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Yousei Teikoku - Deep Sea

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Nemis
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Nemis
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on venerdì 23 agosto 2013 at 00:03:26

Artist: Yousei Teikoku
Title: Deep Sea
Tags: -kevincela- kevincela ocean water blue stigma
BPM: 175
Filesize: 3610kb
Play Time: 01:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.51 stars, 61 notes)
  2. Hard (4.87 stars, 193 notes)
  3. Kevin (5 stars, 228 notes)
  4. Nemis (5 stars, 252 notes)
  5. Normal (4.07 stars, 101 notes)
Download: Yousei Teikoku - Deep Sea
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Last edited by Nemis , edited 22 times in total.
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osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Deep Sea.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 153646
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11031,22002,32974,43945,54917,65888,140274
DistanceSpacing: 0.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Deep Sea
TitleUnicode:Deep Sea
Artist:Yousei Teikoku
ArtistUnicode:Yousei Teikoku
Creator:Nemis
Version:Kevin
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Deep Sea.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

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75831,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
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Combo2 : 41,239,175
Combo3 : 252,120,101
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Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
[General]
  1. L'audio preview time della diff di Kevin è diverso da quello delle tue diff.
  2. Source: Stigma
  3. Non riesci a trovare un .mp3 migliore? 192kbps possibilmente.
  4. Il BG non è appropriato per questa song secondo me. È una canzone tipo malinconica/relaxing. Il BG di quella di Shinxyn sarebbe perfetto. Trovane uno simile? Sempre con il mare ecc ecc. Capito no?
Vi consiglio vivamente di seguire i consigli qui sotto. Soprattutto per la diff Kevin e Nemis. Mi raccomando ragazzi. Migliorerebbero la mappa di molto secondo me.

[Kevin]

00:16:174 - Dovresti aggiungere una nota qui. Così segui esattamente il ritmo che hai usato sin dall'inizio ---> Ovvero 00:11:717 - vuoto ; 00:13:431 (4) - Pieno; 00:14:460 - Vuoto . Quindi per una specie di "consecutio" dovresti riempire lo spazio che ti ha detto. Una specie di cosa così
SPOILER
La nota numero 4 è quella interessata :P
Proseguendo ho notato che hai "rotto" il ritmo, va bene così. Anzi fa molto figo perché "spezza".
00:27:145 - Stessa cosa qui. Anche se invece dei vuoti ora c'hai gli slider. Piazza una nota please. Tipo così
SPOILER
La nota in questione è la 4.
00:30:060 - Stessa cosa qui. Piazza una nota.
00:43:602 - Stessa cosa qui. Piazza una nota.
00:49:088 - Omg qui il vuoto non ci sta proprio. Piazza nota.
00:53:202 (3) - Piazzalo nella stessa posizione di 00:52:517 (3) - . Poi premi CTRL + G. Carica il player di adrenalina visto che è nascosto, e così lo prepara ai jumps fantastici che hai fatto subito dopo. So che sembra strano quello che dico, ma fidati. Migliorerebbe il gameplay di molto. Tipo così.
SPOILER


[Nemis]

00:27:146 (5,6) - Piazzali diversamente. Tipo così. Migliorano il flow di molto imo.
SPOILER
00:44:289 (3,4) - Ctrl + G ? Please.
00:48:403 (2,3) - ^
00:50:461 (6,7) - Piazzali diversamente. Tipo così -> La nota 6 sulla nota 00:50:118 (4) - ; La nota 7 sulla nota 00:50:289 (5) - . Fa più figo.
00:50:975 (1,2) - Se applichi il suggerimento di cui sopra, fai CTRL + G su questa coppia di note. Molto più figo e poi si sposa bene con la disposizione 00:50:461 (6,7) - (se l'hai cambiata come ti ho detto nello stesso suggerimenti di cui sopra).
00:51:832 (4,5) - Ctrl + G. Ci sta da Dio.
00:54:061 (4) - Porta questa nota sull'inizio di questo slider 00:54:575 (7) - . Molto più figo da giocare.
00:59:546 (4,6) - Ctrl + G.
01:04:346 (8) - Posiziona questa nota sopra questa 01:03:489 (3) - . Così segui la disposizione che hai utilizzato per le note prima. E fa più figo.
01:04:518 (1) - Se applichi il suggerimento di cui sopra, CTRL + G su questo slider. E anche su questo 01:04:861 (2) - . Mi raccomando non selezionarli entrambi quando fai CTRL + G perché sennò ti incasina tutto. Devono essere selezionati singolarmente.
01:16:860 - Nota più finish qui? Ci vuole perché non puoi far finire lo stream sul blue tick, fa brutto <.<.


[Hard]

00:17:888 (1) - Accorcialo di 1/2 e riempi il vuoto con una nota?
00:54:060 (3) - Omg bruttissima sta nota qua. Mettila da un'altra parte please.
00:59:374 (2) - Invece di uno slider da 1/1 dovresti farne due da 1/2 come hai fatto per gli slider subito prima. Se applichi questo suggerimento dovrai cancellare questo kick slider 00:59:888 (3) - e farne altri due sempre da 1/2. Fa più figo.
01:03:145 (1) - Ctrl + G. Anche su questo 01:03:831 (3) - . Mi raccomando selezionali singolarmente.
01:04:860 (2) - Stessa cosa del suggerimento prima. Splittalo in due slider da 1/2.
01:16:174 (2) - Prolunga con un altra Arrow e metti finish alla fine?


Adoro questa song.

Nice map.

Prendi una stellina.
Nemis
847 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Nemis
Fixed some in my difficulties, thanks! Now the parts with the piano should be more fun with these jumps :D I added Stigma as tags instead of source, I find it more appropriate since it's album's name. Changed artist (Yōsei Teikoku), for Kevin too.
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,790 posts
Joined February 2010
-kevincela-

Kecco wrote:

[Kevin]

00:16:174 - Dovresti aggiungere una nota qui. Così segui esattamente il ritmo che hai usato sin dall'inizio ---> Ovvero 00:11:717 - vuoto ; 00:13:431 (4) - Pieno; 00:14:460 - Vuoto . Quindi per una specie di "consecutio" dovresti riempire lo spazio che ti ha detto. Una specie di cosa così Ho capito ciò che intendi, ma imho una nota in questo punto non ci starebbe per niente bene :\ se vedi qui ho seguito più che altro i kicks che venivano "suonati" lì
SPOILER
La nota numero 4 è quella interessata :P
Proseguendo ho notato che hai "rotto" il ritmo, va bene così. Anzi fa molto figo perché "spezza".
00:27:145 - Stessa cosa qui. Anche se invece dei vuoti ora c'hai gli slider. Piazza una nota please. Tipo così Same
SPOILER
La nota in questione è la 4.
00:30:060 - Stessa cosa qui. Piazza una nota. Same
00:43:602 - Stessa cosa qui. Piazza una nota. Same
00:49:088 - Omg qui il vuoto non ci sta proprio. Piazza nota. Qui l'ho aggiunta la nota, considerando pure il piano lì. Ho anche rearrangiato il pattern aumentando lo spacing su 00:50:117 (3,4) - visto che era decisamente basso e rovinava un po' il flow :p
00:53:202 (3) - Piazzalo nella stessa posizione di 00:52:517 (3) - . Poi premi CTRL + G. Carica il player di adrenalina visto che è nascosto, e così lo prepara ai jumps fantastici che hai fatto subito dopo. So che sembra strano quello che dico, ma fidati. Migliorerebbe il gameplay di molto. Tipo così. Sei. Un. Genio. Non ci avevo mai pensato, ma viene giocato davvero bene, senza contare che flowwa perfettamente con il pattern successivo <3 Ti lovvo
SPOILER
Tenk iu so mach

SPOILER
osu file format v12

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112,152,59202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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368,120,60574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,68,60745,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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220,244,61774,6,0,P|234:204|236:156,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,80,62117,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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Damnae
Elite Storyboarder
640 posts
Joined July 2011
Damnae
Hello,

General

I suggest using this hitsound as a drum-hitnormal to map sounds like 00:11:031 - , 00:12:060 - , 00:12:402 - etc., you just have to change the additions back to soft to keep your other hitsounds as they are.

Easy & Normal

Fine, except having only soft whistles as hitsound additions makes hitsounding repetitive for theses diffs. Soft claps doesn't really fit, but I hope this custom hitsound will help.

Hard

AR7 might be better for this diff, specially for the beginning where the stacking makes it hard to get the spacing = time feeling ... or you may want to unstack 00:10:688 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - a bit?

Nemis

Since this diff is too perfect, I'll try some suggestions :p. Brace yourself, the ctrlGs are coming!
I tried to put some screenshots to show the intended cursor movement after changes.

00:18:918 (4,5) - ctrl-g theses (http://puu.sh/3X3zi.jpg)
00:46:003 (4,5) - ctrl-g this too (swap hitsounds)

00:49:775 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - nice :3

01:00:403 (1) - movement feels better if 1 is like this : http://puu.sh/3X3Gy.jpg
01:00:918 (2) - guess what ? ctrl-g this (swap hitsounds)

01:03:146 (1,2) - more ctrl-g (swap hitsounds)

01:04:345 (8,1) - After all these circle motions, I don't really like the movement between these two objects:
01:04:518 (1) - 01:04:861 (2) - and 01:05:889 (1) - ctrl-g each one separately ? It fixes this and makes this whole pattern flow nicely, ending with a jump+pause on 01:06:403 (2) - .

01:10:518 (4) - feels better if flipped like this http://puu.sh/3X3Og.jpg

Kevin

Note: I modded this using the above diff, since it hasn't been updated yet.

Audio preview is different from the other diffs.

I think you keep the circle-ish movements in the same direction for too long, it makes them feel better if you revert the direction at some points. The 3 "ctrl-g" suggestions are attempts to help with this, specially the first and last one.

00:21:660 (4) - sounds a bit too loud, try ~30% volume?

00:34:345 (1) - ctrl-g this slider

00:48:402 (2,3) - ctrl-g these (swap hitsounds)

00:48:745 (1) - add a whistle on this slider's end, and remove it on 00:49:431 (1) - (you may want to replace it with a low volume normal hitsound or use my suggested custom hitsound here?)

00:52:174 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - it was nice before the previous mod, it's still nice but a bit confusing now...

01:06:402 (3) - ctrl-g this
Nemis
847 posts
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Topic Starter
Nemis
Thanks, really useful! I fixed almost all :D Updated my difficulties and Kevin's last update
Natteke desu
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Natteke desu
ohai
Cloudchaser
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Joined May 2012
Cloudchaser
This song has potential for make Taiko diffs :(
La Cataline
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La Cataline
Nemis, get Becoming Insane ranked FFS. This or I'll kill you!
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
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-kevincela-
Deleted all the unnecessary posts, if you guys continue I'll have to take action. Please avoid doing that :\
tiper
tiper
Gj, kevin.
Nemis wanted me to answer him, so I'll do that and leave.
Everything is relative. Sapienti sat.
Nemis
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Topic Starter
Nemis
Whoops I gave a kd to LC unvoluntarily, sorry xD
[DBF]
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[DBF]
Very good work, go for ranked.
Andrea
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Andrea
Wonderful work <3
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally
hola o3o/

[Easy]
  1. 00:15:831 (6) - spostalo in una maniera simile:
    SPOILER
  2. 01:14:802 (3) - non mi piace come flowa la fine perchè non lo stacchi con 01:12:060 (1) - ?
  3. 01:16:688 - finirei lo spinner qui
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:288 (2,3) - inverti la posizione del 2 con il 3 affinche la pattern 2 sia parallela con 00:19:260 (1) - che ti migliora il flow imo
  2. 00:24:402 (5) - io lo staccherei con 00:24:745 (1) -
  3. 01:10:002 (3) - lo staccherei con 01:10:345 (4) - perchè la pattern 01:08:631 (1,2,3,4) - in se è confusionale un pochino rispetto a tutto il resto
  4. 01:16:688 - finirei lo spinner qui
[Hard]
  1. HP e OD +1
  2. 00:27:488 (1) - perchè sto overlap brutto? ._.
  3. 00:37:602 (4,1) - dinuovo ._. mi chiedo perchè rovini un flow cosi pulito
  4. 01:15:488 (1,2) - io ci avrei messo uno spinner qui dato che la diff in se è molto facile e per dare un minimo di varieta allo score come hai fatto nella easy e nella normal :V
[Nemis]
  1. 01:16:860 - aggoingi una nota qui perchè sembra mancante in questocaso
[Kevincelo]
  1. 00:15:660 (3) - mi sebra che con un ctrl+g flowerebbe un po' meglio
  2. 00:18:231 (2,3) - rispetto a tutto il resto questo jump sembra un po' troppo grande
  3. 00:41:202 (1) - io lo farei ancora un pochino piu' curvo
bellissimo mapset \o3o/ good luck
Nemis
847 posts
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Topic Starter
Nemis
Changed some, in the hard difficulty I don't really want to remove the half-hidden sliders :P Thanks Lally, updated!
Pizza Kun
455 posts
Joined March 2011
Pizza Kun
[Kevin]

00:10:688 (1) - Accorcialo fino a farlo di 2/4 invece che 3/4 e poi aggiungi una nota tra "l'hold" e lo slider sucessivo 1 così:

SPOILER

00:53:202 (3) - Spostalo in 296 || 124 è un po brutto da vedere sovrapposto e si legge poco quel punto essendoci molti stack, e sistema un po gli stack non perfetti

00:59:031 (1,2) - Sampleset Normal e metti 1 con Additions Soft


[Nemis]

00:10:689 (1) - Idem per la prima cosa che ho detto a kevin

00:22:518 (2) - Abbassa il secondo punto di ancoraggio, fai la curva verso il basso

01:15:489 (1,5,9) - Whistle
01:16:517 (13,14,15,16) - Clap
01:16:174 (1) - NC

[Hard]

Nulla da dire


[General]

Map ordinata che segue bene la musica c'è poco da correggere ^^
Nemis
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Topic Starter
Nemis
Thanks Pizza :P Changed some. I fixed 00:10:689 (1) - in another way:


Updated!
Leader
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Leader
yo

[Kevin]
  1. 00:56:802 - Aggiungerei una nota qui, si sente eccome il suono
  2. 01:16:860 (1) - finish or nuke plz
[Nemis]

  • Nulla da dire
[Hard]
  1. 00:10:688 (1,2,1) - Come far bestemmiare sin dall'inizio
  2. 00:27:488 (1,2,3) - Muovi (1) sotto la freccia dello slider e (2,3) a destra, più o meno così: http://puu.sh/44Pqt.jpg (chissene frega dello spacing)
  3. 00:38:460 (1) - Che schifo. Prova così: http://puu.sh/44Qtu.jpg
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:031 (2) - Io lo farei o curvo o cambierei il pattern in modo che scenda verso il basso, secondo me rende meglio
  2. 00:37:431 (4) - Curvo rende meglio, sarebbe difficile provare a blankettare qualcosa con 00:35:717 (1) -, ma potresti anche provarci
  3. 00:38:460 (1) - Lo curverei un pochino di più in modo che scorra meglio il flow con 00:39:488 (2) -
  4. 00:42:574 (3) - Anche se non uscirebbe nessun blanket potresti farlo curvo comunque, tenendo (4) e (5) così dove sono
[Easy]

  • Mi stavo per addormentare
  1. 00:11:031 (1) - Preferirei fosse curvo, non è che sia quel granché uno slider così a inizio mappa http://puu.sh/44Q2a.jpg
  2. 00:17:888 (2,3) - Io invertirei facendo prima lo slider e poi il circle, così lo slider segue quel fischiettio (?)
  3. 00:34:345 (2,3) - Stessa cosa ^, sarebbe da rimappare se li dovessi seguire tutti però prova a sentire la canzone e a sistemare questi due e qualcun'altro magari
  4. 01:00:402 (1) - Fallo simmetrico (you wanted me naziii)
  5. 01:14:802 (3) - Io farei uno slider 1/1
Non ho molto da aggiungere, bella bella
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shARPII
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shARPII
Heyo Nemis, feel the french mod :3

[Easy]
  1. 00:16:517 (1) - One grid right (on the same X position like 00:14:460 (4,5) - )
  2. 00:54:231 (6) - ^ (like 00:52:174 (3,4) - )
Everything else is k for me

[Normal]
  1. 00:59:374 (3) - spacing? (1.38~ should be closer to 1.3 than 1.4)
  2. 01:07:260 (3) - Remove whistle on slider's end
  3. 01:07:945 (4) - Add whistle on slider's start (=> If you follow this rythm : 01:10:345 (4) - the whistle should be on (4) and not on (3))
Nothing else to say here, this is good for me

[Hard]
  1. As I said to you this afternoon, you have a whistle part but you don't really follow the song and you stop before the song. For this part : 00:52:174 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I suggest that you continue to use whistle. You can put a whistle on : 00:52:174 (1) - 00:52:860 (3) - 00:53:717 (1) - and 00:54:231 (4) -. There is one problem for me here, the whistle noise on a circle isn't the same that slider one so, you can put a slider 00:53:717 - instead of 00:53:717 (1,2) - . Here is the result : http://puu.sh/44PxM.jpg and for the hitsounds : http://puu.sh/44Pjm.wav . I think that this is less empty so tell me what do you think about it.
  2. If you apply what I tell you above, this part has to be changed too 01:03:145 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) -
Except this detail, this is perfect for me ^^

I post it now because I'm not available for modding tonight. I'll update this post tomorrow even if I don't think that I have a lot of things to say about Nemis & Kevin diffs.
Good job Nemis :)
Nemis
847 posts
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Topic Starter
Nemis
Thanks! Fixed all from shARPII <3 I applied the whistle mod on [Nemis] too :D Updated.
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
as your request :-D

[General]
change Yōsei Teikoku to 妖精帝國 ?

[Easy]
Nice

[Normal]
Nice

[Hard]
  1. the suggestion is same as Nemis
  2. 01:15:317 (4) +clap?

[Nemis]
  1. I think the whistle of slider broke the peace of this song ;_; like this 00:45:146 (1) just suggest you remove every whistle on slider or add green line to reduce the volume (15%)
  2. 00:53:717 (2,4,5,6) change to this? follow the music
SPOILER

[Kevin]
  1. 00:21:660 (4) change normal to drum-finish?
  2. 00:54:917 (1) stick with 00:53:374 (3) is better and +finish
  3. 01:16:860 add a green line and the volume is 30%
beautiful song and arrangement of this song <3
star one :D
-kevincela-
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-kevincela-

Damnae wrote:

Kevin

00:21:660 (4) - sounds a bit too loud, try ~30% volume? Good idea, done

00:34:345 (1) - ctrl-g this slider Sorry, I really want to keep this kind of slider here. Imho reversing it would only ruin the pattern :\

00:48:402 (2,3) - ctrl-g these (swap hitsounds) I'm really unsure about this one... It isn't that bad, though I really wanted to continue the circular flow there finishing with a jump... So no change here, sorry :U

00:48:745 (1) - add a whistle on this slider's end, and remove it on 00:49:431 (1) - (you may want to replace it with a low volume normal hitsound or use my suggested custom hitsound here?) Done

00:52:174 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - it was nice before the previous mod, it's still nice but a bit confusing now... It could be a bit confusing, yet I love how this pattern flows :D

01:06:402 (3) - ctrl-g this I still prefer keeping the current direction, even though you're suggestion isn't bad at all... Sorry for that!

Lally wrote:

[Kevincelo]
  1. 00:15:660 (3) - mi sebra che con un ctrl+g flowerebbe un po' meglio È intenzionale, e mi piace come flowwa :U
  2. 00:18:231 (2,3) - rispetto a tutto il resto questo jump sembra un po' troppo grande Ridotto un po'
  3. 00:41:202 (1) - io lo farei ancora un pochino piu' curvo ok

Pizza Kun wrote:

[Kevin]

00:10:688 (1) - Accorcialo fino a farlo di 2/4 invece che 3/4 e poi aggiungi una nota tra "l'hold" e lo slider sucessivo 1 così: Non è male, ma iniziare la diff con un pattern del genere è decisamente esagerato... Dubito si possa subito reggere la combo 1/8 slider + tripletta quindi tengo così er ora

SPOILER

00:53:202 (3) - Spostalo in 296 || 124 è un po brutto da vedere sovrapposto e si legge poco quel punto essendoci molti stack, e sistema un po gli stack non perfetti Spostandolo lì mi si rovinerebbe tutto il pattern, sia struturalmente che per quanto riguarda il flow. Capisco cosa intendi, ma a me piace molto com'è ora, sorry!

00:59:031 (1,2) - Sampleset Normal e metti 1 con Additions Soft Imho non ci sta per niente, sorry :o

Leader wrote:

[Kevin]
  1. 00:56:802 - Aggiungerei una nota qui, si sente eccome il suono Peccato che in questa parte sto seguendo solo i "kick"... non sembrerebbe un po' troppo strano seguire all'improvviso un altro strumento? Preferisco lasciare così
  2. 01:16:860 (1) - finish or nuke plz Nuk- ahem, aggiunto :3

Azure wrote:

[Kevin]
  1. 00:21:660 (4) change normal to drum-finish? Cool idea, added
  2. 00:54:917 (1) stick with 00:53:374 (3) is better and +finish Added the finish there
  3. 01:16:860 add a green line and the volume is 30% Yep it fits pretty good. Done!
Thanks for the mods, guys!

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Deep Sea.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 153646
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11031,22002,32974,43945,54917,65888,140274
DistanceSpacing: 0.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Deep Sea
TitleUnicode:Deep Sea
Artist:Yousei Teikoku
ArtistUnicode:Yōsei Teikoku
Creator:Nemis
Version:Kevin
Source:
Tags:-kevincela- kevincela ocean water blue stigma
BeatmapID:286033
BeatmapSetID:109554

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Deep Sea.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

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21660,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
22002,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
54917,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,50,0,1
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76174,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
76517,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
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[Colours]
Combo1 : 249,128,131
Combo2 : 41,239,175
Combo3 : 252,120,101
Combo4 : 41,235,216
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

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Nemis
847 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
Nemis
Thanks! Updated :P
Kodora
Kodora
hihi, sorry for delay
Very good map, so mostly suggestions

[General]

  1. Kevin's diff have different preview time
  2. You should add approachcircle.png and reversearrow.png
[Kevin]

  1. 00:10:688 (1) - Hmm, maybe try to do same volume change trick as Nemis did?
  2. 00:15:660 (3,4) - Its very hard to notice rhytm change here and very hard to read this stack due to low approach rate (i missed here twice), so i suggest you unstack this and move (4) out (better will be stack with 00:16:517 (1) ) - other parts like this playes well because of repetitive rhytm what can be learned while playing but unstack this one, please.
  3. 00:32:974 (1) - you can add whistle here to the beginning of slider and to sliderbody to emphazire this sound
  4. 00:43:945 (1) - add whistle for same reason?
  5. 00:52:517 (3,3) - cool <3
  6. 00:58:860 - Just wondering why you ignored this beat if you focusing on piano here. Add note maybe?
  7. 01:16:860 (1) - maybe add a little kiai fountain here?
Awesome!

[Nemis]

*I really prefer see this diff as hardest diff in mapset. So probably raise AR to 9 to have it more readable and OD 8 to have it more challenging

  1. 00:55:602 - This "hole" makes rhytm feels a bit inconsistent, please add here note with clap.
  2. 00:56:974 - Same. It feels a bit wrong if strong beat get ignored by slider (or you may set tick rate 2, silence ticks and add "clap tick" here - or just add storyboarded custom clap)
  3. 00:58:346 (5) - clap instead of whistle
  4. 01:16:860 - Add note with finish here.
Very good, just one little thing that moving only in "round" way may be a bit boring, but diff is cool anyway.

[Hard]

*AR8 please, it very hard to read with 7

  1. 00:10:688 (1,2) - Sounds not so good. Try to do repetitive 1/4 slider instead:
    SPOILER
    [img]
    http://puu.sh/47or8.jpg[/img]
  2. 00:27:488 (1) - Looks a bit ugly, can you please rotate those slider by 180°?
  3. 00:32:974 (1) - add whistle to the beginning of slider?
  4. 00:37:602 (4,1) - same, rotate it please, half-hiding end of slider under slidertrack looks a bit messy.
  5. 00:43:945 (1) - add whistle to the beginning of slider?
  6. 00:54:574 (4) - add whistle here to sliderbody
  7. 01:15:488 (1) - end spinner at 01:16:860 - and add finish
[Normal]

  1. 00:54:917 - Just "no please". Dont use speedchanges on easiest diffs in mapset, it hard for beginners to play them.
  2. 00:54:917 (1) - i'd replace whistle on the end of slider with clap because this is drum sound in music
  3. 00:56:631 (4) - ^
  4. 00:57:660 (1) - ^
  5. 00:59:717 (4) - ^
  6. 01:15:488 (1) - end spinner at 01:16:860 - and add finish
[Easy]

*Current settings looks too low, esperially Approach rate. Raise everything (except circlesice if you want) by 1 tick

  1. 00:10:688 - 00:10:860 - you may add short 1/2 slider here to not ignore cool rhytm at this part.
  2. 00:32:974 (1) - add whistle to the beginning of slider?
  3. 00:43:945 (1) - ^
  4. 01:15:488 (1) - end spinner at 01:16:860 - and add finish
Good job, starred.
UnitedWeSin
889 posts
Joined July 2012
UnitedWeSin
After you check that mod, let me know and I'll check the map.
Nemis
847 posts
Joined May 2012
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Nemis
Thanks! Updated my difficulties and fixed the preview time (for kevin too).
-kevincela-
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Joined February 2010
-kevincela-

Kodora wrote:

[Kevin]

  1. 00:10:688 (1) - Hmm, maybe try to do same volume change trick as Nemis did? Done!
  2. 00:15:660 (3,4) - Its very hard to notice rhytm change here and very hard to read this stack due to low approach rate (i missed here twice), so i suggest you unstack this and move (4) out (better will be stack with 00:16:517 (1) ) - other parts like this playes well because of repetitive rhytm what can be learned while playing but unstack this one, please. Sorry, but I won't do that for now. I actually really like how it plays, even if it could be too unexpected...
  3. 00:32:974 (1) - you can add whistle here to the beginning of slider and to sliderbody to emphazire this sound Sure thing
  4. 00:43:945 (1) - add whistle for same reason? ^
  5. 00:52:517 (3,3) - cool <3 Thank you :D
  6. 00:58:860 - Just wondering why you ignored this beat if you focusing on piano here. Add note maybe? I started following the piano just in the next downbeat. Adding a note here would really be a sudden change of instrument which isn't that great
  7. 01:16:860 (1) - maybe add a little kiai fountain here? Done!
Fixed the preview time as well. Thanks!

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Artist:Yousei Teikoku
ArtistUnicode:妖精帝國
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Tags:-kevincela- kevincela ocean water blue stigma
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