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Rie Kugimiya - Karakuri

posted 2009-07-04T16:45:32+00:00

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miccoliasms

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miccoliasms 2009-07-04T16:45:32+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年9月22日 at 20:51:48

Artist: Rie Kugimiya
Title: Karakuri
Source: anime
Tags: Kugimiya Rie Horie Yui Kitamura Eri Toradora
BPM: 170
Filesize: 2446kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:

Insane (5 stars, 317 notes)
Normal (3.31 stars, 91 notes)
taka's Hard (4.99 stars, 235 notes)

Download: Rie Kugimiya - Karakuri
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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this is my 3rd beat map!!
08/07 added normal
08/11 added taka's Hard thx!!
09/11 remade Hard and fixed all diff
09/13 Hard rename Insane and fixed all diff
09/17 mp3 was replaced

please advice me

Last edited by miccoliasms 2009-09-22T11:51:57+00:00, edited 56 times in total.

Lizbeth

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Lizbeth 2009-07-05T19:45:20+00:00

Offset: 15889
Remember that offset is when u start to count the BPM, so it have to be sync with the constant beat of the song.

sorry for my bad english, hope u understand what i mean.
u can work with the offset i gave you, till someone pro with timing check it out.

cya good luck

miccoliasms

Joined April 2009

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miccoliasms 2009-07-08T04:22:56+00:00

Thank you for teaching offset specially
It changed offset.
I did'nt understand offset.
But I feel like having been able to understand it somehow.

Im sorry that it is poor at English.

Echona

Joined June 2009

Echona 2009-07-08T08:19:13+00:00

Lisbethさんのコメントの所にある　Give Kudosu と書いている所をclickしたほうが良いと思います
offsetやどこか修正する場所をアドバイスもらったりした場合にはお礼にここを押してkudosをあげるルールらしいデス

miccoliasms

Joined April 2009

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miccoliasms 2009-07-09T10:55:33+00:00

わざわざ教えていただいてありがとうございます
今後気をつけます！

Lizbeth

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Lizbeth 2009-07-16T20:37:16+00:00

dont make combo that long... a good combo should be of 12 notes maximum
spinner should be long enough that Auto can get 2000 bonus

00:32:12 (1,2,...,56)- this mega stack is too much @_@ cut it off

u dont have to much problems with spacing.
fix that things i tell u and ur map is gonna improve a lot

miccoliasms

Joined April 2009

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miccoliasms 2009-07-19T12:41:19+00:00

It fixed for the time being.
but

>> spinner should be long enough that Auto can get 2000 bonus
00:32:12 (1,2,...,56)- this mega stack is too much @_@ cut it off

It is difficult to　fixend here.
It thinks for a moment.
Advice thx

taka1235

Joined February 2009

taka1235 2009-08-09T02:03:52+00:00

wa-i wa-i

Download: Rie Kugimiya - karakuri (miccoliasms) [taka's Hard].osu

miccoliasms

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miccoliasms 2009-08-10T18:02:06+00:00

kami map sugite my map ga gomi ni mieru
thx!!

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-08-10T23:18:43+00:00

ダウンロードさせて頂きましたけど
個人的にはどちらの方も個性あっていいと思いますよ。

micoさんのマップはクリア前に指が先に逝けそうでしたｗｗ

頑張ってください

miccoliasms

Joined April 2009

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miccoliasms 2009-08-16T16:20:10+00:00

>>S i R i R u
thx!!

Polaris03_old

Joined February 2009

Polaris03_old 2009-08-20T18:08:55+00:00

Please change title to "Karakuri"

miccoliasms

Joined April 2009

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miccoliasms 2009-08-21T05:09:37+00:00

>>Polaris03
changed. thx!!

taNa

Joined January 2009

taNa 2009-08-21T16:16:02+00:00

full submissionでupしたほうがいいかもしれない

Sleepman

Joined May 2009

Sleepman 2009-08-21T18:47:43+00:00

kami map sugite nuita!

miccoliasms

Joined April 2009

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miccoliasms 2009-08-21T18:52:30+00:00

>>taNa
up sinaosita! thx!

>>kud
XD thx!

gdeath

Joined May 2009

gdeath 2009-09-10T14:21:50+00:00

[Normal]
00:32:83 (4) - new combo
00:32:83 (4) - make it start on 00:32:65
00:44:12 (9) - new combo

[taka's Hard]
00:37:77 (1) - remove new combo
00:41:12 (10) - new combo
00:48:35 (7) - ^
01:18:00 (8) - ^
01:35:65 (1) - remove new combo

[Hard]
00:19:41 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - no.dont like this pattern personally.it sounds too bad
00:30:71 (1,1,1) - remove new combo
00:31:68 (1) ---->>00:37:06 (1) its crazy....x.x
00:37:77 (1) - remove new combo
00:40:59 (11) - new combo
00:49:94 (18) - ^
01:04:94 (6) - move 1 grid to the left
01:16:41 (9) - new combo
01:26:30 (13) - ^
01:28:77 (11) - ^

star*

miccoliasms

Joined April 2009

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miccoliasms 2009-09-10T16:13:19+00:00

gdeath wrote:
[Normal]
00:32:83 (4) - new combo Done
00:32:83 (4) - make it start on 00:32:65 Done
00:44:12 (9) - new combo Done

[taka's Hard]
00:37:77 (1) - remove new combo Done
00:41:12 (10) - new combo Done
00:48:35 (7) - ^ Done
01:18:00 (8) - ^ Done
01:35:65 (1) - remove new combo Done

[Hard]
00:19:41 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - no.dont like this pattern personally.it sounds too bad Wait
00:30:71 (1,1,1) - remove new combo Done
00:31:68 (1) ---->>00:37:06 (1) its crazy....x.x Done
00:37:77 (1) - remove new combo Done
00:40:59 (11) - new combo Done
00:49:94 (18) - ^ Done
01:04:94 (6) - move 1 grid to the left Done
01:16:41 (9) - new combo Done
01:26:30 (13) - ^ Done
01:28:77 (11) - ^ Done

star*

thanks for modding&star!

but, Hard is going to remake it from a beginning.
After remaking,　If you are not busy please do Mod again.

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-09-12T09:09:26+00:00

やばい！！

改めてやったら全部好みの譜面だ！
超たのしーｗｗ

EEeee

Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-09-12T16:24:43+00:00

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miccoliasms

Joined April 2009

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miccoliasms 2009-09-12T16:59:16+00:00

EEeee wrote:
Offset = 15,861 in all diffs Done

Normal
no problems

Hard
00:55:74 (3) - new combo Done
hmm, that's about it

taka's hard
00:52:39 (1) - New combo Done
00:52:74 (3) - add new combo Done
00:53:80 (6) - ^ Done
00:55:74 (5) - ^ Done
00:57:15 (7) - ^ Done
00:58:56 (9) - ^ Done

^^

thx for modding&star!

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2009-09-12T20:10:52+00:00

Normal:

Normal mod:
00:16:18 (2,3) - resnap these two notes to the timeline
00:38:44 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this part plays like a metronome, can you please remap this part to make it more interesting.
Some of the slider patterns in the song gets a little repetitive after a while.

Timing section mod:
When a inherited timing section changes the hitsound volume, you should make the timing section a quarter note before the beat or slider is supposed to be hit because hitting the note early would cause the hitsound settings from the previous timing section to be in effect, not the timing section on top of the note.
There is no need to change the timing sections at the end of sliders and spinners though. Since it is not possible for people to hit those early or late.
Example: 01:06:14 - make this timing section a quarter note earlier

Hard:

You should probably change the difficulty name to insane

Normal mod:
00:41:09 (4) - this long repeat slider is pretty boring, can you replace this with something?
00:51:86 (4) - ^
01:09:50 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - With the current stacking leniency, this looks very bad while playing.

Combo mod:
00:31:65 (1) - remove new combo?

Timing section mod:
same as normal except you can probably ignore changing the timing sections in the middle of the 1/4 note stack

taka's Hard

Normal mod:
00:44:09 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - y doesn't 1,3,5 all completely overlap each other and y does 2 not overlap 4 and 6?

Combo mod:
00:32:09 (1) - remove new combo
01:17:97 (1) - remove new combo

Timing section mod:
same as normal

Nice map. Star.

miccoliasms

Joined April 2009

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miccoliasms 2009-09-12T20:45:40+00:00

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Aenna

Joined March 2009

Aenna 2009-09-12T21:09:19+00:00

Hardむずすぎて死にましたｗ
Star~☆

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-09-13T04:14:18+00:00

なぬっ！！

９９％て・・・

miccoliasms

Joined April 2009

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miccoliasms 2009-09-13T04:55:19+00:00

>blissfulyoshi
Although fixed, how is it?
When it takes and it has made a mistake in the meaning, I'm sorry.

>cyborg
ふふ俺は既にSSを取得済みさ!!
thx star♪

>S i R i R u
SS期待してます＾＾

CXu

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CXu 2009-09-13T19:23:51+00:00

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miccoliasms

Joined April 2009

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miccoliasms 2009-09-13T19:38:59+00:00

CXu wrote:
Trim the mp3?

[Normal]
Maybe I'm wierd, but I kinda like slider tick rate 4... It changed into slider tick rate 4
01:34:91 (1,1,1) - Maybe a tad bit hard for normal?　X(

[taka's hard]
00:42:50 (5) - New combo? Done

[Insane]
00:31:56 (x) - Add note? Done
00:35:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Not sure if it's intentional, but they're not aligned. X(
01:11:97 (1) - Why catmull? Doesn't look that good imo.X(

Not looking for spacing since nothing bothered me when playing (except for jumpstuff, just because I suck at playing)
Star ^o^

thx for modding & star~♪

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2009-09-13T20:21:54+00:00

All difficulties~
Please change offset to 13,037 (Explanation: The first offset is not suppose to come after the first note of a map.)
Resnap all notes afterwards in case there was a 1ms adjustment~

Everything else is fine!

miccoliasms

Joined April 2009

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miccoliasms 2009-09-13T20:22:47+00:00

Mafiamaster wrote:
All difficulties~
Please change offset to 13,037 (Explanation: The first offset is not suppose to come after the first note of a map.) Done
Resnap all notes afterwards in case there was a 1ms adjustment~

Everything else is fine!

thx for modding & star~:3

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-09-14T00:39:29+00:00

miccoliasms wrote:
S i R i R u
SS期待してます＾＾

いやいや
僕には無理ですｗｗｗ

コンボ繋げるだけで精一杯っす　汗

minyeob

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minyeob 2009-09-14T14:19:56+00:00

[Normal]
01:05:09 (3) - 維持水平狀態 with 01:04:56 (2)
01:13:03 (2) - Hidden object is bad

[Insane]
01:24:59 (1~5) - This five circles sounds little strange for me.

かんばれ！　日本人！

miccoliasms

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miccoliasms 2009-09-14T14:43:59+00:00

minyeob wrote:
[Normal]
01:05:09 (3) - 維持水平狀態 with 01:04:56 (2) Done
01:13:03 (2) - Hidden object is bad Done

[Insane]
01:24:59 (1~5) - This five circles sounds little strange for me. Done

かんばれ！　日本人！

がんばる！thx for modding & star~O.o/

azuki

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azuki 2009-09-14T15:08:15+00:00

miccoliasms

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miccoliasms 2009-09-14T16:52:17+00:00

>azuki
thank you your modding in irc!

Takuma

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Takuma 2009-09-16T20:46:18+00:00

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miccoliasms

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miccoliasms 2009-09-16T21:10:11+00:00

Takuma wrote:
Haha, I can't seem to remember you as you say in your PM. XD　:3

It might just be in Insane, but just to be sure.. please resnap all notes in all difficulties.　Done

Insane:
01:01:213 - For things like this, move the green line at least 1/4th away from the note so if someone presses a little earlier it doesn't play the incorrect hitsound-set. Done

Normal:
01:34:91 (1,1,1) - Perhaps this spacing is a little too wide.. Done

Have a star! ;DD

thx for Modding & Star~>A</

avira0922

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avira0922 2009-09-19T13:29:02+00:00

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miccoliasms

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miccoliasms 2009-09-20T16:10:41+00:00

avira0922 wrote:
すべて提案です

[Normal]
青ではじまってる部分があるので個人的にちょっとリズムがとりずらかったです
15:684(1,2,3)-(例)15:680サークル+16:213-16:566スライダー+16:919～17:095...～17:978反復スライダーとか
18:507(1,2,3)-^
21:331(1,2,3)-^
24:154(1,2,3)-^
29:801(1,2,3)-^
等 ちょっとこれは変えれません><

26:625(1)-ヒットサウンドがないのでフィニッシュ音等をつける Done!
1:30:684(1)-^ Done!

[Insane]
16:037(3)-(2)にスタックする(同リズム内すべてスタックしている為) Done!
37:389(1,2)-上下対称になるように配置 Done!
45:199~(1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2...)-横同士が距離が近すぎるのでちょっと判断しにくかったです　(つд⊂)
横同士離して配置した方がいいかも Done!
55:742(1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2...)-同　縦同士距離^ Done!
59:801(1)-ヒットサウンドがないのでフィニッシュ音等をつける Done!
1:24:595(1,2)青ではじまっているので赤ではじめるか他のリズムにした方がいいかも Done!
1:29:978(1)-ヒットサウンドがないのでフィニッシュ音等をつける Done!

:3

Mod&Star助かります>A</

MegaManEXE

Here since the beginning

MegaManEXE 2009-09-22T05:55:31+00:00

Nothing I could find. o.o

Cute song, nice map, those jumps in insane are pretty tough x_x

Star~

Alace

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Alace 2009-09-22T10:18:55+00:00

Hey good job

<Normal>
overall diff +2 (high bpm song)
00:37:38 (2) - new combo (people can read it easily)
01:06:15 (1,1,1,1) - I like this <3
01:11:97 (1) - 40% volume here

<Hard>
01:11:97 (1) - 40%volume here
All good

<Insane>
00:15:06 (2) - delete this
00:15:50 (^) - add a note
00:15:86 (^) - plz add a note here
00:17:27 (^) - ^
00:18:68 (^) - ^
00:21:50 (^) - ^
00:22:91 (^) - ^
00:24:33 (^) -^
00:26:71 (2) - delete this note
So you need check your spacing after add(delete) notes

Also
remake the hitsounds before first spinner use claps fome 00:15:50 (white tick) (like taka`s hard)
00:29:62~00:37:42:Add claps like taka`s hard lol

01:03:50 (^) - add a note+clap
01:06:15 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - use claps on white ticks
01:11:97 (1) - 40% volume
01:13:74 (^) - add a note
and add note on other place like that + fix spacing

I will check it again after you fix

miccoliasms

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miccoliasms 2009-09-22T10:56:32+00:00

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DeadAlready

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DeadAlready 2009-09-22T12:16:40+00:00

くぎゅ～ <3

nice map

stared \OwO/

gogogo~~~ XD

kioukiou

Joined June 2008

kioukiou 2009-09-22T12:38:43+00:00

Good map >A</

Larto

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Larto 2009-09-22T16:10:26+00:00

kioukiou wrote:
Good map >A</

miccoliasms

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miccoliasms 2009-09-22T16:50:27+00:00

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Gabi

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Gabi 2009-09-23T15:06:30+00:00

fun map :>

star

miccoliasms

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miccoliasms 2009-09-23T17:09:27+00:00

> Gabi
thx star :3

Takuma

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Takuma 2009-09-23T19:49:04+00:00

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Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-09-24T04:54:07+00:00

ランクおめでとー♪

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