruti your so mean!!! i brain can't take all that in!!! ><

i curse you == but thankyou anyways :D your so kind ^^ *PFFT NOT!* JUST JOKING! i curse you == lol
~oh NO IM DOOMED ~
no more MR. Nice guy here take it and go
Download: Capsule - Sugarless GiRLS (haisha_) [Hard-ish].osu

Alse did 00:28:740 til 00:43:28 where you had that huge break use it if you want to
Download: Capsule - Sugarless GiRLS (haisha_) [Hard-ish + instrumental].osu
rename the dificulty in whatever you like :)

its your choice wich 1 you use in youre map with my part in it or.......
its all just YOU YOU and YOU

~dont curse me again :cry: ~

oh yeah.. feed me some kudosu

Topic Starter
Kerensa

naruti wrote:

haisha_ wrote:

naruti wrote:

hi hi nice map
but some small stuf XD

normal-ish change to easy-ish
Mod later

Hard-ish:
first off all
hard-ish change it to normal-ish and change the overal dif etc.

offset 14.657
add a new timing section @ with offset 46.170
and i do not agree with the big break in the start but maby that wil come later :)

01:03:25 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes
01:00:25 (2) - ^
01:01:86 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:06:94 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:07:00 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^ the spacing confusing me
01:08:85 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
01:12:14 (1) - slider starts @ 01:12:48
add a note @01:13:64 -
instead of a break a spinne here 01:27:15 ends 01:28:53
01:35:28 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 1 tick forward 1/6 notes
01:38:96 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -split in 2 combo's combo 1 01:38:96 (1) - combo 2 01:40:11 (1)
01:54:04 (2) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes and put a reverse in it and dont forget the distance between 01:54:50 (3) -
01:54:04 (2,3,4) - 1 tick forward 1/2 notes


*feeds Haisha_ a star*

edit: youre tag..
Tags: yeahyeahyeahhh REALY RANDOM 0_o

AHHH!!!! naruti your so mean!!! i brain can't take all that in!!! ><

i curse you == but thankyou anyways :D your so kind ^^ *PFFT NOT!* JUST JOKING! i curse you == lol
~oh NO IM DOOMED ~
no more MR. Nice guy here take it and go
[attachment=1:830ed]Capsule - Sugarless GiRLS (haisha_) [Hard-ish].osu[/attachment:830ed]

Alse did 00:28:740 til 00:43:28 where you had that huge break use it if you want to
[attachment=0:830ed]Capsule - Sugarless GiRLS (haisha_) [Hard-ish + instrumental].osu[/attachment:830ed]
rename the dificulty in whatever you like :)

its your choice wich 1 you use in youre map with my part in it or.......
its all just YOU YOU and YOU

~dont curse me again :cry: ~

oh yeah.. feed me some kudosu

wahhh!!! naruti hates me now ><
Lissette
Hi!

Suggestions

Normal-ish
00:16:73 (1) - Spacing
00:17:65 (1) - ^
00:19:27 (1) - ^
00:20:19 (1) - ^
00:24:81 (1) - ^
00:48:47 (1) - ^
01:03:31 (1) - ^
01:17:45 (1) - ^
I think you can't put jumps on normal n_n

Hard-ish
00:22:27 (4) - spacing
00:45:82 - remove that break
00:53:21 - ^
01:13:52 - ^
01:16:99 (1) - spacing wrong with respect 01:15:08 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) this can confuse

nice map.... star
Topic Starter
Kerensa

Lissette wrote:

Hi!

Suggestions

Normal-ish
00:16:73 (1) - Spacing
00:17:65 (1) - ^
00:19:27 (1) - ^
00:20:19 (1) - ^
00:24:81 (1) - ^
00:48:47 (1) - ^
01:03:31 (1) - ^
01:17:45 (1) - ^
I think you can't put jumps on normal n_n

Hard-ish
00:22:27 (4) - spacing
00:45:82 - remove that break
00:53:21 - ^
01:13:52 - ^
01:16:99 (1) - spacing wrong with respect 01:15:08 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) this can confuse

nice map.... star

thankyou lissete ^^ it helped me alot ^^
AdvanceBoy
Hello~

Real song and group name: "capsule - Sugarless GiRL" :3

Hmm... in general, it's a good map ;)

[Timing]


BPM: 129,5
Offset: 13.038

Renember:After any BPM-Offset change, please click in the "File - Edit - Options - Timing - Web - Help" panel: Timing ---> Resnap All Notes

[Easy-ish]

Resnap all notes using Beat Snap Divisor: 1/2, after that...

00:27:40 (1) - Starts in the next red tick
00:38:05 (3,4,1) - Not same spaced as 00:36:20 (1,2,3)

*--If you want a perfecly-spaced rectangle...--*
00:46:86 (3,4) - 2 grids to the left
00:50:56 (7,8,9) - 2 grids to the right
*00:50:56 (7,8,9) - Space using Distance Snap?
00:52:42 (1,2) - 2 grids to the left
00:55:20 (4,5) - 4 grids to the right
00:57:05 (6) - 2 grids to the right
*00:56:59 - add a circle?
*00:57:98 (7,8,9,10) - Space using Distance Snap? (that part break the rectangle... :( )

00:59:83 (1) - ends in the next white tick
01:10:72 (1) - ends in the next red tick
*01:14:42 (x) - add a circle?
*01:14:65 (x) - ^
*01:01:45 (1,2), 01:02:84 (5,1), 01:08:86 (1,2) - Not so sure about those jumps, it can be a little confusing
01:27:40 (x) - add a spinner, ends 01:29:02 OR in 01:28:55 and add a circle at 01:29:02

[Normal-ish]

Renember resnap all notes using Beat Snap Divisor 1/2 and change the BPM and Offset

*00:15:81 (1) - according to the DS (Distance Snap), 1 grid too close to 00:14:89 (1)
00:17:67 (1,1) - a bit long and unsuspected jump for Normal (imo)
00:20:68 (2) - bad stackted with the previous slider
00:25:77 (3) - 1 grid to the right
00:46:62 (1) - ends in the red tick
00:46:62 (1,2,3,4,5) - all those whistles... it just don't fell good...
00:57:28 (1) - start in the next red tick?
*01:11:41 (4) - Hmm... delete it (Also delete 01:11:64 (5) ) and make there a slider, what ends in 01:11:76 (blue tick)
*01:15:12 (1,1,1) - hitsounds... hmmhm... I don't know...
*01:17:43 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - don't seems good spaced
01:20:68 (1) - can you put a reverse arrow? OR a circle in the next red tick?
01:35:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - finish overload
01:38:98 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - all those whistles... it just don't fell good...

[Hard-ish]

Renember resnap all notes using Beat Snap Divisor 1/2 and change the BPM and Offset

The first part seems a bit badly spaced :( (00:14:65 to 00:27:12) and 00:46:63 to 01:06:25 seems a bit badly spaced too
00:28:74 (1) - sorry, that spinner is illegal, beacuse, according to the rules, a spinner needs what it can be passed using Auto, with 2000 Bonus , with that spinner, Auto only can get 1000 Bonus (it's too short)
00:37:36 (1,2,1,2) - 1/1 beat forward
00:42:36 - why that sound sample set change and Ki Time? 0_o
00:45:00 - please, inherit that timing seccion :<
00:45:82 - too short and unnesary break (?)
00:46:62 (1) - ends in the previous red tick
01:08:86 (1,2) - that's a big jump...
01:10:72 (1,2) - ^
01:11:87 (x) -add a circle?
01:16:97 (1) - ends in the previous red tick
01:21:37 (x) -^
01:14:85 - please delete that timing seccion :<
01:28:53 - ^
01:35:22 (1,2,3) - those are big jumps...
01:50:79 (4) - back to the previous white tick plz
01:52:42 (x) - add a circle?
01:55:89 (x) -^
01:57:74 (1) - it's too short


Woosh... That's it! But also, I have to tell you what all dfficulties needs the same timings seccions and Ki Times. Also: "tags: naruti", "(online) tags: yeahyeahyeahhh" whyyyyyyy?


*=Small detail/suggestion
"?" at the end=suggestion

PS:Sorry for my bad inglish :oops:
PS2:You want curse me? XD
PS3:Ah, I forgot your star, here is:

STAR!!
Cillu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
minyeob
How about using 1/4 beatsnap divisor..?

[Easy-ish]
I think chorus part should be mapped.

[Normal-ish]
00:46:63 (1) - Ending point's timing is not good...... Decrease the length please. This slider should be ended from the blue tick.
01:12:14 (1) - Extend 4/5 beats please. (You have to extend 5 times by using 1/4 beat snap divisor)

[Hard-ish]
00:28:74 (1) - This spinner is unrankable. (Too short) Rankable spinner= At least 2000 bouns on auto.
00:45:07 (Break) - This break is unnecessary.
00:46:63 (1) - This slider should be ended from the red tick.
00:53:09 - This break is unnecessary
01:57:85 (1) - Unrankable spinner.
tieff
BPM: 129.50 I think.

[Easy-ish]
00:48:71 (5) - New combo.
00:56:12 (5) - ^
01:14:66 (1,2) - Spacing.

[Normal-ish]
Why offset 13?
All good.

[Hard-ish]
Why offset 30?
Mmm... All good.

Star. Nice map, just fix BMP and offset.
Topic Starter
Kerensa

tieff wrote:

BPM: 129.50 I think.

[Easy-ish]
00:48:71 (5) - New combo.
00:56:12 (5) - ^
01:14:66 (1,2) - Spacing.

[Normal-ish]
Why offset 13?
All good.

[Hard-ish]
Why offset 30?
Mmm... All good.

Star. Nice map, just fix BMP and offset.
what does the offset actually change within the song?

NEVERMIND i found out why :)
thankyou
Happy7Satsuki
:) WOW~!!! im adddicted
great map!! xDD
Alice
Yay for capsule <3

Really good map.. Those lines are really suggestions, I can't find enormous errors so I just suggest some things about spacing.
Easy
Some note aren't snapped :?
00:19:51 (1,2,,1,2,3) - I think it looks better if you place that like 00:14:87.

Normal
00:55:88 (1,1,1,1,1) - look good like that:

But actually if you don't think it's a good spacing you can modify it, I'm principally talking about placing the third (1) to the "center".

Hard
Personal taste:
I tried to do bigger hitcircles and I think it look better for this map.. But totally ok if you don't want to do bigger ones, that's really my tastes..

Like already said it's really suggestions.. That map's really good!

Star! :D
heintsi
nice upbeat song and map :) star~~
can't mod cause i lack the skills :D
An-Don
Wow its very nice :D
+star ;D
al2e10
Hi , I have some opinion with your map ~~

[Hard]
00:30:167 (1-5) can you change to "clap,none,clap,none,clap" ~ It is better `
00:31:094 (1-5) also ~
01:03:294 (1-5) also
01:10:708 (1-5) also
01:15:109 (1-4, 1-4)remove new combo and the problem with the first ~
01:17:657 (1-5,1-5,1-3) also ~
STOP !!.........
Many clap for all the time
you can make this for all ~
or
Put another sound for the clap note
~

[Normal]
First , the problem with Hard also!! it is too horrible
00:14:878 (1,1,1) remove new combo for another two
00:55:881 (1,1,1,1,1) also ~ for another fore
01:15:109 (1,1,1) also for another two
01:18:816 (1)remove new combo
01:19:279 (1) also & add at 01:19:742
01:20:206 (1) also
01:20:669 (1) also

[Ease]
That find ...
But the problem for the clap also !!

[ALL]
that good ~~
But you can make it better ~
Change the clap sound

STARRED
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